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Crimmi wrote:

ezek wrote:

Hey Crimmi! try using your magic word to get this ranked!
lol~
YES!!! Now let's wait and see if it works :P
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Hi! This is for helping me with timing a map! ^^ (Although I wouldn't mind a mod for my 'Pending' map. xD)

[BASIC]
00:07:097 (3) - Have the start of the slider start/stacked on top of the start of 00:01:880 (1) - maybe?
00:08:836 (1,3) - These straight sliders doesn't seem to fit the song. >< You could ignore this one though.
00:44:923 (2,1) - Blanket a bit better? Also have the end of the slider stacked on where 00:42:314 (1) - ended properly?
00:48:836 (2,1) - This part looks a bit weird. I mean on the beatmap editor and while playing it, the blue slider looked out of place right when the long slider finishes.
01:09:706 (3,4) - Blanket needs a bit of adjustment as well.

[NOVICE]
I can't really find anything here. xD

[ADVANCED]
Neither could I find anything here. x3

[EXHAUST]
I think it's better to have a smaller CS for this difficulty. I suggest 3.5 or higher maybe. >< Other than that, I couldn't find anything else. x3

[LUNATIC]
01:03:184 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - The stream feels out of place. >< I couldn't hear anything that signals for a stream to be placed there.

That's all I could do. x3 I hope I helped!
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Victorica wrote:

Hi! This is for helping me with timing a map! ^^ (Although I wouldn't mind a mod for my 'Pending' map. xD)

[BASIC]
00:07:097 (3) - Have the start of the slider start/stacked on top of the start of 00:01:880 (1) - maybe?
00:08:836 (1,3) - These straight sliders doesn't seem to fit the song. >< You could ignore this one though.
00:44:923 (2,1) - Blanket a bit better? Also have the end of the slider stacked on where 00:42:314 (1) - ended properly?
00:48:836 (2,1) - This part looks a bit weird. I mean on the beatmap editor and while playing it, the blue slider looked out of place right when the long slider finishes.
01:09:706 (3,4) - Blanket needs a bit of adjustment as well.

[NOVICE]
I can't really find anything here. xD

[ADVANCED]
Neither could I find anything here. x3

[EXHAUST]
I think it's better to have a smaller CS for this difficulty. I suggest 3.5 or higher maybe. >< Other than that, I couldn't find anything else. x3

[LUNATIC]
01:03:184 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - The stream feels out of place. >< I couldn't hear anything that signals for a stream to be placed there.

That's all I could do. x3 I hope I helped!
Thank you for the mod~! :)
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re-bubble
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@BN: but the metadata is correct?

Title: Iro wa Nioedo Chirinuru o?
Artist: senya?
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Prophecy wrote:

@BN: but the metadata is correct?

Title: Iro wa Nioedo Chirinuru o?
Artist: senya?
See my response to Kuron-kun above.
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Placeholder, I'll be back at the weekend because I already back on the university and I have no much time, sorry for the delay.
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Gero wrote:

Placeholder, I'll be back at the weekend because I already back on the university and I have no much time, sorry for the delay.
Good luck on your studies~!
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squad is coming in for the kill

anyways, your kiais arent snapped. Please fix that. Also, AutoMod is telling me that there's some unsnapped sliders (like, 1ms unsnapped) in some diffs. I know there's issues between osu! and cutting edge so I don't know if this is an issue but maybe a resnap would help

You can save it for when the next BN comes but uhhh yeah
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Reditum wrote:

squad is coming in for the kill

anyways, your kiais arent snapped. Please fix that. Also, AutoMod is telling me that there's some unsnapped sliders (like, 1ms unsnapped) in some diffs. I know there's issues between osu! and cutting edge so I don't know if this is an issue but maybe a resnap would help

You can save it for when the next BN comes but uhhh yeah
I think it's in Cutting Edge that I saw these issues, I will wait for a BN to swing on by and clarify this.
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Gero wrote:

Placeholder, I'll be back at the weekend because I already back on the university and I have no much time, sorry for the delay.
365 days left for the weekend.
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I am sorry, but I am popping this bubble because I feel it doesn't meet sufficient qualities yet.

