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qkenan

yanlu wrote:

SPOILER
M4M ></ 感覺跟上次看的map進步好多~
[Omoi]
00:21:061 (1) - 這個note斷開2個break感覺沒甚麼意義..試試別的開頭吧o.o? 就这么放也没关系吧……
00:27:728 (3) - 跟2不stack或許比較好 fixed
00:44:395 (6) - 跟5一樣做有弧度的?(雖然知道你是做對稱...可是後面3不太明顯>< fixed
^00:45:347 (3,4) - 而且我覺得這兩個 應該節奏交換一下比較好..(先note再slider~ no change
00:48:204 (2) - slider結束在紅線?(然後看要不要00:48:561 - +note作連打)>< 感觉不大舒服,no change
00:49:395 (1) - spin結束在00:51:061 - ? no change
00:58:442 (4) - 下移2~3格吧 fixed
00:59:156 (1) - stack在00:59:633 (3) - 上 然後5移開點? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/630162 特意摆的梗,no change
01:01:061 (1) - 這樣有點趕...何不結束在01:02:966 - >~< 一点都不赶啊,spinner时间足够转满
01:09:156 (2,4) - 如果完全stack不太好分出是藍線 我觉得大概不会,前面也有过几个蓝线节奏
01:12:966 (3) - 跟5做同種slider? fixed
01:18:204 (1,4) - change nc fixed
01:21:299 (2) - x128/y272 特意的遮挡梗
01:24:276 (4) - x316/y292 或其他的... 觉得还行……
01:24:276 (4) - 左2上1 ???
01:27:252 (4,5,1) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/630167 ? 梗,no change……orz
01:30:823 (3) - x184/y144 稍微修整了这边的排列,fixed
01:32:490 (4,5) - 交換節奏?(note+slider 排列变动会太大,so no change
01:34:633 (2) - 尾巴的點下移幾格 做有點跟3平行? fixed
01:34:990 (3) - 改成藍線note+slider? fixed
01:35:466 (1) - 在sampleset那邊改成soft更適合~ fixed
01:44:871 (1) - finish? 调高了10%,不过感觉区别不大……fixed
01:54:871 (1) - 跟2的snap近些 我觉得差不多……
01:57:728 (5) - 改成slider到01:57:966 - ? 没必要……
01:58:204 (1) - ^(如果前面有改)要延後開始的地方 然後同前面的00:49:395 (1) - 結束在01:59:633 - ? _(:з」∠)_
02:09:871 (1) - o_o結束在02:11:776 - or 02:12:014 - ? Vocal就是结束在这的吧……
02:15:228 (6) - x108/y100? fixed
02:19:514 (2) - 或許轉一點方向><.. fixed
02:31:299 (1) - 改成note+note比較適合>< fixed
02:41:537 (3,4) - 改成slider? 现在这样也不错

[Normal]
00:28:204 (3,1) - 建議不stack? 感觉还成
00:38:204 (3,1) - 00:40:585 (1,3) - 00:43:918 (1) - NC都對調一下~ fixed
00:49:395 (1) - O_O spin好像慢了一點..往前拉到白線?(+finish~ fixed
00:53:442 (1) - 如果要降低難度 這個可以改成不折返的slider :arrow: 现在正好3.24~lol
00:55:347 (3) - nc fixed
00:57:252 (1,2,3) - 如果節奏做跟00:53:442 (1,2,3) - 一貫比較好 no change
01:01:061 (1,1) - clap? fixed
01:07:490 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - 這段是星難度比較高的原因之一~ :arrow: 同上~
01:13:204 (2) - 排的圓弧點好(1跟3也可以近些~) fixed
01:15:823 (3,1) - http://puu.sh/28CsY 這樣呢><? 比较麻烦所以没动……
01:23:918 (5) - 移到220/348?(或其他位置...這裡stack真的不好" fixed
01:25:347 (2,3) - 改成slider? fixed
01:30:109 (2,3) - x.x.... 改了改了……
01:35:347 (1) - soft finish(同前一個難度~) fixed
01:51:418 (2) - normal diff不要出現藍線的比較好吧p_q
01:47:609 (2) - ^
01:55:228 (2) - ^ 低bpm,况且也没几个……不然就太单调了
02:04:871 (1,2) - change nc

第一個kiai後的nc略亂...orz :arrow: 基本是按着歌词来的吧……我都是凭感觉下NC :)
欸~~其實我比較想做個GD lol

這歌真的很好聽>w< :arrow: 是呢~

good luck~

谢谢mod~


Zweib wrote:

SPOILER
Hi~

[Normal]

star difficulty还应该再压低一点,现在是3.24.这难度后面半截(01:47:252 开始)还是不要用slider压蓝线了 :arrow: sr可是我精打细算过的
或者这bpm其实做个easy也挺快的XD
00:28:680 (1,2,3) - 这三个你加了whistle,感觉不错(其实(4)的滑条头也可以加)。那么00:32:014 (2,3,4) - 00:46:776 (2,3,4) - 等这几乐句都对称的,考虑下要不要也加上去 fixed
00:49:395 (1) - 你想跟vocal?效果不好,建议把这个spinner拉到00:52:104
02:09:395 (1) - 拉到02:12:104 …………

pattern我就不怎么挑你啦,反正一般作者也都不会改233.
低难度图怎么好看怎么摆就好
01:15:109 (2) - 这个不太好看 fixed

[Omoi]

感觉音效下的不是很统一,不如就2/4白线whistle为主就好了233。很多3白线的whistle音不是很必要 :arrow: 凭感觉下的orz
00:27:252 (1,2,3) - (1)的尾巴加whistle,(3)的whistle去掉 fixed
01:06:776 (1) - 这里不是whistle而是finish fixed
01:29:633 (4) - ^ fixed
01:27:728 (1) - finish fixed
你很多whistle音效都是直接加在滑条上的,这样其实除了头尾有soft whistle音,滑条上还会有soft sliderwhistle音,一般是不会注意到啦这么小的声音,但不知道会不会被mat/bat挑 :arrow: 音量比较低,大概不要紧吧233
谢谢mod~
yanlu
:o 雖然音量是低的,可是會影響到太鼓遊玩喔!所以還是要set好吧><
不過我忘記說...其實可以再提高一點綠線的聲音..現在真的有點小聲...:3"

Edit: starrr :)
Topic Starter
qkenan

yanlu wrote:

:o 雖然音量是低的,可是會影響到太鼓遊玩喔!所以還是要set好吧><
不過我忘記說...其實可以再提高一點綠線的聲音..現在真的有點小聲...:3"

Edit: starrr :)
1/2以及更长的slider都修正了音效,1/4的就不管了……

谢star~

EDIT:虽然都改好了但是怎么也提交不上啊啊啊
zweiii
[General]
图做的越来越好了
这音乐不错有挺多想表现的地方的 都有点想做GD了。。。

[Normal]

[节奏]
感觉有些地方的快慢节奏的衔接不是很好 我也不太好下手改。
三拍子的那种回滑条 还有连续四分一的节奏 二拍子的回滑条。。。
或许整体缺乏一种统一的规律性

00:49:156 加个note 转盘往后移一拍
01:57:966 (1) - 。。。。。
02:09:156 note
02:09:395 (1) - 开始结束位置?
02:24:871 (2,3,4,1) - 换点别的节奏
02:36:299 (1,2,3,1,2,3) -
[排列]
00:28:204 (3,1) - 对称到右边去好点
00:38:680 (2) - 加弧度
01:47:609 (2) - 加弧度
02:20:109 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - 摆法感觉对应不上音乐 打起来也没什么感觉
我也摆不出太好的 节奏对称你可以考虑对称来摆

[打击音]
00:26:776 (3) - finish
00:30:585 finish
00:42:014 finish
00:45:823 ↑
00:53:442 ↑
00:59:156 (1,2,3,4) - 会不会有点单调 来点变化?
01:06:776 finish
01:16:537 去掉whistle
01:16:776 减点音量
01:17:014 whistle
01:18:204 whistle
01:19:156 ↑
后面的看着改吧。。偷懒

[Omoi]

[节奏]
00:36:776 (1,2,3,4,5) - 变成这样?
SPOILER
或者
00:49:395 (1) - 这个转盘接的有点怪 考虑换成别的节奏不用转盘了? 你前三个带起了节奏这里一下就转盘了不太好
00:55:228 (8) - 移到这里会不会好点 00:55:109 (7,9) - 这两个的组合感觉上是挺好的 刚好这里00:55:347是新的重音起 停顿同处起感觉不错
01:54:752 (1,2) - 改成
SPOILER
或者
感觉第二种接近点你的原意
01:57:966 (1) - 同上
02:02:966 (4) - 去掉? 给你一种节奏的参考
02:09:871 (1) - 这结束在哪里?02:12:014这好点?

