I answered this mod only because she requested it.Mystyk wrote:
Easy:
I think you should add a lead-in, because it starts quite early. (and the other difficulties also have lead in) Insane doesn't have lead-in, and the other diffs are guest diffs, so I think it's not necessary.
Also check AiMod (even if it's buggy), it said 2 timing points at the same time, and true! look - http://puu.sh/2qWfg - so it's better to check. Removed the useless line.
00:06:447 (3,1) - this doesn't flow well in my opinion, because the the slider (3) leads into a different direction Changed it in a different way.
this is an example of how you could change it without ruining the distance (and I think 1,04 is not much but it can be adjusted):
http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/681881
00:06:447 (3) - add new combo? because actually this is the part where she starts singing xD (and remove new combo from next slider) I'm not following voice with combos here, also it's better if the combos are 3,3 instead 2,4.
00:42:718 (1) - it feels weird to click this, I cannot really tell exactly on what did you place it (lyrics or beats), because you placed it when she has been singing already, so I would suggest you to add a hit circle here - 00:42:379 Ok.
00:23:057 (3,1) - i mentioned before, I think that this doesn't flow well, because after (3) players will have to go up, but it leads down, si I would suggeset you to try something else so that it has better flow and it might make it easier to play (since it's an easy) If it doesn't flow doesn't mean that it's harder for beginner since the spacing is always the same, also that slider is there because it's making a blanket with the previous one, so I prefer to keep this.
00:50:176 - this place very empty, and a bit confusing too, I would suggest you to add hit circle Ok.
00:52:888 - ^ same as above ^
00:54:752 (2) - it feels weird to click this slider (probably because it starts on a red tick), so i would suggest you to remove 00:54:244 (1) - and put (2) in it's place, and add a repeat, for example: If a slider it's on a red tick isn't the same confusing as a note can be, that's why I added them like this, also fits with the voice.
http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/681928
(but of course it's just an example, but at least you can see on the timeline what I mean)
00:55:600 (1,2) - ^ i suggest the same as above, since it's weird to click them, so remove hit circle place the slider earlier and add repeat and rotate it a bit or make a blanket so that distance will be fine, example: Same as before.
http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/681930
I think it plays better and flow is still good and it doesn't change your pattern so much in my opinion.
Overall this diff is pretty nice already, so there is not much to say about it
Insane:[/b]
Add lead-in, like in the other difficulties. Easy doesn't have lead-in, and the other diffs are guest diffs, so I think it's not necessary.
00:18:142 (2) - I think this hit circle is kind of unnecessary, because she doesn't really sing at this point, so I would remove this hit circle If I delete this hitcircle I feel this part a bit empty, it plays better with that circle imo, makes it funnier.
00:21:701 (1) - well this does fit the lyrics, but you miss to hit the big beats, not that necessary but maybe you could try to add hit circles or short sliders instead of this long slider That's why I added Clap slidertick here. As you can see I'm trying to follow voice here instead music.
00:24:413 (1,1,1) - if you are trying to make them a blanket, then you should make them nicer so, don't make such a big curve, example - http://puu.sh/2re2j Sounds good, done.
00:26:956 (5) - ctrl+G on this slider for better flow? No, if this slider starts almost in the same place as (3) wouldn't flow really well imo.
00:48:312 - she already starts singing here, and it's also confusing without it, because it feels like the slider starts too late, so I think it would be nice if you added a hit circle Doesn't fit, that would sound really random, even if it really fits with the voice.
00:58:820 (6) - continue the stream, because it feels like the flow is kind of killed and that space is too empty That's like overmapping, if you listen carefully you will realize that there will not make any sense because the music doesn't sound like to continue the stream.
01:09:668 (6) - it feels like this is alone, and before and after it's too empty, while there are still beats in the backgroun so you should continue that stream imo - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/682886 - plus it feels like the flow is killed if you don't add anything >.< Same I said before.
Very nice diff!
Thanks everyone for modding!