Midnaait wrote:

Hi! Taiko mod, from #modreqs :3

All are suggestions -w-

[General]

I think the hitsound's volume should be 90% or 100%, it's kinda low >.< [/color]

[Muzukashii]

00:18:315 (3) - d fixed~
00:54:435 (1,1,1) - ddd or kkk, it's kinda confusing in a muzu diff :< changed to ddd
01:19:515 (2) - if you want delete this note I think it's fine. No change.
01:22:035 (3) - D? I think it's fine. No change.

[Oni]

00:05:475 (1,1,2) - ddk I think it's fine. No change.
00:18:435 (2) - delete? I think it's fine. No change.
00:26:115 (2) - ^ and if you did that ---> 00:25:635 (2,3,1,1) - dkdk I think it's fine. No change.
00:33:795 (1) - ^ and if you did that ---> 00:33:315 (1,2,1,2) - kkdk I think it's fine. No change.
00:50:955 (2) - d I think it's fine. No change.
01:16:275 (1,2,3,4,1,2,1,2,3,4,5,6,1) - kkddkkddkdddk sounds better :3 fixed~

I like both taiko diffs :3

Good luck!

OMG look at her spins

1. Remove video from taiko diffs.
2. Change the bg code with this FOR TAIKO DIFFS ONLY.So the bg will looks like this when in the gameplay.
   

   0,0,"BG.jpg",0,120

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1. Why don't you try add hitsounds for variations in the starting like add whistle here at the end 00:05:235 (1) - , add whistle at the starting 00:08:115 (2) - , 00:10:035 (3) - add whistle.
2. 00:20:595 (1) - make it more curves,the current shape looks odd.
   
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3. 00:29:715 (2) - move it a bit more far from the starting,because it looks ugly when you near something but there's no blanket or something.
   
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4. 00:34:035 (1,2,3,4) - why didn't you add finish like you did with the beat like this before? /following the vocal and trumpet
5. 00:57:795 (3) - make it curve so people it goes with the direction flow.
   
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6. 01:05:235 (4) - put finish at the end of the slider, to follow the bell sound.
7. I don't really recommend you to stack for the easiest diff, it's confusing for some new players.
   
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   2. 01:09:315 (1) -
8. 01:09:555 (2) - make this curve towards above to show the direction flows going down. /where's the next slider is.
   
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9. 01:22:035 (3) - just a suggestion move it at the middle line?
   
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1. 00:10:035 (2) - remove repeat and put another 1/2.follow vocal.i don't really know what are you following at this repeat.
   
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2. 00:10:995 (1) - this looks ugly x) fix it? maybe change shape. that fits for the next slider too?
3. 00:13:875 (3) - i would make it a normal curve slider and of course make sure that the next slider be a good blanket. doesn't hit circle (2)
   
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4. 00:26:355 (1,2) - this looks ugly,fix it first :3 make it probably like this?
   
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5. 00:39:795 (2) - this doesn't looks smooth,if you want to make it looks smooth do it like this with the grids.
   
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6. 01:05:715 (3) - put finish at the starting, to follow the bell sound.

1. 00:09:315 (1) - make it as a little blanket for the next slider.
   
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2. 00:29:595 (5,6,7) - I think convert this three into a slider would be better. there's no need for 3 circles here. just two beat would be fine.
   
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3. 00:42:675 (1) - make it like this? so the repeat direction towards the next slider?
   
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4. 00:56:235 () - add a circle here,to follow the trumpet beat.
5. 01:04:275 (5) - it would be better if you didn't make this and the next slider overlap.
6. 01:05:235 (3) - put finish at the end of the slider, to follow the bell sound.
7. 01:12:435 (1) - fix this slider make it better.
   
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1. I don't really have much problem with this diff.
2. 00:11:715 (4,5) - i think it's better if change this to slider, to show that you're not following vocal
3. 00:44:475 () - I would add circle here to follow vocal
4. 01:05:715 (5) - put finish here, to follow the bell sound.
5. 01:16:755 (5,6) - why don't you delete this and make a long slider starting from 01:16:875 () - following trumpet.
6. It's weird,other diffs mapped at the ending part,but you put spinner :3

1. 00:16:755 (3) - change to d
2. 00:40:035 () - add a circle here, there's a beat "dup dup"
3. 00:51:315 (1) - add finish here,the good part starts here,all instruments are loud here.
4. 00:54:195 (3,1,1,1) - d ddk sounds better to me
5. 00:55:155 (1) - d
6. 00:56:115 (3) - d I would keep this and ^ d because i want the pattern becomes d k d k following the instrument and vocal.
7. 01:05:715 (1) - add finish there's a loud bell sound here and like you did at Oni

1. 00:06:435 (2,1) - kd sounds better with the next dk
2. 00:46:275 () - add k here
3. 00:47:955 (1) - move to 00:47:835 () - and add a circle at 00:48:075 () -
4. 00:48:915 (1) - move this to 00:48:795 () - and add a circle at 00:49:035 () - so you can get a kd dk pattern based on instrument
5. 00:55:875 (2) - change this to k,stick with the kkd k d pattern.
6. 01:16:275 (1,2,3,4,1,2,1,2,3,4,5,6,1) - this stream isn't really necessary, map it based on trumpet is better.
   
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7. 01:20:235 () - add a circle here,the streams shoulds start at the circle before.

LunarSakuya wrote:

ello \:D/

General
- Rename the taiko diffs to Muzukashii and Oni. "Taiko" is redundant. Fixed~

- Preview times are inconsistent. I suggest just putting all them at 51315 Fixed~

- In Normal and Saten's .osu files under Events, change the bg code line to 0,0,"BG.jpg",0,0 Fixed~

- Change ArtistUnicode to 佐土原かおり Fixed~

Easy
00:14:835 (2) - NC, stay consistent with your NC alternating every stanza Fixed~

Normal
00:23:955 (4) - Sounds strange that the note is emphasized on the wrong rhythm, perhaps make a slider that ends on the blue tick https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/758420 (Edit: now that I'm looking through this, same for 00:15:795 (3) - ? and similar sections) Up to you of course but yeah Both Fixed~
00:41:715 (3,4) - Spacing, fix with distance snap Fixed~

Hard
00:11:955 (1) - Delete NC, i referenced 00:26:355 (1,2) - and other similar sections Fixed~
00:53:235 (5) - NC, delete NC on next note; this will distinguish the spacing vs. rhythm change Fixed~

Kawaii map <3 Thanks~ ♥
The main thing is inconsistency with folder contents. But the patterns were so clean!! >w< ♥~
I'll leave my star here~! Thanks owo/
meanwhile time to clean up my requests orz..

HEATKAI I SUMMON YOU

HeatKai wrote:

dat summon lol.

OMG look at her spins

[General]

1. Remove video from taiko diffs. Fixed~
2. Change the bg code with this FOR TAIKO DIFFS ONLY.So the bg will looks like this when in the gameplay. u mad Fixed~
   

   0,0,"BG.jpg",0,120

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[Easy]

1. Why don't you try add hitsounds for variations in the starting like add whistle here at the end 00:05:235 (1) - , add whistle at the starting 00:08:115 (2) - , 00:10:035 (3) - add whistle. Fixed~
2. 00:20:595 (1) - make it more curves,the current shape looks odd. Fixed~
   
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3. 00:29:715 (2) - move it a bit more far from the starting,because it looks ugly when you near something but there's no blanket or something. Fixed~
   
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4. 00:34:035 (1,2,3,4) - why didn't you add finish like you did with the beat like this before? /following the vocal and trumpet idk Fixed~
5. 00:57:795 (3) - make it curve so people it goes with the direction flow. Fixed~
   
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6. 01:05:235 (4) - put finish at the end of the slider, to follow the bell sound. Fixed~
7. I don't really recommend you to stack for the easiest diff, it's confusing for some new players.
   
   1. 01:08:115 (2) - Changes made~
   2. 01:09:315 (1) - Changes made~
8. 01:09:555 (2) - make this curve towards above to show the direction flows going down. /where's the next slider is. Fixed~
   
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9. 01:22:035 (3) - just a suggestion move it at the middle line? Fixed~
   
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[Normal]

1. 00:10:035 (2) - remove repeat and put another 1/2.follow vocal.i don't really know what are you following at this repeat. Fixed~
   
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2. 00:10:995 (1) - this looks ugly x) fix it? maybe change shape. that fits for the next slider too? Fixed~
3. 00:13:875 (3) - i would make it a normal curve slider and of course make sure that the next slider be a good blanket. doesn't hit circle (2) Fixed~
   
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4. 00:26:355 (1,2) - this looks ugly,fix it first :3 make it probably like this? Fixed~
   
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5. 00:39:795 (2) - this doesn't looks smooth,if you want to make it looks smooth do it like this with the grids. Deliciously Fixed~
   
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6. 01:05:715 (3) - put finish at the starting, to follow the bell sound.

[Hard]

1. 00:09:315 (1) - make it as a little blanket for the next slider. Fixed~
   
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2. 00:29:595 (5,6,7) - I think convert this three into a slider would be better. there's no need for 3 circles here. just two beat would be fine. Fixed~
   
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3. 00:42:675 (1) - make it like this? so the repeat direction towards the next slider? Fixed~
   
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4. 00:56:235 () - add a circle here,to follow the trumpet beat. 00:56:475 (1) - was deleted and added a slider here instead. =w=
5. 01:04:275 (5) - it would be better if you didn't make this and the next slider overlap. Fixed~
6. 01:05:235 (3) - put finish at the end of the slider, to follow the bell sound. Fixed~
7. 01:12:435 (1) - fix this slider make it better. Fixed~
   
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[Muzukashii]

1. 00:16:755 (3) - change to d Fixed~
2. 00:40:035 () - add a circle here, there's a beat "dup dup" Fixed~
3. 00:51:315 (1) - add finish here,the good part starts here,all instruments are loud here. Fixed~
4. 00:54:195 (3,1,1,1) - d ddk sounds better to me Fixed~
5. 00:55:155 (1) - d Fixed~
6. 00:56:115 (3) - d I would keep this and ^ d because i want the pattern becomes d k d k following the instrument and vocal. Fixed~
7. 01:05:715 (1) - add finish there's a loud bell sound here and like you did at Oni Fixed~

[Oni]

1. 00:06:435 (2,1) - kd sounds better with the next dk Fixed~
2. 00:46:275 () - add k here Fixed~
3. 00:47:955 (1) - move to 00:47:835 () - and add a circle at 00:48:075 () - Fixed~
4. 00:48:915 (1) - move this to 00:48:795 () - and add a circle at 00:49:035 () - so you can get a kd dk pattern based on instrument Fixed~
5. 00:55:875 (2) - change this to k,stick with the kkd k d pattern. Fixed~
6. 01:16:275 (1,2,3,4,1,2,1,2,3,4,5,6,1) - this stream isn't really necessary, map it based on trumpet is better. Fixed~
   
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7. 01:20:235 () - add a circle here,the streams shoulds start at the circle before. Fixed~

Thanks for the mod Kai!

