- R u m i a - wrote:

Halo i'm from the Osu!Mania modding team

[ Pro Drum ]

SPOILER

as for note density:
make the bass (dubb sound) 2 notes
snare (tak sound) 3 notes
and crash sound like 01:03:381 put 4 notes
if cymbal only /hihate only sound, 1 note is enough
check all parts k ( the middle part i lazy mod juz check the part i mod and try to arrange the middle part)`
from 01:15:913 to 01:23:887 remove all note on blue line i dun know what beat it is refered to?<<<<<<(i want to keep this i not sure but i think it have sound here)
00:10:027 (10027|4) - remove < fix
00:11:546 (11546|4) - ^ < fix
00:13:824 (13824|4) - ^ < fix
00:16:292 (16292|4) - ^ < fix
00:15:533 (15533|4) - ^ < fix
00:19:330 (19330|6) - ^ < fix
00:22:179 (22179|2) - ^ < fix
00:23:697 (23697|2) - ^ < fix
00:25:976 (25976|4,25976|2) - ^ < fix
00:37:558 (37558|6) - ^ < fix
00:37:938 (37938|6) - ^ < fix
00:40:406 (40406|6) - ^ < fix
00:40:501 (40501|5) - ^ < fix
00:42:020 (42020|1) - ^ < fix
00:44:963 (44963|6,44963|5) - ^ < fix
00:46:482 (46482|5,46482|6) - ^ < fix
00:49:520 (49520|6,49520|5) - ^ < fix
02:10:216 (130216|1) - ^ (inapproriate jack) < fix
03:17:622 (197622|4) - ^ < fix
03:19:141 (199141|0) - ^ < fix
03:20:660 (200660|1) - ^ < fix
03:22:179 (202179|4) - ^ < fix
03:23:698 (203698|1) - ^ < fix
03:25:216 (205216|0) - ^ < fix
03:26:735 (206735|4) - ^ < fix
04:34:330 (274330|0) - ^ < fix
00:19:330 (19330|2) - move to 4th collumn < fix

00:10:216 (10216|3) - move to 6th collumn < fix
00:11:735 (11735|3) - ^

00:52:179 (52179|1) - move to 1st collumn < fix

00:14:204 - add < not fix (i want this map follow drum sound)
00:14:394 - ^ < not fix
00:20:754 - ^ < not fix (i don t sure but i hear drum [xxx x] )
00:20:849 - ^ < fix
00:51:229 - ^ < fix
00:53:128 - ^ < not fix
03:23:128 - ^ < fix
03:29:204 - ^ < fix
04:07:191 - ^ < fix
04:13:254 - ^ < fix
03:53:887 - ^ < fix
03:57:875 - ^ < fix
03:59:584 - ^ < fix
04:19:330 - ^ < not fix
04:25:406 - ^ < fix
04:36:609 - ^ < fix
04:36:799 - ^ < no sry
04:36:989 - ^ < no sry

00:14:790 - ^ and add long note (u can hear it clearly)<<< (not fix no add long note)
00:26:925 - ^ ^
03:26:166 - ^ ^

00:15:153 - add note at 7th collumn (i note sure about this 7thkey is center key right ?)
00:15:913 - ^
00:16:672 - ^
00:17:432 - ^
00:18:191 - ^
00:18:951 - ^
00:52:368 - ^
00:53:887 - ^

here some speed effect u might wanna try x.x (optional) <<<(i don t know how to do it )
01:26:925 - sv x10
01:27:305 - sv x1
01:27:400 - sv x0.5
01:27:495 - sv x0.25
01:27:685 - sv x1
- i choose this part to put sv changes cuz its kiai time up next
can apply this sv change here too 02:51:609

nice song

thx for mod your mod is useful

Hi

[General]

The mp3 got a very long lead in time. I think you should cut it down a bit and fix the offset afterwards.
soft-hitclap.wav sample got a silence into and it sounds weird. You can try it by clicking this note in the editor 01:15:153 (75153|4) - and you notice it is quite offsync from the other hitsounds you use. http://puu.sh/2RKFY.png
01:26:356 - Even more on this part. You can hear it clearly since all notes are like that

Since you got a breaktime i suggest putting in a blank sound for the fail and pass effects there because i think they are quite disturbing (same with the graphics). Or just remove the break time.

