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ClariS - Naisho no Hanashi (TV Size) [Osu|Taiko]

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Topic Starter
KantoKun
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Tuesday, May 28, 2013 at 4:14:40 PM

Artist: ClariS
Title: Naisho no Hanashi (TV Size)
Source: Nisemonogatari
Tags: ending
BPM: 193.9
Filesize: 19735kb
Play Time: 01:26
Difficulties Available:
  1. Easy (2.19 stars, 78 notes)
  2. Hard (4.91 stars, 219 notes)
  3. Insane (5 stars, 305 notes)
  4. Nomal (3.81 stars, 107 notes)
  5. Taiko Muzukashii (4.89 stars, 371 notes)
  6. Taiko Oni (4.89 stars, 464 notes)
Download: ClariS - Naisho no Hanashi (TV Size)
Download: ClariS - Naisho no Hanashi (TV Size) (no video)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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Map Set
Easy - 100% (re)
Normal - 100% (re)
Hard - 100%
Insane - 100% (edit)
Taiko Muzukashii - 100%
Taiko Oni - 100%
Mp3 by kanpakyin~
Thx every mods :D
By KantoKun
P A N
some mod in game

SPOILER
21:06 P A N: ดู insane ให้ละกัน
21:06 kantokun: อ่อๆ
21:06 kantokun: ไม่เป็นไรเน้
21:11 P A N: 00:01:634 (3) - หน้า newcombo นะ
21:11 P A N: จะได้เข้ากับเพลง
21:13 P A N: 00:05:966 (4) - น่าเลื่อนไป x268 y124 จะได้ทับอันเก่าซักหน่อยอาจจะดูมีระเบียบขึ้น
21:14 P A N: 00:06:895 (2) - x360 y260 ดูมีระเบียบกว่า
21:14 kantokun: ระบุพิกัดขนาดนี่ข้าไม่รู้ว่าเส้นไหนอ่ะ TTwTT
21:15 P A N: ดูขวาบนเอง
21:15 P A N: เลื่องให้ตรงกับเลขที่บอก *-*
21:16 kantokun: ไดด้และ
21:16 P A N: 00:27:627 (1) - x264 y192
21:16 P A N: โน็ตมึนดีนะ 55
21:17 kantokun: lol แมพแรกที่ทำอย่างนี้
21:19 P A N: 01:02:490 (2,3) - x273 y203
21:20 P A N: 01:02:903 (4) - x396 y88
21:21 P A N: 01:08:473 (1,2,3,4) - slide เรียงกันไม่ค่อยสวยนะ
21:21 kantokun: ทำเขียนผิดรึเปล่า ไม่แน่ใจ
21:21 P A N: หืม
21:22 P A N: ผมเขียนผิดเรอะ
21:23 kantokun: ไม่รู้สิ
21:23 kantokun: ข้าให้ชอบให้ขอบสไลเดอร์มันทับกันอ่ะ ถ้าจะให้ทับก็ทำซ้อนไปเลยดีกว่าอ่ะนะ = =;;
21:38 P A N: เอ่ออ ป่าวนะ
21:38 P A N: ให้มันทับอันเก่าอะ
21:38 P A N: จะได้ดูมีระเบียบ
21:38 kantokun: เหรอ...
21:39 P A N: 01:08:473 (1,2,3,4) - น่าทำเหมือน 01:14:662 (2,3,4,5)
21:39 P A N: สวยดี
21:39 kantokun: งั้นตรง 01:02:594 (3,4) - ไม่แก้ได้มั้ยอ่าา TTwTT
21:41 P A N: อืมเเล้วเเต่ละกัน
21:41 P A N: น่าจบด้วย spin นะ
21:41 P A N: คนร้องยังลากยาวอยู่เลย
21:41 P A N: เเต่ไม่ต้องก็ได้มั้ง เเล้วเเต่นะอันนี้ =w=

Edit:
SPOILER
:20 P A N: ตรง 00:30:103 - ถึง 00:32:114 - ดูโน๊ตมันขาดๆ
12:21 P A N: 00:40:005 (1) - เลื่อนจุดปลายหาง slide ไปทางขวา 1 grid
12:22 P A N: 00:43:718 (1) - ตัวนี้เอา newcom ออกดีกว่า
12:33 P A N: เอาเปนว่าตรง 00:30:257 - เพิ่มโน็ตหน่อย เเล้วเอา เอา newcombo ออกเยอะๆ
12:33 P A N: โดยร่วมก็โอเครอพี่ frost มาดูตรง slide เด้งๆ
Topic Starter
KantoKun
yeah!!~~~~~
I want this beatmap to rank!!!!
kg2161012
Taiko mod

