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07th Expansion - Happiness of Marionette

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Revy
380 posts
Joined June 2011
Topic Starter
Revy

Dark_Ai wrote:



Hey moe :3!
Only suggestions here ><

Must be fix
It's only what I think

General

  1. seem fine


[Revy]

  1. 00:15:736 (6,7) - 6 1 grid right; 7 2 grid left
  2. 00:17:420 (1,2,3,4,5) - make this part more systematic
  3. 00:19:563 (2) - this slider end point should be 1 grid left to make it same like the slider before
  4. 00:23:237 (3) - try to stack this slider end with 00:20:787 (5)
  5. 00:28:746 (1) - 1 grid left
  6. 00:33:032 (7) - this slider end should be 2 grid left to make it like the slider before
  7. 00:47:420 (7) - make this slider like 00:46:195 (3). Just copy 00:46:195 (3) > ctrl + v > ctrl + h >ctrl + g :D
  8. 00:52:930 (1,2,3,4,5) - make this more systematic
  9. 01:14:052 (5,6) - same like 00:47:420
  10. 01:38:389 (5) - 1 grid down
  11. 01:40:379 (4) - NC ?
  12. 01:59:665 (1) - I dont know if you do it with purpose but there is a spacing error

Yeah that's all
Nice map ~ Good luck with get it ranke C:
All fixed !! :33
Nemis
847 posts
Joined May 2012
Nemis
@Dark_Ai: fixed the stacked slider
http://puu.sh/2l48U
Luvdic
2,113 posts
Joined July 2009
Luvdic
from #modreqs

[General]

00:21:399 - 00:31:042 - that section could be greatly improved by using a hitsound like this one: http://puu.sh/2lbqO and later on could be used to mix up with other hitsounds too Your choice to use it or not. And if you do, and you're not sure how, don't hesitate to ask me for help!

01:49:561 - green section not snapped to timing, and it is important to fix it cause it's kiai

[Revy]

00:09:154 (1,2) - What about changing this: http://puu.sh/2lbe7 to this: http://puu.sh/2lbeQ
00:43:440 (1,2) - Spacing error?
00:47:420 (7) - Object not properly stacked (Not that it matters anyways)

[Nemis]
Nothing to say!
Ok no, maybe not, just wondering if there's any particular reason that you didn't map 01:59:359 - 02:04:256 - I mean, all the other diffs have already mapped it, and you should do the same for the sake of consistency.


[Ran]

00:21:399 (1,2,3) - That sliderslide whistle... is that on purpose? If not... you should probably take it out, doesn't sound that good imo here
02:09:154 (1) -
02:11:603 (3) - Same as above
02:12:828 (4) - Same as above
Revy
380 posts
Joined June 2011
Topic Starter
Revy

ErufenRito wrote:

from #modreqs

[General]

00:21:399 - 00:31:042 - that section could be greatly improved by using a hitsound like this one: http://puu.sh/2lbqO and later on could be used to mix up with other hitsounds too Your choice to use it or not. And if you do, and you're not sure how, don't hesitate to ask me for help! ~ I think i will keep this hitsounds :3

01:49:561 - green section not snapped to timing, and it is important to fix it cause it's kiai ~ Fixed :O

[Revy]

00:09:154 (1,2) - What about changing this: http://puu.sh/2lbe7 to this: http://puu.sh/2lbeQ ~ Puush offline Q.Q will update later
00:43:440 (1,2) - Spacing error? jumpy! idk if it right or not , i shall be grateful if you give me x: y: coordinates :3
00:47:420 (7) - Object not properly stacked (Not that it matters anyways) ~ Fixed ! (Ohgod didn't noticed that D:)
Thankyouu!! :3
Luvdic
2,113 posts
Joined July 2009
Luvdic

Revy wrote:

00:43:440 (1,2) - Spacing error? jumpy! idk if it right or not , i shall be grateful if you give me x: y: coordinates :3

Thankyouu!! :3
I meant the fact that 00:44:052 (2) - has a DS with previous object of 0,90x, and with next object 1,20

You could place that circle in somewhere like X=200 ; Y=214 , so it would have 1,20 DS with previous and next object
Ran
23 posts
Joined January 2012
Ran

Dark_Ai wrote:

[Ran]

  1. 00:03:644 (3) - move this slider 2 grid left + 2 grid up to blanket it better with (2) and I would delete whistle on the begin and adding on the end. It sounds better for me imo　　 fix
  2. 00:40:991 (1,2) - this pattern look horrible :/ make it like this maybe? (would be better imo) 　fix
    SPOILER
  3. 00:56:910 (2) - move this slider to x 476 y 120 　fix
  4. 01:00:583 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - I would end all these slider on the white lines hmm :/　all 1/4 rhythm get bored so no here sorry
thanks Drak_Ai !! :3

http://puu.sh/2lkCV
Ran
23 posts
Joined January 2012
Ran

ErufenRito wrote:

[Ran]

00:21:399 (1,2,3) - That sliderslide whistle... is that on purpose? If not... you should probably take it out, doesn't sound that good imo here
02:09:154 (1) -
02:11:603 (3) - Same as above
02:12:828 (4) - Same as above
my fault xD fixed
thanks ErufenRito!!

http://puu.sh/2lkNH
Revy
380 posts
Joined June 2011
Topic Starter
Revy

ErufenRito wrote:

Revy wrote:

00:43:440 (1,2) - Spacing error? jumpy! idk if it right or not , i shall be grateful if you give me x: y: coordinates :3

Thankyouu!! :3
I meant the fact that 00:44:052 (2) - has a DS with previous object of 0,90x, and with next object 1,20

You could place that circle in somewhere like X=200 ; Y=214 , so it would have 1,20 DS with previous and next object
Fixed!

