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Maeglwn
hello

  • Easy
  1. 00:24:799 (1,2) - flow could be made a little bit better here. move 2 either upwards or to the right a bit
  2. 00:30:079 (1,2) - blanket could be improved here a little
  3. 01:38:719 (1,2) - symmetry could be improved here. 1 isn't the same as 2, etc
  4. 01:42:559 (2,3) - blanket here? o.o
  5. 01:53:119 (3,1) - flow is just a tad off here from the end of 3 to 1
  6. 02:47:839 (1,2) - seems oddly close together. wanted to try and do something where 1 is above 2, but that seems to be kinda ugly too, idk. up to you on this one
  • Normal Collab
  1. 00:23:359 (2,3) - this part's a little messy flowwise. I'd turn both 1 and 2 down so their ends are facing 3 a little better
  2. 00:29:439 (3,1) - blanket's a little bad here.
  3. 00:46:879 (3) - ctrl g, plays much better
  4. 01:07:359 (4,1) - these 2 still overlap. maybe just switch 1 and 2 so they're going vertical instead of horizontal? (and then subsequently 4 and the notes after so they fit more
  5. 01:11:839 (4,5) - blanket could be improved on the ends of these 2.
  6. 01:11:839 (4,1) - overlap with 4 and 1
  7. 01:27:519 (1,2,3) - seems rather repetitive. flip 2 around so it's facing towards the opposite side, maybe?
    http://puu.sh/8uQlv.jpg
  8. 01:33:759 (1,2) - same thing here, except move 1 instead of 2
  9. 01:41:599 (1,2) - flow slightly off here. angle 1 up a bit higher
  10. 02:05:599 (1,2) - curving these 2 towards each other a little more would make them look better and more fun to play
  11. 02:36:799 (4,1) - not the same slider. might as well copy and paste 4 and make it the new 1 without the repeat
  12. 02:44:479 (2) - different from the last one that you used in the first half of the kiai. consider using the other one maybe, it played an looked better
  13. 02:45:759 (3,4) - move 3 up a few grids
  14. 03:04:479 (2) - just ctrl g this
  • Hard Collab
  1. 00:39:679 (2,3) - jump here a little bit awkward to play and look at
  2. 00:41:599 (1,2) - moar blanket
  3. 00:55:999 (7,8,9) - slider doesn't really follow the jump
  4. 01:01:119 (2,5) - blanket could be done a bit better here. might as well just make 5 a circle around 2, looks fantastic http://puu.sh/8uRd2.jpg (of course, 1, 2 and 3 would have to be changed in the next combo a bit)
  5. 01:07:039 (6,1) - awkward overlap
  6. 01:17:599 (7) - slider doesn't look super pretty and doesn't really flow into anything. :(
  7. 01:18:559 (2,3) - 4 and 1 are blanketed, but this one isn't. just move 3 down 4 the path of 4 a bit so it's like, in the middle. not only will it open up a blanket, it looks better http://puu.sh/8uRqT.jpg
  8. 01:20:479 (2,3) - no point in overlapping these 2. might as well move 3 away from the end of 1 a bit
  9. 01:26:079 (2,3) - not same spacing between 2 and 3 as 1/2 and 3/4. was this intentional? if so it's fine
  10. 01:40:639 (5,1) - flow issue here. move 5 end down a bit
  11. 01:41:599 (2) - why does this slider look all special and stuff? it disappears too fast for the blanket on the next set of notes to matter
  12. 02:28:639 (3,4) - may want to distance these 2 a bit away because they don't follow the normal pattern
  13. 02:35:359 (2) - anchor is confuzzling here
  14. 02:43:519 (3,4) - blanket not so hot here
  15. 03:04:159 (3,4) - why overlap? o.o
as usual, a beautiful map from both of you. good luck, I like it a lot. :3
Topic Starter
Mystyk