[Taiko Muzukashii]
00:54:858 (62,63,64,65,66,67,68,69,70,71,72,73,74) - It's too hard in Muzukashii diff,fixed into K D D K
[Taiko Oni]
00:37:993 (2) - k
00:40:469 (11) - k
01:23:326 (9) - k
01:23:532 (11) - d
01:23:635 (12) - k
01:23:738 (13) - k
01:23:842 (14) - d
01:24:048 (16) - k

Hope your map will be Ranked :)
Topic Starter
KantoKun
Already Edit >w<!!
Thx for Mods Taiko kg2161012 XD!!
taiko_maniac1811
Taiko mod as requested :3

MOD
  • [General]
  1. Please use colors that can differientiate "dons" and "kats"... hard to tell which one is which lol
    ----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
  2. d - don (no hitsound)
  3. k - kat (whistle/clap)
  4. D - big don (finish)
  5. K - big kat (finish with whistle/clap)

    [Taiko Muzukashii]
  6. 00:03:697 (5) - delete
  7. 00:08:648 (5) - ^
  8. 00:13:599 (30) - ^
  9. 00:25:977 (41) - move it to 00:25:925
  10. 00:44:337 (23) - k
  11. 01:11:258 (22) - ^
  12. 01:11:361 (23) - delete
  13. 01:11:464 (24) - k
  14. 01:11:567 (25) - d
  15. 01:26:420 (24) - K

    [Taiko Oni]
  16. 00:08:751 (7) - k
  17. 00:08:854 (8) - delete
  18. 00:11:227 (24) - k
  19. 00:11:330 (25) - delete
  20. 00:13:805 (41) - ^
  21. 00:16:075 (56) - k
  22. 00:16:126 (57) - delete
  23. 00:18:808 (7) - ^
  24. 00:24:739 (37) - d
  25. 00:25:977 (43) - move it to 00:25:925
  26. 00:29:277 (9) - delete
  27. 00:32:887 (29) - k
  28. 00:33:713 (34) - d
  29. 00:34:228 (38) - delete
  30. 00:40:933 (12) - k
  31. 00:43:408 (20) - ^
  32. 00:44:234 (24) - k
  33. 00:51:969 (51) - delete
  34. 00:52:073 (52) - k
  35. 00:52:176 (53,54) - delete
  36. 01:10:742 (26) - k
  37. 01:15:796 (25) - k
  38. 01:16:621 (32) - delete
  39. 01:26:420 (29) - K

that's all I can find...
Good luck :3
Topic Starter
KantoKun

taikomaniac wrote:

Taiko mod as requested :3

MOD
  • [General]
  1. Please use colors that can differientiate "dons" and "kats"... hard to tell which one is which lol
    ----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
  2. d - don (no hitsound)
  3. k - kat (whistle/clap)
  4. D - big don (finish)
  5. K - big kat (finish with whistle/clap)

    [Taiko Muzukashii]
  6. 00:03:697 (5) - delete ok
  7. 00:08:648 (5) - ^ ^
  8. 00:13:599 (30) - ^ ^
  9. 00:25:977 (41) - move it to 00:25:925 ^
  10. 00:44:337 (23) - k ^
  11. 01:11:258 (22) - ^ ^
  12. 01:11:361 (23) - delete ^
  13. 01:11:464 (24) - k ^
  14. 01:11:567 (25) - d ^
  15. 01:26:420 (24) - K ^

    [Taiko Oni]
  16. 00:08:751 (7) - k no
  17. 00:08:854 (8) - delete ^
  18. 00:11:227 (24) - k ^
  19. 00:11:330 (25) - delete ^
  20. 00:13:805 (41) - ^ ^
  21. 00:16:075 (56) - k ok
  22. 00:16:126 (57) - delete ^
  23. 00:18:808 (7) - ^ ^
  24. 00:24:739 (37) - d ^
  25. 00:25:977 (43) - move it to 00:25:925 ^
  26. 00:29:277 (9) - delete ^
  27. 00:32:887 (29) - k ^
  28. 00:33:713 (34) - d ^
  29. 00:34:228 (38) - delete no
  30. 00:40:933 (12) - k ^
  31. 00:43:408 (20) - ^ ok
  32. 00:44:234 (24) - k no
  33. 00:51:969 (51) - delete ok
  34. 00:52:073 (52) - k ^
  35. 00:52:176 (53,54) - delete ^
  36. 01:10:742 (26) - k ^
  37. 01:15:796 (25) - k ^
  38. 01:16:621 (32) - delete no
  39. 01:26:420 (29) - K ok