Updated Ran and Revy Diff \o\
Chewin
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Joined December 2010
Chewin
http://puu.sh/2m0p8
Revy
380 posts
Joined June 2011
Topic Starter
Revy

Chewin wrote:

http://puu.sh/2m0p8
Wooo thankyou chewin \o\
added Chewin's diff!
Mirage
627 posts
Joined May 2011
Mirage
[Ran]
  1. 00:03:644 (3) - This slider repeat feels really good for a whistle
  2. 00:16:501 (1) - Pls blanket with next slider
  3. 00:39:767 (4) - Do a better blanket
  4. 00:40:991 (1) - Stack under the previous (3)
  5. 00:56:910 (2) - Better blanket pls
  6. 01:38:542 (4) - If you're using sliders like this, do proper blankets
[Nemis]
  1. Amazing diff omg
[Revy]
  1. 00:03:032 (2) - Metti la NC qua invece che prima. I red tick sono molto bbrutti
  2. 00:04:256 (1) - NC
  3. 00:05:481 (5) - Togli NC
  4. 00:22:624 (1) - ^
  5. 00:53:236 (2) - Omg NC qua xD
  6. 00:56:910 (1) - Togli NC
  7. 01:12:216 (7) - Fallo uguale a quello subito prima
  8. 01:32:420 (3) - La NC va sui main beat, perciò qua
  9. 01:37:318 (3) - ^
  10. 01:39:154 (1) - Togli NC
  11. 01:39:767 (7) - NC e togli quella dopo
  12. 01:42:216 (7) - ^
  13. 01:44:052 (6) - Fallo uguale a quello subito dopo
  14. 01:56:910 (1,2,3) - Questo overlap è brutto, direi di sistemare un po' questo pattern
  15. 02:15:277 (1) - Togli NC
[Chewin]
  1. 01:49:561 - snap to 01:49:563
  2. 00:18:338 (6) - Visto che tutta la parte iniziale ha un flow con movimenti a cerchio, direi di fare reverse qua
  3. 00:43:440 (1,1,1,1,1) - Wat huehue
  4. 01:13:440 (3,1) - Si gioca molto male questo, io direi di togliere il reverse e far iniziare lo slider kick sul white tick. Ah si, e suona molto meglio così http://puu.sh/2q3Qc
  5. 01:19:563 (1) - Stesso spacing dello stream pls ._. Non vedo anche il motivo della combo singolare; toglierei
  6. 01:41:603 (3) - Quanto detto prima, flowa molto meglio in reverse
  7. 01:52:624 (3) - Blanket plz
  8. 01:53:237 (5) - Terzo puntino slider 1 grid down plz
  9. 02:13:440 (3) - Blanket? O:
  10. Pro diff , umad?
Last edited by Mirage , edited 1 time in total.
Frostmourne
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Frostmourne

Maddy wrote:

[COLOR = # 0080BF] [SIZE = 150] [ران] [/ SIZE] [/ COLOR]
[LIST] [*] 00:03:644 (3) - وهذا تكرار التمرير الجيد حقا لصافرة
[*] 00:16:501 (1) - الثابتة والمتنقلة مع بطانية التمرير المقبل
[*] 00:39:767 (4) - هل أفضل بطانية
[*] 00:40:991 (1) - في إطار المكدس السابق (3)
[*] 00:56:910 (2) - أفضل بطانية الثابتة والمتنقلة
[*] 01:38:542 (4) - إذا كنت تستخدم مثل هذه المنزلقات، قم البطانيات المناسبة [/ قائمة]

[COLOR = # 0080BF] [SIZE = 150] [Nemis] [/ SIZE] [/ COLOR]
[LIST] [*] مذهلة فرق OMG [/ قائمة]

[COLOR = # 0080BF] [SIZE = 150] [Revy] [/ SIZE] [/ COLOR]
[LIST] [*] 00:03:032 (2) - ضع لا غنى عنه NC بدلا تشي الوجاهة. وVERY الأحمر سونو bbrutti القراد
[*] 00:04:256 (1) - NC
[*] 00:05:481 (5) - إزالة NC
[*] 00:22:624 (1) - ^
[*] 00:53:236 (2) - OMG CN غنى عنه الانجاز
[*] 00:56:910 (1) - إزالة NC
[*] 01:12:216 (7) - أن تفعل الشيء نفسه ل ما الوجاهة فورا
[*] 01:32:420 (3) - لا CN فا فوز الرئيسي سوي، وبالتالي غنى عنه
[*] 01:37:318 (3) - ^
[*] 01:39:154 (1) - إزالة NC
[*] 01:39:767 (7) - NC ه إزالة أنه بعد
[*] 01:42:216 (7) - ^
[*] 01:44:052 (6) - أن تفعل الشيء نفسه ل فور
[*] 01:56:910 (1،2،3) - التداخل هذا هو قبيح، وأود أن أقول هذا الإصلاح ونمط دي الامم المتحدة بو '
[*] 02:15:277 (1) - إزالة NC [/ قائمة]