Maeglwn wrote:

hello

  • Easy
  1. 00:24:799 (1,2) - flow could be made a little bit better here. move 2 either upwards or to the right a bit - I moved it a little
  2. 00:30:079 (1,2) - blanket could be improved here a little - alright
  3. 01:38:719 (1,2) - symmetry could be improved here. 1 isn't the same as 2, etc - they aren't supposed to be symmetryc and it's not like peole can see it
  4. 01:42:559 (2,3) - blanket here? o.o - no, it's not supposed to be a blanket >.<
  5. 01:53:119 (3,1) - flow is just a tad off here from the end of 3 to 1 - a few pixels of movement won't change the flow
  6. 02:47:839 (1,2) - seems oddly close together. wanted to try and do something where 1 is above 2, but that seems to be kinda ugly too, idk. up to you on this one - I changed this on my own way, I hope it looks better now :3
  • Normal Collab
  1. 00:23:359 (2,3) - this part's a little messy flowwise. I'd turn both 1 and 2 down so their ends are facing 3 a little better - I think it's okay like this
  2. 00:29:439 (3,1) - blanket's a little bad here. - I think it's not supposed to be a blanket
  3. 00:46:879 (3) - ctrl g, plays much better - it ruins the distance >.<
  4. 01:07:359 (4,1) - these 2 still overlap. maybe just switch 1 and 2 so they're going vertical instead of horizontal? (and then subsequently 4 and the notes after so they fit more - I'll ask Aleks about this one
  5. 01:11:839 (4,5) - blanket could be improved on the ends of these 2. - I don't think they are supposed to be blankets, hence the end of the sliders are not even curvy
  6. 01:11:839 (4,1) - overlap with 4 and 1 - that's alright, it can't be seen during gameplay, because (4) disappears already by the time (1) appears
  7. 01:27:519 (1,2,3) - seems rather repetitive. flip 2 around so it's facing towards the opposite side, maybe? - I like how it flows like this and the pattern looks nicer than that zig-zag you made (in my opinion) :<
    http://puu.sh/8uQlv.jpg
  8. 01:33:759 (1,2) - same thing here, except move 1 instead of 2 - same
  9. 01:41:599 (1,2) - flow slightly off here. angle 1 up a bit higher - if I made the end of the slider higher it would ruin it more thus it should be actually moved down which I did :P
  10. 02:05:599 (1,2) - curving these 2 towards each other a little more would make them look better and more fun to play - I like them like this >.< and having them face each other is too mainstream xD
  11. 02:36:799 (4,1) - not the same slider. might as well copy and paste 4 and make it the new 1 without the repeat - I copy pasted 1 instead
  12. 02:44:479 (2) - different from the last one that you used in the first half of the kiai. consider using the other one maybe, it played an looked better - I want it to have some variety so no change in this
  13. 02:45:759 (3,4) - move 3 up a few grids - umm no, why? it flows good like this imo
  14. 03:04:479 (2) - just ctrl g this - ruins distance and I think it flows good like this
  • Hard Collab
  1. 00:39:679 (2,3) - jump here a little bit awkward to play and look at
  2. 00:41:599 (1,2) - moar blanket
  3. 00:55:999 (7,8,9) - slider doesn't really follow the jump - what do you mean?
  4. 01:01:119 (2,5) - blanket could be done a bit better here. might as well just make 5 a circle around 2, looks fantastic http://puu.sh/8uRd2.jpg (of course, 1, 2 and 3 would have to be changed in the next combo a bit) - it looks nice but I want to have that slider because of the vocals :<
  5. 01:07:039 (6,1) - awkward overlap - it's not even visible during gameplay D:
  6. 01:17:599 (7) - slider doesn't look super pretty and doesn't really flow into anything. :(
  7. 01:18:559 (2,3) - 4 and 1 are blanketed, but this one isn't. just move 3 down 4 the path of 4 a bit so it's like, in the middle. not only will it open up a blanket, it looks better http://puu.sh/8uRqT.jpg
  8. 01:20:479 (2,3) - no point in overlapping these 2. might as well move 3 away from the end of 1 a bit
  9. 01:26:079 (2,3) - not same spacing between 2 and 3 as 1/2 and 3/4. was this intentional? if so it's fine - the pattern looks nice like this so I think it was intentional :P
  10. 01:40:639 (5,1) - flow issue here. move 5 end down a bit
  11. 01:41:599 (2) - why does this slider look all special and stuff? it disappears too fast for the blanket on the next set of notes to matter
  12. 02:28:639 (3,4) - may want to distance these 2 a bit away because they don't follow the normal pattern - I don't want to put them further from each other, they play quite fast so I wouldn't put more distance between them
  13. 02:35:359 (2) - anchor is confuzzling here
  14. 02:43:519 (3,4) - blanket not so hot here
  15. 03:04:159 (3,4) - why overlap? o.o
as usual, a beautiful map from both of you. good luck, I like it a lot. :3 - thank you! :3
Thanks for the mod! :3 I'll update the map with the changes and wait for Aleks to check the stuff where I didn't answer.
Aleks719