that's all I can find...
Good luck :3
thx mods update~[/quote]
Natsuki Nanaka
IRC mod :3
SPOILER
09:20 - N a n a k a -: tag ใส่ opening
09:20 - N a n a k a -: ไม่สิ
09:20 - N a n a k a -: ending
09:35 - N a n a k a -: Easy นี่ไม่ค่อยได้ใส่ finish ?
09:35 kantokun: งืมๆ เพราะคิดว่า เวลาเล่นไทโกะมันยาก ;w;
09:35 - N a n a k a -: standard ไม่เกี่ยวอะไรกับไทโกะนะ = ="
09:36 kantokun: รู้แล้ว สงารคนเล่นไทโก๊ะเขา 'w';;
09:36 kantokun: *สงสาร
09:36 - N a n a k a -: ความจริงกดปุ่มเดียวก็ได้เหมือนกัน
09:36 kantokun: lol
09:36 - N a n a k a -: แค่คะแนนจะได้น้อย
09:37 - N a n a k a -: ไปใส่ซะ
09:37 - N a n a k a -: แล้ว
09:37 - N a n a k a -: 01:22:707 - ทำไมโน๊ตเริ่มตรงนั้น
09:37 - N a n a k a -: easy
09:38 - N a n a k a -: 01:23:016 - จริงๆมันเริ่มตรงนี้
09:39 kantokun: ถ้าเริ่มตรงนั้นจบไม่สวยเลย =A=;;
09:39 - N a n a k a -: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/665175
09:39 - N a n a k a -: จบหรอ
09:39 kantokun: งืมๆ
09:40 - N a n a k a -: http://puu.sh/2loMm
09:40 - N a n a k a -: แบบนี้ก็จบได
09:40 kantokun: = =.. งืมๆ ขอใส่ finish
09:40 kantokun: แล้ว Hitsoud ตรงนั้นอ่ะ
09:41 - N a n a k a -: ใส่ claps
09:41 - N a n a k a -: 01:25:492 - ปลายสไลด์ไม่ต้องใส่ โน๊ตจบใส่ finish
09:44 kantokun: เสร็จและ แล้วระดับอื่นๆ อ่า
09:45 - N a n a k a -: 00:57:33 - ช่วงเริ่ม kiai ไม่ใส่ finish?
09:45 - N a n a k a -: ทุกดิฟ
09:45 kantokun: ไม่ได้ใส่เลยเรอะ =[]=;;
09:45 - N a n a k a -: ไม่สิ
09:46 - N a n a k a -: เฉพาะ Normal กับ Easy
09:46 - N a n a k a -: 00:41:552 -
09:46 - N a n a k a -: ทั้ง Hard และ Insane
09:47 - N a n a k a -: ปลายสไลด์ไม่ได้จบตรงนั้นนะ
09:47 - N a n a k a -: 00:41:861 - จบตรงนี้
09:48 - N a n a k a -: 00:53:620 - hard
09:48 - N a n a k a -: เราว่า 300 มันจะบังสไลด์เอานะ
09:49 - N a n a k a -: แยกมันออกมาห่างๆหน่อยก็ดี
09:49 kantokun: กลัวแยกห่างแล้วมันจะยากไปง่ะ ;A;
09:50 - N a n a k a -: ก็เปลี่ยนรูปแบบการ flow ก็ได้
09:51 - N a n a k a -: 00:10:299 -
09:51 - N a n a k a -: ทำคล้ายๆแบบนี้ใน insane ก็ได้
09:53 - N a n a k a -: 01:22:088 - ใส่ finish ตรงนี้ใน hard เข้าดีนะ
09:53 - N a n a k a -: 01:24:460 - ทำให้เสียงมันค่อยๆดังขึ้นดีกว่า
09:54 - N a n a k a -: อยู่ๆมันก็ดังนะ = ="
09:55 - N a n a k a -: 01:22:398 - ย้าย new combo ไปใส่ตรง 01:22:604 - แทนดีไหม?
09:56 kantokun: อาครัยๆ
09:56 kantokun: แต่ทำให้เสียงค่อยๆ ดังขึ้นนี้มัน..
09:56 kantokun: ยากอยู่เหมือนกันนา
09:57 - N a n a k a -: ก็ใส่เส้นเขียวแล้วค่อยๆปรับความดัง
09:57 - N a n a k a -: ไม่ยากนะ
09:57 - N a n a k a -: *เส้น timing
09:57 - N a n a k a -: ไม่ยากหรอกแต่นานนิดหน่อย
09:57 kantokun: คือ =A=;; ไม่รู้จะให้เริ่มที่ไหนดี
09:58 kantokun: เอาเป็นทีละสไลด์ได้มั้ยอ่ะ
10:01 - N a n a k a -: http://puu.sh/2lpbG
10:01 - N a n a k a -: ลองเอาไปใส่
10:02 kantokun: โอเช เรียบร้อย
10:11 - N a n a k a -: น่าจะหมดแล้วแหละ
10:11 - N a n a k a -: ส่งต่อให้คนอื่น
10:11 - N a n a k a -: lol
10:12 - N a n a k a -: พวก finish นี่น่าจะใส่ให้เหมือน Insane นะ
10:12 kantokun: อ่าครับ
Topic Starter
KantoKun

