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Dark_Ai
1,832 posts
Joined July 2010
Topic Starter
Dark_Ai
change only 1 or 2 suggestions on Gomen. thanks for mod C:

Updated ~
Snepif
1,127 posts
Joined July 2010
Snepif
Hello~ little m4m here.
Didn't know t.A.T.u. made a song like this. lol :3

[General]

AIBAT tells me there's inconsistency in preview times, check and fix those.
Other than that, folder seems okay.

On a side note, offset+5 feels much better to me. Remember to resnap timing sections and notes afterwards.

[Gomen]

00:00:266 (1) - That clap feels to aggresive/noisy for such a calm and relaxing intro. I'd just leave soft samples and soft whistles.
00:02:736 (4) - This note breaks the flow badly, I would move it to x340 y136
00:06:265 (2) - If you make this slider start on red tick, make the next slider (00:08:030 (3) - ) start on red tick as well, or make them both at white ticks. For consistency, you know, since it will be played by begginers.
00:11:207 (4) - I'm not a fan of making the big white tick a slider end, since it won't be pressed when playing and makes it less "strong".. you don't wanna make a big white tick feel soft-ish. I suggest changing this slider into 2 notes.
00:23:560 (1) - Why new combo? o.O
00:27:442 (1) - Improve this blanket please. Right now it's http://puu.sh/2zyKD | My suggestion: http://puu.sh/2zyMI
00:34:854 (1) - Same ^ http://puu.sh/2zyTj and remember to copypaste to the next big slider which is symmetric.
00:38:383 (1,2) - (2) kinda breaks the flow that (1) creates, it changes the direction. Maybe if you curve (1) like this it's better: http://puu.sh/2zyWN
01:11:913 (2) - Moving it to x320 y172 looks and plays much better
01:15:089 (1) - ehhh move it to the center? 1 grid left :P
01:18:971 (4,5) - Having these 2 sliders so close to each other is unnecesary and doesn't happen anywhere else.. Delete (5), make (4) end at 01:19:677 - and add a return to it.
02:16:501 (1) - Looks very ugly with (2). Make it a better blanket by moving its middle point upwards.
02:53:913 (1) - This looks so bad and is so confusing.. maybe it was a mistake? Move this slider somewhere else.. o.O Also it makes a jump with (2), i'm sure it was just a mistake hehe
03:12:266 (1) - This spinner is unnecesarily long... TOO long and it doesn't fit with the music, it should end on 03:13:677 - where the "nooooooow" ends.

Nothing else here, not a bad diff but i'd like to see some less copypasting in the future ^^

[Gomenasai]

00:29:908 (3) - This slider's shape breaks the flow badly, change it so it's like this: http://puu.sh/2zzjN
00:54:260 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Maybe these jumps are too long compared to the rest of the map?
01:13:143 (3) - Really unnecessary note, suggest removing it. It doesnt even have sound D:
01:17:202 (1) - This should end in the previous red tick...
01:22:849 (4) - New combo should be here imo since it's where she starts to sing again.
01:23:908 (2) - Really weird flow here.. how about doing this so it doesn't flow weirdly? http://puu.sh/2zzs6
01:34:143 (2,4) - Stack with 01:33:084 (5) - start?
01:53:555 (3,4,5,1,2) - When you are making stacks of 2 notes, and then another stack of 2 notes, etc etc. it's -almost- never suitable to start each stack in a red tick. Rearrange this so the stacks start on white ticks.
02:05:202 (3) - End it on the previous red tick
02:23:908 (6,7) - You should delete (7), make (6) end 1 tick further and add a repeat.
02:44:731 (2,4,8) - Make these notes be in the centre :P a few grids right
02:49:143 (x) - I don't understeand why did you add notes where there is no sound, but you hear a clear sound in this blue tick, yet you leave it unmapped. Please add a note here D:
03:12:261 (1) - Same as Gomen