Maeglwn wrote:

hello

  • Hard Collab
  1. 00:39:679 (2,3) - jump here a little bit awkward to play and look at mmm, no, it's fine
  2. 00:41:599 (1,2) - moar blanket i see your point, but blanket will ruin smooth shape of slider, sorry
  3. 01:17:599 (7) - slider doesn't look super pretty and doesn't really flow into anything. agree, fixed
  4. 01:18:559 (2,3) - 4 and 1 are blanketed, but this one isn't. just move 3 down 4 the path of 4 a bit so it's like, in the middle. not only will it open up a blanket, it looks better fixed kinda
  5. 01:20:479 (2,3) - no point in overlapping these 2. might as well move 3 away from the end of 1 a bit moved
  6. 01:40:639 (5,1) - flow issue here. move 5 end down a bit changed a lot
  7. 01:41:599 (2) - why does this slider look all special and stuff? it disappears too fast for the blanket on the next set of notes to matter ^
  8. 02:35:359 (2) - anchor is confuzzling here arcs are too annoying
  9. 02:43:519 (3,4) - blanket not so hot here aaaaaand i'm sorry about it :D
  10. 03:04:159 (3,4) - why overlap? o.o cuz i like it! also next pattern is fixed too
thank you for mod!
BeatofIke
We just did a minor fix on Hard difficulty. I also test played and double checked the rest of the difficulties and they seem fine to me. Thus, I give this map a pass. Good luck!