Don't know if you mapped this in a different editor or used it this way to map your hitsound but there is an easier alternative . Just select any note you want and press alt+mouse1 on the note and you can set each sound you got for each note seperately and are not bound to use so many timing sections. You can also use any file name of the sound file with this for a more organized and easier editing.

Another suggestion since you are allready at it. You might want to look for some low tom sample for parts like this 01:57:495 - or that 02:03:571 - in the song to add into

[Pro Drum]

01:16:008 (76008|1) - those notes on this column and later on same notes on the flipped side felt totally of for me. I think its overmapped or i just couldn't figure out when playing what its supposed to sound for. I really couldn't hold any accuracy there and it felt really bad and awkward to play. It's better to remove all of them and it's not a bad thing if that part get easier if it matches the song better.

Just a few suggestions here:
01:30:723 (90723|0) - Notes like those on the measure should flip in my opinion since you are changing up the patter, it should be on the 7th column.
01:33:761 (93761|6) - same with this one
01:36:799 (96799|6) - This on the other hand you put as i suggested
Either way it's no problem and it's fine if you put it your way with an idea in mind or if you just think it feels better to play like this then it's totally ok. I just noticed this right away and thought i should point it out.

01:39:077 (99077|1,99172|5,99267|1,99362|5,99457|1,99552|5,99647|1) - I think those notes should be arranged in a different way. I think it's too basic and even in the amateur diff the ladder seems more challenging and fun than that. I think you should just switch out both parts in those diffs. So some sort of and maybe a bit more difficult ladder is in the pro diff and the easy 2 button stream in the amateur diff.

[Amateur Drum]

Just looked around it quickly and it seems like a toned diff and looks nice and clean to play, no complaint.


[Basic Drum]

00:34:520 (34520|6) - The way this note is placed looks irritating for me. I think its better if you move it to the 5th or 3rd column
No other complaint.


Great map Try to get more Stars and mods and i think it should ranked soon~ Good luck and have your first star for this

Hanyuu wrote:

Hi

[General]

The mp3 got a very long lead in time. I think you should cut it down a bit and fix the offset afterwards.
soft-hitclap.wav sample got a silence into and it sounds weird. You can try it by clicking this note in the editor 01:15:153 (75153|4) - and you notice it is quite offsync from the other hitsounds you use. http://puu.sh/2RKFY.png
01:26:356 - Even more on this part. You can hear it clearly since all notes are like that<<<< (sry i don t get it my english is poor)

Since you got a breaktime i suggest putting in a blank sound for the fail and pass effects there because i think they are quite disturbing (same with the graphics). Or just remove the break time. <<<< fix

Don't know if you mapped this in a different editor or used it this way to map your hitsound but there is an easier alternative . Just select any note you want and press alt+mouse1 on the note and you can set each sound you got for each note seperately and are not bound to use so many timing sections. You can also use any file name of the sound file with this for a more organized and easier editing.

Another suggestion since you are allready at it. You might want to look for some low tom sample for parts like this 01:57:495 - or that 02:03:571 - in the song to add into <<<< (sry i don t get it my english is poor)

[Pro Drum]

01:16:008 (76008|1) - those notes on this column and later on same notes on the flipped side felt totally of for me. I think its overmapped or i just couldn't figure out when playing what its supposed to sound for. I really couldn't hold any accuracy there and it felt really bad and awkward to play. It's better to remove all of them and it's not a bad thing if that part get easier if it matches the song better. <<<< fix i remove note at blue line

Just a few suggestions here:
01:30:723 (90723|0) - Notes like those on the measure should flip in my opinion since you are changing up the patter, it should be on the 7th column.<<fix
01:33:761 (93761|6) - same with this one <<fix
01:36:799 (96799|6) - This on the other hand you put as i suggested<<fix
Either way it's no problem and it's fine if you put it your way with an idea in mind or if you just think it feels better to play like this then it's totally ok. I just noticed this right away and thought i should point it out.