I didn't really like this diff since it has some flow and rhythm problems, but it's okay. Just my opinion, sorry if i was too tough. Good luck Ai :3
HeatKai
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2,801 posts
Joined April 2010
HeatKai
[General]
  1. You have a different preview time on the diffs.Fix it so it have the same preview time.
  2. I think you should put this in the tags "Lyudi Invalidy and Dangerous and Moving" that "Lyudi Invalidy"
[Gomen]
Make it slider tickrate 2 if you want to use that hitsounds of yours,if you stay at 1 just delete the hitsounds and the timing point 00:27:790
Slider Velocity 2.0? That is deadly for easiest diff omg.
  1. 00:29:555 (3) - why clap here? I thought it should be at the white tick to make it consistent.It should be here 00:29:202 (2) -
  2. 00:42:260 (2) - add whistle at the end to make it consistent,it would be better with whistle rather then letting it empty.
  3. 01:01:319 (3) - move it to the middle,make it look neater.
    SPOILER
  4. 01:25:672 (1) - remove finish at the starting,the music or vocal is not loud enough to have finish here and i don't think its fits.clap only would be good.
  5. 01:26:378 (2) - move it to the middle,so it looks more good and I think this should be at middle.
    SPOILER
  6. 01:31:319 (1) - long slider like this looks sexy if you curve it xD so curve it downward,it would look better you know.
    SPOILER
  7. 01:43:672 (3) - same as before. 01:01:319 (3)
  8. 02:10:849 - this llittle break,map it better.leaving this short break newbie might think that they have a long one instead of a short break.
  9. 02:14:731 (1,2) - add whistle to make it consistent with before.
  10. 02:15:437 (3) - remove whistle at the end.it goes with ^ you must fix it,it will sounds better
  11. 02:20:731 (2) - add finish at the end of the slider because there's a deep beat from the music.
  12. 02:22:143 (1,2,3,4,5) - this doesn't looks right for a relaxing song ;_____; make it like this would fits better.
    SPOILER
  13. 02:23:202 (4) - remove whistle, 02:23:555 (5) - add whistle , 02:23:908 (6) - remove whistle at the starting and ending. it would be better if you make it consistent.rather then putting it like it's current position.
  14. 02:53:908 (1) - this overlap is bad.move it somewhere else that you like but dont make it overlap like this.and spacing lol maybe you do something wrong at the editor.
  15. 03:08:025 (4) - put whistle here, 03:08:731 (6) - remove whistle from here,it would be better because the ending is a silence no beat.
  16. 03:10:849 (2) - add whistle here like you did on gomenasai diff.
  17. That is one long last spinner.
[Gomenasai]
there's too many stacking here,makes me miss when testplay because of it.
Slider tickrate 2?
  1. 00:11:555 (5) - add clap,make it consistent and there's a beat.don't leave it empty here.
  2. 00:54:260 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - I don't think this jump really fits,whether you should make it just a small jumps or make it normal spacing.this jump is quite big.
  3. 01:24:966 - what's the point of this timing section here? delete it
  4. 02:00:437 (2) - delete this circle,don't put circle when there's not beat :< you're just overmapping it. and straighten this circle 02:00:613 (2) - with the circle before.
  5. 02:08:731 (1,2,3,4,5) - make it like this ,it's more neater.
    SPOILER
  6. 02:10:849 - this llittle break,map it would be better or move the break here.
  7. 02:14:731 (1,2,3) - add whistle here for consistent, and remove whistle from 02:15:790 (4) -
  8. 02:17:202 (2) - I don't there's so many stacking that actually I miss this because this is not the same beat. it's 1/4 I don't really like you stack it,why don't you move it somewhere?
  9. 02:17:908 (4) - add whistle here and remove whistle at the starting of the next slider for consistency.
  10. 02:20:731 (4) - add finish at the starting and end of the slider because there's a deep beat from the music.
  11. 02:22:143 (1,2,3,4,5) - rather then putting it randomly,why don't you put whistle at all of the white tick only.it sounds consistent and good.
  12. 02:28:496 (2) - add clap at the starting like you did at the gomen diff.
  13. 02:49:496 (6) - remove this circle it shouldn't be here,no beat at all.add a circle here 02:49:143
  14. 03:08:025 (4,5,6) - as I say in gomen diff.
  15. 03:11:202 (3) - add whistle at the starting.following vocal and like you did on gomen diff.
Dark_Ai
1,832 posts
Joined July 2010
Topic Starter
Dark_Ai
finally have time for look at the mods >< sorry for delay ;A;

Snepif

Snepif wrote:

Hello~ little m4m here. [b]I'm sorry I couldnt do m4m ;_____; *cries in a corner*
Didn't know t.A.T.u. made a song like this. lol :3[/b]

[General]

AIBAT tells me there's inconsistency in preview times, check and fix those.
Other than that, folder seems okay.