LunarSakuya wrote:

Saten
hi saten
00:44:355 (3,4) - Reverse these rhythms http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/758405 , the vocals seem to be an interesting part to follow I'll keep it as it is since this was intended. It would also ruin the current flow with the slider-only part

HeatKai wrote:

[Saten]

1. I don't really have much problem with this diff.
2. 00:11:715 (4,5) - i think it's better if change this to slider, to show that you're not following vocal I'm not really following the vocals mainly though
3. 00:44:475 () - I would add circle here to follow vocal that would mess with the current spacing
4. 01:05:715 (5) - put finish here, to follow the bell sound. I don't really see any connections with adding a finish here o_o
5. 01:16:755 (5,6) - why don't you delete this and make a long slider starting from 01:16:875 () - following trumpet. I don't get it, I can clearly hear that this part is 1/4 all the way
6. It's weird,other diffs mapped at the ending part,but you put spinner :3 I always put a spinner at the end (almost) and this is the only spinner in the whole difficulty

1. Fixed a LOT of rhythm on both easy and normal ><

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2013-05-21 13:55 Kirino Kousaka: i-is that... :OOOOOOOOOOO
2013-05-21 13:55 Miya: ACTION is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/225589 Sadohara Kaori - To Be Continued? (TV Size) [Easy]]
2013-05-21 13:55 Miya: xD
2013-05-21 13:55 Kirino Kousaka: ♥♥♥♥♥
2013-05-21 13:55 Kirino Kousaka: >w<
2013-05-21 13:56 Kirino Kousaka: inb4 Miya PM's \:D/
2013-05-21 13:56 Miya: lol
2013-05-21 13:56 Miya: you want irc mod or forum mod? i prefer irc mod
2013-05-21 13:56 Kirino Kousaka: well sure irc mod :3
2013-05-21 13:56 Miya: ok ><
2013-05-21 13:56 Miya: first
2013-05-21 13:57 Kirino Kousaka: but I need to eat some snacks first ;w;
2013-05-21 13:57 Miya: try fix a lot of problem here at forum mod, i lazy to retype xD
2013-05-21 13:57 Miya: http://puu.sh/2XWgi.png
2013-05-21 13:57 Kirino Kousaka: orz
2013-05-21 13:58 Kirino Kousaka: btw on general, many already have told us that
2013-05-21 13:58 Miya: yeah, continue it =3=
2013-05-21 13:58 Kirino Kousaka: Saten-san and I discussed it over, we decided to end on this part
2013-05-21 13:58 Miya: it really feel weird
2013-05-21 13:58 Kirino Kousaka: it's okay lol
2013-05-21 13:59 Miya: no, since you mostly map for the beat, but you end it when the vocal end ><
2013-05-21 13:59 Kirino Kousaka: we mapped with beats and vocals ;w;
2013-05-21 13:59 Kirino Kousaka: 00:06:555 (2) -
2013-05-21 14:00 Kirino Kousaka: on normal
2013-05-21 14:00 Kirino Kousaka: 01:00:195 (1,2,3) - on hard
2013-05-21 14:00 Kirino Kousaka: and w/e things ;w;
2013-05-21 14:00 Kirino Kousaka: saten-san won't agree ;w;
2013-05-21 14:00 Miya: lol why so lazy? xD
2013-05-21 14:01 Kirino Kousaka: I would, but saten-san won't ;w;
2013-05-21 14:01 Miya: its okay, since its guest difficulty ><
2013-05-21 14:01 Kirino Kousaka: consistency D:
2013-05-21 14:02 Kirino Kousaka: ACTION is listening to [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/222261 Sadohara Kaori - To Be Continued? (TV Size)]
2013-05-21 14:02 Miya: it's okay guest diff can be different =3=
2013-05-21 14:02 Kirino Kousaka: it ends the same way ;w;
2013-05-21 14:02 Kirino Kousaka: aww okay ;w;
2013-05-21 14:02 Kirino Kousaka: ACTION okayface*
2013-05-21 14:03 Miya: yup, its far more better
2013-05-21 14:03 Kirino Kousaka: but wait
2013-05-21 14:03 Kirino Kousaka: If I did, I should also map 00:01:395 -
2013-05-21 14:03 Miya: nope
2013-05-21 14:03 Kirino Kousaka: that's another reason
2013-05-21 14:03 Kirino Kousaka: why I won't ;w;
2013-05-21 14:04 Kirino Kousaka: like this
2013-05-21 14:04 Kirino Kousaka: ACTION is listening to [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/225046 Sadohara Kaori - To Be Continued? (TV Size)]
2013-05-21 14:04 Miya: why not?
2013-05-21 14:04 Miya:
2013-05-21 14:04 Miya: oh well
2013-05-21 14:04 Kirino Kousaka: orzzz
2013-05-21 14:04 Miya: just fix the other thing in easy first ><
2013-05-21 14:05 Kirino Kousaka: \:DDD/
2013-05-21 14:05 Kirino Kousaka: I will eat first, I will die ;w;
2013-05-21 14:05 Miya: ok ok ><
2013-05-21 14:05 Kirino Kousaka: thanks ;w;
2013-05-21 14:05 Miya: np :3
2013-05-21 14:15 Kirino Kousaka: back :3
2013-05-21 14:15 Miya: wb :3
2013-05-21 14:15 Kirino Kousaka: well, gotta fix :3
2013-05-21 14:15 Miya: well, tell me if you done with the easy mod, or have any question 3
2013-05-21 14:15 Miya: :3*
2013-05-21 14:15 Miya: yup
2013-05-21 14:15 Kirino Kousaka: okay :3
2013-05-21 14:19 Kirino Kousaka: is this all for [Easy]? :3
2013-05-21 14:19 Miya: yup
2013-05-21 14:19 Miya: only for easy ><
2013-05-21 14:19 Kirino Kousaka: okay :3
2013-05-21 14:23 Kirino Kousaka: hmm
2013-05-21 14:23 Kirino Kousaka: 00:57:075 (1,2) - this ruins the spacing ;w;
2013-05-21 14:24 Miya: remap the pattern then o.o
2013-05-21 14:24 Miya: let me think
2013-05-21 14:24 Kirino Kousaka: okay ;w;
2013-05-21 14:24 Kirino Kousaka: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/767791 ?
2013-05-21 14:24 Miya: yup
2013-05-21 14:25 Miya: i havent fix the pattern yet on that pic
2013-05-21 14:25 Miya: well
2013-05-21 14:25 Kirino Kousaka: ;w;
2013-05-21 14:25 Miya: you can change the slider into 3 1/1 circle if you want
2013-05-21 14:26 Miya: maybe something like this http://puu.sh/2XWOy.jpg ?
2013-05-21 14:26 Kirino Kousaka: cool
2013-05-21 14:27 Miya: well
2013-05-21 14:27 Miya: make it good, my example is a bad pattern xD
2013-05-21 14:27 Kirino Kousaka: oh lol
2013-05-21 14:33 Kirino Kousaka: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/767824 \:D/
2013-05-21 14:33 Kirino Kousaka: having those 3 circles on the red tick would confuse beginners imo
2013-05-21 14:33 Miya: hmm
2013-05-21 14:33 Miya: okay, let me try it later ><
2013-05-21 14:34 Kirino Kousaka: okay, gotta fix the others :3
2013-05-21 14:34 Kirino Kousaka: just recheck XD
2013-05-21 14:34 Kirino Kousaka: after XD
2013-05-21 14:34 Miya: okay okay ><
2013-05-21 14:34 Kirino Kousaka: \>w</
2013-05-21 14:35 Miya: at normal add a circle here 00:37:635 - since you follow the vocal on the beginning of the combo ><
2013-05-21 14:36 Miya: it feels somewhat missing something xD
2013-05-21 14:36 Miya: 00:41:475 - same here
2013-05-21 14:36 Kirino Kousaka: okay wait ;w;
2013-05-21 14:36 Miya: okay okay
2013-05-21 14:37 Miya: gotta fix my suggestion later too at 00:37:875 (3) - xD
2013-05-21 14:37 Kirino Kousaka: okay XD
2013-05-21 14:43 Miya: normal rhthm need some fix too xD
2013-05-21 14:43 Kirino Kousaka: ;w;
2013-05-21 14:45 Miya: done with easy? o.o
2013-05-21 14:45 Kirino Kousaka: not yet ;w;
2013-05-21 14:45 Miya: ok ok ><
2013-05-21 14:46 Kirino Kousaka: ;w;
2013-05-21 14:47 Miya: is it hard? o.o
2013-05-21 14:47 Kirino Kousaka: not much, Natsu is bugging me D:
2013-05-21 14:47 Kirino Kousaka: so I ranked something D: http://puu.sh/2XXaQ.png
2013-05-21 14:47 Miya: lol maybe you can in the future xD
2013-05-21 14:48 Kirino Kousaka: lol XD
2013-05-21 14:58 Kirino Kousaka: finally XD
2013-05-21 14:58 Miya: that was long xD
2013-05-21 14:58 Miya: okay to normal now ><
2013-05-21 14:59 Kirino Kousaka: because Natsu ;w;
2013-05-21 14:59 Kirino Kousaka: uguuu ;w;
2013-05-21 15:00 Miya: ><
2013-05-21 15:00 Miya: ready?
2013-05-21 15:00 Kirino Kousaka: yes ;w;
2013-05-21 15:00 Miya: 00:10:035 (2,3) - umm, this should follow the music too
2013-05-21 15:01 Miya: well, to fix this
2013-05-21 15:01 Miya: delete 00:10:035 (2,3) -
2013-05-21 15:01 Miya: add a new circle here 00:10:035 -
2013-05-21 15:01 Kirino Kousaka: wait, I need to pee ;w;
2013-05-21 15:01 Kirino Kousaka: sorry ;w;
2013-05-21 15:01 Miya: lol
2013-05-21 15:01 Miya: just follow my instruction later
2013-05-21 15:02 Miya: add a slider here 00:10:395 - until 00:10:635 -
2013-05-21 15:02 Kirino Kousaka: okay back
2013-05-21 15:02 Miya: so fast o.o
2013-05-21 15:03 Kirino Kousaka: :3
2013-05-21 15:03 Miya: done with 00:10:035 (2,3) - case?
2013-05-21 15:03 Kirino Kousaka: yes :3
2013-05-21 15:04 Miya: okay next :3
2013-05-21 15:04 Miya: extend this slider by 1/4 00:13:875 (3) -
2013-05-21 15:04 Miya: since you make the same rhythm here 00:15:795 (3) -
2013-05-21 15:05 Kirino Kousaka: done :3
2013-05-21 15:05 Miya: next ><
2013-05-21 15:05 Kirino Kousaka: >w<
2013-05-21 15:05 Miya: 00:18:195 (3) - this should end by 1/4 forward too
2013-05-21 15:06 Miya: but it will be tricky so try this suggestion
