This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on samedi 2 novembre 2013 at 00:06:40

Artist: Parkway Drive
Title: Sleepwalker
Tags: Parkway Drive Sleepwalker Steelwix
BPM: 170,01
Filesize: 6242kb
Play Time: 02:48
Difficulties Available:

1. Catch the walker (5 stars, 505 notes)
2. Get Up! (4,69 stars, 290 notes)
3. Hell (5 stars, 577 notes)
4. Sleep (1,72 stars, 134 notes)
5. Straight in the masses (4,99 stars, 571 notes)

Download: Parkway Drive - Sleepwalker
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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This is my second beatmap submitted, and my first beatmap of metal! I'm a beginner to set a map, I need people to judge it!
Difficulties :
Sleep : A very easy difficulty for beginners
Get Up! : A Hard map for players who want to increase their gameplay
Straight in the masses : An Insane map not very hard to finish
Catch the walker : A Map for CtB players (not very hard)
Hell : A very hard map
Thanks :
-[ DamnAll ]- (22/03/2013)
PhaZ (01/04/2013)
Cobra (27/04/2013)
evillander (12/05/2013)
10crystalmask01(07/08/2013)
UndeadBananaz 19/08/2013)

i will help you mod the map a little

i have moved some beats other than that its great...
here is the modded ver. http://adf.ly/Khqhx

Thanks

Hey, Here is my few simple, random mods.

[For all diff and Map!]

Your map is so nice. but your BG image is 1228x768. This have to be lower than 1024x768 So I cut this.

You didn't set your map's preview point. Set it!

Always use distance snap!

[Sleep]

HD 3 CS 3 OD 3 please.
02:16:621 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - Something special? not this circles.

[Get up!]

HP 4 CS 4 AR good OD 5 or 6.
01:20:860 (1,2,3,4,5) - Confusing for hard diff.

[Straight in the masses]
(Hard sh*t lol )

HP 5 is much better, OD too high, I think.
01:17:726 (1) - Listens weird

Good luck & Happy mapping !

Thanks

you dont have same timinig on all diffs i think
change topic to "Parkway Drive - Sleepwalker [osu!|CTB]"
hit ctrl+shift+a and fix all the unsnapped objects.. you have to do that :S
you still dont have a preview point. go to timing and select "set preveiew point"

I have changed the part 00:56:000 - 01:18:000
rhythm is accorded with all difficulties

[General]You can remove all the tags, they are already in the Title/Artist/Creator info. No need to add them in the tags.
You need to add a Preview Point. Go to a high point in the song, click Timing > Set Current Position as Preview Point. Make sure to do this on all diffs!

Good luck with your map.

Try to make a map with a lot of streams, hard metal songs are mostly streamy....

I will do it

Further more: The map looks interesting, it misses a nice stream or very "insane" difficulty which would be nice for songs like these.

Love you map style, keep up the good work!

Hell difficulty is a bit too "Insane" it still has to be readable.
Try to make the circles a bit bigger since it's else not immediatly noticeable where they are.
The speed can be a bit faster if you want.

take an example at these maps:
http://osu.ppy.sh/s/47846
http://osu.ppy.sh/s/32661
http://osu.ppy.sh/s/9823
http://osu.ppy.sh/s/72834
http://osu.ppy.sh/s/67895

Thanks for making the map!

But I wanted an very Insane map when I called it "Hell"
What is wrong exactly? Approach circle is too fast? Too big jumps? Circles are too littles?

The buttons needs to be 1 bit bigger, and they must come a bit slower.
Also, the space between the circles in the "Stream" or too far from eachother, they need to be a bit closer to eachother.

P.S.: Don't give me kudosu for everything I say!

Ok, I will modificate Size and approach circle!

I give kudosu when someone help or advise me xD

Le random mod!


Hope this helps!

GENERAL

I don't understand exaclty what is "Unherited timing points"

SLEEP

00:13:538 - Try putting the slider at 00:16:361 (3) - here as well, for steady rhythm.
00:17:772 (4) - NC
00:34:708 (3) - ^
00:37:530 - I suggest changing this slider to look something like this: Slider changed
00:48:831 (1) - NC I don't very like this skin for slider, but isn't a problem!
01:00:212 (4,1) - Really bad overlap consider re-modeling these two sliders!
01:02:884 (2) - If this is going to overlap the 4th slider, at least make its tail perfectly overlapped on the other sliders tail.
01:06:445 (1,2) - Should look similar in shape for better symmetry.
01:08:820 (1,2) - ^
01:11:194 (1,2) - ^That was hard, but it's done ;D
01:34:271 (5) - Try to avoid overlapping hit circles in Easy mode
01:37:094 (5) - ^
01:49:093 (1,2) - Could look more symmetrical.
01:54:740 (1,2) - ^
02:16:621 (1,2,3) - You could've totally made something really cool here with these 3 sliders! I have not many ideas for this part, it's too slow, but I have changed something D:
02:24:386 (4,5) - Overlap, re-arrange them.
02:28:290 (2,3,4,5) - Should have a similar shape (except they're all rotating at different angles.
02:36:662 (4) - NC
This diff needs alot of improvement! I feel that in some parts of the map, you could've done better.
Tip: There are parts where you could do some symmetry with your objects! See for yourself!
I will improve this map with others players, I don't want to judge myself D:

GET UP

00:31:532- A little symmetry suggestion Done, but it's little bit more spread on the screen xD

01:01:698 (1,2,3,4) - Sliders could be made better, but I'll let you see for yourself.
01:06:445 (1,2,3,4) - ^
01:28:977 (4,1) - Bad distance spacing between these two
01:40:976 (1,2,3,4) - Could be made better I've improved my idea
01:49:093 - Needs better symmetry: I've changed two sliders, but... it's weird xD
02:21:739- Continue mapping from here, a break here isn't necessary.

