This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2013年5月31日 at 15:49:50

Artist: masaki
Title: Rhythmical Planet
Source: vos
Tags: tenmongaku tianwenxue canmusic luyuja
BPM: 162
Filesize: 8139kb
Play Time: 04:14
Difficulties Available:

1. Collab - 7Key (5 stars, 3145 notes)
2. Easy - 7Key (2.15 stars, 707 notes)
3. Hard - 7Key (4.9 stars, 2074 notes)
4. Normal - 7Key (3.53 stars, 1307 notes)

Download: masaki - Rhythmical Planet
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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Mania 7K only.
[Collab]
0:00 ~ 2:30 ——by luyuja
2:30 ~ 4:15 —— by me
Thanks to chonicle for great help in ogg and many other things~
Thanks to Sakuya Lv9 for Storyboard in Collab diff~
Hope you enjoy~

\:D/ mixed using Samplitude and Hypersonic2.

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Hard:
OD+1
04:07:583 (247583|2) - 有点难了吧

Normal：
HP+1
开头那段尽量规律点，最好每2拍的主拍子上的音在同一轨上

Luyuja wrote:

Hard:
OD+1 -fixed
04:07:583 (247583|2) - 有点难了吧 -fixed

Normal：
HP+1 -fixed
开头那段尽量规律点，最好每2拍的主拍子上的音在同一轨上 -fixed

thx for mod~

The normal diffs seemed really nice to play and well done. Don't have any complaints about them.

Collab:

I really think the beginning of this map needs to be reorganized. The way the notes are put in the beginning seems very hard to read and messy, the basic structure to make out which note corresponds to which sound is kinda missing here for me. For this kind of difficulty i strongly suggest to use patterns and keep them! When keysounds aren't used it is even more harder for the player to figure out the notes of your chart so it is even more important to use a structurized noting scheme and a consistency throughout your patterns! If you dont like it like that and want to keep it how you made it initially please dont bother with me and disregard what im going to say ._.


I was wondering how i should start about modding a map like this so i just thought i break it down into parts and analyze the notes part by part.
(luyuja's part just seemed like a big mess to me and i didn't know how to start modding this sorry!)
Well then..

The intro part seems fine except that a clap note is missing here 00:10:330 -

Please check all the pictures i upload now. I will mark the inconsistencies and please check your arrangement. Also try to compare all of them with each other.
Measure 9 11 and 13 should all have the same note pattern and notes arranged accroding to pitch relevancy.
#9: http://puu.sh/2YO4m different from #11 and #13

Measure 10 12 and 14 inconsistency through all 3 measures on this pattern on beat 2 and 3
#10: http://puu.sh/2YOiE
#12: http://puu.sh/2YOiY
#14: http://puu.sh/2YOjc

Measure #15 #16 are basicly the patterns used before in the song allthough the note count gets significantly higher and is not justified in my opinion.


Next section of the song:


00:25:145 - to 00:31:071 -

and

00:31:071 - to 00:36:997 -

which is basicly the same occuring 2 times.

Measure #17 (00:25:145 - ) and #21 (00:31:071 - ) should be identical yet got a differency of 4 notes
Measure #18 (00:26:626 - ) and #22 (00:32:552 - ) got a differency of 3 notes
Measure #19+20 (00:28:108 - ) and #23+#24 (00:34:034 - ) seems broken. Notes ended up snapped wrong. Here for quick reference: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/770251 and http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/770254

It continues like that and i didn't even analyze every part until the end because it's just tedious (counting notes, breaking down the song comparing things etc) and im sure it just goes on like that until the end.

Well that being said i would love to see some clearer shape in that part of yours, so it feels better to play

Here are some reference notes i made during the process if that helps:
(i didn't count the intro in as i thought it was fine)



Moving on to ljqandylee's part..

The noting seemed alot better and it felt good and intiuitive to play. Not much i would point out here except that the end part gets ridiculous in difficulty. 03:20:731 - to 03:38:509 - I would make it easier personally. It really stands out from the rest of the part and the difficulty spike here just overwhelming!