[排列]
00:53:442 (1,2) - ctrl+G?
00:54:871 (6,7,8,9,10) - 这样如何?
00:56:299 (1,2,3,4) - 这四个我理解的节奏是 底底大底 放成大概下下上下的感觉会不会好点?大概这样?
01:08:680 (1,2,3,4) - 或许两个一样的pattern?:
01:09:395 (3) - ctrl+G?大概就这感觉 要改的话注意保留这个01:10:585 (8) - 的感觉
弄个反跳或者远端往回走什么的
01:17:252 (4) - 这个强调感觉不够 想办法强调下 我没考虑前后随便摆了个
01:18:918 (4,5,6,7,8) - 锯齿跳不太适合这儿
我理解的5678大概是这感觉 后面我还加成了连打 01:19:990不过这样后面节奏衔接不上
我主要是强调下5678那感觉就没了 您自己想办法搞搞吧
01:27:252 (4,5,1) - 这是不是换个转向好点?(顺逆时针)
4完了5大概到你后面黄色的1那里
02:01:299 (6,7) - ctrl+G?
02:02:490 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - 不妥 不适合这
02:04:871 (1,2,3,4) - 同上面问题 可以想点不同的表现方法
上下上下也比两个stack好点
02:05:823 (1,2,3) - 02:07:728 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 路线有点单调
02:19:871 (3,4,5,6,7) - 不妥!
02:24:395 (4) - ctrl+G再往左边移点?
02:36:776 (5) - ctrl+G?

[打击音]
试试加入drum (还有clap)
00:23:799 whistle?
00:26:776 小点音量的finish?
00:29:633 (1,2,3) - 这三个都同音量的whistle不太好 你可以尝试音量弄点变化
00:39:395 00:41:299这些位置可以试试用drum的音 就是音乐里低音懂的鼓点
00:42:014 (5) - finish?
00:48:680 (3,4,5) - 这三个可以试试懂懂怕 drum drum clap(soft?)
有挺多地方用drum的组合起来感觉不错
00:56:299 (1,2,3,4) - 懂懂怕懂?
00:59:156 (1,3,5,6) - 懂大 懂懂大?
01:08:680 01:09:395 finish
01:18:323 (2) - 去掉whistle
01:20:466 去掉whistle
01:28:680 (2,3,4) - 打击音改为01:28:680 01:29:156 whistle 01:29:633 finish
01:29:990 (5) - 音效略突出 小点声
01:30:585 (2,3,4,5) - 懂懂大懂
01:31:537 drum finish
01:32:014 去掉音效
01:32:490 whiste 该强调的地方没音效?
01:35:347 finish
02:13:204 (5,6) - 去掉 whistle
02:14:871 这个音效不太好 和前后衔接不好 具体没想到怎么改
02:15:347 finish
02:19:156 强调下
02:25:109去掉
02:38:204 finish
HabiHolic
Hello~ From My Queues~



[Normal]

00:49:156 (1) - This part .. I think the spinners do not get suitable
00:59:156 (1) - Remove Nc?
01:09:871 (1) - ^
01:16:061 (4) - Normal less difficulty in overlapping circles I do not want to recommend something ...
01:47:609 (2) - Rhythm is difficult for beginners I guess you can not do.
01:51:418 (2) - ^
02:12:490 (1) - Elsewhere Sort
02:33:204 (1) - Remove Nc
02:35:347 (4) - NC

[Omoi]
00:49:395 (1) - Spinner 00:51:061 - Here to the end
01:54:871 (1) - Distance check

Nice Dff Map~

Good Luck~!
KaNeyome
新人试着做一下m4m。。希望能帮到忙 :)
[Normal]
我实在找不出什么问题 :(

[omoi]
01:54:871 这里的1/4拍的滑条打起来有点奇怪。为什么不和01:47:252 以及 01:51:061 保持一致呢?

希望好歌早日rank~ ;)
这种程度的mod,m4m不了吧 :o
Topic Starter
qkenan

KaNe[YYK]YoMe wrote:

SPOILER
新人试着做一下m4m。。希望能帮到忙 :)
[Normal]
我实在找不出什么问题 :(

[omoi]
01:54:871 这里的1/4拍的滑条打起来有点奇怪。为什么不和01:47:252 以及 01:51:061 保持一致呢? :arrow: 虽然在之前由其他modder提到了…………

希望好歌早日rank~ ;)
这种程度的mod,m4m不了吧 :o :arrow:不看rule就在queue里随意post,我本来都打算ignore了……原本kd都不打算给……但是既然mod有帮助,所以还是给了
Anyway,Thx for your mod

HabiHolic wrote:

SPOILER
Hello~ From My Queues~



[Normal]

00:49:156 (1) - This part .. I think the spinners do not get suitable fixed
00:59:156 (1) - Remove Nc?
01:09:871 (1) - ^ no change
01:16:061 (4) - Normal less difficulty in overlapping circles I do not want to recommend something ...
01:47:609 (2) - Rhythm is difficult for beginners I guess you can not do.
01:51:418 (2) - ^ no change
02:12:490 (1) - Elsewhere Sort fixed
02:33:204 (1) - Remove Nc fixed
02:35:347 (4) - NC fixed

[Omoi]
00:49:395 (1) - Spinner 00:51:061 - Here to the end no change
01:54:871 (1) - Distance check fixed

Nice Dff Map~

Good Luck~!
Thx for your mod~

zweiii wrote:

mod
[General]
图做的越来越好了
这音乐不错有挺多想表现的地方的 都有点想做GD了。。。

[Normal]

[节奏]
感觉有些地方的快慢节奏的衔接不是很好 我也不太好下手改。
三拍子的那种回滑条 还有连续四分一的节奏 二拍子的回滑条。。。
或许整体缺乏一种统一的规律性 :arrow: so sad...

00:49:156 加个note 转盘往后移一拍
01:57:966 (1) - 。。。。。
02:09:156 note
02:09:395 (1) - 开始结束位置?
02:24:871 (2,3,4,1) - 换点别的节奏
02:36:299 (1,2,3,1,2,3) -
[排列]
00:28:204 (3,1) - 对称到右边去好点 no
00:38:680 (2) - 加弧度 k
01:47:609 (2) - 加弧度 k
02:20:109 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - 摆法感觉对应不上音乐 打起来也没什么感觉 no
我也摆不出太好的 节奏对称你可以考虑对称来摆

[打击音]
00:26:776 (3) - finish
00:30:585 finish
00:42:014 finish
00:45:823 ↑
00:53:442 ↑ 有些加了有些没加,感觉是加了会突兀
00:59:156 (1,2,3,4) - 会不会有点单调 来点变化?sr涨的太快了
01:06:776 finish no
01:16:537 去掉whistle 跟vocal
01:16:776 减点音量
01:17:014 whistle
01:18:204 whistle
01:19:156 ↑
后面的看着改吧。。偷懒

[Omoi]

[节奏]
00:36:776 (1,2,3,4,5) - 变成这样?
SPOILER
或者
00:49:395 (1) - 这个转盘接的有点怪 考虑换成别的节奏不用转盘了? 你前三个带起了节奏这里一下就转盘了不太好
00:55:228 (8) - 移到这里会不会好点 00:55:109 (7,9) - 这两个的组合感觉上是挺好的 刚好这里00:55:347是新的重音起 停顿同处起感觉不错
01:54:752 (1,2) - 改成
SPOILER
或者
感觉第二种接近点你的原意
01:57:966 (1) - 同上
02:02:966 (4) - 去掉? 给你一种节奏的参考
02:09:871 (1) - 这结束在哪里?02:12:014这好点?