On a side note, offset+5 feels much better to me. Remember to resnap timing sections and notes afterwards. okay done

[Gomen]

00:00:266 (1) - That clap feels to aggresive/noisy for such a calm and relaxing intro. I'd just leave soft samples and soft whistles. deleted
00:02:736 (4) - This note breaks the flow badly, I would move it to x340 y136 ok
00:06:265 (2) - If you make this slider start on red tick, make the next slider (00:08:030 (3) - ) start on red tick as well, or make them both at white ticks. For consistency, you know, since it will be played by begginers. changed
00:11:207 (4) - I'm not a fan of making the big white tick a slider end, since it won't be pressed when playing and makes it less "strong".. you don't wanna make a big white tick feel soft-ish. I suggest changing this slider into 2 notes. kk
00:23:560 (1) - Why new combo? o.O because new combo :c
00:27:442 (1) - Improve this blanket please. Right now it's http://puu.sh/2zyKD | My suggestion: http://puu.sh/2zyMI fixed
00:34:854 (1) - Same ^ http://puu.sh/2zyTj and remember to copypaste to the next big slider which is symmetric. fixed
00:38:383 (1,2) - (2) kinda breaks the flow that (1) creates, it changes the direction. Maybe if you curve (1) like this it's better: http://puu.sh/2zyWN kk
01:11:913 (2) - Moving it to x320 y172 looks and plays much better moved it somewhere else ><
01:15:089 (1) - ehhh move it to the center? 1 grid left :P fixed ><
01:18:971 (4,5) - Having these 2 sliders so close to each other is unnecesary and doesn't happen anywhere else.. Delete (5), make (4) end at 01:19:677 - and add a return to it. ok
02:16:501 (1) - Looks very ugly with (2). Make it a better blanket by moving its middle point upwards. no change here :c
02:53:913 (1) - This looks so bad and is so confusing.. maybe it was a mistake? Move this slider somewhere else.. o.O Also it makes a jump with (2), i'm sure it was just a mistake hehe waaah yeah this was a mistake ><
03:12:266 (1) - This spinner is unnecesarily long... TOO long and it doesn't fit with the music, it should end on 03:13:677 - where the "nooooooow" ends. changed this part :c

Nothing else here, not a bad diff but i'd like to see some less copypasting in the future ^^ ><

[Gomenasai]

00:29:908 (3) - This slider's shape breaks the flow badly, change it so it's like this: http://puu.sh/2zzjN done
00:54:260 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Maybe these jumps are too long compared to the rest of the map? I like it :c
01:13:143 (3) - Really unnecessary note, suggest removing it. It doesnt even have sound D: deleted :c
01:17:202 (1) - This should end in the previous red tick... I like it like now :/
01:22:849 (4) - New combo should be here imo since it's where she starts to sing again. kk
01:23:908 (2) - Really weird flow here.. how about doing this so it doesn't flow weirdly? http://puu.sh/2zzs6 done
01:34:143 (2,4) - Stack with 01:33:084 (5) - start? no because it will destroy my spacing ><
01:53:555 (3,4,5,1,2) - When you are making stacks of 2 notes, and then another stack of 2 notes, etc etc. it's -almost- never suitable to start each stack in a red tick. Rearrange this so the stacks start on white ticks. eeeh o.o
02:05:202 (3) - End it on the previous red tick ok
02:23:908 (6,7) - You should delete (7), make (6) end 1 tick further and add a repeat. no change here :/
02:44:731 (2,4,8) - Make these notes be in the centre :P a few grids right I cant because of spacing o3o
02:49:143 (x) - I don't understeand why did you add notes where there is no sound, but you hear a clear sound in this blue tick, yet you leave it unmapped. Please add a note here D: ok :/
03:12:261 (1) - Same as Gomen changed