01:39:077 (99077|1,99172|5,99267|1,99362|5,99457|1,99552|5,99647|1) - I think those notes should be arranged in a different way. I think it's too basic and even in the amateur diff the ladder seems more challenging and fun than that. I think you should just switch out both parts in those diffs. So some sort of and maybe a bit more difficult ladder is in the pro diff and the easy 2 button stream in the amateur diff. <<< (i not sure about this but i keep like that)

[Amateur Drum]

Just looked around it quickly and it seems like a toned diff and looks nice and clean to play, no complaint.


[Basic Drum]

00:34:520 (34520|6) - The way this note is placed looks irritating for me. I think its better if you move it to the 5th or 3rd column
No other complaint. <<< fix


Great map Try to get more Stars and mods and i think it should ranked soon~ Good luck and have your first star for this

thx for mod

I like this map modding :3 the thing I'll say are only suggestion, you can ignore if you dont want to change

[General]

I think you should convert the bg from .png to .jpg because actually the bg is 1.14 MB and it's a bit big

[Basic Drum]
01:48:951 (108951|4,109141|4) - Move on 6th column OR 01:49:520 (109520|4) - move on 1st column
02:04:710 (124710|1,124900|2) - From here, instead of doucle circles, I'd put only single circle (deleting 02:04:710 (124710|1,125470|5,126229|1) - and etc)
04:30:913 (270913|1) - Maybe remove

03:27:780 - 03:29:109 - 03:41:261 - 03:53:413 - 03:53:792 - 04:32:716 - 04:32:906 - 04:34:235 - 04:34:425 - Delete these green lines

I tried to mod Amateur and Pro but they're all fine to me, I like the way you hitsounded the diffs and how you mapped, take my star!

Done fix http://puu.sh/2ROD6.wav


Pic bg Fix 1.14mb > 0.174 mb

http://puu.sh/2ROEq.jpg

update

PLZ RE-DL 2013/05/12

Add new soft-hitclap and BG

Roxas wrote:

I like this map modding :3 the thing I'll say are only suggestion, you can ignore if you dont want to change

[General]

I think you should convert the bg from .png to .jpg because actually the bg is 1.14 MB and it's a bit big <<< fix

[Basic Drum]
01:48:951 (108951|4,109141|4) - Move on 6th column OR 01:49:520 (109520|4) - move on 1st column <<< fix
02:04:710 (124710|1,124900|2) - From here, instead of doucle circles, I'd put only single circle (deleting 02:04:710 (124710|1,125470|5,126229|1) - and etc)
04:30:913 (270913|1) - Maybe remove<<< fix

03:27:780 - 03:29:109 - 03:41:261 - 03:53:413 - 03:53:792 - 04:32:716 - 04:32:906 - 04:34:235 - 04:34:425 - Delete these green lines

I tried to mod Amateur and Pro but they're all fine to me, I like the way you hitsounded the diffs and how you mapped, take my star!

thx for mod xD

Really nice map~

[Basic Drum]
a pattern suggestion:
03:53:887 (233887|0) - change to finish+clap,
03:54:267 (234267|2) - move to 03:54:077, and
03:54:457 - add a note (whistle)
Try doing that~

04:06:229 - add a note
04:19:141 - ^
If you think it's too hard for basic difficulty then ignore that xD

[Amateur Drum]
Looks really fine to me

[Pro Drum]
02:10:122 (130122|5) - I think it's better to move to 02:10:216
03:18:571 - Add a note and separate the two hitsounds here would be better
03:20:090 - ^

ljqandylee wrote:

Really nice map~

[Basic Drum]
a pattern suggestion:
03:53:887 (233887|0) - change to finish+clap, <<< fix (nice idea)
03:54:267 (234267|2) - move to 03:54:077, and
03:54:457 - add a note (whistle) <<< sry no fix
Try doing that~

04:06:229 - add a note
04:19:141 - ^
If you think it's too hard for basic difficulty then ignore that xD <<<sry no fix

[Amateur Drum]
Looks really fine to me

[Pro Drum]
02:10:122 (130122|5) - I think it's better to move to 02:10:216<<< fix
03:18:571 - Add a note and separate the two hitsounds here would be better<<< fix
03:20:090 - ^ << fix

thx for mod and star

Pattern check, sorry i cant explain more, you can ignore it if feel no good ( poor english TT )

[Basic]

