Ryu* - Narcissus At Oasis [Osu|Taiko] · forum

jomnhnk

Joined March 2010

jomnhnk 2013-03-20T14:13:34+00:00

mintong89 wrote:
Taiko mod as request

[Taiko Oni]

00:41:356 (72) - D? it's fit with D~　Okay!
00:43:297 - k? it seem all d here feel weird.Arrangement
00:59:708 - => 01:11:000 - all are 1/4 but not 1/6. please resnap all　All resnap!
01:22:294 (91) - D?　Changed D

taiko muzukashii is ok　　　Thank you~!

good luck~

Reply was delayedSorry~~~｡ﾟ(ﾟ´Д｀ﾟ)ﾟ｡　Good mod thank you!

jomnhnk

276 posts

Joined March 2010

jomnhnk 2013-03-20T14:16:59+00:00

Lundlerol wrote:

hi ~
irc mod req~

SPOILER

22:34 Lundlerol: うっす
22:34 Lundlerol: ircでいいかい
22:36 Lundlerol: おん
22:36 Lundlerol: 聞いてんのかオラ（震え声
22:36 jomnhnk: ういｗｗｗ
22:36 jomnhnk: どっちでも
22:36 jomnhnk: いいよ
22:36 Lundlerol: 01:10:484 - 
22:37 Lundlerol: delete
22:37 Lundlerol: 01:10:572 (2) - 
22:37 Lundlerol: delete
22:37 jomnhnk: 　　Oni？
22:37 Lundlerol: a
22:37 Lundlerol: un
22:37 Lundlerol: 01:10:572 (2) - 
22:37 Lundlerol: misu
22:37 Lundlerol: 01:10:648 - 
22:37 Lundlerol: add d
22:39 Lundlerol: bgm作るのうまくなったなぁ
22:39 jomnhnk: ありがとう(*´艸｀*)
22:39 Lundlerol: 01:22:294 (90) - 
22:39 Lundlerol: D
22:40 Lundlerol: ちょやべえ
22:40 Lundlerol: あ、後ででいいか
22:40 Lundlerol: 01:17:882 (1) - 
22:40 Lundlerol: k
22:41 Lundlerol: 01:22:294 (35) - 
22:41 Lundlerol: Dにした？
22:41 jomnhnk: 　した！
22:41 Lundlerol: 01:29:882 (94) - 
22:42 Lundlerol: ここを始点に.
22:42 Lundlerol: kdkの３連
22:43 Lundlerol: 最初に戻るけど
22:43 Lundlerol: 00:35:179 (34) - 
22:43 Lundlerol: k
22:43 Lundlerol: 00:38:885 (57) - 
22:43 Lundlerol: K
22:44 jomnhnk: Fixed
22:44 Lundlerol: 01:30:588 (99) - 
22:44 Lundlerol: Crapになってるぞ
22:44 Lundlerol: 01:29:176 (89) - 
22:44 Lundlerol: ここも
22:45 jomnhnk: 統一したほうがよか？ｗ
22:45 Lundlerol: どっちでもいいけど
22:45 Lundlerol: 俺は！？ってなった
22:45 jomnhnk: たぶん後でそこへんしゅうしたとこやわｗｗｗ
22:45 Lundlerol: ww
22:47 Lundlerol: まあこんなもんですかねぇ
22:47 Lundlerol: 次いでMuzukashiiな
22:48 Lundlerol: 00:38:356 (34) - 
22:48 Lundlerol: add k
22:49 Lundlerol: 00:40:120 - delete
22:49 Lundlerol: 00:40:488 - 
22:49 Lundlerol: こいつを
22:49 Lundlerol: 00:40:650 (43) - 
22:49 Lundlerol: ここに移動
22:50 Lundlerol: 01:20:352 (66,67,68) - 
22:50 Lundlerol: これは難しいぞ～
22:50 Lundlerol: 01:22:294 (5) - 
22:50 Lundlerol: D
22:50 jomnhnk: このBPMでも難しいかな？
22:50 Lundlerol: 01:22:470 - 
22:50 Lundlerol: delete
22:51 Lundlerol: 一色の３連の方が望ましいな
22:51 Lundlerol: まあ
22:51 Lundlerol: プレイヤーを考慮するかどうかは
22:51 Lundlerol: ジョン次第～
22:51 jomnhnk: じゃあそこは考えとくわ
22:52 Lundlerol: うっす
22:52 Lundlerol: 01:33:411 - 
22:52 Lundlerol: delete
22:52 Lundlerol: 01:33:588 (54) -  D
22:52 Lundlerol: 01:36:588 (69) - 
22:52 Lundlerol: コイツを
22:52 Lundlerol: 01:36:235 - 
22:52 Lundlerol: ここに移動3
22:53 Lundlerol: 01:42:764 (98,99,100) - 
22:53 Lundlerol: これも難しいから考えといて
22:53 jomnhnk: Ok
22:53 Lundlerol: 01:44:529 (109,110,111) - 
22:53 Lundlerol: ここはddkだと違和感あると思われ～
22:53 Lundlerol: dddにすればこのあとのkで音をフォローできます
22:54 Lundlerol: 01:53:352 (127) - 
22:54 Lundlerol: 鬼と同じでスピンにしたら？
22:54 jomnhnk: そうするわ
22:54 Lundlerol: うっす
22:54 Lundlerol: 以上で～す
22:55 jomnhnk: Okay!ありがとう！！
22:55 Lundlerol: うっす

