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Rita - Alicemagic ~TV animation ver.~

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Frostmourne
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Monday, May 20, 2013 at 22:16:09

Artist: Rita
Title: Alicemagic ~TV animation ver.~
Source: Little Busters!
Tags: pkhg regenz key
BPM: 166
Filesize: 8178kb
Play Time: 04:24
Difficulties Available:
  1. Insane (5 stars, 993 notes)
  2. Normal (3.77 stars, 308 notes)
  3. pkhg's Hard (4.97 stars, 640 notes)
  4. regenz's Easy (1.91 stars, 237 notes)
Download: Rita - Alicemagic ~TV animation ver.~
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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regenz's Easy by regenz
pkhg's Hard by pkhg
Background by Milkshake
Insane 4 mins long no break, quite exhausting Dx (me(mapper) too lol)
Please play it !! and thank you for playing very much \:D/
Enjoy !
Satellite
Rita <3

Little Busters! <3
KinomiCandy
omg please let me taiko this

UnitedWeSin
More plz ;_;
Zero__wind
love LB!
ryza
Did a little bit of testing and quick mod

log
13:39 Frostmourne: hi Silynn :D
13:39 Frostmourne: are you free a bit for a test play?
13:39 Silynn: hi frosty~
13:40 Frostmourne: again =.=
13:40 Silynn: sure
13:40 Silynn: ^^
13:40 Silynn: aha
13:40 Silynn: always
13:40 Frostmourne: okk great \xD/
13:40 Silynn: usually
13:40 Frostmourne: ww
13:40 *Frostmourne is listening to [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/228557 Rita - Alicemagic]
13:40 Silynn: yay LB
13:40 Frostmourne: thank you very much haha
13:40 Frostmourne: most thing is LB from Key and Rita
13:40 Frostmourne: best combo
13:45 Silynn: oops I rushed on stream
13:45 Silynn: aha
13:45 Frostmourne: that was annoying imo = =
13:45 Silynn: sorry ;-;
13:45 Frostmourne: it's hard to notice for the first time to play
13:45 Frostmourne: ohh np = ="
13:45 Silynn: hmm I think you should
13:45 Silynn: OD+1
13:45 Frostmourne: my bad on mapping such streams like that too =.=
13:45 Frostmourne: wow lol
13:45 Frostmourne: I will do maybe
13:46 Frostmourne: if I could find exact offset
13:46 Frostmourne: I'm still not sure about it = ="
13:46 Silynn: hm, it seemed about right to me
13:46 Silynn: well
13:46 Silynn: one sec
13:46 Silynn: I think it was about correct, although it might be -2 or 3
13:47 Frostmourne: hmm...
13:47 Frostmourne: I will note that
13:47 Silynn: ahhahah I don't have warmup for this
13:47 Silynn: oh well
13:47 Silynn: your maps are always so lovely
13:47 Frostmourne: =~=
13:47 Frostmourne: thank you :D
13:48 Frostmourne: but for the part I will change
13:48 Frostmourne: maybe only middle part
13:48 Frostmourne: the complicated jump on solo guitar might be annoying I guess
13:48 Silynn: is that the one I missed on
13:48 Silynn: or was that right before the streams
13:49 Frostmourne: you missed that before the stream
13:49 Frostmourne: 02:49:072 (1) -
13:49 Frostmourne: around here
13:49 Silynn: ah yeah
13:49 Silynn: I missed cause my pen was slipping
13:49 Silynn: aha
13:49 Frostmourne: aww
13:49 Frostmourne: LOL
13:49 Silynn: the jump seemed fine tho
13:49 Silynn: although hmm
13:49 Silynn: make it overlap a bit less maybe
13:49 Silynn: http://puu.sh/2ieeL like this
13:50 Frostmourne: I may stick on full stacking
13:50 Silynn: or that too
13:50 Frostmourne: or distinguish it
13:50 Frostmourne: that might work better
13:50 Silynn: 03:05:518 (6,1) - this jump did catch me off guard
13:50 Silynn: I think that is why I started rushing the streams
13:51 Silynn: actually
13:51 Silynn: 03:05:699 (1,2,3,4,5) - I don't think this should be a stream
13:51 Silynn: should maybe be something like this
13:51 Silynn: http://puu.sh/2iei9
13:52 Frostmourne: ohhh
13:53 Silynn: 03:06:964 (9,1) - I also don't think there should be a break here
13:54 Frostmourne: osu.ppy.sh/ss/655563
13:54 Frostmourne: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/655563
13:55 Frostmourne: how about this rhythm
13:55 Frostmourne: maybe change to doublet
13:55 Silynn: sounds worse
13:55 Silynn: I think
13:55 Silynn: aha
13:55 Frostmourne: yeah .. I think so..
13:56 Silynn: you're mapping that whole stream to the guitar solo
13:56 Silynn: but you put that break in even though the guitar solo doesn't pause there
13:56 Frostmourne: that's the problem
13:56 Frostmourne: some points , the guitar volume isn't that high enough
13:56 Frostmourne: to worthly be added a note imo
13:57 Silynn: hm, well alright
13:57 Silynn: I think the break in the stream is a little awkward but up to you /o/
13:58 Frostmourne: I think , it's a bit awkward too = ="
13:58 Silynn: ^^;
14:00 Frostmourne: I will try new solution
14:01 Silynn: ok
14:07 Frostmourne: done .. sorry for late = ="
14:07 Frostmourne: hope it is better :D
14:08 Silynn: aha ok
14:08 Silynn: I'll look at it
14:08 Frostmourne: don't open editor and play
14:08 Silynn: ?
14:08 Frostmourne: so that will be the best experiment
14:08 Frostmourne: oh but
14:08 Frostmourne: if you are tired
14:08 Frostmourne: I won't bother you for that
14:08 Frostmourne: sorry = ="
14:08 Silynn: very tired =w=
14:08 Silynn: I'll just look at it
14:08 Frostmourne: ok ok , sorry = =" , didn't know
14:08 Silynn: and play it again tomorrow
14:08 Silynn: aha
14:08 Frostmourne: ok :D
14:09 Silynn: mm yeah that looks better
14:09 Silynn: 03:05:518 (1,2,3) - especially this, aha
14:09 Frostmourne: yeah , don't know if 1/8 slider will work
14:09 Silynn: it was super weird before
14:09 Frostmourne: oh yeah , I didn't think of starting triplet at white tick
14:10 Frostmourne: but this is really pretty good
14:10 Frostmourne: thank you for this xD
14:10 Silynn: ^^ np
14:10 Silynn: any time
14:10 Frostmourne: I can't think of it myself lol
14:10 Silynn: that's what modding is for ><;
14:10 Silynn: aha
14:10 Frostmourne: so kudo plzz
14:10 Frostmourne: :D
14:11 Silynn: oh
14:11 Silynn: should I post chatlog
14:11 Frostmourne: if you don't , I will post ;P
14:11 Silynn: aha ok
Topic Starter
Frostmourne

