yurunneram wrote:

Easy
00:04:214 - Why not use this rythm from here till 00:07:714 instead? Makes it more interesting instead of repeating the previous pattern :3
I knew hat in this way the rhythm will be more cdelicae, but it also means to add difficulty and worse flow, so nope.

Normal
02:33:464 (4) - End at 02:33:714 instead? no, it's a particular rhythm pattern and I want to keep it consistent
02:43:714 (3) - Move to 02:43:714 sounds nicer methinks no, it fits the melody in the background now

Hard
Methinks its seems nice to stream at 00:03:714 sho maybe add note at 00:03:839 and 00:04:089 and bring things closer to stream :3 I don't want to abuse tripple in such a slow and relaxing song
00:14:214 (1,2,3,4) - Make another stream by filling it in between here? neither, I only place them where they're needed
00:22:214 (1,2,3,4,1) - Make the shape nicer and more regular pentagonish I knew what you mean, but it's difficult to make it regular sine it already touched the bottom, and as I didn't the place of the first pont again, so wheter it's regular or not is actually not a problem
00:54:964 (3) - move to x 438 y 148 and 00:55:214 (4) to x 264 y 204 so itsa triangle-ish (and resnap the rest) ok changed in a similar way as you mentioned
01:38:214 (1,2,3,4) - Give it a nice formation. Don't just put anywhere I thought I made a cross and flow wasn't bad

Dat's all~ You have been modded out by Yurun Ceroia Neram~ <3

Katty Pie wrote:

Hi from Moe Moe Russian Modding Room

[Hard]

Rhythm, spacing,patterns

00:00:202 (1) - this slider unsnapped~ fix this fixed
00:10:214(1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - this jump looks so randomly~ put note 1 x184 y296, note 2 x100 y244, note 3 x188 y196, note 4 x272 y 248, note 5 and 7 x272 y344, note 6 x360 y296, note 8 x184 y296, and slider 1 x100 y244. This looks better and more readable fixed
00:16:964(2) - better end slider on red tick it's better follow for music and feel here changed into a differnet pattern, the rhythm is better now
00:20:964(2) - ^ same ^
00:24:964(2) - ^ same ^
00:38:714(2,3) - mabe make blanket here, will looks more pleasant I was blancketing the silder folloing circle
00:48:214(1,2,3) - this pattern looks terrible~ try so changed into a similar pattern as you suggest
01:38:214(1,2,3,4) - wrong spacing between notes~ this pattern will be looks better fixed
02:12:214(1,2,3) - different spacing here not playable.
02:14:214(1,2,3) - same ^ ^
02:22:714(2,3,4) - better use identical distance between this notes for better flow. it will be more readable not meant to change, this increasng spacing is matching with the increasing slider velocity
02:25:464(4,5) - remove this note and slider and put here double slider 1/2, it's better follow for vocal. the rhythm for the last part won't change, for sure, not like the placement. I made this rhythm which is with notes on blue tick is definitely fitting the melody in the background. I've found many of my friends and other mappers for testplays and opinion, such as Frostmourne an Athena Tennos in the above, and more. The result turned out fine. It's not intuitive in the 1st play but fun in all the following. You know, if this part stil insists 1/2 rhythm all the way or sth. like that, it would be your Guesd Diff, not mine. So, hope you unerstand and sorry if you just don't like it.
02:29:464(4,5) - ^ same
02:26:214 - here rhythm 1/2, and notes on white ticks not sounds absolutely.
02:30:464 - put this note on red tick and add note on white
02:30:964(3,4,5) - this patern very very uncomfortable to play. If you want use this patern here then use spacing 0.6 between 3and4 notes, 0.8 between 4and5 notes, 1.0 between 5and 6 notes, 1.2 between 6and7 noses. changed into ups and downs while increasng distance
02:38:964 - ^ same ^
02:33:214(3,4) - here 1/2 rhythm~and next 2 combos too
02:41:589 - put this note on white tick

e.t.c Plz check identical mistakes in the end~

New combo

00:43:714 - remove here and add on next note
00:51:714 - ^
00:55:714 - ^
01:03:464 (2) - add nc after spin
01:19:464 (2) - ^ same
01:27:714 - remove nc here and add on next note
01:39:714 - ^
01:33:214 - remove NC, it's not need here
02:27:214 - then you change on rhythm 1/2 delete nc here
02:35:214 - ^
02:43:214 - ^
02:51:214 - ^
02:41:964 - remove here and add on next note
almost fixed all the way, thx fo this
Hitsounds

brr map sounds soo boring, I suggest add some finishes on down beats. It will be sounds more interesting :3

00:00:214
00:04:214
00:08:214 etc on all diff.
sorry but no change. I intend to make this a soft map as the songs is. I even almost didn't add Kiai, for I think there is not a single part should be emphasized, they're all the same. Rapid finishes will just ruin the atmosphere.
To be honnest I'd remake all hitsounds, bcz it borrring and so sleepily >.> Standart hitsounds sounds here better what custom, and Idk why you use this borring things

Map need moreeee work~ Good luck~

neonat wrote:

Normal

00:47:964 (3) - add a finish at the end of the slider too, nice sound I know what you mean, in some extent, you're right. But I really don't want to make this map loud as it's eally a soft song. so, sorry for no change, and neither do the below
00:53:714 (1,2) - better to not stack them will consider this
00:59:964 - maybe add a note? fixed
01:31:964 - ^ ^
01:03:964 (3) - add finish to the end of slider too
01:19:964 (3) - ^
01:51:964 (3) - ^

Hard

00:48:214 (1) - finish on the start of the slider nope as above =.=
01:20:214 (1) - ^
01:04:214 (5) - finish
01:52:214 (5) - ^

captin1 wrote:

Hey! From my queue

General

No kiai time? I think it would fit from 02:24:214 (1) to end I know what you mean, but I intended not to add it for this soft song

Easy

00:04:214 (1,2) - move end of (1) to x: 152 y:192 and move (2) to x:280 y:192 so they're lined up fixed
00:08:589 (2) - move end to x:364 y:376 to make it symmetrical between (1) and (3) fixed
00:10:714 (2) - same idea as ^ x:160 y:20 fixed
00:16:214 (1) - middle point to x:204 y:304, end to x:372 y:264, I think this fits with (2) a bit better fixed
00:22:839 (4) - down 1 grid to line up with 2 no need to
01:23:714 (2) - spacing oops
01:40:714 (2) - ctrl+H then move to x:136 y:316 so it leads into next note a bit better nope, it's a blancket to a certain extent

Normal

00:33:214 (3) - middle point to x:152 y:128, end to x:224 y:60, blanket (2) sorry but I like the shape now, I was blancketing the following circle of 2
00:41:214 (2) - middle point to x:188 y:88, end to x:284 y:108, blanket (1), adjust (3) and (5) for spacing after ^
01:28:214 (1,2,3) - I think you should have these two sliders curved in opposite directions; so one up and one down. Either way has its pros and cons so I'll leave it to you sorry but they won't fit the former and the latter
02:16:214 (1,2,3) - ^ ^

Hard

00:06:214 (1,2,3,4) - make the angle between (1,2) and (3,4) the same fixed
00:32:714 (3) - x:312 y:100 for symmetry with (1) moved 1 instead
00:38:714 (2) - middle point to x:456 y:184 to follow curve of (3) a bit better sorry but I was blacnketing the following circle
01:20:714 (2) - second sliderpoint to x:336 y:136 and red point to x:344 y:184 to blanket notes before it changed in another way
01:L36:214 (1,2,3,4) - turn this into a regular square fixed

Pretty song good luck!