fight~ _(:3 」∠)_

IRCMODありがとう！良くなったわ！

StickyPicky

509 posts

Joined October 2012

StickyPicky 2013-03-21T13:39:21+00:00

hi ~

#modreqs

SPOILER

Your Background image is larger than 1024*768, Is this ok? - lol
Why is that Kiai Time in all diff is not the same? <just asking>

BEGINNER

00:53:003 whistle here `
01:15:941 / 01:40:294 (2) - / 01:43:470 / finish here `

NORMAL

Circle Size in this diff should be 3 .. >.<

Nothing to add ~

HYPER ~ COOOOOOL ! perfect <for me>

ANOTHER ~ WOW ! o.O ^

SPOILER

GO FOR THE RANK! goodluck ~ :3 < sorry for my poor modding >.< >

quiz-chan_DELETED

quiz-chan_DELETED 2013-03-22T10:11:39+00:00

SPOILER

10:48 Strawberry: anyone can help me about timing on this map plz?~
10:48 *Strawberry is listening to [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/221898 Ryu* - Narcissus At Oasis]
10:48 Strawberry: can not sure about one timing point
10:48 Quiz-chan: lemme see...
10:48 Gloria Guard: oh i like a map 'w'
10:49 Strawberry: >< GG/
10:49 Gloria Guard: Strawberry XD /
10:49 Strawberry: the red line on 00:59:808 
10:49 Strawberry: i set it for taiko diffs..
10:49 Gloria Guard: ...
10:50 Quiz-chan: An awful lot of timing sections
10:50 Quiz-chan: but they are needed here
10:51 Quiz-chan: to keep timing consistent
10:51 Strawberry: nah
10:51 Strawberry: the consistent timing has bug at 00:59:808 -  ;w;
10:51 Strawberry: sounds really bad on taiko
10:52 Quiz-chan: both taikos?
10:52 Strawberry: yea
10:53 Quiz-chan: eh mer gerd, this is sooo offset
10:53 Strawberry: um..
10:54 Strawberry: any idea? ;w;
10:54 Strawberry: i thought to remove this part on taikos, however it
10:55 Strawberry: 's too shameful ;w;
10:55 Quiz-chan: Well, let's take a look at [Another] for instance:
10:56 Quiz-chan: That timing section is in a break (so no hit objects) and at the end of that break there's a new timing section
10:56 Quiz-chan: So one timing section for nothing
10:56 Strawberry: yea i just set it for taikos
10:56 Strawberry: you know the timing points should be consistent in all diffs, so i did it as well
10:57 Strawberry: ;w;
10:57 Quiz-chan: You should set the section a little earlier
10:57 Quiz-chan: And that same section in every other diff too
10:57 Quiz-chan: That's one possible solution
10:57 Strawberry: i see..
10:59 Quiz-chan: Or just set the hitobjects earlier ¯\(ºvo)/¯
11:00 Strawberry: sounds good. i will make a further discussion with the guest mapper~ thank you Quiz-chan
11:01 Quiz-chan: My pleasure~
11:01 Quiz-chan: [strike]now give me kudosu °u°[/strike] Good luck!
11:01 Strawberry: feel free to post the log into the spread~ xDD
11:01 [CSGA]Ar3sgice: 0,0

~

popner

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popner 2013-03-23T06:14:34+00:00

A red line at 59708 should be ok, and

they are not needed.