2013-05-21 15:07 Kirino Kousaka: I don't know ;w;
2013-05-21 15:07 Miya: wait Andre pming me xD
2013-05-21 15:07 Kirino Kousaka: lolwhat XD
2013-05-21 15:07 Miya: Andrea*
2013-05-21 15:07 Miya: oh well, lets continue ><
2013-05-21 15:08 Miya: reduce this repeat by 1 00:17:235 (2) -
2013-05-21 15:08 Miya: umm nvm
2013-05-21 15:08 Miya: umm yeah lol
2013-05-21 15:09 Miya: 00:17:235 (2) - reduce repeat by 1, then add a new slider here 00:17:715 - until 00:18:315 -
2013-05-21 15:09 Miya: ofc you need to remove the circle here too 00:18:195 -
2013-05-21 15:09 Miya: ><
2013-05-21 15:09 Kirino Kousaka: wait, is this good? https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/767850
2013-05-21 15:10 Miya: i prefer my rhythm for consistencies ><
2013-05-21 15:10 Kirino Kousaka: okay wait :3
2013-05-21 15:10 Miya: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/767853
2013-05-21 15:10 Miya: like usual, dont follow the pattern lol
2013-05-21 15:12 Kirino Kousaka: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/767857
2013-05-21 15:13 Miya: okay good, next ><
2013-05-21 15:13 Kirino Kousaka: >w<
2013-05-21 15:13 Miya: 00:21:555 (3) - same, extend by 1/4
2013-05-21 15:13 Miya: woops, 00:23:475 (3) - forgot a clap at the slider end
2013-05-21 15:14 Miya: 00:25:395 (2) - same here too, extend by 1/4
2013-05-21 15:15 Miya: for the next part, i dont think extending slider will be necessary ><
2013-05-21 15:15 Miya: but if you want to extend them, its good :3
2013-05-21 15:18 Kirino Kousaka: done, I didn't extend the others XD
2013-05-21 15:19 Miya: ok, fine ><
2013-05-21 15:19 Miya: 00:37:635 - add a circle here, vocal start here
2013-05-21 15:19 Kirino Kousaka: >w<
2013-05-21 15:19 Kirino Kousaka: done >w<
2013-05-21 15:19 Miya: after that
2013-05-21 15:19 Miya: 00:37:875 (3) - delete
2013-05-21 15:20 Kirino Kousaka: why? D:
2013-05-21 15:20 Miya: 00:38:115 (3) - move this slider to 00:37:875 - but make it end on the same spot
2013-05-21 15:20 Miya: for better rhythm of course
2013-05-21 15:20 Miya: dont forget to replace the hitsound :3
2013-05-21 15:21 Miya: it will be consistant with this part later 00:41:715 (3) -
2013-05-21 15:21 Kirino Kousaka: 00:37:875 (3) - should still end on 00:38:595 -
2013-05-21 15:21 Kirino Kousaka: ?
2013-05-21 15:21 Kirino Kousaka: or extend?
2013-05-21 15:21 Miya: extend to 00:38:835 -
2013-05-21 15:21 Kirino Kousaka: oh okay :3
2013-05-21 15:22 Miya: done? o.o
2013-05-21 15:22 Kirino Kousaka: wait XD
2013-05-21 15:22 Miya: ok ok ><
2013-05-21 15:23 Kirino Kousaka: done >w<
2013-05-21 15:23 Miya: add circle here 00:41:475 - :3
2013-05-21 15:24 Kirino Kousaka: done >w<
2013-05-21 15:24 Miya: same reason, the vocal start there
2013-05-21 15:24 Miya: ok
2013-05-21 15:24 Miya: oh, you forgot a whistle at slider start 00:41:715 (4) -
2013-05-21 15:24 Kirino Kousaka: added :3
2013-05-21 15:25 Miya: for kiai time
2013-05-21 15:25 Kirino Kousaka: >w<
2013-05-21 15:25 Miya: i think you can make it more interesting and harder
2013-05-21 15:25 Miya: well here is my suggestion
2013-05-21 15:25 Miya: 00:54:555 - it's better to follow vocal and the drum here
2013-05-21 15:25 Miya: soo
2013-05-21 15:26 Miya: hard version > 00:54:675 (2) - move this circle to 00:54:555 -
2013-05-21 15:26 Miya: then add a new circle here 00:54:915 -
2013-05-21 15:27 Miya: easy version > just change this circle 00:54:195 (1,2,3) - into slider
2013-05-21 15:27 Miya: xD
2013-05-21 15:27 Kirino Kousaka: easy
2013-05-21 15:28 Miya: ok ok, done? :3
2013-05-21 15:28 Kirino Kousaka: done :3
2013-05-21 15:29 Miya: 00:57:075 (1,2) - this slider doesnt follow the music perfectly :<
2013-05-21 15:29 Miya: hmm
2013-05-21 15:29 Miya: how about adding one more repeat on this slider? 00:57:075 (1) -
2013-05-21 15:29 Miya: then
2013-05-21 15:29 Miya: reduce one repeat of this slider 00:58:035 (2) -
2013-05-21 15:29 Miya: then move it to 00:58:275 -
2013-05-21 15:31 Kirino Kousaka: I don't know ;w;
2013-05-21 15:31 Miya: don't know what? o.o
2013-05-21 15:31 Kirino Kousaka: I think it still sounds weird
2013-05-21 15:31 Miya: the pattern?
2013-05-21 15:31 Kirino Kousaka: ;w;
2013-05-21 15:31 Miya: nope, it's fit the music imo
2013-05-21 15:31 Kirino Kousaka: I get it, but idk about it ;w;
2013-05-21 15:32 Miya: look, if you hear clearly, there is strong vocal "ta' at this time 00:57:795 -
2013-05-21 15:33 Miya: if you use your rhythm, you will miss that strong vocal "ta"
2013-05-21 15:33 Miya: why i place a slider here 00:58:275 (2) - ? it's to follow the vocal next
2013-05-21 15:34 Kirino Kousaka: 00:58:275 (3) - maybe I should let this end on 00:58:755 - to fit in the vocals :3
2013-05-21 15:34 Miya: no, i end the slider here 00:58:515 - to switch back to your drum rhythm
2013-05-21 15:35 Miya: since you dont follow vocal here 00:58:995 (1,2,3) -
2013-05-21 15:35 Miya: it will be weird later
2013-05-21 15:36 Kirino Kousaka: 00:57:075 (1,2) - I think this sounds better ;w;
2013-05-21 15:36 Miya: like what? gimme ss o.o
2013-05-21 15:36 Kirino Kousaka: oops
2013-05-21 15:36 Kirino Kousaka: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/767881 this
2013-05-21 15:36 Kirino Kousaka: wrong paste XD
2013-05-21 15:37 Miya: yeah, sure, it's work
2013-05-21 15:37 Miya: ><
2013-05-21 15:37 Miya: done?
2013-05-21 15:37 Kirino Kousaka: yes :3
2013-05-21 15:37 Miya: 00:59:715 (2) - remove this circle
2013-05-21 15:37 Miya: doesn't follow anything q.q
2013-05-21 15:38 Kirino Kousaka: done :3
2013-05-21 15:38 Miya: 01:02:835 (1,2,3) - try to follow vocal on this combo
2013-05-21 15:38 Miya: 1/1 is feel bland xD
2013-05-21 15:38 Kirino Kousaka: XD
2013-05-21 15:39 Miya: my rhythm, example > http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/767886
2013-05-21 15:42 Kirino Kousaka: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/767890 This sounds good, but the playability... I afraid XD
2013-05-21 15:42 Kirino Kousaka: I'm*
2013-05-21 15:43 Miya: well, use my own rhythm for more playability then
2013-05-21 15:43 Miya: my rhtym*
2013-05-21 15:43 Kirino Kousaka: okay :3 rhythm =w=
2013-05-21 15:44 Kirino Kousaka: done >w<
2013-05-21 15:44 Miya: done?
2013-05-21 15:45 Miya: ok :3
2013-05-21 15:45 Miya: 01:10:035 (5) - same case, should land on 1/4 beat earlier
2013-05-21 15:45 Miya: previous suggestion will work here too :3
2013-05-21 15:52 Miya: done? o.o
2013-05-21 15:52 Kirino Kousaka: yes >w<
2013-05-21 15:52 Miya: ok ok
2013-05-21 15:52 Miya: ><
2013-05-21 15:52 Kirino Kousaka: exactly >w<
2013-05-21 15:53 Miya: same suggestion, 01:18:195 (1,2,3) - , try to follow vocal here
2013-05-21 15:53 Miya: 1/1 is too bland xD
2013-05-21 15:53 Kirino Kousaka: okay wait :3
2013-05-21 15:54 Miya: ok ok ><
2013-05-21 15:54 Miya: tell me once you're done
2013-05-21 15:56 Kirino Kousaka: I used this :3 https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/767903
2013-05-21 15:57 Miya: okay, more better than 1/1 :3
2013-05-21 15:57 Miya: lets go to hard ><
2013-05-21 15:57 Kirino Kousaka: >w<
2013-05-21 15:58 Miya: on hard
2013-05-21 15:59 Kirino Kousaka: owo
2013-05-21 15:59 Miya: 00:39:315 (6) - just delete this circle, doesnt consistant with 00:37:395 - and 00:41:235 -
2013-05-21 16:00 Kirino Kousaka: done >w<
2013-05-21 16:00 Miya: and suprisingly your hard rhythm is more good than your previous 2 diff xD
2013-05-21 16:00 Kirino Kousaka: XD
2013-05-21 16:03 Miya: umm
2013-05-21 16:03 Miya: 00:44:355 (2) - whistle at slider end?
2013-05-21 16:03 Miya: 00:45:555 (1) - here too?
2013-05-21 16:03 Miya: here too 00:46:275 (4) - at sldier end?
2013-05-21 16:04 Kirino Kousaka: all fixed >w<
2013-05-21 16:04 Miya: how about adding whistle at every 1st and 3rd beat on kiai time too? o.o
2013-05-21 16:05 Miya: i see kiai time is lack of whistle ><
2013-05-21 16:05 Kirino Kousaka: well, you should've said that on [Normal] too XDD
2013-05-21 16:05 Miya: oh really? i but i hear some whistle back there xD
2013-05-21 16:05 Kirino Kousaka: I'll fix :3
2013-05-21 16:05 Miya: ok, normal too then lol
2013-05-21 16:05 Kirino Kousaka: okay okay >w<
2013-05-21 16:05 Miya: thats all for hard i think, nice ><
2013-05-21 16:09 Kirino Kousaka: wow >w<
2013-05-21 16:09 Miya:
2013-05-21 16:09 Kirino Kousaka: done on hard, editing normal :3
2013-05-21 16:09 Kirino Kousaka: and gotta grab some food again, I'm dying ;w;
2013-05-21 16:09 Kirino Kousaka: my snacks a while ago are not enough ;w;
2013-05-21 16:09 Kirino Kousaka: just junk foods ;w;
2013-05-21 16:09 Kirino Kousaka: brb ;w;
2013-05-21 16:10 Miya: ok ok xD