Banana wrote:

说好周末摸图 然后校园网挂了于是..喵

[General]
clear

[Hard]
00:11:214 (1) - 和前一个combo的(4)stack 考虑音量什么的 考虑的时候旋律伴奏 所以不想叠
00:14:964 (4,1,2,1) - 考虑这一组向下或向上移动 前面的弧形不好看 微调
00:17:714 (4) - 不是很喜欢往角落放note 另外pattern有点歪建议向右移动 fixed
00:18:464 (2,3,4) - 个人感觉(3,4)方向不对，接前面的pattern的顺时针 fixed
00:22:214 (1,2,3) - 认真摆pattern就不会死 fixed
00:39:214 (3) - 前半段滑条弧度大了不好看 我抱的是前一个滑条的跟随圈
00:40:714 (2,4) - 这两个圈的位置最好再考虑下 跳有点意义不明 而且位置可以用stack什么的优化 都改了
00:47:964 (3,4,1) - 真心想stack试试(4)和00:46:964 (4)stack然后这个三连间距大概1.2 nope
00:59:964 (8,1) - 跳 no 这里节奏是减弱的
01:03:464 (1,2,3,4,5) - 个人不喜欢排成直线 因为显得自己缺梗（喂 挺好的 两个强拍分开
01:21:214 (3) - 关grid snap修锚点 fixed
01:33:214 (1) - 说实话前面这一串的排列 虽然有用对称的梗 不过排列放的并不开 这边又往刚才摆过note的地方放 有点挤 建议01:33:214 (1,2,1,2)这四个放右边填空 大改
01:38:964 (4) - 这个考虑放右边去然后三个成正三角，如果这边不跳 后面的1/4间距会被吐槽 fixed
01:41:214 (3) - 开gs的时候你就输了... fixed
01:44:339 - vocal在这里 修节奏时候最好考虑进去 我觉得还挺好
01:47:214 (3) - 拆了换两个圈？感觉可以跳 4个一组的
02:08:214 (1) - 角落起note，user rating会被黑（rating狗路过... 还好吧
02:23:214 (3) - 这种逐渐加大速度的滑条 个人只接受同方向的滑条组 感觉还好
02:25:464 - 个人想用1/4滑条两个来过渡后面的3/4节奏 现在这样的节奏，音效听着有点奇怪 还有 后面所有跟vocal加的蓝线whistle 都很奇怪 节奏不太想改
02:37:214 (3) - 拆了这个滑条 =。=
02:49:214 (3) - ^ ^

[Normal]
00:11:214 (6,1) - 作为排列党+强迫症 我看到这两个没blanket好的滑条表示压力巨大 微调 我喜欢包跟随圈
00:21:214 (3) - 不推荐靠近边 不过没出去没事倒是 无碍
00:27:714 (5) - 往上面放一点会死！ fixed
00:38:964 (4) - 考虑直滑条 fixed
01:46:214 (3,4,5,6) - 这四个可以摆pattern的 会考虑 暂时没动
01:51:964 (3) - 尾巴往右边去一点 指向另外两个圈的中点 fixed
02:22:214 (1) - 考虑用rotate修 感觉挺好的
02:53:964 (5) - 这个有上去到playfield的边疆地区的必要吗 其实纵坐标才25啊
不错的Normal 0.0

[Easy]
00:16:839 - 这边肯定是多绿线了 不是，立刻改回SC1是为了避免sliderslide的噪音
00:24:839 - ^ ^
00:57:714 (2) - 竖直翻转下放回来 fixed
01:04:214 (2) - 往角落放会增加难度 没啥感觉 反正转完以后第一个东西是在中间
01:42:964 (2) - 往左弯 弧度小一点 不行干脆直滑条 fixed
02:17:214 (2) - 放playfield中间去 我感觉那样才不舒服
02:20:214 (1) - 向下弯 微调
02:27:214 (2) - 个人感觉对称的不如三个滑条摆个风扇好看 嗯 调了不少

喵

MineC24 wrote:

Modding queue~

Easy

imo OD - 1..? OD2 is odinary

00:43:714 (3) - move -> x:124 y:232 please..? (imo) ok
00:54:214 (1) - this pattern is so confuse.. change plz keep it for now, will change if someone else critisize it again. thx for pointing out
02:41:214 (2) - move -> x:180 y:228 certainly wrong

Normal

00:19:214 (4) - move -> x:312 y:204 fixed
00:47:964 (3) - remove clap nope, the current hitsound fits

Hard

00:00:202 (1) - snap please 0.0 stupid me
00:02:214 (1,2,3,4) - look so bad pattern.. change plz no I love cross-jumps
00:47:964 (3) - remove clap =.=

GL

fanzhen0019 wrote:

hi

General

1. no source? I think no
2. Normal AR+1? k

Easy

Hitsounds

• Clear!

Arrangement & Design

1. 00:16:214 (1) - 何不做对称 k
2. 00:18:714 (2) - 同^ k
3. 00:55:214 (3) - 后面翘那么一点略别扭 建议红点下移或者别翘 k
4. 01:43:714 (3,1) - 总感觉有点坑 因为前面你都没叠 然后这里突然叠一下 中间还空个1/1 懒得动=。=不过必须承认这个心怀不轨呀=。=大概以后会改的

Normal

Hitsounds

1. 00:48:089 (X) - clap k
2. 01:04:089 (X) - clap

k

Arrangement & Design

1. 00:33:214 (3) - 包好看点 k
2. 00:41:214 (2) - 同上 k
3. 01:20:714 (1) - 这是干啥 k
4. 01:44:464 (1,2) - 对齐 k
5. 02:17:214 (3) - 建议ctrl+h 再ctrl+g 这样和1对称 k

Hard

Hitsounds

• Clear!

Arrangement & Design

1. 00:37:214 (5) - 这又是干嘛 这个没啥吧
2. 00:39:214 (3) - 对称点 k
3. 02:19:214 (3) - 为何不和02:17:214 (3) - 一样 没有必要非一样吧 想着可以稍微包一下后面的

Hard略感觉凌乱 排列再工整一点会不错的
gl

Wolf wrote:

Hi.
From my Modding Queue.

General
Looking good!

