Sadohara Kaori - To Be Continued? (TV Size) [Osu|Taiko]

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Topic Starter
Kirino Kousaka

cRyo[iceeicee] wrote:

Hi hi o.o
  1. 00:14:835 (1) - i dont think this NC is necessary, removing it fits with your shor 1,2 NC pattern that you used before and after I get your point, but nope, I think it's fine. :3
  2. 00:39:795 (1) - this also, remove NC and you will get same 1,2,3 like here 00:35:955 (1,2,3) - fixed~
  3. 00:42:675 (2) - i hear something heavier then soft hit on slider tail, use N hit instead ? added SC:1 clap instead~
  4. 00:57:075 (5) - hmm, should NC start here ? since you following vocal fixed~
  5. 01:10:515 (5) - use clap instead whistle ? no change :3
  6. 01:16:035 (1) - whistle fixed~
  1. 00:22:515 (1) - missing hitsound, finish or smth added Finish~
  2. 00:37:875 (3) - whistle fixed~
  3. 00:54:195 (1) - should be clap on slider tail fixed~
  4. 01:00:915 (1) - i think you need to start this slider 1 tick earlier and follow the vocal, becase such long pattern 00:54:195 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1) - following vocal and then suddenly stop ._. (more of it if you listen carefully then you will hear some sound on the red tick, which means if you apply this suggestion pattern will perfectly follow music/vocal) fixed~
  5. 01:04:755 (1) - missing whistle fixed~
  6. 01:09:555 (4) - clap on tail, sound good fixed~
  7. 01:15:315 (3,1) - same thing as i mentioned before, i prefer to see similar pattern that i suggested 01:00:915 (1) - fixed~
  1. 00:08:115 (4) - whistle fixed~
  2. 00:22:995 (2) - missing tail whistle fixed~
  3. 00:23:475 (3,4) - missing 2 claps, #3 tail, #4 head fixed~
  4. 00:33:075 (5) - tail clap fixed~
  5. 00:41:715 (3) - whistle fixed~
  6. 00:42:675 (1,2) - i prefer to see 1.0x SV here, because this bgm drum doesnt belong to calm part. No change, it plays better like this imo. =w=
  7. 00:47:475 (1) - whistle or finish added finish
  8. 00:50:835 (2) - add 1 repeat, fit better with music + add claps on 1,3,4 tick fixed~
  9. 00:54:915 (1) - missing clap fixed~
  10. 00:56:595 (5) - tail clap fixed~
  11. 00:57:795 (2) - missing clap fixed~
  12. 00:59:235 (2) - whistle fixed~
  13. 00:59:715 (4) - clap head fixed~
  14. 01:01:635 (4) - whistle head fixed~
  15. 01:02:595 (6) - clap fixed~
  16. 01:08:355 (3) - whistle head, tail can be too fixed~
  17. 01:18:915 (3) - whistle fixed~
  18. 01:19:515 (5) - head whistle, tail clap fixed~

Good luck :>
Thanks for the mod and star cryo! >w<
Miya
Recheck :3

Easy
  1. 01:14:355 (3) - How about copy paste the previous slider shape 01:13:395 (2) - to here? It's more good if you continue to use not curvy slider here since it's still on the same combo.


Normal
  1. 00:13:635 (2) - The whistle on this circle should be on white tick on 00:13:875 - like you did at previous combo. So, remove this whistle and add a whistle on 00:13:875 (3) - start.
  2. 00:15:555 (2) - Same, remove this whistle and add a whistle on 00:15:795 (3) - start.
  3. 00:17:715 (3) - Same, add a whistle on this slider start.
  4. 00:21:555 (3) - ^
  5. 00:23:475 (3) - ^
  6. 00:25:395 (2) - ^
  7. 00:28:995 (2,3) - ^
  8. 00:30:915 (2,3) - ^
  9. 00:33:075 (3) - ^
  10. 00:50:355 (1) - Add another repeat to this slider? It's a bit awkward since the rhythm still continue on 00:51:075 -
  11. 00:57:075 (1) - You forgot a whistle again at this slider ><
  12. 01:15:075 (2) - Remove whistle here, overused and unnesecary. Break the current whistle rhythm.


