Sadohara Kaori - To Be Continued? (TV Size) [Osu|Taiko]

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UnitedWeSin
22:57 Kirino Kousaka: hello owo/
22:57 UnitedWeSin: hi there
22:57 Kirino Kousaka: do you have some time for a quick mod? ;w;
22:58 UnitedWeSin: like irc?
22:58 Kirino Kousaka: possible
22:58 Kirino Kousaka: :3
22:58 UnitedWeSin: i can take a look
22:58 Kirino Kousaka: do you? ;w;
22:58 Kirino Kousaka: :O
22:58 Kirino Kousaka: ♥
22:58 *Kirino Kousaka is listening to [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/225589 Sadohara Kaori - To Be Continued? (TV Size)]
22:59 UnitedWeSin: ah yes :)
22:59 Kirino Kousaka: yay >w<
23:11 UnitedWeSin: the circle size for hard surprised me lol
23:11 Kirino Kousaka: how was it? owo
23:11 Kirino Kousaka: lol
23:11 Kirino Kousaka: if I adjust it by 1, it feels so small orz
23:11 UnitedWeSin: it's fine it works well
23:12 Kirino Kousaka: lol
23:12 Kirino Kousaka: I get that a lot. =w=
23:12 UnitedWeSin: 00:19:155 (1) - seems strange shape
23:12 UnitedWeSin: how about a nice wave slider?
23:12 Kirino Kousaka: I see, wait =w=
23:13 UnitedWeSin: http://puu.sh/2ZYu0.png
23:14 Kirino Kousaka: nailed it \:D/ http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/772451
23:14 UnitedWeSin: :)
23:15 UnitedWeSin: nazi, but I would select the 00:22:515 (1,2,3,4) - and move it slightly so that the head of the 2 is overlapped perfectly with the head of the 00:24:915 (2) -
23:15 UnitedWeSin: nazi, but I would select the 00:22:515 (1,2,3,4) - and move it slightly so that the head of the 2 is overlapped perfectly with the head of the 00:24:915 (2) -
23:15 UnitedWeSin: doesn't really matter but its just a few grids to the left and it looks nicer
23:16 Kirino Kousaka: hmm, wait
23:16 Kirino Kousaka: fixed :3
23:17 UnitedWeSin: 00:37:395 - i really really really wish there was a note here ;_;
23:17 UnitedWeSin: i know it follows vocals but that's a long wait -.-
23:18 Kirino Kousaka: lol
23:18 Kirino Kousaka: wait
23:18 UnitedWeSin: if you don't want to
23:18 UnitedWeSin: you could changethe placement on 00:37:635 (2,3,4,5) -
23:18 UnitedWeSin: to make it more that 1.0 spacing
23:18 UnitedWeSin: to the 2 that is
23:18 Kirino Kousaka: wait, I didn't get much of that XD
23:19 UnitedWeSin: sorry ;_;
23:19 Kirino Kousaka: no, I'm the dumb one here ;w;
23:20 UnitedWeSin: sec brb
23:20 Kirino Kousaka: oki :3
23:22 UnitedWeSin: ok
23:22 UnitedWeSin: coffee is ready :3
23:22 Kirino Kousaka: lol :3
23:23 Kirino Kousaka: what to do 00:37:635 (2,3,4,5) -
23:23 Kirino Kousaka: =w=
23:23 UnitedWeSin: sec lemme see
23:27 UnitedWeSin: lets move on :)
23:27 Kirino Kousaka: okay XD
23:27 UnitedWeSin: i'll come back to that
23:27 UnitedWeSin: 00:41:715 (3,1,2) - try to make placement look nicer
23:27 UnitedWeSin: i suggest angle the 3 more down and have the 1 and 2 at the same angle
23:27 UnitedWeSin: like this
23:28 UnitedWeSin: http://puu.sh/2ZYQu.png
23:28 UnitedWeSin: my pictures slow -.-
23:28 UnitedWeSin: anyways you can use more than 1.0 distance snap there imo
23:28 UnitedWeSin: it looks better and plays more smooth
23:29 Kirino Kousaka: on 00:41:715 (3,1,2) - ?
23:29 UnitedWeSin: yes
23:29 Kirino Kousaka: okay wait
23:30 Kirino Kousaka: only for those three?
23:30 Kirino Kousaka: lol
23:30 Kirino Kousaka: I'll see
23:30 UnitedWeSin: 00:50:355 (1,2,1) - also here
23:30 UnitedWeSin: please use more that .4 snap -.-
23:30 UnitedWeSin: 1.0 works well
23:30 UnitedWeSin: the repeating slider overlap too much
23:31 Kirino Kousaka: I'll use 1.4? so the sliders don't overlap much?
23:31 UnitedWeSin: no 1.0 is best
23:31 Kirino Kousaka: oh
23:31 UnitedWeSin: 1.0 plays natural
23:31 Kirino Kousaka: I thought "please use more than .4" XD
23:32 UnitedWeSin: ;_;
23:33 UnitedWeSin: here's what I would suggest
23:33 UnitedWeSin: remove a repeat from the 00:50:835 (2) -
23:33 UnitedWeSin: it's overmapped
23:33 Kirino Kousaka: I think not, since I here the music :<
23:33 UnitedWeSin: http://puu.sh/2ZYZ6.png
23:33 Kirino Kousaka: hear*
23:34 Kirino Kousaka: orz
23:34 UnitedWeSin: at 00:51:195 - there is no drum sound
23:34 UnitedWeSin: so it's better to have a gap
23:34 Kirino Kousaka: I see
23:35 Kirino Kousaka: how about the pattern of these sliders?
23:35 Kirino Kousaka: what goes nice?
23:35 UnitedWeSin: of the 00:50:355 (1,2) -
23:35 UnitedWeSin: ?
23:35 Kirino Kousaka: yes :3
23:35 UnitedWeSin: how about that picture?
23:35 UnitedWeSin: it's up to you :)
23:36 UnitedWeSin: place then how you like
23:36 UnitedWeSin: but 1.0 spacing is best imo
23:36 Kirino Kousaka: oh
23:36 Kirino Kousaka: I didn't notice the picture orz
23:36 Kirino Kousaka: okay wait
23:39 Kirino Kousaka: oops dc
23:39 UnitedWeSin: :D
23:39 Kirino Kousaka: sorry about that
23:39 Kirino Kousaka: what did I miss>
23:39 Kirino Kousaka: :3?
23:39 UnitedWeSin: nothing xD
23:39 UnitedWeSin: are you done with 00:50:355 (1,2) - ?
23:40 Kirino Kousaka: oh :3
23:40 Kirino Kousaka: well yes :3
23:40 Kirino Kousaka: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/772469
23:41 UnitedWeSin: ok well at 00:37:635 -
23:41 Kirino Kousaka: :3
23:41 UnitedWeSin: i don't like rhythm -.-
23:41 Kirino Kousaka: ... ;w;
23:42 UnitedWeSin: maybe http://puu.sh/2ZZ9e.png