Well thats all i can say and i feel like a bully after writing this but i think it is important and should be adressed

Hanyuu wrote:

The normal diffs seemed really nice to play and well done. Don't have any complaints about them. -Thanks~

Collab:

I really think the beginning of this map needs to be reorganized. The way the notes are put in the beginning seems very hard to read and messy, the basic structure to make out which note corresponds to which sound is kinda missing here for me. For this kind of difficulty i strongly suggest to use patterns and keep them! When keysounds aren't used it is even more harder for the player to figure out the notes of your chart so it is even more important to use a structurized noting scheme and a consistency throughout your patterns! If you dont like it like that and want to keep it how you made it initially please dont bother with me and disregard what im going to say ._. -Discussed with Luyuja and he has reorganized his part to some extent


I was wondering how i should start about modding a map like this so i just thought i break it down into parts and analyze the notes part by part.
(luyuja's part just seemed like a big mess to me and i didn't know how to start modding this sorry!)
Well then..

The intro part seems fine except that a clap note is missing here 00:10:330 - I tried adding clap here but it seems not so good

Please check all the pictures i upload now. I will mark the inconsistencies and please check your arrangement. Also try to compare all of them with each other.
Measure 9 11 and 13 should all have the same note pattern and notes arranged accroding to pitch relevancy.
#9: http://puu.sh/2YO4m different from #11 and #13

Measure 10 12 and 14 inconsistency through all 3 measures on this pattern on beat 2 and 3
#10: http://puu.sh/2YOiE
#12: http://puu.sh/2YOiY
#14: http://puu.sh/2YOjc

Measure #15 #16 are basicly the patterns used before in the song allthough the note count gets significantly higher and is not justified in my opinion. -Rearranged


Next section of the song:


00:25:145 - to 00:31:071 -

and

00:31:071 - to 00:36:997 -

which is basicly the same occuring 2 times.

Measure #17 (00:25:145 - ) and #21 (00:31:071 - ) should be identical yet got a differency of 4 notes
Measure #18 (00:26:626 - ) and #22 (00:32:552 - ) got a differency of 3 notes
Measure #19+20 (00:28:108 - ) and #23+#24 (00:34:034 - ) seems broken. Notes ended up snapped wrong. Here for quick reference: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/770251 and http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/770254 -Fixed

It continues like that and i didn't even analyze every part until the end because it's just tedious (counting notes, breaking down the song comparing things etc) and im sure it just goes on like that until the end.

Well that being said i would love to see some clearer shape in that part of yours, so it feels better to play

Here are some reference notes i made during the process if that helps:
(i didn't count the intro in as i thought it was fine)

SPOILER

Collab:

	SECTION 1:
	00:13:293 - 00:25:145 - 

Measure#9	18 Notes
Measure#10	18 Notes
Measure#11	16 Notes
Measure#12	17 Notes
Measure#13	16 Notes
Measure#14	19 Notes
Measure#15	16 Notes
Measure#16	26 Notes


	SECTION 2:
	00:25:145 - 00:36:997 - 

Measure#17	21 Notes
Measure#18	23 Notes
Measure#19	22 Notes
Measure#20	5 Holds 16 Notes
Measure#21	25 Notes
Measure#22	26 Notes
Measure#23	1 Hold 23 Notes
Measure#24	4 Holds 20 Notes


	SECTION 3:
	00:36:997 - 00:48:848 - 

Measure#25	29 Notes
Measure#26	30 Notes
Measure#27	28 Notes
Measure#28	33 Notes
Measure#29	30 Notes
Measure#30	29 Notes
Measure#31	30 Notes
Measure#32	32 Notes

Moving on to ljqandylee's part..

The noting seemed alot better and it felt good and intiuitive to play. Not much i would point out here except that the end part gets ridiculous in difficulty. 03:20:731 - to 03:38:509 - I would make it easier personally. It really stands out from the rest of the part and the difficulty spike here just overwhelming! -Slightly changed. I don't want to reduce this KIAI part's difficulty too much...

Well thats all i can say and i feel like a bully after writing this but i think it is important and should be adressed

Thanks for your precious mod and sorry for my late reply~

总体感觉不错..加油..

