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LunarSakuya wrote:

ello \:D/

General
- Rename the taiko diffs to Muzukashii and Oni. "Taiko" is redundant. Fixed~

- Preview times are inconsistent. I suggest just putting all them at 51315 Fixed~

- In Normal and Saten's .osu files under Events, change the bg code line to 0,0,"BG.jpg",0,0 Fixed~

- Change ArtistUnicode to 佐土原かおり Fixed~

Easy
00:14:835 (2) - NC, stay consistent with your NC alternating every stanza Fixed~

Normal
00:23:955 (4) - Sounds strange that the note is emphasized on the wrong rhythm, perhaps make a slider that ends on the blue tick https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/758420 (Edit: now that I'm looking through this, same for 00:15:795 (3) - ? and similar sections) Up to you of course but yeah Both Fixed~
00:41:715 (3,4) - Spacing, fix with distance snap Fixed~

Hard
00:11:955 (1) - Delete NC, i referenced 00:26:355 (1,2) - and other similar sections Fixed~
00:53:235 (5) - NC, delete NC on next note; this will distinguish the spacing vs. rhythm change Fixed~

Kawaii map <3 Thanks~ ♥
The main thing is inconsistency with folder contents. But the patterns were so clean!! :)>w< ♥~
I'll leave my star here~! Thanks owo/
meanwhile time to clean up my requests orz..

HEATKAI I SUMMON YOU
Thanks for the mod LunarSakuya! >w<

HeatKai wrote:

dat summon lol.



[General]
  1. Remove video from taiko diffs. Fixed~
  2. Change the bg code with this FOR TAIKO DIFFS ONLY.So the bg will looks like this when in the gameplay. u mad Fixed~
    0,0,"BG.jpg",0,120


[Easy]
  1. Why don't you try add hitsounds for variations in the starting like add whistle here at the end 00:05:235 (1) - , add whistle at the starting 00:08:115 (2) - , 00:10:035 (3) - add whistle. Fixed~
  2. 00:20:595 (1) - make it more curves,the current shape looks odd. Fixed~
  3. 00:29:715 (2) - move it a bit more far from the starting,because it looks ugly when you near something but there's no blanket or something. Fixed~
  4. 00:34:035 (1,2,3,4) - why didn't you add finish like you did with the beat like this before? /following the vocal and trumpet idk :o Fixed~
  5. 00:57:795 (3) - make it curve so people it goes with the direction flow. Fixed~
  6. 01:05:235 (4) - put finish at the end of the slider, to follow the bell sound. Fixed~
  7. I don't really recommend you to stack for the easiest diff, it's confusing for some new players.
    1. 01:08:115 (2) - Changes made~
    2. 01:09:315 (1) - Changes made~
  8. 01:09:555 (2) - make this curve towards above to show the direction flows going down. /where's the next slider is. Fixed~
  9. 01:22:035 (3) - just a suggestion move it at the middle line? Fixed~


[Normal]
  1. 00:10:035 (2) - remove repeat and put another 1/2.follow vocal.i don't really know what are you following at this repeat. Fixed~
  2. 00:10:995 (1) - this looks ugly x) fix it? maybe change shape. that fits for the next slider too? Fixed~
  3. 00:13:875 (3) - i would make it a normal curve slider and of course make sure that the next slider be a good blanket. doesn't hit circle (2) Fixed~
  4. 00:26:355 (1,2) - this looks ugly,fix it first :3 make it probably like this? Fixed~
  5. 00:39:795 (2) - this doesn't looks smooth,if you want to make it looks smooth do it like this with the grids. Deliciously Fixed~
  6. 01:05:715 (3) - put finish at the starting, to follow the bell sound.


[Hard]
  1. 00:09:315 (1) - make it as a little blanket for the next slider. Fixed~
  2. 00:29:595 (5,6,7) - I think convert this three into a slider would be better. there's no need for 3 circles here. just two beat would be fine. Fixed~
  3. 00:42:675 (1) - make it like this? so the repeat direction towards the next slider? Fixed~
  4. 00:56:235 () - add a circle here,to follow the trumpet beat. 00:56:475 (1) - was deleted and added a slider here instead. =w=
  5. 01:04:275 (5) - it would be better if you didn't make this and the next slider overlap. Fixed~
  6. 01:05:235 (3) - put finish at the end of the slider, to follow the bell sound. Fixed~
  7. 01:12:435 (1) - fix this slider make it better. Fixed~


[Muzukashii]
  1. 00:16:755 (3) - change to d Fixed~
  2. 00:40:035 () - add a circle here, there's a beat "dup dup" Fixed~
  3. 00:51:315 (1) - add finish here,the good part starts here,all instruments are loud here. Fixed~
  4. 00:54:195 (3,1,1,1) - d ddk sounds better to me Fixed~
  5. 00:55:155 (1) - d Fixed~
  6. 00:56:115 (3) - d I would keep this and ^ d because i want the pattern becomes d k d k following the instrument and vocal. Fixed~
  7. 01:05:715 (1) - add finish there's a loud bell sound here and like you did at Oni Fixed~


[Oni]
  1. 00:06:435 (2,1) - kd sounds better with the next dk Fixed~
  2. 00:46:275 () - add k here Fixed~
  3. 00:47:955 (1) - move to 00:47:835 () - and add a circle at 00:48:075 () - Fixed~
  4. 00:48:915 (1) - move this to 00:48:795 () - and add a circle at 00:49:035 () - so you can get a kd dk pattern based on instrument Fixed~
  5. 00:55:875 (2) - change this to k,stick with the kkd k d pattern. Fixed~
  6. 01:16:275 (1,2,3,4,1,2,1,2,3,4,5,6,1) - this stream isn't really necessary, map it based on trumpet is better. Fixed~
  7. 01:20:235 () - add a circle here,the streams shoulds start at the circle before. Fixed~
Thanks for the mod Kai! :D
Saten-san is still sleeping... ;w;
posted

LunarSakuya wrote:

Saten
hi saten
00:44:355 (3,4) - Reverse these rhythms http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/758405 , the vocals seem to be an interesting part to follow I'll keep it as it is since this was intended. It would also ruin the current flow with the slider-only part

HeatKai wrote:

[Saten]
  1. I don't really have much problem with this diff.
  2. 00:11:715 (4,5) - i think it's better if change this to slider, to show that you're not following vocal I'm not really following the vocals mainly though
  3. 00:44:475 () - I would add circle here to follow vocal that would mess with the current spacing
  4. 01:05:715 (5) - put finish here, to follow the bell sound. I don't really see any connections with adding a finish here o_o
  5. 01:16:755 (5,6) - why don't you delete this and make a long slider starting from 01:16:875 () - following trumpet. I don't get it, I can clearly hear that this part is 1/4 all the way
  6. It's weird,other diffs mapped at the ending part,but you put spinner :3 I always put a spinner at the end (almost) and this is the only spinner in the whole difficulty
hmm
posted
IRC Mod :3