[COLOR = # 0080BF] [SIZE = 150] [Chewin] [/ SIZE] [/ COLOR]
[LIST] [*] 01:49:561 - 01:49:563 المفاجئة ل

[*] 00:18:338 (6) - لا كلها الأفق تشي الأولي تدفق جانب واحد للأمم المتحدة هكتار يخدع حركات ل دائرة، يقول عكس أجرة دي غنى عنه
[*] 00:43:440 (1،1،1،1،1) - وات Huehue
[*] 01:13:440 (3،1) - ذكر سي تلعب VERY هذا، أود أن أقول دي عكس ايل إزالة ه حتى لو بداية المنزلق ركلة سول علامة بيضاء. آه الاشتراكية، يبدو VERY ه ميجليو كوزي http://puu.sh/2q3Qc
[*] 01:19:563 (1) -. الثابتة والمتنقلة نفس تيار تباعد ديلو _. أنا أيضا غير ايل السبب ديلا التحرير والسرد toglierei المفرد
[*] 01:41:603 (3) - كما قال الوجاهة، flowa ميجليو VERY في الاتجاه المعاكس
[*] 01:52:624 (3) - غطاء بلز
[*] 01:53:237 (5) - النقطة الثالثة المنزلق إلى أسفل الشبكة 1 بلز
[*] 02:13:440 (3) - بطانيات؟ O:
[*] فرق برو، UMAD؟ [/ قائمة]
LOOOOOOLLL
Revy
380 posts
Joined June 2011
Topic Starter
Revy

Maddy wrote:

[COLOR = # 0080BF] [SIZE = 150] [ران] [/ SIZE] [/ COLOR]
[LIST] [*] 00:03:644 (3) - وهذا تكرار التمرير الجيد حقا لصافرة
[*] 00:16:501 (1) - الثابتة والمتنقلة مع بطانية التمرير المقبل
[*] 00:39:767 (4) - هل أفضل بطانية
[*] 00:40:991 (1) - في إطار المكدس السابق (3)
[*] 00:56:910 (2) - أفضل بطانية الثابتة والمتنقلة
[*] 01:38:542 (4) - إذا كنت تستخدم مثل هذه المنزلقات، قم البطانيات المناسبة [/ قائمة]

[COLOR = # 0080BF] [SIZE = 150] [Nemis] [/ SIZE] [/ COLOR]
[LIST] [*] مذهلة فرق OMG [/ قائمة]

[COLOR = # 0080BF] [SIZE = 150] [Revy] [/ SIZE] [/ COLOR]
[LIST] [*] 00:03:032 (2) - ضع لا غنى عنه NC بدلا تشي الوجاهة. وVERY الأحمر سونو bbrutti القراد
[*] 00:04:256 (1) - NC
[*] 00:05:481 (5) - إزالة NC
[*] 00:22:624 (1) - ^
[*] 00:53:236 (2) - OMG CN غنى عنه الانجاز
[*] 00:56:910 (1) - إزالة NC
[*] 01:12:216 (7) - أن تفعل الشيء نفسه ل ما الوجاهة فورا
[*] 01:32:420 (3) - لا CN فا فوز الرئيسي سوي، وبالتالي غنى عنه
[*] 01:37:318 (3) - ^
[*] 01:39:154 (1) - إزالة NC
[*] 01:39:767 (7) - NC ه إزالة أنه بعد
[*] 01:42:216 (7) - ^
[*] 01:44:052 (6) - أن تفعل الشيء نفسه ل فور
[*] 01:56:910 (1،2،3) - التداخل هذا هو قبيح، وأود أن أقول هذا الإصلاح ونمط دي الامم المتحدة بو '
[*] 02:15:277 (1) - إزالة NC [/ قائمة]

[COLOR = # 0080BF] [SIZE = 150] [Chewin] [/ SIZE] [/ COLOR]
[LIST] [*] 01:49:561 - 01:49:563 المفاجئة ل

[*] 00:18:338 (6) - لا كلها الأفق تشي الأولي تدفق جانب واحد للأمم المتحدة هكتار يخدع حركات ل دائرة، يقول عكس أجرة دي غنى عنه
[*] 00:43:440 (1،1،1،1،1) - وات Huehue
[*] 01:13:440 (3،1) - ذكر سي تلعب VERY هذا، أود أن أقول دي عكس ايل إزالة ه حتى لو بداية المنزلق ركلة سول علامة بيضاء. آه الاشتراكية، يبدو VERY ه ميجليو كوزي http://puu.sh/2q3Qc
[*] 01:19:563 (1) -. الثابتة والمتنقلة نفس تيار تباعد ديلو _. أنا أيضا غير ايل السبب ديلا التحرير والسرد toglierei المفرد
[*] 01:41:603 (3) - كما قال الوجاهة، flowa ميجليو VERY في الاتجاه المعاكس
[*] 01:52:624 (3) - غطاء بلز
[*] 01:53:237 (5) - النقطة الثالثة المنزلق إلى أسفل الشبكة 1 بلز
[*] 02:13:440 (3) - بطانيات؟ O:
[*] فرق برو، UMAD؟ [/ قائمة]


ANYWAY ALL FIXED , THANKYOU MADDYMADDY UMADDY <3
Mikkuri
823 posts
Joined April 2010
Mikkuri
~random from #modreqs~ :D
*hitsound mod only, you can ignore this mod if useless*

[General]
take a look in Chewin's diff. Inconsistency combo colour, preview time, letterbox in breaks & unresnapped kiai time.
please end at the same place in all diff.

