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xxbidiao
For Pro Drum, some harsh comment >_<

The map looks like a converted maps with randomly put triples or quads which only refers to one or two sound in the background.
It means that this map is heavily overmapped (I think amateur is indeed a good diff :) with no problem of overmapping) causing this diff seems like either an exercise map (A map just to test your ability) or just less of meaning.

My advice is:
(1) Put this as a drummania style map.
In drummania map one track is exactly referred to a kind of instrument (like drum, snare, etc). I found out that there are rich drum elements in this map, you may consider modify this map to such style to avoid player smashing their keyboard on single beats and enrich the map with experience of real drum playing. (In this kind of map you may see many 1/4 streams: That's not a problem since this is a pro diff! :) )
(2) Making it a synthesized map.
I can't get the exact translation :o But it means you can take other instrument into fully consideration (like the guitar) to make it full of interesting things! (And to mod its name to Pro Fever :) Because this is not a drum-only map any more)


BTW, amateur and basic seems fine to me.
Topic Starter
indyinyou

bumperpower64 wrote:

I absolutely love this map, have a star.
As for a mod, there's nothing wrong as far as I can tell, so here are just a few nitpicks.

[Basic Drum]
OD 7 is a bit high maybe. <<< not fix

[Amateur Drum]
OD 8?
02:09:647 - Maybe a bit tricky? I dunno. <<< not fix

[Pro Drum]
01:39:077 - It might be just me, but all the streams in this map are easier than the ones in Amateur Drum.<<< fix to this http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/755637
thx for mod and star
Topic Starter
indyinyou

xxbidiao wrote:

For Pro Drum, some harsh comment >_<

The map looks like a converted maps with randomly put triples or quads which only refers to one or two sound in the background.
It means that this map is heavily overmapped (I think amateur is indeed a good diff :) with no problem of overmapping) causing this diff seems like either an exercise map (A map just to test your ability) or just less of meaning.

My advice is:
(1) Put this as a drummania style map.
In drummania map one track is exactly referred to a kind of instrument (like drum, snare, etc). I found out that there are rich drum elements in this map, you may consider modify this map to such style to avoid player smashing their keyboard on single beats and enrich the map with experience of real drum playing. (In this kind of map you may see many 1/4 streams: That's not a problem since this is a pro diff! :) )
(2) Making it a synthesized map.
I can't get the exact translation :o But it means you can take other instrument into fully consideration (like the guitar) to make it full of interesting things! (And to mod its name to Pro Fever :) Because this is not a drum-only map any more)


BTW, amateur and basic seems fine to me.
i delete some tiples or quads note to duble note thx for mod ;)
ExPew
No kudosu, here for pro pattern check

[Pro]

00:10:027 (10027|0,11546|0,13824|0) - move on |4| if at |1| looks so weird pattern i guess

00:22:179 (22179|6,23697|6,25976|6) - ^

00:23:887 (23887|3) - move on |1|

00:26:356 (26356|3,26356|1) - move on right side

00:26:546 (26546|2) - move on left side 00:26:546 (26546|4) - move on right side

00:27:875 (27875|6) - this part shud be same pattern with previous note pattern with 00:27:685 (27685|5) and 00:28:065 (28065|5) - move on |7| because 00:28:444 (28444|6) - looks like cymbal pattern line, so keep it same pattern

00:28:824 (28824|5) - ^ same move on |7|

00:28:634 (28634|5,28634|1) - move on left side

00:30:723 (30723|1,30913|0,31103|1,31292|1,31482|0,31672|5,31672|1,31862|1) - same case with 00:27:685 , mirror it (ctrl + H only that part)

00:32:432 (32432|1,32432|5,32622|4,32622|2) - reverse and flip (ctrl G + H)

00:59:014 (59014|5,59014|3) - keep same position with 00:58:634 (58634|1,58634|3)

01:02:052 (62052|3,62052|1) - ^ 01:01:672 (61672|5,61672|3)