  1. Fixed a LOT of rhythm on both easy and normal ><
2013-05-21 13:55 Kirino Kousaka: i-is that... :OOOOOOOOOOO
2013-05-21 13:55 Miya: ACTION is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/225589 Sadohara Kaori - To Be Continued? (TV Size) [Easy]]
2013-05-21 13:55 Miya: xD
2013-05-21 13:55 Kirino Kousaka: ♥♥♥♥♥
2013-05-21 13:55 Kirino Kousaka: >w<
2013-05-21 13:56 Kirino Kousaka: inb4 Miya PM's \:D/
2013-05-21 13:56 Miya: lol
2013-05-21 13:56 Miya: you want irc mod or forum mod? i prefer irc mod :P
2013-05-21 13:56 Kirino Kousaka: well sure irc mod :3
2013-05-21 13:56 Miya: ok ><
2013-05-21 13:56 Miya: first
2013-05-21 13:57 Kirino Kousaka: but I need to eat some snacks first ;w;
2013-05-21 13:57 Miya: try fix a lot of problem here at forum mod, i lazy to retype xD
2013-05-21 13:57 Miya: http://puu.sh/2XWgi.png
2013-05-21 13:57 Kirino Kousaka: orz
2013-05-21 13:58 Kirino Kousaka: btw on general, many already have told us that
2013-05-21 13:58 Miya: yeah, continue it =3=
2013-05-21 13:58 Kirino Kousaka: Saten-san and I discussed it over, we decided to end on this part
2013-05-21 13:58 Miya: it really feel weird
2013-05-21 13:58 Kirino Kousaka: it's okay lol :o
2013-05-21 13:59 Miya: no, since you mostly map for the beat, but you end it when the vocal end ><
2013-05-21 13:59 Kirino Kousaka: we mapped with beats and vocals ;w;
2013-05-21 13:59 Kirino Kousaka: 00:06:555 (2) -
2013-05-21 14:00 Kirino Kousaka: on normal
2013-05-21 14:00 Kirino Kousaka: 01:00:195 (1,2,3) - on hard
2013-05-21 14:00 Kirino Kousaka: and w/e things ;w;
2013-05-21 14:00 Kirino Kousaka: saten-san won't agree ;w;
2013-05-21 14:00 Miya: lol why so lazy? xD
2013-05-21 14:01 Kirino Kousaka: I would, but saten-san won't ;w;
2013-05-21 14:01 Miya: its okay, since its guest difficulty ><
2013-05-21 14:01 Kirino Kousaka: consistency D:
2013-05-21 14:02 Kirino Kousaka: ACTION is listening to [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/222261 Sadohara Kaori - To Be Continued? (TV Size)]
2013-05-21 14:02 Miya: it's okay guest diff can be different =3=
2013-05-21 14:02 Kirino Kousaka: it ends the same way ;w;
2013-05-21 14:02 Kirino Kousaka: aww okay ;w;
2013-05-21 14:02 Kirino Kousaka: ACTION okayface*
2013-05-21 14:03 Miya: yup, its far more better
2013-05-21 14:03 Kirino Kousaka: but wait
2013-05-21 14:03 Kirino Kousaka: If I did, I should also map 00:01:395 -
2013-05-21 14:03 Miya: nope
2013-05-21 14:03 Kirino Kousaka: that's another reason
2013-05-21 14:03 Kirino Kousaka: why I won't ;w;
2013-05-21 14:04 Kirino Kousaka: like this
2013-05-21 14:04 Kirino Kousaka: ACTION is listening to [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/225046 Sadohara Kaori - To Be Continued? (TV Size)]
2013-05-21 14:04 Miya: why not?
2013-05-21 14:04 Miya: :o
2013-05-21 14:04 Miya: oh well
2013-05-21 14:04 Kirino Kousaka: orzzz
2013-05-21 14:04 Miya: just fix the other thing in easy first ><
2013-05-21 14:05 Kirino Kousaka: \:DDD/
2013-05-21 14:05 Kirino Kousaka: I will eat first, I will die ;w;
2013-05-21 14:05 Miya: ok ok ><
2013-05-21 14:05 Kirino Kousaka: thanks ;w;
2013-05-21 14:05 Miya: np :3
2013-05-21 14:15 Kirino Kousaka: back :3
2013-05-21 14:15 Miya: wb :3
2013-05-21 14:15 Kirino Kousaka: well, gotta fix :3
2013-05-21 14:15 Miya: well, tell me if you done with the easy mod, or have any question :P3
2013-05-21 14:15 Miya: :3*
2013-05-21 14:15 Miya: yup
2013-05-21 14:15 Kirino Kousaka: okay :3
2013-05-21 14:19 Kirino Kousaka: is this all for [Easy]? :3
2013-05-21 14:19 Miya: yup
2013-05-21 14:19 Miya: only for easy ><
2013-05-21 14:19 Kirino Kousaka: okay :3
2013-05-21 14:23 Kirino Kousaka: hmm
2013-05-21 14:23 Kirino Kousaka: 00:57:075 (1,2) - this ruins the spacing ;w;
2013-05-21 14:24 Miya: remap the pattern then o.o
2013-05-21 14:24 Miya: let me think
2013-05-21 14:24 Kirino Kousaka: okay ;w;
2013-05-21 14:24 Kirino Kousaka: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/767791 ?
2013-05-21 14:24 Miya: yup
2013-05-21 14:25 Miya: i havent fix the pattern yet on that pic
2013-05-21 14:25 Miya: well
2013-05-21 14:25 Kirino Kousaka: ;w;
2013-05-21 14:25 Miya: you can change the slider into 3 1/1 circle if you want
2013-05-21 14:26 Miya: maybe something like this http://puu.sh/2XWOy.jpg ?
2013-05-21 14:26 Kirino Kousaka: cool :D
2013-05-21 14:27 Miya: well
2013-05-21 14:27 Miya: make it good, my example is a bad pattern xD
2013-05-21 14:27 Kirino Kousaka: oh lol
2013-05-21 14:33 Kirino Kousaka: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/767824 \:D/
2013-05-21 14:33 Kirino Kousaka: having those 3 circles on the red tick would confuse beginners imo
2013-05-21 14:33 Miya: hmm
2013-05-21 14:33 Miya: okay, let me try it later ><
2013-05-21 14:34 Kirino Kousaka: okay, gotta fix the others :3
2013-05-21 14:34 Kirino Kousaka: just recheck XD
2013-05-21 14:34 Kirino Kousaka: after XD
2013-05-21 14:34 Miya: okay okay ><
2013-05-21 14:34 Kirino Kousaka: \>w</
2013-05-21 14:35 Miya: at normal add a circle here 00:37:635 - since you follow the vocal on the beginning of the combo ><
2013-05-21 14:36 Miya: it feels somewhat missing something xD
2013-05-21 14:36 Miya: 00:41:475 - same here
2013-05-21 14:36 Kirino Kousaka: okay wait ;w;
2013-05-21 14:36 Miya: okay okay
2013-05-21 14:37 Miya: gotta fix my suggestion later too at 00:37:875 (3) - xD
2013-05-21 14:37 Kirino Kousaka: okay XD
2013-05-21 14:43 Miya: normal rhthm need some fix too xD
2013-05-21 14:43 Kirino Kousaka: ;w;
2013-05-21 14:45 Miya: done with easy? o.o
2013-05-21 14:45 Kirino Kousaka: not yet ;w;
2013-05-21 14:45 Miya: ok ok ><
2013-05-21 14:46 Kirino Kousaka: ;w;
2013-05-21 14:47 Miya: is it hard? o.o
2013-05-21 14:47 Kirino Kousaka: not much, Natsu is bugging me D:
2013-05-21 14:47 Kirino Kousaka: so I ranked something D: http://puu.sh/2XXaQ.png
2013-05-21 14:47 Miya: lol maybe you can in the future xD
2013-05-21 14:48 Kirino Kousaka: lol XD
2013-05-21 14:58 Kirino Kousaka: finally XD
2013-05-21 14:58 Miya: that was long xD
2013-05-21 14:58 Miya: okay to normal now ><
2013-05-21 14:59 Kirino Kousaka: because Natsu ;w;
2013-05-21 14:59 Kirino Kousaka: uguuu ;w;
2013-05-21 15:00 Miya: ><
2013-05-21 15:00 Miya: ready?
2013-05-21 15:00 Kirino Kousaka: yes ;w;
2013-05-21 15:00 Miya: 00:10:035 (2,3) - umm, this should follow the music too
2013-05-21 15:01 Miya: well, to fix this
2013-05-21 15:01 Miya: delete 00:10:035 (2,3) -
2013-05-21 15:01 Miya: add a new circle here 00:10:035 -
2013-05-21 15:01 Kirino Kousaka: wait, I need to pee ;w;
2013-05-21 15:01 Kirino Kousaka: sorry ;w;
2013-05-21 15:01 Miya: lol
2013-05-21 15:01 Miya: just follow my instruction later
2013-05-21 15:02 Miya: add a slider here 00:10:395 - until 00:10:635 -
2013-05-21 15:02 Kirino Kousaka: okay back
2013-05-21 15:02 Miya: so fast o.o
2013-05-21 15:03 Kirino Kousaka: :3
2013-05-21 15:03 Miya: done with 00:10:035 (2,3) - case? :o
2013-05-21 15:03 Kirino Kousaka: yes :3
2013-05-21 15:04 Miya: okay next :3
2013-05-21 15:04 Miya: extend this slider by 1/4 00:13:875 (3) -
2013-05-21 15:04 Miya: since you make the same rhythm here 00:15:795 (3) -
2013-05-21 15:05 Kirino Kousaka: done :3
2013-05-21 15:05 Miya: next ><
2013-05-21 15:05 Kirino Kousaka: >w<
2013-05-21 15:05 Miya: 00:18:195 (3) - this should end by 1/4 forward too
2013-05-21 15:06 Miya: but it will be tricky so try this suggestion
2013-05-21 15:07 Kirino Kousaka: I don't know ;w;
2013-05-21 15:07 Miya: wait Andre pming me xD
2013-05-21 15:07 Kirino Kousaka: lolwhat XD
2013-05-21 15:07 Miya: Andrea*
2013-05-21 15:07 Miya: oh well, lets continue ><
2013-05-21 15:08 Miya: reduce this repeat by 1 00:17:235 (2) -
2013-05-21 15:08 Miya: umm nvm
2013-05-21 15:08 Miya: umm yeah lol
2013-05-21 15:09 Miya: 00:17:235 (2) - reduce repeat by 1, then add a new slider here 00:17:715 - until 00:18:315 -
2013-05-21 15:09 Miya: ofc you need to remove the circle here too 00:18:195 -
2013-05-21 15:09 Miya: ><
2013-05-21 15:09 Kirino Kousaka: wait, is this good? https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/767850
2013-05-21 15:10 Miya: i prefer my rhythm for consistencies ><
2013-05-21 15:10 Kirino Kousaka: okay wait :3
2013-05-21 15:10 Miya: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/767853
2013-05-21 15:10 Miya: like usual, dont follow the pattern lol
2013-05-21 15:12 Kirino Kousaka: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/767857 :D
2013-05-21 15:13 Miya: okay good, next ><
2013-05-21 15:13 Kirino Kousaka: >w<
2013-05-21 15:13 Miya: 00:21:555 (3) - same, extend by 1/4
2013-05-21 15:13 Miya: woops, 00:23:475 (3) - forgot a clap at the slider end
2013-05-21 15:14 Miya: 00:25:395 (2) - same here too, extend by 1/4
2013-05-21 15:15 Miya: for the next part, i dont think extending slider will be necessary ><
2013-05-21 15:15 Miya: but if you want to extend them, its good :3
2013-05-21 15:18 Kirino Kousaka: done, I didn't extend the others XD
2013-05-21 15:19 Miya: ok, fine ><
2013-05-21 15:19 Miya: 00:37:635 - add a circle here, vocal start here
2013-05-21 15:19 Kirino Kousaka: >w<
2013-05-21 15:19 Kirino Kousaka: done >w<
2013-05-21 15:19 Miya: after that
2013-05-21 15:19 Miya: 00:37:875 (3) - delete
2013-05-21 15:20 Kirino Kousaka: why? D:
2013-05-21 15:20 Miya: 00:38:115 (3) - move this slider to 00:37:875 - but make it end on the same spot
2013-05-21 15:20 Miya: for better rhythm of course :o
2013-05-21 15:20 Miya: dont forget to replace the hitsound :3
2013-05-21 15:21 Miya: it will be consistant with this part later 00:41:715 (3) -
2013-05-21 15:21 Kirino Kousaka: 00:37:875 (3) - should still end on 00:38:595 -
2013-05-21 15:21 Kirino Kousaka: ?
2013-05-21 15:21 Kirino Kousaka: or extend? :o
2013-05-21 15:21 Miya: extend to 00:38:835 -
2013-05-21 15:21 Kirino Kousaka: oh okay :3
2013-05-21 15:22 Miya: done? o.o
2013-05-21 15:22 Kirino Kousaka: wait XD
2013-05-21 15:22 Miya: ok ok ><
2013-05-21 15:23 Kirino Kousaka: done >w<
2013-05-21 15:23 Miya: add circle here 00:41:475 - :3
2013-05-21 15:24 Kirino Kousaka: done >w<
2013-05-21 15:24 Miya: same reason, the vocal start there
2013-05-21 15:24 Miya: ok
2013-05-21 15:24 Miya: oh, you forgot a whistle at slider start 00:41:715 (4) -
2013-05-21 15:24 Kirino Kousaka: added :3
2013-05-21 15:25 Miya: for kiai time
2013-05-21 15:25 Kirino Kousaka: >w<
2013-05-21 15:25 Miya: i think you can make it more interesting and harder
2013-05-21 15:25 Miya: well here is my suggestion
2013-05-21 15:25 Miya: 00:54:555 - it's better to follow vocal and the drum here
2013-05-21 15:25 Miya: soo
2013-05-21 15:26 Miya: hard version > 00:54:675 (2) - move this circle to 00:54:555 -
2013-05-21 15:26 Miya: then add a new circle here 00:54:915 -
2013-05-21 15:27 Miya: easy version > just change this circle 00:54:195 (1,2,3) - into slider
2013-05-21 15:27 Miya: xD
2013-05-21 15:27 Kirino Kousaka: easy :D
2013-05-21 15:28 Miya: ok ok, done? :3
2013-05-21 15:28 Kirino Kousaka: done :3
2013-05-21 15:29 Miya: 00:57:075 (1,2) - this slider doesnt follow the music perfectly :<
2013-05-21 15:29 Miya: hmm
2013-05-21 15:29 Miya: how about adding one more repeat on this slider? 00:57:075 (1) -
2013-05-21 15:29 Miya: then
2013-05-21 15:29 Miya: reduce one repeat of this slider 00:58:035 (2) -
2013-05-21 15:29 Miya: then move it to 00:58:275 -
2013-05-21 15:31 Kirino Kousaka: I don't know ;w;
2013-05-21 15:31 Miya: don't know what? o.o
2013-05-21 15:31 Kirino Kousaka: I think it still sounds weird
2013-05-21 15:31 Miya: the pattern?
2013-05-21 15:31 Kirino Kousaka: ;w;
2013-05-21 15:31 Miya: nope, it's fit the music imo
2013-05-21 15:31 Kirino Kousaka: I get it, but idk about it ;w;
2013-05-21 15:32 Miya: look, if you hear clearly, there is strong vocal "ta' at this time 00:57:795 -
2013-05-21 15:33 Miya: if you use your rhythm, you will miss that strong vocal "ta"
2013-05-21 15:33 Miya: why i place a slider here 00:58:275 (2) - ? it's to follow the vocal next
2013-05-21 15:34 Kirino Kousaka: 00:58:275 (3) - maybe I should let this end on 00:58:755 - to fit in the vocals :3
2013-05-21 15:34 Miya: no, i end the slider here 00:58:515 - to switch back to your drum rhythm
2013-05-21 15:35 Miya: since you dont follow vocal here 00:58:995 (1,2,3) -
2013-05-21 15:35 Miya: it will be weird later
2013-05-21 15:36 Kirino Kousaka: 00:57:075 (1,2) - I think this sounds better ;w;
2013-05-21 15:36 Miya: like what? gimme ss o.o
2013-05-21 15:36 Kirino Kousaka: oops
2013-05-21 15:36 Kirino Kousaka: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/767881 this
2013-05-21 15:36 Kirino Kousaka: wrong paste XD
2013-05-21 15:37 Miya: yeah, sure, it's work
2013-05-21 15:37 Miya: ><
2013-05-21 15:37 Miya: done?
2013-05-21 15:37 Kirino Kousaka: yes :3
2013-05-21 15:37 Miya: 00:59:715 (2) - remove this circle
2013-05-21 15:37 Miya: doesn't follow anything q.q
2013-05-21 15:38 Kirino Kousaka: done :3
2013-05-21 15:38 Miya: 01:02:835 (1,2,3) - try to follow vocal on this combo
2013-05-21 15:38 Miya: 1/1 is feel bland xD
2013-05-21 15:38 Kirino Kousaka: XD
2013-05-21 15:39 Miya: my rhythm, example > http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/767886
2013-05-21 15:42 Kirino Kousaka: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/767890 This sounds good, but the playability... I afraid XD
2013-05-21 15:42 Kirino Kousaka: I'm*
2013-05-21 15:43 Miya: well, use my own rhythm for more playability then :o
2013-05-21 15:43 Miya: my rhtym*
2013-05-21 15:43 Kirino Kousaka: okay :3 rhythm =w=
2013-05-21 15:44 Kirino Kousaka: done >w<
2013-05-21 15:44 Miya: done?
2013-05-21 15:45 Miya: ok :3
2013-05-21 15:45 Miya: 01:10:035 (5) - same case, should land on 1/4 beat earlier
2013-05-21 15:45 Miya: previous suggestion will work here too :3
2013-05-21 15:52 Miya: done? o.o
2013-05-21 15:52 Kirino Kousaka: yes >w<
2013-05-21 15:52 Miya: ok ok
2013-05-21 15:52 Miya: ><
2013-05-21 15:52 Kirino Kousaka: exactly >w<
2013-05-21 15:53 Miya: same suggestion, 01:18:195 (1,2,3) - , try to follow vocal here
2013-05-21 15:53 Miya: 1/1 is too bland xD
2013-05-21 15:53 Kirino Kousaka: okay wait :3
2013-05-21 15:54 Miya: ok ok ><
2013-05-21 15:54 Miya: tell me once you're done
2013-05-21 15:56 Kirino Kousaka: I used this :3 https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/767903
2013-05-21 15:57 Miya: okay, more better than 1/1 :3
2013-05-21 15:57 Miya: lets go to hard ><
2013-05-21 15:57 Kirino Kousaka: >w<
2013-05-21 15:58 Miya: on hard
2013-05-21 15:59 Kirino Kousaka: owo
2013-05-21 15:59 Miya: 00:39:315 (6) - just delete this circle, doesnt consistant with 00:37:395 - and 00:41:235 -
2013-05-21 16:00 Kirino Kousaka: done >w<
2013-05-21 16:00 Miya: and suprisingly your hard rhythm is more good than your previous 2 diff xD
2013-05-21 16:00 Kirino Kousaka: XD
2013-05-21 16:03 Miya: umm
2013-05-21 16:03 Miya: 00:44:355 (2) - whistle at slider end?
2013-05-21 16:03 Miya: 00:45:555 (1) - here too?
2013-05-21 16:03 Miya: here too 00:46:275 (4) - at sldier end?
2013-05-21 16:04 Kirino Kousaka: all fixed >w<
2013-05-21 16:04 Miya: how about adding whistle at every 1st and 3rd beat on kiai time too? o.o
2013-05-21 16:05 Miya: i see kiai time is lack of whistle ><
2013-05-21 16:05 Kirino Kousaka: well, you should've said that on [Normal] too XDD
2013-05-21 16:05 Miya: oh really? i but i hear some whistle back there xD
2013-05-21 16:05 Kirino Kousaka: I'll fix :3
2013-05-21 16:05 Miya: ok, normal too then lol
2013-05-21 16:05 Kirino Kousaka: okay okay >w<
2013-05-21 16:05 Miya: thats all for hard i think, nice ><
2013-05-21 16:09 Kirino Kousaka: wow >w<
2013-05-21 16:09 Miya: :o
2013-05-21 16:09 Kirino Kousaka: done on hard, editing normal :3
2013-05-21 16:09 Kirino Kousaka: and gotta grab some food again, I'm dying ;w;
2013-05-21 16:09 Kirino Kousaka: my snacks a while ago are not enough ;w;
2013-05-21 16:09 Kirino Kousaka: just junk foods ;w;
2013-05-21 16:09 Kirino Kousaka: brb ;w;
2013-05-21 16:10 Miya: ok ok xD