Satellite wrote:

Rita <3

Little Busters! <3
<3<3<3

KinomiCandy wrote:

omg please let me taiko this

wwww D:

UnitedWeSin wrote:

More plz ;_;
Thank you UnitedWeSin ;_; !!!

Zero__wind wrote:

love LB!
love too xD <3<3

Silynn wrote:

Did a little bit of testing and quick mod
Thank very much Silynn = =, for that streams , I was running out of ideas xD
Kotone

(I mean@NatsumeRin
Topic Starter
Frostmourne

Kotone wrote:


(I mean@NatsumeRin
8-) 8-) 8-)
Pokie
;)
pkhg
Finished!
http://puu.sh/2j7st

hope you like it :)
Zero__wind

pkhg wrote:

Finished!
http://puu.sh/2j7st

hope you like it :)
Hey Frost, Here comes another drum bass style owo
pkhg

Zero__wind wrote:

pkhg wrote:

Finished!
http://puu.sh/2j7st

hope you like it :)
Hey Frost, Here comes another drum bass style owo
:3
Topic Starter
Frostmourne
added , Thank you pkhg :D , really good diff :)
CXu
Source should be Little Busters! feed kd
I might mod this when I have time, I'm not lazy, aaand when you're done. Just poke me then \o\
Topic Starter
Frostmourne

CXu wrote:

Source should be Little Busters! feed kd
I might mod this when I have time, I'm not lazy, aaand when you're done. Just poke me then \o\
Damn Shoes, how could I missed =w=

Thank you CXu \:D/ , Now revived xD !!!
Zero__wind
Aha, I was just thinking about why is this graved
Go go go
alacat
frostmagic :D
Zero__wind
Hi :3
Though I cannot test it, I can mod it~~

General
Since you changed the bg, maybe reset combo colors?