[Ran]
  1. 00:02:420 (2) - swap whistle tail to head
  2. 00:03:644 (3) - add whistle head
  3. 00:21:399 (1) - remove whistle tail
  4. 00:22:624 (2) - ^
  5. 00:23:848 (3) - ^
  6. 00:39:767 (4) - change finish to whistle at head
  7. 00:40:991 (1) - add finish head
  8. 00:56:910 (2) - remove whistle head
  9. 00:59:359 (5) - add clap tail
  10. 01:41:603 (3) - add whistle head
  11. 01:46:501 (3) - swap whistle tail to head
  12. 01:47:726 (4) - add whistle
  13. 01:59:359 (1) - add finish head
  14. 02:03:032 (4) - remove finish head & change clap to whistle at tail
  15. 02:07:930 (4) - remove finish head
  16. 02:12:828 (4) - remove whistle tail
  17. 02:17:726 (4) - add clap tail
[Nemis]
  1. 00:30:583 (5) - remove clap tail
  2. 00:34:869 (3) - add clap tail
  3. 01:11:604 (3) - ^
  4. 01:14:053 (3) - ^
  5. 01:16:502 (3) - ^
  6. 01:31:195 (2) - remove clap head
[Revy]
hard to mod hitsound
  1. 01:42:216 (6) - add finish head
  2. 01:47:114 (1) - ^
  3. 01:49:563 (1) - add finish
  4. 01:58:134 (5) - add clap at reverse
  5. 02:07:930 (6) - change finish to clap at reverse
[Chewin]
add normal-sampleset in all kiai time like 2nd kiai please
  1. 00:27:522 (3) - add normal-sampleset tail
  2. 00:42:216 (4) - add normal-sampleset at reverse
  3. 00:44:665 (1) - add normal-sampleset at tail
  4. 00:47:114 (1) - ^
  5. 00:49:869 (2) - add normal-sampleset
  6. 00:52:012 (4) - add normal-sampleset at tail
  7. 00:54:461 (3) - add normal-sampleset at reverse
  8. 00:55:685 (1) - change finish to normal-sampleset at head
  9. 00:59:359 (1) - add normal-sampleset tail
  10. 01:14:665 (2) - add clap head
  11. 01:16:501 (4) - add normal-sampleset tail
  12. 01:18:950 (1) - change whistle to normal-sampleset
  13. 01:19:256 (5) - add normal-sampleset
  14. 01:19:563 (1) - add clap head
  15. 01:23:848 (3) - add normal-sampleset tail
  16. 01:26:297 (1) - ^
  17. 01:40:991 (1) - add clap drum-sampleset head & tail
  18. 01:42:216 (1) - change soft-sampleset to drum-sampleset at head
  19. 02:00:583 (1,2) - add normal-sampleset
  20. 02:01:808 (1) - change whistle to normal-sampleset at head
  21. 02:09:154 (1) - change whistle to normal-sampleset
  22. 02:15:277 (3) - add normal-sampleset tail
It's gonna be good if all diff add hitsound like Chewin's diff :D
Revy
380 posts
Joined June 2011
Topic Starter
Revy
All fixed ! thankyou Mickey! :3
Chewin
osu! Alumni
4,082 posts
Joined December 2010
Chewin
Oh, very helpful mods, Maddy and Mickey.
Thank you very much :3 Fixed almost everything:

SPOILER
osu file format v12

[General]
AudioFilename: happiness of marionette.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 31195
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0

[Editor]
Bookmarks: 21399
DistanceSpacing: 1.5
BeatDivisor: 8
GridSize: 4

[Metadata]
Title:Happiness of Marionette
TitleUnicode:Happiness of Marionette
Artist:07th Expansion
ArtistUnicode:07th Expansion
Creator:Revy
Version:Chewin
Source:Umineko no Naku Koro ni
Tags:wtc when they cry nemis dai ran chewin
BeatmapID:224432
BeatmapSetID:80705

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:7
CircleSize:4
OverallDifficulty:7
ApproachRate:9
SliderMultiplier:2.6
SliderTickRate:2