Collab
01:02:830 - add a note at 5 column
01:05:700 (65700|0) - move to 4,add a note at 01:05:793 (65793|2) - ,01:05:978 (65978|2) -
01:06:071 (66071|4) - move to 4
01:08:663 (68663|4) - move to 6,add a note at 01:08:756 (68756|4) -
01:35:376 (95376|3) - add a note at 4
01:35:932 (95932|3) - ^
02:22:610 (142610|4) - add a note at 5
02:39:598 - there should be double notes to fit the rhythm

Hard
04:01:842 (241842|5) - add a note at 6

Normal
00:51:811 (51811|6,51997|6) - move to 4
02:07:223 (127223|0) - remove this note, need extra skill to hit at normal diff
02:07:997 (127997|2) - ^
02:08:772 (128772|0) - ^
02:09:546 (129546|0) - ^
02:10:320 (130320|1) - ^
02:11:094 (131094|6,131868|1,132643|5) - ^
03:01:472 (181472|3,181657|4,181842|5,182028|6) - remove, doesn't need to double here, no such volume change.
03:50:361 - doesn't need to double from here to 03:56:287 -

Easy
01:42:449 - to 01:45:546 - ,hard for newbies to recognise the rhythm change here, since all notes are in a line, move 01:44:288 (104288|3,104578|3) - to left, and 01:44:772 (104772|3,104965|3,105159|3,105352|3,105546|3) - to right will make the pattern easier.

woc2006 wrote:

Collab
01:02:830 - add a note at 5 column -Nope
01:05:700 (65700|0) - move to 4 -Fixed ,add a note at 01:05:793 (65793|2) - ,01:05:978 (65978|2) - -Nope
01:06:071 (66071|4) - move to 4 -Fixed
01:08:663 (68663|4) - move to 6 -Fixed ,add a note at 01:08:756 (68756|4) - -Nope
01:35:376 (95376|3) - add a note at 4 -Nope
01:35:932 (95932|3) - ^ -^
02:22:610 (142610|4) - add a note at 5 -^
02:39:598 - there should be double notes to fit the rhythm -Fixed

Hard
04:01:842 (241842|5) - add a note at 6 -Fixed

Normal
00:51:811 (51811|6,51997|6) - move to 4 -Fixed
02:07:223 (127223|0) - remove this note, need extra skill to hit at normal diff -Nope, only this one I wanna keep
02:07:997 (127997|2) - ^ -Fixed
02:08:772 (128772|0) - ^ -^
02:09:546 (129546|0) - ^ -^
02:10:320 (130320|1) - ^ -^
02:11:094 (131094|6,131868|1,132643|5) - ^ -^
03:01:472 (181472|3,181657|4,181842|5,182028|6) - remove, doesn't need to double here, no such volume change. -Fixed
03:50:361 - doesn't need to double from here to 03:56:287 - -Fixed

Easy
01:42:449 - to 01:45:546 - ,hard for newbies to recognise the rhythm change here, since all notes are in a line, move 01:44:288 (104288|3,104578|3) - to left, and 01:44:772 (104772|3,104965|3,105159|3,105352|3,105546|3) - to right will make the pattern easier. -Fixed, a bit strange, but it's acceptable since it's more friendly to beginners XD

Thanks for mod

The beatmap is now looking alot better than it initially did Good Job both, starred!

我只MOD最高难度
以下——
00:07:182 (7182|6) - 这个位置是8分音，用1/8然后做阶梯从右向左排列，空间是正好够的
00:09:219 (9219|3) - 放到第三格上
00:09:404 (9404|4) - 放到第四格上
00:09:589 (9589|5) - 放到第五格上
00:11:997 (11997|0) - 放到第二格上
00:12:182 (12182|3) - 放到第三格
00:12:552 (12552|5) - 放到一二三格都可以
00:13:293 (13293|3) - 移到第六格
00:13:478 (13478|3) - 移到第五格或者第七格
00:14:034 (14034|3) - 移到第三格
00:14:774 (14774|2) - 移到第四格
00:14:959 (14959|1) - 移到第五格或者第六格
00:15:885 (15885|3) - 这里我觉得用四个NOTE会表现的更好，这里有一个忽然出现的鼓点
00:16:163 (16163|5) -
00:17:737 (17737|5) - 00:17:922 (17922|3) - 这两排的NOTE关联性太弱，修改下为好
00:19:034 (19034|5) - 这么高的BPM最好还是做成阶梯会好点
00:25:145 (25145|2) - 这里用四个NOTE感觉没什么意义，和前面差别不大
感觉后面的部分为了突出鼓点，很多东西都不写了，暂时就这么多吧，虽然只有开头/.\
我很懒得，别在意>_>

其实个人很不喜欢给别人说好套路去写，还是模糊一点，给新人一个自由发挥的空间为好

最后给个建议，像每段会出现的四连鼓点那段可以着重写这个鼓点之后再写长音和其他鼓点，努力把
鼓点写好，这歌鼓点还是挺好写的，如果写好了鼓点，你对BMS的理解力也就差不多了，记得我很崇拜
的一个NOTER说过，做好了鼓点，你就做好了一首歌的一半，继续加油 ._.