Insane
00:06:329 (4) - should start at 00:06:419 - and end at the same time
00:08:588 (1) - considering the hitsound, I think it's better to stack it with 00:08:407 (3) - instead of 00:08:768 (2) -
00:09:853 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - I hate this =.= and also 00:11:840 (1,2,3,4,5) - they jumped back anf forth for too many times =.=
00:16:359 (1) - mabe put it out to (436,40) or somewhere like that
00:22:503 (5) - something like this ?
00:30:094 (1) - maybe don't need a finish
00:37:865 (6,7) - somehow blancket better
00:40:395 (1,2,1,2,3) - hitsound about them —— 00:40:395 (1) - whistle instead of clap, 00:40:756 (1,2) - clap instead of whistle, 00:40:937 (3) - whistle instead of clap. Feel better?
02:02:804 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^
00:50:335 (5) - a finish here would be nice
01:16:178 (2,3,4,1,2,3) - really nice rhythm with hitsound
01:20:335 (2) - not fond of the placement now, maybe make it somewhere above
01:24:310 (4) - why don'd place it like this ?
01:32:082 (7,1) - exchange NC?
01:56:118 (2) - whistle and 01:56:298 (3) - clap instead of whistle on head
02:10:937 (4,1) - CTRL+G ?
02:12:744 (5) - same opinion with the former part, finish on head
02:20:877 (6) - intended to add finish here?
02:36:057 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - not feel like to divide them in to groups of 3, maybe only two notes stacking at one place is better?
02:38:768 (8) - NC?
02:41:118 (6) - whistle ?
02:54:492 (7,1) - exchange NC?
03:02:985 - I really got NO idea of mapping the solo part with your rhythm =.=
03:04:431 (3) - finish on head and use clap to replace the finish you currently set ?
03:08:045 (3) - clap instead of finish?
03:10:214 (4) - finish and 03:10:395 (5) - clap instead of finish on head?
03:10:937 (6) - add clap
03:37:142 (3) - I think this a point where the music gets soft, so maybe remove finish
03:41:118 - only a suggestion, http://puu.sh/2PX8D.jpg I'm also not sure of my idea, but feeling the current one don't feel so good
04:04:973 (4,5,1) - also maybe-have-a-try. CTRL+G to (4) and CTRL+G to (5) and (1)
04:20:154 (1) - whistle missing

Hard
tick the "letterbox during breaks"
OD 6
00:29:732 (4) - clap
00:32:985 (1) - clap at end
00:41:479 (1) - finish on head
00:50:335 (4) - ^
01:23:045 (9) - clap at end
02:01:178 (1,2) - claps on purpose?
02:03:889 (1) - finish on head
02:09:853 - why is that you started using whistle from this point on? why not all the way through or just don't use it =.=
02:12:744 (1) - finish on head
02:20:515 (5) - maybe like this
02:29:190 (6) - nice idea :3 to avoid making 02:30:094 (1) - touch the HP bar am I right ?
02:40:033 (3) - where's the finish
03:04:973 (5) - move the clap from it to 03:05:154 (6) -
03:10:033 (4) - remove the clap on its end, add clap on 03:10:395 (5) - 's head
03:14:732 (1) - a lower volume finish would be nice on head
03:47:985 (4) - missing finish

Normal
tick the "letterbox during breaks"
00:07:684 (1,1) - why are there whistles at their ends instead of clap ?
00:20:696 (4) - clap instead
and let me summarize that you may form a hitsound pattern that may be used at all parts where the rhythm is like 00:18:527 (1,2,3,4) - . Just whistle, whistle, whistle, clap. And it would be fine. Finishes are at particular places, they won't mess up with the whistle or clap
00:50:335 (1) - finish on head?
01:27:021 (1) - finish at end ?
01:40:395 - move this green to the start of the spinner? 65% volume when spinning is too loud ?
02:12:744 (2) - finish on head?
03:00:816 (1) - finish at end?
03:47:262 (1,2) - finish on both heads?
04:23:045 (1) - whistle on head?
nothing to say about arrangement =.=

Ok that's all. really a big deal =.=
Satellite
hi~

[General]
add many tag~

[Insane]
why OD same Hard? OD+1 or Hard OD-1 please
00:38:768 (8) - 00:50:335 (5) - 01:06:600 (2) - I think distance snap should be unified

04:03:527 (4) - 04:09:310 (5) - 04:15:093 (4) - 04:20:876 (4) - ^

01:46:359 (3) - try ctrl+G
If you modify the above
01:46:720 (1) - ctrl+G and 01:47:082 (2) - move ,moderate place.
01:56:298 (3) - Not clean it slider...
02:07:142 (4) - move x372 y228 is better, Because the weak in a straight line...

This difficulty do not need a mod lol
really awesome...