I didn't really like this diff since it has some flow and rhythm problems, but it's okay. Just my opinion, sorry if i was too tough. Good luck Ai :3

HeatKai

HeatKai wrote:

[General]
  1. You have a different preview time on the diffs.Fix it so it have the same preview time.
  2. I think you should put this in the tags "Lyudi Invalidy and Dangerous and Moving" that "Lyudi Invalidy"
[Gomen]
Make it slider tickrate 2 if you want to use that hitsounds of yours,if you stay at 1 just delete the hitsounds and the timing point 00:27:790
Slider Velocity 2.0? That is deadly for easiest diff omg.
  1. 00:29:555 (3) - why clap here? I thought it should be at the white tick to make it consistent.It should be here 00:29:202 (2) -
  2. 00:42:260 (2) - add whistle at the end to make it consistent,it would be better with whistle rather then letting it empty.
  3. 01:01:319 (3) - move it to the middle,make it look neater.
    SPOILER
  4. 01:25:672 (1) - remove finish at the starting,the music or vocal is not loud enough to have finish here and i don't think its fits.clap only would be good.
  5. 01:26:378 (2) - move it to the middle,so it looks more good and I think this should be at middle.
    SPOILER
  6. 01:31:319 (1) - long slider like this looks sexy if you curve it xD so curve it downward,it would look better you know.
    SPOILER
  7. 01:43:672 (3) - same as before. 01:01:319 (3)
  8. 02:10:849 - this llittle break,map it better.leaving this short break newbie might think that they have a long one instead of a short break.
  9. 02:14:731 (1,2) - add whistle to make it consistent with before.
  10. 02:15:437 (3) - remove whistle at the end.it goes with ^ you must fix it,it will sounds better
  11. 02:20:731 (2) - add finish at the end of the slider because there's a deep beat from the music.
  12. 02:22:143 (1,2,3,4,5) - this doesn't looks right for a relaxing song ;_____; make it like this would fits better.
    SPOILER
  13. 02:23:202 (4) - remove whistle, 02:23:555 (5) - add whistle , 02:23:908 (6) - remove whistle at the starting and ending. it would be better if you make it consistent.rather then putting it like it's current position.
  14. 02:53:908 (1) - this overlap is bad.move it somewhere else that you like but dont make it overlap like this.and spacing lol maybe you do something wrong at the editor.
  15. 03:08:025 (4) - put whistle here, 03:08:731 (6) - remove whistle from here,it would be better because the ending is a silence no beat.
  16. 03:10:849 (2) - add whistle here like you did on gomenasai diff.
  17. That is one long last spinner.
fixed everything here

[Gomenasai]
there's too many stacking here,makes me miss when testplay because of it.
Slider tickrate 2?
  1. 00:11:555 (5) - add clap,make it consistent and there's a beat.don't leave it empty here.
  2. 00:54:260 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - I don't think this jump really fits,whether you should make it just a small jumps or make it normal spacing.this jump is quite big. same answer as above :c
  3. 01:24:966 - what's the point of this timing section here? delete it short kiai timing
  4. 02:00:437 (2) - delete this circle,don't put circle when there's not beat :< you're just overmapping it. and straighten this circle 02:00:613 (2) - with the circle before. deleted
  5. 02:08:731 (1,2,3,4,5) - make it like this ,it's more neater. dont like this
    SPOILER
  6. 02:10:849 - this llittle break,map it would be better or move the break here.
  7. 02:14:731 (1,2,3) - add whistle here for consistent, and remove whistle from 02:15:790 (4) - ok
  8. 02:17:202 (2) - I don't there's so many stacking that actually I miss this because this is not the same beat. it's 1/4 I don't really like you stack it,why don't you move it somewhere? no I like it :c
  9. 02:17:908 (4) - add whistle here and remove whistle at the starting of the next slider for consistency. kk
  10. 02:20:731 (4) - add finish at the starting and end of the slider because there's a deep beat from the music. added only on the end sound much better instead of to add it at start too
  11. 02:22:143 (1,2,3,4,5) - rather then putting it randomly,why don't you put whistle at all of the white tick only.it sounds consistent and good. kk
  12. 02:28:496 (2) - add clap at the starting like you did at the gomen diff. kk
  13. 02:49:496 (6) - remove this circle it shouldn't be here,no beat at all.add a circle here 02:49:143 already changed from the previous mod
  14. 03:08:025 (4,5,6) - as I say in gomen diff.ok
  15. 03:11:202 (3) - add whistle at the starting.following vocal and like you did on gomen diff. ok


