thx for mod xDRoxas wrote:
I like this map modding :3 the thing I'll say are only suggestion, you can ignore if you dont want to change
[General]
I think you should convert the bg from .png to .jpg because actually the bg is 1.14 MB and it's a bit big <<< fix
[Basic Drum]
01:48:951 (108951|4,109141|4) - Move on 6th column OR 01:49:520 (109520|4) - move on 1st column <<< fix
02:04:710 (124710|1,124900|2) - From here, instead of doucle circles, I'd put only single circle (deleting 02:04:710 (124710|1,125470|5,126229|1) - and etc)
04:30:913 (270913|1) - Maybe remove<<< fix
03:27:780 - 03:29:109 - 03:41:261 - 03:53:413 - 03:53:792 - 04:32:716 - 04:32:906 - 04:34:235 - 04:34:425 - Delete these green lines
I tried to mod Amateur and Pro but they're all fine to me, I like the way you hitsounded the diffs and how you mapped, take my star!
thx for mod and starljqandylee wrote:
Really nice map~
[Basic Drum]
a pattern suggestion:
03:53:887 (233887|0) - change to finish+clap, <<< fix (nice idea)
03:54:267 (234267|2) - move to 03:54:077, and
03:54:457 - add a note (whistle) <<< sry no fix
Try doing that~
04:06:229 - add a note
04:19:141 - ^
If you think it's too hard for basic difficulty then ignore that xD <<<sry no fix
[Amateur Drum]
Looks really fine to me
[Pro Drum]
02:10:122 (130122|5) - I think it's better to move to 02:10:216<<< fix
03:18:571 - Add a note and separate the two hitsounds here would be better<<< fix
03:20:090 - ^ << fix
thx for mod your mod is usefulExPew wrote:
Pattern check, sorry i cant explain more, you can ignore it if feel no good ( poor english TT )
[Basic] <<< all fix
00:32:432 (32432|4) - move on |4|
00:32:622 (32622|5) - move on |6|
00:38:508 (38508|4,38698|2) - move on left side
01:02:811 (62811|4) - move on |4|
01:03:001 (63001|2) - move on |6|
01:04:900 (64900|0,65280|0) - move on |4| leave drum part on |1|
01:06:039 (66039|0) - ^ same reason
01:06:419 (66419|3) - move on |7|
01:15:153 (75153|5) - ^
01:21:609 (81609|0) - move on |6| looks more ballance with 01:23:128 (83128|1) -
01:24:267 (84267|2) - move on |5|
01:25:027 (85027|1,85216|4) - move on left side
01:25:786 (85786|2) - move on |5| 01:25:976 (85976|4) - move on |2|
01:38:128 (98128|2) - move on |2|
01:44:584 (104584|5,104773|2,105153|5,105533|2) - if like this? http://puu.sh/2S39j.png
01:50:280 (110280|2) - move on |2|
02:03:381 (123381|1) - move on |5| 02:03:571 (123571|2) - move on right side 02:03:761 (123761|4) - move on |2|
02:39:837 (159837|1) - move on |7| 02:40:027 (160027|2) - move on |5| 02:40:216 (160216|4) - move on |3|
02:43:254 (163254|4) - move on |7|
03:03:571 (183571|5) - move on |3|
03:15:153 (195153|4) - move on |2| 03:15:343 (195343|2) - move on |6|
03:57:875 (237875|4) - move on |3|
04:03:761 (243761|2) - move on |6| 04:03:951 (243951|5) - move on |3|
04:05:849 (245849|2,246039|2,246419|4,246799|1) - if like this? http://puu.sh/2S3Dh.png
04:12:685 (252685|4) - move on left side 04:12:875 (252875|2) - move on |6|
04:31:292 (271292|2) - move on right side
[Amateur] <<< fix only Pattern / not delete note
00:10:027 (10027|4,11546|2,13824|2) - center it *|4|
00:20:090 (20090|5,20280|3) - move on right side
00:22:179 (22179|6,23697|0) - center :d *|4|
00:38:887 (38887|2) - ^
01:38:128 (98128|2) - ^
02:14:584 (134584|1) - move on |5|
03:04:805 (184805|5) - delete ? because make it same with 01:39:077 (99077|0,99172|1,99267|2,99362|3,99457|4,99552|5,99647|6) -
03:09:267 (189267|1) - move on |3|
03:15:343 (195343|0) - move on |2|
03:29:204 - well i think you full focus on drumset i think okay
03:42:305 (222305|5) - move on |7|
03:43:824 (223824|5) - ^
03:45:343 (225343|1) - move on |1|
03:53:413 (233413|5) - delete? same reason.
