Lady Gaga - Paparazzi (Speed Up Ver.) · forum

Gero

Joined March 2012

Gero 2013-04-04T11:19:58+00:00

XinCrin wrote:
Gero's Hard

00:17:542 (4) Slider nada simétrico ,intenta arreglarlo Fixed
00:29:903 (1) Comenzar en un lugar de 1/2 tan rápido en una hard , realmente es algo que llega de sorpresa y de seguro hara confundir a mas de un jugador :/ . En mi esto fluye y juega muchisimo mejor si el slider termina en 00:29:216 y agregas un circle aqui : 00:29:674 , estaria mejor en mi opinion
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Emm... supongo que es bueno lo que sugieres pero no me gusta, mancu me habia dicho de esta parte asi que lo movi un poco mas al centro asi que no creo que haya problema, no cambios
00:42:952 (1) Remueve el NC de este circle es totalmente innecesario , o tiene alguna razón especial para ponerlo ? Fixed
01:11:910 (1) Estaria mejor si quitas el Finish de este spinner , suena algo incomodo ya que la cancion fue silenciada en ese instante
En mi opinion Suena bien, no cambios

Suerte ~

Gracias por el mod

My Diff:

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KokoroStudiox3

1,272 posts

Joined April 2011

KokoroStudiox3 2013-04-04T19:21:39+00:00

todo echo

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nvrsebas

129 posts

Joined August 2012

Topic Starter

nvrsebas 2013-04-04T21:43:42+00:00

XinCrin wrote:
Well . . a spanish mod is better for you

Easy

00:21:891 (3) Mueve este circle a x:320 y:240 para hacer un blanket perfecto con (2) y luego mueves 00:22:349 (4) a x:280 y:304 , para hacer un buen blanket con (2) , (3) nope , me gusta asi xD
00:27:385 En mi opinion estas dejando un lugar muy vacio aqui , ademas estas haciendo una dificultad fácil , estaria bien si lo completas con un slider grande en 00:26:927 con un reverse y recortando 00:26:012 (3) en 1/2 , como se ve en la imagen : Me gusta asi gracias.
SPOILER
00:31:963 (1) Elimina el NewCombo de este slider , ya que siguiendo tus patrones de NCs el NewCombo deberia estar aqui : 00:33:337 (2)
01:08:133 (3) Mueve este slider 1 grid a la derecha para que el blanket con (1) este bien hecho
01:09:964 (1) Fluye mejor si haces este slider de manera circular , despues de haber hecho varios slider circulares . Tomalo en cuenta , estaria mejor en mi opinion Fixed
SPOILER
01:11:910 (1) Estaria mejor si quitas el Finish de este spinner , suena algo incomodo ya que la cancion fue silenciada en ese instante
fixed

eLtXXx's Normal

00:16:397 (3) Mueve este circle a x:140 y:176 para que este bien hecho el blanket con 00:16:855 (1)
00:26:698 (5) En mi opinion este slider fluye realmente mucho mejor si termina hacia abajo
SPOILER
00:42:952 (2) Sé que estas siguiendo tus patrones de claps , pero el clap que suena al comienzo del slider se escucha mal , porque la musica aqui es muy baja , deberias quitar este clap , suena mejor en mi opinion
00:50:964 (3) Estoy seguro que un clap deberia sonar al final de este slider , ya que olvidaste seguir tus patrones de claps . Agregalo
01:11:910 (1) Estaria mejor si quitas el Finish de este spinner , suena algo incomodo ya que la cancion fue silenciada en ese instante
Gero's Hard

00:17:542 (4) Slider nada simétrico ,intenta arreglarlo
00:29:903 (1) Comenzar en un lugar de 1/2 tan rápido en una hard , realmente es algo que llega de sorpresa y de seguro hara confundir a mas de un jugador :/ . En mi esto fluye y juega muchisimo mejor si el slider termina en 00:29:216 y agregas un circle aqui : 00:29:674 , estaria mejor en mi opinion
SPOILER
00:42:952 (1) Remueve el NC de este circle es totalmente innecesario , o tiene alguna razón especial para ponerlo ?
01:11:910 (1) Estaria mejor si quitas el Finish de este spinner , suena algo incomodo ya que la cancion fue silenciada en ese instante
Suerte ~