Updated =w=)/
ImperatorRemus
11 posts
Joined December 2011
ImperatorRemus
Ai , Ai , Ai ... again a wonderful beatmap !;)
You"re mapps are the best ever <3 ;D

Ok Lets come to some Informations o.O..

In my Opinion The timing of " Gomen and Gomenasai " are Nearly Perfectly,
Would be Cool if the Beatmap Getting RANKED soon ...
I would be glad to that...

Ok , and now comes .... " something other"s ;D"

Anyway , Keep it up Ai ;) your beatmaps are the best ! ;D 8-)
SOMEBODY RANK IT NOW PLS <3 ;D!!!
Miya
2,690 posts
Joined June 2011
Miya
Hello :3

General
  1. Unherited timing point in each diff is inconsistant. You have offset 266 at Gomen diff, and 265 at Gomenasai diff. Make sure to fix this.
  2. Preview time is also inconsistant. Fix this via opening .osu in notepad.
  3. Because of different offset ,kiai time is also inconsistant :(
  4. I personally dislike the use of the finish sounds as a whistle. It's too loud to be a whistle imo. It's supposed to be a finish, not whistle :(. If you want to keep this finish as a whistle, try reducing their volume.
Gomen
  1. Try to reducing some of the circle or complex pattern rhythm here. Having 3.13 Stars is a bit too much for current standard rule.
  2. 00:07:324 (1) - Remove this new combo. This is inconsistant according to your NC pattern.
  3. 00:11:560 (5) - Well, i suggest adding a whistle here to cover the strong piano sounds from the music.
  4. 00:12:265 (1) - Also, add a whistle here too, it's too quiet without a whistle.
  5. 00:17:913 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - I think this circle pattern can be simplified to reduce the star rating. Maybe to 2 slider with repeat? It's up to you ><
  6. 00:23:560 (1) - Unnecesary new combo again. Please remove this.
  7. 00:27:442 (1) - New combo here should be on 00:26:383 (5) - according to new stanza. So remove this NC, and add NC at 00:26:383 (5) -
  8. 00:29:207 (1) - This should be NC according to new stanza.
  9. 00:32:030 (7,1) - Same, switch NC here.
  10. 00:34:854 (1) - You forgot a whistle here at the slider end?
  11. 00:43:324 - Why no kiai here? there is kiai here at your hard diff.
  12. 00:57:089 (1,3) - Please don't stop the whistle rhythm here. You can add a whislte at this both silder start.
  13. And so many NC that need to be fix here. I won't mention it again, lazy to mention it one by one. You can get the general idea by reading hw i add NC pattern to make it consistant.
  14. 01:20:030 - Please don't skip this clap. You never skip a clap in your previous rhythm. So add a circle here then add a clap.
  15. 02:16:501 (1) - Nazi, but i think this slider can be blanketed better like this > http://puu.sh/321f2.jpg so it will be similar to slider 02:18:266 (4) -
  16. 02:22:148 (1,2,3,4,5) - This a lot of circle rhythm too can be simplified to reduce star rating.
  17. 02:44:383 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - This one too ><
  19. 03:15:088 - Make a new green timing point here, and increase the volume by 10%-20%. This part volume is too low, imo.
Gomenasai
  1. Same as normal, i think your current combo is not consistant. Please review your combo pattern in this difficulty.
  2. 00:14:029 (5,6) - Whistle at the 6 should be on 5 for the whistle rhythm to be consistant.
  3. 00:15:794 (3) - Overused whistle which doesnt fit the song imo. Better to remove it.
  4. 00:16:853 (5,6) - This one too.
  5. 00:29:912 (3) - Whistle at the repeat? Feels empty without whistle.
  6. 00:42:264 (4) - I think this slider can mapped again to be create more interesting rhythm. Since there is 1/4 beat here 00:42:441 -, it's better to make this slider to 1/4 slider with repeat too. Take a look at this > http://puu.sh/323qw.jpg
  7. 00:50:735 (3) - It's better to remove the finish imo. The whistle sounds is already loud enough to cover the heavy beat from here. Besides, it's not consistant with previous combo too.
  8. 01:14:382 (5) - Remove the whistle from this circle. Break the consistencies :<
  9. 01:27:441 (5,6) - Nazi, but i think it wil better if you just blanket this slider with 01:26:735 (4) -
  10. 01:34:147 (2,4,7,8) - Stack this with 01:32:735 (4,5) - ? But of course you need to fix the spacing of 01:35:206 (5,6) - if you do this.
  11. 02:31:853 (3) - Remove this circle. I don't think triplet is fit with the current vocal.
  12. 02:44:735 (2,7,8) - Same, stack this with 02:48:265 (2) - ?
  13. 02:53:206 (7,8,9) - This one too, make sure the 8 stacked properly with 02:54:970 (3) -
  14. 03:15:088 - Same as normal.
  15. 03:15:088 (1) - Remove clap, overused and doesnt fit.
That's all i think. Overal the pattern is quite neat, and rhythm is also good too.
But the consistencies of NC and hitsound need to be looked at.
There is still some room for improvement before rank.
Also, don't forget to fix those unrankable stuff Dx