01:14:963 (74963|5,75058|6,75153|4) - weird pattern, try another (i suggest http://puu.sh/2TkWG.png)

01:24:267 (84267|2,84267|4) - move on |1| and |7|

01:24:647 (84647|5,84647|1) - ^

01:25:027 (85027|1,85027|5) - move on |3| and |5|

01:25:596 (85596|2,85596|4) - ^

01:25:786 (85786|4,85786|2) - move on |1| and |7|

01:25:976 (85976|4,85976|2) - move on |2 and |6|

01:39:077 (99077|1,99172|2,99267|3,99362|2,99457|3,99552|4,99647|5) - drum pattern looks no good on ladder try like this ? http://puu.sh/2Tl9b.png or http://puu.sh/2Tlah.png or http://puu.sh/2TldE.png or http://puu.sh/2TleT.png or http://puu.sh/2Tlgu.png

02:09:742 (129742|5,129837|3,129932|1) - move on left side

02:10:122 (130122|1) - move on |4|

02:14:204 (134204|1,134299|2,134394|3) - flip? (ctrl + H)

02:35:660 (155660|5) - move on |7|

02:38:698 (158698|1) - move on |1|

02:50:090 (170090|5,170090|1) - move on |1| and |7| or |3| and |5|

02:51:039 - add a note on |4| (looks more ballance with 02:48:951 (168951|6,168951|3,168951|0) 'just suggest if feel good')

03:19:141 (199141|1,199520|4,199710|4,199900|3) - same pattern with 03:17:622 (197622|5,198001|1,198191|5,198381|2) - and mirror it (ctrl + H)

03:22:179 (202179|5,202558|5,202748|2,202938|4) - ^ 03:20:660 (200660|2,201039|5,201229|2,201419|1) - and mirror it (ctrl + H)

03:25:216 (205216|2) - move on |7|

03:26:735 (206735|6) - move on left side

03:52:748 (232748|1,232843|5,232938|1,233033|5,233128|1,233223|5,233318|1,233413|5) - should flip?(ctrl + H) because same with 03:04:141 (184141|1,184235|5,184330|1,184425|5,184520|1,184615|5,184710|1,184805|5) -

04:18:951 (258951|1,259046|5) - move on |3| and |5|
Topic Starter
indyinyou

ExPew wrote:

No kudosu, here for pro pattern check

[Pro]

00:10:027 (10027|0,11546|0,13824|0) - move on |4| if at |1| looks so weird pattern i guess

00:22:179 (22179|6,23697|6,25976|6) - ^

00:23:887 (23887|3) - move on |1|

00:26:356 (26356|3,26356|1) - move on right side

00:26:546 (26546|2) - move on left side 00:26:546 (26546|4) - move on right side

00:27:875 (27875|6) - this part shud be same pattern with previous note pattern with 00:27:685 (27685|5) and 00:28:065 (28065|5) - move on |7| because 00:28:444 (28444|6) - looks like cymbal pattern line, so keep it same pattern

00:28:824 (28824|5) - ^ same move on |7|

00:28:634 (28634|5,28634|1) - move on left side

00:30:723 (30723|1,30913|0,31103|1,31292|1,31482|0,31672|5,31672|1,31862|1) - same case with 00:27:685 , mirror it (ctrl + H only that part)

00:32:432 (32432|1,32432|5,32622|4,32622|2) - reverse and flip (ctrl G + H)

00:59:014 (59014|5,59014|3) - keep same position with 00:58:634 (58634|1,58634|3)

01:02:052 (62052|3,62052|1) - ^ 01:01:672 (61672|5,61672|3)

01:14:963 (74963|5,75058|6,75153|4) - weird pattern, try another (i suggest http://puu.sh/2TkWG.png)