Slightly better then the previous mode, However, I think there are certain sliders here that you could've arranged better to make a more appealing map!
I'll see later to work on sliders

STRAIGHT IN THE MASSES

00:26:244 (2) - This slider totally ruins the symmetry here, re-model it please
00:42:843 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - The last few sliders are slightly off, but Nice symmetry here! Thanks ;D I've moved (7)
01:37:976 Try this:Done
02:10:533 (5) - NC
02:11:239 (1) - Remove NC
02:28:808 (2,3,4,5,6) - It'd look nice if all 4 of these sliders are the same (but in different angles).
02:41:666 (1) - Bad overlap

All right! Thank you alot for this mod, I will work quickly on Hell!
Check regulary the map, when you don't see "Work in progress" on the wallpaper, mod it! I stay here ;D

Oh! If you're searching someone to mod one of your map, I can!

And of course, forgive my english, I'm French and schools have got bad teacher. I learn english by myself è_é

Steelwix wrote:

[GENERAL]

I don't understand exaclty what is "Unherited timing points"

Unherited timing points, are when you timing point(s) in each diff are not the same.
If you look on your timeline you'll see red lines, which marks the timing points.
- Ugh sorry for the bad quality.
Check each of your diff and you'll see. When you go To your Timing Setup Panel, click the Timing points tab, and you'd see this:
[Sleep]

[Get up]

[Straight In the masses]

[Hell]


As I've said before, they all need to be the same.

All right! Thank you alot for this mod, I will work quickly on Hell!
Check regulary the map, when you don't see "Work in progress" on the wallpaper, mod it! I stay here ;D

Oh! If you're searching someone to mod one of your map, I can! Thanks, I'll keep note of that

And of course, forgive my english, I'm French and schools have got bad teacher. I learn english by myself è_é Aww it's okay D:!

Now my mod for

Hmm, this mod looks like it still needs a lot of work
But hey, I did take a look back at your other diffs, and it does look like your improving!
I'll definitely check back in the future, if I actually remember lol.

Until then, good luck~!

My message has not been sent o_o
Soooo, I improve Hell with your suggestions. You can come back later and see them.
And I have accorded all of unherited timing points

Hi, decided to mod your map as a way of thanking you for your help on mine. (and because I like Parkway Drive lol) It's my first real mod but I hope it's helpful.

So your timing sections are not the same for every difficulty. I guess you changed the timing for one difficulty and then forgot to do it for the rest? Make sure the timing points are the same for every difficulty. Also, you have a lot of unsnapped objects in all difficulties. Just run AiMod (Ctrl+Shift+A) for all diffs and fix all the objects that are not snapped. (even though you already know all that, lol) You'll also have to fix the other problems AiMod mentions: for example, the tags have to be the same for every difficulty and kiai times shouldn't be too short / spammed. Aside from these fundamental problems, there are a few suggestions I have for your map:

Get Up!
Mostly there are a few issues with object placement / distance between notes. For example, some of your notes that have the same time space between them will not have the same distance, and it can get a little confusing for the player. I suggest you use the distance snap for the entire song, and only turn it off for jumps.
00:24:476 (1,2,3) - move these 3 notes a little closer together.
00:35:413 (4,5,6,7,8) - notes 4 and 8 are farther away from the rest, even though they have the same time between them. So, move 4 closer to 5 and 8 closer to 7.
01:21:565 (3,4) - same thing as above, i think it should follow the pattern, 3 needs to be closer to 4.
02:29:679 (1,2,3,4,5) - these notes need to have a little more space between them.
02:30:722 (1) - you could add a note here.

Straight in the masses
Same thing as previous difficulty, i think you need to move some of the objects so that they have the same distance between them if they have the same time between them. Spacing isn't as strict for Hard / Insane difficulties but i still think it's important for good map flow.
00:30:489 (1,2,3) - i think this combo start is too close to the previous one, maybe move it a bit farther away?
00:40:729 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - try to arrange these notes a little better, so that they have the same space between them
03:00:175 (2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3) - try moving these notes a little further from each other, like this combo for example -> 03:13:499 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9)

Hell
Well not much to say about this one since it's supposed to be hard, the only thing i didn't really like about it are a few streams:
00:21:127 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - I think the spacing between the notes on this stream is too big. It's not that the stream is too hard, i just don't think it fits very well.
02:20:502 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - same as above
02:26:149 (4,5,6,7,8,9,10,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - same as above
I don't think these streams are bad but i think the map would "feel" better if they had a little shorter distance between notes, like the other shorter streams on this diff. It's up to you.

Great map, great song. Good luck!

Mh yeah, I felt differently each difficulties, I will mod all of that this week end, I guess. Sorry for my late reply!
Any suggestion is good

Ello! ^^ Here for a re-check!


Good luck!

I'm sorry, but this week end, my family was come, so I haven't could mod, I'll try when I have time :c

UndeadBananaz
GET UP : I reduced some spaces.
STRAIGHT IN THE MASSES : Distance snap is willingly messy, because I wanted to make something which is horrible. If someone talk about distance snap for Straight in the masses, I'll change that. But I have worked on you propositions
HELL : Streams improved

Thanks for mod, support and encouragements

man, this song gave me an ear-boner
can I do a GD?

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