1. 00:23:835 (4) - Nazi, but i think it will be good if you make this slider more blanket like this > http://puu.sh/2XYzq.jpg
2. 00:35:715 (8) - I think the clap rhythm should end, so, place a clap on this circle? o.o
   Really nice diff, can't find anything else.

Miya wrote:

IRC Mod :3

1. Fixed a LOT of rhythm on both easy and normal ><

SPOILER

2013-05-21 13:55 Kirino Kousaka: i-is that... :OOOOOOOOOOO
2013-05-21 13:55 Miya: ACTION is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/225589 Sadohara Kaori - To Be Continued? (TV Size) [Easy]]
2013-05-21 13:55 Miya: xD
2013-05-21 13:55 Kirino Kousaka: ♥♥♥♥♥
2013-05-21 13:55 Kirino Kousaka: >w<
2013-05-21 13:56 Kirino Kousaka: inb4 Miya PM's \:D/
2013-05-21 13:56 Miya: lol
2013-05-21 13:56 Miya: you want irc mod or forum mod? i prefer irc mod
2013-05-21 13:56 Kirino Kousaka: well sure irc mod :3
2013-05-21 13:56 Miya: ok ><
2013-05-21 13:56 Miya: first
2013-05-21 13:57 Kirino Kousaka: but I need to eat some snacks first ;w;
2013-05-21 13:57 Miya: try fix a lot of problem here at forum mod, i lazy to retype xD
2013-05-21 13:57 Miya: http://puu.sh/2XWgi.png
2013-05-21 13:57 Kirino Kousaka: orz
2013-05-21 13:58 Kirino Kousaka: btw on general, many already have told us that
2013-05-21 13:58 Miya: yeah, continue it =3=
2013-05-21 13:58 Kirino Kousaka: Saten-san and I discussed it over, we decided to end on this part
2013-05-21 13:58 Miya: it really feel weird
2013-05-21 13:58 Kirino Kousaka: it's okay lol
2013-05-21 13:59 Miya: no, since you mostly map for the beat, but you end it when the vocal end ><
2013-05-21 13:59 Kirino Kousaka: we mapped with beats and vocals ;w;
2013-05-21 13:59 Kirino Kousaka: 00:06:555 (2) -
2013-05-21 14:00 Kirino Kousaka: on normal
2013-05-21 14:00 Kirino Kousaka: 01:00:195 (1,2,3) - on hard
2013-05-21 14:00 Kirino Kousaka: and w/e things ;w;
2013-05-21 14:00 Kirino Kousaka: saten-san won't agree ;w;
2013-05-21 14:00 Miya: lol why so lazy? xD
2013-05-21 14:01 Kirino Kousaka: I would, but saten-san won't ;w;
2013-05-21 14:01 Miya: its okay, since its guest difficulty ><
2013-05-21 14:01 Kirino Kousaka: consistency D:
2013-05-21 14:02 Kirino Kousaka: ACTION is listening to [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/222261 Sadohara Kaori - To Be Continued? (TV Size)]
2013-05-21 14:02 Miya: it's okay guest diff can be different =3=
2013-05-21 14:02 Kirino Kousaka: it ends the same way ;w;
2013-05-21 14:02 Kirino Kousaka: aww okay ;w;
2013-05-21 14:02 Kirino Kousaka: ACTION okayface*
2013-05-21 14:03 Miya: yup, its far more better
2013-05-21 14:03 Kirino Kousaka: but wait
2013-05-21 14:03 Kirino Kousaka: If I did, I should also map 00:01:395 -
2013-05-21 14:03 Miya: nope
2013-05-21 14:03 Kirino Kousaka: that's another reason
2013-05-21 14:03 Kirino Kousaka: why I won't ;w;
2013-05-21 14:04 Kirino Kousaka: like this
2013-05-21 14:04 Kirino Kousaka: ACTION is listening to [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/225046 Sadohara Kaori - To Be Continued? (TV Size)]
2013-05-21 14:04 Miya: why not?
2013-05-21 14:04 Miya:
2013-05-21 14:04 Miya: oh well
2013-05-21 14:04 Kirino Kousaka: orzzz
2013-05-21 14:04 Miya: just fix the other thing in easy first ><
2013-05-21 14:05 Kirino Kousaka: \:DDD/
2013-05-21 14:05 Kirino Kousaka: I will eat first, I will die ;w;
2013-05-21 14:05 Miya: ok ok ><
2013-05-21 14:05 Kirino Kousaka: thanks ;w;
2013-05-21 14:05 Miya: np :3
2013-05-21 14:15 Kirino Kousaka: back :3
2013-05-21 14:15 Miya: wb :3
2013-05-21 14:15 Kirino Kousaka: well, gotta fix :3
2013-05-21 14:15 Miya: well, tell me if you done with the easy mod, or have any question 3
2013-05-21 14:15 Miya: :3*
2013-05-21 14:15 Miya: yup
2013-05-21 14:15 Kirino Kousaka: okay :3
2013-05-21 14:19 Kirino Kousaka: is this all for [Easy]? :3
2013-05-21 14:19 Miya: yup
2013-05-21 14:19 Miya: only for easy ><
2013-05-21 14:19 Kirino Kousaka: okay :3
2013-05-21 14:23 Kirino Kousaka: hmm
2013-05-21 14:23 Kirino Kousaka: 00:57:075 (1,2) - this ruins the spacing ;w;
2013-05-21 14:24 Miya: remap the pattern then o.o
2013-05-21 14:24 Miya: let me think
2013-05-21 14:24 Kirino Kousaka: okay ;w;
2013-05-21 14:24 Kirino Kousaka: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/767791 ?
2013-05-21 14:24 Miya: yup
2013-05-21 14:25 Miya: i havent fix the pattern yet on that pic
2013-05-21 14:25 Miya: well
2013-05-21 14:25 Kirino Kousaka: ;w;
2013-05-21 14:25 Miya: you can change the slider into 3 1/1 circle if you want
2013-05-21 14:26 Miya: maybe something like this http://puu.sh/2XWOy.jpg ?
2013-05-21 14:26 Kirino Kousaka: cool
2013-05-21 14:27 Miya: well
2013-05-21 14:27 Miya: make it good, my example is a bad pattern xD
2013-05-21 14:27 Kirino Kousaka: oh lol
2013-05-21 14:33 Kirino Kousaka: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/767824 \:D/
2013-05-21 14:33 Kirino Kousaka: having those 3 circles on the red tick would confuse beginners imo
2013-05-21 14:33 Miya: hmm
2013-05-21 14:33 Miya: okay, let me try it later ><
2013-05-21 14:34 Kirino Kousaka: okay, gotta fix the others :3
2013-05-21 14:34 Kirino Kousaka: just recheck XD
2013-05-21 14:34 Kirino Kousaka: after XD
2013-05-21 14:34 Miya: okay okay ><
2013-05-21 14:34 Kirino Kousaka: \>w</
2013-05-21 14:35 Miya: at normal add a circle here 00:37:635 - since you follow the vocal on the beginning of the combo ><
2013-05-21 14:36 Miya: it feels somewhat missing something xD
2013-05-21 14:36 Miya: 00:41:475 - same here
2013-05-21 14:36 Kirino Kousaka: okay wait ;w;
2013-05-21 14:36 Miya: okay okay
2013-05-21 14:37 Miya: gotta fix my suggestion later too at 00:37:875 (3) - xD
2013-05-21 14:37 Kirino Kousaka: okay XD
2013-05-21 14:43 Miya: normal rhthm need some fix too xD
2013-05-21 14:43 Kirino Kousaka: ;w;
2013-05-21 14:45 Miya: done with easy? o.o
2013-05-21 14:45 Kirino Kousaka: not yet ;w;
2013-05-21 14:45 Miya: ok ok ><
2013-05-21 14:46 Kirino Kousaka: ;w;
2013-05-21 14:47 Miya: is it hard? o.o
2013-05-21 14:47 Kirino Kousaka: not much, Natsu is bugging me D:
2013-05-21 14:47 Kirino Kousaka: so I ranked something D: http://puu.sh/2XXaQ.png
2013-05-21 14:47 Miya: lol maybe you can in the future xD
2013-05-21 14:48 Kirino Kousaka: lol XD
2013-05-21 14:58 Kirino Kousaka: finally XD
2013-05-21 14:58 Miya: that was long xD
2013-05-21 14:58 Miya: okay to normal now ><
2013-05-21 14:59 Kirino Kousaka: because Natsu ;w;
2013-05-21 14:59 Kirino Kousaka: uguuu ;w;
2013-05-21 15:00 Miya: ><
2013-05-21 15:00 Miya: ready?
2013-05-21 15:00 Kirino Kousaka: yes ;w;
2013-05-21 15:00 Miya: 00:10:035 (2,3) - umm, this should follow the music too
2013-05-21 15:01 Miya: well, to fix this
2013-05-21 15:01 Miya: delete 00:10:035 (2,3) -
2013-05-21 15:01 Miya: add a new circle here 00:10:035 -
2013-05-21 15:01 Kirino Kousaka: wait, I need to pee ;w;
2013-05-21 15:01 Kirino Kousaka: sorry ;w;
2013-05-21 15:01 Miya: lol
2013-05-21 15:01 Miya: just follow my instruction later
2013-05-21 15:02 Miya: add a slider here 00:10:395 - until 00:10:635 -
2013-05-21 15:02 Kirino Kousaka: okay back
2013-05-21 15:02 Miya: so fast o.o
2013-05-21 15:03 Kirino Kousaka: :3
2013-05-21 15:03 Miya: done with 00:10:035 (2,3) - case?
2013-05-21 15:03 Kirino Kousaka: yes :3
2013-05-21 15:04 Miya: okay next :3
2013-05-21 15:04 Miya: extend this slider by 1/4 00:13:875 (3) -
2013-05-21 15:04 Miya: since you make the same rhythm here 00:15:795 (3) -
2013-05-21 15:05 Kirino Kousaka: done :3
2013-05-21 15:05 Miya: next ><
2013-05-21 15:05 Kirino Kousaka: >w<
2013-05-21 15:05 Miya: 00:18:195 (3) - this should end by 1/4 forward too
2013-05-21 15:06 Miya: but it will be tricky so try this suggestion
2013-05-21 15:07 Kirino Kousaka: I don't know ;w;
2013-05-21 15:07 Miya: wait Andre pming me xD
2013-05-21 15:07 Kirino Kousaka: lolwhat XD
2013-05-21 15:07 Miya: Andrea*
2013-05-21 15:07 Miya: oh well, lets continue ><
2013-05-21 15:08 Miya: reduce this repeat by 1 00:17:235 (2) -
2013-05-21 15:08 Miya: umm nvm
2013-05-21 15:08 Miya: umm yeah lol
2013-05-21 15:09 Miya: 00:17:235 (2) - reduce repeat by 1, then add a new slider here 00:17:715 - until 00:18:315 -
2013-05-21 15:09 Miya: ofc you need to remove the circle here too 00:18:195 -
2013-05-21 15:09 Miya: ><
2013-05-21 15:09 Kirino Kousaka: wait, is this good? https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/767850
2013-05-21 15:10 Miya: i prefer my rhythm for consistencies ><
2013-05-21 15:10 Kirino Kousaka: okay wait :3
2013-05-21 15:10 Miya: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/767853
2013-05-21 15:10 Miya: like usual, dont follow the pattern lol
2013-05-21 15:12 Kirino Kousaka: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/767857
2013-05-21 15:13 Miya: okay good, next ><
2013-05-21 15:13 Kirino Kousaka: >w<
2013-05-21 15:13 Miya: 00:21:555 (3) - same, extend by 1/4
2013-05-21 15:13 Miya: woops, 00:23:475 (3) - forgot a clap at the slider end
2013-05-21 15:14 Miya: 00:25:395 (2) - same here too, extend by 1/4
2013-05-21 15:15 Miya: for the next part, i dont think extending slider will be necessary ><
2013-05-21 15:15 Miya: but if you want to extend them, its good :3
2013-05-21 15:18 Kirino Kousaka: done, I didn't extend the others XD
2013-05-21 15:19 Miya: ok, fine ><
2013-05-21 15:19 Miya: 00:37:635 - add a circle here, vocal start here
2013-05-21 15:19 Kirino Kousaka: >w<
2013-05-21 15:19 Kirino Kousaka: done >w<
2013-05-21 15:19 Miya: after that
2013-05-21 15:19 Miya: 00:37:875 (3) - delete
2013-05-21 15:20 Kirino Kousaka: why? D:
2013-05-21 15:20 Miya: 00:38:115 (3) - move this slider to 00:37:875 - but make it end on the same spot
2013-05-21 15:20 Miya: for better rhythm of course
2013-05-21 15:20 Miya: dont forget to replace the hitsound :3
2013-05-21 15:21 Miya: it will be consistant with this part later 00:41:715 (3) -
2013-05-21 15:21 Kirino Kousaka: 00:37:875 (3) - should still end on 00:38:595 -
2013-05-21 15:21 Kirino Kousaka: ?
2013-05-21 15:21 Kirino Kousaka: or extend?
2013-05-21 15:21 Miya: extend to 00:38:835 -
2013-05-21 15:21 Kirino Kousaka: oh okay :3
2013-05-21 15:22 Miya: done? o.o
2013-05-21 15:22 Kirino Kousaka: wait XD
2013-05-21 15:22 Miya: ok ok ><
2013-05-21 15:23 Kirino Kousaka: done >w<
2013-05-21 15:23 Miya: add circle here 00:41:475 - :3
2013-05-21 15:24 Kirino Kousaka: done >w<
2013-05-21 15:24 Miya: same reason, the vocal start there
2013-05-21 15:24 Miya: ok
2013-05-21 15:24 Miya: oh, you forgot a whistle at slider start 00:41:715 (4) -
2013-05-21 15:24 Kirino Kousaka: added :3
2013-05-21 15:25 Miya: for kiai time
2013-05-21 15:25 Kirino Kousaka: >w<
2013-05-21 15:25 Miya: i think you can make it more interesting and harder
2013-05-21 15:25 Miya: well here is my suggestion
2013-05-21 15:25 Miya: 00:54:555 - it's better to follow vocal and the drum here
2013-05-21 15:25 Miya: soo
2013-05-21 15:26 Miya: hard version > 00:54:675 (2) - move this circle to 00:54:555 -
2013-05-21 15:26 Miya: then add a new circle here 00:54:915 -
2013-05-21 15:27 Miya: easy version > just change this circle 00:54:195 (1,2,3) - into slider
2013-05-21 15:27 Miya: xD
2013-05-21 15:27 Kirino Kousaka: easy
2013-05-21 15:28 Miya: ok ok, done? :3
2013-05-21 15:28 Kirino Kousaka: done :3
2013-05-21 15:29 Miya: 00:57:075 (1,2) - this slider doesnt follow the music perfectly :<
2013-05-21 15:29 Miya: hmm
2013-05-21 15:29 Miya: how about adding one more repeat on this slider? 00:57:075 (1) -
2013-05-21 15:29 Miya: then
2013-05-21 15:29 Miya: reduce one repeat of this slider 00:58:035 (2) -
2013-05-21 15:29 Miya: then move it to 00:58:275 -
2013-05-21 15:31 Kirino Kousaka: I don't know ;w;
2013-05-21 15:31 Miya: don't know what? o.o
2013-05-21 15:31 Kirino Kousaka: I think it still sounds weird
2013-05-21 15:31 Miya: the pattern?
2013-05-21 15:31 Kirino Kousaka: ;w;
2013-05-21 15:31 Miya: nope, it's fit the music imo
2013-05-21 15:31 Kirino Kousaka: I get it, but idk about it ;w;
2013-05-21 15:32 Miya: look, if you hear clearly, there is strong vocal "ta' at this time 00:57:795 -
2013-05-21 15:33 Miya: if you use your rhythm, you will miss that strong vocal "ta"
2013-05-21 15:33 Miya: why i place a slider here 00:58:275 (2) - ? it's to follow the vocal next
2013-05-21 15:34 Kirino Kousaka: 00:58:275 (3) - maybe I should let this end on 00:58:755 - to fit in the vocals :3
2013-05-21 15:34 Miya: no, i end the slider here 00:58:515 - to switch back to your drum rhythm
2013-05-21 15:35 Miya: since you dont follow vocal here 00:58:995 (1,2,3) -
2013-05-21 15:35 Miya: it will be weird later
2013-05-21 15:36 Kirino Kousaka: 00:57:075 (1,2) - I think this sounds better ;w;
2013-05-21 15:36 Miya: like what? gimme ss o.o
2013-05-21 15:36 Kirino Kousaka: oops
2013-05-21 15:36 Kirino Kousaka: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/767881 this
2013-05-21 15:36 Kirino Kousaka: wrong paste XD
2013-05-21 15:37 Miya: yeah, sure, it's work
2013-05-21 15:37 Miya: ><
2013-05-21 15:37 Miya: done?
2013-05-21 15:37 Kirino Kousaka: yes :3
2013-05-21 15:37 Miya: 00:59:715 (2) - remove this circle
2013-05-21 15:37 Miya: doesn't follow anything q.q
2013-05-21 15:38 Kirino Kousaka: done :3
2013-05-21 15:38 Miya: 01:02:835 (1,2,3) - try to follow vocal on this combo
2013-05-21 15:38 Miya: 1/1 is feel bland xD
2013-05-21 15:38 Kirino Kousaka: XD
2013-05-21 15:39 Miya: my rhythm, example > http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/767886
2013-05-21 15:42 Kirino Kousaka: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/767890 This sounds good, but the playability... I afraid XD
2013-05-21 15:42 Kirino Kousaka: I'm*
2013-05-21 15:43 Miya: well, use my own rhythm for more playability then
2013-05-21 15:43 Miya: my rhtym*
2013-05-21 15:43 Kirino Kousaka: okay :3 rhythm =w=
2013-05-21 15:44 Kirino Kousaka: done >w<
2013-05-21 15:44 Miya: done?
2013-05-21 15:45 Miya: ok :3
2013-05-21 15:45 Miya: 01:10:035 (5) - same case, should land on 1/4 beat earlier
2013-05-21 15:45 Miya: previous suggestion will work here too :3
2013-05-21 15:52 Miya: done? o.o
2013-05-21 15:52 Kirino Kousaka: yes >w<
2013-05-21 15:52 Miya: ok ok
2013-05-21 15:52 Miya: ><
2013-05-21 15:52 Kirino Kousaka: exactly >w<
2013-05-21 15:53 Miya: same suggestion, 01:18:195 (1,2,3) - , try to follow vocal here
2013-05-21 15:53 Miya: 1/1 is too bland xD
2013-05-21 15:53 Kirino Kousaka: okay wait :3
2013-05-21 15:54 Miya: ok ok ><
2013-05-21 15:54 Miya: tell me once you're done
2013-05-21 15:56 Kirino Kousaka: I used this :3 https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/767903
2013-05-21 15:57 Miya: okay, more better than 1/1 :3
2013-05-21 15:57 Miya: lets go to hard ><
2013-05-21 15:57 Kirino Kousaka: >w<
2013-05-21 15:58 Miya: on hard
2013-05-21 15:59 Kirino Kousaka: owo
2013-05-21 15:59 Miya: 00:39:315 (6) - just delete this circle, doesnt consistant with 00:37:395 - and 00:41:235 -
2013-05-21 16:00 Kirino Kousaka: done >w<
2013-05-21 16:00 Miya: and suprisingly your hard rhythm is more good than your previous 2 diff xD
2013-05-21 16:00 Kirino Kousaka: XD
2013-05-21 16:03 Miya: umm
2013-05-21 16:03 Miya: 00:44:355 (2) - whistle at slider end?
2013-05-21 16:03 Miya: 00:45:555 (1) - here too?
2013-05-21 16:03 Miya: here too 00:46:275 (4) - at sldier end?
2013-05-21 16:04 Kirino Kousaka: all fixed >w<
2013-05-21 16:04 Miya: how about adding whistle at every 1st and 3rd beat on kiai time too? o.o
2013-05-21 16:05 Miya: i see kiai time is lack of whistle ><
2013-05-21 16:05 Kirino Kousaka: well, you should've said that on [Normal] too XDD
2013-05-21 16:05 Miya: oh really? i but i hear some whistle back there xD
2013-05-21 16:05 Kirino Kousaka: I'll fix :3
2013-05-21 16:05 Miya: ok, normal too then lol
2013-05-21 16:05 Kirino Kousaka: okay okay >w<
2013-05-21 16:05 Miya: thats all for hard i think, nice ><
2013-05-21 16:09 Kirino Kousaka: wow >w<
2013-05-21 16:09 Miya:
2013-05-21 16:09 Kirino Kousaka: done on hard, editing normal :3
2013-05-21 16:09 Kirino Kousaka: and gotta grab some food again, I'm dying ;w;
2013-05-21 16:09 Kirino Kousaka: my snacks a while ago are not enough ;w;
2013-05-21 16:09 Kirino Kousaka: just junk foods ;w;
2013-05-21 16:09 Kirino Kousaka: brb ;w;
2013-05-21 16:10 Miya: ok ok xD