- N a n a k a - wrote:

IRC mod :3
SPOILER
09:20 - N a n a k a -: tag ใส่ opening
09:20 - N a n a k a -: ไม่สิ
09:20 - N a n a k a -: ending
09:35 - N a n a k a -: Easy นี่ไม่ค่อยได้ใส่ finish ?
09:35 kantokun: งืมๆ เพราะคิดว่า เวลาเล่นไทโกะมันยาก ;w;
09:35 - N a n a k a -: standard ไม่เกี่ยวอะไรกับไทโกะนะ = ="
09:36 kantokun: รู้แล้ว สงารคนเล่นไทโก๊ะเขา 'w';;
09:36 kantokun: *สงสาร
09:36 - N a n a k a -: ความจริงกดปุ่มเดียวก็ได้เหมือนกัน
09:36 kantokun: lol
09:36 - N a n a k a -: แค่คะแนนจะได้น้อย
09:37 - N a n a k a -: ไปใส่ซะ
09:37 - N a n a k a -: แล้ว
09:37 - N a n a k a -: 01:22:707 - ทำไมโน๊ตเริ่มตรงนั้น
09:37 - N a n a k a -: easy
09:38 - N a n a k a -: 01:23:016 - จริงๆมันเริ่มตรงนี้
09:39 kantokun: ถ้าเริ่มตรงนั้นจบไม่สวยเลย =A=;;
09:39 - N a n a k a -: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/665175
09:39 - N a n a k a -: จบหรอ
09:39 kantokun: งืมๆ
09:40 - N a n a k a -: http://puu.sh/2loMm
09:40 - N a n a k a -: แบบนี้ก็จบได
09:40 kantokun: = =.. งืมๆ ขอใส่ finish
09:40 kantokun: แล้ว Hitsoud ตรงนั้นอ่ะ
09:41 - N a n a k a -: ใส่ claps
09:41 - N a n a k a -: 01:25:492 - ปลายสไลด์ไม่ต้องใส่ โน๊ตจบใส่ finish
09:44 kantokun: เสร็จและ แล้วระดับอื่นๆ อ่า
09:45 - N a n a k a -: 00:57:33 - ช่วงเริ่ม kiai ไม่ใส่ finish?
09:45 - N a n a k a -: ทุกดิฟ
09:45 kantokun: ไม่ได้ใส่เลยเรอะ =[]=;;
09:45 - N a n a k a -: ไม่สิ
09:46 - N a n a k a -: เฉพาะ Normal กับ Easy
09:46 - N a n a k a -: 00:41:552 -
09:46 - N a n a k a -: ทั้ง Hard และ Insane
09:47 - N a n a k a -: ปลายสไลด์ไม่ได้จบตรงนั้นนะ
09:47 - N a n a k a -: 00:41:861 - จบตรงนี้
09:48 - N a n a k a -: 00:53:620 - hard
09:48 - N a n a k a -: เราว่า 300 มันจะบังสไลด์เอานะ
09:49 - N a n a k a -: แยกมันออกมาห่างๆหน่อยก็ดี
09:49 kantokun: กลัวแยกห่างแล้วมันจะยากไปง่ะ ;A;
09:50 - N a n a k a -: ก็เปลี่ยนรูปแบบการ flow ก็ได้
09:51 - N a n a k a -: 00:10:299 -
09:51 - N a n a k a -: ทำคล้ายๆแบบนี้ใน insane ก็ได้
09:53 - N a n a k a -: 01:22:088 - ใส่ finish ตรงนี้ใน hard เข้าดีนะ
09:53 - N a n a k a -: 01:24:460 - ทำให้เสียงมันค่อยๆดังขึ้นดีกว่า
09:54 - N a n a k a -: อยู่ๆมันก็ดังนะ = ="
09:55 - N a n a k a -: 01:22:398 - ย้าย new combo ไปใส่ตรง 01:22:604 - แทนดีไหม?
09:56 kantokun: อาครัยๆ
09:56 kantokun: แต่ทำให้เสียงค่อยๆ ดังขึ้นนี้มัน..
09:56 kantokun: ยากอยู่เหมือนกันนา
09:57 - N a n a k a -: ก็ใส่เส้นเขียวแล้วค่อยๆปรับความดัง
09:57 - N a n a k a -: ไม่ยากนะ
09:57 - N a n a k a -: *เส้น timing
09:57 - N a n a k a -: ไม่ยากหรอกแต่นานนิดหน่อย
09:57 kantokun: คือ =A=;; ไม่รู้จะให้เริ่มที่ไหนดี
09:58 kantokun: เอาเป็นทีละสไลด์ได้มั้ยอ่ะ
10:01 - N a n a k a -: http://puu.sh/2lpbG
10:01 - N a n a k a -: ลองเอาไปใส่
10:02 kantokun: โอเช เรียบร้อย
10:11 - N a n a k a -: น่าจะหมดแล้วแหละ
10:11 - N a n a k a -: ส่งต่อให้คนอื่น
10:11 - N a n a k a -: lol
10:12 - N a n a k a -: พวก finish นี่น่าจะใส่ให้เหมือน Insane นะ
10:12 kantokun: อ่าครับ
thx mods, fix and Update lol
Loneight
Hi~
Request from In-game or spboxer3.