[排列]
00:53:442 (1,2) - ctrl+G?
00:54:871 (6,7,8,9,10) - 这样如何?
00:56:299 (1,2,3,4) - 这四个我理解的节奏是 底底大底 放成大概下下上下的感觉会不会好点?大概这样?
01:08:680 (1,2,3,4) - 或许两个一样的pattern?:
01:09:395 (3) - ctrl+G?大概就这感觉 要改的话注意保留这个01:10:585 (8) - 的感觉
弄个反跳或者远端往回走什么的
01:17:252 (4) - 这个强调感觉不够 想办法强调下 我没考虑前后随便摆了个
01:18:918 (4,5,6,7,8) - 锯齿跳不太适合这儿
我理解的5678大概是这感觉 后面我还加成了连打 01:19:990不过这样后面节奏衔接不上
我主要是强调下5678那感觉就没了 您自己想办法搞搞吧
01:27:252 (4,5,1) - 这是不是换个转向好点?(顺逆时针)
4完了5大概到你后面黄色的1那里
02:01:299 (6,7) - ctrl+G?
02:02:490 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - 不妥 不适合这
02:04:871 (1,2,3,4) - 同上面问题 可以想点不同的表现方法
上下上下也比两个stack好点
02:05:823 (1,2,3) - 02:07:728 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 路线有点单调
02:19:871 (3,4,5,6,7) - 不妥!
02:24:395 (4) - ctrl+G再往左边移点?
02:36:776 (5) - ctrl+G?

[打击音]
试试加入drum (还有clap)
00:23:799 whistle?
00:26:776 小点音量的finish?
00:29:633 (1,2,3) - 这三个都同音量的whistle不太好 你可以尝试音量弄点变化
00:39:395 00:41:299这些位置可以试试用drum的音 就是音乐里低音懂的鼓点
00:42:014 (5) - finish?
00:48:680 (3,4,5) - 这三个可以试试懂懂怕 drum drum clap(soft?)
有挺多地方用drum的组合起来感觉不错
00:56:299 (1,2,3,4) - 懂懂怕懂?
00:59:156 (1,3,5,6) - 懂大 懂懂大?
01:08:680 01:09:395 finish
01:18:323 (2) - 去掉whistle
01:20:466 去掉whistle
01:28:680 (2,3,4) - 打击音改为01:28:680 01:29:156 whistle 01:29:633 finish
01:29:990 (5) - 音效略突出 小点声
01:30:585 (2,3,4,5) - 懂懂大懂
01:31:537 drum finish
01:32:014 去掉音效
01:32:490 whiste 该强调的地方没音效?
01:35:347 finish
02:13:204 (5,6) - 去掉 whistle
02:14:871 这个音效不太好 和前后衔接不好 具体没想到怎么改
02:15:347 finish
02:19:156 强调下
02:25:109去掉
02:38:204 finish

另外大帝你的mod太长,就不一一回复了
总体接受了一些slider方向的建议,但是歌词过渡段的单点排列的建议不敢恭维。另外音效也稍微改了改,至于clap实在是没有精力全部加一遍了,而且我觉得drum音效并不适合我对本曲下那么多S-whistle的思路,所以基本没采用
Gloria Guard
Hi qkenan (:3」_)=3

From my queue :)

[Normal]

00:23:442 (2) 4 grid down? http://puu.sh/2a1Fe

00:36:537 (1) Spinner and the distance is too far away

00:43:561 (2,1,2,3) For the formation of the pattern a little bit better shape..
I think this pattern feels better shape. -> http://puu.sh/2a1Zs

00:52:966 add note?

00:59:156 (1,2,3,4) Please make a neat rectangular shape. -> http://puu.sh/2a21n

01:11:537 (4) Ctrl+G?

01:15:704 (2,3,4,1) distances don't fit. change please -> http://puu.sh/2a2nu

01:30:109 (2) remove note

01:46:776 (1) Please keep notes audible when the song isn't totally silenced, increase the volume to at least 20%.

01:47:252 The sound here is too small. this is part sound 40% up please

02:00:109 (1) spinner next note is difficult, spinner end 02:00:109 please

02:12:490 (1,2,3) Think about it a different beat than the beat. -> http://puu.sh/2a2Y5

02:14:395 (1,2,3) ^ too

02:15:823 (1,2,3,4,5,1) Not a good pattern of flow


[Omoi]

00:19:157 remove break time

00:21:061 ^ too

00:23:799 (3,4,5) Flow pattern of bad, would you change? -> http://puu.sh/2a3AT

00:25:585 (3,4) ^ too

00:29:633 (1,2,3,4,) could be improved a little bit more. http://puu.sh/2a3FZ

00:32:728 (1,2,3) i can't understand, why is the jump?..
I want to reduce the distance

00:40:109 (1,2,3) ^ too Seems to be difficult for many players.

00:44:871 (6,1,2,3) The flow pattern is bad.

00:51:061 (1,1) Same Normal

01:04:276 (3,4,5) Flow is very bad. -> http://puu.sh/2a3QI

01:06:537 (4,5,6,1) omg .. Jump here why? Please reduce the distance

01:25:347 (4) Ctrl+G?

01:56:299 (1,2,3,4,5) why is big jump..?

02:07:728 (4,5,1) specing

02:12:014 (1) spin mistake

02:14:395 (2,3,4) specing


P.S : More in need of improvement this map and The appearance of some of the patterns is not good.

Good luck
Topic Starter
qkenan

Gloria Guard wrote:

SPOILER
Hi qkenan (:3」_)=3 Hi~

From my queue :)

[Normal]

00:23:442 (2) 4 grid down? http://puu.sh/2a1Fe :arrow: seems it touched the score bar so moved a little down

00:36:537 (1) Spinner and the distance is too far away :arrow: not so far, no change

00:43:561 (2,1,2,3) For the formation of the pattern a little bit better shape..:arrow: fixed
I think this pattern feels better shape. -> http://puu.sh/2a1Zs

00:52:966 add note? :arrow: unnecessary, no change

00:59:156 (1,2,3,4) Please make a neat rectangular shape. -> http://puu.sh/2a21n :arrow: I like them being slant

01:11:537 (4) Ctrl+G? :arrow: fixed

01:15:704 (2,3,4,1) distances don't fit. change please -> http://puu.sh/2a2nu :arrow: fixed

01:30:109 (2) remove note :arrow: Delay it by 1/2 beat

01:46:776 (1) Please keep notes audible when the song isn't totally silenced, increase the volume to at least 20%. :arrow: fixed

01:47:252 The sound here is too small. this is part sound 40% up please :arrow: fixed

02:00:109 (1) spinner next note is difficult, spinner end 02:00:109 please :arrow: fixed

02:12:490 (1,2,3) Think about it a different beat than the beat. -> http://puu.sh/2a2Y5 :arrow: no change

02:14:395 (1,2,3) ^ too :arrow: changed some way

02:15:823 (1,2,3,4,5,1) Not a good pattern of flow :arrow: changed


[Omoi]

00:19:157 remove break time :arrow: fixed

00:21:061 ^ too

00:23:799 (3,4,5) Flow pattern of bad, would you change? -> http://puu.sh/2a3AT :arrow: I cant see where it's bad