Short Log
12:35 BeatofIke: good map :D
12:35 Mystyk: daww thank you! *o*
12:37 BeatofIke: You are welocme ^_^
12:37 Mystyk: :333
12:37 BeatofIke: just one thing to fix o.o
12:39 Mystyk: really? o.o
12:39 BeatofIke: 03:01:359 (3) - On Hard difficulty, this note should actually start at 03:01:439 not 03:01:359.
12:39 *BeatofIke runs
12:39 BeatofIke: 03:01:439 -
12:40 BeatofIke: I have no problems with the hitsounding and I'm a good hitsounder XD
12:41 Mystyk: haha
12:41 Mystyk: oh lol you're right XD
12:41 Mystyk: I fixed it
12:41 BeatofIke: okay XD
12:41 Mystyk: that's all? o.o
12:41 BeatofIke: I'll bubble afterwards ;3
12:41 Mystyk: okay I'll update
12:43 BeatofIke: we're already dead
12:43 Mystyk: okay xD
12:43 Mystyk: can you check if it has been fixed?
12:43 Mystyk: LOL
12:43 BeatofIke: okay
12:43 Mystyk: just so there would be no bugs or anything xD
12:43 BeatofIke: alright. I'll double-check everything so sit tight ^_^
12:43 Mystyk: xD
12:44 Mystyk: haha okay :3 thanks a lot! *.*
12:44 Mystyk: also don't forget to post the log
12:44 Mystyk: since what you said was really useful
12:44 Mystyk: I didn't even notice xD
12:44 BeatofIke: okay :3
12:44 Mystyk: :3
Topic Starter
Mystyk
Thank you so much Ike! *.*
Kazuya
Go Mystyk! owo
Irreversible
IRC mod
23:27 *Irreversible is listening to [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/170265 Phoenix Legend - Zui Xuan Min Zu Feng]
23:27 Irreversible: pls what is this song
23:27 Mystyk: that sounds l-lewd :$
23:27 Irreversible: LOL please
23:27 Mystyk: wtf
23:27 Mystyk: LOL
23:27 Mystyk: xDDDDDdd
23:27 Irreversible: WUANG WANG WA HUUU
23:27 Mystyk: chiense music souinds kind of weird LOL
23:27 Mystyk: XD
23:27 Irreversible: chinese so fun
23:27 *Irreversible is listening to [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/363009 Zhou Li Ming - Pi Li Pa La]
23:27 Irreversible: i mean who doesn't love this
23:27 Irreversible: XD
23:27 Mystyk: NO PLZ
23:27 Mystyk: no more pi li pa la XD
23:28 Irreversible: YES TO PI LI PA LA
23:28 Irreversible: sec
23:29 *Irreversible is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/222452 Escape The Fate - Zombie Dance [Easy]]
23:29 Mystyk: :333
23:31 Irreversible: 01:51:679 (1,2) -
23:31 Mystyk: ok
23:31 Irreversible: i prefer having this rhythm ctrl + g
23:31 Irreversible: because it follow the rhythm better, and you don't ignore the downbeat
23:33 Irreversible: 03:07:999 (3) - pls this can be more symmetric
23:33 Irreversible: wow, really nice easy i have to say
23:33 Mystyk: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1694050
23:33 Irreversible: yes
23:34 Mystyk: how can it be even more symmetric? ofmg XD
23:34 Irreversible: do i have to mod aleks' parts in forum?
23:35 Mystyk: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1694054
23:35 Mystyk: is heo nline?
23:35 Mystyk: just tell me
23:35 Mystyk: xD
23:35 Mystyk: he already gave me permission to change his things a long time ago
23:36 *Irreversible is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/250060 Escape The Fate - Zombie Dance [Normal Collab]]
23:36 Irreversible: 01:09:919 (4) - kinda random drum whistle here
23:36 Mystyk: i think its cuz of vocals
23:37 Irreversible: 01:49:279 (1) - can you move this a bit to the left? i think the transition is slightly improved :3
23:37 Irreversible: ok then
23:37 Mystyk: how much to the left?
23:37 Mystyk: cuz of distance y.<
23:37 Mystyk: >.<
23:37 Irreversible: just 1-2 grids
23:37 Irreversible: XDD
23:38 Mystyk: okay xD
23:38 Irreversible: nice normal
23:38 Irreversible: :33
23:38 *Irreversible is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/222451 Escape The Fate - Zombie Dance [Hard Collab]]
23:38 Irreversible: 00:26:239 (6) -
23:38 Irreversible: i think it's better to have that 236 280 to get a cute straight flow XD
23:38 Mystyk: thanks xD
23:39 Irreversible: 00:29:439 (1) - add a NC to have .. the pattern? with NC? pi li pa la
23:39 Irreversible: 00:33:919 (3) - wow, cool
23:39 Mystyk: rofl
23:39 Mystyk: changed
23:39 Mystyk: xD
23:40 Mystyk: I hope its not uinrankeable :'D
23:40 Irreversible: 00:48:799 (1) - i guess having this at 116 128 improves the flow again, because it follows the path better
23:40 Irreversible: lol no
23:40 Irreversible: i hope you don^t mind if i make a checking mod, i don't think that i can bring up many many suggestions :o
23:40 Irreversible: and it's for rank
23:40 Irreversible: so
23:40 Mystyk: okay done
23:41 Mystyk: ofc i dont mind
23:41 Irreversible: 01:02:239 (5) - this looks kinda ugly sorry XD