XinCrin

2,846 posts

Joined January 2012

XinCrin 2013-04-04T21:56:25+00:00

■00:21:891 (3) Mueve este circle a x:320 y:240 para hacer un blanket perfecto con (2) y luego mueves 00:22:349 (4) a x:280 y:304 , para hacer un buen blanket con (2) , (3) nope , me gusta asi xD

Solo dije que movieras algunas cosas para que el blanket este bien hecho , ya que el que tienes el blanket esta mal hecho . . .

nvrsebas

129 posts

Joined August 2012

Topic Starter

nvrsebas 2013-04-04T22:07:16+00:00

Update

(gero la proxima me dejas el archivo como tigre que se me iso super complicado copiar y pegar por partes ._.)

Gero

4,438 posts

Joined March 2012

Gero 2013-04-05T00:56:34+00:00

shankishiro wrote:
Update (gero la proxima me dejas el archivo como tigre que se me iso super complicado copiar y pegar por partes ._.)

olvide ponerle codigo XD gomen shank!

mancuso_JM_

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mancuso_JM_ 2013-04-12T11:10:24+00:00

The map itself is pretty good actually, but the mp3 is still bad to me. I'll try to find a better mp3 for you.
I'll recheck your map afterwards

Gero

4,438 posts

Joined March 2012

Gero 2013-04-14T01:08:13+00:00

mancusojuanmattos wrote:
The map itself is pretty good actually, but the mp3 is still bad to me. I'll try to find a better mp3 for you.
I'll recheck your map afterwards

Doy gracias de antemano Realmente estuvimos buscando mucho y no encontramos uno mejor T.T!

nvrsebas

129 posts

Joined August 2012

Topic Starter

nvrsebas 2013-04-14T01:34:13+00:00

mancusojuanmattos wrote:
The map itself is pretty good actually, but the mp3 is still bad to me. I'll try to find a better mp3 for you.
I'll recheck your map afterwards

Muchas gracias , no pienso decir que me mate buscando un mp3 porque sinceramente tenia pensado borrar el mapa , muchas gracias a Gero y Zeroarg por el mp3 actual , y tambien te doy las gracias de ante mano y.. Felicitaciones por el bat

PD: mas trabajo genial xD

Gero

4,438 posts

Joined March 2012

Gero 2013-04-20T20:47:45+00:00

This is Sad T.T :C

HellDawn

1,035 posts

Joined April 2010

HellDawn 2013-05-07T13:59:36+00:00

Revive it.

Gero

4,438 posts

Joined March 2012

Gero 2013-05-15T18:58:46+00:00

HellDawn wrote:
Revive it.

Please e.e ya te di el nuevo MP3 anda revivelo <3 yo te ayudo <3

nvrsebas

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Topic Starter

nvrsebas 2013-05-15T19:02:47+00:00

Gero wrote:
HellDawn wrote:
Revive it.

Please e.e ya te di el nuevo MP3 anda revivelo <3 yo te ayudo <3

Updated ~ Gracias Gero

!

mancuso_JM_

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mancuso_JM_ 2013-05-15T22:40:18+00:00

So, I'm here. I prefer to do it in spanish

[Easy:]

• Volumen: Reduce el Volumen de los Hitsounds en las secciones de 90% a un 65%. Actualmente todos los hitsounds se sienten muy altos

• 00:15:097 (1,2,1) - Reduce el tamaño de estos Sliders en 1/2, enfatiza mejor las vocales en todos los casos. Si haces esto, agrega un Whistle al final de todos los Sliders
• 00:20:634 (2,3) - En este Slider, reduce el tamaño del Slider en 1/2, luego de esto agrega una Repeticion en este Slider y elimina la Nota en 00:22:018 (3). Ritmicamente te va a quedar un patron mas o menos asi:

SPOILER

• 00:27:555 (4) - Al comienzo del Slider, no aparece ningun sonido en la musica. Este Slider deberia comenzar en 00:28:017 y terminar en 00:28:709. La primer parte este slider realmente innecesaria
• 00:42:783 (1,1) - La distancia que hay entre el Spinner y la Nota es algo chica para esta dificultad. Reduce el tamaño del Spinner en 1/2 (es decir tu spinner debe terminar en 00:43:936), con eso estarias solucionando el problema creo
• 00:48:320 (5) - Hace tu comboing mas consistente si agregas un new Combo en este Slider y lo eliminas de la Nota en 00:50:166 (1)
• 01:03:086 (5) - Por la misma razon que en la sugerencia anterior, agrega un New Combo en esta Nota y eliminalo de 01:04:932 (1)
• 01:10:469 (5) - Agrega un Whistle al final del Slider, sigue bien las vocales

[eLtXXx's Normal:]

• 00:52:704 (2) - Me parece que el uso del tick Rojo (1/2 tick) es innecesario al comienzo del Slider, es mejor si sigues las vocales en lugar de hacer una mezcla Instrumental/Vocal ya que es una Normal. Este Slider deberia empezar en 00:52:935 (1/2 Adelante a lo que estaba) y debe terminar en 00:53:396
• 00:58:703 (3) - Al final del Slider deberia ser un Clap en lugar de un Whistle por consistencia
• 01:01:702 (1) - Deberias remover este New Combo, juega mejor sin el
• 01:03:086 (1) - *Nazi* Este Slider se veria mejor si mueves este Slider hacia el medio de la pantalla. No te olvides de arreglar el Spacing entre los objetos si haces esto

[Gero's Hard:]

• Volumen: Incrementa el Volumen de los Hitsounds hasta 60%, se sienten bajo

• 00:19:480 (4) - Deberias agregar un Whistle al comienzo del Slider por consistencia
• 00:26:863 (2) - Puedes arreglar un poco la forma de este Slider? Se ve desprolija y random esa forma

Ha mejorado mucho este map desde la primera vez que lo vi
Como es tu primer mapa no te voy a molestar con que hallas hecho solo 1 dificultad, y que esta sea la dificultad mas facil del mapset pero espero ver mas dificultades de tu parte en tus futuros proyectos

Sientete libre de llamarme de nuevo, luego de haber arreglado mi mod

Gero

4,438 posts

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Gero 2013-05-15T22:57:13+00:00

mancusojuanmattos wrote:
[Gero's Hard:]

• Volumen: Incrementa el Volumen de los Hitsounds hasta 60%, se sienten bajo Fixed

• 00:19:480 (4) - Deberias agregar un Whistle al comienzo del Slider por consistencia Fixed
• 00:26:863 (2) - Puedes arreglar un poco la forma de este Slider? Se ve desprolija y random esa forma Fixed

Gracias por el mod

My Diff:

osu file format v12

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AudioFilename: Lady Gaga - Paparazzi (Speed Up Ver.).mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 44325
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 1

[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 1.1
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4

[Metadata]
Title:Paparazzi (Speed Up Ver.)
TitleUnicode:Paparazzi (Speed Up Ver.)
Artist:Lady Gaga
ArtistUnicode:Lady Gaga
Creator:shankishiro
Version:Gero's Hard
Source:
Tags:Gero eLtigreXXx Remix DJ Fame Monster The Fame
BeatmapID:225356
BeatmapSetID:79794

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HPDrainRate:6
CircleSize:4
OverallDifficulty:6
ApproachRate:7
SliderMultiplier:1.6
SliderTickRate:1

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//Break Periods
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nvrsebas

129 posts

Joined August 2012

Topic Starter

nvrsebas 2013-05-15T23:49:28+00:00

mancusojuanmattos wrote:
So, I'm here. I prefer to do it in spanish

[Easy:]

• Volumen: Reduce el Volumen de los Hitsounds en las secciones de 90% a un 65%. Actualmente todos los hitsounds se sienten muy altos

