Hanyuu wrote:

Hey DJPop here are a few suggestions about the speedchanges:

I took the 7K MX difficulty for an example and changed the first 2 parts where you use that speedchanges.
- The speed changes should not affect the gaps of the room. If the room between 2 notes is x value, the gap should have x value total when apply speed changes.

Generally to make a nice dropdown effect you should best only use 3 timing sections otherwise it looks a bit stuttering.
Like this:
At the start of a speedchange you double the Scrollspeed and at the end (the next note) the speed is back to normal. Now during this time 2/3 of the duration is at double speed and the last 1/3 is at half speed. You can also change the numbers for 2x to 1.5x or 2.5x however it fits best.
- Looks more stuttering imo, their should be at least 3 to make it smooth as possible. But I've changed to be more smoothly by using my idea.

Also this part here: 00:45:264 (45264|6) - is very unreadble for me. You didnt put the notes to the synth sound there and together with the speedchanges it makes it very unreadable and unintuitive to play for me allways miss there
- Having speed changes or not, the look isn't different at all. You'll know the rhythm by just reading it. If you apply speed changes but x value is different like I mentioned above, then it'll have troubles.

Roxas wrote:

On 7k MX there's an error here 00:53:230 - on original song is different the sounds :/
Fantastic map \o\
- Thanks for pointing that out

PROGUY wrote:

Hello.
- Hello

[4K NM]
HP Drain + 1 or 2
- Fixed
00:16:111 (16111|1) Delete this note.
- Assumed it's a part of "Move your boooo diiii ~~~~"
00:32:382 (32382|0) ^
- OK
00:52:891 (52891|0,53145|0,53399|0) Move to 3rd column.
- Fixed in other way
01:37:467 (97467|0) Delete this note.
- OK
01:46:789 (106789|2) Move to 2nd column.
- Fixed
01:49:162 (109162|3) Delete this note.
- OK

[4K HD]
HP Drain +1
OD +1
- Fixed, but I'll +1 OD in every other diffs too, for the standard

[4K MX]
HP Drain + 1 or 2
OD +1
- Fixed
00:50:094 (50094|2) Move to 2nd column.
- It's the same sound so no changes
00:55:603 Try this: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/702676
- I like them being single notes, double notes are not fit imo

[7K NM]
HP Drain + 1 or 2
- Fixed
00:44:416 Add note in 2nd column.
- Fixed
00:44:586 (44586|1) Delete this note.
- Fixed
00:46:620 (46620|3,46789|3) Move to 3rd column.
- Fixed
00:47:467 (47467|1,47721|1,47976|1) ^
- Fixed
00:48:145 (48145|1) Move to 4th column.
- Fixed
00:48:315 (48315|2) Move to 5th, 6th, or 7th column.
- Fixed
00:49:332 (49332|5,49671|5) Move to 3rd column.
- Fixed

[7K HD]
HP Drain +1
- Fixed
00:13:569 (13569|2,13908|2) Move to 4th column.
- Current pattern is easier
00:15:603 (15603|3,15942|3,16111|3) Move to 3rd column.
- No changes
00:16:281 (16281|4,16450|4,16620|4) Move to 4th column.
- Current pattern is easier
00:21:704 Try this: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/702684
- No fast rapid in this diff
00:35:264 (35264|1,35603|1) Move to 3rd column.
- They're already aligned by the pitch order
00:40:687 (40687|1,41026|1) ^
- They're already aligned by the pitch order
00:46:111 (46111|5,46281|5,46620|5,46789|5) Move to 4th column.
- No, because it'll be right after 00:45:942 (45942|4)
00:48:823 (48823|4,48993|5,49332|5,49671|5) Move them left by one column.
- Fixed in other way
01:32:552 (92552|1,93230|1,93908|1,94586|1) Move to 3rd column.
- Fixed sounds for each column
01:34:925 (94925|2,96281|2) Move to 7th column.
- Fixed sounds for each column
Why is the part from 01:40:348 onwards easier than the rest of the chart? Add drum beats please.
- Remapped

[7K MX]
OD + 1 or 2
- Fixed
00:18:908 (18908|6) Move to 3rd column.
- It's the same sound so no changes
00:21:704 This drumroll pattern is better IMO: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/702692
- Most charts always start with right hand first, let's make some different =P
01:21:196 Add note in 4th column.
- No changes
01:23:908 ^
- No changes
The measure in 01:38:993 should have a 1/4 (1/16 in BMS editors) drumroll stream.
- Fixed

[7K SC]
HP Drain +1
- HP 10 has no recovery D:
OD + 2 or 3
- OD+1 like other diffs
00:02:721 (2721|6,2721|0) Adjust their long note ends to 00:08:145.
- No changes
00:18:823 (18823|6) Move to 5th column.
- It's the same sound so no changes


Note: I modded your maps within the editor and noticed speed gimmicks used with SV changes. I haven't tested with them yet but I will look into those next time.

My Comments: Your charts have little or no variety of patterns and there's small or no difference between difficulties, meaning when people swap in between difficulties they would notice the same patterns used in them and may consider it lazy (unless used right).
- It's hard to keep balances for every level of players :/
In addition, you should also try to keep it balanced between both hands. A lot of charts in O2Jam have made the mistake of putting a lot of notes in one hand while the other hand has a few notes to none to press (and of course this doesn't matter much when the Random/Panic ring is used often by many hardcore players).
- I'll keep it in mind, thanks for modding

- R u m i a - wrote:

7K SC

SPOILER

• 00:21:704 = http://puu.sh/2zY4x make it like this more stable = http://puu.sh/2zY9L

- Made it different :3

• 01:26:789 = http://puu.sh/2zYmI = remove/unsuitable,the beat is 1 2 1 2,not 1 1 1 1

- It's a combination between snare rolls and bass drums

• 01:29:162 - 01:29:501 =messy jumps

- Fixed

• 01:39:162 , the right beat is = http://puu.sh/2zYy0

- There would be too many notes in this room :<

7k MX

SPOILER

• 00:02:721 - 00:14:072 =make as long note

- Overused...