23:42 Kirino Kousaka: but it follows the vocal ;w;
23:42 Kirino Kousaka: vocals*
23:42 UnitedWeSin: the 00:38:355 (5) - isn't following voclas
23:42 UnitedWeSin: vocals
23:43 Kirino Kousaka: =w=
23:43 Kirino Kousaka: I see =w=
23:44 UnitedWeSin: if you want to :D
23:44 Kirino Kousaka: wait =w=
23:44 UnitedWeSin: make spacing to the 00:37:635 (2) - bigger than 1.0
23:44 Kirino Kousaka: I'm experimenting =w=
23:44 UnitedWeSin: like the 00:41:475 (2) -
23:47 Kirino Kousaka: done =w=
23:47 UnitedWeSin: :D
23:47 UnitedWeSin: wanna upload or move on?
23:47 Kirino Kousaka: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/772474
23:48 Kirino Kousaka: well, it's up to you :3
23:48 Kirino Kousaka: if you want to see or just continue =w=
23:48 UnitedWeSin: normal needs work -.-
23:48 Kirino Kousaka: orz
23:48 UnitedWeSin: ;_;
23:48 Kirino Kousaka: Anything else for [Hard] ? ;w;
23:49 UnitedWeSin: that's all that really bothers me in hard
23:49 Kirino Kousaka: okay \:3/
23:49 Kirino Kousaka: move to [Normal] then? :3
23:49 UnitedWeSin: yep
23:49 Kirino Kousaka: :3
23:50 UnitedWeSin: 00:13:875 (3,1,2,3) - try to make placement look better
23:50 UnitedWeSin: the 00:13:875 (3,3) - overlap
23:50 UnitedWeSin: in a bad way
23:50 UnitedWeSin: http://puu.sh/2ZZjG.png
23:50 UnitedWeSin: try flipping the 00:15:795 (3) around
23:51 UnitedWeSin: and place it so the 00:14:835 (1,2,3) - are all blanketing the 00:13:875 (3) -
23:51 Kirino Kousaka: okay :3
23:52 UnitedWeSin: 00:06:555 (2,2) - i really don't like this -.-
23:53 Kirino Kousaka: I know
23:53 Kirino Kousaka: blue tick
23:53 Kirino Kousaka: =w=
23:54 Kirino Kousaka: but I have found no good solutions for it so far =w=
23:54 Kirino Kousaka: wait, still fixing 00:14:835 (1,2,3) -
23:58 UnitedWeSin: k
23:58 UnitedWeSin: dun?
23:58 Kirino Kousaka: yes :3
23:59 UnitedWeSin: 00:31:155 (3) - don't you want this to end on the blue tick00:31:755 - ?
23:59 Kirino Kousaka: true dat. =w=
23:59 Kirino Kousaka: wait =w=
23:59 UnitedWeSin: =w=
00:00 Kirino Kousaka: done =w=
00:00 UnitedWeSin: i think your rhythm at beginning will confuse people
00:01 UnitedWeSin: can you make it more simple?
00:01 UnitedWeSin: http://puu.sh/2ZZxd.png
00:01 UnitedWeSin: just a sample
00:01 Kirino Kousaka: wait
00:05 Kirino Kousaka: done =w=
00:06 UnitedWeSin: `:3
00:06 UnitedWeSin: 00:50:355 -
00:06 UnitedWeSin: please add something I beg you ;_;
00:06 UnitedWeSin: http://puu.sh/2ZZAV.png
00:06 UnitedWeSin: just a 1/2 slider with a repeat
00:06 UnitedWeSin: fits so nice
00:06 Kirino Kousaka: wait wait XD
00:09 Kirino Kousaka: done =w=
00:09 UnitedWeSin: 00:57:075 (1) - please don't have 2 repeats on this I beg you ;_;
00:10 UnitedWeSin: the slider is too short for that
00:10 UnitedWeSin: remove one repeat
00:10 UnitedWeSin: then add cricle at 00:57:795 -
00:11 UnitedWeSin: http://puu.sh/2ZZIs.png
00:11 UnitedWeSin: i say that because it's just more intuitive for the player
00:13 Kirino Kousaka: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/772493
00:13 *Kirino Kousaka runs
00:13 UnitedWeSin: yea that's fine :3
00:13 UnitedWeSin: do the same thing at 01:20:115 (5) - please ;_;
00:14 UnitedWeSin: change to two 1/2 sliders
00:14 UnitedWeSin: plays so much better
00:14 Kirino Kousaka: =w=d
00:15 UnitedWeSin: :3
00:15 Kirino Kousaka: done =w=d
00:16 UnitedWeSin: ready for rank after that imo :3
00:16 Kirino Kousaka: :O
00:16 Kirino Kousaka: how about [Easy] ? :O
00:17 UnitedWeSin: will check
00:17 Kirino Kousaka: okay :3
00:17 UnitedWeSin: again I wish you would add something at 00:50:355 -
00:17 Kirino Kousaka: wait, I'm fixing things for normalXD
00:17 UnitedWeSin: xD
00:18 UnitedWeSin: maybe it's better not to though
00:18 UnitedWeSin: the easy is really good
00:19 Kirino Kousaka: :O
00:19 UnitedWeSin: just one more thing in normal
00:19 UnitedWeSin: 01:08:595 (3,4,1) - this placement -.-
00:20 Kirino Kousaka: what to do ;w;
00:21 UnitedWeSin: maybe just rotate the 01:08:595 (3) - a bit
00:21 UnitedWeSin: :3
00:21 UnitedWeSin: http://puu.sh/2ZZV6.png
00:22 UnitedWeSin: idk I'm nazi -.-
00:22 Kirino Kousaka: how about blanket 01:09:555 (4) - with 01:08:595 (3) - ? like this: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/772496
00:22 Kirino Kousaka: :3
00:23 UnitedWeSin: seems ok either way :D
00:23 Kirino Kousaka: =w=d
00:24 UnitedWeSin: do you want me to mod saten's diff?
00:24 Kirino Kousaka: ofc =w=
00:25 Kirino Kousaka: if you're done with my diffs, post this irc mod together with mods for saten :3
00:25 UnitedWeSin: ah
00:25 UnitedWeSin: well update I'll check
00:25 Kirino Kousaka: like this p/2312719/
00:26 Kirino Kousaka: nothing more for [Easy]? :3
00:26 UnitedWeSin: easy is good :)
00:26 Kirino Kousaka: \:D/
00:27 UnitedWeSin: it seems that saten doesn't plan on changing anything so I won't waste my time lol
00:27 Kirino Kousaka: lol
00:27 Kirino Kousaka: why not try owo
00:27 UnitedWeSin: some things are overmapped imo but it's fine
00:27 Kirino Kousaka: well okay, just post and say that's Saten's diff is fine owo
00:28 Kirino Kousaka: also, updated. Check now =w=
00:31 UnitedWeSin: 00:37:635 (2,3,4,5,6) - i love this in hard
00:31 Kirino Kousaka: hue =w=
00:31 Kirino Kousaka: thank you =w=
00:33 UnitedWeSin: nice :3
00:33 Kirino Kousaka: =w=