  • "re" is means "remove"
    Black is just suggestion, if you don't like , you can skip it
    Blue is recommended to fix
    red is unrankable issue

[general]

  1. I think you can find some tags from there to add

[Easy]

  1. Useless green line:
    green line
    00:07:514 -
    00:07:823 - (if re 00:07:514 -)
    00:17:106 -
    00:17:725 - (if re 00:17:106 -)
    00:37:529 -
    00:37:993 -
    00:47:431 -
    00:49:803 -
    00:51:763 -
    00:52:073 - (if re 00:51:144 - )
    02:25:801 -
  2. 00:11:227 (4) - do you forget to add clap at arrow or deliberate? do this would be better for sound
  3. 00:17:725 (1) - re whistle at end, it is weird for sound, get it only have soft-hitnormal sound would be better, 00:20:201 (2,1) - same as this
  4. 00:25:152 (2) - change whistle to clap at end, clap would be more suitable for there
  5. 00:27:627 (1) - it is weird that only a clap sound at 00:29:484 for this slider, try to change to whistle, 00:32:578 (1) - same as this
  6. 00:32:578 (1,2) - (2) change whistle to clap, (1) same as (2) at end. Because I think clap would be more suitable for vocal or music, whistle is a little weird
  7. 00:38:767 (1) - add whistle at arrow to follow music
  8. 00:42:480 (1) - add clap at end would be better for sound
  9. 00:45:574 (2,3) - add whistle at (2)'s end and (3)'s start to follow music
  10. 00:47:740 (1) - I feel weird that end at 00:51:144 - , end at 00:50:990 would be better, if you change this, remember re 00:51:144 - green line, if you don't change, 00:51:144 - change to 1.0x SV, don't use slow adjustment
  11. 00:52:382 (1) - why don't you add clap at arrow and end to follow music like previous?
  12. 00:55:476 (1) - it is very weird, I don't understand what it follow ;w;... try to get it start at 00:54:961 and end same place
  13. 01:22:088 - change 0.75x SV green line to 1.0x
I want to say something
Did you use "Distance snap" to make this diff? why I see many parts' distance are not consistent, even some notes have jump which is not suitable like 00:02:872 (1) - , 00:12:774 (1) - , 00:17:725 (1) - , 01:04:141 (2,1) - ...etc, please fix them, it is very confused for newbie, and remember check every notes distance after re unless green line! you can use AImod to see where have different distance, let them are consistent

[Normal]