• 00:15:097 (1,2,1) - Reduce el tamaño de estos Sliders en 1/2, enfatiza mejor las vocales en todos los casos. Si haces esto, agrega un Whistle al final de todos los Sliders
• 00:20:634 (2,3) - En este Slider, reduce el tamaño del Slider en 1/2, luego de esto agrega una Repeticion en este Slider y elimina la Nota en 00:22:018 (3). Ritmicamente te va a quedar un patron mas o menos asi:
SPOILER
• 00:27:555 (4) - Al comienzo del Slider, no aparece ningun sonido en la musica. Este Slider deberia comenzar en 00:28:017 y terminar en 00:28:709. La primer parte este slider realmente innecesaria
• 00:42:783 (1,1) - La distancia que hay entre el Spinner y la Nota es algo chica para esta dificultad. Reduce el tamaño del Spinner en 1/2 (es decir tu spinner debe terminar en 00:43:936), con eso estarias solucionando el problema creo
• 00:48:320 (5) - Hace tu comboing mas consistente si agregas un new Combo en este Slider y lo eliminas de la Nota en 00:50:166 (1)
• 01:03:086 (5) - Por la misma razon que en la sugerencia anterior, agrega un New Combo en esta Nota y eliminalo de 01:04:932 (1)
• 01:10:469 (5) - Agrega un Whistle al final del Slider, sigue bien las vocales

[eLtXXx's Normal:]

• 00:52:704 (2) - Me parece que el uso del tick Rojo (1/2 tick) es innecesario al comienzo del Slider, es mejor si sigues las vocales en lugar de hacer una mezcla Instrumental/Vocal ya que es una Normal. Este Slider deberia empezar en 00:52:935 (1/2 Adelante a lo que estaba) y debe terminar en 00:53:396
• 00:58:703 (3) - Al final del Slider deberia ser un Clap en lugar de un Whistle por consistencia
• 01:01:702 (1) - Deberias remover este New Combo, juega mejor sin el
• 01:03:086 (1) - *Nazi* Este Slider se veria mejor si mueves este Slider hacia el medio de la pantalla. No te olvides de arreglar el Spacing entre los objetos si haces esto

[Gero's Hard:]

• Volumen: Incrementa el Volumen de los Hitsounds hasta 60%, se sienten bajo

• 00:19:480 (4) - Deberias agregar un Whistle al comienzo del Slider por consistencia
• 00:26:863 (2) - Puedes arreglar un poco la forma de este Slider? Se ve desprolija y random esa forma

Ha mejorado mucho este map desde la primera vez que lo vi
Como es tu primer mapa no te voy a molestar con que hallas hecho solo 1 dificultad, y que esta sea la dificultad mas facil del mapset pero espero ver mas dificultades de tu parte en tus futuros proyectos
Sientete libre de llamarme de nuevo, luego de haber arreglado mi mod

Todo fixed gracias por la ayuda mancu o3o

Update!

Gero

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Gero 2013-05-15T23:52:24+00:00

GO GO GO!!! \O3O/ PARTY HARD!! XD

mancuso_JM_

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mancuso_JM_ 2013-05-17T22:42:34+00:00

Meh.. Another bug in the AiMod

. It said that Gero's Hard has different uninherited timing point comparing with the other diffs. (Remember that if you will mod the map)

At my part, I rechecked everything again and we just fixed the Volume in 2 Green Lines (Inherited timing points) in Gero's Hard to be consistent with the other difficulties via IRC.
I liked your Easy diff. so, why not give it a try? xD
So, I'll give you a Burbuja!

Buena suerte con el rank, shank! :3

Gero

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Gero 2013-05-18T00:27:33+00:00

Gracias

! Vamos <3!

XinCrin

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Joined January 2012

XinCrin 2013-05-20T19:41:53+00:00

Oh , It's bubbled

Go! Go!

HellDawn

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Joined April 2010

HellDawn 2013-05-23T11:30:40+00:00

Some suggestions before the ranking ;_;

Easy;

00:24:325 (1,2,3) - 2 grid down because 1. slider touching hp bar so its not good.
00:55:703 (1) - whistle at begining and last, Because you already put whistle previous slider.
01:05:393 (4) - Put whistle last

Normal

00:20:172 (4,1) - remove whistle from 4. slider because you mistaken, you have to put 1. slider at begining.

Hard

01:02:164 (2,4) - Spam whistles ? At least you can remove whistle 2 and 4, it will be good -_-

GO GO RANK.