IRC moddededed. :3

Just a quick look at Saten's diff:
  1. Some things are overmapped imo. For example, 01:12:795 (3,4,5,6,7,8) - there is absolutely nothing in the music supporting a long stream like this so it feels really awkward in play. You ignore the interesting variation in claps in the music and just map a stream...
  2. 01:16:275 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - A stream is alright there, but the music is calling for large jumps with the accented trumpets. I'm surprised that you didn't take advantage of that.
  3. 00:45:075 (6) - Should be a single circle really.
  4. 00:46:275 (3,4,5,6) - The small spacing here is awkward imo, they would be better as slight jumps.
  5. 01:00:195 - I don't like this gap to be honest, it's hard to read the rhythm on the 01:00:315 (1,2). A 3/4 slider at 00:59:955 would have been better.
  6. 01:05:955 - I was really disappointed with the transition here. To me this it's the most epic part of the song, I was surprised that you didn't take the chance here to map a really amazing transition with techniques that I've seen in so many of your other maps. Jumps perhaps.



Fun map though. Good luck with ranking, hopefully soon. :)
Topic Starter
Kirino Kousaka

UnitedWeSin wrote:

22:57 Kirino Kousaka: hello owo/
22:57 UnitedWeSin: hi there
22:57 Kirino Kousaka: do you have some time for a quick mod? ;w;
22:58 UnitedWeSin: like irc?
22:58 Kirino Kousaka: possible
22:58 Kirino Kousaka: :3
22:58 UnitedWeSin: i can take a look
22:58 Kirino Kousaka: do you? ;w;
22:58 Kirino Kousaka: :O
22:58 Kirino Kousaka: ♥
22:58 *Kirino Kousaka is listening to [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/225589 Sadohara Kaori - To Be Continued? (TV Size)]
22:59 UnitedWeSin: ah yes :)
22:59 Kirino Kousaka: yay >w<
23:11 UnitedWeSin: the circle size for hard surprised me lol
23:11 Kirino Kousaka: how was it? owo
23:11 Kirino Kousaka: lol
23:11 Kirino Kousaka: if I adjust it by 1, it feels so small orz
23:11 UnitedWeSin: it's fine it works well
23:12 Kirino Kousaka: lol
23:12 Kirino Kousaka: I get that a lot. =w=
23:12 UnitedWeSin: 00:19:155 (1) - seems strange shape
23:12 UnitedWeSin: how about a nice wave slider?
23:12 Kirino Kousaka: I see, wait =w=
23:13 UnitedWeSin: http://puu.sh/2ZYu0.png
23:14 Kirino Kousaka: nailed it \:D/ http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/772451
23:14 UnitedWeSin: :)
23:15 UnitedWeSin: nazi, but I would select the 00:22:515 (1,2,3,4) - and move it slightly so that the head of the 2 is overlapped perfectly with the head of the 00:24:915 (2) -
23:15 UnitedWeSin: nazi, but I would select the 00:22:515 (1,2,3,4) - and move it slightly so that the head of the 2 is overlapped perfectly with the head of the 00:24:915 (2) -
23:15 UnitedWeSin: doesn't really matter but its just a few grids to the left and it looks nicer
23:16 Kirino Kousaka: hmm, wait
23:16 Kirino Kousaka: fixed :3
23:17 UnitedWeSin: 00:37:395 - i really really really wish there was a note here ;_;
23:17 UnitedWeSin: i know it follows vocals but that's a long wait -.-
23:18 Kirino Kousaka: lol
23:18 Kirino Kousaka: wait
23:18 UnitedWeSin: if you don't want to
23:18 UnitedWeSin: you could changethe placement on 00:37:635 (2,3,4,5) -
23:18 UnitedWeSin: to make it more that 1.0 spacing
23:18 UnitedWeSin: to the 2 that is
23:18 Kirino Kousaka: wait, I didn't get much of that XD
23:19 UnitedWeSin: sorry ;_;
23:19 Kirino Kousaka: no, I'm the dumb one here ;w;
23:20 UnitedWeSin: sec brb
23:20 Kirino Kousaka: oki :3
23:22 UnitedWeSin: ok
23:22 UnitedWeSin: coffee is ready :3
23:22 Kirino Kousaka: lol :3
23:23 Kirino Kousaka: what to do 00:37:635 (2,3,4,5) -
23:23 Kirino Kousaka: =w=
23:23 UnitedWeSin: sec lemme see
23:27 UnitedWeSin: lets move on :)
23:27 Kirino Kousaka: okay XD
23:27 UnitedWeSin: i'll come back to that
23:27 UnitedWeSin: 00:41:715 (3,1,2) - try to make placement look nicer