00:25:585 (3,4) ^ too :arrow: ^

00:29:633 (1,2,3,4,) could be improved a little bit more. http://puu.sh/2a3FZ :arrow: This is my pattern, no change

00:32:728 (1,2,3) i can't understand, why is the jump?.. :arrow: there's 1 beat between the notes, why not jump?
I want to reduce the distance

00:40:109 (1,2,3) ^ too Seems to be difficult for many players. :arrow: even added DT mod It's still very easy

00:44:871 (6,1,2,3) The flow pattern is bad. :arrow: no change

00:51:061 (1,1) Same Normal :arrow: no change

01:04:276 (3,4,5) Flow is very bad. -> http://puu.sh/2a3QI :arrow: no change

01:06:537 (4,5,6,1) omg .. Jump here why? Please reduce the distance :arrow: I think it's fine now

01:25:347 (4) Ctrl+G? :arrow: no change

01:56:299 (1,2,3,4,5) why is big jump..? :arrow: as above

02:07:728 (4,5,1) specing

02:12:014 (1) spin mistake

02:14:395 (2,3,4) specing :arrow: ^^seems all unnecessary to change


P.S : More in need of improvement this map and The appearance of some of the patterns is not good.

Good luck
Thx for your mod
[CSGA]Ar3sgice
irc
11:16 qkenan: 早
11:17 [CSGA]Ar3sgice: 喵
11:18 qkenan: 那个……我不懂喵星语……;w;
11:18 [CSGA]Ar3sgice: 喵!
11:22 qkenan: 总之谢star了_(:з」∠)_
11:22 [CSGA]Ar3sgice: 思考
11:27 qkenan: 如果有时间的话,能不能帮着看看map呢?;w;
11:27 [CSGA]Ar3sgice: 233
11:27 qkenan: lol
11:27 [CSGA]Ar3sgice: 喵!
11:28 qkenan: 喵?
11:28 [CSGA]Ar3sgice: 喵>///<
11:28 [CSGA]Ar3sgice: 我打打看
11:28 *[CSGA]Ar3sgice is listening to [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/224279 KOKIA - Tatta Hitotsu no Omoi]
11:31 [CSGA]Ar3sgice: 233, 其实我鼠标坏了, 经常乱飘
11:32 qkenan: 的确有点……
11:32 [CSGA]Ar3sgice: 不过不影响作图, 懒得换了
11:32 [CSGA]Ar3sgice: 不能用了再换233
11:32 qkenan: 诶,放note时不会放不准么
11:33 [CSGA]Ar3sgice: /.\先放了再调整啊
11:33 [CSGA]Ar3sgice: 怎么可能一次放对
11:34 qkenan: / w \
11:36 [CSGA]Ar3sgice: 01:35:109 (4) - 这里拉开点间距 http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/635902
11:38 qkenan: 好
11:38 [CSGA]Ar3sgice: 嗯
11:39 [CSGA]Ar3sgice: 02:04:276 (2) - 这个也拉开点
11:40 qkenan: ③slider已经贴到边上了诶
11:40 qkenan: 把②往右下移一点么?
11:40 [CSGA]Ar3sgice: 嗯
11:41 [CSGA]Ar3sgice: 02:17:252 (1) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/635914
11:42 qkenan: 好
11:45 [CSGA]Ar3sgice: 02:31:299 (2) - 这段单点有点混乱, 建议-> http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/635922
11:46 [CSGA]Ar3sgice: 其实我觉得图挺好的可以拿去rank了嘛
11:47 qkenan: 2:30处把 时间线拉长一点,节奏看不大清楚_(:з」∠)_
11:47 [CSGA]Ar3sgice: 好
11:48 [CSGA]Ar3sgice: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/635926
11:49 qkenan: 改好了
11:49 [CSGA]Ar3sgice: _(:3 」∠ )_我觉得可以了
11:50 qkenan: 谢谢夸奖;w;
11:50 [CSGA]Ar3sgice: 233
11:55 qkenan: 不当irc mod骗一发kd么 =w=
11:55 [CSGA]Ar3sgice: 好

wwww
lkx_Shore
[General]
整体音量可以提高10~20%
[Omoi]
00:30:347 (4,1) - (4) - ctrl+>+> x216 y84 00:31:061 (1) - ctrl+h x284 y40
00:33:799 (5) - ctrl+h x344 y236
00:39:633 (3,4,1) - 00:39:633 (3) - x428 y320 00:39:871 (4) - x496 y264 00:40:109 (1) - x332 y232
00:57:728 (2) - x304 y84
01:04:395 (4) - x208 y68
01:27:252 (4,5) - 转完前面的三角以后觉得这挺绕的.-.
01:27:252 (4,5) - ctrl+g ctrl+h x132 y116
02:18:442 (5,6) - ctrl+g 02:18:918 (7) - x120 y24

[Normal]
HP-1

[Other]
insane和normal之间要有一个hard...(biegaosuwo"Omoi"shihard)
最低难度要几星来着?忘了

Goodluck
Topic Starter
qkenan

lkx_Shore wrote:

SPOILER
[General]
整体音量可以提高10~20%
[Omoi]
00:30:347 (4,1) - (4) - ctrl+>+> x216 y84 00:31:061 (1) - ctrl+h x284 y40
00:33:799 (5) - ctrl+h x344 y236
00:39:633 (3,4,1) - 00:39:633 (3) - x428 y320 00:39:871 (4) - x496 y264 00:40:109 (1) - x332 y232
00:57:728 (2) - x304 y84
01:04:395 (4) - x208 y68
01:27:252 (4,5) - 转完前面的三角以后觉得这挺绕的.-.
01:27:252 (4,5) - ctrl+g ctrl+h x132 y116
02:18:442 (5,6) - ctrl+g 02:18:918 (7) - x120 y24
:arrow: 总体来说有的改了有的没改……不过大多不顺手的pattern都做了调整
[Normal]
HP-1 fixed

[Other]
insane和normal之间要有一个hard...(biegaosuwo"Omoi"shihard)
最低难度要几星来着?忘了

Goodluck
Thx for your mod ~
Colin Hou
[Omoi]
  1. 00:34:395 (1) - add note at 00:34:395 and start this spinner at 00:34:514, ending position do not need change.
  2. 00:41:061 (3,4) - 3/4 vocal is here and if you need consistence, you'd better do the same with 00:25:823 (4).
  3. 00:49:395, 00:49:633 - add notes and start spinner at 00:49:752, no change to the ending point.
  4. 00:55:109 (7,8,9) - not the right place for triple. remove 8 and consider add note at 00:55:704.
  5. 01:01:061 - add note and change the start point of the spinner to 01:01:180, no change to the ending point.
  6. 01:10:347 (6,7,8) - how about make the order slider-note-note
  7. 01:18:204 (1) - about the rhythm here, suggest you move this to 01:18:085 and adjust it's location, and other things such as new combo and spacing.
  8. 01:49:633 (3) - cancel the whistle on sliderbody.
  9. 01:51:061 (1) - ^
  10. 01:54:871 (1) - ^
  11. 01:57:966, 01:58:204 - add notes and change the start position to 01:58:323, let the ending point stay the same.
  12. 02:09:871 (1) - start this at 02:09:752. ending point still at 02:12:014.
  13. 02:12:252 (1) - new combo
[Normal]
  1. AR-1
  2. 00:38:680 (2) - cancel the whistle on the sliderbody, when adding whistles to circles on sliders, you should select every single of them and do the thing.
  3. 00:41:061 (5) - ^
  4. 00:46:776 (2) - ^
  5. 00:56:299 (3) - ^
  6. 01:08:680 (3) - ^
  7. 01:31:537 (1) - ^
  8. 01:33:204 (4) - ^
  9. 01:49:633 (1) - ^
  10. 01:53:442 (2) - ^
  11. 02:02:014 (1) - ^
  12. 02:04:871 (5) - ^
  13. 02:05:823 (1) - ^
  14. 02:17:252 (1) - ^
  15. 02:21:061 (3) - ^
  16. 02:22:966 (3) - ^
  17. 02:24:871 (2) - ^
  18. 02:26:776 (4) - ^
  19. 02:28:680 (2) - ^
  20. 02:34:395 (6) - ^
  21. 02:40:109 (1) - ^
  22. 02:41:537 (3) - ^
  23. 02:00:585 (1) - new combo
  24. 00:34:395 (1,1) - the note is too far from the center of playground.
  25. 01:11:537 (4) - move this farther from the HP bar
这歌你都剪 GG
Topic Starter
qkenan