Lieselotte wrote:

我只MOD最高难度
以下——
00:07:182 (7182|6) - 这个位置是8分音，用1/8然后做阶梯从右向左排列，空间是正好够的貌似有点影响整段的和谐
00:09:219 (9219|3) - 放到第三格上搞定
00:09:404 (9404|4) - 放到第四格上搞定
00:09:589 (9589|5) - 放到第五格上搞定
00:11:997 (11997|0) - 放到第二格上搞定
00:12:182 (12182|3) - 放到第三格搞定
00:12:552 (12552|5) - 放到一二三格都可以搞定
00:13:293 (13293|3) - 移到第六格搞定
00:13:478 (13478|3) - 移到第五格或者第七格搞定
00:14:034 (14034|3) - 移到第三格搞定
00:14:774 (14774|2) - 移到第四格搞定
00:14:959 (14959|1) - 移到第五格或者第六格搞定
00:15:885 (15885|3) - 这里我觉得用四个NOTE会表现的更好，这里有一个忽然出现的鼓点搞定
00:16:163 (16163|5) -
00:17:737 (17737|5) - 00:17:922 (17922|3) - 这两排的NOTE关联性太弱，修改下为好搞定
00:19:034 (19034|5) - 这么高的BPM最好还是做成阶梯会好点连点也是特色嘛
00:25:145 (25145|2) - 这里用四个NOTE感觉没什么意义，和前面差别不大搞定
感觉后面的部分为了突出鼓点，很多东西都不写了，暂时就这么多吧，虽然只有开头/.\
我很懒得，别在意>_>

其实个人很不喜欢给别人说好套路去写，还是模糊一点，给新人一个自由发挥的空间为好

最后给个建议，像每段会出现的四连鼓点那段可以着重写这个鼓点之后再写长音和其他鼓点搞定，努力把
鼓点写好，这歌鼓点还是挺好写的，如果写好了鼓点，你对BMS的理解力也就差不多了，记得我很崇拜
的一个NOTER说过，做好了鼓点，你就做好了一首歌的一半，继续加油 ._.

谢谢纳米姐

坚强哥你那部分明显比鲈鱼偷懒啊 再仔细看下吧。。

比如
02:53:969 (173969|3) - 最右边一列始终都没有，左边也太单调了点。。
03:00:916 (180916|2) - 13-24-35-46-57完全看不出道理，简直诗人
03:14:065 (194065|0) - 这段重音只有在这里是拍砖（好吧，后面还有一处），后面相似的地方大多都是正常乱键海，不免有点奇怪。
04:07:398 (247398|2) - 这里还可以考虑加几个音符，符合背景32分。

射一发（突然发现没星，逃

xxbidiao wrote:

坚强哥你那部分明显比鲈鱼偷懒啊 再仔细看下吧。。我很认真的QAQ

比如
02:53:969 (173969|3) - 最右边一列始终都没有，左边也太单调了点。。最右边没有是因为怕影响手感，左边这个鼓点我故意这么放的~
03:00:916 (180916|2) - 13-24-35-46-57完全看不出道理，简直诗人 因为前面都是双乱嘛这里想放一点规律的增加点乐趣……稍微改了下嗯
03:14:065 (194065|0) - 这段重音只有在这里是拍砖，后面相似的地方都是正常乱键海，不免有点奇怪。03:25:916 - 这里也是拍砖；03:31:842 - 这里是考虑到有32分鼓点而且和前面的有点差异也挺好；03:38:509 - 这里也是有拍砖的不过融入到乱键里了，因为是最高潮部分了所以需要加强点力度
04:07:398 (247398|2) - 这里还可以考虑加几个音符，符合背景32分。没想出很合适的排列，而且到最后了还是稍微人性点好了~