Good luck ;)
Chyo-Kun
308 posts
Joined May 2012
Chyo-Kun
Gogo Ai! First BAT mod!
Dark_Ai
1,832 posts
Joined July 2010
Topic Starter
Dark_Ai
well changed everything guess o.o Thank you for your mod :3

Updated ~
Satellite
3,683 posts
Joined June 2012
Satellite
hi~

[General]
try japanese Artist name? 

タトゥ
タトゥー

[Gomenasai]
00:22:849 (3,1) - change Newcombo?

01:05:025 (2) - move x382 y192 nazi
01:21:790 (3) - try this. (Cover more 2)
176,260,81790,2,0,P|113:152|184:28,1,280,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
02:07:319 (6) - unrankable slider? need slider tick or NewCombo?
02:25:319 - add note
02:29:555 (4) - last point forget Finish.

[Gomen]
00:47:555 (2) - More better rhythm,follow with lyrics,like this.

00:56:378 (5) - move x180 y192 is better?
01:59:908 (3,1) - try this. I think slider cover fit


nazi modding go me n a s a i ~~ :(
Dark_Ai
1,832 posts
Joined July 2010
Topic Starter
Dark_Ai
Thanks for you mod C:
changed everything

Updated ~
Kodora
Kodora
this is not japanese band, remove japanese artist name.
this is not even japanese song

this is nesessary only if artist is eastern.
scanter
2,385 posts
Joined July 2012
scanter
Hi Hi ~

General

  1. You used rarely soft-slidertick2. how about delete it?
  2. I recommend increase the overall of volume 10~20%. every notes are hardly listen to do.

Gomen

  1. 00:07:672 (4,5) - Change 1/2 repeated slider one? following piano sound much better.
  2. 00:08:731 (1,2,3,4) - Makes more perfect blanket?
    SPOILER


    This is code.
    400,244,8731,6,0,P|300:284|224:216,1,200,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
    320,180,9790,1,2,0:0:0:0:
    236,124,10143,2,0,P|168:75|68:115,1,200,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
    148,180,11202,1,2,0:0:0:0:
    160,280,11555,1,2,0:0:0:0:
  3. 00:13:672 (3) - Add whistle.
  4. 00:56:378 (5) - If you want more perfect blanket, move to x:180, y:192.
  5. 01:29:908 (2) - Ctrl + G. really bad overlap.
  6. 02:34:849 (2) - Same. Ctrl + G.
  7. 03:17:908 (3) - Add NC?