Colin Hou wrote:

SPOILER
[Omoi]
  1. 00:34:395 (1) - add note at 00:34:395 and start this spinner at 00:34:514, ending position do not need change.
  2. 00:41:061 (3,4) - 3/4 vocal is here and if you need consistence, you'd better do the same with 00:25:823 (4).
  3. 00:49:395, 00:49:633 - add notes and start spinner at 00:49:752, no change to the ending point.
  4. 00:55:109 (7,8,9) - not the right place for triple. remove 8 and consider add note at 00:55:704.
  5. 01:01:061 - add note and change the start point of the spinner to 01:01:180, no change to the ending point.
  6. 01:10:347 (6,7,8) - how about make the order slider-note-note
  7. 01:18:204 (1) - about the rhythm here, suggest you move this to 01:18:085 and adjust it's location, and other things such as new combo and spacing.
  8. 01:49:633 (3) - cancel the whistle on sliderbody.
  9. 01:51:061 (1) - ^
  10. 01:54:871 (1) - ^
  11. 01:57:966, 01:58:204 - add notes and change the start position to 01:58:323, let the ending point stay the same.
  12. 02:09:871 (1) - start this at 02:09:752. ending point still at 02:12:014.
  13. 02:12:252 (1) - new combo
[Normal]
  1. AR-1
  2. 00:38:680 (2) - cancel the whistle on the sliderbody, when adding whistles to circles on sliders, you should select every single of them and do the thing.
  3. 00:41:061 (5) - ^
  4. 00:46:776 (2) - ^
  5. 00:56:299 (3) - ^
  6. 01:08:680 (3) - ^
  7. 01:31:537 (1) - ^
  8. 01:33:204 (4) - ^
  9. 01:49:633 (1) - ^
  10. 01:53:442 (2) - ^
  11. 02:02:014 (1) - ^
  12. 02:04:871 (5) - ^
  13. 02:05:823 (1) - ^
  14. 02:17:252 (1) - ^
  15. 02:21:061 (3) - ^
  16. 02:22:966 (3) - ^
  17. 02:24:871 (2) - ^
  18. 02:26:776 (4) - ^
  19. 02:28:680 (2) - ^
  20. 02:34:395 (6) - ^
  21. 02:40:109 (1) - ^
  22. 02:41:537 (3) - ^
  23. 02:00:585 (1) - new combo
  24. 00:34:395 (1,1) - the note is too far from the center of playground.
  25. 01:11:537 (4) - move this farther from the HP bar
All fixed

这歌你都剪 GG
Thx for your mod~
Sherry
[General]
02:19:871 : SBの歌詞がすぐ消えすぎて次の歌詞が早く入りすぎています。

[Normal]
00:22:966 (1) : まっすぐ上よりはちょっと右にずれているので、きれいにまっすぐ上にするためにx256 y88に移動してみてはどうでしょうか

00:27:252 (1,2,3,1) : リズムのパターンがこれでひとつになっているので00:28:680 (1)でNCは少しおかしい感じがします。 00:27:252 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4) のパターンを変えるかNCの位置を変えましょう
00:30:109 (4) : 曲的にくるっと回るスライダーよりははじめにあがって後は下がり最後にあがる印象があります。以下のような形なんてどうでしょうか?

00:39:633 (3) :曲げましょう
00:40:585 (4) : 00:39:633 (3)が終わった方向に飛ぶようにしましょう

00:42:966 (2) : 曲線が少し汚いです。 00:42:014 (1) をコピーしてCtrl+<を押して配置したほうがいいでしょう

00:47:728 (3) : 00:46:299 (1) と位置がずれています。 00:46:299 (1) をコピーしてCtrl + Hで配置しなおしてください
00:49:156 (6) :^

01:14:395 (1) : add finish?

01:48:204 (3) : 次が上方向なのに01:47:609 (2)の終端の下に来るのはあまりよいとは思えません。 01:47:609 (2)の終端方向にしたほうがいいかもしれません。 x288 y252 ?

01:47:609 (2,2,2) :ナンバーが見えなくなるほど重なっているのは少し汚く見えます。直せるなら直したほうがいいかもしれません(難しいかなぁ)

02:30:585 (4) : add finish?

[Omoi]
00:40:109 (1,2,3) :ジャンプしすぎて空間が寂しくなっている気がします。 ジャンプしても難しくならない上に、遠いジャンプを期待している場所ではない気がするので少し近づけてはどうでしょうか?

01:18:085 (6) : remove
01:18:204 : add

01:35:109 (4) : 連打のほうがいいかも?menu -> Compose -> convert slider to Stream ...
Topic Starter
qkenan

Sherry wrote:

mod
[General]
02:19:871 : SBの歌詞がすぐ消えすぎて次の歌詞が早く入りすぎています。これを見つけてありがとう!fixed

[Normal]
00:22:966 (1) : まっすぐ上よりはちょっと右にずれているので、きれいにまっすぐ上にするためにx256 y88に移動してみてはどうでしょうか fixed

00:27:252 (1,2,3,1) : リズムのパターンがこれでひとつになっているので00:28:680 (1)でNCは少しおかしい感じがします。 00:27:252 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4) のパターンを変えるかNCの位置を変えましょう このままでいいと思います
00:30:109 (4) : 曲的にくるっと回るスライダーよりははじめにあがって後は下がり最後にあがる印象があります。以下のような形なんてどうでしょうか? fixed


00:39:633 (3) :曲げましょう fixed
00:40:585 (4) : 00:39:633 (3)が終わった方向に飛ぶようにしましょう fixed


00:42:966 (2) : 曲線が少し汚いです。 00:42:014 (1) をコピーしてCtrl+<を押して配置したほうがいいでしょう fixed

00:47:728 (3) : 00:46:299 (1) と位置がずれています。 00:46:299 (1) をコピーしてCtrl + Hで配置しなおしてください
00:49:156 (6) :^ fixed

01:14:395 (1) : add finish? fixed

01:48:204 (3) : 次が上方向なのに01:47:609 (2)の終端の下に来るのはあまりよいとは思えません。 01:47:609 (2)の終端方向にしたほうがいいかもしれません。 x288 y252 ? fixed

01:47:609 (2,2,2) :ナンバーが見えなくなるほど重なっているのは少し汚く見えます。直せるなら直したほうがいいかもしれません(難しいかなぁ) 多分大丈夫だと思いますから

02:30:585 (4) : add finish? fixed

[Omoi]
00:40:109 (1,2,3) :ジャンプしすぎて空間が寂しくなっている気がします。 ジャンプしても難しくならない上に、遠いジャンプを期待している場所ではない気がするので少し近づけてはどうでしょうか?

01:18:085 (6) : remove
01:18:204 : add no change

01:35:109 (4) : 連打のほうがいいかも?menu -> Compose -> convert slider to Stream ...いいえ、このままのほうがいい感じです。
Modしてくれてありがとうございます!
yurunneram
Okay~ Lets go! >w<

General
Good thing that you did a story board. But if you can try making it move a bit and start at diff locations for the starting part or ppl will want to skip it. And nice colours~

Normal
00:44:871 (3) - Why don't you make it like 00:41:061 (5) (like in terms of how long it lasts and when it repeats) cuz rhythm wise it'll sound pretty good
01:10:585 (3) - make it like 01:08:680 (3) (again for da rhythm)
02:00:585 (1,2,3) - Make it in a straight line maybe?