Reason for popping:
Wrong metadata, inconsistent and too big gap in spread, spacing issues on lower difficulties
Additional modding:
  1. The cut version does have different name. You may check it on CD case. This version corresponds with 色は匂へど 散りぬるを(OPver.1.2) and is only right and official title.
  2. Romanization is wrong as well. Only particles and similar should start with lowercase letter, others should start with uppercase letter. Apart from that, we have to use modified hepburn in osu!, this romanization type romanize following letters different:
    1. へ (he if not particle) = e
    2. は (ha if not particle) = wa - This one is correct in your romanization.
    3. を (wo if not particle) = o

    Lastly, 散り and ぬる should be separate.
    If we consider all these facts, the correct romanized title after correcting original title should be: Iro wa Nio e do Chiri Nuru o (OPver.1.2)
  3. Artist field is also wrong. Firstly, don't ever refer to SOUND VOLTEX website, it has nothing to do with the artist and all information here is unofficial. Secondly 幽閉サテライト (Yuuhei Satellite) is a circle and as CD case says, senya and Iceon (senya is performer, Iceon is the guy who made the music) are a part of this, so you cannot use "feat." for someone who is in part of certain group. It is like using: "senya feat. senya", seems insensible right? You should use either a performer, which is just senya or use only 幽閉サテライト as artist, because it is a circle. After that romanization would be Yuuhei Satellite. SOUND VOLTEX does use its own way of naming and you should not use it in any case, because it is unofficial. To confirm only Iceon and senya worked on the song, you may check this, but it is really not important at this point. Yuuhei Satellite is very famous circle and its name should be used, tho if you want, go ahead with senya.
  4. Burn the video please. Respectively, the resolution is very low, you can see every pixel in gameplay, moreover, you can see those pixels even if you play it on its resolution, so quality is very low. And last thing, XviD does indeed have terrible compression. Like 8.6MB for this? The codec is very outdated and its usage in professional studios is zero. If I consider 2K version of this video exists, I tried to fix it for you and you may use this, quite high quality video instead.
  5. Where is ZUN tag?
  6. Kiai time on EXHAUST is not consistent with other diffs, it is few ms off. Also, check others kiais, most are not snapped correctly.
  7. Spread is very messy, you won't compensate the gap between EXHAUST and ADVANCED by adding easier diffs.
  8. BASIC difficulty is way too useless. 6 objects difference between NOVICE and lower settings doesn't make it an easier diff, decrease usage of circles, make longer gaps and in short, just make it easier so the diff does have actual usage.
  9. 00:56:227 (1,2,1) - On NOVICE is really nothing that should appear in easy/normal difficulty. Its readability is really low and the rhythm is difficult to play as well.
  10. NOVICE and BASIC difficulty have distance problems. You are changing the DS from 0.8 to 1.2 from pattern to pattern. Spacing in low diffs, especially easy should be consistent. Using lower spacing if you would have to place the note out of screen is obviously okay, but not changing it this way. Please, check both difficulties for inconsistencies and be sure to use constant spacing, these difficulties don't need it and only make it difficult to read.
  11. 00:01:880 - 00:17:966 - Finishes in this part are really loud and overused on LUNATIC difficulty.
  12. Using rhythm game difficulty names may be sensible, because the song appeared there, but combining with Touhou names is really out. The song is not even officially made for the rhythm game, so it is not that much related, Touhou is more related to this. Using Touhou naming would make more sense than this.


You can ask anything you need to explain. I will watch any changes that happen here. If there is any BN who's going to bubble the map, he should consult with me first.
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Wafu wrote:

I am sorry, but I am popping this bubble because I feel it doesn't meet sufficient qualities yet.