Last edited by HellDawn 2013-05-24T18:42:26+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

mancuso_JM_

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mancuso_JM_ 2013-05-24T10:19:18+00:00

Feel free to fix HellDawn's mod and call me back for a rebubble then

HellDawn

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HellDawn 2013-05-24T18:44:15+00:00

mancusojuanmattos wrote:
Feel free to fix HellDawn's mod and call me back for a rebubble then

You dont need !

nvrsebas

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Topic Starter

nvrsebas 2013-05-24T23:29:11+00:00

HellDawn wrote:
Some suggestions before the ranking ;_;

Easy;

00:24:325 (1,2,3) - 2 grid down because 1. slider touching hp bar so its not good. it's minimal no change
00:55:703 (1) - whistle at begining and last, Because you already put whistle previous slider. No
01:05:393 (4) - Put whistle last Nope

Normal

00:20:172 (4,1) - remove whistle from 4. slider because you mistaken, you have to put 1. slider at begining.

Hard

01:02:164 (2,4) - Spam whistles ? At least you can remove whistle 2 and 4, it will be good -_- Gero say: I like this now , no change

GO GO RANK.

Thanks

Kei

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Kei 2013-05-27T16:54:03+00:00

General

You could use some other hitsound to follow the drum sound. I suggest you to use this hitsound. You have to enable "custom overrides" in the song setup. Use this as normal-hitnormal (as it's already named): http://puu.sh/32jyp.wav. Sounds perfect with the music and gives the hitsounds some originality imo. A bit more of variety rather than only whistles and claps.
The approachcircle looks pixelated. Please make it smoother, if possible.
Examples

[Easy]

00:24:325 (1) - Like HellDawn said this touches the HP bar, please move it some grids down. Even if the change if minimal try to make all the changes necessary to improve your map.
00:42:783 (1) - Really dislike this spinner.. sounds weird. It's here so it doesnt end too early before 00:44:629 (1) but it sounds odd like this.. I think here you shouldn't have used a spinner.. a spinner at the end of the song is enough imo. A simple slider here would have been better than using a spinner. This is my personal opinion though.
00:44:629 (1,3) - This pattern looks ugly like this because 00:44:629 (1) has different shape than 00:46:474 (3). Please consider copying 00:44:629 (1)'s shape to make this pattern visually better, like this:
SPOILER

[Normal]

00:20:172 (4,1) - Instead of using a whistle at 00:20:172 (4)'s end try to remove the whistle, add it to 00:20:172 (4)'s start instead and then add a whistle to 00:20:634 (1)'s start. Sounds much better imo.
00:22:249 (3,4) - ^ Similar here. Sounds better with the vocals if you remove whistle at 00:22:249 (3) and add it to 00:22:480 (4)'s start instead.
00:43:244 (2) - This clap sounds afwul at this part. It's a very calm part. Try adding whistles instead. You use the claps to follow the instrumental, and here only the voice can be heard!

[Hard]

00:42:552 (1,2) - This small antijump looks a bit out of place since it's the only antijump you made in the whole diff. My suggestion is stacking 00:42:552 (1,2,3) for a neater look o3o
00:46:244 (1) - (nazi) I don't like how this slider end gets covered a bit up by 00:45:552 (4)'s curve. If you change a bit the curve of (4) you can avoid this easily, like this. (I know that in my example the blanket isn't perfect, it's just an example)
SPOILER
00:53:627 (2) - More nazi stuff becase I can xD. Move this slider a grid to the left to improve this blanket.
01:04:240 (2) - ^ And this one too.
________________

Not bad.. call me back. I'm sure mancuso told you already but I'll say it anyway: next time try to map more difficulties by yourself!

Gero

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Gero 2013-05-28T03:50:03+00:00

Kei wrote:
[Hard]
00:42:552 (1,2) - This small antijump looks a bit out of place since it's the only antijump you made in the whole diff. My suggestion is stacking 00:42:552 (1,2,3) for a neater look o3o Nupe nupe I do not like the look of stacked :<
00:46:244 (1) - (nazi) I don't like how this slider end gets covered a bit up by 00:45:552 (4)'s curve. If you change a bit the curve of (4) you can avoid this easily, like this. (I know that in my example the blanket isn't perfect, it's just an example) Fixed
SPOILER
00:53:627 (2) - More nazi stuff becase I can xD. Move this slider a grid to the left to improve this blanket. Fixed
01:04:240 (2) - ^ And this one too. Fixed
________________
i don't will use the hitsounds ,i not like the sound of change from normal to soft Sorry! :c

Not bad.. call me back. I'm sure mancuso told you already but I'll say it anyway: next time try to map more difficulties by yourself!