Easy
00:06:214 (1) - You should move this slider down on the grid to fit better. I think the current place is fine
00:12:214 (1,2,3) - Try something like this to improve flow. hmm, undeniable, but I feel it not that neccessary because I have to fix quite a seires of things for doing so
00:35:714 (2) - Move to x:0 y:296 to improve flow and match with 00:37:214 (2) - I know what you maen but sorry you forgot the distance snap
02:38:214 (1,2,3,1,2) - A bit confusing to read. Consider moving 02:41:214 (2) - to the left. it's not confusing in test play, when the latter (2) fully appears, the previous (2) has already gone

Normal
00:10:214 (4) - Move the middle node a bit closer from the previous slider to improve blanket: yes you're right
00:21:214 (3) - You should place this slider a bit higher on the grid. fine
00:22:714 (5) - Try moving this slider in a way that it won't touch with 00:21:214 (3) - . ok easy

Hard
00:43:214 (5,6) - Not a good overlap imo. fixed in a certain extent, hope it looks better now
01:48:214 (1) - Remove this circle and place the upcoming spin here, it fits better. nope. First, this won't be too hard in a Hard diff; second, I regard the (1) as a spinner indicator, it means that if I;ve never played this map before, when I saw this, I'll be suggested that there's a spinner which is just about to come
Nothing much I could add here.

Good luck:

[CSGA]Ar3sgice wrote:

哇 好美的BG

Nemis wrote:

[Hard]
00:07:714 (6) - CTRL + G and move it a bit down, it flows better k
00:11:714 (3) - Move this beat under 00:10:964 (4) - , it flows better k
00:26:714 (3,4) - CTRL + G, it flows a lot better! =.= not really feel like it but it's ok, since the current 4 and 1 are a bit close
00:37:214 (5) - Fix this slider using the red tick and not this interlacement of points =.= not feel it neccessary
00:45:464 (2,3) - CTRL + G, it flows a lot better no, not like the above, I love this cross jump
00:57:964 (4,1) - CTRL + G here too k
00:59:214 (1) - Add a new combo since you always added it where there were patterns with beats only not needed, the circles are smoothly going down
01:31:214 (5) - Add a new combo here and remove 01:31:464 (1) - this one I prefer my way of NC like this, making the lattern pattern whole
01:37:214 (5) - CTRL + G again changed the circles above instead
02:16:214 (1,2,3) - I suggest to change this pattern's position since 02:16:214 (1) - this beat stacks on 02:16:714 (2) - , so you don't see 02:16:214 (1) - under 02:15:214 (3) - when you play it not a problem, only a simple trick to HD players
02:41:964 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1) - These two triangles are different from the others, you should fix it increasing 02:42:964 (3,1) - their spacing k

[Normal]
00:15:464 (8) - This new combo is not needed, remove it nope
00:51:714 (5) - This new combo is not needed too =.= I think it's fine
01:03:464 (1,2,3) - I suggest to move this pattern in the center k
01:30:214 (4) - Remove this new combo soory, no
02:24:214 (1) - From here the map becomes a bit hard... it's not easy for a beginner-intermediate player yeah a bit, about the short sliders, hmm I think they'll get used to them. After all this is not the easiest diff, I hope this dosen't that matter
02:37:964 (1,2) - Fix this blanket k

[Easy]
00:15:464 (1) - I suggest to remove this new combo not feel like to, I prefer NC at where there's gap
01:46:714 (3) - You should add a new combo here since you added a new combo on every big white ticks k
01:52:214 (1) - Really unneeded, remove this new combo k
02:15:714 (1) - Move this new combo on 02:17:214 (2) - this beat and move 02:17:714 (1) - this one on 02:18:714 (1) - this slider k

• 
  *The slider velocity you used for this difficulty is a bit much. Like you said in the map description this is a relaxing slow song, so you should have used a slow SV as well. SV of 1,0 or 0,90 would have worked. I guess you won't change it now.. but please have it in mind for your next beatmaps.
  
  *This difficulty is also a bit too difficult, specially at the beginning of the song so this mod will be focused on helping you to make this difficulty easier.

1. 00:12:964 (2) - Avoid placing notes at red ticks. Remove it, these kind of rhythms are for normal diffs. :p
2. 00:16:214 (1) - Perhaps add a hitfinish due to the change of melody?
3. 00:43:714 (3) - Not really necessary, I know, but you can move this note where 00:41:214 (2) was.
4. 00:48:214 (1) - Since this is a Easy diff, it is always good to leave a short break after spinning so beginners can recover their hand. To do this try removing this note. I know it is placed to avoid ignoring that white big tick, but it kinda gets overlapped with spinner elements, making it probably hard for beginners to see the approach circle.. I don't know, it's up to you!:
   
   SPOILER

   
5. 00:50:964 (2) - Sliders at red ticks ;-; please remove this slider and place a note at 00:51:214 instead. Leave that kind of rhythm for your Normal diff.
6. 00:54:714 (2) - ^ Here my suggestion is replacing this slider with a circle.
7. 01:03:464 (1,2) - Placing a slider at a red tick after a spinner isn't friendly for beginners. They'll probably rush clicking the slider.. you used some spinners before like 00:44:214 and you skipped the clap-sound with it, so my suggestion is extending this spinner at 01:03:464, make it end at 01:03:714 to make it more easier for beginners.
8. 01:19:464 (1) - ^ Same.
9. 01:30:714 (2) - This is the last slider of this kind i'll point out. Make sure to get rid of these! they're too much for a Easy diff.
   
   I'll stop here. Please get rid of the rest of hard patterns such as the one mentioned ^ and the others like 02:26:214 (1,2,1). It's too much for an easy. Easy diffs should have long sliders, simple 1/1 rhythm. You know~

• 
  *This difficulty has too many unnecessary jumps such as 00:26:464 (2,3,4,1,2) etc. Once again, it's a relaxing song so you shouldn't do jumps like this if the song doesn't fit with them imo.
  *00:24:714 (2) - Why did you changed the spacing for this kind of sliders? and here you used less spacing for these sliders 02:32:714 (2). And here at 02:36:714 (2) you change again, and this one looks like if it were a 1/1 simple rhythm, players wont expect this and will be probably confused due to this and also due to your incosistent spacing.
  *02:37:589 (4) - Sliders at blue tick like these don't play good, these feel bad to click, you should place circles at blue ticks and preferably not sliders. I know you're following the vocals, but it doesn't feel good to play. :<
  *02:40:714 (2,3) - This jump isn't necessary nor plays good so consider removing jumps like this one.
  *02:41:464 (4) - Here instead of this, you should tried to replace it with cirlces and add another circle at 02:41:714. Much better imo.
  