23:27 UnitedWeSin: i suggest angle the 3 more down and have the 1 and 2 at the same angle
23:27 UnitedWeSin: like this
23:28 UnitedWeSin: http://puu.sh/2ZYQu.png
23:28 UnitedWeSin: my pictures slow -.-
23:28 UnitedWeSin: anyways you can use more than 1.0 distance snap there imo
23:28 UnitedWeSin: it looks better and plays more smooth
23:29 Kirino Kousaka: on 00:41:715 (3,1,2) - ?
23:29 UnitedWeSin: yes
23:29 Kirino Kousaka: okay wait
23:30 Kirino Kousaka: only for those three?
23:30 Kirino Kousaka: lol
23:30 Kirino Kousaka: I'll see
23:30 UnitedWeSin: 00:50:355 (1,2,1) - also here
23:30 UnitedWeSin: please use more that .4 snap -.-
23:30 UnitedWeSin: 1.0 works well
23:30 UnitedWeSin: the repeating slider overlap too much
23:31 Kirino Kousaka: I'll use 1.4? so the sliders don't overlap much?
23:31 UnitedWeSin: no 1.0 is best
23:31 Kirino Kousaka: oh
23:31 UnitedWeSin: 1.0 plays natural
23:31 Kirino Kousaka: I thought "please use more than .4" XD
23:32 UnitedWeSin: ;_;
23:33 UnitedWeSin: here's what I would suggest
23:33 UnitedWeSin: remove a repeat from the 00:50:835 (2) -
23:33 UnitedWeSin: it's overmapped
23:33 Kirino Kousaka: I think not, since I here the music :<
23:33 UnitedWeSin: http://puu.sh/2ZYZ6.png
23:33 Kirino Kousaka: hear*
23:34 Kirino Kousaka: orz
23:34 UnitedWeSin: at 00:51:195 - there is no drum sound
23:34 UnitedWeSin: so it's better to have a gap
23:34 Kirino Kousaka: I see
23:35 Kirino Kousaka: how about the pattern of these sliders?
23:35 Kirino Kousaka: what goes nice?
23:35 UnitedWeSin: of the 00:50:355 (1,2) -
23:35 UnitedWeSin: ?
23:35 Kirino Kousaka: yes :3
23:35 UnitedWeSin: how about that picture?
23:35 UnitedWeSin: it's up to you :)
23:36 UnitedWeSin: place then how you like
23:36 UnitedWeSin: but 1.0 spacing is best imo
23:36 Kirino Kousaka: oh
23:36 Kirino Kousaka: I didn't notice the picture orz
23:36 Kirino Kousaka: okay wait
23:39 Kirino Kousaka: oops dc
23:39 UnitedWeSin: :D
23:39 Kirino Kousaka: sorry about that
23:39 Kirino Kousaka: what did I miss>
23:39 Kirino Kousaka: :3?
23:39 UnitedWeSin: nothing xD
23:39 UnitedWeSin: are you done with 00:50:355 (1,2) - ?
23:40 Kirino Kousaka: oh :3
23:40 Kirino Kousaka: well yes :3
23:40 Kirino Kousaka: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/772469
23:41 UnitedWeSin: ok well at 00:37:635 -
23:41 Kirino Kousaka: :3
23:41 UnitedWeSin: i don't like rhythm -.-
23:41 Kirino Kousaka: ... ;w;
23:42 UnitedWeSin: maybe http://puu.sh/2ZZ9e.png
23:42 Kirino Kousaka: but it follows the vocal ;w;
23:42 Kirino Kousaka: vocals*
23:42 UnitedWeSin: the 00:38:355 (5) - isn't following voclas
23:42 UnitedWeSin: vocals
23:43 Kirino Kousaka: =w=
23:43 Kirino Kousaka: I see =w=
23:44 UnitedWeSin: if you want to :D
23:44 Kirino Kousaka: wait =w=
23:44 UnitedWeSin: make spacing to the 00:37:635 (2) - bigger than 1.0
23:44 Kirino Kousaka: I'm experimenting =w=
23:44 UnitedWeSin: like the 00:41:475 (2) -
23:47 Kirino Kousaka: done =w=
23:47 UnitedWeSin: :D
23:47 UnitedWeSin: wanna upload or move on?
23:47 Kirino Kousaka: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/772474
23:48 Kirino Kousaka: well, it's up to you :3
23:48 Kirino Kousaka: if you want to see or just continue =w=
23:48 UnitedWeSin: normal needs work -.-
23:48 Kirino Kousaka: orz
23:48 UnitedWeSin: ;_;
23:48 Kirino Kousaka: Anything else for [Hard] ? ;w;
23:49 UnitedWeSin: that's all that really bothers me in hard
23:49 Kirino Kousaka: okay \:3/
23:49 Kirino Kousaka: move to [Normal] then? :3
23:49 UnitedWeSin: yep
23:49 Kirino Kousaka: :3
23:50 UnitedWeSin: 00:13:875 (3,1,2,3) - try to make placement look better
23:50 UnitedWeSin: the 00:13:875 (3,3) - overlap
23:50 UnitedWeSin: in a bad way
23:50 UnitedWeSin: http://puu.sh/2ZZjG.png
23:50 UnitedWeSin: try flipping the 00:15:795 (3) around
23:51 UnitedWeSin: and place it so the 00:14:835 (1,2,3) - are all blanketing the 00:13:875 (3) -