Thanks a Lot For The Mod <3 Kei-Chan

Pa-Pa Paparazzi!

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Kei

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Joined May 2010

Kei 2013-05-28T03:52:22+00:00

About the hitsound: Sure, it was only a idea I had. You can keep it as it is right now

KokoroStudiox3

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Joined April 2011

KokoroStudiox3 2013-05-28T04:02:02+00:00

http://puu.sh/32LnE.osu

Gero

4,438 posts

Joined March 2012

Gero 2013-05-28T04:02:51+00:00

Go Please :<

nvrsebas

129 posts

Joined August 2012

Topic Starter

nvrsebas 2013-05-28T04:04:06+00:00

Kei wrote:
General
You could use some other hitsound to follow the drum sound. I suggest you to use this hitsound. You have to enable "custom overrides" in the song setup. Use this as normal-hitnormal (as it's already named): http://puu.sh/32jyp.wav. Sounds perfect with the music and gives the hitsounds some originality imo. A bit more of variety rather than only whistles and claps. Como Gero ya te contesto , el cambio de normal a soft suena muy mal
The approachcircle looks pixelated. Please make it smoother, if possible. Este skin ya esta usado en varias canciones rankeadas asi que no creo que aya problema con eso :>
Examples

[Easy]
00:24:325 (1) - Like HellDawn said this touches the HP bar, please move it some grids down. Even if the change if minimal try to make all the changes necessary to improve your map. Fixed
00:42:783 (1) - Really dislike this spinner.. sounds weird. It's here so it doesnt end too early before 00:44:629 (1) but it sounds odd like this.. I think here you shouldn't have used a spinner.. a spinner at the end of the song is enough imo. A simple slider here would have been better than using a spinner. This is my personal opinion though. Realmente me gusta como esta , ademas el espiner suena mal imo
00:44:629 (1,3) - This pattern looks ugly like this because 00:44:629 (1) has different shape than 00:46:474 (3). Please consider copying 00:44:629 (1)'s shape to make this pattern visually better, like this: Fixed
SPOILER
[Normal]
00:20:172 (4,1) - Instead of using a whistle at 00:20:172 (4)'s end try to remove the whistle, add it to 00:20:172 (4)'s start instead and then add a whistle to 00:20:634 (1)'s start. Sounds much better imo.
00:22:249 (3,4) - ^ Similar here. Sounds better with the vocals if you remove whistle at 00:22:249 (3) and add it to 00:22:480 (4)'s start instead.
00:43:244 (2) - This clap sounds afwul at this part. It's a very calm part. Try adding whistles instead. You use the claps to follow the instrumental, and here only the voice can be heard!
[Hard]
00:42:552 (1,2) - This small antijump looks a bit out of place since it's the only antijump you made in the whole diff. My suggestion is stacking 00:42:552 (1,2,3) for a neater look o3o
00:46:244 (1) - (nazi) I don't like how this slider end gets covered a bit up by 00:45:552 (4)'s curve. If you change a bit the curve of (4) you can avoid this easily, like this. (I know that in my example the blanket isn't perfect, it's just an example)
SPOILER
00:53:627 (2) - More nazi stuff becase I can xD. Move this slider a grid to the left to improve this blanket.
01:04:240 (2) - ^ And this one too.
________________
Not bad.. call me back. I'm sure mancuso told you already but I'll say it anyway: next time try to map more difficulties by yourself!

Gracias por el mod kei <3

nvrsebas

129 posts

Joined August 2012

Topic Starter

nvrsebas 2013-05-28T04:08:13+00:00

Update !

Kei

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Joined May 2010

Kei 2013-05-28T19:52:42+00:00

Have your bubble back, as you wanted. Also, I don't agree with your decision of keeping that spinner.

Cuida lo que dices la proxima.

mancuso_JM_

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mancuso_JM_ 2013-05-28T20:05:16+00:00

Ok, Kei decided to rebubble the map just for personal issues with the mapper, so I'll take care of that again.
Rechecked everything and Nothing critical really.
So, Enjoy your first ranked map!