^ he provided a video with better quality. \:3/
Andrea wrote:
~S o r d a's Hard~
00:07:087 (2,3,4) - I don't like this sudden spacing change, I think it would be better if you space them normally like the rest of the difficulty.
00:19:846 (1,2) - I seriously dislike this overlap, it looks ugly to me.
00:28:846 (1,2) - This small jump feels random and doesn't really make sense, space them normally please.fixed
01:13:846 (3) - There should be a finish at the begin of this slider and not a whistle, to emphasize with the strong beat of the song.fixed
01:19:658 (3) - Add a finish on this circle to emphasize with the music.fixed
01:29:596 (8,9) - Disable the grid snap and stack these sliders better together.fixed
Thank you Andrea~~Andrea wrote:
~General~~Easy~
- Use the same Audio Lead-In on Hard difficulty as well for consistency. Sorda fixed it!
Uhhhmmm i think it was bakari who told me to decrease it but well i guess ill increase it again, im still not sure nor see any difference.
- Increase OD by 1 tick to balance the difficulty settings.
~Normal~
- 01:18:346 (3) - New combo due to the new stanza and music change. Yuup
- 01:31:096 (1) - It would be better if you don't center this note due to the previous hitburst, try to place it like this. done
- Increase HP Drain by 1 tick to balance the difficulty settings. your point is good but i think it may be a bit too much so i'll better leave it as it is
~Insane~
- 00:56:408 (1,2) - It would be better if you make these two circles into a slider, so the rhythm will be easier to read. in my opinion it may result more difficult since it would be a slider at a red tick. since most of my sliders are at white tick, i prefer keeping consistency to avoid confusion. o3o
- 01:29:783 (3,1) - They're too close each other imo, try to move (1) down a bit, like I suggested you on Easy difficulty. done
Hope this can help you, good luck. very helpful :3
- 00:13:283 (5) - New combo due to the new stanza and music change. fine o3o
- 00:13:846 (1) - You can remove this new combo from here afterwards. agree~
- 00:34:846 (1) - This slider is touching the HP Bar, try to move it down a bit if possible. ugh that looks ugly, moved o.o
- 01:18:252 (6,1) - Even though there's the new combo on (1), this sudden spacing change is really confusing to read at first sight, I highly suggest you to space these notes normally each other. o.o i think you're right. moved.
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Thank you a lot sry >< will do after sorda's update~Strawberry wrote:
<3 ♥ o3o
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- the offset on all timing sections should be decrease 6ms imo~ the present sound out and a bit delayed.. Done o3o
- 00:00:337 - in all diffs, the 40% volume sounds a bit loud for the intro.. i'd prefer to use 30% on this part so the whistles would not be so noisy.. Agree :3
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- 00:08:587 (1) - remove the whistle on that slider since the beat on 00:10:337 sounds need not be stressed.. a bit weird for now.. i like the whistle at the start of the slider :< but instead i removed whistle at the repeat so it doesnt sound too noisy
- 00:31:465 - i'd like to bring forward the stream 1/4 tick~ sounds better~ :3 http://puu.sh/2xiZv ;___; here i dont agree with you. I think the current way is better because it emphasizes a bit more the vocals, and also the triplet starts at a white tick making it easier to read imo. o3o
- 00:59:027 (2) - i feel the nc should be set on here rather than the previous slider (1).. (also the same thing at 01:10:465 (1) - these new combos are like that because the singer says in english "go in and try!" and at the other example you mentioned he says "show in the fight" if im not wrong. o3o these are only like that because they follow the vocals :3
- 01:17:777 (1) - remove nc here and put another one on 01:17:590 (5) for music? sounds like the circle (5) is on the same bar with th following stream. :3 yes :3
- 01:27:527 - made a tiny adjustment for better shape of the circle~ done *-*
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160,344,89590,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,356,89777,1,2,0:0:0:0:
call me back.
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Very useful, as always! I didn't agree with a couple of things only, but the rest is all changed. Thank you very much~mancusojuanmattos wrote:
Yo! :3. Random bubble check (you know, I'll do that in English)
[General:]
• You are missing the video file in S o r d a's Hard, fix that and be careful on your next update. It is the second time that make the same mistake in this difficulty This has been happening frequently, i think it was Sorda who didn't change it or idk o3o but i guess it's fixed now.
• 00:18:152 (Break) - In all difficulties, I suggest you to move the end of this break till this point. It makes sense because in that point the music pitch change. Yeeep :3
[Easy:]
• 00:12:340 (1,2) - Actually the 1/1 pattern doesn't sound really good to me, in this case the red tick in 00:12:902 need an emphasize. Would be better if you try a rhythm like this one (Plus, I'd add Claps in the reverse and Slider end): wow how didn't i think of this? ;-;
• 00:34:090 (1) - This is a bit nazi, but I can see an overlap between this Slider and the previous Slider (1), and for me looks bad during the gameplay. Try doing something like this (and have a code with the next (1,2,3) re-arranged spacing):yay thank you :3Screenshoot + Code• 00:37:840 (1) - I'd add a Whistle in the Reverse Slider fine o3o444,84,34090,6,0,B|404:40|404:40|356:16,1,110,0|0,0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
280,60,34840,2,0,L|140:168,2,165,4|4|0,0:0|0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
368,76,36340,2,0,B|400:128|372:180|372:180|416:208|412:284,1,220,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
• 00:55:840 (1,2,3) - This pattern cause a bit of confusion in me, sincerely, I really hoped a Note or some beat in 00:57:340 and other things. Let me re-arrange this for you, the beat changes (I mean red tick and then a white tick) cause confusion in New players, they usually try following a simple 1/1 rhythm in general, and as I said before a Note in the downbeat in 00:57:340 is pretty necessary in my opinion, so try a rhythm like this one: agreed, and done.