[pkhg's Hard]
00:52:142 (2,3,4,5,6) - More better rhythm,follow with lyrics,like this.

01:10:395 (4) - you are forget whistle and finish? same insane diff check plz.
01:20:335 (1,2) - More better rhythm,follow with lyrics,like this.

02:03:889 (1) - remove nc 02:04:431 (2) - nc
03:25:395 (5,6,7) - huh!? so hard change it, simple rhythm plz.

coooooool slider!

[Normal]
01:28:648 (3) - nazi sorry 3grid down is better
01:53:407 (1) - remove whistle?
02:39:491 - remove green line.
03:04:612 (2,3,4) - slider follow is easy? try this.



lol! lol! lol! There is no issues anything!
really awesome!! go ranked~ goodluck :3
Topic Starter
Frostmourne
quite a huge mod, Thank you for modding Zero__wind, Satellite :D
pkhg
Zero_wind

Zero__wind wrote:

Hi :3
Though I cannot test it, I can mod it~~

General
Since you changed the bg, maybe reset combo colors?

Hard
tick the "letterbox during breaks" Done
OD 6 Fine~
00:29:732 (4) - clap I prefer a whistle
00:32:985 (1) - clap at end Done
00:41:479 (1) - finish on head Done
00:50:335 (4) - ^ Done
01:23:045 (9) - clap at end Done
02:01:178 (1,2) - claps on purpose? :o Removed some of them
02:03:889 (1) - finish on head Done
02:09:853 - why is that you started using whistle from this point on? why not all the way through or just don't use it =.= I'll add to the other hitobjects
02:12:744 (1) - finish on head Done
02:20:515 (5) - maybe like this Yeah!
02:29:190 (6) - nice idea :3 to avoid making 02:30:094 (1) - touch the HP bar am I right ? You're right ^^
02:40:033 (3) - where's the finish? Here
03:04:973 (5) - move the clap from it to 03:05:154 (6) - I like where is that clap now.
03:10:033 (4) - remove the clap on its end, add clap on 03:10:395 (5) - 's head Done
03:14:732 (1) - a lower volume finish would be nice on head Done
03:47:985 (4) - missing finish Added

Ok that's all. really a big deal =.=
Thanks for moding~ :)
Satellite

Satellite wrote:

hi~

[General]
add many tag~
lalalala~
[pkhg's Hard]
00:52:142 (2,3,4,5,6) - More better rhythm,follow with lyrics,like this. I like more my pattern.

01:10:395 (4) - you are forget whistle and finish? same insane diff check plz.
01:20:335 (1,2) - More better rhythm,follow with lyrics,like this. You are ignoring this beat 01:20:696 - I'll keep mine

02:03:889 (1) - remove nc 02:04:431 (2) - nc Isn't needed
03:25:395 (5,6,7) - huh!? so hard change it, simple rhythm plz. That isn't really hard :(
[box=]
Thanks for moding guys ^^
regenz
http://puu.sh/2S8Yw.rar

Sorry For NOT LATE.

อย่าลืมแก้ tags เติม key ใส่เข้าไปด้่วยล่ะ
Heanday
* Suggestion



Hi :)

[Normal]

Nothing to say, perfect hitsong too *-*


[pkhg's Hard]

00:41:121 (4) - I think a little sldier sounds better http://puu.sh/2S8IL.jpg

02:30:097 (1,2) - Well, i like all of you're patern, but this one, no *-*

03:25:398 (5,6,7,8,9) - Ugly :D ( not uncomfortable to play ! just Ugly :D )

Wonderful map, good job *-*

[Insane]

! ! !

00:05:518 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Yeah ! I like it, but i almost fall off my chair ! What about change it 00:05:699 (2,3) - By a slid ?

01:40:940 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - I LOOOOVEEE this part, just something wrong ( for me ) 01:43:109 (1,2) - this *-*, the position of the second slider is uncomfortable for me ( and i played it a lot :) )

02:46:362 (2,3) - What about put the circle n°2 on the slid n°4, their sounds are differents, seems strange for me to pack them

04:07:506 (3) - it don't deserve to be packed too !