Saten

1. 00:23:835 (4) - Nazi, but i think it will be good if you make this slider more blanket like this > http://puu.sh/2XYzq.jpg
2. 00:35:715 (8) - I think the clap rhythm should end, so, place a clap on this circle? o.o
   Really nice diff, can't find anything else.

Well, since a lot of rhythm changed on both normal and easy, i think you need additional mod before ready to rank ><
Good luck, very moe song <3
Kudos star since this map already starred

Call me back once you got 3 mod ><

Miya wrote:

Saten

1. 00:23:835 (4) - Nazi, but i think it will be good if you make this slider more blanket like this > http://puu.sh/2XYzq.jpg I think the spreading looks just as good imo
2. 00:35:715 (8) - I think the clap rhythm should end, so, place a clap on this circle? o.o I think it fits better the way it is with the complex patterns I used overall
   Really nice diff, can't find anything else.

Natsu wrote:

Saten:

1. 00:33:075 maybe make it curved like you did on 00:32:115 (2,3,7) - actual way feel so weird for me is like out of the combo pattern maybe just me... it doesn't look weird imo o_O
2. 00:35:955 add whistle feel this place so empty hmm? there's already a whistle here o:
   
   woah really love this diff (●´ω｀)

Natsu wrote:

Hi o3o lazy mod from in game request KirinOni LOL

Hard:

1. why cs3? so weird in hard imo but is ok xD lol
2. 00:06:675 remove clap is not following music orz I think it's fine orz
3. 00:20:355 stack this perfect with the tail of 00:21:075 yes im nazi nah, looks fine, it's stacked on 00:18:915 (7). :3
4. 00:35:955 is a relax point in music i dont think finish fit this maybe add whistle better imo Fixed~
5. 00:39:555 add circle to fit the vocals? i feel so empty without it orz Added~
6. 00:41:475 ^ Added~
7. 00:47:475 add circle then start spinner here 00:47:595 gonna follow better music imo Fixed~
8. 01:00:435 remove clap then add clap in 01:00:675 fit better the music imo added whistle on 01:00:675 instead~

Normal:

1. AR +1 for better diff spread since easy got 3 and hard got 7 5 gonna fit better for normal nope, it works fine as it is =w=
2. 00:12:915 x:42 y:195 (nazi) o3o moved 00:12:915 (1) to x:44 y:196 instead =w=
3. 00:25:395 x:110 y:228 to fix the little distance error also better blank with previous o.o moved 00:25:395 (2) to x:112 y:228 instead
4. 00:34:995 (2,1) - why this jump on normal orz? xD nope, Andrea suggested that one =w=
5. 00:35:955 same as hard fixed~
6. 01:14:355 (1,2,3) - fix distance is little but is better if is the same xD fixed~

Easy:

1. 00:06:675 same as hard no change orz
2. 00:35:955 ^ fixed~
3. 00:41:715 NC fixed~
4. 00:46:995 move this to x:341 y:183 since is more natural to play like you did on 00:43:635 (1,2) - fixed~
5. 01:06:675 (1,2) - fix distance fixed~

Well thats all I can suggest here GL fun map

1. 00:33:075 (4) - 0,0 http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/771145
2. 00:52:395 (2,4) - i suggest http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/771167 www

1. 00:07:755 (2,3) - lyrics rhythm is http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/771161
2. 00:10:155 (3) - this doesn't feel comfortable, i suggest remove
3. 00:18:195 (5) - ^
4. 00:33:075 (5) - i think (5) could make a M shape http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/771162
5. 00:53:475 (2) - remove this?
6. 01:00:675 (3) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/771164

1. 00:29:235 (3,3) - end on blue tick ww
2. 00:32:115 (1,2,3,4) - square!
3. 00:57:075 (1) - 3/4 ww http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/771171 771171

1. 00:57:075 (1) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/771174
2. 01:08:115 (2) - looks too close

[CSGA]Ar3sgice wrote:

Saten

1. 00:33:075 (4) - 0,0 http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/771145 I'll keep it as it is
2. 00:52:395 (2,4) - i suggest http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/771167 www sure, looks pretty neat