[Events]
//Background and Video events
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//Break Periods
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//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
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//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples
//Background Colour Transformations
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452,172,104665,6,0,P|376:140|280:208,1,195,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
312,288,105277,2,0,P|388:320|484:252,1,195,2|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
452,172,105889,6,0,P|456:136|464:88,2,65,0|0|0,1:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
356,200,106348,1,0,0:0:0:0:
312,288,106501,2,0,P|308:324|300:372,2,65,0|0|0,1:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
356,200,106961,1,0,0:0:0:0:
264,164,107114,6,0,P|192:200|88:144,1,195,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
180,96,107726,2,0,L|184:308,1,195,2|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,108338,12,4,108950,0:0:0:0:
68,236,109563,6,0,L|52:308,1,65,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
136,352,109869,2,0,L|151:289,1,65,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
248,284,110176,2,0,P|312:252|384:288,2,130,2|0|0,0:0|0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
436,332,111094,1,0,1:0:0:0:
496,148,111400,2,0,P|436:160|368:120,1,130,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
332,44,111859,1,0,0:0:0:0:
236,68,112012,6,0,L|96:92,1,130,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
48,168,112471,1,0,0:0:0:0:
24,264,112624,2,0,P|88:260|136:204,1,130,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
224,180,113084,1,0,0:0:0:0:
312,220,113237,2,0,P|376:196|440:224,1,130,0|0,1:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
376,296,113696,1,0,0:0:0:0:
280,308,113849,2,0,P|236:272|232:196,1,130,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
208,232,114461,6,0,L|224:88,1,130,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
292,36,114920,1,0,0:0:0:0:
348,116,115073,2,0,P|424:96|488:136,1,130,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
376,296,115686,2,0,L|384:352,2,32.5,0|0|0,1:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
292,244,115992,2,0,L|300:192,2,32.5,0|0|0,1:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
200,280,116298,2,0,P|136:260|64:288,1,130,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
136,356,116757,1,0,0:0:0:0:
200,280,116910,6,0,L|184:128,1,130,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
148,60,117369,1,0,0:0:0:0:
244,64,117522,2,0,P|304:44|388:64,1,130,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
452,232,118134,6,0,L|468:280,4,32.5,0|0|0|0|0,1:0|0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
336,204,118594,1,0,0:0:0:0:
272,304,118747,2,0,L|252:340,4,32.5,8|0|0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
392,124,119359,6,0,P|304:112|260:140,1,130,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
336,204,119818,1,0,0:0:0:0:
432,216,119971,2,0,P|472:184|480:104,1,130,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
296,56,120583,5,0,1:0:0:0:
288,64,120889,1,0,1:0:0:0:
280,72,121195,2,0,P|204:120|96:80,1,195,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
36,160,121808,6,0,L|48:312,1,130,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
140,268,122267,1,0,0:0:0:0:
212,336,122420,2,0,P|264:320|356:348,1,130,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
448,156,123032,6,2,L|464:112,6,32.5
368,264,123644,2,2,L|376:300,6,32.5
296,148,124256,6,0,L|156:196,1,130,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
92,136,124716,1,0,0:0:0:0:
56,228,124869,2,0,P|40:292|72:368,1,130,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
252,324,125481,5,0,1:0:0:0:
344,356,125634,1,0,0:0:0:0:
408,284,125787,1,0,1:0:0:0:
436,92,126093,2,0,L|284:68,1,130,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
116,80,126705,6,0,P|128:156|112:220,1,130,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
44,272,127165,1,0,0:0:0:0:
136,308,127318,2,0,L|292:336,1,130,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
452,272,127930,6,0,P|448:300|464:356,2,65,0|0|0,1:0|0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
424,180,128389,1,0,0:0:0:0:
368,100,128542,2,2,L|380:48,6,32.5,8|0|0|0|0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
284,148,129154,5,0,1:0:0:0:
280,344,129460,1,0,0:0:0:0:
92,292,129767,2,0,P|100:224|84:156,1,130,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
120,72,130226,1,0,0:0:0:0:
216,76,130379,2,0,P|296:52|360:84,1,130,0|0,1:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
452,228,130991,2,0,P|388:248|316:204,1,130,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
148,160,131603,5,0,1:0:0:0:
300,36,131909,1,0,0:0:0:0:
224,216,132216,2,0,P|164:256|88:232,1,130,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
148,160,132675,1,0,0:0:0:0:
236,120,132828,6,0,P|280:132|304:164,1,65,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
424,204,133134,2,0,L|440:128,1,65,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
444,300,133440,2,0,P|380:296|336:236,1,130,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
308,60,134052,6,0,P|256:28|168:60,1,130,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
36,156,134665,2,0,P|132:200|220:136,1,195,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
120,104,135277,2,0,L|112:260,1,130,0|0,1:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
228,76,135889,2,0,L|216:288,1,195,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
308,304,136501,6,0,P|372:292|444:340,2,130,0|0|8,1:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
120,244,137420,1,0,0:0:0:0:
32,288,137573,1,0,0:0:0:0:
28,192,137726,6,0,L|20:120,2,65,0|0|0,1:0|0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
212,128,138338,2,0,P|280:168|432:88,1,260,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
Revy
380 posts
Joined June 2011
Topic Starter
Revy
updated :3
Ran
23 posts
Joined January 2012
Ran
@Maddy and 0OoMickeyoO0
all fixed thanks!!

http://puu.sh/2rcLi
Revy
380 posts
Joined June 2011
Topic Starter
Revy
updated!! :3
XinCrin
2,846 posts
Joined January 2012
XinCrin
Hi Revy !

[Ran]

  1. 00:01:807 (1) In my opinion this circle sounds fine with a Whistle. Add it
  2. 00:32:420 (2,3) This slider does not flow very well for me. Could you change for two circles ? , as shown in the picture?
    SPOILER
  3. 01:00:583 (1) Put a whistle in beginning of the slider. Sounds great, also you don't have hitsounds
    patterns. This will not affect anything
  4. 01:09:154 (2) Place a straight slider, after putting only circular sliders feel a little strange. Consider making the slider, circular too
    SPOILER
  5. 01:17:726 (1) Put a Finish in this spinner , sounds really fine
  6. 01:29:971 (1) Finish at the beginning of the slider. only suggestion
  7. 02:05:481 (2) Move this slider 1 grid to the right to align properly with (1)
[Nemis]

  1. 00:05:481 (3) In my opinion this slider flows better moving it to x:244 y:336 , try it please
  2. 00:30:583 (5) The clap of the end of slider sounds very bad for me. Could you remove it? . Also this clap not follows your hitsounds patterns
  3. 02:07:929 (3) This slider flows better with CTRL + G. Also a jump at the last moment, it feels a bit strange to me
  4. 00:20:175 (3) Move this slider 1 grid down to make a perfect blanket with (4)
  5. 01:31:195 (2) I feel this clap of the beginning of the sliders totally unnecessary . Maybe you should remove it
[Revy]