23:51 Kirino Kousaka: okay :3
23:52 UnitedWeSin: 00:06:555 (2,2) - i really don't like this -.-
23:53 Kirino Kousaka: I know
23:53 Kirino Kousaka: blue tick
23:53 Kirino Kousaka: =w=
23:54 Kirino Kousaka: but I have found no good solutions for it so far =w=
23:54 Kirino Kousaka: wait, still fixing 00:14:835 (1,2,3) -
23:58 UnitedWeSin: k
23:58 UnitedWeSin: dun?
23:58 Kirino Kousaka: yes :3
23:59 UnitedWeSin: 00:31:155 (3) - don't you want this to end on the blue tick00:31:755 - ?
23:59 Kirino Kousaka: true dat. =w=
23:59 Kirino Kousaka: wait =w=
23:59 UnitedWeSin: =w=
00:00 Kirino Kousaka: done =w=
00:00 UnitedWeSin: i think your rhythm at beginning will confuse people
00:01 UnitedWeSin: can you make it more simple?
00:01 UnitedWeSin: http://puu.sh/2ZZxd.png
00:01 UnitedWeSin: just a sample
00:01 Kirino Kousaka: wait
00:05 Kirino Kousaka: done =w=
00:06 UnitedWeSin: `:3
00:06 UnitedWeSin: 00:50:355 -
00:06 UnitedWeSin: please add something I beg you ;_;
00:06 UnitedWeSin: http://puu.sh/2ZZAV.png
00:06 UnitedWeSin: just a 1/2 slider with a repeat
00:06 UnitedWeSin: fits so nice
00:06 Kirino Kousaka: wait wait XD
00:09 Kirino Kousaka: done =w=
00:09 UnitedWeSin: 00:57:075 (1) - please don't have 2 repeats on this I beg you ;_;
00:10 UnitedWeSin: the slider is too short for that
00:10 UnitedWeSin: remove one repeat
00:10 UnitedWeSin: then add cricle at 00:57:795 -
00:11 UnitedWeSin: http://puu.sh/2ZZIs.png
00:11 UnitedWeSin: i say that because it's just more intuitive for the player
00:13 Kirino Kousaka: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/772493
00:13 *Kirino Kousaka runs
00:13 UnitedWeSin: yea that's fine :3
00:13 UnitedWeSin: do the same thing at 01:20:115 (5) - please ;_;
00:14 UnitedWeSin: change to two 1/2 sliders
00:14 UnitedWeSin: plays so much better
00:14 Kirino Kousaka: =w=d
00:15 UnitedWeSin: :3
00:15 Kirino Kousaka: done =w=d
00:16 UnitedWeSin: ready for rank after that imo :3
00:16 Kirino Kousaka: :O
00:16 Kirino Kousaka: how about [Easy] ? :O
00:17 UnitedWeSin: will check
00:17 Kirino Kousaka: okay :3
00:17 UnitedWeSin: again I wish you would add something at 00:50:355 -
00:17 Kirino Kousaka: wait, I'm fixing things for normalXD
00:17 UnitedWeSin: xD
00:18 UnitedWeSin: maybe it's better not to though
00:18 UnitedWeSin: the easy is really good
00:19 Kirino Kousaka: :O
00:19 UnitedWeSin: just one more thing in normal
00:19 UnitedWeSin: 01:08:595 (3,4,1) - this placement -.-
00:20 Kirino Kousaka: what to do ;w;
00:21 UnitedWeSin: maybe just rotate the 01:08:595 (3) - a bit
00:21 UnitedWeSin: :3
00:21 UnitedWeSin: http://puu.sh/2ZZV6.png
00:22 UnitedWeSin: idk I'm nazi -.-
00:22 Kirino Kousaka: how about blanket 01:09:555 (4) - with 01:08:595 (3) - ? like this: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/772496
00:22 Kirino Kousaka: :3
00:23 UnitedWeSin: seems ok either way :D
00:23 Kirino Kousaka: =w=d
00:24 UnitedWeSin: do you want me to mod saten's diff?
00:24 Kirino Kousaka: ofc =w=
00:25 Kirino Kousaka: if you're done with my diffs, post this irc mod together with mods for saten :3
00:25 UnitedWeSin: ah
00:25 UnitedWeSin: well update I'll check
00:25 Kirino Kousaka: like this p/2312719/
00:26 Kirino Kousaka: nothing more for [Easy]? :3
00:26 UnitedWeSin: easy is good :)
00:26 Kirino Kousaka: \:D/
00:27 UnitedWeSin: it seems that saten doesn't plan on changing anything so I won't waste my time lol
00:27 Kirino Kousaka: lol
00:27 Kirino Kousaka: why not try owo
00:27 UnitedWeSin: some things are overmapped imo but it's fine
00:27 Kirino Kousaka: well okay, just post and say that's Saten's diff is fine owo
00:28 Kirino Kousaka: also, updated. Check now =w=
00:31 UnitedWeSin: 00:37:635 (2,3,4,5,6) - i love this in hard
00:31 Kirino Kousaka: hue =w=
00:31 Kirino Kousaka: thank you =w=
00:33 UnitedWeSin: nice :3
00:33 Kirino Kousaka: =w=