04:19:520 (259520|3) - move on |2|
04:20:660 (260660|3) - ^
04:20:849 (260849|2) - move on |1| or |5|
04:23:698 (263698|3) - move on |6|
04:23:887 (263887|4) - move on |7| or |3|
[Pro]
- hmm its take long time to done it i check it tomorrow because its already late >< sorry
thx for mod and starbumperpower64 wrote:
I absolutely love this map, have a star.
As for a mod, there's nothing wrong as far as I can tell, so here are just a few nitpicks.
[Basic Drum]
OD 7 is a bit high maybe. <<< not fix
[Amateur Drum]
OD 8?
02:09:647 - Maybe a bit tricky? I dunno. <<< not fix
[Pro Drum]
01:39:077 - It might be just me, but all the streams in this map are easier than the ones in Amateur Drum.<<< fix to this http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/755637
i delete some tiples or quads note to duble note thx for modxxbidiao wrote:
For Pro Drum, some harsh comment >_<
The map looks like a converted maps with randomly put triples or quads which only refers to one or two sound in the background.
It means that this map is heavily overmapped (I think amateur is indeed a good diff with no problem of overmapping) causing this diff seems like either an exercise map (A map just to test your ability) or just less of meaning.
My advice is:
(1) Put this as a drummania style map.
In drummania map one track is exactly referred to a kind of instrument (like drum, snare, etc). I found out that there are rich drum elements in this map, you may consider modify this map to such style to avoid player smashing their keyboard on single beats and enrich the map with experience of real drum playing. (In this kind of map you may see many 1/4 streams: That's not a problem since this is a pro diff! )
(2) Making it a synthesized map.
I can't get the exact translation But it means you can take other instrument into fully consideration (like the guitar) to make it full of interesting things! (And to mod its name to Pro Fever Because this is not a drum-only map any more)
BTW, amateur and basic seems fine to me.
thx so much all fixExPew wrote:
No kudosu, here for pro pattern check
[Pro]
00:10:027 (10027|0,11546|0,13824|0) - move on |4| if at |1| looks so weird pattern i guess
00:22:179 (22179|6,23697|6,25976|6) - ^
00:23:887 (23887|3) - move on |1|
00:26:356 (26356|3,26356|1) - move on right side
00:26:546 (26546|2) - move on left side 00:26:546 (26546|4) - move on right side
00:27:875 (27875|6) - this part shud be same pattern with previous note pattern with 00:27:685 (27685|5) and 00:28:065 (28065|5) - move on |7| because 00:28:444 (28444|6) - looks like cymbal pattern line, so keep it same pattern
00:28:824 (28824|5) - ^ same move on |7|
00:28:634 (28634|5,28634|1) - move on left side
00:30:723 (30723|1,30913|0,31103|1,31292|1,31482|0,31672|5,31672|1,31862|1) - same case with 00:27:685 , mirror it (ctrl + H only that part)
00:32:432 (32432|1,32432|5,32622|4,32622|2) - reverse and flip (ctrl G + H)
00:59:014 (59014|5,59014|3) - keep same position with 00:58:634 (58634|1,58634|3)
01:02:052 (62052|3,62052|1) - ^ 01:01:672 (61672|5,61672|3)
01:14:963 (74963|5,75058|6,75153|4) - weird pattern, try another (i suggest http://puu.sh/2TkWG.png)
01:24:267 (84267|2,84267|4) - move on |1| and |7|
01:24:647 (84647|5,84647|1) - ^
01:25:027 (85027|1,85027|5) - move on |3| and |5|
01:25:596 (85596|2,85596|4) - ^
01:25:786 (85786|4,85786|2) - move on |1| and |7|
