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Arisawa Takanori - Victory ~ Theme of Virtue

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HeatKai
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This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Tuesday, June 11, 2013 at 6:43:34 PM

Artist: Arisawa Takanori
Title: Victory ~ Theme of Virtue
Source: Digimon Adventure
Tags: Shouri ~Zen no Theme~ Uta to Ongaku Shuu Ver.1 歌と音楽集 ost
BPM: 74
Filesize: 3528kb
Play Time: 01:18
Difficulties Available:
  1. Easy (1.37 stars, 69 notes)
  2. Normal (2.93 stars, 106 notes)
Download: Arisawa Takanori - Victory ~ Theme of Virtue
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Nostalgic!
https://osu.ppy.sh/s/98117 the digivolve theme!
Last edited by HeatKai , edited 15 times in total.
Mayonnaise Dad
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Mayonnaise Dad
Hi Kai! Friendly mod from me. (I wish I could mod the SB but I don't know the first thing about storyboarding.)

[General]

You seem to have two .OSB files in your set. Please delete one of these (unless I'm mistaken and you need both of them)

[Normal]

-Please be advised that these are all suggestions-

It being normal mode, I wish I had seen some of these sliders fully matching those whistles in the background. In example:

These peaceful, long whistles such as the one at 00:32:050 (3) - . I believe something like that should have a nice slider to it

Again at 00:41:780 (4) - .
00:45:429 (3) -

[Hard]

I would completely remove the whistle from 00:51:510 (2) - , as there isn't indication for one, it's more like a creeping bass.

Just like how you have 00:25:564 (1) - , there should be another whistle at 01:17:658 (1) - , At least, to me there should be.

I think my childhood burst. I'm going to go and cry now. :<

I wish I could have helped more.. but I didn't see much wrong.

Good luck with the mapset.~
HeatKai
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HeatKai
done :3
Saturnalize
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Saturnalize
=SB=

2. You don't need Scale if your picture size doesn't change. Use Fade and uncheck the Enabled box at Tweening, check the code above. If you really need to resize, then do it on the picture instead. This to save up some space.

This all up to you.

I don't have any problem with the map iself.

Edited for being nonsensing . . ?
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silencedays
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Joined November 2011
silencedays
arlo heatkai, greetings from me, here's a quick mod, btw, i'm not much of a modder, but i say what i have to say :D

00:32:861 (1) - not sure about this, but the love shape doesn't fit the theme imo, theme of virtue. And i think it would flow better when its mirrored ... one more thing, the shape of the heart need a little fix, i tried with x1.6..
SPOILER
http://puu.sh/2cChZ

00:45:834 (4) - The flow doesn't feel quite smooth for me, especially a little discomfort...maybe the shape?

00:59:618 (2) - change it to two circles, well, its pretty much the same..

i think that's all...will notify you when i found more
HeatKai
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HeatKai
thanks! loli I'll talk to you in game.
NewRulerNA
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NewRulerNA
hi

[General]
  1. BG code had little misalignment.
    0,0,"Digimon.Adventures.full.1249075.jpg",0,0
    you should change above
  2. used images in SB is little misalignment. can you get other good images?
    those images will looks bad....
  3. tick rate 2 fits this song. tick 1 is low because this song is low BPM.
    in addition, I felt to be good in like 00:02:050 (5).
[Normal]
  1. 00:31:645 (2) - I felt (2,3)'s flow is not good. these notes had same directionality.
    so this is placement suggestion.
  2. 00:40:564 (2) - what about try to add variation to circular motion.
    try this.
  3. 01:12:185 (4,5) - bad appearance imo.
    ^ my suggestion
  4. 01:16:645 - remove whistle.
    that will break silence part. so whistle does not fit.
[Hard]
  1. looks fine to me
gl
HeatKai
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fix most of it! I can't find other pics.so I'm going to stay with this pics.thank you ! updated
neonat
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neonat
Hard

01:17:050 - add a note
01:18:064 - ^


lol good luck :X
HeatKai
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HeatKai
thanks!
Hinsvar
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Hi; modded by request.

Sorry for being late by two days; got this and that to do ):

*Bolded = Unrankable or strongly suggested; red = Highly suggested or questionable (still weaker than the bolded ones); black = Minor suggestions/rants; blue = Notes/advices to avoid/fix repeated problems.

