1. Breaking Down (4.95 stars, 426 notes)
2. Easy (2.24 stars, 188 notes)
3. Normal (3.51 stars, 243 notes)
4. Veela's Hard (4.57 stars, 309 notes)

Cobra wrote:

Yo, M4M

General
Offset is different in breaking down by 1 ._. Whaaa?? omg, I'll fix that
That's a lot of combo colors xD owhwhwhwh
Let's hope I don't have a seizure modding this map - thanks for that epilepsy warning okay..
Some of the storyboard text has little white dots around, looks reeeaaally ugly Gonna restart my hard work again ;___;

Abnormal
00:25:278 (2) - should be closer to (1) if i do that, DS problem... but i'll do a different way :/
00:32:662 (1) - unsnapped end okay
00:37:739 (3,4,1,2,3) - try using ctrl+shift+d for this. nah... i may break symmetry
00:46:278 (1,2) - uh, really confusing for beginners owwhh, gonna change the slider's direction
00:47:201 (2,3,4,5,6) - was ctrl+shift+d used? well.. ummm, no
01:01:970 (2,3,4,5,6) - ^ ^
01:36:816 (3,4) - move so they arent touching (1)? this is a scooter shoe symmetry X3 so no change, i'll change it if another modder says about this.
01:53:432 (3) - move so it doesnt touch (4)? okay
03:20:662 (1,2,3) - spinner instead no change, following vocals :/

Lost Control
No problems with this diff, but I suggest making the triple notes not straight all the time. This is what I mean: http://puu.sh/2MRqV.jpg
They are all straight . Nice diff though. i don't really know about me XD i love making things straight...

Breaking Down
This is also a good diff, but just one thing:
00:52:046 - silent/almost silent notes like this are a no-no, either change the pattern or up the volume i feel like i won't change it :l

that's it, good luck!

OEvil wrote:

Hi~
Sorry my mod sucks

[Skin/SB]

Missing SB Elements
daaaooowwnnn.jpg okay
introdown.jpg okay

Multiple .osb Files
There should only be one .osb file in a folder (this folder has 2). okay

SB Elements Not .png
break.jpg
darkendaown.jpg
intro.jpg
down.jpg
flash.jpg

All fixed.

[All .osu Files]

General

Inconsistency in EpilepsyWarning:
- [Abnormal] : 1
- [Breaking Down] :
- [Easy] : 1

Made an Epilepsy Warning as a SB, so no change

[Abnormal]

Snapping
Unsnapped inherited (green) sections at:
00:26:675 - snap to 00:26:662 okay

Edits
- 00:57:124 (1) - make it like this one: 00:56:201 (3) - If i do that, i may break symmetry somehow, no change

[Breaking Down]

Edits:
- 02:36:354 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - Make them audible changed a bit.

[Easy]

Edits
- 03:20:662 (4,5) - Make them audible The song ended quietly, so no change

GrayKaiser82 wrote:

OEvil wrote:

[All .osu Files]

General

Inconsistency in EpilepsyWarning:
- [Abnormal] : 1
- [Breaking Down] :
- [Easy] : 1

Made an Epilepsy Warning as a SB, so no change

1. Perfect ~ ^3^

1. eeeeeeeeeekkk ! perfectionist? (o.o)/

Gabe wrote:

:>

VeeLaHee104 wrote:

Hala! <3 Mutual mod <3

[General]
Activate the epilepsy warning. but i hope it's okay to not activate it 'cause of SB. OFC :3

[Easy]
01:26:201 (4,1,2) - Try a blanket like this? > http://puu.sh/3KQv7/6c59cf9823.png okay
02:52:047 (2,1) - Make a smooth blanket. naahhhh, about time

1. Perfect ~ ^3^

[Abnormal]
01:24:355 (1,2) - make it better blanket. It's already a better blanket.
01:27:586 (1,2) - swap nc no change, DH's line
01:30:816 (8) - Add whistle okay
02:02:201 (5) - Add finish okay
03:11:201 (5,1) - Small overlap okay

1. eeeeeeeeeekkk ! perfectionist? (o.o)/ hahahahaa, no XD

[Breaking down]
Nice, but make all "1/4 notes" a 0.4x Distant spacing. okay o~o

All diff perfect !! hope it ranked soon ^^ GL ~

Gabe wrote:

:>

smallboat wrote:

Hello , i'm from my queue accept your case , poor english , sor.

good song.

there are mod;


General
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bg ok . kiai time and offset are true.

SB is good . Well done .



there are mod ;

Easy
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Ok...Without any errors ~ !




Ab
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00:52:047 (4) - the slider end to 00:52:509 , add a slider at 00:52:739 (5) - end 00:52:970 No change, making this part consist to BD & Easy.