  1. 00:01:807 (1) I would like you to put a whistle in this circle. Sounds good in my opinion and follows the music too
  2. 00:11:603 (1) ^
  3. 00:48:950 (2) You could increase the spacing to make a jump more fun and better blanket too. It flows better in my opinion
    SPOILER
  4. 00:52:930 (1) This New Combo is necessary? . You should remove it
  5. 01:32:114 (1,2) ^
  6. 02:17:573 (4) I would like you to delete this circle, is totally unnecessary. Because not follow the music and play it feels rather uncomfortable for me
[Chewin]

  1. Nothing to say . .
Good Luck Revy and Star !
Revy
380 posts
Joined June 2011
Topic Starter
Revy

XinCrin wrote:

Hi Revy !


[Revy]

  1. 00:01:807 (1) I would like you to put a whistle in this circle. Sounds good in my opinion and follows the music too
  2. 00:11:603 (1) ^
  3. 00:48:950 (2) You could increase the spacing to make a jump more fun and better blanket too. It flows better in my opinion
    SPOILER
  4. 00:52:930 (1) This New Combo is necessary? . You should remove it
  5. 01:32:114 (1,2) ^
  6. 02:17:573 (4) I would like you to delete this circle, is totally unnecessary. Because not follow the music and play it feels rather uncomfortable for me


Good Luck Revy and Star !
Xin <3 All fixed thank you!! <3
Ran
23 posts
Joined January 2012
Ran

XinCrin wrote:

Hi Revy !

[Ran]

  1. 00:01:807 (1) In my opinion this circle sounds fine with a Whistle. Add it
  2. 00:32:420 (2,3) This slider does not flow very well for me. Could you change for two circles ? , as shown in the picture?
    SPOILER
  3. 01:00:583 (1) Put a whistle in beginning of the slider. Sounds great, also you don't have hitsounds
    patterns. This will not affect anything
  4. 01:09:154 (2) Place a straight slider, after putting only circular sliders feel a little strange. Consider making the slider, circular too
    SPOILER
  5. 01:17:726 (1) Put a Finish in this spinner , sounds really fine
  6. 01:29:971 (1) Finish at the beginning of the slider. only suggestion
  7. 02:05:481 (2) Move this slider 1 grid to the right to align properly with (1)
all fixed!!thank you XinCrin:3

http://puu.sh/2ujeA
Revy
380 posts
Joined June 2011
Topic Starter
Revy
Updated !! :3
MiLu
426 posts
Joined March 2010
MiLu
oh this map has enough modding and star -3-
sorry nothing to suggestion... ( / ´◡`)/~~☆
go go rank!!
Revy
380 posts
Joined June 2011
Topic Starter
Revy

MiLu wrote:

oh this map has enough modding and star -3-
sorry nothing to suggestion... ( / ´◡`)/~~☆
go go rank!!
♥
Nemis
847 posts
Joined May 2012
Nemis
@Mickey: fixed some
@Xin: fixed all
@Maddy: thanks ily

http://puu.sh/2wjKx
Revy
380 posts
Joined June 2011
Topic Starter
Revy
updated :3
Chewin
osu! Alumni
4,082 posts
Joined December 2010
Chewin
dai che cazzus non farla morire D:
Revy
380 posts
Joined June 2011
Topic Starter
Revy

Chewin wrote:

dai che cazzus non farla morire D:
nessuno vuole moddarla perchè son tutti lazy c_c
ho chiesto a xxheroxx un recheck e non risponde da ben 3 settimane anche mandando un forum PM ._.
Louis Cyphre
2,684 posts
Joined October 2009
Louis Cyphre
IRC modded.