IRC moddededed. :3

Fun map though. Good luck with ranking, hopefully soon. :)Yes! >w<
Thanks for the mod UnitedWeSin! >w<
cRyo[iceeicee]
Hi hi o.o
  1. 00:14:835 (1) - i dont think this NC is necessary, removing it fits with your shor 1,2 NC pattern that you used before and after
  2. 00:39:795 (1) - this also, remove NC and you will get same 1,2,3 like here 00:35:955 (1,2,3) -
  3. 00:42:675 (2) - i hear something heavier then soft hit on slider tail, use N hit instead ?
  4. 00:57:075 (5) - hmm, should NC start here ? since you following vocal
  5. 01:10:515 (5) - use clap instead whistle ?
  6. 01:16:035 (1) - whistle
  1. 00:22:515 (1) - missing hitsound, finish or smth
  2. 00:37:875 (3) - whistle
  3. 00:54:195 (1) - should be clap on slider tail
  4. 01:00:915 (1) - i think you need to start this slider 1 tick earlier and follow the vocal, becase such long pattern 00:54:195 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1) - following vocal and then suddenly stop ._. (more of it if you listen carefully then you will hear some sound on the red tick, which means if you apply this suggestion pattern will perfectly follow music/vocal)
  5. 01:04:755 (1) - missing whistle
  6. 01:09:555 (4) - clap on tail, sound good
  7. 01:15:315 (3,1) - same thing as i mentioned before, i prefer to see similar pattern that i suggested 01:00:915 (1) -
  1. 00:08:115 (4) - whistle
  2. 00:22:995 (2) - missing tail whistle
  3. 00:23:475 (3,4) - missing 2 claps, #3 tail, #4 head
  4. 00:33:075 (5) - tail clap
  5. 00:41:715 (3) - whistle
  6. 00:42:675 (1,2) - i prefer to see 1.0x SV here, because this bgm drum doesnt belong to calm part.
  7. 00:47:475 (1) - whistle or finish
  8. 00:50:835 (2) - add 1 repeat, fit better with music + add claps on 1,3,4 tick
  9. 00:54:915 (1) - missing clap
  10. 00:56:595 (5) - tail clap
  11. 00:57:795 (2) - missing clap
  12. 00:59:235 (2) - whistle
  13. 00:59:715 (4) - clap head
  14. 01:01:635 (4) - whistle head
  15. 01:02:595 (6) - clap
  16. 01:08:355 (3) - whistle head, tail can be too
  17. 01:18:915 (3) - whistle
  18. 01:19:515 (5) - head whistle, tail clap
  1. i would add some claps that maybe dont exist in bgm but i think sounds nice,
    00:06:555 (5) -
    00:08:475 (5) -
    00:10:395 (6) -
    00:14:235 (5) -
    00:16:035 (5) - tail
    00:18:075 (5) -
  2. 00:42:675 (1,2) - this bgm drum doest belong to calm part, i think you need to use 1.0 SV here
  3. 00:55:395 (2) - this note sound like drum hit D:
    other fine for me, easy map as always ( ͡° ͜ʖ ͡°)乃
Good luck :>
Topic Starter
Kirino Kousaka