>General
  1. ...The background picture's file size is 660 KB. This is unnecessarily big and only bloats the .osz's size. Reduce to ~200 KB plz.
>Storyboard
  1. 00:13:401 - I'm sure enough Matt's profile is supposed to start here if you're following the song's stanza on the profile's switch. It really feels better, IMO...
  2. 00:39:347 - And I think Izzy's profile is supposed to start here.
>Normal
  1. 00:12:591 (1,3) - Swap NC to follow the change of the stanza. Remove the NC on 00:15:023 (1) if you did this, although you SHOULD do this in the first place...
  2. 00:27:185 - Remove the whistle here and add one at 00:27:996 instead? Fits better to the song, really.
  3. 00:35:293 - Remove the whistle here and add one at 00:35:699 instead? Same reason as the suggestion above.
  4. 00:37:726 - Add whistle? (Do I even need to say the reason again...)
  5. 00:40:969 - ^
  6. 00:43:807 (1) - ^
  7. 00:44:618 - ^. Also remove the whistle at 00:45:023 if you did this.
  8. 00:45:834 - ^
  9. 00:47:456 - ^
  10. 00:59:618 - ^ (Apply the hitsound suggestions to similar parts on Hard if you did them.)
>Hard
  1. I personally think this is a boring Hard, since the spacing is consistent everywhere, there's no jump to be found, and yeah... I consider this as a Normal diff with more notes (Normal+?) than usual. Because, you know, it's just boring. Try to put some jumps?
  2. 00:32:861 (1) - ...I personally think this heart slider looks really weird, but sorry, can't help to make a better one. Still think this needs to be fixed though...
k, that's it I guess.

Good luck on the way 8-)
HeatKai
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hard by SoujiTheFox..change normal to easy,hard to normal. bout the pic,the beatmap still on the normal size tho :<
Guy
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Guy
Hi! sorry for late, request from via in-game.

Red : You must be fix.
Blue : You should be fix.
Black : Just suggestion.


[General]
  1. title bug. please fix it.

[Normal]
  1. AR6 is difficult in Normal diff. -1 is better.
  2. 00:06:915 (1,2,3) - spacing is little ugly. please x1.00

[Easy]
  1. HP AR OD-1.
  2. 00:05:293 (1,2) - spacing
the problem was not found. nice mapset.

good luck~ ;)
HeatKai
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nothing is wrong with the spacing at easy xD others fixed!
MiLu
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MiLu
hi~ <3
I liked ”Imperialdramon Paladin Mode” in the days of a child haha ^3^

[General]
・I think artist should change to "Arisawa Takanori". Arisawa is his surname.
and ArtistUnicode : 有澤孝紀

[Easy]
I think whistle fits this song very much.
so you should add more whistle IMO.
However, all these are mere suggestion ;)

00:29:618 (3) - add whistle
00:30:429 (1) - remove whistle at the begin , and add at the end
00:32:861 (3) - add whistle
00:34:888 (1) - ^
00:36:104 (2) - ^
00:42:591 (4) - ^
00:44:212 (2) - ^
00:45:834 (3) - ^
00:47:456 (2) - ^
00:49:077 (1) - ^
01:12:185 (4) - ^
01:18:672 (1) - end to 01:23:334 ?

[Normal]
00:29:618 (3) - add whistle
00:32:861 (3) - ^
00:49:077 (1) - ^
01:18:672 (1) - end to 01:23:334 ?

good luck ( ´▿｀ )b
HeatKai
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HeatKai
yeay thank you!
MoodyRPG
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MoodyRPG
Hey bro.

General
  1. It's necessary to add in "~"? I'd suggest to remove it because you can't search with that tag
  2. Disable the countdown and the letterbox if you don't use
Easy
  • -- AR: 4? It's really high for being a Easy in my opinion, I'd suggest to reduce one tick
    - 00:45:429 (3) - Whistle in the end of the slider? The pitch is high and sounds good
    - 00:47:456 (2) - Add a whistle in the beginning of the slider
    - 01:06:915 (1) - Your pattern is (1,4) and broken your consistency with the new combos, why you add a new here? Remove it
    - 01:15:023 (6) - I'd suggest to add a new combo here because the music change here, if you do that, remove here in 01:17:658
Normal
  • -- Nothing to point out
And that's it, relaxing song, good luck :)
HeatKai
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HeatKai
thank you~!
fixed
Kyshiro
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Kyshiro
Hi there :3

Normal
  1. There are 2 .osb files, delete ''Takanori Arisawa - Victory ~ Theme of Virtue (HeatKai).osb''
Normal
  1. 00:06:915 (1,2,3,4,5) - I'd like to see a bit smoother curve here, might have to adjust the slider curve a bit too, it just looks way better if the curves are perfectly lined up etc, specially at slow diffs like this
  2. 00:13:401 (1,2,3) - Maybe make this curve downwards? It's a nice addition to the flow and it fits with the song which changes a bit over here http://puu.sh/3ajQd.jpg
  3. 00:27:591 (2,3,4,1) - A smoother flow here would be great: Maybe move 00:27:591 (2) - A bit more down and left so you can give a better curve to the next 3 notes: http://puu.sh/3ajVN.jpg
  4. 00:53:942 (2,1) - Personal preferation again, but i'd like to see these lined up a bit smoother (Or even changed up a bit like this maybe?: http://puu.sh/3ak18.jpg )
Normal
  1. 00:30:023 (4) - Remove this whistle maybe? Sounds like it's a bit too much
  2. 00:43:401 - Add a note here to keep consistent with the previous pattern? (Add a whistle if you do)
Nice and calm beatmap, not much to mod since it's fine how it is :3
HeatKai
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HeatKai
updated thank you :3
Kyshiro
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