  These are *generally* the most important issues of this difficulty. Too many unnecesary jumps for a Hard diff and also for a slow and calm song, inconsistent spacings, sliders at blue/red, forced jumps.. this difficulty needs more work. It could have been more flowy. Please try to improve your diff having in mind what I wrote above ^ This is general so I don't repeat the same stuff too many times.
  ________________________

1. 00:00:214 (1) - 开始位置有点偏，尽量往中间放。

1. 没什么问题

1. 02:08:214 (1,2,3) - 转盘完了之后这个梗位置太偏了，会非常影响打图。
2. 02:55:089 (1) - 挪到02:55:214 (1) - ,注意spinner的尾巴。

Stefan wrote:

^ because I've read that Easy feels too hard to play I tried myself out and that's how I think about it:

00:12:214 (1,2,3) - Well yeah, as Kei suggested mapping on 1/2 feels too much especially the Song is really calm and I mean, this is an Easy. If you really want to keep the Hitsounds here just make that: http://puu.sh/2xK9V (Of course adjusting the Hitsounds and this and that is your thing. :p) k
00:40:214 (1,2,1) - You actually can do this here too. I find this part of the Song good for this. Or try that: http://puu.sh/2xKfj k
00:49:714 (3) - Move it more away from the edge. k
00:50:964 (2) - Just make a Circle at the white tick. k
00:54:214 (1) - Don't hide it behind 00:52:214 (1). Many people are using big Hitbursts and even with the default Skin it's quite hard to read. eh, I thought it was only for HD players
01:38:964 (2) - No need for this Circle, remove it please. k
01:43:714 (3,1) - I am pretty sure 90% of the First-Times will have a Miss because of this part. People will mostly think that (1) stays on 01:44:214. yeah=.= I won't do that anymore although I think it was fun
02:31:464 (2) - Please move it to 02:31:214. Beginner will have many problems with this Part and (2) sounds much better on 02:31:214. nice idea
02:38:214 (1,2) - Here too. ^

At all I have to agree with Kei. Especially the 1/2 > 1/1 Slider Parts are too much and you should keep that for the Normal Diff.

DAYUM NEW PAGE JKLSJAKLJLASK

Rotte wrote:

[Easy]

1. 00:00:214 (1) - 开始位置有点偏，尽量往中间放。 改了一些

[Normal]

1. 没什么问题 owo

[Hard]

1. 02:08:214 (1,2,3) - 转盘完了之后这个梗位置太偏了，会非常影响打图。 唔 可是不太想改诶=。=我在想想吧
2. 02:55:089 (1) - 挪到02:55:214 (1) - ,注意spinner的尾巴。 不打算改 因为在那个地方我用spinner跟的音其实早已经开始了的

成长真的很迅速，咱已经找不到什么了，给个kd

Kei wrote:

From my queue, blah blah you know. o3o

[Easy]

• 
  *The slider velocity you used for this difficulty is a bit much. Like you said in the map description this is a relaxing slow song, so you should have used a slow SV as well. SV of 1,0 or 0,90 would have worked. I guess you won't change it now.. but please have it in mind for your next beatmaps. Yeah I'll remember that
  
  *This difficulty is also a bit too difficult, specially at the beginning of the song so this mod will be focused on helping you to make this difficulty easier.

1. 00:12:964 (2) - Avoid placing notes at red ticks. Remove it, these kind of rhythms are for normal diffs. :p k
2. 00:16:214 (1) - Perhaps add a hitfinish due to the change of melody? no, really don't fit
3. 00:43:714 (3) - Not really necessary, I know, but you can move this note where 00:41:214 (2) was.
4. 00:48:214 (1) - Since this is a Easy diff, it is always good to leave a short break after spinning so beginners can recover their hand. To do this try removing this note. I know it is placed to avoid ignoring that white big tick, but it kinda gets overlapped with spinner elements, making it probably hard for beginners to see the approach circle.. I don't know, it's up to you!: =.=
5. 00:50:964 (2) - Sliders at red ticks ;-; please remove this slider and place a note at 00:51:214 instead. Leave that kind of rhythm for your Normal diff. k
6. 00:54:714 (2) - ^ Here my suggestion is replacing this slider with a circle. k
7. 01:03:464 (1,2) - Placing a slider at a red tick after a spinner isn't friendly for beginners. They'll probably rush clicking the slider.. you used some spinners before like 00:44:214 and you skipped the clap-sound with it, so my suggestion is extending this spinner at 01:03:464, make it end at 01:03:714 to make it more easier for beginners. k
8. 01:19:464 (1) - ^ Same. ^
9. 01:30:714 (2) - This is the last slider of this kind i'll point out. Make sure to get rid of these! they're too much for a Easy diff. k
   
   I'll stop here. Please get rid of the rest of hard patterns such as the one mentioned ^ and the others like 02:26:214 (1,2,1). It's too much for an easy. Easy diffs should have long sliders, simple 1/1 rhythm. You know~ changed the similar things but the last part I didn't change much. I think it's already the propper way and you know, beginners also need challenges, right?

[Hard]

• 
  *This difficulty has too many unnecessary jumps such as 00:26:464 (2,3,4,1,2) etc. Once again, it's a relaxing song so you shouldn't do jumps like this if the song doesn't fit with them imo. hmm OK I know, changed some, also kept some which I think would make this fun
  *00:24:714 (2) - Why did you changed the spacing for this kind of sliders? and here you used less spacing for these sliders 02:32:714 (2). And here at 02:36:714 (2) you change again, and this one looks like if it were a 1/1 simple rhythm, players wont expect this and will be probably confused due to this and also due to your incosistent spacing. really a big deal, made the whole diff consistent
  *02:37:589 (4) - Sliders at blue tick like these don't play good, these feel bad to click, you should place circles at blue ticks and preferably not sliders. I know you're following the vocals, but it doesn't feel good to play. :< sorry I won't change the rhythm for the last part, placement stuff is OK to cahnge though
  *02:40:714 (2,3) - This jump isn't necessary nor plays good so consider removing jumps like this one. fixed
  *02:41:464 (4) - Here instead of this, you should tried to replace it with cirlces and add another circle at 02:41:714. Much better imo. no, really, this is just the rhythm in this part
  
  These are *generally* the most important issues of this difficulty. Too many unnecesary jumps for a Hard diff and also for a slow and calm song, inconsistent spacings, sliders at blue/red, forced jumps.. this difficulty needs more work. It could have been more flowy. Please try to improve your diff having in mind what I wrote above ^ This is general so I don't repeat the same stuff too many times.
  ________________________ Thx for pointing out examples, I changed really many of them I think

Normal is the best diff. Flows good, looks good.. but Easy is a bit too hard and [Hard] needs improvements. It should be a bit more easier without so many jumps imo. Now it kinda feels like an Insane diff.. I hope this helps you to improve [Hard]! You need more mods! that's all. Oh~ really glad to hear that

Good luck~

424,164,128214,6,0,P|392:240|328:280,1,160,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
240,280,128964,1,2,0:0:0:0:
172,224,129214,2,0,P|204:148|268:108,1,160,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:

ffstar0716 wrote:

[Easy]
00:16:214 (1) - 第一个节点拉上一格 ._. fixed
00:52:214 (1,2,1) - 不要重叠，easy的话很容易弄乱新手的 比较懒 暂时没动 再有人提出我就换个排版

[Normal]
02:08:214 - 02:23:964 - 的设计非常顺，我喜欢 ^^
02:20:214 (1,2,3) - 这样会比较顺

424,164,128214,6,0,P|392:240|328:280,1,160,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
240,280,128964,1,2,0:0:0:0:
172,224,129214,2,0,P|204:148|268:108,1,160,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:

我觉得已经挺好了=。=
02:24:214 - 从这里开始不太适合用1/4 slider，建议换掉，新手也不太会吧 ._. 不打算换节奏 难度其实还好啦

(1)换成一个 1/2 repeat slider
(2)换成一个 slider 就好

02:25:214 (3,4) - (1)
02:28:214 (1,2) - (2)
02:29:464 (4) - (1)
其他就不提了，只是建议，不过我感觉玩起来怪怪的

[Hard]
02:24:214 - 从这里开始，其实我好奇为什么你要这样map，因为音乐不需要用到1/4 slider的
嘛 因为我听到的就是这样的节奏……
和上一张图比，进步很多！
good luck

• Everything's fine.