It was mapped very well. I thank you for not letting this be crap ^^

Omoi
00:44:395 (6) - Flip it vertically?

Not much. I enjoyed playing this one a lot :) Great job! Good luck for the mod!

You have been modded out by Yurun Neram
Topic Starter
qkenan

yurunneram wrote:

SPOILER
Okay~ Lets go! >w<

General
Good thing that you did a story board. But if you can try making it move a bit and start at diff locations for the starting part or ppl will want to skip it. And nice colours~ :arrow: I'm considering about it

Normal
00:44:871 (3) - Why don't you make it like 00:41:061 (5) (like in terms of how long it lasts and when it repeats) cuz rhythm wise it'll sound pretty good It wouldnt be suitable for the vocal or music.
01:10:585 (3) - make it like 01:08:680 (3) (again for da rhythm) As above, no change
02:00:585 (1,2,3) - Make it in a straight line maybe? If so the ①circle would be too far from centre...and may change many placings of following notes.. so no change

It was mapped very well. I thank you for not letting this be crap ^^

Omoi
00:44:395 (6) - Flip it vertically? seems unnecessary and current placing better

Not much. I enjoyed playing this one a lot :) Great job! Good luck for the mod!

You have been modded out by Yurun Neram
Thx for your mod~
Niko-nyan
from my queue

General
Looks good

Normal
uhm
01:04:871 - New Combo for suggestion
01:53:442 - can't get the rythme with 1/4 please change the slider
02:13:918 - New combo (but same colour with the next note)

Omoi~
01:04:971 - New Combo (but same colour with the next note)

omg all looks good

don't kudosu if this mod not help :)
Topic Starter
qkenan

Frans Niko wrote:

SPOILER
from my queue

General
Looks good

Normal
uhm
01:04:871 - New Combo for suggestion seems unnecessary
01:53:442 - can't get the rythme with 1/4 please change the slider fixed
02:13:918 - New combo (but same colour with the next note) to follow the vocal so no change

Omoi~
01:04:971 - New Combo (but same colour with the next note) seems unnecessary

omg all looks good

don't kudosu if this mod not help :)
Thx for your mod~
KaNeyome
稍微再提一点想法。
Normal
  1. 00:46:776 (2)往上移动一格
  2. 01:22:014 (2)听起来有点奇怪。是不是跟后面的slider交换一下,再改一下位置?
  3. 02:07:728(2)向上移动一格
  4. 02:09:156 (4)往上移动到(132,120)一到两格?保持距离一致

Omoi
  1. 副歌部分同样的排列whistle的位置加的很随意。是故意这样的吗?
  2. 00:49:395 和01:57:966 用1/2速度的长slide代替spin感觉更贴切一点?
Topic Starter
qkenan

KaNe[YYK]YoMe wrote:

稍微再提一点想法。
Normal
  1. 00:46:776 (2)往上移动一格 :arrow: 没必要
  2. 01:22:014 (2)听起来有点奇怪。是不是跟后面的slider交换一下,再改一下位置? :arrow: 原来的也无不妥,改后也没多大差别……所以没动
  3. 02:07:728(2)向上移动一格
  4. 02:09:156 (4)往上移动到(132,120)一到两格?保持距离一致 :arrow: 这边几个重新调整了下
Omoi
  1. 副歌部分同样的排列whistle的位置加的很随意。是故意这样的吗? :arrow: 嘛……说随意的确有点,当初的想法主要是1/4的节奏要加,然后一些比较重的vocal会跟着加一点。
  2. 00:49:395 和01:57:966 用1/2速度的长slide代替spin感觉更贴切一点? :arrow: 看起来没什么必要

KaNe[YYK]YoMe wrote:

另外normal里面单点的距离在1.01- 0.98之间浮动。不过应该算不上什么大问题吧?
因为我没有关掉Grid Snap,所以会有一点ds的误差。通常来说比如以1.0x来map的,偶尔有在0.9x~1.1x都是可接受的
KaNeyome

qkenan wrote:

KaNe[YYK]YoMe wrote:

稍微再提一点想法。
Omoi
  1. 副歌部分同样的排列whistle的位置加的很随意。是故意这样的吗? :arrow: 嘛……说随意的确有点,当初的想法主要是1/4的节奏要加,然后一些比较重的vocal会跟着加一点。
  2. 00:49:395 和01:57:966 用1/2速度的长slide代替spin感觉更贴切一点? :arrow: 看起来没什么必要
嗯。我Normal又加了一点。
另外normal里面单点的距离在1.01- 0.98之间浮动。不过应该算不上什么大问题吧?
inferno
omoi:
我觉得最后的转盘再早1/4拍好点
10nya
Same song www


Anyway I'll do m4m at your queue c:

[General]
  1. There's a lot unused transparency at your Lyrics picture and it's unrankable, please crop them u.u
[Normal]
  1. 00:31:061 (1,2)- : I do suggest to make this slider straightly curved. like move last (1) slider point 2 grid up and last (2) slider point 2 grid up would nice.
  2. 00:36:776 (1)- : Too fast for Normal diff >u<. at least there's 1 beat range between a spinner with new note on Normal diff :O I suggest to shorten the Spinner or Remove the Circle at here
  3. 00:57:252 (1)- : add finish on slider head?
  4. 01:29:156 (3)- : add finish on slider tail?
  5. 02:00:585 (1)- : Same as 00:36:776-
  6. 02:05:823 (1)- : rather than Whistle, I suggest to add Finish here
  7. 02:15:347 (2)- : add finish on slider head?
  8. 02:22:966 (3)- : ^
  9. 02:28:680 (2)- : ^
  10. 02:38:204 (5)- : ^
[Omoi]
  1. 00:41:061 (3)- : Whistle on slider reverse, remove clap at there >< not fit imo
  2. 01:35:109 (4)- : add finish on slider tail?
That's all I can find, good luck! Nice song and map c:
mercury2004
M4M

Color Guide
Red : Change it please
Purple : Highly recommended
Orange : Suggestion

General
In the lyric SB part. Crop the unused transparency part.
Strange that i could see this bookmark flap out.

Normal
00:22:966 (1) - sounds better if you mute this note
00:28:204 (3) - missing head whistle?
00:41:061 (5) - form perfect triangle? like this?

00:59:156 (1,2,3,4) - change it to the otherside? In newbie eye they would see 300s instead of hit notes
01:06:299 (4) - finish/whistle tail?
01:18:680 - add note?
01:29:156 (3) - finish tail?
02:18:204 (2,3,4) - form perfect triangle?
02:28:680 (2) - add finish/whistle?
02:38:204 (5) - add finish/whistle?



Omoi
00:22:966 (1) - delete NC here and NC here 00:23:442 (2) - ?
00:28:204 (5) - This note kinda against the flow reverse it
00:32:490 (1,2,3) - jump kinda too big for slow pace song
00:54:871 (1) - NC?
01:06:537 (5,6,1) - move it closer to 01:07:252 (2) - ?

01:18:085 (6,1) - a little bit confusing
02:20:823 (7) - move it to x204 y 328?
02:21:776 (3,4,5) - reverse this selection?