00:32:432 (32432|4) - move on |4|

00:32:622 (32622|5) - move on |6|

00:38:508 (38508|4,38698|2) - move on left side

01:02:811 (62811|4) - move on |4|

01:03:001 (63001|2) - move on |6|

01:04:900 (64900|0,65280|0) - move on |4| leave drum part on |1|

01:06:039 (66039|0) - ^ same reason

01:06:419 (66419|3) - move on |7|

01:15:153 (75153|5) - ^

01:21:609 (81609|0) - move on |6| looks more ballance with 01:23:128 (83128|1) -

01:24:267 (84267|2) - move on |5|

01:25:027 (85027|1,85216|4) - move on left side

01:25:786 (85786|2) - move on |5| 01:25:976 (85976|4) - move on |2|

01:38:128 (98128|2) - move on |2|

01:44:584 (104584|5,104773|2,105153|5,105533|2) - if like this? http://puu.sh/2S39j.png

01:50:280 (110280|2) - move on |2|

02:03:381 (123381|1) - move on |5| 02:03:571 (123571|2) - move on right side 02:03:761 (123761|4) - move on |2|

02:39:837 (159837|1) - move on |7| 02:40:027 (160027|2) - move on |5| 02:40:216 (160216|4) - move on |3|

02:43:254 (163254|4) - move on |7|

03:03:571 (183571|5) - move on |3|

03:15:153 (195153|4) - move on |2| 03:15:343 (195343|2) - move on |6|

03:57:875 (237875|4) - move on |3|

04:03:761 (243761|2) - move on |6| 04:03:951 (243951|5) - move on |3|

04:05:849 (245849|2,246039|2,246419|4,246799|1) - if like this? http://puu.sh/2S3Dh.png

04:12:685 (252685|4) - move on left side 04:12:875 (252875|2) - move on |6|

04:31:292 (271292|2) - move on right side

[Amateur]

00:10:027 (10027|4,11546|2,13824|2) - center it *|4|

00:20:090 (20090|5,20280|3) - move on right side

00:22:179 (22179|6,23697|0) - center :d *|4|

00:38:887 (38887|2) - ^

01:38:128 (98128|2) - ^

02:14:584 (134584|1) - move on |5|

03:04:805 (184805|5) - delete ? because make it same with 01:39:077 (99077|0,99172|1,99267|2,99362|3,99457|4,99552|5,99647|6) -

03:09:267 (189267|1) - move on |3|

03:15:343 (195343|0) - move on |2|

03:29:204 - well i think you full focus on drumset i think okay

03:42:305 (222305|5) - move on |7|

03:43:824 (223824|5) - ^

03:45:343 (225343|1) - move on |1|

03:53:413 (233413|5) - delete? same reason.

04:19:520 (259520|3) - move on |2|

04:20:660 (260660|3) - ^

04:20:849 (260849|2) - move on |1| or |5|

04:23:698 (263698|3) - move on |6|

04:23:887 (263887|4) - move on |7| or |3|

[Pro]

- hmm its take long time to done it i check it tomorrow because its already late >< sorry

ExPew wrote:

Pattern check, sorry i cant explain more, you can ignore it if feel no good ( poor english TT )

[Basic] <<< all fix

00:32:432 (32432|4) - move on |4|

00:32:622 (32622|5) - move on |6|

00:38:508 (38508|4,38698|2) - move on left side

01:02:811 (62811|4) - move on |4|

01:03:001 (63001|2) - move on |6|

01:04:900 (64900|0,65280|0) - move on |4| leave drum part on |1|

01:06:039 (66039|0) - ^ same reason

01:06:419 (66419|3) - move on |7|

01:15:153 (75153|5) - ^

01:21:609 (81609|0) - move on |6| looks more ballance with 01:23:128 (83128|1) -

01:24:267 (84267|2) - move on |5|

01:25:027 (85027|1,85216|4) - move on left side

01:25:786 (85786|2) - move on |5| 01:25:976 (85976|4) - move on |2|

01:38:128 (98128|2) - move on |2|

01:44:584 (104584|5,104773|2,105153|5,105533|2) - if like this? http://puu.sh/2S39j.png

01:50:280 (110280|2) - move on |2|

02:03:381 (123381|1) - move on |5| 02:03:571 (123571|2) - move on right side 02:03:761 (123761|4) - move on |2|