• 01:10:840 (1,2) - In this case, remove (2) and add a Repetition in (1), will be easier to read for new players. Btw, in my opinion fits better with the vocals too. nice suggestion, wow i had to rearrange everything here
• 01:23:590 (1) - This Slider sounds really empty, you can maybe add a Whistle in the Reverse Arrow. sure
• 01:27:527 (Spin) - Why don't you try a Normal Sampleset Hitsounds in this Spinner? This drum hitsound is inconsistent with the whole of the map, plus the whistle would be consistent with your Normal diff.waa i liked the drum :< but okay, sounds quite similar anyway
[Normal:]
• 00:02:331 (1) - Such a lot of combo spam in this first section of the map, I'd remove this one
• 00:06:331 (1) - (^) agreed with both ^
• 00:32:402 (x) - In my personal point of view, sounds better if you add a Note here and...
• 00:33:152 (5) - Remove this instead because follow better the Instrumental done.
• 01:19:840 (Spin) - Move this Slider 1/2 back? Follow better the Instrumental and long vocal in my opinion. If you do that, don't forget to make this Spinner 1/2 bigger too. ok o:
[Insane:]
• Settings:
--> OD 8 looks excessive for this difficulty, I'd reduce it by 1 Tick. (OD-1) wow lol i thought i had 7 od. i never use od 8.
• 00:00:331 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4) - In this section, I'd adjust the Distance Snap in 1.20x, actually the notes look really close and don't fit too much with this AR8. In addition, I wouldn't use jumps/Spacing increases in this 1st section, the music becomes really slow and these kind of thing don't fit at all. I wouldn't do that, i prefer to keep 1,0x so players can recognize the slowdowns in the song. :3 about jumps, i think these fit good since the vocals change a lot from the previous note and 00:02:081 (1) imo. i also did it to make it less boring/monotonous for pro players, you know
• 00:08:581 (Spin) - Move this Spinner 1/4 back because fits better with the music. Remember to make it bigger in 1/4 after to apply that yes
• 00:34:840 (1) - It's me or you are missing a Clap at this Slider end? Because It feels necessary you're right xD
• 00:44:590 (3,1) - Reduce the spacing between these Notes please, it doesn't fit in this slow section of the music reduced a bit
• 00:53:027 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - This kind of pattern, emm.. I don't like it a lot, the flow especially. You have a similar pattern in your 'Suit Up' map and I didn't like either. This is a personal point of view, feel free to ignore that if you feel this pattern works fine to you The guitar sound gives me that feeling of zig-zag jumps, that's why i made it like this :< but i think it plays good! nobody had problems with it o3o
• 01:09:340 (2,3,4,5) - Such an empty pattern (talking about the hitsounding), I'd add some hitsound somewhere to make this pattern more enjoyable it feels empty due to (3). here at 01:09:715 should be a normal-hitnormal sound but (3) is following the vocals, that's why i ignored it. if i add a whistle, it would sound odd since i didn't add any whistles at the rest of the kiai so i think i'll leave it like this.
• 01:29:965 (8) - A Normal samplset hitsounds sounds better at the Slider end, so I'd replace it the whistle for that. In addition, I'd remove the Drum finish from the slider start done
And.. That's all for now .
Nice difficulties in general, but popped due to the inconsistent video file in Hard diff.
Call me back then (in-game game pls, I need to talk some things with you)
Kawayi Rika wrote:
http://puu.sh/2CeTA[S o r d a's Hard]
- 00:08:081 (4) - Remove circle,it's unnecessary.i think need circle not fixed
- 00:25:652 (8,1) - Switch new combo,looks much better.fixed
- 00:30:715 (1,2) - You'd better to make these notes symmetrical.i guess fixed
- 00:42:902 (4,1) - Bad spacing,looks so confused,stack on 00:42:902 (4) - start point is better.kk next spacing better to me dont poke please
- 01:07:746 - You should add a note to here,make a stream,it's follow drum.fixed
- 01:18:246 - Same as above.nope if i add note stream too long
Thank youuuuuuuu ><!! updated everythingKawayi Rika wrote:
Hi ~ Kei ~ Hi Rika! ><
Red : Must be fixed
Pink : Need to consider
Purple : Just suggestions[General]
- Please use original Artist : タッキー&翼 awesome :3
[Insane]
- 00:50:402 (2,3) - More better rhythm,like this. Yeah!
[Normal]
- 00:19:840 (1,2,3,4,1,2) - More better rhythm,same as Insane.
- 01:00:340 (1,2,3) - Same as above. All done
[Easy]
- 01:00:340 (2) - More better rhythm,like this.
- 01:12:340 (2) - Same as above. done too, both
OK ~ That's all ~ I love inuyasha song :3 so do i! a lot :3
Call me back ~
I'm not pro ;_;Sieg wrote:
so pro, congrats
<3Snepif wrote:
grats sugar <3
Muchas gracias! espero que rankees el tuyo pronto tambienZexion_Vi wrote:
Felicidades Kei, no esperaba menos de este gran mapa