Well short mod, but nothing to say, perfect map, love Frostmourne :D

Star~
Mythol
Hi Frost ^^

[Normal]
I think you should remove all the whistles where you have whistle + finish, the finish sounds clouded and unclean for the normal diff ;_;
00:28:470 (2) - How about change 2 and 3 like this? I feel it fits much better :D
00:47:988 (3) - Shorten it? I think it should end on the drum beat instead (add clap on end if you do)
00:55:579 (3,1) - lol what is this so weird :P try this ._.
00:59:554 (3) - The repeat here doesn't follow anything in the song, so remove the repeat and add a 1/1 slider after it? (on the big white tick)
01:03:350 - Add 1/1 slider here
01:17:988 (2) - Extend it to the white tick? follows the drums and voice this way o:
02:21:422 (2,1) - Use slider here? I think 2 notes like this is hard to hit
02:43:289 (1) - Start this on 02:43:470 instead? I think it fits the vocals better (shorten it too of course)
02:48:892 (1,2) - Same as before change it to a slider, but maybe players know the beat now
03:04:976 (2,3) - Should follow the main guitar here, so try remove 2 + 3 and add 1/1 slider from 03:05:157
03:10:759 (2) - Remove it and add repeat on 03:09:856 (1) follows the guitar much better
03:38:229 (1) - End it on 03:38:771

I think rhythm needs some work ;_; but this should help a lot

[Hard]
00:29:735 (4) - Try clap instead of whistle? sounds nice :D
00:39:494 (3) - Whistle on start
00:52:145 (2) - Clap start
00:53:229 (1) - Change the whistle to a finish!
00:55:217 (5) - Remove whistle start?
01:04:795 (1) - Change whistle to finish?
01:07:326 (1) - ^ for repeat
01:10:398 (4) - Remove the whistle
01:40:940 (3) - Finish
02:03:530 (7) - Clap
02:10:579 - I want some kind of beat here :(
02:14:554 (6,7) - Where did hitsounds go!? clap on start of 6 and whistles on 7 start + end :D
02:15:639 (1) - Finish instead of whistle?
02:27:205 (1) - ^
02:30:097 (1) - ^
02:32:807 (1) - ^
02:35:880 (6) - ^ also NC
03:03:350 (1) - ^
03:03:711 (2) - Finish
03:08:048 (8) - Change the end to a clap
03:08:952 (1) - Finish not clap
03:17:627 (3) - Finish
03:20:518 (1) - Finish
03:22:868 (8) - Finish
03:25:398 (5,6,8) - Change this to a 5 note stream? its so weird now ._.
03:26:121 (9) - Clap
04:01:181 (1) - Finish instead of whistle
04:11:844 (7) - Change whistle to clap?

Great~

[Insane]
00:30:097 - Change it to 45% or 50% volume here its so quiet ._.
01:16:542 (1) - Try stacking it on 01:17:446 (2) for jump :D
01:52:506 - 45%/50% vol
02:26:482 - Why ignore this beat? make triple here D: it doesn't follow vocal or drum.. I'm not sure why its not a triple ._.
02:48:350 (1) - Whistle?
03:18:169 - Add something here D:
03:32:988 (3) - Remove NC
03:37:506 (2) - NC here instead of that note before

Also great~

Go henthai Frost /o/
yoshilove
[regenz's Easy]
02:25:753 (3) - slider end 02:26:476

A rhythm is somewhat difficult.

[Normal]
00:52:500 - Add circle???? (I think that it is intentionally. )
02:14:910 - ^
02:34:066 - ^

[pkhg's Hard]
03:02:440 (6,7,8) - Is it intentionally? (03:02:530 (7) prev:0.22x next:0.31x)
2 (no gridsnap)


Please use, if good.
440,244,182440,1,0,0:0:0:0:
437,251,182530,1,0,0:0:0:0:
434,258,182621,2,0,L|402:342,1,80

[Insane]
nice~


nice mapset!
ganbatte~

Alicemagic <3
Topic Starter
Frostmourne
Done !
Thank you Heanday, Mythol, yoshilove \:D/

Normal was remapped already ._.
regenz
http://puu.sh/2T5oT.rar

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no fix were made in previous modder ( I think it's fit more If it's blanket)
Topic Starter
Frostmourne

regenz wrote:

http://puu.sh/2T5oT.rar

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มีม๊อดเข้าก็เรียกละกันถ้าไม่ว่างยาวๆจะให้แก้เองโลด เดี๋ยวบอกเอง

no fix were made in previous modder ( I think it's fit more If it's blanket)
ภาพโคมาริสวยกว่ามาก เลยเอามาแทนริน (ถ้าพี่บอมมีภาพรินแนวๆนี้ส่งมาโลด ต้องการอย่างด่วน ขอเป็นอนิเมเวอร์ชั่นด้วย)
กำพี่บอมตลก แล้วเอาดิฟ pkgh มาให้ผมทามมายย :o
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