SPOILER
21:21 Revy: IRC mod?
21:23 Louis Cyphre: you have guest difficulties
21:23 Revy: yes
21:23 Louis Cyphre: how shall we do IRC?
21:23 Revy: Just make only my diff
21:23 Revy: maybe the others you can post on forum
21:23 *Louis Cyphre is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/232349 07th Expansion - Happiness of Marionette [Revy]]
21:24 Louis Cyphre: why don't you use 1366 x 1024 instead of 1024 x 768?
21:24 Revy: idk , people suggested me 1024x768
21:24 Revy: so i putted that
21:25 Louis Cyphre: best one is 1366 x 768, it is also written in ranking criteria
21:26 Revy: the problem is to get a decent bg that fits with the song
21:26 Louis Cyphre: frederica bernkastel
21:26 Louis Cyphre: i guess it's her name
21:26 Revy: yes she is
21:27 Louis Cyphre: i got good one with good resolutiona
21:27 Revy: http://hellpapers.com/wallpapers/502/13 ... %20bow.jpg
21:27 Revy: http://hellpapers.com/wallpapers/502/13 ... %20bow.jpg
21:27 Louis Cyphre: http://konachan.com/sample/c3bba9851f7a ... sample.jpg
21:27 Revy: let me see that
21:28 Revy: ok fine i use that
21:28 Louis Cyphre: your one kinda does not fit with the song
21:28 Revy: lol
21:28 Louis Cyphre: good?
21:28 Revy: yes
21:28 Louis Cyphre: i'll adjust it for you
21:28 Louis Cyphre: wait
21:28 Revy: okay
21:32 Louis Cyphre: http://puu.sh/2DJgq.jpg are you okay with this?
21:32 Louis Cyphre: it's not a bg, it's just a screenshot
21:32 Revy: yes
21:32 Revy: yeah noticed
21:32 Revy: xD
21:34 Louis Cyphre: xD
21:34 Louis Cyphre: http://puu.sh/2DJm5.png
21:34 Louis Cyphre: here is it
21:34 Revy: thankyou , i put it immediately
21:34 Revy: :D
21:35 Louis Cyphre: about colors
21:36 Louis Cyphre: you have white color
21:36 Louis Cyphre: which is obviously not recomended
21:36 Louis Cyphre: how about this? http://puu.sh/2DJo5.png
21:37 Revy: obviously its better
21:37 Louis Cyphre: really? :o
21:37 Revy: yes
21:37 Revy: xD
21:37 Revy: give me the code of the colours , i will change it
21:37 Revy: :D
21:37 Louis Cyphre: ok sec
21:38 Louis Cyphre: Combo1 : 0,128,255
21:38 Louis Cyphre: damn
21:38 Louis Cyphre: wait
21:38 Revy: okay
21:38 Louis Cyphre: http://puu.sh/2DJu5.txt
21:39 Revy: Done :D
21:40 Louis Cyphre: your song starts ar 00:01:807, which is really early, and your audio lead-in is set on zero
21:40 Louis Cyphre: so about 1 second of audio lead-in would be great
21:40 Revy: ok , i set 1 then
21:41 Louis Cyphre: btw
21:41 Louis Cyphre: Letterbox during breaks
21:41 Louis Cyphre: are disabled on Chewin's difficulty
21:41 Revy: oh
21:42 Revy: i active it then
21:42 Louis Cyphre: while other difficulties have them
21:42 Louis Cyphre: yea
21:42 Revy: done
21:42 Revy: xd
21:42 Revy: xD*
21:43 Revy: brb
21:43 Louis Cyphre: were you going to make a star pattern?
21:44 Louis Cyphre: ok, write me 3 times in a row and i'll come back too
21:45 Revy: yes 2 minutes and i will come back , my mom needs my help for washing windows
21:45 Louis Cyphre: ~
21:49 Revy: im
21:49 Revy: back
21:49 Revy: xD
21:49 Louis Cyphre: okay
21:50 Louis Cyphre: were you going to make a star pattern?
21:50 Louis Cyphre: 00:17:420 (1,2,3,4,5) -
21:50 Louis Cyphre: here
21:50 Revy: maybe
21:50 Revy: D:
21:50 Revy: i guess i failed
21:51 Louis Cyphre: i can tell you how to make them easily
21:51 Louis Cyphre: press ctrl+shift+d
21:51 Louis Cyphre: set 5 points
21:52 Louis Cyphre: set distance snap to 2.x
21:52 Louis Cyphre: 2x*
21:53 Louis Cyphre: then just setect whole 5 notes
21:53 Louis Cyphre: and press ctrl+shift+s
21:53 Louis Cyphre: set "Selection Center"
21:53 Louis Cyphre: and increase it
21:53 Louis Cyphre: as much as it is needed
21:54 Revy: wow , i didn't know this method
21:54 Revy: let me adjust patterns
21:54 Revy: :D
21:54 Louis Cyphre: to rotate ctrl+shift+r
21:55 Louis Cyphre: if you can't do, say me what doesn't exactly you can't
21:55 Revy: okay wait
21:55 Louis Cyphre: without "doesn't*"
21:57 Louis Cyphre: tell me, when you will be ready
21:57 Revy: im ready
21:57 Revy: everything is ok
21:57 Revy: :D
21:57 Louis Cyphre: ok
21:58 Louis Cyphre: 00:31:501 (2,3,4) -
21:58 Louis Cyphre: and other such streams
21:58 Louis Cyphre: Do you really like how they are spaced?
21:59 Revy: if i look well
21:59 Revy: not that much
21:59 Louis Cyphre: it would be just awesome
21:59 Louis Cyphre: if you just discrease spacing
21:59 Louis Cyphre: between notes in the streams
22:00 Louis Cyphre: http://puu.sh/2DKbr.jpg
22:00 Louis Cyphre: a simple example
22:00 Revy: maybe i should put 1x on streams?
22:01 Louis Cyphre: s1x?
22:01 Louis Cyphre: 1x?*
22:01 Revy: i mean on triplets
22:01 Louis Cyphre: it's 0,7x on picutre
22:01 Revy: the spacing of triplets
22:01 Louis Cyphre: picture*
22:01 Revy: okay
22:01 Louis Cyphre: ah no
22:01 Louis Cyphre: it's 0,65x
22:02 Louis Cyphre: 1x is also large
22:02 Revy: yeah indeed
22:02 Revy: xD
22:02 Louis Cyphre: just 0,65 in my opinion fit very well
22:02 Louis Cyphre: well, let's leave all those streams upon to you, you will fix them later
22:02 Revy: yeah
22:02 Revy: lets go ahead
22:02 Revy: :D
22:03 Louis Cyphre: 00:52:165 (5) -
22:04 Louis Cyphre: actually triplet is here 00:51:859
22:04 Louis Cyphre: 00:51:859 -
22:04 Louis Cyphre: 00:51:705 - also there are no sounds here
22:05 Louis Cyphre: so i guess you should change rhythm pattern
22:05 Revy: uhm
22:06 Revy: i don't know how to change them
22:06 Louis Cyphre: wait
22:08 Louis Cyphre: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/713894
22:08 Louis Cyphre: look at the rhythm
22:08 Louis Cyphre: white, second blue and white again
22:08 Louis Cyphre: so it's rhythm with 1/4 dublets
22:08 Louis Cyphre: 00:50:175 - white
22:08 Louis Cyphre: 00:50:634 - blue
22:08 Louis Cyphre: 00:50:787 - white again
22:09 Louis Cyphre: if you don't understand, i'll send you code
22:09 Revy: let me adjust wait
22:09 Louis Cyphre: ok
22:11 Revy: done
22:11 Revy: it fits perfectly
22:11 Louis Cyphre: 00:51:399 (3,4) -
22:11 Louis Cyphre: same
22:11 Louis Cyphre: 00:52:930 (1,2,3,4,5) - star pattern, you know very well how to fix this
22:11 Revy: now yes xD
22:11 Revy: let me fix
22:13 Louis Cyphre: 01:09:767 (5) - set last point to (x:300 ; y:64)
22:17 Revy: ok done
22:18 Louis Cyphre: well other things are also streams (triplets)
22:18 Louis Cyphre: and that's it
22:18 Revy: i know how to fix them
22:18 Revy: putting 0.6x and re-make the spacing
22:18 Revy: :D
22:18 Louis Cyphre: so yea, you got some work with your map \:D/
22:19 Louis Cyphre: 0,6 or 0,65?
22:19 Revy: o,65
22:19 Revy: ...
22:19 Revy: 0,65*
22:19 Revy: xD
22:19 Louis Cyphre: do you know how to set 0,65?
22:19 Revy: i forgot it
22:19 Louis Cyphre: XDD
22:19 Louis Cyphre: YOU DON'T KNOW IT!
22:19 *Revy idiots
22:19 Louis Cyphre: man, you make me laugh)
22:19 Revy: Teach me mastah
22:19 Revy: xD
22:20 Revy: xD
22:20 Louis Cyphre: alt+shift
22:20 Louis Cyphre: and use mouse wheel
22:20 Revy: oh
22:20 Revy: nice
22:20 Revy: >D
22:20 Louis Cyphre: jyea
22:20 Louis Cyphre: well
22:21 Louis Cyphre: i think that's it
22:21 Revy: :D
22:21 Revy: thankyou
22:21 Louis Cyphre: you're welcome
Revy
380 posts
Joined June 2011
Topic Starter
Revy
Thankyou for mod Louis!