02:30:585 (6,7,1,2) - a bit confusing
02:40:109 (1) - NC here? and del NC here? 02:40:823 (1) -
Kudo or no kudo your choice.
Topic Starter
qkenan

- t e n n y a - wrote:

SPOILER
Same song www


Anyway I'll do m4m at your queue c:

[General]
  1. There's a lot unused transparency at your Lyrics picture and it's unrankable, please crop them u.u
[Normal]
  1. 00:31:061 (1,2)- : I do suggest to make this slider straightly curved. like move last (1) slider point 2 grid up and last (2) slider point 2 grid up would nice. :arrow: fixed
  2. 00:36:776 (1)- : Too fast for Normal diff >u<. at least there's 1 beat range between a spinner with new note on Normal diff :O I suggest to shorten the Spinner or Remove the Circle at here :arrow: seems not so difficult ? kept for now
  3. 00:57:252 (1)- : add finish on slider head? :arrow: fixed
  4. 01:29:156 (3)- : add finish on slider tail? :arrow: unnecessary
  5. 02:00:585 (1)- : Same as 00:36:776- :arrow: as above
  6. 02:05:823 (1)- : rather than Whistle, I suggest to add Finish here :arrow: fixed
  7. 02:15:347 (2)- : add finish on slider head? :arrow: fixed
  8. 02:22:966 (3)- : ^ :arrow: fixed
  9. 02:28:680 (2)- : ^ :arrow: fixed
  10. 02:38:204 (5)- : ^ :arrow: fixed
[Omoi]
  1. 00:41:061 (3)- : Whistle on slider reverse, remove clap at there >< not fit imo :arrow: when I changed the ryhthm I just forgot the hit sound ><
  2. 01:35:109 (4)- : add finish on slider tail? :arrow: fixed
That's all I can find, good luck! Nice song and map c:
Thx for your mod~

mercury2004 wrote:

mod
M4M

Color Guide
Red : Change it please
Purple : Highly recommended
Orange : Suggestion

General
In the lyric SB part. Crop the unused transparency part.
Strange that i could see this bookmark flap out. :arrow: fixed

Normal
00:22:966 (1) - sounds better if you mute this note :arrow:
00:28:204 (3) - missing head whistle? :arrow: fixed
00:41:061 (5) - form perfect triangle? like this?[/color] :arrow: fixed
00:59:156 (1,2,3,4) - change it to the otherside? In newbie eye they would see 300s instead of hit notes :arrow: changed the placings of a few notes
01:06:299 (4) - finish/whistle tail? :arrow:
01:18:680 - add note? :arrow: unnecessary, no change
01:29:156 (3) - finish tail? :arrow: ^
02:18:204 (2,3,4) - form perfect triangle? :arrow: fixed
02:28:680 (2) - add finish/whistle?
02:38:204 (5) - add finish/whistle?[/color] :arrow: these two done


Omoi
00:22:966 (1) - delete NC here and NC here 00:23:442 (2) - ? :arrow:
00:28:204 (5) - This note kinda against the flow reverse it not so bad
00:32:490 (1,2,3) - jump kinda too big for slow pace song :arrow: reduce to 1.8x
00:54:871 (1) - NC? :arrow: fixed
01:06:537 (5,6,1) - move it closer to 01:07:252 (2) - ?[/color] :arrow: fixed
01:18:085 (6,1) - a little bit confusing :arrow: removed
02:20:823 (7) - move it to x204 y 328? :arrow:
02:21:776 (3,4,5) - reverse this selection?[/color] :arrow: no change
02:30:585 (6,7,1,2) - a bit confusing :arrow: this ryhthm sounds better, kept for now
02:40:109 (1) - NC here? and del NC here? 02:40:823 (1) - :arrow: fixed
Kudo or no kudo your choice.
Also thx for your mod~
Raose
M4M
newbie modder alert !

[Normal]

00:48:100 - Add note to fit the vocals?
00:49:633 - Vocals start at 00:49:395, so move the slider there and end at the original time
01:01:061 - Vocals start at 01:00:823, so move the slider there and end at the original time
01:11:537 (4) - have the slider repeat twice
01:57:966 - Vocals start at 01:57:966, so move the slider there and end at the original time
02:14:395 (1) - have the slider repeat twice
02:24:871 (2) - ^

All these are suggestions ><
Zero__wind
你好,我来干嘛的

General
02:42:014 (1) - 建议30%音量normal finish

Normal
HP+1
00:30:109 (4) - 弄得这么行为艺术还不包一下 http://puu.sh/2dt4F
00:56:299 (3,1,2) - 没包好吧
00:59:156 (1) - 弄到正下方吧 这样可以保持和00:57:252 (1,2) - 相同的结构 你只需要把后面的1234一起逆时针转一点角度然后挪一挪就好
01:15:823 (3) - (151,209)【E和N里面最好不要违背DS+-0.03
01:17:014 (2) - (202,332)
01:31:537 (1,2) - 倾向于拽着它俩一起挪到(396,328)
01:44:871 (1) - 音量30%吧
01:53:442 (2,3,4) - j加whistle?【(4)的头】
02:15:347 (2) - 闹哪样
02:23:918 (1) - 包前一个滑条的跟随圈吧 还有就是和后面的那个note隔得略远了一点点
02:26:776 (4) - spacing
02:35:347 (1) - ^

Hard
00:57:966 (3) - http://puu.sh/2dtj1
00:58:918 (5) - 无理大间距
01:04:395 (4,5) - CTRL+G
01:27:728 (1,2,3,4,1) - 等距
01:32:490 (4,5,6) - 这样半迁半就的真的好看么0.0 建议这样 http://puu.sh/2dtsZ
01:47:609 (2) - 拉开点儿包跟随圈吧 就算不拉远弧度也要差不多是那么回事儿啊
01:51:418 (2) - ^
02:05:347 (3) - 加whistle
02:22:014 (4,5) - CTRL+G
02:25:823 (3,4,5) - 随便弄了个形状转角度还不如都包跟随圈 个人感觉
02:42:014 (1) - 咋不先note再spinner了 当然 这个随意
Zweib
加油喔www
star

对modder的建议也不必给太高的采纳率、因为有些mod也许可能比较敷衍wwww。mod带来的提升毕竟有限,主要还是本身的质量要有——比如音效是否有下错,图形是否摆歪了一小格,blanket有没做整齐。所谓怎样摆好看些、换什么节奏更好些其实都无关紧要,不要听太多建议把原来挺好的图改得面目全非。现在看hard感觉很好(移动路径、spacing对我胃口233),normal感觉就差一些(这还是要以好看为主)。修改pattern的时候注意下整体感和前后consistency

以上只是想起以前做图和mod时候的一点感想,没有针对www
Topic Starter
qkenan

Zhengster wrote:

SPOILER
M4M
newbie modder alert !

[Normal]

00:48:100 - Add note to fit the vocals?
00:49:633 - Vocals start at 00:49:395, so move the slider there and end at the original time
01:01:061 - Vocals start at 01:00:823, so move the slider there and end at the original time
01:11:537 (4) - have the slider repeat twice
01:57:966 - Vocals start at 01:57:966, so move the slider there and end at the original time
02:14:395 (1) - have the slider repeat twice
02:24:871 (2) - ^
Sorry but considering that it's Normal so all rejected due to difficulty :(
All these are suggestions ><
Anyway thx for your mod ~

Zero__wind wrote:

SPOILER
你好,我来干嘛的 你好,我来干嘛的

General
02:42:014 (1) - 建议30%音量normal finish :arrow: 减低了音量,不过还是soft finish适合一些

Normal
HP+1
00:30:109 (4) - 弄得这么行为艺术还不包一下 http://puu.sh/2dt4F :arrow: fixed
00:56:299 (3,1,2) - 没包好吧 :arrow: 感觉差不多……
00:59:156 (1) - 弄到正下方吧 这样可以保持和00:57:252 (1,2) - 相同的结构 你只需要把后面的1234一起逆时针转一点角度然后挪一挪就好 :arrow: 感觉差不多……
01:15:823 (3) - (151,209)【E和N里面最好不要违背DS+-0.03 :arrow: fixed
01:17:014 (2) - (202,332) :arrow: fixed
01:31:537 (1,2) - 倾向于拽着它俩一起挪到(396,328) :arrow: fixed
01:44:871 (1) - 音量30%吧 :arrow: +5%
01:53:442 (2,3,4) - j加whistle?【(4)的头】:arrow: fixed
02:15:347 (2) - 闹哪样 :arrow: fixed
02:23:918 (1) - 包前一个滑条的跟随圈吧 还有就是和后面的那个note隔得略远了一点点 :arrow: 没动
02:26:776 (4) - spacing :arrow: 好好好
02:35:347 (1) - ^ :arrow: 好好好

