hello
- Easy
- 00:24:799 (1,2) - flow could be made a little bit better here. move 2 either upwards or to the right a bit
- 00:30:079 (1,2) - blanket could be improved here a little
- 01:38:719 (1,2) - symmetry could be improved here. 1 isn't the same as 2, etc
- 01:42:559 (2,3) - blanket here? o.o
- 01:53:119 (3,1) - flow is just a tad off here from the end of 3 to 1
- 02:47:839 (1,2) - seems oddly close together. wanted to try and do something where 1 is above 2, but that seems to be kinda ugly too, idk. up to you on this one
- Normal Collab
- 00:23:359 (2,3) - this part's a little messy flowwise. I'd turn both 1 and 2 down so their ends are facing 3 a little better
- 00:29:439 (3,1) - blanket's a little bad here.
- 00:46:879 (3) - ctrl g, plays much better
- 01:07:359 (4,1) - these 2 still overlap. maybe just switch 1 and 2 so they're going vertical instead of horizontal? (and then subsequently 4 and the notes after so they fit more
- 01:11:839 (4,5) - blanket could be improved on the ends of these 2.
- 01:11:839 (4,1) - overlap with 4 and 1
- 01:27:519 (1,2,3) - seems rather repetitive. flip 2 around so it's facing towards the opposite side, maybe?
http://puu.sh/8uQlv.jpg - 01:33:759 (1,2) - same thing here, except move 1 instead of 2
- 01:41:599 (1,2) - flow slightly off here. angle 1 up a bit higher
- 02:05:599 (1,2) - curving these 2 towards each other a little more would make them look better and more fun to play
- 02:36:799 (4,1) - not the same slider. might as well copy and paste 4 and make it the new 1 without the repeat
- 02:44:479 (2) - different from the last one that you used in the first half of the kiai. consider using the other one maybe, it played an looked better
- 02:45:759 (3,4) - move 3 up a few grids
- 03:04:479 (2) - just ctrl g this
- Hard Collab
- 00:39:679 (2,3) - jump here a little bit awkward to play and look at
- 00:41:599 (1,2) - moar blanket
- 00:55:999 (7,8,9) - slider doesn't really follow the jump
- 01:01:119 (2,5) - blanket could be done a bit better here. might as well just make 5 a circle around 2, looks fantastic http://puu.sh/8uRd2.jpg (of course, 1, 2 and 3 would have to be changed in the next combo a bit)
- 01:07:039 (6,1) - awkward overlap
- 01:17:599 (7) - slider doesn't look super pretty and doesn't really flow into anything.
- 01:18:559 (2,3) - 4 and 1 are blanketed, but this one isn't. just move 3 down 4 the path of 4 a bit so it's like, in the middle. not only will it open up a blanket, it looks better http://puu.sh/8uRqT.jpg
- 01:20:479 (2,3) - no point in overlapping these 2. might as well move 3 away from the end of 1 a bit
- 01:26:079 (2,3) - not same spacing between 2 and 3 as 1/2 and 3/4. was this intentional? if so it's fine
- 01:40:639 (5,1) - flow issue here. move 5 end down a bit
- 01:41:599 (2) - why does this slider look all special and stuff? it disappears too fast for the blanket on the next set of notes to matter
- 02:28:639 (3,4) - may want to distance these 2 a bit away because they don't follow the normal pattern
- 02:35:359 (2) - anchor is confuzzling here
- 02:43:519 (3,4) - blanket not so hot here
- 03:04:159 (3,4) - why overlap? o.o