Saten
  1. 00:23:835 (4) - Nazi, but i think it will be good if you make this slider more blanket like this > http://puu.sh/2XYzq.jpg
  2. 00:35:715 (8) - I think the clap rhythm should end, so, place a clap on this circle? o.o
    Really nice diff, can't find anything else. :)



Well, since a lot of rhythm changed on both normal and easy, i think you need additional mod before ready to rank ><
Good luck, very moe song <3
Kudos star since this map already starred :P

Call me back once you got 3 mod ><
posted

Miya wrote:

IRC Mod :3

  1. Fixed a LOT of rhythm on both easy and normal ><
2013-05-21 13:55 Kirino Kousaka: i-is that... :OOOOOOOOOOO
2013-05-21 13:55 Miya: ACTION is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/225589 Sadohara Kaori - To Be Continued? (TV Size) [Easy]]
2013-05-21 13:55 Miya: xD
2013-05-21 13:55 Kirino Kousaka: ♥♥♥♥♥
2013-05-21 13:55 Kirino Kousaka: >w<
2013-05-21 13:56 Kirino Kousaka: inb4 Miya PM's \:D/
2013-05-21 13:56 Miya: lol
2013-05-21 13:56 Miya: you want irc mod or forum mod? i prefer irc mod :P
2013-05-21 13:56 Kirino Kousaka: well sure irc mod :3
2013-05-21 13:56 Miya: ok ><
2013-05-21 13:56 Miya: first
2013-05-21 13:57 Kirino Kousaka: but I need to eat some snacks first ;w;
2013-05-21 13:57 Miya: try fix a lot of problem here at forum mod, i lazy to retype xD
2013-05-21 13:57 Miya: http://puu.sh/2XWgi.png
2013-05-21 13:57 Kirino Kousaka: orz
2013-05-21 13:58 Kirino Kousaka: btw on general, many already have told us that
2013-05-21 13:58 Miya: yeah, continue it =3=
2013-05-21 13:58 Kirino Kousaka: Saten-san and I discussed it over, we decided to end on this part
2013-05-21 13:58 Miya: it really feel weird
2013-05-21 13:58 Kirino Kousaka: it's okay lol :o
2013-05-21 13:59 Miya: no, since you mostly map for the beat, but you end it when the vocal end ><
2013-05-21 13:59 Kirino Kousaka: we mapped with beats and vocals ;w;
2013-05-21 13:59 Kirino Kousaka: 00:06:555 (2) -
2013-05-21 14:00 Kirino Kousaka: on normal
2013-05-21 14:00 Kirino Kousaka: 01:00:195 (1,2,3) - on hard
2013-05-21 14:00 Kirino Kousaka: and w/e things ;w;
2013-05-21 14:00 Kirino Kousaka: saten-san won't agree ;w;
2013-05-21 14:00 Miya: lol why so lazy? xD
2013-05-21 14:01 Kirino Kousaka: I would, but saten-san won't ;w;
2013-05-21 14:01 Miya: its okay, since its guest difficulty ><
2013-05-21 14:01 Kirino Kousaka: consistency D:
2013-05-21 14:02 Kirino Kousaka: ACTION is listening to [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/222261 Sadohara Kaori - To Be Continued? (TV Size)]
2013-05-21 14:02 Miya: it's okay guest diff can be different =3=
2013-05-21 14:02 Kirino Kousaka: it ends the same way ;w;
2013-05-21 14:02 Kirino Kousaka: aww okay ;w;
2013-05-21 14:02 Kirino Kousaka: ACTION okayface*
2013-05-21 14:03 Miya: yup, its far more better
2013-05-21 14:03 Kirino Kousaka: but wait
2013-05-21 14:03 Kirino Kousaka: If I did, I should also map 00:01:395 -
2013-05-21 14:03 Miya: nope
2013-05-21 14:03 Kirino Kousaka: that's another reason
2013-05-21 14:03 Kirino Kousaka: why I won't ;w;
2013-05-21 14:04 Kirino Kousaka: like this
2013-05-21 14:04 Kirino Kousaka: ACTION is listening to [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/225046 Sadohara Kaori - To Be Continued? (TV Size)]
2013-05-21 14:04 Miya: why not?
2013-05-21 14:04 Miya: :o
2013-05-21 14:04 Miya: oh well
2013-05-21 14:04 Kirino Kousaka: orzzz
2013-05-21 14:04 Miya: just fix the other thing in easy first ><
2013-05-21 14:05 Kirino Kousaka: \:DDD/
2013-05-21 14:05 Kirino Kousaka: I will eat first, I will die ;w;
2013-05-21 14:05 Miya: ok ok ><
2013-05-21 14:05 Kirino Kousaka: thanks ;w;
2013-05-21 14:05 Miya: np :3
2013-05-21 14:15 Kirino Kousaka: back :3
2013-05-21 14:15 Miya: wb :3
2013-05-21 14:15 Kirino Kousaka: well, gotta fix :3
2013-05-21 14:15 Miya: well, tell me if you done with the easy mod, or have any question :P3
2013-05-21 14:15 Miya: :3*
2013-05-21 14:15 Miya: yup
2013-05-21 14:15 Kirino Kousaka: okay :3
2013-05-21 14:19 Kirino Kousaka: is this all for [Easy]? :3
2013-05-21 14:19 Miya: yup
2013-05-21 14:19 Miya: only for easy ><
2013-05-21 14:19 Kirino Kousaka: okay :3
2013-05-21 14:23 Kirino Kousaka: hmm
2013-05-21 14:23 Kirino Kousaka: 00:57:075 (1,2) - this ruins the spacing ;w;
2013-05-21 14:24 Miya: remap the pattern then o.o
2013-05-21 14:24 Miya: let me think
2013-05-21 14:24 Kirino Kousaka: okay ;w;
2013-05-21 14:24 Kirino Kousaka: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/767791 ?
2013-05-21 14:24 Miya: yup
2013-05-21 14:25 Miya: i havent fix the pattern yet on that pic
2013-05-21 14:25 Miya: well
2013-05-21 14:25 Kirino Kousaka: ;w;
2013-05-21 14:25 Miya: you can change the slider into 3 1/1 circle if you want
2013-05-21 14:26 Miya: maybe something like this http://puu.sh/2XWOy.jpg ?
2013-05-21 14:26 Kirino Kousaka: cool :D
2013-05-21 14:27 Miya: well
2013-05-21 14:27 Miya: make it good, my example is a bad pattern xD
2013-05-21 14:27 Kirino Kousaka: oh lol
2013-05-21 14:33 Kirino Kousaka: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/767824 \:D/
2013-05-21 14:33 Kirino Kousaka: having those 3 circles on the red tick would confuse beginners imo
2013-05-21 14:33 Miya: hmm
2013-05-21 14:33 Miya: okay, let me try it later ><
2013-05-21 14:34 Kirino Kousaka: okay, gotta fix the others :3
2013-05-21 14:34 Kirino Kousaka: just recheck XD
2013-05-21 14:34 Kirino Kousaka: after XD
2013-05-21 14:34 Miya: okay okay ><
2013-05-21 14:34 Kirino Kousaka: \>w</
2013-05-21 14:35 Miya: at normal add a circle here 00:37:635 - since you follow the vocal on the beginning of the combo ><
2013-05-21 14:36 Miya: it feels somewhat missing something xD
2013-05-21 14:36 Miya: 00:41:475 - same here
2013-05-21 14:36 Kirino Kousaka: okay wait ;w;
2013-05-21 14:36 Miya: okay okay
2013-05-21 14:37 Miya: gotta fix my suggestion later too at 00:37:875 (3) - xD
2013-05-21 14:37 Kirino Kousaka: okay XD
2013-05-21 14:43 Miya: normal rhthm need some fix too xD
2013-05-21 14:43 Kirino Kousaka: ;w;
2013-05-21 14:45 Miya: done with easy? o.o
2013-05-21 14:45 Kirino Kousaka: not yet ;w;
2013-05-21 14:45 Miya: ok ok ><
2013-05-21 14:46 Kirino Kousaka: ;w;
2013-05-21 14:47 Miya: is it hard? o.o
2013-05-21 14:47 Kirino Kousaka: not much, Natsu is bugging me D:
2013-05-21 14:47 Kirino Kousaka: so I ranked something D: http://puu.sh/2XXaQ.png
2013-05-21 14:47 Miya: lol maybe you can in the future xD
2013-05-21 14:48 Kirino Kousaka: lol XD
2013-05-21 14:58 Kirino Kousaka: finally XD
2013-05-21 14:58 Miya: that was long xD
2013-05-21 14:58 Miya: okay to normal now ><
2013-05-21 14:59 Kirino Kousaka: because Natsu ;w;
2013-05-21 14:59 Kirino Kousaka: uguuu ;w;
2013-05-21 15:00 Miya: ><
2013-05-21 15:00 Miya: ready?
2013-05-21 15:00 Kirino Kousaka: yes ;w;
2013-05-21 15:00 Miya: 00:10:035 (2,3) - umm, this should follow the music too
2013-05-21 15:01 Miya: well, to fix this
2013-05-21 15:01 Miya: delete 00:10:035 (2,3) -
2013-05-21 15:01 Miya: add a new circle here 00:10:035 -
2013-05-21 15:01 Kirino Kousaka: wait, I need to pee ;w;
2013-05-21 15:01 Kirino Kousaka: sorry ;w;
2013-05-21 15:01 Miya: lol
2013-05-21 15:01 Miya: just follow my instruction later
2013-05-21 15:02 Miya: add a slider here 00:10:395 - until 00:10:635 -
2013-05-21 15:02 Kirino Kousaka: okay back
2013-05-21 15:02 Miya: so fast o.o
2013-05-21 15:03 Kirino Kousaka: :3
2013-05-21 15:03 Miya: done with 00:10:035 (2,3) - case? :o
2013-05-21 15:03 Kirino Kousaka: yes :3
2013-05-21 15:04 Miya: okay next :3
2013-05-21 15:04 Miya: extend this slider by 1/4 00:13:875 (3) -
2013-05-21 15:04 Miya: since you make the same rhythm here 00:15:795 (3) -
2013-05-21 15:05 Kirino Kousaka: done :3
2013-05-21 15:05 Miya: next ><
2013-05-21 15:05 Kirino Kousaka: >w<
2013-05-21 15:05 Miya: 00:18:195 (3) - this should end by 1/4 forward too
2013-05-21 15:06 Miya: but it will be tricky so try this suggestion
2013-05-21 15:07 Kirino Kousaka: I don't know ;w;
2013-05-21 15:07 Miya: wait Andre pming me xD
2013-05-21 15:07 Kirino Kousaka: lolwhat XD
2013-05-21 15:07 Miya: Andrea*
2013-05-21 15:07 Miya: oh well, lets continue ><
2013-05-21 15:08 Miya: reduce this repeat by 1 00:17:235 (2) -
2013-05-21 15:08 Miya: umm nvm