Gomenasai

  1. 00:00:261 (1) - Clap sound looks really strange. all about like this part has quite sound.
  2. 00:02:731 (6) - Add whistle
  3. 00:37:672 (6) - Stack is not suitable this sound. how about this shapes? just moved number 6 to x:44, y:240 and moved triplet and slider to x:24, y:100
    SPOILER
  4. 01:19:672 (7) - Add whistle on slider's first. it is your hitsound pattern.
  5. 01:23:908 (3) - How about put this slider to linear line? like this.
    01:24:613 (4) - If you followed this, move to x:51, y:268.
    SPOILER
  6. 01:46:849 (1,2,3,4,5) - How about makes pentagonal shape? of course your pattern is good. but, players can beat too hard this. y axis moving with overlap is really prone to miss.
    SPOILER


    This is code.
    191,99,106849,5,0,0:0:0:0:
    329,125,107202,1,0,0:0:0:0:
    347,266,107555,1,4,0:0:0:0:
    219,325,107908,1,2,0:0:0:0:
    122,222,108260,1,8,0:0:0:0:
  7. 01:52:849 (2) - Move to x:396, y:104. not perfect stacked.
  8. 01:59:908 (4,1,2,3,4) - Makes more perfect symmetry.
  9. 02:10:143 (5) - Move to x:188, y:40. it will become better symmetry.
  10. 02:28:496 (2) - I know this is nazi. but I will specify this. move to x:404, y:108. not perfect stacked.
  11. 02:43:319 (4) - this reverse hitsound is intentional? I don't recommend this. add clap on slider's first and delete clap at slider's end.
  12. 02:49:143 (4,5) - really extreme pattern. how about this?
    SPOILER


    This is code.
    368,80,168613,2,0,P|431:102|459:166,1,140,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
    448,236,169143,1,0,0:0:0:0:
    412,296,169319,1,0,0:0:0:0:
That's all :) GL ;)
Dark_Ai
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Dark_Ai

Kodora wrote:

this is not japanese band, remove japanese artist name.
this is not even japanese song

this is nesessary only if artist is eastern.
well okay

scanter wrote:

You used rarely soft-slidertick2. how about delete it?
didnt delete it ><

I didnt change 01:46:849 (1,2,3,4,5) but otherwise changed everything Thanks for your mod :3

Updated ~
Flower
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Flower
Hi~

[General]
Please increase the 20% volume part to 30%. They are not audible to me.
STR ->2

[Normal]
00:05:908 (1,2) - blanket looks better
00:08:731 (1,2,3,4) - ^
00:36:613 (3,1) - slightly separate from each other
00:54:966 (3) - downbeat starts at 00:55:319 - , so maybe separate into a note and a slider.
01:34:496 (3) - ^
after 01:58:849 - same as above. I just wonder why you start sliders on offbeats.

[Hard]
00:30:966 (4) - make a little "bounce" in the middle of the slider. use the tick (when you change to STR 2) as a help.
01:26:555 (3) - I think it should be at 01:26:908 - . up to you
02:20:202 (2) - delete this?
02:27:790 (1) - extend 1/4 beats longer to get a better sense
02:31:319 (2,3) - not symmetrical, and have made a bad overlap to the following notes
02:53:378 (8,9) - delete 8, and move 9 symmetrical to 7. it looks and plays better.

No big problems and good map. Good luck~
eveless
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Joined April 2009
eveless
  • [Gomenasai]
  1. 00:16:496 (4) - the triangle looks imperfect imo, how about move this note to x:316 y:308(nazi)?
  2. 00:20:025 (6) - whistle?
  3. 01:36:084 (8) - I suggest you to add a note here to do a transition
  4. 02:05:908 (4) - a bit unti-flow for me, try sth like this?
    SPOILER
  5. 03:07:672 (3,4,5,6) - this whistle spam make me confusing, can you remove 6's whistle?