Updated :3
UnderminE
osu! Alumni
4,011 posts
Joined August 2010
UnderminE
Wanted to say something:

That background is not for this song, if you care about consistency. This song is kind of a theme of "Eva Beatrice". Check another ranked version, the mapper used a picture of Eva-Beatrice as well.
Bernkastel has nothing with this song, the sad theme in pic doesn't even fit ;_; Since this song mostly plays when people find the hidden gold, it is about happiness.
http://www.zerochan.net/Eva-Beatrice

Just ask a graphic designer to resize your pic, like Meikyuu. Visit her thread~
Last edited by UnderminE , edited 1 time in total.
wonders
610 posts
Joined December 2011
wonders
07th Expansion :)
Revy
380 posts
Joined June 2011
Topic Starter
Revy

UnderminE wrote:

Wanted to say something:

That background is not for this song, if you care about consistency. This song is kind of a theme of "Eva Beatrice". Check another ranked version, the mapper used a picture of Eva-Beatrice as well.
Bernkastel has nothing with this song, the sad theme in pic doesn't even fit ;_; Since this song mostly plays when people find the hidden gold, it is about happiness.
http://www.zerochan.net/Eva-Beatrice

Just ask a graphic designer to resize your pic, like Meikyuu. Visit her thread~
I tried to find a decent Beatrice's image that fits with this song but i can't find one ;_;
Nemis
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Nemis

Revy wrote:

UnderminE wrote:

Wanted to say something:

That background is not for this song, if you care about consistency. This song is kind of a theme of "Eva Beatrice". Check another ranked version, the mapper used a picture of Eva-Beatrice as well.
Bernkastel has nothing with this song, the sad theme in pic doesn't even fit ;_; Since this song mostly plays when people find the hidden gold, it is about happiness.
http://www.zerochan.net/Eva-Beatrice

Just ask a graphic designer to resize your pic, like Meikyuu. Visit her thread~
I tried to find a decent Beatrice's image that fits with this song but i can't find one ;_;
Waiiitt I will find one good tomorrow!

EDIT:
1 http://konachan.com/sample/4d0af16436f1 ... sample.jpg
2 http://konachan.com/sample/af21b3acf96b ... sample.jpg (?)
3 http://s4.zerochan.net/Umineko.no.Naku. ... .56705.jpg (just cut a little)
4 http://s4.zerochan.net/Eva-Beatrice.full.493782.jpg
5 http://s4.zerochan.net/Eva-Beatrice.full.322975.jpg
Revy
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Revy
Now its perfect <3 thankyou nemis :3
Revy
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angelfix wrote:

07th Expansion :)
<3333
UnderminE
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Beatrice and Eva Beatrice are not same goddammit ;_;

But well anyways, it's okay if this is the best you can do~ good luck
XinCrin
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it's graveyard :( . Revive it please !
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