1. 00:15:464 (1) - The normal-hitnormal sounds weird on this slider's end - it would be better to keep the soft hitsound.
2. 00:28:214 (1) - 00:44:214 (1) - 01:16:214 (1) - 01:32:214 (1) - Ends too close to the beat after. It would be better to make it end sooner.
3. 00:55:214 (3) - This slider breaks the comboing. The new combo should be on the big white tick, but that's where the slider ends, making it impossible to place a new combo here. Remove the repeat and add a circle on the big white tick, with a new combo. Remember to remove the new combo on 00:56:714 (1) - if you do that. Also, if I may, this slider looks bad because of the self-overlap at the end.
4. 00:57:714 (2) - Same problem. This time, replace it with circle+slider, with a new combo on the slider.
5. 01:04:214 (1) - 01:52:214 (1) - This feels very unnecessary. The spinner before it shares the same problem as the spinners I've pointed out before and I don't think a note here adds anything, honestly. My suggestion is to remove the note and drag the break where it was.
6. 01:27:714 (3) - 01:39:714 (1) - 01:45:714 (2) - 02:11:714 (1) - 02:17:714 (2) - Breaks the comboing again. You'll have to replace it with two circles, though.
7. 01:37:714 (1) - 02:15:714 (3) - Breaks the comboing again. Replace it with circle+slider, with a new combo on the slider.
8. 02:06:214 (1) - This spinner ends too close to the following note, and breaks the comboing. Unfortunately, you can't fix this one without keeping one of these two problems - my suggestion would be to shorten it to make it land one white tick before and add a circle where it was with a new combo.

1. AR5 feels a bit fast for this - I'd suggest to use AR4 instead.
2. This comboing is mostly inconsistent, for the same reasons as in Easy - sliders.
3. 00:15:464 (1) - Same comment as in Easy - the normal-hitnormal sounds weird here. This applies to all other similar patterns in the song.
4. 00:47:964 (3) - 01:03:964 (3) - 01:19:964 (3) - 01:51:964 (3) - This is a no-go for me in a Normal. 1/4 is very confusing, even as kick sliders. I know why you put it here, but I find it unfitting and confusing for the difficulty.
5. 02:24:214 (1) - Starting here, the rhythms become substantially harder, which gives the difficulty a wall-like difficulty curve, which is unfitting. Try to make these rhythms simpler to stay consistent with the rest of the diff.

1. AR8 is too fast and doesn't fit the difficulty curve either, not to mention AR8 OD6 is a poor choice because it makes the map feel unpleasantly easy. Replace it with AR7 at most, though I'd advice AR6.
2. The jumps are too hard for a Hard. And... Are inconsistent in their use and in their spacing.
3. 00:46:214 (1,2,3,4) - Anti-jumps following jumps, huh... That's very confusing - especially for a Hard, I didn't expect this kind of gimmick. It'd be better to give this proper spacing. And you follow right after with 1/4 spaced the same way...
4. 01:00:214 (1) - Confusing. The song doesn't have any note here that stands out, and it's stacked under the previous one - why not start the spinner here ?

Shiro wrote:

As per your request.

Please reply to this mod saying what you didn't fix (and what you did) and why.
Also, if you have any question, feel free to ask me in-game.

General

• Everything's fine.

Easy

1. 00:15:464 (1) - The normal-hitnormal sounds weird on this slider's end - it would be better to keep the soft hitsound. sorry as you can see that I intended to make it a normal sound because I love the slight difference in between.
2. 00:28:214 (1) - 00:44:214 (1) - 01:16:214 (1) - 01:32:214 (1) - Ends too close to the beat after. It would be better to make it end sooner. hmm I think a 1/1-beat gap is somehow enough? Considering the note after the spinner is quite close to the center
3. 00:55:214 (3) - This slider breaks the comboing. The new combo should be on the big white tick, but that's where the slider ends, making it impossible to place a new combo here. Remove the repeat and add a circle on the big white tick, with a new combo. Remember to remove the new combo on 00:56:714 (1) - if you do that. Also, if I may, this slider looks bad because of the self-overlap at the end. I didn't split it up but I fixed the self-overlapping issue
4. 00:57:714 (2) - Same problem. This time, replace it with circle+slider, with a new combo on the slider. sorry to hold different opinions but I hink to absolutely always start a new combo at a big white tick is really NOT that neccessary even this is a Easy diff. also to the below.
5. 01:04:214 (1) - 01:52:214 (1) - This feels very unnecessary. The spinner before it shares the same problem as the spinners I've pointed out before and I don't think a note here adds anything, honestly. My suggestion is to remove the note and drag the break where it was. I knew that a single note here doesn't mean much but in my opinion it makes sense because the ending sound of the spinner is a default clap and I really don't think a clap indicates an end of a part. So I put the note with bass sound at this position to symbolize an end,
6. 01:27:714 (3) - 01:39:714 (1) - 01:45:714 (2) - 02:11:714 (1) - 02:17:714 (2) - Breaks the comboing again. You'll have to replace it with two circles, though.
7. 01:37:714 (1) - 02:15:714 (3) - Breaks the comboing again. Replace it with circle+slider, with a new combo on the slider.
8. 02:06:214 (1) - This spinner ends too close to the following note, and breaks the comboing. Unfortunately, you can't fix this one without keeping one of these two problems - my suggestion would be to shorten it to make it land one white tick before and add a circle where it was with a new combo. I don't think it would be really hard even for beginners to play. the BPM is low thus a 1/1-beat time is quite enough for reaction Imo, also, the note after the spinner is quite centralized.

Normal

1. AR5 feels a bit fast for this - I'd suggest to use AR4 instead. ok
2. This comboing is mostly inconsistent, for the same reasons as in Easy - sliders.
3. 00:15:464 (1) - Same comment as in Easy - the normal-hitnormal sounds weird here. This applies to all other similar patterns in the song. sorry but I love them
4. 00:47:964 (3) - 01:03:964 (3) - 01:19:964 (3) - 01:51:964 (3) - This is a no-go for me in a Normal. 1/4 is very confusing, even as kick sliders. I know why you put it here, but I find it unfitting and confusing for the difficulty. a Normal diff in a mapset with Easy is a stepping stone for beginners to reach Hard diffs. I think they should learn to handle easy short sliders like these. They may break combo at these places for once but will deal them well next time as I suppose.
5. 02:24:214 (1) - Starting here, the rhythms become substantially harder, which gives the difficulty a wall-like difficulty curve, which is unfitting. Try to make these rhythms simpler to stay consistent with the rest of the diff. I knew that it was obviouly harder and how to say, I intended to do so when mapping. It's because I already have a Easy diff in the mapset in which I've given up the particular rhythm at the last part. And now it comes to Normal, I think players should take a step up here. While remembering to make Easy and Normal diffs simple, I always keep in mind that beginners,as who they are, also need challenges on the other hand.