Reason for popping:
Wrong metadata, inconsistent and too big gap in spread, spacing issues on lower difficulties
Additional modding:
  1. The cut version does have different name. You may check it on CD case. This version corresponds with 色は匂へど 散りぬるを(OPver.1.2) and is only right and official title.
  2. Romanization is wrong as well. Only particles and similar should start with lowercase letter, others should start with uppercase letter. Apart from that, we have to use modified hepburn in osu!, this romanization type romanize following letters different:
    1. へ (he if not particle) = e
    2. は (ha if not particle) = wa - This one is correct in your romanization.
    3. を (wo if not particle) = o

    Lastly, 散り and ぬる should be separate.
    If we consider all these facts, the correct romanized title after correcting original title should be: Iro wa Nio e do Chiri Nuru o (OPver.1.2)
  3. Artist field is also wrong. Firstly, don't ever refer to SOUND VOLTEX website, it has nothing to do with the artist and all information here is unofficial. Secondly 幽閉サテライト (Yuuhei Satellite) is a circle and as CD case says, senya and Iceon (senya is performer, Iceon is the guy who made the music) are a part of this, so you cannot use "feat." for someone who is in part of certain group. It is like using: "senya feat. senya", seems insensible right? You should use either a performer, which is just senya or use only 幽閉サテライト as artist, because it is a circle. After that romanization would be Yuuhei Satellite. SOUND VOLTEX does use its own way of naming and you should not use it in any case, because it is unofficial. To confirm only Iceon and senya worked on the song, you may check this, but it is really not important at this point. Yuuhei Satellite is very famous circle and its name should be used, tho if you want, go ahead with senya.
  4. Burn the video please. Respectively, the resolution is very low, you can see every pixel in gameplay, moreover, you can see those pixels even if you play it on its resolution, so quality is very low. And last thing, XviD does indeed have terrible compression. Like 8.6MB for this? The codec is very outdated and its usage in professional studios is zero. If I consider 2K version of this video exists, I tried to fix it for you and you may use this, quite high quality video instead.
  5. Where is ZUN tag?
  6. Kiai time on EXHAUST is not consistent with other diffs, it is few ms off. Also, check others kiais, most are not snapped correctly.
  7. Spread is very messy, you won't compensate the gap between EXHAUST and ADVANCED by adding easier diffs.
  8. BASIC difficulty is way too useless. 6 objects difference between NOVICE and lower settings doesn't make it an easier diff, decrease usage of circles, make longer gaps and in short, just make it easier so the diff does have actual usage.
  9. 00:56:227 (1,2,1) - On NOVICE is really nothing that should appear in easy/normal difficulty. Its readability is really low and the rhythm is difficult to play as well.
  10. NOVICE and BASIC difficulty have distance problems. You are changing the DS from 0.8 to 1.2 from pattern to pattern. Spacing in low diffs, especially easy should be consistent. Using lower spacing if you would have to place the note out of screen is obviously okay, but not changing it this way. Please, check both difficulties for inconsistencies and be sure to use constant spacing, these difficulties don't need it and only make it difficult to read.
  11. 00:01:880 - 00:17:966 - Finishes in this part are really loud and overused on LUNATIC difficulty.
  12. Using rhythm game difficulty names may be sensible, because the song appeared there, but combining with Touhou names is really out. The song is not even officially made for the rhythm game, so it is not that much related, Touhou is more related to this. Using Touhou naming would make more sense than this.


You can ask anything you need to explain. I will watch any changes that happen here. If there is any BN who's going to bubble the map, he should consult with me first.
Alright, things changed:
  1. Metadata
  2. Easier difficulties being less similar to each other.
  3. Fixed kiai snapping
  4. Lowered the volume on Insane (Formerly LUNATIC)
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2nd check before I give a verdict on my bubble pop
My fault for not mentioning it previously, video offset is 1382.

[Basic]
  1. 00:59:706 (1,2,3,4,1) - The spacing is still inconsistent
  2. Difficulty is still no difference between easy. 3 object and 8000 score is really, really low difference. Making this one even easier would be more sensible.

[Easy]
  1. 00:07:966 (6,1) - Wrong spacing as well
  2. 01:27:096 - This timing point is useless
  3. 00:31:879 - The spacing is changed to 1.0x here, while the song is very similar to start at this point and it is easy diff, why would you change spacing here. I recommend to remake part before to 1.0x for better gameplay experience for newbies.
  4. 00:56:227 (1,2,1) - As I said previously, easy diff is supposed to be easy, so readability, spacing and consistency are important things. In this case, slider overlaps each other (even the previous one) in the way so it becomes a real mess to a newbie, because there are too many objects concentrated on one place and in combination with hitbursts and other stuff, it will become unreadable, and moreover 3/4 sliders are a really difficult rhythm to catch. This rhythm would make much more sense for easy.