[CSGA]Ar3sgice wrote:

hi Hello~ >w</

Hard

1. 00:07:755 (2,3) - lyrics rhythm is http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/771161 fixed~
2. 00:10:155 (3) - this doesn't feel comfortable, i suggest remove fixed~
3. 00:18:195 (5) - ^ fixed~
4. 00:33:075 (5) - i think (5) could make a M shape http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/771162 fixed~
5. 00:53:475 (2) - remove this? nope. owo
6. 01:00:675 (3) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/771164 meh, looks fine as it is imo. =w=

Normal

1. 00:29:235 (3,3) - end on blue tick ww fixed~
2. 00:32:115 (1,2,3,4) - square! I nailed it. owo
3. 00:57:075 (1) - 3/4 ww http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/771171 no change owo

Easy

1. 00:57:075 (1) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/771174 Fixed~
2. 01:08:115 (2) - looks too close owo? no change~

ww

Saten wrote:

[CSGA]Ar3sgice wrote:

Saten

1. 00:33:075 (4) - 0,0 http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/771145 I'll keep it as it is
2. 00:52:395 (2,4) - i suggest http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/771167 www sure, looks pretty neat

thanks

http://puu.sh/2Zxlf/67a5c37dc3.osu

22:57 Kirino Kousaka: hello owo/
22:57 UnitedWeSin: hi there
22:57 Kirino Kousaka: do you have some time for a quick mod? ;w;
22:58 UnitedWeSin: like irc?
22:58 Kirino Kousaka: possible
22:58 Kirino Kousaka: :3
22:58 UnitedWeSin: i can take a look
22:58 Kirino Kousaka: do you? ;w;
22:58 Kirino Kousaka: :O
22:58 Kirino Kousaka: ♥
22:58 *Kirino Kousaka is listening to [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/225589 Sadohara Kaori - To Be Continued? (TV Size)]
22:59 UnitedWeSin: ah yes
22:59 Kirino Kousaka: yay >w<
23:11 UnitedWeSin: the circle size for hard surprised me lol
23:11 Kirino Kousaka: how was it? owo
23:11 Kirino Kousaka: lol
23:11 Kirino Kousaka: if I adjust it by 1, it feels so small orz
23:11 UnitedWeSin: it's fine it works well
23:12 Kirino Kousaka: lol
23:12 Kirino Kousaka: I get that a lot. =w=
23:12 UnitedWeSin: 00:19:155 (1) - seems strange shape
23:12 UnitedWeSin: how about a nice wave slider?
23:12 Kirino Kousaka: I see, wait =w=
23:13 UnitedWeSin: http://puu.sh/2ZYu0.png
23:14 Kirino Kousaka: nailed it \:D/ http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/772451
23:14 UnitedWeSin:
23:15 UnitedWeSin: nazi, but I would select the 00:22:515 (1,2,3,4) - and move it slightly so that the head of the 2 is overlapped perfectly with the head of the 00:24:915 (2) -
23:15 UnitedWeSin: nazi, but I would select the 00:22:515 (1,2,3,4) - and move it slightly so that the head of the 2 is overlapped perfectly with the head of the 00:24:915 (2) -
23:15 UnitedWeSin: doesn't really matter but its just a few grids to the left and it looks nicer
23:16 Kirino Kousaka: hmm, wait
23:16 Kirino Kousaka: fixed :3
23:17 UnitedWeSin: 00:37:395 - i really really really wish there was a note here ;_;
23:17 UnitedWeSin: i know it follows vocals but that's a long wait -.-
23:18 Kirino Kousaka: lol
23:18 Kirino Kousaka: wait
23:18 UnitedWeSin: if you don't want to
23:18 UnitedWeSin: you could changethe placement on 00:37:635 (2,3,4,5) -
23:18 UnitedWeSin: to make it more that 1.0 spacing
23:18 UnitedWeSin: to the 2 that is
23:18 Kirino Kousaka: wait, I didn't get much of that XD
23:19 UnitedWeSin: sorry ;_;
23:19 Kirino Kousaka: no, I'm the dumb one here ;w;
23:20 UnitedWeSin: sec brb
23:20 Kirino Kousaka: oki :3
23:22 UnitedWeSin: ok
23:22 UnitedWeSin: coffee is ready :3
23:22 Kirino Kousaka: lol :3
23:23 Kirino Kousaka: what to do 00:37:635 (2,3,4,5) -
23:23 Kirino Kousaka: =w=
23:23 UnitedWeSin: sec lemme see
23:27 UnitedWeSin: lets move on
23:27 Kirino Kousaka: okay XD
23:27 UnitedWeSin: i'll come back to that
23:27 UnitedWeSin: 00:41:715 (3,1,2) - try to make placement look nicer
23:27 UnitedWeSin: i suggest angle the 3 more down and have the 1 and 2 at the same angle
23:27 UnitedWeSin: like this
23:28 UnitedWeSin: http://puu.sh/2ZYQu.png
23:28 UnitedWeSin: my pictures slow -.-
23:28 UnitedWeSin: anyways you can use more than 1.0 distance snap there imo
23:28 UnitedWeSin: it looks better and plays more smooth
23:29 Kirino Kousaka: on 00:41:715 (3,1,2) - ?
23:29 UnitedWeSin: yes
23:29 Kirino Kousaka: okay wait
23:30 Kirino Kousaka: only for those three?
23:30 Kirino Kousaka: lol
23:30 Kirino Kousaka: I'll see
23:30 UnitedWeSin: 00:50:355 (1,2,1) - also here
23:30 UnitedWeSin: please use more that .4 snap -.-
23:30 UnitedWeSin: 1.0 works well
23:30 UnitedWeSin: the repeating slider overlap too much
23:31 Kirino Kousaka: I'll use 1.4? so the sliders don't overlap much?
23:31 UnitedWeSin: no 1.0 is best
23:31 Kirino Kousaka: oh
23:31 UnitedWeSin: 1.0 plays natural
23:31 Kirino Kousaka: I thought "please use more than .4" XD
23:32 UnitedWeSin: ;_;
23:33 UnitedWeSin: here's what I would suggest
23:33 UnitedWeSin: remove a repeat from the 00:50:835 (2) -
23:33 UnitedWeSin: it's overmapped
23:33 Kirino Kousaka: I think not, since I here the music :<
23:33 UnitedWeSin: http://puu.sh/2ZYZ6.png
23:33 Kirino Kousaka: hear*
23:34 Kirino Kousaka: orz
23:34 UnitedWeSin: at 00:51:195 - there is no drum sound
23:34 UnitedWeSin: so it's better to have a gap
23:34 Kirino Kousaka: I see
23:35 Kirino Kousaka: how about the pattern of these sliders?
23:35 Kirino Kousaka: what goes nice?
23:35 UnitedWeSin: of the 00:50:355 (1,2) -
23:35 UnitedWeSin: ?
23:35 Kirino Kousaka: yes :3
23:35 UnitedWeSin: how about that picture?
23:35 UnitedWeSin: it's up to you
23:36 UnitedWeSin: place then how you like
23:36 UnitedWeSin: but 1.0 spacing is best imo
23:36 Kirino Kousaka: oh
23:36 Kirino Kousaka: I didn't notice the picture orz
23:36 Kirino Kousaka: okay wait
23:39 Kirino Kousaka: oops dc
23:39 UnitedWeSin:
23:39 Kirino Kousaka: sorry about that
23:39 Kirino Kousaka: what did I miss>
23:39 Kirino Kousaka: :3?
23:39 UnitedWeSin: nothing xD
23:39 UnitedWeSin: are you done with 00:50:355 (1,2) - ?
23:40 Kirino Kousaka: oh :3
23:40 Kirino Kousaka: well yes :3
23:40 Kirino Kousaka: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/772469
23:41 UnitedWeSin: ok well at 00:37:635 -
23:41 Kirino Kousaka: :3
23:41 UnitedWeSin: i don't like rhythm -.-
23:41 Kirino Kousaka: ... ;w;
23:42 UnitedWeSin: maybe http://puu.sh/2ZZ9e.png
23:42 Kirino Kousaka: but it follows the vocal ;w;
23:42 Kirino Kousaka: vocals*
23:42 UnitedWeSin: the 00:38:355 (5) - isn't following voclas
23:42 UnitedWeSin: vocals
23:43 Kirino Kousaka: =w=
23:43 Kirino Kousaka: I see =w=
23:44 UnitedWeSin: if you want to
23:44 Kirino Kousaka: wait =w=
23:44 UnitedWeSin: make spacing to the 00:37:635 (2) - bigger than 1.0
23:44 Kirino Kousaka: I'm experimenting =w=
23:44 UnitedWeSin: like the 00:41:475 (2) -
23:47 Kirino Kousaka: done =w=
23:47 UnitedWeSin:
23:47 UnitedWeSin: wanna upload or move on?
23:47 Kirino Kousaka: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/772474
23:48 Kirino Kousaka: well, it's up to you :3
23:48 Kirino Kousaka: if you want to see or just continue =w=
23:48 UnitedWeSin: normal needs work -.-
23:48 Kirino Kousaka: orz
23:48 UnitedWeSin: ;_;
23:48 Kirino Kousaka: Anything else for [Hard] ? ;w;
23:49 UnitedWeSin: that's all that really bothers me in hard
23:49 Kirino Kousaka: okay \:3/
23:49 Kirino Kousaka: move to [Normal] then? :3
23:49 UnitedWeSin: yep
23:49 Kirino Kousaka: :3
23:50 UnitedWeSin: 00:13:875 (3,1,2,3) - try to make placement look better
23:50 UnitedWeSin: the 00:13:875 (3,3) - overlap
23:50 UnitedWeSin: in a bad way
23:50 UnitedWeSin: http://puu.sh/2ZZjG.png
23:50 UnitedWeSin: try flipping the 00:15:795 (3) around
23:51 UnitedWeSin: and place it so the 00:14:835 (1,2,3) - are all blanketing the 00:13:875 (3) -
23:51 Kirino Kousaka: okay :3
23:52 UnitedWeSin: 00:06:555 (2,2) - i really don't like this -.-
23:53 Kirino Kousaka: I know
23:53 Kirino Kousaka: blue tick
23:53 Kirino Kousaka: =w=
23:54 Kirino Kousaka: but I have found no good solutions for it so far =w=
23:54 Kirino Kousaka: wait, still fixing 00:14:835 (1,2,3) -
23:58 UnitedWeSin: k
23:58 UnitedWeSin: dun?
23:58 Kirino Kousaka: yes :3
23:59 UnitedWeSin: 00:31:155 (3) - don't you want this to end on the blue tick00:31:755 - ?
23:59 Kirino Kousaka: true dat. =w=
23:59 Kirino Kousaka: wait =w=
23:59 UnitedWeSin: =w=
00:00 Kirino Kousaka: done =w=
00:00 UnitedWeSin: i think your rhythm at beginning will confuse people
00:01 UnitedWeSin: can you make it more simple?
00:01 UnitedWeSin: http://puu.sh/2ZZxd.png
00:01 UnitedWeSin: just a sample
00:01 Kirino Kousaka: wait
00:05 Kirino Kousaka: done =w=
00:06 UnitedWeSin: `:3
00:06 UnitedWeSin: 00:50:355 -
00:06 UnitedWeSin: please add something I beg you ;_;
00:06 UnitedWeSin: http://puu.sh/2ZZAV.png
00:06 UnitedWeSin: just a 1/2 slider with a repeat
00:06 UnitedWeSin: fits so nice
00:06 Kirino Kousaka: wait wait XD
00:09 Kirino Kousaka: done =w=
00:09 UnitedWeSin: 00:57:075 (1) - please don't have 2 repeats on this I beg you ;_;
00:10 UnitedWeSin: the slider is too short for that
00:10 UnitedWeSin: remove one repeat
00:10 UnitedWeSin: then add cricle at 00:57:795 -
00:11 UnitedWeSin: http://puu.sh/2ZZIs.png
00:11 UnitedWeSin: i say that because it's just more intuitive for the player
00:13 Kirino Kousaka: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/772493
00:13 *Kirino Kousaka runs
00:13 UnitedWeSin: yea that's fine :3
00:13 UnitedWeSin: do the same thing at 01:20:115 (5) - please ;_;
00:14 UnitedWeSin: change to two 1/2 sliders
00:14 UnitedWeSin: plays so much better
00:14 Kirino Kousaka: =w=d
00:15 UnitedWeSin: :3
00:15 Kirino Kousaka: done =w=d
00:16 UnitedWeSin: ready for rank after that imo :3
00:16 Kirino Kousaka: :O
00:16 Kirino Kousaka: how about [Easy] ? :O
00:17 UnitedWeSin: will check
00:17 Kirino Kousaka: okay :3
00:17 UnitedWeSin: again I wish you would add something at 00:50:355 -
00:17 Kirino Kousaka: wait, I'm fixing things for normalXD
00:17 UnitedWeSin: xD
00:18 UnitedWeSin: maybe it's better not to though
00:18 UnitedWeSin: the easy is really good
00:19 Kirino Kousaka: :O
00:19 UnitedWeSin: just one more thing in normal
00:19 UnitedWeSin: 01:08:595 (3,4,1) - this placement -.-
00:20 Kirino Kousaka: what to do ;w;
00:21 UnitedWeSin: maybe just rotate the 01:08:595 (3) - a bit
00:21 UnitedWeSin: :3
00:21 UnitedWeSin: http://puu.sh/2ZZV6.png
00:22 UnitedWeSin: idk I'm nazi -.-
00:22 Kirino Kousaka: how about blanket 01:09:555 (4) - with 01:08:595 (3) - ? like this: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/772496
00:22 Kirino Kousaka: :3
00:23 UnitedWeSin: seems ok either way
00:23 Kirino Kousaka: =w=d
00:24 UnitedWeSin: do you want me to mod saten's diff?
00:24 Kirino Kousaka: ofc =w=
00:25 Kirino Kousaka: if you're done with my diffs, post this irc mod together with mods for saten :3
00:25 UnitedWeSin: ah
00:25 UnitedWeSin: well update I'll check
00:25 Kirino Kousaka: like this p/2312719/
00:26 Kirino Kousaka: nothing more for [Easy]? :3
00:26 UnitedWeSin: easy is good
00:26 Kirino Kousaka: \:D/
00:27 UnitedWeSin: it seems that saten doesn't plan on changing anything so I won't waste my time lol
00:27 Kirino Kousaka: lol
00:27 Kirino Kousaka: why not try owo
00:27 UnitedWeSin: some things are overmapped imo but it's fine
00:27 Kirino Kousaka: well okay, just post and say that's Saten's diff is fine owo
00:28 Kirino Kousaka: also, updated. Check now =w=
00:31 UnitedWeSin: 00:37:635 (2,3,4,5,6) - i love this in hard
00:31 Kirino Kousaka: hue =w=
00:31 Kirino Kousaka: thank you =w=
00:33 UnitedWeSin: nice :3
00:33 Kirino Kousaka: =w=