02:39:837 (159837|1) - move on |7| 02:40:027 (160027|2) - move on |5| 02:40:216 (160216|4) - move on |3|

02:43:254 (163254|4) - move on |7|

03:03:571 (183571|5) - move on |3|

03:15:153 (195153|4) - move on |2| 03:15:343 (195343|2) - move on |6|

03:57:875 (237875|4) - move on |3|

04:03:761 (243761|2) - move on |6| 04:03:951 (243951|5) - move on |3|

04:05:849 (245849|2,246039|2,246419|4,246799|1) - if like this? http://puu.sh/2S3Dh.png

04:12:685 (252685|4) - move on left side 04:12:875 (252875|2) - move on |6|

04:31:292 (271292|2) - move on right side

[Amateur] <<< fix only Pattern / not delete note

00:10:027 (10027|4,11546|2,13824|2) - center it *|4|

00:20:090 (20090|5,20280|3) - move on right side

00:22:179 (22179|6,23697|0) - center :d *|4|

00:38:887 (38887|2) - ^

01:38:128 (98128|2) - ^

02:14:584 (134584|1) - move on |5|

03:04:805 (184805|5) - delete ? because make it same with 01:39:077 (99077|0,99172|1,99267|2,99362|3,99457|4,99552|5,99647|6) -

03:09:267 (189267|1) - move on |3|

03:15:343 (195343|0) - move on |2|

03:29:204 - well i think you full focus on drumset i think okay

03:42:305 (222305|5) - move on |7|

03:43:824 (223824|5) - ^

03:45:343 (225343|1) - move on |1|

03:53:413 (233413|5) - delete? same reason.

04:19:520 (259520|3) - move on |2|

04:20:660 (260660|3) - ^

04:20:849 (260849|2) - move on |1| or |5|

04:23:698 (263698|3) - move on |6|

04:23:887 (263887|4) - move on |7| or |3|

[Pro]

- hmm its take long time to done it i check it tomorrow because its already late >< sorry

thx for mod your mod is useful

I absolutely love this map, have a star.
As for a mod, there's nothing wrong as far as I can tell, so here are just a few nitpicks.

[Basic Drum]
OD 7 is a bit high maybe.

[Amateur Drum]
OD 8?
02:09:647 - Maybe a bit tricky? I dunno.

[Pro Drum]
01:39:077 - It might be just me, but all the streams in this map are easier than the ones in Amateur Drum.

For Pro Drum, some harsh comment >_<

The map looks like a converted maps with randomly put triples or quads which only refers to one or two sound in the background.
It means that this map is heavily overmapped (I think amateur is indeed a good diff with no problem of overmapping) causing this diff seems like either an exercise map (A map just to test your ability) or just less of meaning.

My advice is:
(1) Put this as a drummania style map.
In drummania map one track is exactly referred to a kind of instrument (like drum, snare, etc). I found out that there are rich drum elements in this map, you may consider modify this map to such style to avoid player smashing their keyboard on single beats and enrich the map with experience of real drum playing. (In this kind of map you may see many 1/4 streams: That's not a problem since this is a pro diff! )
(2) Making it a synthesized map.
I can't get the exact translation But it means you can take other instrument into fully consideration (like the guitar) to make it full of interesting things! (And to mod its name to Pro Fever Because this is not a drum-only map any more)


BTW, amateur and basic seems fine to me.

bumperpower64 wrote:

I absolutely love this map, have a star.
As for a mod, there's nothing wrong as far as I can tell, so here are just a few nitpicks.

[Basic Drum]
OD 7 is a bit high maybe. <<< not fix

[Amateur Drum]
OD 8?
02:09:647 - Maybe a bit tricky? I dunno. <<< not fix

[Pro Drum]
01:39:077 - It might be just me, but all the streams in this map are easier than the ones in Amateur Drum.<<< fix to this http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/755637

thx for mod and star

xxbidiao wrote:

For Pro Drum, some harsh comment >_<

The map looks like a converted maps with randomly put triples or quads which only refers to one or two sound in the background.
It means that this map is heavily overmapped (I think amateur is indeed a good diff with no problem of overmapping) causing this diff seems like either an exercise map (A map just to test your ability) or just less of meaning.