  1. Useless green line:
    green line
    00:17:106 -
    00:17:725 - (if re 00:17:106 -)
    00:51:144 -
    00:51:763 -
    00:52:073 -
    01:22:088 -
    01:22:398
  2. 00:02:769 (1) - there would be confused for newbie because 1/3 suddenly appear, change it to a circle at 00:02:872 would be better
  3. 00:16:487 (3,1) - swap NC, I think should NC 00:16:487 (3) - instead 00:16:797 (1) - , because I hear stress at 00:16:487 (3) -
  4. 00:17:725 (1) - add clap at end, would be more rhythmical, 00:20:201 (1,1,1) - , 00:32:578 (1) - same as this
  5. 00:29:174 (1,2) - this is not suitable for vocal or music, try [url]this rhythm[/url]
  6. 00:30:876 (1) - It is weird for me that clap at start or end, try clap at arrow and re clap at start or end
  7. 00:32:578 (2) - consider adding a NC here, since this note follows a spinner.
  8. 00:31:340 (1) - add clap to follow music
  9. 00:47:740 (1) - it is hard to read it is repeat-four-times slider, dosen't have to follow vocal in Normal, try to this, would be much better
  10. 00:54:858 (1,2,3) - this is very hard for newbie in Normal! because 00:54:858 (1) - have many repeats, and 00:56:302 (2,3) - suddenly appear would make newbie miss read, try to change to a spinner like this or other way
  11. 00:57:333 - ~ 01:16:828 - I feel very boring..and feel you are lazy for there, because only same rhythm for 01:07:235 (1,2,1,2,3,4) - part A, 01:09:711 (1,2,1,2,3,4) - same part A whirl...etc, try to change different arrangement
  12. 01:22:088 - change to 1.0x SV green line, don't use 0.75x. After fix, remember re 01:22:398 -
like Easy
your distance have many kinds ... please try to choose one to put, so check your distance please.
Also, you can have jump in Normal, but it have to be suitable for music, 00:02:769 (1) - 00:22:676 (1) -

[Hard]

  1. 00:04:935 (2,3) - get it be farther, because the distance is same as 00:03:800 (4,5) - , would let people consider it is 1/3 and miss it
  2. 00:40:314 (1) - it is werid for 1/2 slider for sound, try to use 1/3 slider for there, 00:42:789 (2) - same as there
  3. 00:53:929 (2,4) - add clap at start to make a symmetry with 00:52:691 (2,4) -
  4. 01:24:254 (1,2) - swap NC, I think 01:24:254 (1) - is belong 01:22:604 (1,2,3,4,5) - 's part
nice diff ~!

[Insane]

  1. 00:19:195 (2) - this note is overmap, I can't hear anything it follow ..., try to re it
  2. 00:25:616 (3) - please move it on other place, because there is covered by 00:24:842 (4,1) - 's score so that 00:25:616 (3) - is hard to read it
  3. 00:29:381 (2,3) - distance is same as 00:27:008 (3,4) - , try to move it farther, 00:56:508 (1,2,3) - , 01:02:490 (2,3) - same as here
  4. 00:36:188 (8,9) - it is uncomfortable when play there, try to move it closer
  5. 00:39:386 (5,1) - there is hard to play or read, because 00:39:901 - feel like have overmapped, try this rhythm, if you change, add clap at end
  6. 00:48:514 (3) - this is very hard to read it is 1/1 instead 1/2, try to move it to other place or ctrl+G or other way
  7. 00:50:216 (6,7,8) - there is hard for play, only could read approachcircle to hit, try to follow vocal like this
very smooth SV for the diff~! good work! :3

That's all ~
good luck ~ >w<
edit: I forget give you star lol
good work on 1st map :3
Topic Starter
KantoKun

Loneight wrote:

Hi~
Request from In-game or spboxer3.