2013-05-21 15:08 Miya: umm yeah lol
2013-05-21 15:09 Miya: 00:17:235 (2) - reduce repeat by 1, then add a new slider here 00:17:715 - until 00:18:315 -
2013-05-21 15:09 Miya: ofc you need to remove the circle here too 00:18:195 -
2013-05-21 15:09 Miya: ><
2013-05-21 15:09 Kirino Kousaka: wait, is this good? https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/767850
2013-05-21 15:10 Miya: i prefer my rhythm for consistencies ><
2013-05-21 15:10 Kirino Kousaka: okay wait :3
2013-05-21 15:10 Miya: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/767853
2013-05-21 15:10 Miya: like usual, dont follow the pattern lol
2013-05-21 15:12 Kirino Kousaka: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/767857 :D
2013-05-21 15:13 Miya: okay good, next ><
2013-05-21 15:13 Kirino Kousaka: >w<
2013-05-21 15:13 Miya: 00:21:555 (3) - same, extend by 1/4
2013-05-21 15:13 Miya: woops, 00:23:475 (3) - forgot a clap at the slider end
2013-05-21 15:14 Miya: 00:25:395 (2) - same here too, extend by 1/4
2013-05-21 15:15 Miya: for the next part, i dont think extending slider will be necessary ><
2013-05-21 15:15 Miya: but if you want to extend them, its good :3
2013-05-21 15:18 Kirino Kousaka: done, I didn't extend the others XD
2013-05-21 15:19 Miya: ok, fine ><
2013-05-21 15:19 Miya: 00:37:635 - add a circle here, vocal start here
2013-05-21 15:19 Kirino Kousaka: >w<
2013-05-21 15:19 Kirino Kousaka: done >w<
2013-05-21 15:19 Miya: after that
2013-05-21 15:19 Miya: 00:37:875 (3) - delete
2013-05-21 15:20 Kirino Kousaka: why? D:
2013-05-21 15:20 Miya: 00:38:115 (3) - move this slider to 00:37:875 - but make it end on the same spot
2013-05-21 15:20 Miya: for better rhythm of course :o
2013-05-21 15:20 Miya: dont forget to replace the hitsound :3
2013-05-21 15:21 Miya: it will be consistant with this part later 00:41:715 (3) -
2013-05-21 15:21 Kirino Kousaka: 00:37:875 (3) - should still end on 00:38:595 -
2013-05-21 15:21 Kirino Kousaka: ?
2013-05-21 15:21 Kirino Kousaka: or extend? :o
2013-05-21 15:21 Miya: extend to 00:38:835 -
2013-05-21 15:21 Kirino Kousaka: oh okay :3
2013-05-21 15:22 Miya: done? o.o
2013-05-21 15:22 Kirino Kousaka: wait XD
2013-05-21 15:22 Miya: ok ok ><
2013-05-21 15:23 Kirino Kousaka: done >w<
2013-05-21 15:23 Miya: add circle here 00:41:475 - :3
2013-05-21 15:24 Kirino Kousaka: done >w<
2013-05-21 15:24 Miya: same reason, the vocal start there
2013-05-21 15:24 Miya: ok
2013-05-21 15:24 Miya: oh, you forgot a whistle at slider start 00:41:715 (4) -
2013-05-21 15:24 Kirino Kousaka: added :3
2013-05-21 15:25 Miya: for kiai time
2013-05-21 15:25 Kirino Kousaka: >w<
2013-05-21 15:25 Miya: i think you can make it more interesting and harder
2013-05-21 15:25 Miya: well here is my suggestion
2013-05-21 15:25 Miya: 00:54:555 - it's better to follow vocal and the drum here
2013-05-21 15:25 Miya: soo
2013-05-21 15:26 Miya: hard version > 00:54:675 (2) - move this circle to 00:54:555 -
2013-05-21 15:26 Miya: then add a new circle here 00:54:915 -
2013-05-21 15:27 Miya: easy version > just change this circle 00:54:195 (1,2,3) - into slider
2013-05-21 15:27 Miya: xD
2013-05-21 15:27 Kirino Kousaka: easy :D
2013-05-21 15:28 Miya: ok ok, done? :3
2013-05-21 15:28 Kirino Kousaka: done :3
2013-05-21 15:29 Miya: 00:57:075 (1,2) - this slider doesnt follow the music perfectly :<
2013-05-21 15:29 Miya: hmm
2013-05-21 15:29 Miya: how about adding one more repeat on this slider? 00:57:075 (1) -
2013-05-21 15:29 Miya: then
2013-05-21 15:29 Miya: reduce one repeat of this slider 00:58:035 (2) -
2013-05-21 15:29 Miya: then move it to 00:58:275 -
2013-05-21 15:31 Kirino Kousaka: I don't know ;w;
2013-05-21 15:31 Miya: don't know what? o.o
2013-05-21 15:31 Kirino Kousaka: I think it still sounds weird
2013-05-21 15:31 Miya: the pattern?
2013-05-21 15:31 Kirino Kousaka: ;w;
2013-05-21 15:31 Miya: nope, it's fit the music imo
2013-05-21 15:31 Kirino Kousaka: I get it, but idk about it ;w;
2013-05-21 15:32 Miya: look, if you hear clearly, there is strong vocal "ta' at this time 00:57:795 -
2013-05-21 15:33 Miya: if you use your rhythm, you will miss that strong vocal "ta"
2013-05-21 15:33 Miya: why i place a slider here 00:58:275 (2) - ? it's to follow the vocal next
2013-05-21 15:34 Kirino Kousaka: 00:58:275 (3) - maybe I should let this end on 00:58:755 - to fit in the vocals :3
2013-05-21 15:34 Miya: no, i end the slider here 00:58:515 - to switch back to your drum rhythm
2013-05-21 15:35 Miya: since you dont follow vocal here 00:58:995 (1,2,3) -
2013-05-21 15:35 Miya: it will be weird later
2013-05-21 15:36 Kirino Kousaka: 00:57:075 (1,2) - I think this sounds better ;w;
2013-05-21 15:36 Miya: like what? gimme ss o.o
2013-05-21 15:36 Kirino Kousaka: oops
2013-05-21 15:36 Kirino Kousaka: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/767881 this
2013-05-21 15:36 Kirino Kousaka: wrong paste XD
2013-05-21 15:37 Miya: yeah, sure, it's work
2013-05-21 15:37 Miya: ><
2013-05-21 15:37 Miya: done?
2013-05-21 15:37 Kirino Kousaka: yes :3
2013-05-21 15:37 Miya: 00:59:715 (2) - remove this circle
2013-05-21 15:37 Miya: doesn't follow anything q.q
2013-05-21 15:38 Kirino Kousaka: done :3
2013-05-21 15:38 Miya: 01:02:835 (1,2,3) - try to follow vocal on this combo
2013-05-21 15:38 Miya: 1/1 is feel bland xD
2013-05-21 15:38 Kirino Kousaka: XD
2013-05-21 15:39 Miya: my rhythm, example > http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/767886
2013-05-21 15:42 Kirino Kousaka: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/767890 This sounds good, but the playability... I afraid XD
2013-05-21 15:42 Kirino Kousaka: I'm*
2013-05-21 15:43 Miya: well, use my own rhythm for more playability then :o
2013-05-21 15:43 Miya: my rhtym*
2013-05-21 15:43 Kirino Kousaka: okay :3 rhythm =w=
2013-05-21 15:44 Kirino Kousaka: done >w<
2013-05-21 15:44 Miya: done?
2013-05-21 15:45 Miya: ok :3
2013-05-21 15:45 Miya: 01:10:035 (5) - same case, should land on 1/4 beat earlier
2013-05-21 15:45 Miya: previous suggestion will work here too :3
2013-05-21 15:52 Miya: done? o.o
2013-05-21 15:52 Kirino Kousaka: yes >w<
2013-05-21 15:52 Miya: ok ok
2013-05-21 15:52 Miya: ><
2013-05-21 15:52 Kirino Kousaka: exactly >w<
2013-05-21 15:53 Miya: same suggestion, 01:18:195 (1,2,3) - , try to follow vocal here
2013-05-21 15:53 Miya: 1/1 is too bland xD
2013-05-21 15:53 Kirino Kousaka: okay wait :3
2013-05-21 15:54 Miya: ok ok ><
2013-05-21 15:54 Miya: tell me once you're done
2013-05-21 15:56 Kirino Kousaka: I used this :3 https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/767903
2013-05-21 15:57 Miya: okay, more better than 1/1 :3
2013-05-21 15:57 Miya: lets go to hard ><
2013-05-21 15:57 Kirino Kousaka: >w<
2013-05-21 15:58 Miya: on hard
2013-05-21 15:59 Kirino Kousaka: owo
2013-05-21 15:59 Miya: 00:39:315 (6) - just delete this circle, doesnt consistant with 00:37:395 - and 00:41:235 -
2013-05-21 16:00 Kirino Kousaka: done >w<
2013-05-21 16:00 Miya: and suprisingly your hard rhythm is more good than your previous 2 diff xD
2013-05-21 16:00 Kirino Kousaka: XD
2013-05-21 16:03 Miya: umm
2013-05-21 16:03 Miya: 00:44:355 (2) - whistle at slider end?
2013-05-21 16:03 Miya: 00:45:555 (1) - here too?
2013-05-21 16:03 Miya: here too 00:46:275 (4) - at sldier end?
2013-05-21 16:04 Kirino Kousaka: all fixed >w<
2013-05-21 16:04 Miya: how about adding whistle at every 1st and 3rd beat on kiai time too? o.o
2013-05-21 16:05 Miya: i see kiai time is lack of whistle ><
2013-05-21 16:05 Kirino Kousaka: well, you should've said that on [Normal] too XDD
2013-05-21 16:05 Miya: oh really? i but i hear some whistle back there xD
2013-05-21 16:05 Kirino Kousaka: I'll fix :3
2013-05-21 16:05 Miya: ok, normal too then lol
2013-05-21 16:05 Kirino Kousaka: okay okay >w<
2013-05-21 16:05 Miya: thats all for hard i think, nice ><
2013-05-21 16:09 Kirino Kousaka: wow >w<
2013-05-21 16:09 Miya: :o
2013-05-21 16:09 Kirino Kousaka: done on hard, editing normal :3
2013-05-21 16:09 Kirino Kousaka: and gotta grab some food again, I'm dying ;w;
2013-05-21 16:09 Kirino Kousaka: my snacks a while ago are not enough ;w;
2013-05-21 16:09 Kirino Kousaka: just junk foods ;w;
2013-05-21 16:09 Kirino Kousaka: brb ;w;
2013-05-21 16:10 Miya: ok ok xD