[Normal]
  1. 00:29:706 (1) - The spinner doesn't provide sufficient amount of time to play next note, also, it doesn't start on a great place since the long sound is actually starting on 00:28:400 - .
  2. 00:06:662 (2) - The rhythm seems a little wrong, because you are ignoring quite a strong sound on 00:07:097 - while you use long slider for a vocal that is divided on 00:06:879 - .

[Hard]
  1. Difference between Normal is still very big. Respectively, the difficulty is significantly higher and in addition, the maximum score is like 3.5x maximum score of normal, which is a big difference as well.
  2. 00:39:488 (2) - The rhythm of this slider seems to be completely off.
  3. 00:31:445 (2,3,4,5) - The stream doesn't look really aesthetic when the spacing is inconsistent. Low spacing on first note seem to ruin the smooth shape of the pattern.

[Insane]
  1. 00:03:619 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - These jumps have no logic with music honestly. The best would be to remove this completely, but at least decrease the distance so it fits the music more, there is nothing really lively to be emphasized with jumps.
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Wafu wrote:

2nd check before I give a verdict on my bubble pop
My fault for not mentioning it previously, video offset is 1382.

[Basic]
  1. 00:59:706 (1,2,3,4,1) - The spacing is still inconsistent
  2. Difficulty is still no difference between easy. 3 object and 8000 score is really, really low difference. Making this one even easier would be more sensible.

[Easy]
  1. 00:07:966 (6,1) - Wrong spacing as well
  2. 01:27:096 - This timing point is useless
  3. 00:31:879 - The spacing is changed to 1.0x here, while the song is very similar to start at this point and it is easy diff, why would you change spacing here. I recommend to remake part before to 1.0x for better gameplay experience for newbies.
  4. 00:56:227 (1,2,1) - As I said previously, easy diff is supposed to be easy, so readability, spacing and consistency are important things. In this case, slider overlaps each other (even the previous one) in the way so it becomes a real mess to a newbie, because there are too many objects concentrated on one place and in combination with hitbursts and other stuff, it will become unreadable, and moreover 3/4 sliders are a really difficult rhythm to catch. This rhythm would make much more sense for easy.

[Normal]
  1. 00:29:706 (1) - The spinner doesn't provide sufficient amount of time to play next note, also, it doesn't start on a great place since the long sound is actually starting on 00:28:400 - .
  2. 00:06:662 (2) - The rhythm seems a little wrong, because you are ignoring quite a strong sound on 00:07:097 - while you use long slider for a vocal that is divided on 00:06:879 - .

[Hard]
  1. Difference between Normal is still very big. Respectively, the difficulty is significantly higher and in addition, the maximum score is like 3.5x maximum score of normal, which is a big difference as well.
  2. 00:39:488 (2) - The rhythm of this slider seems to be completely off.
  3. 00:31:445 (2,3,4,5) - The stream doesn't look really aesthetic when the spacing is inconsistent. Low spacing on first note seem to ruin the smooth shape of the pattern.

[Insane]
  1. 00:03:619 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - These jumps have no logic with music honestly. The best would be to remove this completely, but at least decrease the distance so it fits the music more, there is nothing really lively to be emphasized with jumps.
All fixed, deleted Basic and changed settings on Hard.
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After checking this 3rd time, I can admit everything is okay apart from spread between Normal and Hard. This should be fixed and thus getting few more mods would not hurt. Getting a BN is possible, but let me know if you are going to bubble it, I will be checking the map after every update, if I eventually see it is really okay now, I might rebubble it as well.
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Let me know when everything is updated and ready for a check, I wanna take a look of this as well.
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Wafu wrote:

After checking this 3rd time, I can admit everything is okay apart from spread between Normal and Hard. This should be fixed and thus getting few more mods would not hurt. Getting a BN is possible, but let me know if you are going to bubble it, I will be checking the map after every update, if I eventually see it is really okay now, I might rebubble it as well.
Gap fixed by making a new Hard and leaving the other old hard as a Light Insane.