  • [Gomen]
  1. 00:07:672 (4) - Missing a whistle in the end
  2. 00:18:966 (2) - add whistle in he middle?
Dark_Ai
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Topic Starter
Dark_Ai
Flower

Flower wrote:

Hi~

[General]
Please increase the 20% volume part to 30%. They are not audible to me.
STR ->2 I think 20% is okay too

[Normal]
00:05:908 (1,2) - blanket looks better okay
00:08:731 (1,2,3,4) - ^
00:36:613 (3,1) - slightly separate from each other yup
00:54:966 (3) - downbeat starts at 00:55:319 - , so maybe separate into a note and a slider. I like it like it is now :c
01:34:496 (3) - ^ same here
after 01:58:849 - same as above. I just wonder why you start sliders on offbeats. o change here too ><

[Hard]
00:30:966 (4) - make a little "bounce" in the middle of the slider. use the tick (when you change to STR 2) as a help. uh no change here :c
01:26:555 (3) - I think it should be at 01:26:908 - . up to you ^
02:20:202 (2) - delete this? ok
02:27:790 (1) - extend 1/4 beats longer to get a better sense I dont think so
02:31:319 (2,3) - not symmetrical, and have made a bad overlap to the following notes :/
02:53:378 (8,9) - delete 8, and move 9 symmetrical to 7. it looks and plays better. okay

No big problems and good map. Good luck~

eveless

eveless wrote:

  • [Gomenasai]
  1. 00:16:496 (4) - the triangle looks imperfect imo, how about move this note to x:316 y:308(nazi)? okay
  2. 00:20:025 (6) - whistle? fixed
  3. 01:36:084 (8) - I suggest you to add a note here to do a transition hmmkay
  4. 02:05:908 (4) - a bit unti-flow for me, try sth like this? changed
    SPOILER
  5. 03:07:672 (3,4,5,6) - this whistle spam make me confusing, can you remove 6's whistle? okay

  • [Gomen]
  1. 00:07:672 (4) - Missing a whistle in the end fixd
  2. 00:18:966 (2) - add whistle in he middle? okay

Thank you for your mods :3

Updated ~
eveless
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Joined April 2009
eveless
I think t.a.T.u should restudy their japanese, because it should be "Gomennasai" but not "Gomenasai" /joking face

Remove “タトゥ” from your title please :3...
Stefan
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Stefan
t.A.T.u is a japanese band? Or why is their name written in japanese?
It makes more logic if you write their name in cyrillic - which would be " Тату ".
Dark_Ai
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Dark_Ai
okay done :3

Updated ~
mochi
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mochi
wtf lol
eveless
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Dark_Ai
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Wah omg thank you very much >.</
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Ranked~~!!
Dark_Ai
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waah Thank you \*w*/
deadbeat
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:D congratz /o/
Zero__wind
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well congratz~
baka Ai :3
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wuhhhh :D gz ai! ~ ~~
~~~~~~~~~
xD
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congratz \o/
BrokenArrow
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Gz!
Stefan
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Stefan

Stefan wrote:

t.A.T.u is a japanese band? Or why is their name written in japanese?
It makes more logic if you write their name in cyrillic - which would be " Тату ".
Just bringing this back in case.

Congrats Ai-chan :)
Luna
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Luna
http://ru.wikipedia.org/wiki/%D0%A2%D0% ... F%D0%B0%29
Тату and t.A.T.u. are both valid.
Lally
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Lally
gratz o3o/
Irreversible
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Irreversible

Stefan wrote:

Stefan wrote:

t.A.T.u is a japanese band? Or why is their name written in japanese?
It makes more logic if you write their name in cyrillic - which would be " Тату ".
Just bringing this back in case.
a bit more random wouldn't be possible, hm? if it was wrong it wouldn't have been ranked..
Kodora
Kodora

Kodora wrote:

this is not japanese band, remove japanese artist name.
this is not even japanese song

this is nesessary only if artist is eastern.

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Roxas
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Congrats hentai baka ♥
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Congratz~!
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Finally Ranked! Congratz! :D
Dark_Ai
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Thank you guys :33
Kodora
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congratulations :3
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