Hard
  1. 00:33:075 (5) - You forgot a clap at this slider end ><
;)
Topic Starter
Kirino Kousaka

Miya wrote:

Recheck :3

Easy
  1. 01:14:355 (3) - How about copy paste the previous slider shape 01:13:395 (2) - to here? It's more good if you continue to use not curvy slider here since it's still on the same combo. Good point. XD Fixed~


Normal
  1. 00:13:635 (2) - The whistle on this circle should be on white tick on 00:13:875 - like you did at previous combo. So, remove this whistle and add a whistle on 00:13:875 (3) - start. fixed~
  2. 00:15:555 (2) - Same, remove this whistle and add a whistle on 00:15:795 (3) - start. fixed~
  3. 00:17:715 (3) - Same, add a whistle on this slider start. fixed~
  4. 00:21:555 (3) - ^ fixed~
  5. 00:23:475 (3) - ^ fixed~
  6. 00:25:395 (2) - ^ fixed~
  7. 00:28:995 (2,3) - ^ fixed~
  8. 00:30:915 (2,3) - ^ fixed~
  9. 00:33:075 (3) - ^ fixed~
  10. 00:50:355 (1) - Add another repeat to this slider? It's a bit awkward since the rhythm still continue on 00:51:075 - changed into two sliders instead!~
  11. 00:57:075 (1) - You forgot a whistle again at this slider >< fixed~
  12. 01:15:075 (2) - Remove whistle here, overused and unnesecary. Break the current whistle rhythm. fixed~


Hard
  1. 00:33:075 (5) - You forgot a clap at this slider end >< fixed~
;)
Thanks! >w<
Miya
Yup, it's looks awesome now. :)

Bubbled!
Topic Starter
Kirino Kousaka

Miya wrote:

Yup, it's looks awesome now. :)

Bubbled!
OMG Thank you ;w;
Natsu
glad to see this bubbled go baka but this need a KirinOni... :roll:
Makar
Mod for mod requested :3

[Easy]
  1. 00:54:15 (1,2,3) - Maybe make this consistent with 01:09:555 (1,2) in terms of timing?
  2. 00:59:955 (3,1) - ^ with 01:15:315 (4,1)
[Normal]
  1. HP+1?
  2. I really don't like this SV/Spacing combination ._. the high SV and low spacing makes the sliders that end on 1/4 and circles right after it a bit confusing to me.... but I guess it's too late to change this now :/
[Muzukashii]
  1. Tick rate 1
  2. 00:39:785 (1) - remove finish
  3. Use normal hitsounds please... adjust volume if you have to
[Oni]
  1. Tick rate 1
  2. Same as Muzu: Use normal hitsounds and adjust volume if you have to
  3. Center difficulty settings (so CS5) but this is minor
[Hard]
  1. 00:05:235 - 00:10:635 - This section is completely different and inconsistent with the others in the intro in terms of difficulty and style. I highly suggest you use the note patterns you use at 00:12:915. PM me for help if you dont understand what I mean by this.

Call me back after fixes, or PM me if you have any questions~
Topic Starter
Kirino Kousaka

Makar wrote:

Mod for mod requested :3

[Easy]
  1. 00:54:15 (1,2,3) - Maybe make this consistent with 01:09:555 (1,2) in terms of timing? fixed~
  2. 00:59:955 (3,1) - ^ with 01:15:315 (4,1) fixed~
[Normal]
  1. HP+1? fixed~
  2. I really don't like this SV/Spacing combination ._. the high SV and low spacing makes the sliders that end on 1/4 and circles right after it a bit confusing to me.... but I guess it's too late to change this now :/ fixed~
[Muzukashii]
  1. Tick rate 1 fixed~
  2. 00:39:785 (1) - remove finish fixed~
  3. Use normal hitsounds please... adjust volume if you have to fixed~ Used 70% vloume
[Oni]
  1. Tick rate 1 fixed~
  2. Same as Muzu: Use normal hitsounds and adjust volume if you have to fixed~ Used 70% vloume
  3. Center difficulty settings (so CS5) but this is minor fixed~
[Hard]
  1. 00:05:235 - 00:10:635 - This section is completely different and inconsistent with the others in the intro in terms of difficulty and style. I highly suggest you use the note patterns you use at 00:12:915. PM me for help if you dont understand what I mean by this. I deleted some notes that may help to make the rhythm consistent with the others

Call me back after fixes, or PM me if you have any questions~
Thanks Makar! :3
EDIT: on [Normal] readjusted to HP 3, since it became this with HP 4 orz
Makar
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Topic Starter
Kirino Kousaka
Thank you! >w<
scanter
omedeto ~ kiririn <3
Lolicakey
Congratz Kiri <3
Miya
Finally ranked, so fast xD
Gratz :P
Oyatsu
Congratz 2nd ranked!
Sekai
Gratz bakrino =w=
BeatofIke
Congratulations! :D
Lust
Just played this, congratulations, well done!
[Maid] NekoRyo
Gratz for getting approve :D going to play it soon~
Verlaren
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