射一发（突然发现没星，逃

多谢上将mod~

坚强叔的铺一定要顶。

mania 我4键都打不来还是给个星就好了，不添乱了

Hi there. As requested, I will mod your map

[Easy]
00:24:589 (24589|5) Move to 2nd column.
00:24:959 (24959|6) Move to 1st column.
00:25:515 (25515|1) Move to 3rd column.
00:27:737 (27737|2) Move to 2nd column.
00:27:922 (27922|1) Remove this note.
00:33:663 (33663|5) Move to 4th or 5th column.
00:43:478 (43478|4) Move to 1st or 3rd column.
00:46:256 (46256|1) Move to 3rd column.
00:47:922 (47922|4) To match Pitch Relevancy (PR in short), this should be in the 1st column.
00:49:589 (49589|5,51071|5) Move to 4th or 5th column.
01:03:293 (63293|5) Move to 2nd or 3rd column.
01:03:478 (63478|1) Remove this note.
01:03:663 (63663|6) Move to 1st column for PR.
01:05:330 (65330|2) Move to 5th column.
01:05:515 (65515|1,65885|1) Move to 3rd column.
01:09:404 (69404|0) Remove this note.
01:11:811 (71811|6,71811|0) Remove one of these notes and move the remaining note to 4th or 6th column.
01:12:552 Try this: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/785087
01:15:885 (75885|1) Remove this note. At the same time, add a normal note in the 3rd column.
01:21:256 (81256|6) Move to 4th or 5th column.
01:22:182 (82182|5) Move to 3rd column.
01:22:922 Add a normal note in 1st column (finish hitsound).
01:24:404 Add finish hitsound to either or both notes on this time.
01:30:145 (90145|0) Move to 3rd column.
01:43:997 Try something like this: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/785089
01:47:094 ^
02:00:836 (120836|1) Move to 4th, 5th, or 6th column.
02:09:933 (129933|2) Move to 4th or 5th column.
02:13:030 (133030|4) Move to 3rd column.
02:24:255 (144255|5) Have the long note end moved to 02:25:804.
02:25:901 (145901|1) Remove this note.
02:50:148 (170148|1,170530|5) Why are these long notes as opposed to the rest of the section that are full of normal notes? Please change them to normal notes.
03:28:509 (208509|5,208879|3,209250|5) Try this: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/785094
03:42:953 (222953|4,223324|4,223694|4,224065|4) Move to 1st or 3rd column.
03:51:102 (231102|5) Move to 5th column.
04:01:657 (241657|6) ^
04:01:842 (241842|0) Move to 3rd column.

[Normal]
00:09:589 (9589|3) Move to 6th column.
00:09:774 (9774|5) Move to 5th column.
00:29:774 (29774|3,29959|4,30145|5,30330|6) Try something like this: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/785097
00:54:497 (54497|2,54682|2) Move to 4th or 5th column.
00:57:459 (57459|4,57645|4) If ^ is the same as this, you should move this to either the 4th or 6th column.
01:44:772 (104772|3,104965|3,105159|3) Try this: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/785101
01:47:868 (107868|3,108062|3,108255|3) ^
02:37:598 (157598|2,157998|5) Change them to normal notes.
03:31:287 (211287|1) Move to 3rd column.
03:31:657 (211657|5) Move to 5th column.
03:45:731 (225731|5,227213|5) Move to 3rd or 5th column.
03:48:879 (228879|1,229250|1,229620|1,229990|1,230176|1) Move to 3rd column.
04:11:102 Add a long note in 5th column (1 measure long).
04:12:583 Add a long note in 6th column (1 measure long).

[Hard]
HP Drain +1
00:24:867 (24867|2,25052|2) Move to 6th column.
00:27:737 (27737|4,27922|4) Move to 3rd column.
00:33:663 (33663|2,33848|2) Move to 5th, 6th, or 7th column.
01:18:108 (78108|5,78293|5) Move to 2nd or 3rd column.
02:07:126 (127126|4) Move to 4th column. By now, people would be annoyed of those double taps.
02:10:126 (130126|4) Move to 3rd or 4th column.
02:31:997 (151997|5,151998|1,153598|5,153598|1,155198|5,155198|1) Remove these notes.
03:33:324 (213324|1) Move to 3rd column.
03:34:898 (214898|4) Move to 4th column.
03:36:379 (216379|3) Move to 3rd column.
04:04:898 (244898|2,245083|2) Move to 4th or 5th column.
04:05:731 (245731|5) Move to 5th column.