Saten
  1. 00:23:835 (4) - Nazi, but i think it will be good if you make this slider more blanket like this > http://puu.sh/2XYzq.jpg
  2. 00:35:715 (8) - I think the clap rhythm should end, so, place a clap on this circle? o.o
    Really nice diff, can't find anything else. :)



Well, since a lot of rhythm changed on both normal and easy, i think you need additional mod before ready to rank ><
Good luck, very moe song <3
Kudos star since this map already starred :P

Call me back once you got 3 mod ><
Yay thank you for the mod Miya! >w<
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Hi o3o lazy mod from in game request KirinOni


Saten:
  1. 00:33:075 maybe make it curved like you did on 00:32:115 (2,3,7) - actual way feel so weird for me is like out of the combo pattern maybe just me...
  2. 00:35:955 add whistle feel this place so empty

    woah really love this diff
Hard:
  1. why cs3? so weird in hard imo but is ok xD
  2. 00:06:675 remove clap is not following music orz
  3. 00:20:355 stack this perfect with the tail of 00:21:075 yes im nazi ;)
  4. 00:35:955 is a relax point in music i dont think finish fit this maybe add whistle better imo
  5. 00:39:555 add circle to fit the vocals? i feel so empty without it orz
  6. 00:41:475 ^
  7. 00:47:475 add circle then start spinner here 00:47:595 gonna follow better music imo
  8. 01:00:435 remove clap then add clap in 01:00:675 fit better the music imo
Normal:
  1. AR +1 for better diff spread since easy got 3 and hard got 7 5 gonna fit better for normal
  2. 00:12:915 x:42 y:195 (nazi) o3o
  3. 00:25:395 x:110 y:228 to fix the little distance error also better blank with previous o.o
  4. 00:34:995 (2,1) - why this jump on normal orz? xD
  5. 00:35:955 same as hard
  6. 01:14:355 (1,2,3) - fix distance is little but is better if is the same xD
Easy:
  1. 00:06:675 same as hard
  2. 00:35:955 ^
  3. 00:41:715 NC
  4. 00:46:995 move this to x:341 y:183 since is more natural to play like you did on 00:43:635 (1,2) -
  5. 01:06:675 (1,2) - fix distance
Well thats all I can suggest here GL fun map :D
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Miya wrote:

Saten
  1. 00:23:835 (4) - Nazi, but i think it will be good if you make this slider more blanket like this > http://puu.sh/2XYzq.jpg I think the spreading looks just as good imo
  2. 00:35:715 (8) - I think the clap rhythm should end, so, place a clap on this circle? o.o I think it fits better the way it is with the complex patterns I used overall
    Really nice diff, can't find anything else. :)

Natsu wrote:

Saten:
  1. 00:33:075 maybe make it curved like you did on 00:32:115 (2,3,7) - actual way feel so weird for me is like out of the combo pattern maybe just me... it doesn't look weird imo o_O
  2. 00:35:955 add whistle feel this place so empty hmm? there's already a whistle here o:

    woah really love this diff (●´ω`)
posted

Natsu wrote:

Hi o3o lazy mod from in game request KirinOni LOL

Hard:
  1. why cs3? so weird in hard imo but is ok xD lol
  2. 00:06:675 remove clap is not following music orz I think it's fine orz
  3. 00:20:355 stack this perfect with the tail of 00:21:075 yes im nazi ;)nah, looks fine, it's stacked on 00:18:915 (7). :3
  4. 00:35:955 is a relax point in music i dont think finish fit this maybe add whistle better imo Fixed~
  5. 00:39:555 add circle to fit the vocals? i feel so empty without it orz Added~
  6. 00:41:475 ^ Added~
  7. 00:47:475 add circle then start spinner here 00:47:595 gonna follow better music imo Fixed~
  8. 01:00:435 remove clap then add clap in 01:00:675 fit better the music imo added whistle on 01:00:675 instead~
Normal:
  1. AR +1 for better diff spread since easy got 3 and hard got 7 5 gonna fit better for normal nope, it works fine as it is =w=
  2. 00:12:915 x:42 y:195 (nazi) o3o moved 00:12:915 (1) to x:44 y:196 instead =w=
  3. 00:25:395 x:110 y:228 to fix the little distance error also better blank with previous o.o moved 00:25:395 (2) to x:112 y:228 instead
  4. 00:34:995 (2,1) - why this jump on normal orz? xD nope, Andrea suggested that one =w=
  5. 00:35:955 same as hard fixed~
  6. 01:14:355 (1,2,3) - fix distance is little but is better if is the same xD fixed~
Easy:
  1. 00:06:675 same as hard no change orz
  2. 00:35:955 ^ fixed~
  3. 00:41:715 NC fixed~
  4. 00:46:995 move this to x:341 y:183 since is more natural to play like you did on 00:43:635 (1,2) - fixed~
  5. 01:06:675 (1,2) - fix distance fixed~
Well thats all I can suggest here GL fun map :D
Thanks for the mod Baka Natsu! \:D/
posted
hi


Saten

  1. 00:33:075 (4) - 0,0 http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/771145
  2. 00:52:395 (2,4) - i suggest http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/771167 www


Hard

  1. 00:07:755 (2,3) - lyrics rhythm is http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/771161
  2. 00:10:155 (3) - this doesn't feel comfortable, i suggest remove
  3. 00:18:195 (5) - ^
  4. 00:33:075 (5) - i think (5) could make a M shape http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/771162
  5. 00:53:475 (2) - remove this?
  6. 01:00:675 (3) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/771164


Normal

  1. 00:29:235 (3,3) - end on blue tick ww
  2. 00:32:115 (1,2,3,4) - square!
  3. 00:57:075 (1) - 3/4 ww http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/771171 771171


Easy

  1. 00:57:075 (1) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/771174
  2. 01:08:115 (2) - looks too close


ww
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[CSGA]Ar3sgice wrote:

Saten

  1. 00:33:075 (4) - 0,0 http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/771145 I'll keep it as it is
  2. 00:52:395 (2,4) - i suggest http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/771167 www sure, looks pretty neat
thanks

http://puu.sh/2Zxlf/67a5c37dc3.osu
posted

[CSGA]Ar3sgice wrote:

hi Hello~ >w</

Hard

  1. 00:07:755 (2,3) - lyrics rhythm is http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/771161 fixed~
  2. 00:10:155 (3) - this doesn't feel comfortable, i suggest remove fixed~
  3. 00:18:195 (5) - ^ fixed~
  4. 00:33:075 (5) - i think (5) could make a M shape http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/771162 fixed~
  5. 00:53:475 (2) - remove this? nope. owo
  6. 01:00:675 (3) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/771164 meh, looks fine as it is imo. =w=


Normal

  1. 00:29:235 (3,3) - end on blue tick ww fixed~
  2. 00:32:115 (1,2,3,4) - square! I nailed it. owo
  3. 00:57:075 (1) - 3/4 ww http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/771171 no change owo


Easy

  1. 00:57:075 (1) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/771174 Fixed~
  2. 01:08:115 (2) - looks too close owo? no change~


ww
Thanks for the mod [CSGA]Ar3sgice! >w<

Saten wrote:

[CSGA]Ar3sgice wrote:

Saten

  1. 00:33:075 (4) - 0,0 http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/771145 I'll keep it as it is
  2. 00:52:395 (2,4) - i suggest http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/771167 www sure, looks pretty neat
thanks