01:51:124 (3) - ^ well , Like with the above example . try it ! ^

03:18:816 (3) - volume 30 or 40 okay



Break
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SPOILER

00:31:277 (2) - front , add whistle okay
00:43:278 (5) - end , remove whistle okay
00:45:124 (6) - ^ okay
00:58:047 (6) - ^ okay
00:59:893 (3) - ^ okay
01:44:201 (6) - ^ okay
01:49:739 (5) - ^ okay
01:57:124 (6) - ^ okay
02:58:047 (6) - ^ okay

• seems fine. remove 'chinese' from Tag, it's already in Title

• OD+1
  
  00:36:355 (1) - adding a finish would be nice
  01:01:740 (1) - finish at slider's head?
  01:03:586 (3) - ^
  02:00:817 (1,3) - ^
  01:30:355 (5) - should be nc to follow previous combo pattern
  01:35:432 (1) - also finish
  01:48:816 (1,3) - only suggestion, make them identical with copy paste
  
  SPOILER

  
  03:20:662 (4,5) - idk only rhythm suggestion, deleting 03:21:586 (5) - and making 03:20:662 (4) - lasts until 03:21:586 - kinda fits the vocal more. and if you want, you can make a wave to accent the vocal

• HP+2/3
  OD is too low. OD+2/3
  tbh abnormal sounds like insane
  
  00:36:355 (1) - finish?
  00:49:739 (1,2) - maybe you can adjust (2) so they'll blanket better
  
  SPOILER

  
  00:58:739 (5) - finish at slider's tail
  01:02:201 (3) - finish at slider's head?
  01:03:124 (5) - finish at slider's tail?
  01:05:201 - maybe add a note here. there's an actual beat there in the music
  01:27:586 (1,2) - switch nc
  01:35:432 (1) - finish
  02:47:201 (4) - nc?
  02:58:047 (4) - finish at slider's tail
  03:09:586 (4) - nc, the combo is too long
  03:16:970 (4) - finish at slider's head?

• OD+1?
  
  00:23:892 (3) - moving this up a bit, maybe y:80 makes the flow smoother to me
  00:34:393 (6) - how about muting the slider's end or increasing the sv a bit?
  00:38:431 (1,2,3,4) - the jump is too intense for hard or is this a hard diff?
  00:40:509 (2) - add a note? like what you did at 00:56:892 (1,2,3) -
  00:46:277 (1,2) - idk but i prefer if this is a triplet or three circles rather than a circle and a slider
  01:01:970 (5) - finish at slider's tail seems nice
  01:42:816 (7) - finish at sliders head
  02:01:047 (5) - finish at slider's tail?
  02:40:047 (1,2) - idk but i don't like the anti-jump here
  02:44:893 (2) - idk only suggestion
  
  SPOILER

  
  02:47:201 (5) - nc?
  02:49:046 (9) - making this a 1/8 reversed slider which starts at 02:48:932 - ends at 02:49:047 - kinda fits the vocal
  02:58:508 (7) - finish at slider's head?
  03:13:508 (2) - finish at slider's tail?

AlpacaCokelat wrote:

hi~ sorry for being really late >.< got school and other stuffs
damn i love your sb <3 Thanks X333

[General]

• seems fine. remove 'chinese' from Tag, it's already in Title okay

[Easy]

• OD+1 No, gonna be a little hard for beginners..
  
  00:36:355 (1) - adding a finish would be nice okay
  01:01:740 (1) - finish at slider's head? nope, music is not strong enough..
  01:03:586 (3) - ^ ^
  02:00:817 (1,3) - ^ ^
  01:30:355 (5) - should be nc to follow previous combo pattern nahh.. music/vocal's line didn't change
  01:35:432 (1) - also finish okay
  01:48:816 (1,3) - only suggestion, make them identical with copy paste okay
  
  SPOILER

  
  03:20:662 (4,5) - idk only rhythm suggestion, deleting 03:21:586 (5) - and making 03:20:662 (4) - lasts until 03:21:586 - kinda fits the vocal more. and if you want, you can make a wave to accent the vocal Doesn't fit to me, not changing it

[Abnormal]

• HP+2/3 made it 3
  OD is too low. OD+2/3 nahh, gets harder
  tbh abnormal sounds like insane ugguuu
  
  00:36:355 (1) - finish? okay
  00:49:739 (1,2) - maybe you can adjust (2) so they'll blanket better nope, making an Egyptian eye symbol X3
  
  SPOILER

  
  00:58:739 (5) - finish at slider's tail okay
  01:02:201 (3) - finish at slider's head? nope, same like before
  01:03:124 (5) - finish at slider's tail? ^
  01:05:201 - maybe add a note here. there's an actual beat there in the music Don't want to follow the "vocals" here.
  01:27:586 (1,2) - switch nc okay
  01:35:432 (1) - finish okay
  02:47:201 (4) - nc? okay
  02:58:047 (4) - finish at slider's tail same like before
  03:09:586 (4) - nc, the combo is too long okay
  03:16:970 (4) - finish at slider's head? same like before

[Breaking Down]