Hard

1. AR8 is too fast and doesn't fit the difficulty curve either, not to mention AR8 OD6 is a poor choice because it makes the map feel unpleasantly easy. Replace it with AR7 at most, though I'd advice AR6. Ok AR7 is acceptable for this slow song
2. The jumps are too hard for a Hard. And... Are inconsistent in their use and in their spacing. In fact this IS a slow song with low BPM, but slows songs don't need jumps? I don't think so. And it is because the BPM is low that the time gap between notes are longer comparing with songs with higher BPM, and players will have more time to move their cursor to reach for the notes.
3. 00:46:214 (1,2,3,4) - Anti-jumps following jumps, huh... That's very confusing - especially for a Hard, I didn't expect this kind of gimmick. It'd be better to give this proper spacing. And you follow right after with 1/4 spaced the same way... I never mean to make this pattern diffulct when mapping this. I actually followed the feeling which the music conveys to me. The music becomse softer and softer so I placed the 4 notes with small distance in between and then the strong beats with claps make me wanna set jumps like what it is.
4. 01:00:214 (1) - Confusing. The song doesn't have any note here that stands out, and it's stacked under the previous one - why not start the spinner here ? Fine, some modders already mentioned about this but I rejected. hmm, seems it's a common sense to remove it, then I removed it.

Hard is... trying too hard or something. It should be simpler - it's just a Hard and the difficulty gap between it and Normal is way too high... Anyway, good luck with this.

mancusojuanmattos wrote:

Hi! I have to start cleaning request from my M4M queue, so why not starting here? xD

[Easy:]

• Settings:
--> Try increasing the Approach Rate by 1 tick, actually is a bit low (AR+1) k

• 00:02:214 (1) - I think a lot of combo spam at the beginning, maybe you can change your comboing placing it every 2 downbeats (Big White Ticks in the timeline). If you follow that, remove this New Combo please rearranged new combo setting through the whole diff
• 00:06:214 (1) - Same here, you should remove this New Combo avoiding that kind of spam
• 00:20:214 (1) - The high pitch is placed on 00:20:964 I think, so in my opinion the slider end should be placed over this time. So, reduce the slider length of 1/2, give it a try at least sorry, but no. I added a slidertick sound there. I think long sliders are prefered in Easy diff.
• 00:24:214 (1) - For the same reason as above, I think you should reduce the Slider length by 1/2 because it follow the instrumental properly, after that add a Note in 00:26:214 also, It's just a 2-beat-long reverse slider, It really did nothing wrong, why bugging it ?
• 00:28:214 (1,1) - I found the note after the spinner really close (in the timeline), I think new player will miss that. In addition, this note is not really ncecessary for this diff, because the vocals start at 00:32:714. So, would be better for new players if you delete the note after the spinner (1) I never really mapped to vocal in this Easy diff. I only followed the really basic beats. And thus I've got no reason to skip a downbeat like that. Also, a gap of 1 beat in a 120-BPM-song between a spinner and the note afterwards is enough. I don't know how's other beginners pulling through the spinners, but I know that I play with mouse and when I was a biginner, I couldn't spin small circle just around the center, instead I spin big circle through the wholes screen. Yeah I often miss notes after spinners at that time because I even can't find my cursor after I spin, but I never cpmplained about that. I knew it was because I'm not skillful and I should practice. You know that, even beginners need challenges, if without, then how could they get improved ?
• 00:32:714 (2,3) - This flow pretty weird, the movement of the mouse becomes weird. I'd try something like this for a better flow/playability

SPOILER

nice idea
• 00:36:214 (1) - I'd remove this New Combo to avoid the Combo spam, anyways is not really necessary imo.
• 00:44:214 (1,1) - The idea is exactly the same as 00:28:214. Remove the Note after the Spinner please no, to all similar ones, for same opinion
• 00:54:214 (1) - As I said before, I'd remove this New Combo
• 01:16:214 (1,1) - Remove the Slider after the Spinner to make the pattern easier for newbies, instead add a Note in 01:20:714 where the vocal starts
• 01:24:214 (1) - Remove this New combo, avoiding the combo spam
• 01:32:214 (1,1) - Meh.. Stuff repeated.. Remove the note after the Spinner you know
• 01:37:714 (1) - And.. Remove this useless combo
• 02:06:214 (1,1) - You know what you have to do. This changes are really necessary imo, think a bit in New players sometime As I mentioned above, this IS actually what I'm thinking of.
• 02:10:214 (1) - Remove New Combo
• 02:18:714 (1) - (^)
• 02:19:214 (2,1) - This pattern flow pretty weird to me, try doing something like this:

SPOILER

fine
• 02:26:214 (1,2) - I don't totally agree with these 3/4 sliders in these difficulties, a 120 BPM is not really slow for a new player, and they are not really familiar with that kind of things. I prefer to follow other things in the music, instead to do that (Same goes to similar parts where you used 3/4 sliders with repetitions). They will get familiar with that after a few trials and find this rhythm insteresting. You think that beginners would ever be so happy and excited for 1/1 beats all the way through ? I don't think so.

Well, the mistakes are pretty similar around the map, you can see that I repeated a lot of things. I think you should change them, especially the notes after the spinner, try to think in New Players when you do these difficulties. Also, the placement of the notes look random sometimes.

[Normal:]

• Settings:
--> For a better difficulty spread, I'd increase the HP Drain Rate and the Overall difficulty by 1 tick (OD, HP+1) Ok =.=

• 00:14:964 (4,1) - This is not really recommended in a Normal diff. After a 1/2 constant pattern, a stack in 1/1 between the difficulties. Would be better if you unstack these objects, I pretty sure that an Average player will click 1/2 before this Slider I just think this is a really perefect fitting place to stack notes and I don't feel like to change it for now
• 00:20:214 (1,2,3) - This pattern doesn't follow the music, I'd try something like this, sounds more suitable with the instrumental:

SPOILER

I know what you mean but I actually never followed the melody in the background until the last part. You should understand what I'm mapping to when you noticed my custom hitsound. So I don't feel like a change here, because in the way as you suggest, the note (3) would land on neither a kick nor a snare.
• 00:43:714 (5) - What about to put this note in x:252 y:112 to make a triangle? I think this make the pattern more enjoyable consideing your opinion I made it even better
• 00:52:964 (2,1) - I think that this stack, after a 1/2 Slider can cause confusion in an average player, as I said you in 00:14:964. Would be better if you unstack these objects Also I think this is really a good sudden-stopping-point, this Normal is not the easiest diff in the mapset, I think this pattern is not meant to be denied
• 01:35:464 (1,2) - I prefer to see this pattern stacked for consistency with 00:31:464 ok, I made some compromize
• 02:16:214 (1,2,3) - Just wondering, what do you not make this pattern fully symetric? Because it looks much better to me. ok, now they're excatly symmetrical and the BATs would be glad
• 02:25:464 (4) - What?? This 1/4 slider doesn't follow anything in the music, really. Try listening the music in 25% playback, sounds much better if you add a single note in 02:25:464 instead I hold my opinion that there ARE two notes (instrumental notes) in the backgound. I think the rhythm in this part is just like what I made in my Hard diff. But I think that's too hard to perform in a Normal diff, so I simplified them like this. If you did think the rhythm of my Hard diff is good then why would you ever bug me with the rhythm in this diff, as they are exactly the same as I suppose. I still want to point out that this is not the easiest diff in the mapset. And also I insist that even beginners need challenges. I accpet that if there would be some newbie players shouting fuck! when he broke his combo at these points, but what I expect more is that there would also be some others who would say wow this is fucking great! when playing through this.
• 02:28:589 (2) - Same goes to this slider, it is bad snapped in the timeline. This slider should start in 02:28:630 (using 1/6 beat snap divisor), but this is a bit complicated to an average player. So, I suggest you to replace that with a single note in 02:28:714
• 02:33:464 (4) - Well, in this case sounds a bit fine the 1/4, but I think that follow better the music a 1/2 Slider
• 02:36:589 (1) - (^)

- In general looks good, but I didn't like the way that you increased the difficult of the map in the last part of the map, it doesn't feel accurate and it feels pretty hard for a Normal diff. due to the constant 1/4 ticks usage. In my personal opinion, you should make the last part of the map more adapted with the whole of the difficulty. I insist my rhythm pattern for the last part. Don't ever think in your way that I map this diff aiming to make it hard. I never did this, I just followed the things I think it's in the music and brought some variety to map and to the players. Even assuming I intended to make it hard at the last part, a diff with a bit more challenge in the last part is really weird and mad ? No, I think it's wide accepted.

[Hard:]

Settings:
--> I agree with Shiro in reducing the Approach Rate by 1 tick du to the slow BPM, it looks like you forget to do that (AR-1) I did -1 at that time. But after other testplays and mods I added it back =.= I wasn't ever against using AR7 in Hard. But I think I'm really kind and gracious to set AR8 for this diff beacuse when there're many circles appearing at the same time, the approaching circles would really make players mad. Players prefer AR8 for this diff really, this is not simply my opinion
--> For a better Spread, increase the HP Drain Rate by 1 Tick (HP+1) k

• 00:37:214 (5) - This Slider looks weird, you can maybe do something like this:

Screenshoot + Code

0,84,37214,2,0,B|59:70|74:24|74:24|118:44|168:9,1,200

I don't really like that way, I made this slider not by mistake. I just want it to be like this and I think this doesn't really bother players when they play, so I don't feel like a change here.
•00:46:214 (1,2,3,4) - Hmm.. This antijump cause confusion in me, maybe it's just me but I'd like to change that I think the music at the part gets softer and softer so I made them closer and closer and finally they're like this =.= I think it's good.

- Here, I have exactly the same problem that I had with your other map. You added a lot of jumps in a music that doesn't deserve that. In addition, you said: ''This song will not have an Insane diff for it's really soft and slow'', so why did you add a lot of jumps in the Hard?? If the song is soft and slow as you said, the diff. should be consistent with the music (i think), a lot of jumps are unnecesary here. An example, these jumps at the start of the map: 00:00:214 (1,2,3,4) - The only section that deserve jumps here and there is the last part (since 02:24:214 to 02:54:964) but the rest should be simplier. Try to check the whole of the map by yourself(as I said you in the other map) and try removing that exaggerated jumps, that doesn't fit with the song. Well, the rhythm is good, so the highest problem in the map are those jumps, so would be better if you fix most of them.
I have to say sorry for my got damned creator's words. Oh tbh I really hate maps full of symmetrical patterns and flow round and round and round and ... they make me fall asleep when playing. And for my diff spread, I made an ordinary Easy (maybe a little difficult Easy) and then also made my Normal a bit harder than average, so I don't think it's unacceptable that I make my Hard also harder than the average to a certain extent. What I wanna say is that the Had in a spread with ENH, like this mapset, is not the same as the Hard diff in a spread with NHI. I think the former one should be harder, After all, it's the hardest diff, while the other one is only filling the gap. BUT ANYWAY, I did shortened many jumps in the map. I think they are mostly well-shaped such as polygon and blanckets and I hope they're easier now while still keeping them with a good look. And that's all I would fix for now, and what I would do just right after posting this is to chaneg my creator's words omg =.=

Well, That's all from me.
In my opinion, this map needs some more work and mods. But don't give up please, the song is really fun to listen
Good Luck!

mancusojuanmattos wrote:

I don't agree with your responses to be sincere, but who I am to say you to make changes.
If you like your map as it is, it's ok but for me it doesn't look good and that's my personal point of view and nobody will change that.
I could response to all of your 'pink' responses but it looks like you know what you are doing, so I can only say you good luck with your project.

1. 01:31:964 (4)- 移到x:296 y:316感觉好看点
2. 01:35:214 (1,2)-这两个好想把它移到中间去啊
3. 02:24:214 (1)- 滑条拆成这样吧 http://puu.sh/31lAw.png
4. 02:40:214 (1)- ^
5. 02:35:964 (4)- 感觉拆了滑条会好一点
6. 02:52:964 (3)- 第二个锚点移到x:368 y:224

1. 00:30:214 (1,2,3)- 这里看着有点奇怪 弄圆一点或者2对齐一点?
2. 00:48:214 (1)- 感觉对齐会好看点
3. 00:55:214 (4)- 第一个锚点移到x:344 y:240
4. 00:58:464 (2)- NC移到这会不会好点?
5. 00:58:714 (3,4,5,6,7,8)- http://puu.sh/3069p.jpg 这样?
6. 01:20:964 (3)- 第三个锚点移到x:424 y:244
7. 01:34:214 (1,2)- 这里对称一点如何
8. 01:34:714 (2)-not snapped
9. 01:35:464 (1,2)- 这里要不要来个跳
10. 01:43:964 (4,1)- 换成这样? http://puu.sh/306Pc.jpg
11. 02:12:964 (2)- 移到x:288 y:96
12. 02:14:964 (2)- 移到x:244 y:288
13. 02:23:214 (3)- 移到x:424 y:204
14. 02:24:214 (1)- 拆成这样 http://puu.sh/3073J.jpg

pachimono wrote:

from queue
[general]
clear
[Easy]
没啥问题_(┐「ε:)_
[Normal]

1. 01:31:964 (4)- 移到x:296 y:316感觉好看点 k
2. 01:35:214 (1,2)-这两个好想把它移到中间去啊 考虑ds
3. 02:24:214 (1)- 滑条拆成这样吧 http://puu.sh/31lAw.png 节奏是对的 但是要考虑排版
4. 02:40:214 (1)- ^
5. 02:35:964 (4)- 感觉拆了滑条会好一点 节奏比较特殊的地方用滑条来简化 毕竟只是Normal
6. 02:52:964 (3)- 第二个锚点移到x:368 y:224 k