  • "re" is means "remove"
    Black is just suggestion, if you don't like , you can skip it
    Blue is recommended to fix
    red is unrankable issue

[general]

  1. I think you can find some tags from there to add

[Easy]

  1. Useless green line:
    green line
    00:07:514 -
    00:07:823 - (if re 00:07:514 -)
    00:17:106 -
    00:17:725 - (if re 00:17:106 -)
    00:37:529 -
    00:37:993 -
    00:47:431 -
    00:49:803 -
    00:51:763 -
    00:52:073 - (if re 00:51:144 - )
    02:25:801 -
  2. 00:11:227 (4) - do you forget to add clap at arrow or deliberate? do this would be better for sound
  3. 00:17:725 (1) - re whistle at end, it is weird for sound, get it only have soft-hitnormal sound would be better, 00:20:201 (2,1) - same as this
  4. 00:25:152 (2) - change whistle to clap at end, clap would be more suitable for there
  5. 00:27:627 (1) - it is weird that only a clap sound at 00:29:484 for this slider, try to change to whistle, 00:32:578 (1) - same as this
  6. 00:32:578 (1,2) - (2) change whistle to clap, (1) same as (2) at end. Because I think clap would be more suitable for vocal or music, whistle is a little weird
  7. 00:38:767 (1) - add whistle at arrow to follow music
  8. 00:42:480 (1) - add clap at end would be better for sound
  9. 00:45:574 (2,3) - add whistle at (2)'s end and (3)'s start to follow music
  10. 00:47:740 (1) - I feel weird that end at 00:51:144 - , end at 00:50:990 would be better, if you change this, remember re 00:51:144 - green line, if you don't change, 00:51:144 - change to 1.0x SV, don't use slow adjustment
  11. 00:52:382 (1) - why don't you add clap at arrow and end to follow music like previous?
  12. 00:55:476 (1) - it is very weird, I don't understand what it follow ;w;... try to get it start at 00:54:961 and end same place
  13. 01:22:088 - change 0.75x SV green line to 1.0x
I want to say something
Did you use "Distance snap" to make this diff? why I see many parts' distance are not consistent, even some notes have jump which is not suitable like 00:02:872 (1) - , 00:12:774 (1) - , 00:17:725 (1) - , 01:04:141 (2,1) - ...etc, please fix them, it is very confused for newbie, and remember check every notes distance after re unless green line! you can use AImod to see where have different distance, let them are consistent

[Normal]

  1. Useless green line:
    green line
    00:17:106 -
    00:17:725 - (if re 00:17:106 -)
    00:51:144 -
    00:51:763 -
    00:52:073 -
    01:22:088 -
    01:22:398
  2. 00:02:769 (1) - there would be confused for newbie because 1/3 suddenly appear, change it to a circle at 00:02:872 would be better
  3. 00:16:487 (3,1) - swap NC, I think should NC 00:16:487 (3) - instead 00:16:797 (1) - , because I hear stress at 00:16:487 (3) -
  4. 00:17:725 (1) - add clap at end, would be more rhythmical, 00:20:201 (1,1,1) - , 00:32:578 (1) - same as this
  5. 00:29:174 (1,2) - this is not suitable for vocal or music, try [url]this rhythm[/url]
  6. 00:30:876 (1) - It is weird for me that clap at start or end, try clap at arrow and re clap at start or end
  7. 00:32:578 (2) - consider adding a NC here, since this note follows a spinner.
  8. 00:31:340 (1) - add clap to follow music
  9. 00:47:740 (1) - it is hard to read it is repeat-four-times slider, dosen't have to follow vocal in Normal, try to this, would be much better
  10. 00:54:858 (1,2,3) - this is very hard for newbie in Normal! because 00:54:858 (1) - have many repeats, and 00:56:302 (2,3) - suddenly appear would make newbie miss read, try to change to a spinner like this or other way
  11. 00:57:333 - ~ 01:16:828 - I feel very boring..and feel you are lazy for there, because only same rhythm for 01:07:235 (1,2,1,2,3,4) - part A, 01:09:711 (1,2,1,2,3,4) - same part A whirl...etc, try to change different arrangement
  12. 01:22:088 - change to 1.0x SV green line, don't use 0.75x. After fix, remember re 01:22:398 -
like Easy
your distance have many kinds ... please try to choose one to put, so check your distance please.
Also, you can have jump in Normal, but it have to be suitable for music, 00:02:769 (1) - 00:22:676 (1) -

[Hard]

  1. 00:04:935 (2,3) - get it be farther, because the distance is same as 00:03:800 (4,5) - , would let people consider it is 1/3 and miss it
  2. 00:40:314 (1) - it is werid for 1/2 slider for sound, try to use 1/3 slider for there, 00:42:789 (2) - same as there
  3. 00:53:929 (2,4) - add clap at start to make a symmetry with 00:52:691 (2,4) -
  4. 01:24:254 (1,2) - swap NC, I think 01:24:254 (1) - is belong 01:22:604 (1,2,3,4,5) - 's part
nice diff ~!