1. Some things are overmapped imo. For example, 01:12:795 (3,4,5,6,7,8) - there is absolutely nothing in the music supporting a long stream like this so it feels really awkward in play. You ignore the interesting variation in claps in the music and just map a stream...
   
2. 01:16:275 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - A stream is alright there, but the music is calling for large jumps with the accented trumpets. I'm surprised that you didn't take advantage of that.
   
3. 00:45:075 (6) - Should be a single circle really.
   
4. 00:46:275 (3,4,5,6) - The small spacing here is awkward imo, they would be better as slight jumps.
   
5. 01:00:195 - I don't like this gap to be honest, it's hard to read the rhythm on the 01:00:315 (1,2). A 3/4 slider at 00:59:955 would have been better.
   
6. 01:05:955 - I was really disappointed with the transition here. To me this it's the most epic part of the song, I was surprised that you didn't take the chance here to map a really amazing transition with techniques that I've seen in so many of your other maps. Jumps perhaps.

UnitedWeSin wrote:

22:57 Kirino Kousaka: hello owo/
22:57 UnitedWeSin: hi there
22:57 Kirino Kousaka: do you have some time for a quick mod? ;w;
22:58 UnitedWeSin: like irc?
22:58 Kirino Kousaka: possible
22:58 Kirino Kousaka: :3
22:58 UnitedWeSin: i can take a look
22:58 Kirino Kousaka: do you? ;w;
22:58 Kirino Kousaka: :O
22:58 Kirino Kousaka: ♥
22:58 *Kirino Kousaka is listening to [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/225589 Sadohara Kaori - To Be Continued? (TV Size)]
22:59 UnitedWeSin: ah yes
22:59 Kirino Kousaka: yay >w<
23:11 UnitedWeSin: the circle size for hard surprised me lol
23:11 Kirino Kousaka: how was it? owo
23:11 Kirino Kousaka: lol
23:11 Kirino Kousaka: if I adjust it by 1, it feels so small orz
23:11 UnitedWeSin: it's fine it works well
23:12 Kirino Kousaka: lol
23:12 Kirino Kousaka: I get that a lot. =w=
23:12 UnitedWeSin: 00:19:155 (1) - seems strange shape
23:12 UnitedWeSin: how about a nice wave slider?
23:12 Kirino Kousaka: I see, wait =w=
23:13 UnitedWeSin: http://puu.sh/2ZYu0.png
23:14 Kirino Kousaka: nailed it \:D/ http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/772451
23:14 UnitedWeSin:
23:15 UnitedWeSin: nazi, but I would select the 00:22:515 (1,2,3,4) - and move it slightly so that the head of the 2 is overlapped perfectly with the head of the 00:24:915 (2) -
23:15 UnitedWeSin: nazi, but I would select the 00:22:515 (1,2,3,4) - and move it slightly so that the head of the 2 is overlapped perfectly with the head of the 00:24:915 (2) -
23:15 UnitedWeSin: doesn't really matter but its just a few grids to the left and it looks nicer
23:16 Kirino Kousaka: hmm, wait
23:16 Kirino Kousaka: fixed :3
23:17 UnitedWeSin: 00:37:395 - i really really really wish there was a note here ;_;
23:17 UnitedWeSin: i know it follows vocals but that's a long wait -.-
23:18 Kirino Kousaka: lol
23:18 Kirino Kousaka: wait
23:18 UnitedWeSin: if you don't want to
23:18 UnitedWeSin: you could changethe placement on 00:37:635 (2,3,4,5) -
23:18 UnitedWeSin: to make it more that 1.0 spacing
23:18 UnitedWeSin: to the 2 that is
23:18 Kirino Kousaka: wait, I didn't get much of that XD
23:19 UnitedWeSin: sorry ;_;
23:19 Kirino Kousaka: no, I'm the dumb one here ;w;
23:20 UnitedWeSin: sec brb
23:20 Kirino Kousaka: oki :3
23:22 UnitedWeSin: ok
23:22 UnitedWeSin: coffee is ready :3
23:22 Kirino Kousaka: lol :3
23:23 Kirino Kousaka: what to do 00:37:635 (2,3,4,5) -
23:23 Kirino Kousaka: =w=
23:23 UnitedWeSin: sec lemme see
23:27 UnitedWeSin: lets move on
23:27 Kirino Kousaka: okay XD
23:27 UnitedWeSin: i'll come back to that
23:27 UnitedWeSin: 00:41:715 (3,1,2) - try to make placement look nicer
23:27 UnitedWeSin: i suggest angle the 3 more down and have the 1 and 2 at the same angle
23:27 UnitedWeSin: like this
23:28 UnitedWeSin: http://puu.sh/2ZYQu.png
23:28 UnitedWeSin: my pictures slow -.-
23:28 UnitedWeSin: anyways you can use more than 1.0 distance snap there imo
23:28 UnitedWeSin: it looks better and plays more smooth
23:29 Kirino Kousaka: on 00:41:715 (3,1,2) - ?
23:29 UnitedWeSin: yes
23:29 Kirino Kousaka: okay wait
23:30 Kirino Kousaka: only for those three?
23:30 Kirino Kousaka: lol
23:30 Kirino Kousaka: I'll see
23:30 UnitedWeSin: 00:50:355 (1,2,1) - also here
23:30 UnitedWeSin: please use more that .4 snap -.-
23:30 UnitedWeSin: 1.0 works well
23:30 UnitedWeSin: the repeating slider overlap too much
23:31 Kirino Kousaka: I'll use 1.4? so the sliders don't overlap much?
23:31 UnitedWeSin: no 1.0 is best
23:31 Kirino Kousaka: oh
23:31 UnitedWeSin: 1.0 plays natural
23:31 Kirino Kousaka: I thought "please use more than .4" XD
23:32 UnitedWeSin: ;_;
23:33 UnitedWeSin: here's what I would suggest
23:33 UnitedWeSin: remove a repeat from the 00:50:835 (2) -
23:33 UnitedWeSin: it's overmapped
23:33 Kirino Kousaka: I think not, since I here the music :<
23:33 UnitedWeSin: http://puu.sh/2ZYZ6.png
23:33 Kirino Kousaka: hear*
23:34 Kirino Kousaka: orz
23:34 UnitedWeSin: at 00:51:195 - there is no drum sound
23:34 UnitedWeSin: so it's better to have a gap
23:34 Kirino Kousaka: I see
23:35 Kirino Kousaka: how about the pattern of these sliders?
23:35 Kirino Kousaka: what goes nice?
23:35 UnitedWeSin: of the 00:50:355 (1,2) -
23:35 UnitedWeSin: ?
23:35 Kirino Kousaka: yes :3
23:35 UnitedWeSin: how about that picture?
23:35 UnitedWeSin: it's up to you
23:36 UnitedWeSin: place then how you like
23:36 UnitedWeSin: but 1.0 spacing is best imo
23:36 Kirino Kousaka: oh
23:36 Kirino Kousaka: I didn't notice the picture orz
23:36 Kirino Kousaka: okay wait
23:39 Kirino Kousaka: oops dc
23:39 UnitedWeSin:
23:39 Kirino Kousaka: sorry about that
23:39 Kirino Kousaka: what did I miss>
23:39 Kirino Kousaka: :3?
23:39 UnitedWeSin: nothing xD
23:39 UnitedWeSin: are you done with 00:50:355 (1,2) - ?
23:40 Kirino Kousaka: oh :3
23:40 Kirino Kousaka: well yes :3
23:40 Kirino Kousaka: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/772469
23:41 UnitedWeSin: ok well at 00:37:635 -
23:41 Kirino Kousaka: :3
23:41 UnitedWeSin: i don't like rhythm -.-
23:41 Kirino Kousaka: ... ;w;
23:42 UnitedWeSin: maybe http://puu.sh/2ZZ9e.png
23:42 Kirino Kousaka: but it follows the vocal ;w;
23:42 Kirino Kousaka: vocals*
23:42 UnitedWeSin: the 00:38:355 (5) - isn't following voclas
23:42 UnitedWeSin: vocals
23:43 Kirino Kousaka: =w=
23:43 Kirino Kousaka: I see =w=
23:44 UnitedWeSin: if you want to
23:44 Kirino Kousaka: wait =w=
23:44 UnitedWeSin: make spacing to the 00:37:635 (2) - bigger than 1.0
23:44 Kirino Kousaka: I'm experimenting =w=
23:44 UnitedWeSin: like the 00:41:475 (2) -
23:47 Kirino Kousaka: done =w=
23:47 UnitedWeSin:
23:47 UnitedWeSin: wanna upload or move on?
23:47 Kirino Kousaka: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/772474
23:48 Kirino Kousaka: well, it's up to you :3
23:48 Kirino Kousaka: if you want to see or just continue =w=
23:48 UnitedWeSin: normal needs work -.-
23:48 Kirino Kousaka: orz
23:48 UnitedWeSin: ;_;
23:48 Kirino Kousaka: Anything else for [Hard] ? ;w;
23:49 UnitedWeSin: that's all that really bothers me in hard
23:49 Kirino Kousaka: okay \:3/
23:49 Kirino Kousaka: move to [Normal] then? :3
23:49 UnitedWeSin: yep
23:49 Kirino Kousaka: :3
23:50 UnitedWeSin: 00:13:875 (3,1,2,3) - try to make placement look better
23:50 UnitedWeSin: the 00:13:875 (3,3) - overlap
23:50 UnitedWeSin: in a bad way
23:50 UnitedWeSin: http://puu.sh/2ZZjG.png
23:50 UnitedWeSin: try flipping the 00:15:795 (3) around
23:51 UnitedWeSin: and place it so the 00:14:835 (1,2,3) - are all blanketing the 00:13:875 (3) -
23:51 Kirino Kousaka: okay :3
23:52 UnitedWeSin: 00:06:555 (2,2) - i really don't like this -.-
23:53 Kirino Kousaka: I know
23:53 Kirino Kousaka: blue tick
23:53 Kirino Kousaka: =w=
23:54 Kirino Kousaka: but I have found no good solutions for it so far =w=
23:54 Kirino Kousaka: wait, still fixing 00:14:835 (1,2,3) -
23:58 UnitedWeSin: k
23:58 UnitedWeSin: dun?
23:58 Kirino Kousaka: yes :3
23:59 UnitedWeSin: 00:31:155 (3) - don't you want this to end on the blue tick00:31:755 - ?
23:59 Kirino Kousaka: true dat. =w=
23:59 Kirino Kousaka: wait =w=
23:59 UnitedWeSin: =w=
00:00 Kirino Kousaka: done =w=
00:00 UnitedWeSin: i think your rhythm at beginning will confuse people
00:01 UnitedWeSin: can you make it more simple?
00:01 UnitedWeSin: http://puu.sh/2ZZxd.png
00:01 UnitedWeSin: just a sample
00:01 Kirino Kousaka: wait
00:05 Kirino Kousaka: done =w=
00:06 UnitedWeSin: `:3
00:06 UnitedWeSin: 00:50:355 -
00:06 UnitedWeSin: please add something I beg you ;_;
00:06 UnitedWeSin: http://puu.sh/2ZZAV.png
00:06 UnitedWeSin: just a 1/2 slider with a repeat
00:06 UnitedWeSin: fits so nice
00:06 Kirino Kousaka: wait wait XD
00:09 Kirino Kousaka: done =w=
00:09 UnitedWeSin: 00:57:075 (1) - please don't have 2 repeats on this I beg you ;_;
00:10 UnitedWeSin: the slider is too short for that
00:10 UnitedWeSin: remove one repeat
00:10 UnitedWeSin: then add cricle at 00:57:795 -
00:11 UnitedWeSin: http://puu.sh/2ZZIs.png
00:11 UnitedWeSin: i say that because it's just more intuitive for the player
00:13 Kirino Kousaka: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/772493
00:13 *Kirino Kousaka runs
00:13 UnitedWeSin: yea that's fine :3
00:13 UnitedWeSin: do the same thing at 01:20:115 (5) - please ;_;
00:14 UnitedWeSin: change to two 1/2 sliders
00:14 UnitedWeSin: plays so much better
00:14 Kirino Kousaka: =w=d
00:15 UnitedWeSin: :3
00:15 Kirino Kousaka: done =w=d
00:16 UnitedWeSin: ready for rank after that imo :3
00:16 Kirino Kousaka: :O
00:16 Kirino Kousaka: how about [Easy] ? :O
00:17 UnitedWeSin: will check
00:17 Kirino Kousaka: okay :3
00:17 UnitedWeSin: again I wish you would add something at 00:50:355 -
00:17 Kirino Kousaka: wait, I'm fixing things for normalXD
00:17 UnitedWeSin: xD
00:18 UnitedWeSin: maybe it's better not to though
00:18 UnitedWeSin: the easy is really good
00:19 Kirino Kousaka: :O
00:19 UnitedWeSin: just one more thing in normal
00:19 UnitedWeSin: 01:08:595 (3,4,1) - this placement -.-
00:20 Kirino Kousaka: what to do ;w;
00:21 UnitedWeSin: maybe just rotate the 01:08:595 (3) - a bit
00:21 UnitedWeSin: :3
00:21 UnitedWeSin: http://puu.sh/2ZZV6.png
00:22 UnitedWeSin: idk I'm nazi -.-
00:22 Kirino Kousaka: how about blanket 01:09:555 (4) - with 01:08:595 (3) - ? like this: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/772496
00:22 Kirino Kousaka: :3
00:23 UnitedWeSin: seems ok either way
00:23 Kirino Kousaka: =w=d
00:24 UnitedWeSin: do you want me to mod saten's diff?
00:24 Kirino Kousaka: ofc =w=
00:25 Kirino Kousaka: if you're done with my diffs, post this irc mod together with mods for saten :3
00:25 UnitedWeSin: ah
00:25 UnitedWeSin: well update I'll check
00:25 Kirino Kousaka: like this p/2312719/
00:26 Kirino Kousaka: nothing more for [Easy]? :3
00:26 UnitedWeSin: easy is good
00:26 Kirino Kousaka: \:D/
00:27 UnitedWeSin: it seems that saten doesn't plan on changing anything so I won't waste my time lol
00:27 Kirino Kousaka: lol
00:27 Kirino Kousaka: why not try owo
00:27 UnitedWeSin: some things are overmapped imo but it's fine
00:27 Kirino Kousaka: well okay, just post and say that's Saten's diff is fine owo
00:28 Kirino Kousaka: also, updated. Check now =w=
00:31 UnitedWeSin: 00:37:635 (2,3,4,5,6) - i love this in hard
00:31 Kirino Kousaka: hue =w=
00:31 Kirino Kousaka: thank you =w=
00:33 UnitedWeSin: nice :3
00:33 Kirino Kousaka: =w=