http://puu.sh/2Zxlf/67a5c37dc3.osu
Updated! Thanks Saten-san! >w<
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22:57 Kirino Kousaka: hello owo/
22:57 UnitedWeSin: hi there
22:57 Kirino Kousaka: do you have some time for a quick mod? ;w;
22:58 UnitedWeSin: like irc?
22:58 Kirino Kousaka: possible
22:58 Kirino Kousaka: :3
22:58 UnitedWeSin: i can take a look
22:58 Kirino Kousaka: do you? ;w;
22:58 Kirino Kousaka: :O
22:58 Kirino Kousaka: ♥
22:58 *Kirino Kousaka is listening to [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/225589 Sadohara Kaori - To Be Continued? (TV Size)]
22:59 UnitedWeSin: ah yes :)
22:59 Kirino Kousaka: yay >w<
23:11 UnitedWeSin: the circle size for hard surprised me lol
23:11 Kirino Kousaka: how was it? owo
23:11 Kirino Kousaka: lol
23:11 Kirino Kousaka: if I adjust it by 1, it feels so small orz
23:11 UnitedWeSin: it's fine it works well
23:12 Kirino Kousaka: lol
23:12 Kirino Kousaka: I get that a lot. =w=
23:12 UnitedWeSin: 00:19:155 (1) - seems strange shape
23:12 UnitedWeSin: how about a nice wave slider?
23:12 Kirino Kousaka: I see, wait =w=
23:13 UnitedWeSin: http://puu.sh/2ZYu0.png
23:14 Kirino Kousaka: nailed it \:D/ http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/772451
23:14 UnitedWeSin: :)
23:15 UnitedWeSin: nazi, but I would select the 00:22:515 (1,2,3,4) - and move it slightly so that the head of the 2 is overlapped perfectly with the head of the 00:24:915 (2) -
23:15 UnitedWeSin: nazi, but I would select the 00:22:515 (1,2,3,4) - and move it slightly so that the head of the 2 is overlapped perfectly with the head of the 00:24:915 (2) -
23:15 UnitedWeSin: doesn't really matter but its just a few grids to the left and it looks nicer
23:16 Kirino Kousaka: hmm, wait
23:16 Kirino Kousaka: fixed :3
23:17 UnitedWeSin: 00:37:395 - i really really really wish there was a note here ;_;
23:17 UnitedWeSin: i know it follows vocals but that's a long wait -.-
23:18 Kirino Kousaka: lol
23:18 Kirino Kousaka: wait
23:18 UnitedWeSin: if you don't want to
23:18 UnitedWeSin: you could changethe placement on 00:37:635 (2,3,4,5) -
23:18 UnitedWeSin: to make it more that 1.0 spacing
23:18 UnitedWeSin: to the 2 that is
23:18 Kirino Kousaka: wait, I didn't get much of that XD
23:19 UnitedWeSin: sorry ;_;
23:19 Kirino Kousaka: no, I'm the dumb one here ;w;
23:20 UnitedWeSin: sec brb
23:20 Kirino Kousaka: oki :3
23:22 UnitedWeSin: ok
23:22 UnitedWeSin: coffee is ready :3
23:22 Kirino Kousaka: lol :3
23:23 Kirino Kousaka: what to do 00:37:635 (2,3,4,5) -
23:23 Kirino Kousaka: =w=
23:23 UnitedWeSin: sec lemme see
23:27 UnitedWeSin: lets move on :)
23:27 Kirino Kousaka: okay XD
23:27 UnitedWeSin: i'll come back to that
23:27 UnitedWeSin: 00:41:715 (3,1,2) - try to make placement look nicer
23:27 UnitedWeSin: i suggest angle the 3 more down and have the 1 and 2 at the same angle
23:27 UnitedWeSin: like this
23:28 UnitedWeSin: http://puu.sh/2ZYQu.png
23:28 UnitedWeSin: my pictures slow -.-
23:28 UnitedWeSin: anyways you can use more than 1.0 distance snap there imo
23:28 UnitedWeSin: it looks better and plays more smooth
23:29 Kirino Kousaka: on 00:41:715 (3,1,2) - ?
23:29 UnitedWeSin: yes
23:29 Kirino Kousaka: okay wait
23:30 Kirino Kousaka: only for those three?
23:30 Kirino Kousaka: lol
23:30 Kirino Kousaka: I'll see
23:30 UnitedWeSin: 00:50:355 (1,2,1) - also here
23:30 UnitedWeSin: please use more that .4 snap -.-
23:30 UnitedWeSin: 1.0 works well
23:30 UnitedWeSin: the repeating slider overlap too much
23:31 Kirino Kousaka: I'll use 1.4? so the sliders don't overlap much?
23:31 UnitedWeSin: no 1.0 is best
23:31 Kirino Kousaka: oh
23:31 UnitedWeSin: 1.0 plays natural
23:31 Kirino Kousaka: I thought "please use more than .4" XD
23:32 UnitedWeSin: ;_;
23:33 UnitedWeSin: here's what I would suggest
23:33 UnitedWeSin: remove a repeat from the 00:50:835 (2) -
23:33 UnitedWeSin: it's overmapped
23:33 Kirino Kousaka: I think not, since I here the music :<
23:33 UnitedWeSin: http://puu.sh/2ZYZ6.png
23:33 Kirino Kousaka: hear*
23:34 Kirino Kousaka: orz
23:34 UnitedWeSin: at 00:51:195 - there is no drum sound
23:34 UnitedWeSin: so it's better to have a gap
23:34 Kirino Kousaka: I see
23:35 Kirino Kousaka: how about the pattern of these sliders?
23:35 Kirino Kousaka: what goes nice?
23:35 UnitedWeSin: of the 00:50:355 (1,2) -
23:35 UnitedWeSin: ?
23:35 Kirino Kousaka: yes :3
23:35 UnitedWeSin: how about that picture?
23:35 UnitedWeSin: it's up to you :)
23:36 UnitedWeSin: place then how you like
23:36 UnitedWeSin: but 1.0 spacing is best imo
23:36 Kirino Kousaka: oh
23:36 Kirino Kousaka: I didn't notice the picture orz
23:36 Kirino Kousaka: okay wait
23:39 Kirino Kousaka: oops dc
23:39 UnitedWeSin: :D
23:39 Kirino Kousaka: sorry about that
23:39 Kirino Kousaka: what did I miss>
23:39 Kirino Kousaka: :3?
23:39 UnitedWeSin: nothing xD
23:39 UnitedWeSin: are you done with 00:50:355 (1,2) - ?
23:40 Kirino Kousaka: oh :3
23:40 Kirino Kousaka: well yes :3
23:40 Kirino Kousaka: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/772469
23:41 UnitedWeSin: ok well at 00:37:635 -
23:41 Kirino Kousaka: :3
23:41 UnitedWeSin: i don't like rhythm -.-
23:41 Kirino Kousaka: ... ;w;
23:42 UnitedWeSin: maybe http://puu.sh/2ZZ9e.png
23:42 Kirino Kousaka: but it follows the vocal ;w;
23:42 Kirino Kousaka: vocals*
23:42 UnitedWeSin: the 00:38:355 (5) - isn't following voclas
23:42 UnitedWeSin: vocals
23:43 Kirino Kousaka: =w=
23:43 Kirino Kousaka: I see =w=
23:44 UnitedWeSin: if you want to :D
23:44 Kirino Kousaka: wait =w=
23:44 UnitedWeSin: make spacing to the 00:37:635 (2) - bigger than 1.0
23:44 Kirino Kousaka: I'm experimenting =w=
23:44 UnitedWeSin: like the 00:41:475 (2) -
23:47 Kirino Kousaka: done =w=
23:47 UnitedWeSin: :D
23:47 UnitedWeSin: wanna upload or move on?
23:47 Kirino Kousaka: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/772474
23:48 Kirino Kousaka: well, it's up to you :3
23:48 Kirino Kousaka: if you want to see or just continue =w=
23:48 UnitedWeSin: normal needs work -.-
23:48 Kirino Kousaka: orz
23:48 UnitedWeSin: ;_;
23:48 Kirino Kousaka: Anything else for [Hard] ? ;w;
23:49 UnitedWeSin: that's all that really bothers me in hard
23:49 Kirino Kousaka: okay \:3/
23:49 Kirino Kousaka: move to [Normal] then? :3
23:49 UnitedWeSin: yep
23:49 Kirino Kousaka: :3
23:50 UnitedWeSin: 00:13:875 (3,1,2,3) - try to make placement look better
23:50 UnitedWeSin: the 00:13:875 (3,3) - overlap
23:50 UnitedWeSin: in a bad way
23:50 UnitedWeSin: http://puu.sh/2ZZjG.png
23:50 UnitedWeSin: try flipping the 00:15:795 (3) around
23:51 UnitedWeSin: and place it so the 00:14:835 (1,2,3) - are all blanketing the 00:13:875 (3) -
23:51 Kirino Kousaka: okay :3
23:52 UnitedWeSin: 00:06:555 (2,2) - i really don't like this -.-
23:53 Kirino Kousaka: I know
23:53 Kirino Kousaka: blue tick
23:53 Kirino Kousaka: =w=
23:54 Kirino Kousaka: but I have found no good solutions for it so far =w=
23:54 Kirino Kousaka: wait, still fixing 00:14:835 (1,2,3) -
23:58 UnitedWeSin: k
23:58 UnitedWeSin: dun?
23:58 Kirino Kousaka: yes :3
23:59 UnitedWeSin: 00:31:155 (3) - don't you want this to end on the blue tick00:31:755 - ?
23:59 Kirino Kousaka: true dat. =w=
23:59 Kirino Kousaka: wait =w=
23:59 UnitedWeSin: =w=
00:00 Kirino Kousaka: done =w=
00:00 UnitedWeSin: i think your rhythm at beginning will confuse people
00:01 UnitedWeSin: can you make it more simple?
00:01 UnitedWeSin: http://puu.sh/2ZZxd.png
00:01 UnitedWeSin: just a sample
00:01 Kirino Kousaka: wait
00:05 Kirino Kousaka: done =w=
00:06 UnitedWeSin: `:3
00:06 UnitedWeSin: 00:50:355 -
00:06 UnitedWeSin: please add something I beg you ;_;
00:06 UnitedWeSin: http://puu.sh/2ZZAV.png
00:06 UnitedWeSin: just a 1/2 slider with a repeat
00:06 UnitedWeSin: fits so nice
00:06 Kirino Kousaka: wait wait XD
00:09 Kirino Kousaka: done =w=
00:09 UnitedWeSin: 00:57:075 (1) - please don't have 2 repeats on this I beg you ;_;
00:10 UnitedWeSin: the slider is too short for that
00:10 UnitedWeSin: remove one repeat
00:10 UnitedWeSin: then add cricle at 00:57:795 -
00:11 UnitedWeSin: http://puu.sh/2ZZIs.png
00:11 UnitedWeSin: i say that because it's just more intuitive for the player
00:13 Kirino Kousaka: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/772493
00:13 *Kirino Kousaka runs
00:13 UnitedWeSin: yea that's fine :3
00:13 UnitedWeSin: do the same thing at 01:20:115 (5) - please ;_;
00:14 UnitedWeSin: change to two 1/2 sliders
00:14 UnitedWeSin: plays so much better
00:14 Kirino Kousaka: =w=d
00:15 UnitedWeSin: :3
00:15 Kirino Kousaka: done =w=d
00:16 UnitedWeSin: ready for rank after that imo :3
00:16 Kirino Kousaka: :O
00:16 Kirino Kousaka: how about [Easy] ? :O
00:17 UnitedWeSin: will check
00:17 Kirino Kousaka: okay :3
00:17 UnitedWeSin: again I wish you would add something at 00:50:355 -
00:17 Kirino Kousaka: wait, I'm fixing things for normalXD
00:17 UnitedWeSin: xD
00:18 UnitedWeSin: maybe it's better not to though
00:18 UnitedWeSin: the easy is really good
00:19 Kirino Kousaka: :O
00:19 UnitedWeSin: just one more thing in normal
00:19 UnitedWeSin: 01:08:595 (3,4,1) - this placement -.-
00:20 Kirino Kousaka: what to do ;w;
00:21 UnitedWeSin: maybe just rotate the 01:08:595 (3) - a bit
00:21 UnitedWeSin: :3
00:21 UnitedWeSin: http://puu.sh/2ZZV6.png
00:22 UnitedWeSin: idk I'm nazi -.-
00:22 Kirino Kousaka: how about blanket 01:09:555 (4) - with 01:08:595 (3) - ? like this: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/772496
00:22 Kirino Kousaka: :3
00:23 UnitedWeSin: seems ok either way :D
00:23 Kirino Kousaka: =w=d
00:24 UnitedWeSin: do you want me to mod saten's diff?
00:24 Kirino Kousaka: ofc =w=
00:25 Kirino Kousaka: if you're done with my diffs, post this irc mod together with mods for saten :3
00:25 UnitedWeSin: ah
00:25 UnitedWeSin: well update I'll check
00:25 Kirino Kousaka: like this p/2312719/
00:26 Kirino Kousaka: nothing more for [Easy]? :3
00:26 UnitedWeSin: easy is good :)
00:26 Kirino Kousaka: \:D/
00:27 UnitedWeSin: it seems that saten doesn't plan on changing anything so I won't waste my time lol
00:27 Kirino Kousaka: lol
00:27 Kirino Kousaka: why not try owo
00:27 UnitedWeSin: some things are overmapped imo but it's fine
00:27 Kirino Kousaka: well okay, just post and say that's Saten's diff is fine owo
00:28 Kirino Kousaka: also, updated. Check now =w=
00:31 UnitedWeSin: 00:37:635 (2,3,4,5,6) - i love this in hard
00:31 Kirino Kousaka: hue =w=
00:31 Kirino Kousaka: thank you =w=
00:33 UnitedWeSin: nice :3
00:33 Kirino Kousaka: =w=


IRC moddededed. :3

Just a quick look at Saten's diff:
  1. Some things are overmapped imo. For example, 01:12:795 (3,4,5,6,7,8) - there is absolutely nothing in the music supporting a long stream like this so it feels really awkward in play. You ignore the interesting variation in claps in the music and just map a stream...
  2. 01:16:275 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - A stream is alright there, but the music is calling for large jumps with the accented trumpets. I'm surprised that you didn't take advantage of that.
  3. 00:45:075 (6) - Should be a single circle really.
  4. 00:46:275 (3,4,5,6) - The small spacing here is awkward imo, they would be better as slight jumps.
  5. 01:00:195 - I don't like this gap to be honest, it's hard to read the rhythm on the 01:00:315 (1,2). A 3/4 slider at 00:59:955 would have been better.
  6. 01:05:955 - I was really disappointed with the transition here. To me this it's the most epic part of the song, I was surprised that you didn't take the chance here to map a really amazing transition with techniques that I've seen in so many of your other maps. Jumps perhaps.