I hope this helps! Good luck!

Also, once you think it's about to go for rank you can ask me for a recheck for your Collab difficulty.

PROGUY wrote:

Hi there. As requested, I will mod your map

[Easy]
00:24:589 (24589|5) Move to 2nd column. Done
00:24:959 (24959|6) Move to 1st column. Done
00:25:515 (25515|1) Move to 3rd column. Done
00:27:737 (27737|2) Move to 2nd column. Done
00:27:922 (27922|1) Remove this note. Done
00:33:663 (33663|5) Move to 4th or 5th column. Done
00:43:478 (43478|4) Move to 1st or 3rd column. Done
00:46:256 (46256|1) Move to 3rd column. Nope
00:47:922 (47922|4) To match Pitch Relevancy (PR in short), this should be in the 1st column. Done
00:49:589 (49589|5,51071|5) Move to 4th or 5th column. Done
01:03:293 (63293|5) Move to 2nd or 3rd column. Done
01:03:478 (63478|1) Remove this note. Done
01:03:663 (63663|6) Move to 1st column for PR. Nope
01:05:330 (65330|2) Move to 5th column. Done
01:05:515 (65515|1,65885|1) Move to 3rd column. Moved the former one only
01:09:404 (69404|0) Remove this note. Nope
01:11:811 (71811|6,71811|0) Remove one of these notes and move the remaining note to 4th or 6th column. Nope
01:12:552 Try this: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/785087 Changed to another pattern XD
01:15:885 (75885|1) Remove this note. At the same time, add a normal note in the 3rd column. Done
01:21:256 (81256|6) Move to 4th or 5th column. Nope
01:22:182 (82182|5) Move to 3rd column. Done
01:22:922 Add a normal note in 1st column (finish hitsound). Nope
01:24:404 Add finish hitsound to either or both notes on this time. Done
01:30:145 (90145|0) Move to 3rd column. Nope for the drum, but I changed pattern so it becomes easier
01:43:997 Try something like this: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/785089 Nice pattern~
01:47:094 ^ Done
02:00:836 (120836|1) Move to 4th, 5th, or 6th column. Done
02:09:933 (129933|2) Move to 4th or 5th column. Done
02:13:030 (133030|4) Move to 3rd column. Nope
02:24:255 (144255|5) Have the long note end moved to 02:25:804. Nope
02:25:901 (145901|1) Remove this note. Nope
02:50:148 (170148|1,170530|5) Why are these long notes as opposed to the rest of the section that are full of normal notes? Please change them to normal notes. For diversity, and to heighten and emphasize the strong beat at 02:50:912
03:28:509 (208509|5,208879|3,209250|5) Try this: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/785094 Done
03:42:953 (222953|4,223324|4,223694|4,224065|4) Move to 1st or 3rd column. Done
03:51:102 (231102|5) Move to 5th column. Done
04:01:657 (241657|6) ^ Done
04:01:842 (241842|0) Move to 3rd column. Done

[Normal]
00:09:589 (9589|3) Move to 6th column. Done
00:09:774 (9774|5) Move to 5th column. Done
00:29:774 (29774|3,29959|4,30145|5,30330|6) Try something like this: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/785097 Done
00:54:497 (54497|2,54682|2) Move to 4th or 5th column. Done
00:57:459 (57459|4,57645|4) If ^ is the same as this, you should move this to either the 4th or 6th column. Nope, I also changed the other 2 notes from 00:54:497 to avoid repeat
01:44:772 (104772|3,104965|3,105159|3) Try this: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/785101 Nope
01:47:868 (107868|3,108062|3,108255|3) ^ Nope
02:37:598 (157598|2,157998|5) Change them to normal notes. Nope, the same reason as Easy
03:31:287 (211287|1) Move to 3rd column. Nope
03:31:657 (211657|5) Move to 5th column. Nope
03:45:731 (225731|5,227213|5) Move to 3rd or 5th column. Done
03:48:879 (228879|1,229250|1,229620|1,229990|1,230176|1) Move to 3rd column. Nope
04:11:102 Add a long note in 5th column (1 measure long). Done
04:12:583 Add a long note in 6th column (1 measure long). Done