cRyo[iceeicee] wrote:

Hi hi o.o
  1. 00:14:835 (1) - i dont think this NC is necessary, removing it fits with your shor 1,2 NC pattern that you used before and after I get your point, but nope, I think it's fine. :3
  2. 00:39:795 (1) - this also, remove NC and you will get same 1,2,3 like here 00:35:955 (1,2,3) - fixed~
  3. 00:42:675 (2) - i hear something heavier then soft hit on slider tail, use N hit instead ? added SC:1 clap instead~
  4. 00:57:075 (5) - hmm, should NC start here ? since you following vocal fixed~
  5. 01:10:515 (5) - use clap instead whistle ? no change :3
  6. 01:16:035 (1) - whistle fixed~
  1. 00:22:515 (1) - missing hitsound, finish or smth added Finish~
  2. 00:37:875 (3) - whistle fixed~
  3. 00:54:195 (1) - should be clap on slider tail fixed~
  4. 01:00:915 (1) - i think you need to start this slider 1 tick earlier and follow the vocal, becase such long pattern 00:54:195 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1) - following vocal and then suddenly stop ._. (more of it if you listen carefully then you will hear some sound on the red tick, which means if you apply this suggestion pattern will perfectly follow music/vocal) fixed~
  5. 01:04:755 (1) - missing whistle fixed~
  6. 01:09:555 (4) - clap on tail, sound good fixed~
  7. 01:15:315 (3,1) - same thing as i mentioned before, i prefer to see similar pattern that i suggested 01:00:915 (1) - fixed~
  1. 00:08:115 (4) - whistle fixed~
  2. 00:22:995 (2) - missing tail whistle fixed~
  3. 00:23:475 (3,4) - missing 2 claps, #3 tail, #4 head fixed~
  4. 00:33:075 (5) - tail clap fixed~
  5. 00:41:715 (3) - whistle fixed~
  6. 00:42:675 (1,2) - i prefer to see 1.0x SV here, because this bgm drum doesnt belong to calm part. No change, it plays better like this imo. =w=
  7. 00:47:475 (1) - whistle or finish added finish
  8. 00:50:835 (2) - add 1 repeat, fit better with music + add claps on 1,3,4 tick fixed~
  9. 00:54:915 (1) - missing clap fixed~
  10. 00:56:595 (5) - tail clap fixed~
  11. 00:57:795 (2) - missing clap fixed~
  12. 00:59:235 (2) - whistle fixed~
  13. 00:59:715 (4) - clap head fixed~
  14. 01:01:635 (4) - whistle head fixed~
  15. 01:02:595 (6) - clap fixed~
  16. 01:08:355 (3) - whistle head, tail can be too fixed~
  17. 01:18:915 (3) - whistle fixed~
  18. 01:19:515 (5) - head whistle, tail clap fixed~

Good luck :>
Thanks for the mod and star cryo! >w<
Miya
Recheck :3

Easy
  1. 01:14:355 (3) - How about copy paste the previous slider shape 01:13:395 (2) - to here? It's more good if you continue to use not curvy slider here since it's still on the same combo.


Normal
  1. 00:13:635 (2) - The whistle on this circle should be on white tick on 00:13:875 - like you did at previous combo. So, remove this whistle and add a whistle on 00:13:875 (3) - start.
  2. 00:15:555 (2) - Same, remove this whistle and add a whistle on 00:15:795 (3) - start.
  3. 00:17:715 (3) - Same, add a whistle on this slider start.
  4. 00:21:555 (3) - ^
  5. 00:23:475 (3) - ^
  6. 00:25:395 (2) - ^
  7. 00:28:995 (2,3) - ^
  8. 00:30:915 (2,3) - ^
  9. 00:33:075 (3) - ^
  10. 00:50:355 (1) - Add another repeat to this slider? It's a bit awkward since the rhythm still continue on 00:51:075 -
  11. 00:57:075 (1) - You forgot a whistle again at this slider ><
  12. 01:15:075 (2) - Remove whistle here, overused and unnesecary. Break the current whistle rhythm.