Gero wrote:

Let me know when everything is updated and ready for a check, I wanna take a look of this as well.
Sure~!
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After double checking, I just decided to delete the Light Insane since it's no different than Hard.
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[Easy]
  1. Why is 100% volume here? It sounds pretty loud.
  2. Use 1382 video offset, this difficulty is inconsistent.
  3. 00:54:052 (3) - Rhythmical emphasis seems to be a little off. 00:54:487 - is definitely more significant sound than 00:54:052 - or 00:54:922 - thus should be definitely clickable.
  4. 00:57:965 (3,4,5) - You could, preferably avoid this stack so circle under it is not covered with hitburst.
  5. 01:00:140 (2) - The spacing difference between these four objects seems to be too big. Please make it consistent as this is an easy beatmap and should provide some aesthetics.
  6. 01:18:401 (5) - Same as previous.
  7. 01:03:618 (2,4) - This pattern is not appropriate for an easy difficulty. Stack with "comeback" in such a short time period is really newbie killer because of many reasons, including it is being overlapped by both circle and hitburst and mainly, the stacked circle is visible before the first one disappears, thus some people will doubleclick this.
  8. 00:01:880 - Are you sure this is supposed to be a finish? Respectively, you are emphasizing a really soft sound with a heavy cymbal, that sounds weird. Applies to all diffs.
  9. 00:44:052 (1) - Is the only inconsistent new combo here
  10. 01:00:139 - This inherited point is a duplicate

[Normal]
  1. Why is 100% volume here? It sounds pretty loud.
  2. Jump from CS 2 to CS 4 is not cool. Either make Easy CS 3 or make Normal CS 3, but there shouldn't be such a difference.
  3. 00:59:705 (1,2) - The rhythm is really incorrect. There is nothing intelligent in music to follow, yet 1/2 sliders are used.
  4. Maybe consider using NC twice as often so you balance the spread a little. You know, 9-combo is not really a cool element for normal. If you use it twice as often (at least after the break) it should fit well. The thing is too long often is delaying gain of HP, thus it is really easy to fail if you miss - which is quite usual thing for newbies.
  5. 01:00:139 - Useless inherited point as well.
  6. 01:27:096 - Same as previous.

[Hard]
  1. Why is 100% volume here? It sounds pretty loud.
  2. 00:07:749 (7,8) - For a better rhythmical ehmpasis, this slider and circle should be swapped respectively slider should be on 00:07:749 - and circle should be on 00:08:401 - . So 00:08:184 - is mapped by the slider, 00:07:749 - is still clickable by the slider and 00:08:401 - for voice is clickable by the circle. Current slider is mapped very strange way when it comes to rhythm.
  3. 01:00:357 (3) - Doesn't sound very cool as there is no significant sound in map.
  4. 01:19:487 (2) - Same thing as first issue, it is not emphasizing music correctly, please change the rhythm.
  5. Please, pass through whole difficulty and limit your stacks and overlaps. I know it's "something new", but for example things like 00:09:271 (2) - 00:11:010 (7) - 00:12:314 (1) - 01:18:835 (1) - 01:22:965 (3) - seem to be very tricky and weird indeed. You are imo overusing this for no reason, otherwise the map is cool.
  6. 00:30:139 (1,2,3,4) - There must be some spacing. They look all like 1/4 gap, but actually only the last one is, please, use smarter placement which clearly says what pattern it is.
  7. 00:41:444 (1,2) - You should swap the new combo for consistency.
  8. 01:00:139 - Unused inherited point.
  9. 01:27:097 - Same as previous.

[Insane]
  1. 00:06:010 (2,3,4) - Sounds very off when it comes to rhythm, nothing in song is 1/4 here.
  2. 01:15:357 (5) - 1/1 slider would make more sense here.
  3. 01:17:532 (10,11) - Exactly the same thing as 00:07:749 (7,8) - on Hard.
  4. Same as Normal, you should come through whole map and double the new combos amount to have better spread - if you consider count of jumps and so on in comparison with Hard, it is not really cool to give HP that rarely.
  5. 01:00:139 - Duplicate inherited point.
  6. 01:27:096 - Same as previous.

No kudosu, I already got for this map.
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