My advice is:
(1) Put this as a drummania style map.
In drummania map one track is exactly referred to a kind of instrument (like drum, snare, etc). I found out that there are rich drum elements in this map, you may consider modify this map to such style to avoid player smashing their keyboard on single beats and enrich the map with experience of real drum playing. (In this kind of map you may see many 1/4 streams: That's not a problem since this is a pro diff! )
(2) Making it a synthesized map.
I can't get the exact translation But it means you can take other instrument into fully consideration (like the guitar) to make it full of interesting things! (And to mod its name to Pro Fever Because this is not a drum-only map any more)


BTW, amateur and basic seems fine to me.

i delete some tiples or quads note to duble note thx for mod

No kudosu, here for pro pattern check

[Pro]

00:10:027 (10027|0,11546|0,13824|0) - move on |4| if at |1| looks so weird pattern i guess

00:22:179 (22179|6,23697|6,25976|6) - ^

00:23:887 (23887|3) - move on |1|

00:26:356 (26356|3,26356|1) - move on right side

00:26:546 (26546|2) - move on left side 00:26:546 (26546|4) - move on right side

00:27:875 (27875|6) - this part shud be same pattern with previous note pattern with 00:27:685 (27685|5) and 00:28:065 (28065|5) - move on |7| because 00:28:444 (28444|6) - looks like cymbal pattern line, so keep it same pattern

00:28:824 (28824|5) - ^ same move on |7|

00:28:634 (28634|5,28634|1) - move on left side

00:30:723 (30723|1,30913|0,31103|1,31292|1,31482|0,31672|5,31672|1,31862|1) - same case with 00:27:685 , mirror it (ctrl + H only that part)

00:32:432 (32432|1,32432|5,32622|4,32622|2) - reverse and flip (ctrl G + H)

00:59:014 (59014|5,59014|3) - keep same position with 00:58:634 (58634|1,58634|3)

01:02:052 (62052|3,62052|1) - ^ 01:01:672 (61672|5,61672|3)

01:14:963 (74963|5,75058|6,75153|4) - weird pattern, try another (i suggest http://puu.sh/2TkWG.png)

01:24:267 (84267|2,84267|4) - move on |1| and |7|

01:24:647 (84647|5,84647|1) - ^

01:25:027 (85027|1,85027|5) - move on |3| and |5|

01:25:596 (85596|2,85596|4) - ^

01:25:786 (85786|4,85786|2) - move on |1| and |7|

01:25:976 (85976|4,85976|2) - move on |2 and |6|

01:39:077 (99077|1,99172|2,99267|3,99362|2,99457|3,99552|4,99647|5) - drum pattern looks no good on ladder try like this ? http://puu.sh/2Tl9b.png or http://puu.sh/2Tlah.png or http://puu.sh/2TldE.png or http://puu.sh/2TleT.png or http://puu.sh/2Tlgu.png

02:09:742 (129742|5,129837|3,129932|1) - move on left side

02:10:122 (130122|1) - move on |4|

02:14:204 (134204|1,134299|2,134394|3) - flip? (ctrl + H)

02:35:660 (155660|5) - move on |7|

02:38:698 (158698|1) - move on |1|

02:50:090 (170090|5,170090|1) - move on |1| and |7| or |3| and |5|

02:51:039 - add a note on |4| (looks more ballance with 02:48:951 (168951|6,168951|3,168951|0) 'just suggest if feel good')

03:19:141 (199141|1,199520|4,199710|4,199900|3) - same pattern with 03:17:622 (197622|5,198001|1,198191|5,198381|2) - and mirror it (ctrl + H)

03:22:179 (202179|5,202558|5,202748|2,202938|4) - ^ 03:20:660 (200660|2,201039|5,201229|2,201419|1) - and mirror it (ctrl + H)

03:25:216 (205216|2) - move on |7|

03:26:735 (206735|6) - move on left side

03:52:748 (232748|1,232843|5,232938|1,233033|5,233128|1,233223|5,233318|1,233413|5) - should flip?(ctrl + H) because same with 03:04:141 (184141|1,184235|5,184330|1,184425|5,184520|1,184615|5,184710|1,184805|5) -

04:18:951 (258951|1,259046|5) - move on |3| and |5|

ExPew wrote:

No kudosu, here for pro pattern check

[Pro]