01:24:267 (84267|2,84267|4) - move on |1| and |7|

01:24:647 (84647|5,84647|1) - ^

01:25:027 (85027|1,85027|5) - move on |3| and |5|

01:25:596 (85596|2,85596|4) - ^

01:25:786 (85786|4,85786|2) - move on |1| and |7|

01:25:976 (85976|4,85976|2) - move on |2 and |6|

01:39:077 (99077|1,99172|2,99267|3,99362|2,99457|3,99552|4,99647|5) - drum pattern looks no good on ladder try like this ? http://puu.sh/2Tl9b.png or http://puu.sh/2Tlah.png or http://puu.sh/2TldE.png or http://puu.sh/2TleT.png or http://puu.sh/2Tlgu.png

02:09:742 (129742|5,129837|3,129932|1) - move on left side

02:10:122 (130122|1) - move on |4|

02:14:204 (134204|1,134299|2,134394|3) - flip? (ctrl + H)

02:35:660 (155660|5) - move on |7|

02:38:698 (158698|1) - move on |1|

02:50:090 (170090|5,170090|1) - move on |1| and |7| or |3| and |5|

02:51:039 - add a note on |4| (looks more ballance with 02:48:951 (168951|6,168951|3,168951|0) 'just suggest if feel good')

03:19:141 (199141|1,199520|4,199710|4,199900|3) - same pattern with 03:17:622 (197622|5,198001|1,198191|5,198381|2) - and mirror it (ctrl + H)

03:22:179 (202179|5,202558|5,202748|2,202938|4) - ^ 03:20:660 (200660|2,201039|5,201229|2,201419|1) - and mirror it (ctrl + H)

03:25:216 (205216|2) - move on |7|

03:26:735 (206735|6) - move on left side

03:52:748 (232748|1,232843|5,232938|1,233033|5,233128|1,233223|5,233318|1,233413|5) - should flip?(ctrl + H) because same with 03:04:141 (184141|1,184235|5,184330|1,184425|5,184520|1,184615|5,184710|1,184805|5) -

04:18:951 (258951|1,259046|5) - move on |3| and |5|
thx so much :D all fix
ExPew
good map....

and omg OD 9 T__T

EDIT :

wait 00:31:672 (31672|5,31672|1,31862|1,31862|4) - did i missing something??? i shud be like this http://puu.sh/2TRW2.png
because its refered from 00:28:444 (28444|2,28444|6,28634|4,28634|0,28824|6,28824|2) - this patttern http://puu.sh/2TRX8.png
Topic Starter
indyinyou

ExPew wrote:

good map....

and omg OD 9 T__T

EDIT :

wait 00:31:672 (31672|5,31672|1,31862|1,31862|4) - did i missing something??? i shud be like this http://puu.sh/2TRW2.png
because its refered from 00:28:444 (28444|2,28444|6,28634|4,28634|0,28824|6,28824|2) - this patttern http://puu.sh/2TRX8.png
All fix thx you agin xD ExPew
HanzeR
[pro drum]
02:25:027 (145027|5) - move to 6? seems weird because you have all this nice space between all your other chords besides this one XD

Loved this map since you showed me it a long time ago <3
Topic Starter
indyinyou

HanzeR wrote:

[pro drum]
02:25:027 (145027|5) - move to 6? seems weird because you have all this nice space between all your other chords besides this one XD

Loved this map since you showed me it a long time ago <3
fix thx for mod xD
DJKero
Amateur Drum:

00:45:533 (45533|1,45913|1,46292|1,46482|6,46672|3) - Invert pattern like "mirror"

00:48:571 (48571|5,48951|5,49330|5) - Move to column 2

01:18:951 (78951|1,79330|1,79710|5,80090|1,80470|1,80849|1) - Invert pattern like "mirror"

01:21:989 (81989|5,82368|5) - Move to column 2

02:44:014 (164014|5,164394|5,164773|1,165153|5,165533|5,165913|5) - Invert pattern like "mirror"

02:47:052 (167052|1,167432|1) - Move to colum 6

------------------------------------------------------------------------

Add:

03:29:394 - Add from here a stair following the Piano until the current break ends. 8-)
Topic Starter
indyinyou

DJKero wrote:

Amateur Drum:

00:45:533 (45533|1,45913|1,46292|1,46482|6,46672|3) - Invert pattern like "mirror" <<< not fix

00:48:571 (48571|5,48951|5,49330|5) - Move to column 2 <<< fix

01:18:951 (78951|1,79330|1,79710|5,80090|1,80470|1,80849|1) - Invert pattern like "mirror" <<< fix

01:21:989 (81989|5,82368|5) - Move to column 2 <<< not fix

02:44:014 (164014|5,164394|5,164773|1,165153|5,165533|5,165913|5) - Invert pattern like "mirror" <<<< not fix

02:47:052 (167052|1,167432|1) - Move to colum 6 <<< not fix

------------------------------------------------------------------------

Add:

03:29:394 - Add from here a stair following the Piano until the current break ends. 8-) <<< sry my mapset follow drum sound
thx for mod
Loooctav
Hi~
|1|2|3|4|5|6|7|8|
|1|2|3|4|5|6|7|
|1|2|3|4|5|6|
|1|2|3|4|5|
|1|2|3|4|

[Basic Drum]
  1. Repetitive diff
00:24:267 What instead of repeating why not put it on the line 7 (The 3 notes)?
00:38:318 Line 5. imo
00:59:204 Line 1
00:59:584 Line 6
00:59:963 Line 1
01:50:280 Add in line 6 (6 and 2)
03:48:191 Line 6
03:52:843 add note in line 3
04:05:660 Add note in line 6
04:06:039 add note in line 2

the other diffs are well

Good luck with rank
Topic Starter
indyinyou

ThoomyyxD wrote:

Hi~
|1|2|3|4|5|6|7|8|
|1|2|3|4|5|6|7|
|1|2|3|4|5|6|
|1|2|3|4|5|
|1|2|3|4|

[Basic Drum]
  1. Repetitive diff
00:24:267 What instead of repeating why not put it on the line 7 (The 3 notes)? <<< not fix
00:38:318 Line 5. imo <<< fix
00:59:204 Line 1 <<< not fix
00:59:584 Line 6 <<< not fix
00:59:963 Line 1 <<< not fix
01:50:280 Add in line 6 (6 and 2) <<< not fix
03:48:191 Line 6 <<< not fix
03:52:843 add note in line 3 <<< i think for easy diff i don`t want add note more than 1 note
04:05:660 Add note in line 6<<< ^
04:06:039 add note in line 2<<< ^

the other diffs are well

Good luck with rank
thx for mod
woc2006
1.Since they are a team, it's better if you adding their names to tag: Yoshida Sumire, Umemura Hinako, Yamauchi Aina, Kurosaka Yukako.

2.Turn off "letterbox"
Topic Starter
indyinyou

woc2006 wrote:

1.Since they are a team, it's better if you adding their names to tag: Yoshida Sumire, Umemura Hinako, Yamauchi Aina, Kurosaka Yukako.<<<<< Add tag

2.Turn off "letterbox" <<< fix
thx for mod :D
woc2006
Good work, bubbled.
chonicle
Ranked~
Natsu
congratz :D
Frostmourne
โอ้ ยินดีด้วยพี่ ~~~~
regenz
จนได้นะแก
Topic Starter
indyinyou

regenz wrote:

จนได้นะแก
คนทำเมพจัด :D
Lolicakey
ขอแสดงความยินดี! >w<
Fumika
เหยดดดดดด
Mikkuri
GRATZ!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Makar
yay an osu!mania map I can actually comprehend!
Hanyuu
Congrats! :)
HeatKai
omg indyinyou ;_; i love you <3 <3 <3
Runamii
I LOVE THIS MAP :D
-Seren-
really nice map :D

congrats ^^, and it's a really nice song too =w=
Loooctav
ขอแสดงความยินดี! >w<
ExPew
congrats......
Maiz94
Didn't get enough time to mod @@

Anyway, congratz :D
merchat7
Wow I really love this, congrats!
[-XiaoRemix-]
The Wallpaper is nice ^^ so as the song.Kepp it up :)
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