IRC moddededed. :3

Fun map though. Good luck with ranking, hopefully soon. Yes! >w<

cRyo[iceeicee] wrote:

Hi hi o.o

Easy

1. 00:14:835 (1) - i dont think this NC is necessary, removing it fits with your shor 1,2 NC pattern that you used before and after I get your point, but nope, I think it's fine. :3
2. 00:39:795 (1) - this also, remove NC and you will get same 1,2,3 like here 00:35:955 (1,2,3) - fixed~
3. 00:42:675 (2) - i hear something heavier then soft hit on slider tail, use N hit instead ? added SC:1 clap instead~
4. 00:57:075 (5) - hmm, should NC start here ? since you following vocal fixed~
5. 01:10:515 (5) - use clap instead whistle ? no change :3
6. 01:16:035 (1) - whistle fixed~

Normal

1. 00:22:515 (1) - missing hitsound, finish or smth added Finish~
2. 00:37:875 (3) - whistle fixed~
3. 00:54:195 (1) - should be clap on slider tail fixed~
4. 01:00:915 (1) - i think you need to start this slider 1 tick earlier and follow the vocal, becase such long pattern 00:54:195 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1) - following vocal and then suddenly stop ._. (more of it if you listen carefully then you will hear some sound on the red tick, which means if you apply this suggestion pattern will perfectly follow music/vocal) fixed~
5. 01:04:755 (1) - missing whistle fixed~
6. 01:09:555 (4) - clap on tail, sound good fixed~
7. 01:15:315 (3,1) - same thing as i mentioned before, i prefer to see similar pattern that i suggested 01:00:915 (1) - fixed~

Hard

1. 00:08:115 (4) - whistle fixed~
2. 00:22:995 (2) - missing tail whistle fixed~
3. 00:23:475 (3,4) - missing 2 claps, #3 tail, #4 head fixed~
4. 00:33:075 (5) - tail clap fixed~
5. 00:41:715 (3) - whistle fixed~
6. 00:42:675 (1,2) - i prefer to see 1.0x SV here, because this bgm drum doesnt belong to calm part. No change, it plays better like this imo. =w=
7. 00:47:475 (1) - whistle or finish added finish
8. 00:50:835 (2) - add 1 repeat, fit better with music + add claps on 1,3,4 tick fixed~
9. 00:54:915 (1) - missing clap fixed~
10. 00:56:595 (5) - tail clap fixed~
11. 00:57:795 (2) - missing clap fixed~
12. 00:59:235 (2) - whistle fixed~
13. 00:59:715 (4) - clap head fixed~
14. 01:01:635 (4) - whistle head fixed~
15. 01:02:595 (6) - clap fixed~
16. 01:08:355 (3) - whistle head, tail can be too fixed~
17. 01:18:915 (3) - whistle fixed~
18. 01:19:515 (5) - head whistle, tail clap fixed~

Good luck :>

1. 01:14:355 (3) - How about copy paste the previous slider shape 01:13:395 (2) - to here? It's more good if you continue to use not curvy slider here since it's still on the same combo.

1. 00:13:635 (2) - The whistle on this circle should be on white tick on 00:13:875 - like you did at previous combo. So, remove this whistle and add a whistle on 00:13:875 (3) - start.
2. 00:15:555 (2) - Same, remove this whistle and add a whistle on 00:15:795 (3) - start.
3. 00:17:715 (3) - Same, add a whistle on this slider start.
4. 00:21:555 (3) - ^
5. 00:23:475 (3) - ^
6. 00:25:395 (2) - ^
7. 00:28:995 (2,3) - ^
8. 00:30:915 (2,3) - ^
9. 00:33:075 (3) - ^
10. 00:50:355 (1) - Add another repeat to this slider? It's a bit awkward since the rhythm still continue on 00:51:075 -
11. 00:57:075 (1) - You forgot a whistle again at this slider ><
12. 01:15:075 (2) - Remove whistle here, overused and unnesecary. Break the current whistle rhythm.

1. 00:33:075 (5) - You forgot a clap at this slider end ><

Miya wrote:

Recheck :3

Easy

1. 01:14:355 (3) - How about copy paste the previous slider shape 01:13:395 (2) - to here? It's more good if you continue to use not curvy slider here since it's still on the same combo. Good point. XD Fixed~

Normal

1. 00:13:635 (2) - The whistle on this circle should be on white tick on 00:13:875 - like you did at previous combo. So, remove this whistle and add a whistle on 00:13:875 (3) - start. fixed~
2. 00:15:555 (2) - Same, remove this whistle and add a whistle on 00:15:795 (3) - start. fixed~
3. 00:17:715 (3) - Same, add a whistle on this slider start. fixed~
4. 00:21:555 (3) - ^ fixed~
5. 00:23:475 (3) - ^ fixed~
6. 00:25:395 (2) - ^ fixed~
7. 00:28:995 (2,3) - ^ fixed~
8. 00:30:915 (2,3) - ^ fixed~
9. 00:33:075 (3) - ^ fixed~
10. 00:50:355 (1) - Add another repeat to this slider? It's a bit awkward since the rhythm still continue on 00:51:075 - changed into two sliders instead!~
11. 00:57:075 (1) - You forgot a whistle again at this slider >< fixed~
12. 01:15:075 (2) - Remove whistle here, overused and unnesecary. Break the current whistle rhythm. fixed~

Hard

1. 00:33:075 (5) - You forgot a clap at this slider end >< fixed~