00:10:027 (10027|0,11546|0,13824|0) - move on |4| if at |1| looks so weird pattern i guess

00:22:179 (22179|6,23697|6,25976|6) - ^

00:23:887 (23887|3) - move on |1|

00:26:356 (26356|3,26356|1) - move on right side

00:26:546 (26546|2) - move on left side 00:26:546 (26546|4) - move on right side

00:27:875 (27875|6) - this part shud be same pattern with previous note pattern with 00:27:685 (27685|5) and 00:28:065 (28065|5) - move on |7| because 00:28:444 (28444|6) - looks like cymbal pattern line, so keep it same pattern

00:28:824 (28824|5) - ^ same move on |7|

00:28:634 (28634|5,28634|1) - move on left side

00:30:723 (30723|1,30913|0,31103|1,31292|1,31482|0,31672|5,31672|1,31862|1) - same case with 00:27:685 , mirror it (ctrl + H only that part)

00:32:432 (32432|1,32432|5,32622|4,32622|2) - reverse and flip (ctrl G + H)

00:59:014 (59014|5,59014|3) - keep same position with 00:58:634 (58634|1,58634|3)

01:02:052 (62052|3,62052|1) - ^ 01:01:672 (61672|5,61672|3)

01:14:963 (74963|5,75058|6,75153|4) - weird pattern, try another (i suggest http://puu.sh/2TkWG.png)

01:24:267 (84267|2,84267|4) - move on |1| and |7|

01:24:647 (84647|5,84647|1) - ^

01:25:027 (85027|1,85027|5) - move on |3| and |5|

01:25:596 (85596|2,85596|4) - ^

01:25:786 (85786|4,85786|2) - move on |1| and |7|

01:25:976 (85976|4,85976|2) - move on |2 and |6|

01:39:077 (99077|1,99172|2,99267|3,99362|2,99457|3,99552|4,99647|5) - drum pattern looks no good on ladder try like this ? http://puu.sh/2Tl9b.png or http://puu.sh/2Tlah.png or http://puu.sh/2TldE.png or http://puu.sh/2TleT.png or http://puu.sh/2Tlgu.png

02:09:742 (129742|5,129837|3,129932|1) - move on left side

02:10:122 (130122|1) - move on |4|

02:14:204 (134204|1,134299|2,134394|3) - flip? (ctrl + H)

02:35:660 (155660|5) - move on |7|

02:38:698 (158698|1) - move on |1|

02:50:090 (170090|5,170090|1) - move on |1| and |7| or |3| and |5|

02:51:039 - add a note on |4| (looks more ballance with 02:48:951 (168951|6,168951|3,168951|0) 'just suggest if feel good')

03:19:141 (199141|1,199520|4,199710|4,199900|3) - same pattern with 03:17:622 (197622|5,198001|1,198191|5,198381|2) - and mirror it (ctrl + H)

03:22:179 (202179|5,202558|5,202748|2,202938|4) - ^ 03:20:660 (200660|2,201039|5,201229|2,201419|1) - and mirror it (ctrl + H)

03:25:216 (205216|2) - move on |7|

03:26:735 (206735|6) - move on left side

03:52:748 (232748|1,232843|5,232938|1,233033|5,233128|1,233223|5,233318|1,233413|5) - should flip?(ctrl + H) because same with 03:04:141 (184141|1,184235|5,184330|1,184425|5,184520|1,184615|5,184710|1,184805|5) -

04:18:951 (258951|1,259046|5) - move on |3| and |5|

thx so much all fix

good map....

and omg OD 9 T__T

EDIT :

wait 00:31:672 (31672|5,31672|1,31862|1,31862|4) - did i missing something??? i shud be like this http://puu.sh/2TRW2.png
because its refered from 00:28:444 (28444|2,28444|6,28634|4,28634|0,28824|6,28824|2) - this patttern http://puu.sh/2TRX8.png

ExPew wrote:

good map....

and omg OD 9 T__T

EDIT :

wait 00:31:672 (31672|5,31672|1,31862|1,31862|4) - did i missing something??? i shud be like this http://puu.sh/2TRW2.png
because its refered from 00:28:444 (28444|2,28444|6,28634|4,28634|0,28824|6,28824|2) - this patttern http://puu.sh/2TRX8.png