Hard
  1. 00:33:075 (5) - You forgot a clap at this slider end ><
;)
Topic Starter
Kirino Kousaka

Miya wrote:

Recheck :3

Easy
  1. 01:14:355 (3) - How about copy paste the previous slider shape 01:13:395 (2) - to here? It's more good if you continue to use not curvy slider here since it's still on the same combo. Good point. XD Fixed~


Normal
  1. 00:13:635 (2) - The whistle on this circle should be on white tick on 00:13:875 - like you did at previous combo. So, remove this whistle and add a whistle on 00:13:875 (3) - start. fixed~
  2. 00:15:555 (2) - Same, remove this whistle and add a whistle on 00:15:795 (3) - start. fixed~
  3. 00:17:715 (3) - Same, add a whistle on this slider start. fixed~
  4. 00:21:555 (3) - ^ fixed~
  5. 00:23:475 (3) - ^ fixed~
  6. 00:25:395 (2) - ^ fixed~
  7. 00:28:995 (2,3) - ^ fixed~
  8. 00:30:915 (2,3) - ^ fixed~
  9. 00:33:075 (3) - ^ fixed~
  10. 00:50:355 (1) - Add another repeat to this slider? It's a bit awkward since the rhythm still continue on 00:51:075 - changed into two sliders instead!~
  11. 00:57:075 (1) - You forgot a whistle again at this slider >< fixed~
  12. 01:15:075 (2) - Remove whistle here, overused and unnesecary. Break the current whistle rhythm. fixed~


Hard
  1. 00:33:075 (5) - You forgot a clap at this slider end >< fixed~
;)
Thanks! >w<
Miya
Yup, it's looks awesome now. :)

Bubbled!
Topic Starter
Kirino Kousaka

Miya wrote:

Yup, it's looks awesome now. :)

Bubbled!
OMG Thank you ;w;
Natsu
glad to see this bubbled go baka but this need a KirinOni... :roll:
Makar
Mod for mod requested :3

[Easy]
  1. 00:54:15 (1,2,3) - Maybe make this consistent with 01:09:555 (1,2) in terms of timing?
  2. 00:59:955 (3,1) - ^ with 01:15:315 (4,1)
[Normal]
  1. HP+1?
  2. I really don't like this SV/Spacing combination ._. the high SV and low spacing makes the sliders that end on 1/4 and circles right after it a bit confusing to me.... but I guess it's too late to change this now :/
[Muzukashii]
  1. Tick rate 1
  2. 00:39:785 (1) - remove finish
  3. Use normal hitsounds please... adjust volume if you have to
[Oni]
  1. Tick rate 1
  2. Same as Muzu: Use normal hitsounds and adjust volume if you have to
  3. Center difficulty settings (so CS5) but this is minor
[Hard]
  1. 00:05:235 - 00:10:635 - This section is completely different and inconsistent with the others in the intro in terms of difficulty and style. I highly suggest you use the note patterns you use at 00:12:915. PM me for help if you dont understand what I mean by this.

Call me back after fixes, or PM me if you have any questions~
Topic Starter
Kirino Kousaka

Makar wrote:

Mod for mod requested :3

[Easy]
  1. 00:54:15 (1,2,3) - Maybe make this consistent with 01:09:555 (1,2) in terms of timing? fixed~
  2. 00:59:955 (3,1) - ^ with 01:15:315 (4,1) fixed~
[Normal]
  1. HP+1? fixed~
  2. I really don't like this SV/Spacing combination ._. the high SV and low spacing makes the sliders that end on 1/4 and circles right after it a bit confusing to me.... but I guess it's too late to change this now :/ fixed~
[Muzukashii]
  1. Tick rate 1 fixed~
  2. 00:39:785 (1) - remove finish fixed~
  3. Use normal hitsounds please... adjust volume if you have to fixed~ Used 70% vloume
[Oni]
  1. Tick rate 1 fixed~
  2. Same as Muzu: Use normal hitsounds and adjust volume if you have to fixed~ Used 70% vloume
  3. Center difficulty settings (so CS5) but this is minor fixed~
[Hard]
  1. 00:05:235 - 00:10:635 - This section is completely different and inconsistent with the others in the intro in terms of difficulty and style. I highly suggest you use the note patterns you use at 00:12:915. PM me for help if you dont understand what I mean by this. I deleted some notes that may help to make the rhythm consistent with the others

Call me back after fixes, or PM me if you have any questions~
Thanks Makar! :3
EDIT: on [Normal] readjusted to HP 3, since it became this with HP 4 orz
Makar
Ranked~
Lally
\o3o/ gratz <3
Topic Starter
Kirino Kousaka
Thank you! >w<
scanter
omedeto ~ kiririn <3
Lolicakey
Congratz Kiri <3
Miya
Finally ranked, so fast xD
Gratz :P
Oyatsu
Congratz 2nd ranked!
Sekai
Gratz bakrino =w=
BeatofIke
Congratulations! :D
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