[Oni]
00:09:688 (4) - move to x256 y104 play will be more fun I think
00:15:335 (9) - same idea^ move to x136 y344
00:20:452 (4,5,6,7) - make it like this (just look at green part)
00:22:393 -
00:22:305 -
^add note maybe listen better
00:25:040 (3,4,5,6,7) - try to make it more clearly to read, use 1.0x spacing
00:23:099 (4) - try to use this rhythm
just look at rhythm!!!!!(blue part)
00:26:099 (7,8,9) -
00:27:158 (2,3,4) - ^this two part has same rhythm, so just use same rhythm
00:28:040 (6,1) - you can make jump on there
00:36:688 (1) - overlap with 3
00:38:982 -
00:40:746 -
00:41:452 -
00:41:805 -
00:43:570 -
^all add note
felt rather bland because you add many 1/4 rhythm on 00:33:864 - this part
then I think them have same rhythm about 00:38:099 - part
weird..
00:50:629 (4) - move to x360 y352
00:51:864 (3) - weird about this finish DDDD:...............
00:56:276 (4) - move to x144 y360
01:09:158 (10) - add NC
01:16:040 (8,1,2,3) - square?
01:18:511 -
01:18:864 -
01:19:923 -
01:20:276 -
01:20:982 -
01:21:688 -
^……add note
01:31:570 (4) - move to x312 y344
01:34:393 (1) - move to x352 y160
[Difficult]
00:09:864 (6) - NC
00:12:688 (1,2) - too far
00:23:276 (8,9,1) - make same spacing in those three note
00:24:688 (2,3,4) - ^
00:26:099 (6,7) - too far
00:28:217 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - spacing spacing Orz..............
00:29:629 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - same spacing please orz..............
00:31:040 (6) - end on 00:32:452 -
00:38:099 (4,5,6) - same spacing please Orz....................
00:39:158 (X) - 00:46:570 (X) why dont have any finish on this part, you use very strong finish at the begin in this part
add some finish
01:11:982 (X) - 01:26:099 (X) - ^same problem
[Light]
00:38:099 (4) - end at white line
01:31:746 (5) - end at red line then add note on 01:32:982
01:33:335 (8) - end at 01:34:393
first please use same spacing in normal, dont make some jump in this normal because BPM is 170
use 0.8x spacing will be better
then some rhythm is too hard in normal
like↓
00:07:040 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5) -
try to use long slider rhythm maybe like this
00:29:629 (2) - end at red line and then move 00:31:040 (3) - to 00:31:040 and then add note on 00:31:040 -
too hard to normal
try to use more easy rhythm
[Doomsday's Beginner]
00:26:805 (1) - also add whistle at the end
00:27:511 (2) - ^then move this whistle to the end will listen better
00:31:040 (3) - use normal hitsound at the end in this slider
01:27:511 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5) - little bit hard in easy, and this rhythm is litter bit weird, maybe try to use long slider
then goodluck