All fix thx you agin xD ExPew

[pro drum]
02:25:027 (145027|5) - move to 6? seems weird because you have all this nice space between all your other chords besides this one XD

Loved this map since you showed me it a long time ago <3

HanzeR wrote:

[pro drum]
02:25:027 (145027|5) - move to 6? seems weird because you have all this nice space between all your other chords besides this one XD

Loved this map since you showed me it a long time ago <3

fix thx for mod xD

Amateur Drum:

00:45:533 (45533|1,45913|1,46292|1,46482|6,46672|3) - Invert pattern like "mirror"

00:48:571 (48571|5,48951|5,49330|5) - Move to column 2

01:18:951 (78951|1,79330|1,79710|5,80090|1,80470|1,80849|1) - Invert pattern like "mirror"

01:21:989 (81989|5,82368|5) - Move to column 2

02:44:014 (164014|5,164394|5,164773|1,165153|5,165533|5,165913|5) - Invert pattern like "mirror"

02:47:052 (167052|1,167432|1) - Move to colum 6

------------------------------------------------------------------------

Add:

03:29:394 - Add from here a stair following the Piano until the current break ends.

DJKero wrote:

Amateur Drum:

00:45:533 (45533|1,45913|1,46292|1,46482|6,46672|3) - Invert pattern like "mirror" <<< not fix

00:48:571 (48571|5,48951|5,49330|5) - Move to column 2 <<< fix

01:18:951 (78951|1,79330|1,79710|5,80090|1,80470|1,80849|1) - Invert pattern like "mirror" <<< fix

01:21:989 (81989|5,82368|5) - Move to column 2 <<< not fix

02:44:014 (164014|5,164394|5,164773|1,165153|5,165533|5,165913|5) - Invert pattern like "mirror" <<<< not fix

02:47:052 (167052|1,167432|1) - Move to colum 6 <<< not fix

------------------------------------------------------------------------

Add:

03:29:394 - Add from here a stair following the Piano until the current break ends. <<< sry my mapset follow drum sound

thx for mod

Hi~
|1|2|3|4|5|6|7|8|
|1|2|3|4|5|6|7|
|1|2|3|4|5|6|
|1|2|3|4|5|
|1|2|3|4|

[Basic Drum]

1. Repetitive diff

00:24:267 What instead of repeating why not put it on the line 7 (The 3 notes)?
00:38:318 Line 5. imo
00:59:204 Line 1
00:59:584 Line 6
00:59:963 Line 1
01:50:280 Add in line 6 (6 and 2)
03:48:191 Line 6
03:52:843 add note in line 3
04:05:660 Add note in line 6
04:06:039 add note in line 2

the other diffs are well

Good luck with rank

ThoomyyxD wrote:

Hi~
|1|2|3|4|5|6|7|8|
|1|2|3|4|5|6|7|
|1|2|3|4|5|6|
|1|2|3|4|5|
|1|2|3|4|

[Basic Drum]

1. Repetitive diff

00:24:267 What instead of repeating why not put it on the line 7 (The 3 notes)? <<< not fix
00:38:318 Line 5. imo <<< fix
00:59:204 Line 1 <<< not fix
00:59:584 Line 6 <<< not fix
00:59:963 Line 1 <<< not fix
01:50:280 Add in line 6 (6 and 2) <<< not fix
03:48:191 Line 6 <<< not fix
03:52:843 add note in line 3 <<< i think for easy diff i don`t want add note more than 1 note
04:05:660 Add note in line 6<<< ^
04:06:039 add note in line 2<<< ^

the other diffs are well

Good luck with rank

thx for mod

1.Since they are a team, it's better if you adding their names to tag: Yoshida Sumire, Umemura Hinako, Yamauchi Aina, Kurosaka Yukako.

2.Turn off "letterbox"

woc2006 wrote:

1.Since they are a team, it's better if you adding their names to tag: Yoshida Sumire, Umemura Hinako, Yamauchi Aina, Kurosaka Yukako.<<<<< Add tag

2.Turn off "letterbox" <<< fix

thx for mod

Good work, bubbled.

Ranked~

congratz

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regenz wrote:

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GRATZ!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

yay an osu!mania map I can actually comprehend!

Congrats!

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I LOVE THIS MAP