23:41 Irreversible: oi mean
23:41 Irreversible: it's kind of not blanket
23:41 Irreversible: well it is but
23:41 Irreversible: 01:01:919 - if you go here
23:41 Mystyk: mm
23:41 Irreversible: it looks rly weird
23:41 Irreversible: 01:04:959 (5,6) - move to 64 72 to have an improved flow to 01:05:919 (1) -
23:42 Mystyk: wait
23:42 Mystyk: any suggestion on what to do with it?
23:42 Mystyk: 01:02:239 (5) -
23:42 Irreversible: yes, change
23:42 Irreversible: loljk xD
23:42 Mystyk: XDD
23:43 Mystyk: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1694076
23:43 Mystyk: dunno what about this? :S
23:44 Irreversible: i'm thinking
23:44 Mystyk: okay
23:45 Irreversible: 01:00:319 (1) - what if you make this curve like
23:45 Irreversible: http://puu.sh/9kSCI.png
23:45 Irreversible: and then you go like this
23:46 Irreversible: http://puu.sh/9kSGG.png
23:46 Mystyk: it wants me to download the pictures
23:46 Mystyk: D:
23:46 Irreversible: weird
23:47 Irreversible: http://puu.sh/9kSRz.png
23:47 Irreversible: ?
23:47 Mystyk: 0 byte
23:47 Mystyk: o.o
23:47 Irreversible: wtf
23:47 Irreversible: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1694085
23:47 Mystyk: :'D
23:47 Irreversible: like this
23:47 Irreversible: and then you can go
23:47 Irreversible: t the bottom
23:47 Irreversible: to the top
23:48 Mystyk: :o
23:48 Mystyk: I want to keep the slider going upwards
23:48 Mystyk: because of the vocals
23:48 Mystyk: and because the previous sliders were in the left bottom part of the screen too :C
23:49 Irreversible: sorry master heni
23:49 Irreversible: loljk
23:49 Irreversible: well let's use your idea XD
23:49 Irreversible: 01:13:599 - add a circle
23:49 Mystyk: okay wait xD
23:49 Irreversible: i think it's so empty without
23:50 Irreversible: 02:20:959 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - i think you can let this look like a neater wave
23:52 Irreversible: 02:57:439 (1) - this rhythm should be like this : http://puu.sh/9kTtc.png
23:52 Irreversible: not like you have it, i'd say it's wrong
23:52 Irreversible: beacuse of the strong guitar sound there
23:52 Irreversible: 02:59:359 (1,2,3,4) - ^
23:53 Irreversible: 03:03:199 (7) - spacing is not equal to the other "strema*
23:53 Irreversible: 03:04:639 (4) - why that ugly overlap D:
23:53 Irreversible: aaand done
23:54 Mystyk: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1694106
23:54 Irreversible: sure
23:54 Mystyk: okay xD
23:54 Mystyk: letm e read the rest omfg
23:56 Mystyk: 01:07:359 (7) -
23:56 Mystyk: dunno to me it plays a bit weird like this
23:56 Mystyk: :C
23:56 Mystyk: if I add a hit circle
23:56 Irreversible: 01:07:359 (7) - what is here?
23:56 Irreversible: xD
23:56 Mystyk: I mean 01:13:599 (1) -
23:57 Mystyk: xD
23:57 Mystyk: sorry
23:57 Irreversible: sure
23:57 Irreversible: no need~
23:57 Mystyk: sorry >.<
23:57 Irreversible: ?
23:57 Irreversible: xD
23:57 Irreversible: it's fine rely
23:58 Mystyk: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1694119
23:59 Irreversible: take the stream
23:59 Irreversible: no
23:59 Irreversible: just 23456
23:59 Irreversible: and move 1 - 2 grids down
00:06 Mystyk: but i arleady changed it and saved :C
00:06 Irreversible: ?
00:06 Mystyk: the stream wave
00:06 Irreversible: ok o,o
00:06 Irreversible: how about the rest
00:06 Irreversible: this with the rhythm must be fixed because i guess it's wrong
00:08 Mystyk: im working on ti xD
00:09 Irreversible: well then tell me when it's updated
00:13 Mystyk: suer
00:13 Mystyk: 03:02:239 (1,7) -
00:13 Mystyk: i think they are both not equally streamed xD so let me fix it
00:13 Irreversible: sure
00:17 Mystyk: okay updated it
00:17 Irreversible: okay

really enjoyable!

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Mystyk
Thank you so much Irri! Your mod was really helpful! *.* Also thank you for saying it's enjoyable! xD daww :3
mancuso_JM_
Grats Mystykus :D
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Mystyk
Thanks Mancus Cancus! :3
Lust
Congrats ;D
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Mystyk
Thanks Lust! :3
Kazuya
Gratu Heni. :)
Asphyxia
Graz!
Sieg
congratz (:
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Mystyk
Thanks everyone! :3
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quiz-chan_DELETED
Wurde auch mal Zeit....

Congrats mystyk and Aleks! :>
Topic Starter
Mystyk
Thank You!

And loool Lizzy omfg your signature xDD <3
quiz-chan_DELETED
yeah ikr!
Mizzii
végreee..
Gratu Heni :3
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