[Hard]
HP Drain +1 Done
00:24:867 (24867|2,25052|2) Move to 6th column. Done
00:27:737 (27737|4,27922|4) Move to 3rd column. Done
00:33:663 (33663|2,33848|2) Move to 5th, 6th, or 7th column. Done
01:18:108 (78108|5,78293|5) Move to 2nd or 3rd column. Done
02:07:126 (127126|4) Move to 4th column. By now, people would be annoyed of those double taps. Done
02:10:126 (130126|4) Move to 3rd or 4th column. Done
02:31:997 (151997|5,151998|1,153598|5,153598|1,155198|5,155198|1) Remove these notes. Done
03:33:324 (213324|1) Move to 3rd column. Nope, only this part I want to keep double taps
03:34:898 (214898|4) Move to 4th column. ^
03:36:379 (216379|3) Move to 3rd column. ^
04:04:898 (244898|2,245083|2) Move to 4th or 5th column. Nope
04:05:731 (245731|5) Move to 5th column. Nope

I hope this helps! Good luck!

Also, once you think it's about to go for rank you can ask me for a recheck for your Collab difficulty.

Great thanks! Helped me a lot!
It'll be fine if you have time to recheck Collab diff

ZHSteven wrote:

坚强叔的铺一定要顶。

mania 我4键都打不来还是给个星就好了，不添乱了

多谢山哥~~~~另外简单难度你可以试试嘛 挺适合入门的XD

Hi again

[Collab]
00:16:071 (16071|5) Move to 5th column.
00:21:997 (21997|5) ^
00:24:867 (24867|4,25052|4) Move to 2nd column.
00:33:200 (33200|0) ^
00:33:756 (33756|2,33941|2) Move to 5th or 7th column.
00:36:163 (36163|1,36348|1) Move either or both to 3rd column.
00:36:719 (36719|2,36904|2) Move to 4th column.
01:18:108 Try this: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/789831
01:23:663 (83663|6,83848|6,84034|5,84219|5) Move left by one column.
01:33:200 (93200|0) Move to 3rd column.
02:03:933 (123933|3) ^
02:07:126 (127126|6) Move to 4th column.
02:37:598 (157598|1,157598|2) Remove either one of these notes, but not both.
02:54:734 Try this: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/789839
02:56:262 (176262|3) Move to 7th column.
03:56:287 From here onwards, I noticed that you use plenty of double taps along with two long notes. You should try to avoid this because it is awkward to concentrate to press them at the right time while focusing on other notes, especially long notes. If you really must do this, I recommend that you reduce the amount of them.
04:08:139 Add a long note in 7th column (2 measures long).

Hope this helps as well
(I don't think you need to give me kudos for rechecks but at least give me feedback on this mod, thanks.)

PROGUY wrote:

Hi again

[Collab]
00:16:071 (16071|5) Move to 5th column. Nope
00:21:997 (21997|5) ^ Nope
00:24:867 (24867|4,25052|4) Move to 2nd column. Done
00:33:200 (33200|0) ^ Nope
00:33:756 (33756|2,33941|2) Move to 5th or 7th column. Done
00:36:163 (36163|1,36348|1) Move either or both to 3rd column. Done
00:36:719 (36719|2,36904|2) Move to 4th column. Done
01:18:108 Try this: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/789831 Done
01:23:663 (83663|6,83848|6,84034|5,84219|5) Move left by one column. Nope
01:33:200 (93200|0) Move to 3rd column. Done
02:03:933 (123933|3) ^ Nope
02:07:126 (127126|6) Move to 4th column. Nope
02:37:598 (157598|1,157598|2) Remove either one of these notes, but not both. Done
02:54:734 Try this: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/789839 Nope
02:56:262 (176262|3) Move to 7th column. Nope
03:56:287 From here onwards, I noticed that you use plenty of double taps along with two long notes. You should try to avoid this because it is awkward to concentrate to press them at the right time while focusing on other notes, especially long notes. If you really must do this, I recommend that you reduce the amount of them. Removed the most difficult tap, actrally I want to make something different here and keep the difficulty as well.
04:08:139 Add a long note in 7th column (2 measures long). Done, but added in 5th column.

Hope this helps as well
(I don't think you need to give me kudos for rechecks but at least give me feedback on this mod, thanks.)

Thanks again

Bubbled.

Ranked >_>

congratulations!

congratz \:D/

although I forget to mod on what you requested to me. again. .___.

nice~~

fun congrats !

Coongraats~

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