[hard]

1. 00:30:214 (1,2,3)- 这里看着有点奇怪 弄圆一点或者2对齐一点? 挺好的
2. 00:48:214 (1)- 感觉对齐会好看点 k
3. 00:55:214 (4)- 第一个锚点移到x:344 y:240 盲目blancket会让flow变差
4. 00:58:464 (2)- NC移到这会不会好点? 不 我是在重低音起NC的 不跟vocal
5. 00:58:714 (3,4,5,6,7,8)- http://puu.sh/3069p.jpg 这样? 无关紧要 我根据这段的音乐比较倾向于下行
6. 01:20:964 (3)- 第三个锚点移到x:424 y:244 k
7. 01:34:214 (1,2)- 这里对称一点如何 无需
8. 01:34:714 (2)-not snapped ！
9. 01:35:464 (1,2)- 这里要不要来个跳 不 节奏趋于平缓
10. 01:43:964 (4,1)- 换成这样? http://puu.sh/306Pc.jpg 不了 排版会很蠢 现在这样前后的等距和blancket都是布置好的
11. 02:12:964 (2)- 移到x:288 y:96 不 我是根据第一个滑条的中点摆的等距
12. 02:14:964 (2)- 移到x:244 y:288
13. 02:23:214 (3)- 移到x:424 y:204 k
14. 02:24:214 (1)- 拆成这样 http://puu.sh/3073J.jpg 不拆 刚起了新节奏的时候要跟玩家适应时间

GL

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76,88,37214,2,0,B|95:82|158:74|156:115|156:115|118:93|160:51|185:38,1,200

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Autumn wrote:

M4M here

[Generel]
找个萌一点的BG ._.
帅哥啦萌妹子啦或者风景图都行,二次元三次元倒可以随意

[Hard]
作为Hard跳得还不够欢.以下是一些改进跳跃的建议(只是建议 你感受一下就行 233 呃大部分的地方我都只感受了一下…不敢再做更难了 没名气的mapper还是先老老实实的 现在都已经被吐槽成狗了

00:03:214 (1,2,3,4) - 把23对调一下跳起来比较有张弛感(注意音效,下同

00:10:214 (1,2,3,4) - 对调一下23
00:11:214 (1,2,3,4) - 对调一下14

00:14:214 (1,2,3,4) - 对调一下23
00:22:214 (1,2,3,4) - 对调一下23,再对调一下00:23:214 (1) 和3,最后再对调一下00:23:214 (1) 和4.
00:58:214 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 把56对调,78对调

00:40:964 (3) - 试试

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(我看了下前面有人说AR7,我觉得不科学啊.遮挡这么多,全民自虐的时代能读好AR7的玩家其实并不多.
个人支持AR8.或者你再多放点遮挡就没人敢说用AR7了 233
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00:37:214 (5) - 不好看嘛,试试这个

76,88,37214,2,0,B|95:82|158:74|156:115|156:115|118:93|160:51|185:38,1,200

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其实我觉得还不如做成00:39:214 (3) - 这样 嗯没错

00:51:214 (5) - 包好

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00:54:964 (3) - 与00:55:214 (4) 对得不是很齐,考虑把00:54:464 (2) 往下弯一弯摆成这样:

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00:55:214 (4) - 包好. 这个我索性放弃blancket了 对齐更重要些
00:56:714 (2) - 这个滑条头有被前面滑条挡住的危险..可以干脆跳出去 遮的就是它

01:46:214 (1) - 和01:45:964 (4) 对对齐,相应的01:46:714 (2) 可以用1转180复制一下(注意改音效): 嗯好

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02:29:589 (5) - 我觉得这个倒不用弯,还可以顺便包一下02:30:589 (2) 嗯调了一下

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[Normal]
00:40:714 (1) - 不好看,调正一点:

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00:53:714 (1) - 这个遮挡总觉得有可能被挑..不介意的话可以直接ctrl+J放下面:

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最后后半段一些短的4分拍滑条感觉有点难...

[Easy]
00:35:714 (2) - 和00:36:214 (3) - 对齐?
最后Easy最好不要用太多二分拍(红线...虽然我也觉得没什么但被提醒过很多次
貌似是对新手来说很难读.

That's all
Nice map in all. Take my star.
GL

LunarSakuya wrote:

General
looks ok

Easy
00:00:214 (1,2) - try something like this http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/803923 the transition to (3) will look cleaner blanketing the tail of (2) imo
00:50:214 (1) - Delete NC? similar tone as 00:54:214 (3) - , i've noticed more of this throughout your map, main thing is just doublecheck NC consistency
01:04:214 (1) - NC
01:52:214 (1) - NC
01:39:214 (4) - NC, delete NC on next note; referred to 01:22:214 (1) - and similar areas; but again, use the NC pattern that's consistent
01:42:214 (1) - Delete NC, like 01:30:214 (3) - (if this pattern is what you wanna use ofc^) didn't change this because the change would one combo set too long
02:53:214 (2) - why not copy and paste (1) like this http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/804209 little symmetry would be cool imo
Other stuff all fixed

Normal
01:46:214 (3,4,5,6) - hmm you could make a circular pattern? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/804221 fine
02:16:214 (1,2,3) - good opportunity for symmetry here http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/804231 It's already symmetrical, just not centralized :3 fixed
02:25:464 (4) - What's this following? extending this to the white tick will work just fine (actually this would also be more accurate if this was moved down 1 blue tick, assuming you're following the piano, but that'll get the rhythm a bit more complicated that necessary so I suggest not? lol)
02:33:464 (4) - ^, i can hear the other 1/4 sliders have this piano while these spots im mentioning kinda don't unless i'm deaf
02:41:464 (3) - ^
02:49:464 (4) - ^
I make them start on the blue tick and end with a clap and I hope they are really nice now as they are

Hard
00:21:714 (4) - try moving this where 00:22:964 (4) - is http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/804263 (3) will make a nice blanket with the pentagon shape as a bonus (unless you would like the jump ofc) sorry I'd like to keep this, I think the small jump feels good
00:23:214 (1) - Move this a little to the right to match 00:21:964 (5) - , i see no reason not to fine
01:46:214 (1,2,3,4) - good stuff :3
02:12:964 (2) - stack this on the head of (3). Especially with lower SV, this little antijump could make someone slip imo But I think it's really fine to play because when you handle these slow sliders, you only need to move your cursor to the slider tick at mid and mov on to the note between the two sliders, instead of moving to the very end of the first slider. And the note in the gap is just set accordig to this actual movement while playing. So I think they are not neccessary to be changed. Hope you understand
02:14:964 (2) - ^
02:26:964 (4,1) - not really feeling this antijump here, i suggest space these out to follow the sudden change in pitch of the piano (like 02:34:964 (4,1) - )
fixed. It's reasonable

very relaxing and sweet map, tennis4ever <3
several more mods and it should be alright ^^
gl for rank!