Since I modded this map way too long ago, I am just going to pretend I never played this map before and modding this from scratch.
Note: I will not bubblwe this map unless I have happy30's approval (if he does not want reply in a timely manner, I will ask someone else from the QAT. If they don't reply in a timely manner, I will make the bubbling decision)
The lightest blue is so hard to see against the bg and the video. If you can think of another fitting color, pls do so
Easy:
00:11:018 (1) - move 1 down a bit to follow 4's curve better 01:28:118 (2) - not a perfect blanket, so if you can fix
Standard:
00:47:318 (2) - I wish 2 had a sharper curve to complement 3 better (picture is not distance snapped)00:59:018 (1) - make symmetrical, since it looks a little off when playing
01:17:018 (3) - the 2 red points right after each other make this slider look terrible imo. I advise you only use 1 red point and then transition to a lightly curved shape.
01:19:568 (4,5) - was looking at hard, and I liked how if 4 was a repeat and 5 was a circle, it fit the rhythm a bit better
01:38:618 (5,6) - like with 00:47:318 (2,3), could you make these slider flow together better
Ex's Taiko Muzukashii and Oni:
00:00:218 (1) - Still not a fan of making players play 1 note and wait 3 seconds before playing the song. That is 3s they always have to go through when they retry the map. Oh well, aabc said it was fine, so I won't say much more.
Hard:
00:15:218 (1,2,3) - super slow circles followed by a slider 1.33x faster is really weird to play. Try ot make teh transition a bit smoother since the song does not suggest something this rough at all imo
00:45:218 (3) - point toward 00:45:668 (4) to make the map look a bit nicer 01:29:618 (7) - this slider looks better if the ending curved a bit more 01:32:918 (1) to break - I felt this chorus had too many stop and go moments because most of the red ticks are mapepd with the exception of 5 or 6 of them, so I tried adding notes to all of them, and I think the flow becomes a lot better. Try it and see what you think (Example: Add notes to 01:35:168 (7), 01:36:368 (4), and 01:37:568 (8)
01:59:318 (1,2,3,4,5) - this is the only diff where every red tick is mapped, which really doesn't make sense with the music remap it to be similar to Hyper, Another, or basically any other diff because they fit better
Hyper:
00:33:368 (2) - since this is the only slider in this section that has a red point in it but no curves, it felt a little out of place\
01:13:418 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - I was really surprised to see jumps this large during the "slower" section of the song
01:17:093 (1) - I found this to be unnecessarily cruel. The spinner is slightly less than 1s long and you need to hurry along to 01:18:218 (1) right after.
Another:
Pretty sure people will still say this is overmapped
00:35:018 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16) - still not sure why you like these large stacks during quiet sections. You can use soemthing that doesn't require as many clicks
Maybe it is just me, but if you are going at a high speed, doing normal spacing between sliders and circles feels counter intuitive (spacing like 00:51:668 (15,1,2), 01:25:418 (1,2,3,4), or 01:26:918 (2,3,4) caught me off guard)
01:37:418 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - why did you opt for such a stop and go movement? It doesn't fit the song very well, and it is extremely annoying to play
01:56:618 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - ^
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Mostly just Aesthetic changes with a few other small things throw in. I will see if I can find Happy30,to see what he thinks about Another before moving on.
Edit: happy30 gave his approval that the Another is okay difficulty wise
Note: I will not bubblwe this map unless I have happy30's approval (if he does not want reply in a timely manner, I will ask someone else from the QAT. If they don't reply in a timely manner, I will make the bubbling decision)
The lightest blue is so hard to see against the bg and the video. If you can think of another fitting color, pls do so
Easy:
00:11:018 (1) - move 1 down a bit to follow 4's curve better 01:28:118 (2) - not a perfect blanket, so if you can fix
Standard:
00:47:318 (2) - I wish 2 had a sharper curve to complement 3 better (picture is not distance snapped)00:59:018 (1) - make symmetrical, since it looks a little off when playing
01:17:018 (3) - the 2 red points right after each other make this slider look terrible imo. I advise you only use 1 red point and then transition to a lightly curved shape.
01:19:568 (4,5) - was looking at hard, and I liked how if 4 was a repeat and 5 was a circle, it fit the rhythm a bit better
01:38:618 (5,6) - like with 00:47:318 (2,3), could you make these slider flow together better
Ex's Taiko Muzukashii and Oni:
00:00:218 (1) - Still not a fan of making players play 1 note and wait 3 seconds before playing the song. That is 3s they always have to go through when they retry the map. Oh well, aabc said it was fine, so I won't say much more.
Hard:
00:15:218 (1,2,3) - super slow circles followed by a slider 1.33x faster is really weird to play. Try ot make teh transition a bit smoother since the song does not suggest something this rough at all imo
00:45:218 (3) - point toward 00:45:668 (4) to make the map look a bit nicer 01:29:618 (7) - this slider looks better if the ending curved a bit more 01:32:918 (1) to break - I felt this chorus had too many stop and go moments because most of the red ticks are mapepd with the exception of 5 or 6 of them, so I tried adding notes to all of them, and I think the flow becomes a lot better. Try it and see what you think (Example: Add notes to 01:35:168 (7), 01:36:368 (4), and 01:37:568 (8)
01:59:318 (1,2,3,4,5) - this is the only diff where every red tick is mapped, which really doesn't make sense with the music remap it to be similar to Hyper, Another, or basically any other diff because they fit better
Hyper:
00:33:368 (2) - since this is the only slider in this section that has a red point in it but no curves, it felt a little out of place\
01:13:418 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - I was really surprised to see jumps this large during the "slower" section of the song
01:17:093 (1) - I found this to be unnecessarily cruel. The spinner is slightly less than 1s long and you need to hurry along to 01:18:218 (1) right after.
Another:
Pretty sure people will still say this is overmapped
00:35:018 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16) - still not sure why you like these large stacks during quiet sections. You can use soemthing that doesn't require as many clicks
Maybe it is just me, but if you are going at a high speed, doing normal spacing between sliders and circles feels counter intuitive (spacing like 00:51:668 (15,1,2), 01:25:418 (1,2,3,4), or 01:26:918 (2,3,4) caught me off guard)
01:37:418 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - why did you opt for such a stop and go movement? It doesn't fit the song very well, and it is extremely annoying to play
01:56:618 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - ^
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Mostly just Aesthetic changes with a few other small things throw in. I will see if I can find Happy30,to see what he thinks about Another before moving on.
Edit: happy30 gave his approval that the Another is okay difficulty wise