• OD+1? okay
  
  00:23:892 (3) - moving this up a bit, maybe y:80 makes the flow smoother to me okay
  00:34:393 (6) - how about muting the slider's end or increasing the sv a bit? muting will be a little non-audible, raising the sv doesn't fit here. so not changing this.
  00:38:431 (1,2,3,4) - the jump is too intense for hard or is this a hard diff? Insane duhh..
  00:40:509 (2) - add a note? like what you did at 00:56:892 (1,2,3) - whhaa?? it's already added as a slider o.o
  00:46:277 (1,2) - idk but i prefer if this is a triplet or three circles rather than a circle and a slider making a kick would be better here.
  01:01:970 (5) - finish at slider's tail seems nice same like before
  01:42:816 (7) - finish at sliders head okay
  02:01:047 (5) - finish at slider's tail? same like before
  02:40:047 (1,2) - idk but i don't like the anti-jump here uhhh huh
  02:44:893 (2) - idk only suggestion a bit ruined, but i'll do it on my own way.
  
  SPOILER

  
  02:47:201 (5) - nc? nope, part of the pattern
  02:49:046 (9) - making this a 1/8 reversed slider which starts at 02:48:932 - ends at 02:49:047 - kinda fits the vocal 1/8 doesn't fit to me, i'll make on 1/4 anyways.
  02:58:508 (7) - finish at slider's head? nahh, same like before
  03:13:508 (2) - finish at slider's tail? okay

idk this is a personal opinion but in normal it's kinda weird when you use multiple-reversed slider, for example, in here 00:52:047 - . i'm kinda okay when it comes to hard diff. but maybe in normal, you can make it a wiggly slider. kinda fits more or idk please ignore me i haven't mod for a while

anyway. this is awesome
good luck~

-Kirito wrote:

hi From Kritio's Modding Queuse (Normal / M4M)

[General]
good image quality Download okay
"Hard" difficulty adding I think three diffs is enough for a 3min song. but I'll consider this..

[Easy]
good:D

[Normal]
AR+1 okay
OD +3 I don't think so...
00:31:739 (5) - NC add no change, part of pattern
00:33:124 (1) - NC remove ^
01:51:124 (3) - 1/1 slide change nope, rhythm changes
02:16:047 (1) - ^ ^
03:18:355 (1,2) - delete no change, consisting with the other diffs

[Breaking Down]
00:23:431 (1,2,3) - change https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1035165 nice.. okay
00:28:970 (4) - NC add okay
00:40:970 (3) - NC add part of pattern
00:45:586 (7) - ^ okay
00:51:586 (7) - ^ I'll consider this part, if another modder mentions this, will change it
01:01:970 (5) - ^ okay
02:10:509 (5) - NC add okay
02:17:892 (5) - ^ okay

GL SJ song

10crystalmask01 wrote:

Ello, random mod here o̿ ̭ o̿ OHHH, NOT YOU AGAIN~ (*Q*)

[General]
Don't forget to turn on the Epilepsy Warning (Found under the Design tab,when you click on song setup). i don't really know if it's okay to add two EW, i already added on the SB.. i'll probably consider this

[Easy]
OD +1, 0 is just silly okay
AR +1 okay

....ouch

I'm really sorry, but this map just isn't playable

Don't worry, it has nothing to do with the diffs. It's just the SB that's the problem...to be honest, I can't even bear looking at the board when Kai time comes on.
I have a REALLY big suggestion in regards to the storyboard. Can you please get rid of some of the flashes? My eyes hurt when I'm seeing the screen constantly flashing white per beat. There's no way anyone could play this while enduring that overused screen effect.
Please reduce the use of the white BG to this pattern if you can:

I thank you to the bottom of my heart if you fix this problem
okay, I'll try to remove the useless flashes. BUT some of them will stay as it is. And reduce flash's opacity from 100% to 70% since it's too bright for the players, thanks for your suggestions!!

Will recheck later!

Lapis Aoki wrote:

Hewwo~ Arabian mod~ :>
[Easy]
01:31:278 -Add note. Giving a player a preparation for the spinner
[Normal]
00:27:355 -Move it a little bit beside and a little bit down. okay
00:32:893 -Spinner till 00:34:278 Doesn't fit great when the slider's end is nearby the spinner on normal diffs
00:48:355 -Make the slider straight. Symmetry will broke
01:47:432 -Make the slider straight. okay, but made it a little curve
02:02:201 -Make the slider straight. ^
03:16:970 -Whistle. The rhythm might be weird o.o
[Breaking Down]
02:39:355 -Remove clap (Or maybe you don't have to remove clap, but also whistle is also good, idk) okay

10crystalmask01 wrote:

Actually Kiiwa is correct. You don't need to put (Chinese version) in the title, because Super Junior-M itself is a mandarin idol group. Your getting the artist confused with the Korean idol group Super Junior.

Sources: http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Super_Junior-M
http://malaysia.answers.yahoo.com/quest ... 541AAs4VT6