Hi !
[General]
I love the music (that's why i choosed to mod it), and you got really nice patterns. I enjoyed really !
No BPM/Offset issue.
[LUNATIC]
You used samples in your song, but put them more regularly.
00:10:565 (5) - Finish
00:19:043 (6) - Remove Clap
00:21:435 (1) - Finish
00:26:652 (1) - ^
00:28:391 (1) - ^
00:28:391 (1) - ^
00:29:913 (4) - ^ You saw that with the placement of your "finishes",(Listen the music with all the finishes before if you don't understand) the player can feel the stream coming in 00:30:130 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - And it's better don't you think ?
00:41:217 (6,7,8) - PERSONAL OPINION:Place the (6) down of 3 "squares" then Remove (7) and (8) and place a slider like this: http://www.noelshack.com/2013-13-136449 ... hot032.jpg
01:24:043 (5) - Clap
01:27:522 (9) - Add a new inhirated section and just Normal sound, then place a Finish on the (9)
[EXHAUST]
00:44:913 (7) - Is a bit offscreen.
00:57:956 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - This is really confusing. Make a circular movement with the placement of your circles. (Particularly the 6)
01:01:435 (1) - A bit too much oblique to the right compared to 01:02:304 (3) - 01:03:174 (5) -
01:15:348 (1) - A bit offscreen. Don't be afraid if the slider don't start exactly on the middle of the screen.
[ADVANCED]
00:33:609 (4) - Move the slider up a bit, so it has not the same distance with the (5) as the (5) has with the (6). (Timing spacing)
01:23:609 (2) - Clap
That's all i've got to say.
Really nice map, the major part of my advices are really subjective, you can let your map as it is now.
PS: My samples advices works for the other difficulties too, but it's up to you to see how you can put these sounds.
I'll give you a star after some other mods.
Good luck !
[General]
I love the music (that's why i choosed to mod it), and you got really nice patterns. I enjoyed really !
No BPM/Offset issue.
[LUNATIC]
You used samples in your song, but put them more regularly.
00:10:565 (5) - Finish
00:19:043 (6) - Remove Clap
00:21:435 (1) - Finish
00:26:652 (1) - ^
00:28:391 (1) - ^
00:28:391 (1) - ^
00:29:913 (4) - ^ You saw that with the placement of your "finishes",(Listen the music with all the finishes before if you don't understand) the player can feel the stream coming in 00:30:130 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - And it's better don't you think ?
00:41:217 (6,7,8) - PERSONAL OPINION:Place the (6) down of 3 "squares" then Remove (7) and (8) and place a slider like this: http://www.noelshack.com/2013-13-136449 ... hot032.jpg
01:24:043 (5) - Clap
01:27:522 (9) - Add a new inhirated section and just Normal sound, then place a Finish on the (9)
[EXHAUST]
00:44:913 (7) - Is a bit offscreen.
00:57:956 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - This is really confusing. Make a circular movement with the placement of your circles. (Particularly the 6)
01:01:435 (1) - A bit too much oblique to the right compared to 01:02:304 (3) - 01:03:174 (5) -
01:15:348 (1) - A bit offscreen. Don't be afraid if the slider don't start exactly on the middle of the screen.
[ADVANCED]
00:33:609 (4) - Move the slider up a bit, so it has not the same distance with the (5) as the (5) has with the (6). (Timing spacing)
01:23:609 (2) - Clap
That's all i've got to say.
Really nice map, the major part of my advices are really subjective, you can let your map as it is now.
PS: My samples advices works for the other difficulties too, but it's up to you to see how you can put these sounds.
I'll give you a star after some other mods.
Good luck !