• 00:54:247 - 00:54:586 http://puu.sh/2zYKH = same rythm so juz repeat the notes / make it stairs = http://puu.sh/2zYOH or http://puu.sh/2zYPq

• balance note from beginning to end

- They're already matched the music

7K HD

SPOILER

• intro add long note = 1/2 measure

- Added

7K NM is good >.<b
sorry i dunno about the generals like OD,HP drains x.x need somebody else to mod that part
gl on ranking this

Luyuja wrote:

Sorry for my late moding.

7K SC
OD+1
- Fixed
00:16:450 (16450|1) - I suggest move this note to column 3
- I would if there are 2 bass drums, current pattern is better imo
00:35:433 (35433|0) - ^
- Pitch arranged
00:35:772 (35772|0) - ^
- Pitch arranged
00:42:891 (42891|6) - Moving to column column 6 are good for hit
- I need that synth sound to arranged in the same column, just like previous rooms
00:43:569 (43569|1) - I suggest add a note in column 6
- It doesn't fit the strong/weak sound
00:44:925 (44925|5) - I suggest move this note to column 7
- The sound is different
00:46:789 (46789|0) - Move to column 6
- I need that sound to arranged in the same column
00:46:959 (46959|5) - Move to column 2
- With the reason above, this note should be on the opposite side
01:17:806 (77806|3) - I think seldom people can notice this LN note`s keysound.You can consider make it to normal note
- Sorry, I'll keep it
Note pattern is great.I wish you can reduce some sv changes..

7K MX
01:40:010 (100010|4) - I prefer this patern in this part ^^
No any other suggestion,good notes!

7K HD
00:39:332 (39332|4) - move those 4 notes all 2 to the right
- Pitch arranged
00:44:755 (44755|3) - move those 4 notes all 2 to the right
- Pitch arranged
00:45:264 (45264|4) - move this note to column 5
- Done
Nice notes

My english is poor,sorry.
- Thanks for modding~

Roxas wrote:

Hi DJPop sorry for being late xD When I'll find you online could you explain me how you can edit the mp3 like that? ;_;

[4K NM]
00:29:840 (29840|2) - I think that the volume here is too high because when I listen it feels like that the notes 00:29:755 - here and 00:29:798 - here are lower than the circle's note maybe are only my shitty headphones lol
00:46:111 (46111|2,46281|2,46450|1,46620|2,46789|2,46959|1,47128|2) - Move the circles on 2nd column on 3rd and vice versa
- I guess you wanted me to swap 2nd and 3rd column, but no changes ._.
00:55:264 - Circle on 1st column?
- Added
01:12:382 - Circle on 1st column
- Added
01:15:603 - Circle on 2nd column
- Added

[4K HD]
I suggest OD 7
- Same OD for every diffs
00:07:806 (7806|3) - Move on 3rd column
- No changes
00:13:230 (13230|3) - You could move on 3rd (or keep it there)
- No changes
00:21:704 (21704|0,21789|3,21874|1,21959|2,22043|0,22128|3,22213|1,22298|2,22382|0) - A thing like this? :v

SPOILER

- I like the current one
00:36:281 (36281|1) - Move on 3rd column?
- No changes
01:06:111 - Add a circle on 2nd column
- Added
01:51:196 (111196|3,111196|0) - Move on 2nd and 3rd?
- No changes

[4K MX]
HP Drain 8?
- Fixed
00:07:467 (7467|2,7637|0,7806|3,7976|1) - I don't like this pattern, make a thing like this?

SPOILER

- Sure
00:50:094 (50094|1) - Move on 2nd column
- ok

[7K NM]
00:31:365 (31365|5) - Move on 6th column?
- Pitch arranged
00:46:111 (46111|1,46111|3,46281|1) - Imo it's too hard for a normal this
- Removed a note
00:55:264 - Add circle on 6th column
- Fixed
01:04:416 (64416|0,64586|3,64755|6) - Make like this?

SPOILER

- No changes
01:15:603 - Add circle on 1st column
- Added

[7K HD]
00:39:501 (39501|5) - Move on 6th column
- Pitch arranged

7K MX is ok for me and I suggest only HP Drain -1 on 7K SC Good luck!
- Fixed, Thanks for modding~

chonicle wrote:

Alright full keysounded.

[General]
video offset: Video,290,"smooooch.avi", change it for all diffs. The video syncs pretty well with your map

[7K Sc]
You have 4 places that have 7 press according to wiki's interpretion.
00:23:738 (23738|2) -
I don't know what to do with this one... Maybe change some holds to notes?

00:13:569 (13569|2) -
01:29:162 (89162|4) -
01:29:332 (89332|4) -
These three you can probably change the middle hold.

Call me back when you are ready!

woc2006 wrote:

About speed change, take the big money(https://osu.ppy.sh/s/84789) as an example, players don't like large range speed changes(larger than 4x from low to high).
Then i found some large range changes on 7K MX,SC and 4K MX (0.1->6.7, 67x) (0.25 -> 1.5 6x)
I think they are unreadable and should be removed or changed.

Charles445 wrote:

Obnoxious speed changes, more frustrating than it's worth.

Charles445 wrote:

Obnoxious speed changes, more frustrating than it's worth.

Charles445 wrote:

Obnoxious speed changes, more frustrating than it's worth.