[Insane]

  1. 00:19:195 (2) - this note is overmap, I can't hear anything it follow ..., try to re it
  2. 00:25:616 (3) - please move it on other place, because there is covered by 00:24:842 (4,1) - 's score so that 00:25:616 (3) - is hard to read it
  3. 00:29:381 (2,3) - distance is same as 00:27:008 (3,4) - , try to move it farther, 00:56:508 (1,2,3) - , 01:02:490 (2,3) - same as here
  4. 00:36:188 (8,9) - it is uncomfortable when play there, try to move it closer
  5. 00:39:386 (5,1) - there is hard to play or read, because 00:39:901 - feel like have overmapped, try this rhythm, if you change, add clap at end
  6. 00:48:514 (3) - this is very hard to read it is 1/1 instead 1/2, try to move it to other place or ctrl+G or other way
  7. 00:50:216 (6,7,8) - there is hard for play, only could read approachcircle to hit, try to follow vocal like this
very smooth SV for the diff~! good work! :3

That's all ~
good luck ~ >w<
thx mods :| already fix and update
Jerry
Taiko mod~ :3

SPOILER
  • [Taiko Muzukashii]
  1. 00:12:980 (26) - delete
  2. 00:13:599 (28) - add d
  3. 01:01:562 (23) - d


    [Taiko Oni]
  4. 00:04:007 (8) - d
  5. 00:27:008 (49) - d
  6. 00:31:237 (18) - k
  7. 00:44:027 (23,27,28) - k
  8. 00:44:337 (25,29) - d
  9. 00:52:898 (55) - k
  10. 00:53:001 (56) - d
  11. 00:54:136 (63) - k
  12. 00:54:239 (64) - d
  13. 01:10:433 (23) - d
  14. 01:15:899 (26) - k

That is all from me.
Good luck on getting it ranked! :3
Topic Starter
KantoKun

Jerry wrote:

Taiko mod~ :3

SPOILER
  • [Taiko Muzukashii]
  1. 00:12:980 (26) - delete
  2. 00:13:599 (28) - add d
  3. 01:01:562 (23) - d


    [Taiko Oni]
  4. 00:04:007 (8) - d
  5. 00:27:008 (49) - d
  6. 00:31:237 (18) - k
  7. 00:44:027 (23,27,28) - k
  8. 00:44:337 (25,29) - d
  9. 00:52:898 (55) - k
  10. 00:53:001 (56) - d
  11. 00:54:136 (63) - k
  12. 00:54:239 (64) - d
  13. 01:10:433 (23) - d
  14. 01:15:899 (26) - k

That is all from me.
Good luck on getting it ranked! :3
Thx mods :) fix & update
orioncomet
[Insane]
- Way too many hidden/confussing/hard to see sliders and notes, which is likely not acceptable @_@
00:12:465 (4,5,6,1) -
00:20:665 (4) -
00:25:616 (3) -
00:29:484 (3) -
00:56:508 (1,2,3) -
01:07:545 (2) -
00:38:457 (3) - too close, I don't think anti-jump is good here, maybe make it to normal spacing instead?
00:46:193 (5) - Adding new combo here would be better to tell spacing.

[Hard]
- There should not be any really too hard to tell spacing or hidden notes or anything 'too hard' in Hard diff, imo.
00:04:935 (2,3) - Hidden slider.
00:19:427 (1) - ^
00:24:378 (1) - ^
00:25:152 (1) - ^
00:43:408 (3) - Way too close, maybe add new combo, or make (2) closer to (1)?
01:07:029 (8,9,1) - Hidden.

[Nomal]
- Try not to use too many short sliders next time, you can skip some beat by using longer sliders to make it easier.
00:31:340 (1) - Spin is fine but when it become 00:30:876 (3) - then spin then 00:32:578 (1) - it now is a bit too rushy for a Normal diff. Maybe a better choice is to change spinner to slider.
00:37:993 (1) - Don't stack or make it "stack", it's really hard to tell for beginner.
00:42:789 (2) - Like this, you can skip this sound to make it easier, remove it or just make slider longer.
00:44:801 (1) - ^

[Easy]
- Try to use some long sliders, you don't have to map every single rhythm for easy diffs.
00:32:578 (1) - Note is too soon right after spinner with some kinda short spinner for easy diff.
00:37:993 (1) - ^ maybe delete it.



Try NOT to put next note under other notes net time x~x that was too many and really hard to accept. Some or most of them are unrankable too, sorry :?
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