Fun map though. Good luck with ranking, hopefully soon. :)
posted

UnitedWeSin wrote:

22:57 Kirino Kousaka: hello owo/
22:57 UnitedWeSin: hi there
22:57 Kirino Kousaka: do you have some time for a quick mod? ;w;
22:58 UnitedWeSin: like irc?
22:58 Kirino Kousaka: possible
22:58 Kirino Kousaka: :3
22:58 UnitedWeSin: i can take a look
22:58 Kirino Kousaka: do you? ;w;
22:58 Kirino Kousaka: :O
22:58 Kirino Kousaka: ♥
22:58 *Kirino Kousaka is listening to [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/225589 Sadohara Kaori - To Be Continued? (TV Size)]
22:59 UnitedWeSin: ah yes :)
22:59 Kirino Kousaka: yay >w<
23:11 UnitedWeSin: the circle size for hard surprised me lol
23:11 Kirino Kousaka: how was it? owo
23:11 Kirino Kousaka: lol
23:11 Kirino Kousaka: if I adjust it by 1, it feels so small orz
23:11 UnitedWeSin: it's fine it works well
23:12 Kirino Kousaka: lol
23:12 Kirino Kousaka: I get that a lot. =w=
23:12 UnitedWeSin: 00:19:155 (1) - seems strange shape
23:12 UnitedWeSin: how about a nice wave slider?
23:12 Kirino Kousaka: I see, wait =w=
23:13 UnitedWeSin: http://puu.sh/2ZYu0.png
23:14 Kirino Kousaka: nailed it \:D/ http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/772451
23:14 UnitedWeSin: :)
23:15 UnitedWeSin: nazi, but I would select the 00:22:515 (1,2,3,4) - and move it slightly so that the head of the 2 is overlapped perfectly with the head of the 00:24:915 (2) -
23:15 UnitedWeSin: nazi, but I would select the 00:22:515 (1,2,3,4) - and move it slightly so that the head of the 2 is overlapped perfectly with the head of the 00:24:915 (2) -
23:15 UnitedWeSin: doesn't really matter but its just a few grids to the left and it looks nicer
23:16 Kirino Kousaka: hmm, wait
23:16 Kirino Kousaka: fixed :3
23:17 UnitedWeSin: 00:37:395 - i really really really wish there was a note here ;_;
23:17 UnitedWeSin: i know it follows vocals but that's a long wait -.-
23:18 Kirino Kousaka: lol
23:18 Kirino Kousaka: wait
23:18 UnitedWeSin: if you don't want to
23:18 UnitedWeSin: you could changethe placement on 00:37:635 (2,3,4,5) -
23:18 UnitedWeSin: to make it more that 1.0 spacing
23:18 UnitedWeSin: to the 2 that is
23:18 Kirino Kousaka: wait, I didn't get much of that XD
23:19 UnitedWeSin: sorry ;_;
23:19 Kirino Kousaka: no, I'm the dumb one here ;w;
23:20 UnitedWeSin: sec brb
23:20 Kirino Kousaka: oki :3
23:22 UnitedWeSin: ok
23:22 UnitedWeSin: coffee is ready :3
23:22 Kirino Kousaka: lol :3
23:23 Kirino Kousaka: what to do 00:37:635 (2,3,4,5) -
23:23 Kirino Kousaka: =w=
23:23 UnitedWeSin: sec lemme see
23:27 UnitedWeSin: lets move on :)
23:27 Kirino Kousaka: okay XD
23:27 UnitedWeSin: i'll come back to that
23:27 UnitedWeSin: 00:41:715 (3,1,2) - try to make placement look nicer
23:27 UnitedWeSin: i suggest angle the 3 more down and have the 1 and 2 at the same angle
23:27 UnitedWeSin: like this
23:28 UnitedWeSin: http://puu.sh/2ZYQu.png
23:28 UnitedWeSin: my pictures slow -.-
23:28 UnitedWeSin: anyways you can use more than 1.0 distance snap there imo
23:28 UnitedWeSin: it looks better and plays more smooth
23:29 Kirino Kousaka: on 00:41:715 (3,1,2) - ?
23:29 UnitedWeSin: yes
23:29 Kirino Kousaka: okay wait
23:30 Kirino Kousaka: only for those three?
23:30 Kirino Kousaka: lol
23:30 Kirino Kousaka: I'll see
23:30 UnitedWeSin: 00:50:355 (1,2,1) - also here
23:30 UnitedWeSin: please use more that .4 snap -.-
23:30 UnitedWeSin: 1.0 works well
23:30 UnitedWeSin: the repeating slider overlap too much
23:31 Kirino Kousaka: I'll use 1.4? so the sliders don't overlap much?
23:31 UnitedWeSin: no 1.0 is best
23:31 Kirino Kousaka: oh
23:31 UnitedWeSin: 1.0 plays natural
23:31 Kirino Kousaka: I thought "please use more than .4" XD
23:32 UnitedWeSin: ;_;
23:33 UnitedWeSin: here's what I would suggest
23:33 UnitedWeSin: remove a repeat from the 00:50:835 (2) -
23:33 UnitedWeSin: it's overmapped
23:33 Kirino Kousaka: I think not, since I here the music :<
23:33 UnitedWeSin: http://puu.sh/2ZYZ6.png
23:33 Kirino Kousaka: hear*
23:34 Kirino Kousaka: orz
23:34 UnitedWeSin: at 00:51:195 - there is no drum sound
23:34 UnitedWeSin: so it's better to have a gap
23:34 Kirino Kousaka: I see
23:35 Kirino Kousaka: how about the pattern of these sliders?
23:35 Kirino Kousaka: what goes nice?
23:35 UnitedWeSin: of the 00:50:355 (1,2) -
23:35 UnitedWeSin: ?
23:35 Kirino Kousaka: yes :3
23:35 UnitedWeSin: how about that picture?
23:35 UnitedWeSin: it's up to you :)
23:36 UnitedWeSin: place then how you like
23:36 UnitedWeSin: but 1.0 spacing is best imo
23:36 Kirino Kousaka: oh
23:36 Kirino Kousaka: I didn't notice the picture orz
23:36 Kirino Kousaka: okay wait
23:39 Kirino Kousaka: oops dc
23:39 UnitedWeSin: :D
23:39 Kirino Kousaka: sorry about that
23:39 Kirino Kousaka: what did I miss>
23:39 Kirino Kousaka: :3?
23:39 UnitedWeSin: nothing xD
23:39 UnitedWeSin: are you done with 00:50:355 (1,2) - ?
23:40 Kirino Kousaka: oh :3
23:40 Kirino Kousaka: well yes :3
23:40 Kirino Kousaka: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/772469
23:41 UnitedWeSin: ok well at 00:37:635 -
23:41 Kirino Kousaka: :3
23:41 UnitedWeSin: i don't like rhythm -.-
23:41 Kirino Kousaka: ... ;w;
23:42 UnitedWeSin: maybe http://puu.sh/2ZZ9e.png
23:42 Kirino Kousaka: but it follows the vocal ;w;
23:42 Kirino Kousaka: vocals*
23:42 UnitedWeSin: the 00:38:355 (5) - isn't following voclas
23:42 UnitedWeSin: vocals
23:43 Kirino Kousaka: =w=
23:43 Kirino Kousaka: I see =w=
23:44 UnitedWeSin: if you want to :D
23:44 Kirino Kousaka: wait =w=
23:44 UnitedWeSin: make spacing to the 00:37:635 (2) - bigger than 1.0
23:44 Kirino Kousaka: I'm experimenting =w=
23:44 UnitedWeSin: like the 00:41:475 (2) -
23:47 Kirino Kousaka: done =w=
23:47 UnitedWeSin: :D
23:47 UnitedWeSin: wanna upload or move on?
23:47 Kirino Kousaka: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/772474
23:48 Kirino Kousaka: well, it's up to you :3
23:48 Kirino Kousaka: if you want to see or just continue =w=
23:48 UnitedWeSin: normal needs work -.-
23:48 Kirino Kousaka: orz
23:48 UnitedWeSin: ;_;
23:48 Kirino Kousaka: Anything else for [Hard] ? ;w;
23:49 UnitedWeSin: that's all that really bothers me in hard
23:49 Kirino Kousaka: okay \:3/
23:49 Kirino Kousaka: move to [Normal] then? :3
23:49 UnitedWeSin: yep
23:49 Kirino Kousaka: :3
23:50 UnitedWeSin: 00:13:875 (3,1,2,3) - try to make placement look better
23:50 UnitedWeSin: the 00:13:875 (3,3) - overlap
23:50 UnitedWeSin: in a bad way
23:50 UnitedWeSin: http://puu.sh/2ZZjG.png
23:50 UnitedWeSin: try flipping the 00:15:795 (3) around
23:51 UnitedWeSin: and place it so the 00:14:835 (1,2,3) - are all blanketing the 00:13:875 (3) -
23:51 Kirino Kousaka: okay :3
23:52 UnitedWeSin: 00:06:555 (2,2) - i really don't like this -.-
23:53 Kirino Kousaka: I know
23:53 Kirino Kousaka: blue tick
23:53 Kirino Kousaka: =w=
23:54 Kirino Kousaka: but I have found no good solutions for it so far =w=
23:54 Kirino Kousaka: wait, still fixing 00:14:835 (1,2,3) -
23:58 UnitedWeSin: k
23:58 UnitedWeSin: dun?
23:58 Kirino Kousaka: yes :3
23:59 UnitedWeSin: 00:31:155 (3) - don't you want this to end on the blue tick00:31:755 - ?
23:59 Kirino Kousaka: true dat. =w=
23:59 Kirino Kousaka: wait =w=
23:59 UnitedWeSin: =w=
00:00 Kirino Kousaka: done =w=
00:00 UnitedWeSin: i think your rhythm at beginning will confuse people
00:01 UnitedWeSin: can you make it more simple?
00:01 UnitedWeSin: http://puu.sh/2ZZxd.png
00:01 UnitedWeSin: just a sample
00:01 Kirino Kousaka: wait
00:05 Kirino Kousaka: done =w=
00:06 UnitedWeSin: `:3
00:06 UnitedWeSin: 00:50:355 -
00:06 UnitedWeSin: please add something I beg you ;_;
00:06 UnitedWeSin: http://puu.sh/2ZZAV.png
00:06 UnitedWeSin: just a 1/2 slider with a repeat
00:06 UnitedWeSin: fits so nice
00:06 Kirino Kousaka: wait wait XD
00:09 Kirino Kousaka: done =w=
00:09 UnitedWeSin: 00:57:075 (1) - please don't have 2 repeats on this I beg you ;_;
00:10 UnitedWeSin: the slider is too short for that
00:10 UnitedWeSin: remove one repeat
00:10 UnitedWeSin: then add cricle at 00:57:795 -
00:11 UnitedWeSin: http://puu.sh/2ZZIs.png
00:11 UnitedWeSin: i say that because it's just more intuitive for the player
00:13 Kirino Kousaka: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/772493
00:13 *Kirino Kousaka runs
00:13 UnitedWeSin: yea that's fine :3
00:13 UnitedWeSin: do the same thing at 01:20:115 (5) - please ;_;
00:14 UnitedWeSin: change to two 1/2 sliders
00:14 UnitedWeSin: plays so much better
00:14 Kirino Kousaka: =w=d
00:15 UnitedWeSin: :3
00:15 Kirino Kousaka: done =w=d
00:16 UnitedWeSin: ready for rank after that imo :3
00:16 Kirino Kousaka: :O
00:16 Kirino Kousaka: how about [Easy] ? :O
00:17 UnitedWeSin: will check
00:17 Kirino Kousaka: okay :3
00:17 UnitedWeSin: again I wish you would add something at 00:50:355 -
00:17 Kirino Kousaka: wait, I'm fixing things for normalXD
00:17 UnitedWeSin: xD
00:18 UnitedWeSin: maybe it's better not to though
00:18 UnitedWeSin: the easy is really good
00:19 Kirino Kousaka: :O
00:19 UnitedWeSin: just one more thing in normal
00:19 UnitedWeSin: 01:08:595 (3,4,1) - this placement -.-
00:20 Kirino Kousaka: what to do ;w;
00:21 UnitedWeSin: maybe just rotate the 01:08:595 (3) - a bit
00:21 UnitedWeSin: :3
00:21 UnitedWeSin: http://puu.sh/2ZZV6.png
00:22 UnitedWeSin: idk I'm nazi -.-
00:22 Kirino Kousaka: how about blanket 01:09:555 (4) - with 01:08:595 (3) - ? like this: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/772496
00:22 Kirino Kousaka: :3
00:23 UnitedWeSin: seems ok either way :D
00:23 Kirino Kousaka: =w=d
00:24 UnitedWeSin: do you want me to mod saten's diff?
00:24 Kirino Kousaka: ofc =w=
00:25 Kirino Kousaka: if you're done with my diffs, post this irc mod together with mods for saten :3
00:25 UnitedWeSin: ah
00:25 UnitedWeSin: well update I'll check
00:25 Kirino Kousaka: like this p/2312719/
00:26 Kirino Kousaka: nothing more for [Easy]? :3
00:26 UnitedWeSin: easy is good :)
00:26 Kirino Kousaka: \:D/
00:27 UnitedWeSin: it seems that saten doesn't plan on changing anything so I won't waste my time lol
00:27 Kirino Kousaka: lol
00:27 Kirino Kousaka: why not try owo
00:27 UnitedWeSin: some things are overmapped imo but it's fine
00:27 Kirino Kousaka: well okay, just post and say that's Saten's diff is fine owo
00:28 Kirino Kousaka: also, updated. Check now =w=
00:31 UnitedWeSin: 00:37:635 (2,3,4,5,6) - i love this in hard
00:31 Kirino Kousaka: hue =w=
00:31 Kirino Kousaka: thank you =w=
00:33 UnitedWeSin: nice :3
00:33 Kirino Kousaka: =w=