01:25:976 (85976|4,85976|2) - move on |2 and |6|
01:39:077 (99077|1,99172|2,99267|3,99362|2,99457|3,99552|4,99647|5) - drum pattern looks no good on ladder try like this ? http://puu.sh/2Tl9b.png or http://puu.sh/2Tlah.png or http://puu.sh/2TldE.png or http://puu.sh/2TleT.png or http://puu.sh/2Tlgu.png
02:09:742 (129742|5,129837|3,129932|1) - move on left side
02:10:122 (130122|1) - move on |4|
02:14:204 (134204|1,134299|2,134394|3) - flip? (ctrl + H)
02:35:660 (155660|5) - move on |7|
02:38:698 (158698|1) - move on |1|
02:50:090 (170090|5,170090|1) - move on |1| and |7| or |3| and |5|
02:51:039 - add a note on |4| (looks more ballance with 02:48:951 (168951|6,168951|3,168951|0) 'just suggest if feel good')
03:19:141 (199141|1,199520|4,199710|4,199900|3) - same pattern with 03:17:622 (197622|5,198001|1,198191|5,198381|2) - and mirror it (ctrl + H)
03:22:179 (202179|5,202558|5,202748|2,202938|4) - ^ 03:20:660 (200660|2,201039|5,201229|2,201419|1) - and mirror it (ctrl + H)
03:25:216 (205216|2) - move on |7|
03:26:735 (206735|6) - move on left side
03:52:748 (232748|1,232843|5,232938|1,233033|5,233128|1,233223|5,233318|1,233413|5) - should flip?(ctrl + H) because same with 03:04:141 (184141|1,184235|5,184330|1,184425|5,184520|1,184615|5,184710|1,184805|5) -
04:18:951 (258951|1,259046|5) - move on |3| and |5|
All fix thx you agin xD ExPewExPew wrote:
good map....
and omg OD 9 T__T
EDIT :
wait 00:31:672 (31672|5,31672|1,31862|1,31862|4) - did i missing something??? i shud be like this http://puu.sh/2TRW2.png
because its refered from 00:28:444 (28444|2,28444|6,28634|4,28634|0,28824|6,28824|2) - this patttern http://puu.sh/2TRX8.png
fix thx for mod xDHanzeR wrote:
[pro drum]
02:25:027 (145027|5) - move to 6? seems weird because you have all this nice space between all your other chords besides this one XD
Loved this map since you showed me it a long time ago <3
thx for modDJKero wrote:
Amateur Drum:
00:45:533 (45533|1,45913|1,46292|1,46482|6,46672|3) - Invert pattern like "mirror" <<< not fix
00:48:571 (48571|5,48951|5,49330|5) - Move to column 2 <<< fix
01:18:951 (78951|1,79330|1,79710|5,80090|1,80470|1,80849|1) - Invert pattern like "mirror" <<< fix
01:21:989 (81989|5,82368|5) - Move to column 2 <<< not fix
02:44:014 (164014|5,164394|5,164773|1,165153|5,165533|5,165913|5) - Invert pattern like "mirror" <<<< not fix
02:47:052 (167052|1,167432|1) - Move to colum 6 <<< not fix
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Add:
03:29:394 - Add from here a stair following the Piano until the current break ends. <<< sry my mapset follow drum sound
thx for modThoomyyxD wrote:
Hi~
|1|2|3|4|5|6|7|8|
|1|2|3|4|5|6|7|
|1|2|3|4|5|6|
|1|2|3|4|5|
|1|2|3|4|
[Basic Drum]00:24:267 What instead of repeating why not put it on the line 7 (The 3 notes)? <<< not fix
- Repetitive diff
00:38:318 Line 5. imo <<< fix
00:59:204 Line 1 <<< not fix
00:59:584 Line 6 <<< not fix
00:59:963 Line 1 <<< not fix
01:50:280 Add in line 6 (6 and 2) <<< not fix
03:48:191 Line 6 <<< not fix
03:52:843 add note in line 3 <<< i think for easy diff i don`t want add note more than 1 note
04:05:660 Add note in line 6<<< ^
04:06:039 add note in line 2<<< ^
the other diffs are well
Good luck with rank
thx for modwoc2006 wrote:
1.Since they are a team, it's better if you adding their names to tag: Yoshida Sumire, Umemura Hinako, Yamauchi Aina, Kurosaka Yukako.<<<<< Add tag
2.Turn off "letterbox" <<< fix