Hard
00:57:966 (3) - http://puu.sh/2dtj1 :arrow: 上去了一点
00:58:918 (5) - 无理大间距 :arrow: 感觉没什么,整体右边移了一点
01:04:395 (4,5) - CTRL+G :arrow: fixed
01:27:728 (1,2,3,4,1) - 等距 :arrow: fixed
01:32:490 (4,5,6) - 这样半迁半就的真的好看么0.0 建议这样 http://puu.sh/2dtsZ :arrow: no no no
01:47:609 (2) - 拉开点儿包跟随圈吧 就算不拉远弧度也要差不多是那么回事儿啊 :arrow: no no no
01:51:418 (2) - ^ :arrow: no no no
02:05:347 (3) - 加whistle :arrow: fixed
02:22:014 (4,5) - CTRL+G 虽然我自己觉得不是很顺……但是你是第二个提了我就改掉吧
02:25:823 (3,4,5) - 随便弄了个形状转角度还不如都包跟随圈 个人感觉 :arrow: 我就喜欢这样w
02:42:014 (1) - 咋不先note再spinner了 当然 这个随意

差不多这样,嗯

Zweib wrote:

加油喔www
star

对modder的建议也不必给太高的采纳率、因为有些mod也许可能比较敷衍wwww。mod带来的提升毕竟有限,主要还是本身的质量要有——比如音效是否有下错,图形是否摆歪了一小格,blanket有没做整齐。所谓怎样摆好看些、换什么节奏更好些其实都无关紧要,不要听太多建议把原来挺好的图改得面目全非。现在看hard感觉很好(移动路径、spacing对我胃口233),normal感觉就差一些(这还是要以好看为主)。修改pattern的时候注意下整体感和前后consistency

以上只是想起以前做图和mod时候的一点感想,没有针对www
谢star~ 我会注意的~
Athena Tennos
[N]
  1. 00:23:918 (3,1) - 大面積遮蓋。。不好看。
[OMI]
  1. 01:18:323 (1) - 。。。。這個真坑。。試試在01:18:204 - 放個1/4slider。。。現在這樣有點。orz
    1. 或者01:17:728 - 這裡放一個note。。。然後把這個位置的slider往後移1/2。。。orz
  2. 00:23:442 (1) - 試試放的稍微平一點。。。0。0好看>_>。。你後面的擺的都蠻平的。。。
感覺可以再去做一個I。。。更有趣點=w=~
☆~
Topic Starter
qkenan

Athena Tennos wrote:

SPOILER
[N]
  1. 00:23:918 (3,1) - 大面積遮蓋。。不好看。:arrow: 我觉得还成
[OMI]
  1. 01:18:323 (1) - 。。。。這個真坑。。試試在01:18:204 - 放個1/4slider。。。現在這樣有點。orz
    1. 或者01:17:728 - 這裡放一個note。。。然後把這個位置的slider往後移1/2。。。orz :arrow: 现在这样最贴合vocal,而且只不过是有个提前的1/4而已,不能算啥很难的梗吧?so no change
  2. 00:23:442 (1) - 試試放的稍微平一點。。。0。0好看>_>。。你後面的擺的都蠻平的。。。fixed
感覺可以再去做一個I。。。更有趣點=w=~
我意已决,专著Hard不动摇_(:з」∠)_
☆~
谢mod~
wonders
[omoi]
01:33:204 crtl+G
01:17:966 remove whistle
01:55:823 sampleset to Drum
01:56:299 finish
01:56:776 finish
02:12:252 1,2,3,4 finish, 10%,20%,30%,40%
02:30:942 remove whistle
[Normal]
fine :)
好歌 :)
Zero__wind
:?:

qkenan wrote:

Athena Tennos wrote:

感覺可以再去做一個I。。。更有趣點=w=~
我意已决,专著Hard不动摇_(:з」∠)_
专注犯懒不动摇吧 0.0
Rotte
现在的人做图水平真的好高啊,哭哭

From PM

[General]

Timing

Offset 必须向前退,在17252下红线


[Normal]

  1. Fine.
[Omoi]

  • OD+1

    01:18:918 (3,4,5,6) - 咱感觉这样打起来感觉不错
    02:20:585 (6,7,1) - flow不好,建议7往上挪
图不错啊
咱渣渣,啥都看不出来
SB*1 mapset*1
Rotte
哦,对了,还有一点,现在至少要一个spread,也就是说必须要3个diff才可以,
ENH或者NHI
Topic Starter
qkenan

Rotte wrote:

哦,对了,还有一点,现在至少要一个spread,也就是说必须要3个diff才可以,
ENH或者NHI
问过bat了,现在1个N一个正常向的H是可以的

Rotte wrote:

SPOILER
现在的人做图水平真的好高啊,哭哭

From PM

[General]

Timing

Offset 必须向前退,在17252下红线 :arrow: fixed


[Normal]

  1. Fine.
[Omoi]

  • OD+1

    01:18:918 (3,4,5,6) - 咱感觉这样打起来感觉不错 :arrow: 方向按着建议,然后形状做了个五角星
    02:20:585 (6,7,1) - flow不好,建议7往上挪 :arrow: fixed
图不错啊
咱渣渣,啥都看不出来
SB*1 mapset*1
Thx for mod and stars~
[NSER]-Zazalng

Hi sir I from my modding queues
[General]
Nothing to see !

[Normal]
00:29:156 Use Slider then end at 00:29:394 | Little Beat in 00:29:394
00:39:632 Do it like this http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/650886 | Incorrect Beat
01:00:109 Use slider 1/2 then reverse like this http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/650894 | Incorrect Beat
01:10:585 Slider must end at 01:11:299 without reverse
01:17:966 Slider at reverse point it outlayer. plz move it okay ? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/650902
01:21:061 - 01:23:680 fix it like this http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/650907 | Combo 2 outlayer
01:31:537 Slider at reverse point it outlayer. plz Move it okay ? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/650915
02:05:823 I don't sure it is outslayer if you think it outlayer fix it plz
02:37:251 Make Slider then Reverse it http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/650928 | Incorrect Beat

[Omoi]
01:12:966 Slider is outlayer Fix like this http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/650973
01:20:585 Fix Like This http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/650976 | 01:21:061 Combo 1 it Outlayer and make mistake to other circle & Slider
01:53:442 Combo 1-5 Move it fix like this http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/650981 | Protect Circle 3 it outlayer and sound of circle 5 - 1 it is not fast don't jump it plz
01:54:871 Combo 1 Outlayer Fix like this http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/650979
02:25:585 Outlayer 3 Combo fix like this http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/650984
02:26:775 Combo 5 outlayer fix like this http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/650985

Sorry if you don't understand why is it snap
it is not snap it outlayer (my word) other call Unrankablee // RUNNNN
Fushimi Rio
Omoi
00:22:252 (4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - 这段可以加个drum的sample 当然addition还是soft
00:26:776 (5) - clap
00:34:395 (6) - 可以nc 不过无关紧要
00:47:728 (1) -
00:55:704 (4) - 去掉 5从这里开始
01:18:085 - 这加个note
01:52:966 (5) - 为了和前面一段一样要不要改成slider……?
02:19:156 (1) - 头往右拉点
02:40:466 (2) -

Normal
01:11:537 (4) - 略蛋疼
01:11:537 (4) - 加个note也没啥吧……要不把3也改成slider

sorry for delay
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