KOKIA - Tatta Hitotsu no Omoi · forum

lkx_Shore

Joined January 2010

lkx_Shore 2013-03-30T05:06:59+00:00

[Omoi]
00:22:966 (10) - 改成这样？

01:27:252 (4) - NC
02:01:061 (3) - NC
02:12:252 (1,4) - ctrl+g
02:12:490 (2,4) - ctrl+g
02:12:728 (3,4) - ctrl+g
02:15:823 (1) - x188 y100?

[Other]
没啥好说的了，赶快找泡rank掉比较好(思考
Goodluck

scanter

2,385 posts

Joined July 2012

scanter 2013-03-30T14:07:38+00:00

Hi ~ M4M request ~~sorry about my poor English & mod quality.~~

[General]
Fine

looks good

[Normal]
01:24:871 (1,2) - I think, a little hard to read this. how about this? http://puu.sh/2qELe
01:29:156 (2) - Add finish on slider's end.
01:35:347 (1) - How about this? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/680920 I think, finish sound as more suitable add 1 circle.
02:09:632 (1) - Same opinion. http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/680930
02:38:204 (1) - Add clap on slider's end.
02:22:966 (3,4) - rhythm suggestion. how about this? look at number 2,3 http://puu.sh/2qEZO

[Omoi]
00:51:537 (1) - A little surprise jump. how about reduce distance?
00:52:966 (4) - Ctrl + G? how about makes more dynamic?
01:03:680 (1) - Ctrl + G. a little surprise jump.
01:10:704 (7) - Ctrl + G? moving looks better.
01:21:299 (2) - I don't think looks good at overlap. maybe too hard to read this circle. how about move to different place? like x:128, y:276 or x:156, y:220
01:34:633 (2) - How about this? a little awkward to me. keep drum sound on looks better. http://puu.sh/2qFuq
02:00:109 (1) - A little surprise jump. how about reduce distance?
02:03:204 (3,4) - rhythm suggestion. look at number 3 http://puu.sh/2qFvT
02:40:109 (1) - How about change curve under shape? like this. http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/681035

Good song and nice map ! GL

Frostmourne

osu! Alumni

3,733 posts

Joined November 2009

Frostmourne 2013-04-01T16:38:26+00:00

Recheck

Normal
02:22:490 (2) - clap head
02:38:204 (1) - clap tail

Omoi
00:52:013 (2) - add NC
00:52:490 (3) - ^
to make them consistent with 00:59:156 (1,1,1) -
00:53:680 (x) - this feels really empty, I will add a note here and it follows vocal really nice here, x:422 y:144 would be nice because it isn't that big spacing
02:00:585 (2) - add NC , reason is the same

after doing this, I will bubble

Zero__wind

osu! Alumni

3,314 posts

Joined August 2012

Zero__wind 2013-04-01T16:52:48+00:00

看来要先我一步呀
啊呀呀

qkenan

134 posts

Joined October 2010

Topic Starter

qkenan 2013-04-02T02:37:43+00:00

Frostmourne wrote:
Recheck

Normal
02:22:490 (2) - clap head
02:38:204 (1) - clap tail

Omoi
00:52:013 (2) - add NC
00:52:490 (3) - ^
to make them consistent with 00:59:156 (1,1,1) -
00:53:680 (x) - this feels really empty, I will add a note here and it follows vocal really nice here, x:422 y:144 would be nice because it isn't that big spacing Yep, this sounds much better
02:00:585 (2) - add NC , reason is the same

after doing this, I will bubble

All done