IRC moddededed. :3

Fun map though. Good luck with ranking, hopefully soon. :)Yes! >w<
Thanks for the mod UnitedWeSin! >w<
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Hi hi o.o
  1. 00:14:835 (1) - i dont think this NC is necessary, removing it fits with your shor 1,2 NC pattern that you used before and after
  2. 00:39:795 (1) - this also, remove NC and you will get same 1,2,3 like here 00:35:955 (1,2,3) -
  3. 00:42:675 (2) - i hear something heavier then soft hit on slider tail, use N hit instead ?
  4. 00:57:075 (5) - hmm, should NC start here ? since you following vocal
  5. 01:10:515 (5) - use clap instead whistle ?
  6. 01:16:035 (1) - whistle
  1. 00:22:515 (1) - missing hitsound, finish or smth
  2. 00:37:875 (3) - whistle
  3. 00:54:195 (1) - should be clap on slider tail
  4. 01:00:915 (1) - i think you need to start this slider 1 tick earlier and follow the vocal, becase such long pattern 00:54:195 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1) - following vocal and then suddenly stop ._. (more of it if you listen carefully then you will hear some sound on the red tick, which means if you apply this suggestion pattern will perfectly follow music/vocal)
  5. 01:04:755 (1) - missing whistle
  6. 01:09:555 (4) - clap on tail, sound good
  7. 01:15:315 (3,1) - same thing as i mentioned before, i prefer to see similar pattern that i suggested 01:00:915 (1) -
  1. 00:08:115 (4) - whistle
  2. 00:22:995 (2) - missing tail whistle
  3. 00:23:475 (3,4) - missing 2 claps, #3 tail, #4 head
  4. 00:33:075 (5) - tail clap
  5. 00:41:715 (3) - whistle
  6. 00:42:675 (1,2) - i prefer to see 1.0x SV here, because this bgm drum doesnt belong to calm part.
  7. 00:47:475 (1) - whistle or finish
  8. 00:50:835 (2) - add 1 repeat, fit better with music + add claps on 1,3,4 tick
  9. 00:54:915 (1) - missing clap
  10. 00:56:595 (5) - tail clap
  11. 00:57:795 (2) - missing clap
  12. 00:59:235 (2) - whistle
  13. 00:59:715 (4) - clap head
  14. 01:01:635 (4) - whistle head
  15. 01:02:595 (6) - clap
  16. 01:08:355 (3) - whistle head, tail can be too
  17. 01:18:915 (3) - whistle
  18. 01:19:515 (5) - head whistle, tail clap
  1. i would add some claps that maybe dont exist in bgm but i think sounds nice,
    00:06:555 (5) -
    00:08:475 (5) -
    00:10:395 (6) -
    00:14:235 (5) -
    00:16:035 (5) - tail
    00:18:075 (5) -
  2. 00:42:675 (1,2) - this bgm drum doest belong to calm part, i think you need to use 1.0 SV here
  3. 00:55:395 (2) - this note sound like drum hit D:
    other fine for me, easy map as always ( ͡° ͜ʖ ͡°)乃

Good luck :>
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cRyo[iceeicee] wrote:

Hi hi o.o
  1. 00:14:835 (1) - i dont think this NC is necessary, removing it fits with your shor 1,2 NC pattern that you used before and after I get your point, but nope, I think it's fine. :3
  2. 00:39:795 (1) - this also, remove NC and you will get same 1,2,3 like here 00:35:955 (1,2,3) - fixed~
  3. 00:42:675 (2) - i hear something heavier then soft hit on slider tail, use N hit instead ? added SC:1 clap instead~
  4. 00:57:075 (5) - hmm, should NC start here ? since you following vocal fixed~
  5. 01:10:515 (5) - use clap instead whistle ? no change :3
  6. 01:16:035 (1) - whistle fixed~
  1. 00:22:515 (1) - missing hitsound, finish or smth added Finish~
  2. 00:37:875 (3) - whistle fixed~
  3. 00:54:195 (1) - should be clap on slider tail fixed~
  4. 01:00:915 (1) - i think you need to start this slider 1 tick earlier and follow the vocal, becase such long pattern 00:54:195 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1) - following vocal and then suddenly stop ._. (more of it if you listen carefully then you will hear some sound on the red tick, which means if you apply this suggestion pattern will perfectly follow music/vocal) fixed~
  5. 01:04:755 (1) - missing whistle fixed~
  6. 01:09:555 (4) - clap on tail, sound good fixed~
  7. 01:15:315 (3,1) - same thing as i mentioned before, i prefer to see similar pattern that i suggested 01:00:915 (1) - fixed~
  1. 00:08:115 (4) - whistle fixed~
  2. 00:22:995 (2) - missing tail whistle fixed~
  3. 00:23:475 (3,4) - missing 2 claps, #3 tail, #4 head fixed~
  4. 00:33:075 (5) - tail clap fixed~
  5. 00:41:715 (3) - whistle fixed~
  6. 00:42:675 (1,2) - i prefer to see 1.0x SV here, because this bgm drum doesnt belong to calm part. No change, it plays better like this imo. =w=
  7. 00:47:475 (1) - whistle or finish added finish
  8. 00:50:835 (2) - add 1 repeat, fit better with music + add claps on 1,3,4 tick fixed~
  9. 00:54:915 (1) - missing clap fixed~
  10. 00:56:595 (5) - tail clap fixed~
  11. 00:57:795 (2) - missing clap fixed~
  12. 00:59:235 (2) - whistle fixed~
  13. 00:59:715 (4) - clap head fixed~
  14. 01:01:635 (4) - whistle head fixed~
  15. 01:02:595 (6) - clap fixed~
  16. 01:08:355 (3) - whistle head, tail can be too fixed~
  17. 01:18:915 (3) - whistle fixed~
  18. 01:19:515 (5) - head whistle, tail clap fixed~


Good luck :>
Thanks for the mod and star cryo! >w<
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Recheck :3

Easy
  1. 01:14:355 (3) - How about copy paste the previous slider shape 01:13:395 (2) - to here? It's more good if you continue to use not curvy slider here since it's still on the same combo.


Normal
  1. 00:13:635 (2) - The whistle on this circle should be on white tick on 00:13:875 - like you did at previous combo. So, remove this whistle and add a whistle on 00:13:875 (3) - start.
  2. 00:15:555 (2) - Same, remove this whistle and add a whistle on 00:15:795 (3) - start.
  3. 00:17:715 (3) - Same, add a whistle on this slider start.
  4. 00:21:555 (3) - ^
  5. 00:23:475 (3) - ^
  6. 00:25:395 (2) - ^
  7. 00:28:995 (2,3) - ^
  8. 00:30:915 (2,3) - ^
  9. 00:33:075 (3) - ^
  10. 00:50:355 (1) - Add another repeat to this slider? It's a bit awkward since the rhythm still continue on 00:51:075 -
  11. 00:57:075 (1) - You forgot a whistle again at this slider ><
  12. 01:15:075 (2) - Remove whistle here, overused and unnesecary. Break the current whistle rhythm.


Hard
  1. 00:33:075 (5) - You forgot a clap at this slider end ><
;)
posted

Miya wrote:

Recheck :3

Easy
  1. 01:14:355 (3) - How about copy paste the previous slider shape 01:13:395 (2) - to here? It's more good if you continue to use not curvy slider here since it's still on the same combo. Good point. XD Fixed~


Normal
  1. 00:13:635 (2) - The whistle on this circle should be on white tick on 00:13:875 - like you did at previous combo. So, remove this whistle and add a whistle on 00:13:875 (3) - start. fixed~
  2. 00:15:555 (2) - Same, remove this whistle and add a whistle on 00:15:795 (3) - start. fixed~
  3. 00:17:715 (3) - Same, add a whistle on this slider start. fixed~
  4. 00:21:555 (3) - ^ fixed~
  5. 00:23:475 (3) - ^ fixed~
  6. 00:25:395 (2) - ^ fixed~
  7. 00:28:995 (2,3) - ^ fixed~
  8. 00:30:915 (2,3) - ^ fixed~
  9. 00:33:075 (3) - ^ fixed~
  10. 00:50:355 (1) - Add another repeat to this slider? It's a bit awkward since the rhythm still continue on 00:51:075 - changed into two sliders instead!~
  11. 00:57:075 (1) - You forgot a whistle again at this slider >< fixed~
  12. 01:15:075 (2) - Remove whistle here, overused and unnesecary. Break the current whistle rhythm. fixed~


Hard
  1. 00:33:075 (5) - You forgot a clap at this slider end >< fixed~
;)
Thanks! >w<
posted
Yup, it's looks awesome now. :)

Bubbled!
posted

Miya wrote:

Yup, it's looks awesome now. :)

Bubbled!
OMG Thank you ;w;
posted
glad to see this bubbled go baka but this need a KirinOni... :roll:
posted
Mod for mod requested :3

[Easy]
  1. 00:54:15 (1,2,3) - Maybe make this consistent with 01:09:555 (1,2) in terms of timing?
  2. 00:59:955 (3,1) - ^ with 01:15:315 (4,1)
[Normal]
  1. HP+1?
  2. I really don't like this SV/Spacing combination ._. the high SV and low spacing makes the sliders that end on 1/4 and circles right after it a bit confusing to me.... but I guess it's too late to change this now :/
[Muzukashii]
  1. Tick rate 1
  2. 00:39:785 (1) - remove finish
  3. Use normal hitsounds please... adjust volume if you have to
[Oni]
  1. Tick rate 1
  2. Same as Muzu: Use normal hitsounds and adjust volume if you have to
  3. Center difficulty settings (so CS5) but this is minor
[Hard]
  1. 00:05:235 - 00:10:635 - This section is completely different and inconsistent with the others in the intro in terms of difficulty and style. I highly suggest you use the note patterns you use at 00:12:915. PM me for help if you dont understand what I mean by this.

Call me back after fixes, or PM me if you have any questions~
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