Strawberry

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Topic Starter

Strawberry 2013-03-23T09:13:01+00:00

Fixed. Thanks for timing!

Gloria Guard

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Joined May 2011

Gloria Guard 2013-03-24T04:24:11+00:00

00:53:003 whistle here no
01:15:941 / 01:40:294 (2) - / 01:43:470 / finish here no

thanks for modding

Curisu

2,241 posts

Joined January 2010

Curisu 2013-03-24T05:03:04+00:00

Amamiya Yuko wrote:
\>A</

~~柚子酱moe~~

刘某个人认为最神作求full ver.(

[General]
Source: beatmania IIDX 10th Style

[Timing]
00:41:709 - 重音错这里没变拍子微调offset也应该在前面调
-- 00:59:708 - 相当于这里也是没必要

[Hyper]
00:15:984 ~ 00:24:447 - imo finish overuse 加层次感感觉还是保持原来的whis 加入这fin来突出这fin不太适合whis的位置
00:36:679 - 这里放的whis还是违和了点感觉hs大方向都有点问题先不管了
-
00:23:036 (1,3,5) - blanket

SPOILER

[Another]
00:06:110 - vol-10 这段finish同大声了点
00:15:455 (10) - remove ; 00:15:631 - vol+10
00:21:273 (8) - vol-5 ; 00:21:449 - remove ; 00:21:626 - +fin vol+5~8
00:22:243 (1) - unnecessary
00:52:297 (1) - ...1/12够用 ; 01:20:531 (1) - < 后同

Last edited by Curisu 2013-03-24T08:04:06+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

scanter

2,385 posts

Joined July 2012

scanter 2013-03-24T05:15:52+00:00

[General]
Letterbox during breaks should off. because, you're not used SB
BG size is 1365x768. you should find new one at 4:3 or 16:9 size. (like 800x600, 1024x768) nowadays, permissed 1280x720.

[Beginner]
AR +1 , OD +1. fit this bpm well.
00:52:650 (4) - Change finish at slider's first?
01:18:058 (1) - Change finish. I heard soft default finish sound.
01:19:470 (1,2) - Change finish all about slider's part. like this. 00:51:238 (2,3)
01:20:882 (1) - Add finish on slider's first.
01:51:941 (2,1) - this slider and spinner's distance is too far. how about reduce it?
01:56:176 - Add sound 5% this line? I think, song's finish is too cozy. so I recommend this.

[Normal]
Stack Leniency -1
00:34:650 (4) - Add S finish here. you can hear about finish sound.
00:38:532 (1) - Add S finish on 00:38:885 same
00:39:944 (3,4,1,1) - Add S finish.
00:41:356 (1) - Add S finish
00:44:532 (2) - Change soft default finish.
00:45:591 (3,4) - How about this? looks good to me about more rhythmical. http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/668097
This is code.

SPOILER

36,28,45591,2,0,L|20:84,1,50
4,176,46120,2,0,P|32:232|63:246,1,100
64,247,46650,1,0,0:0:0:0:

00:55:826 (1) - Start at 00:55:473 much better. I recommend this time. end is same.
01:16:649 (1,1,1) - Just, strange. should change notes.
01:10:649 (1) - Add finish on slider's first and end.
01:20:884 (1) - Add finish on slider's first.
01:33:590 (1) - Add finish on slider's first.
01:42:060 (1) - Change finish sound at slider's first.
01:44:531 (1) - Add finish.
01:44:884 (2) - Add finish on slider's first.

[Hyper]
00:04:699 (1) - Should extend 00:05:052 here.
00:10:342 (1) - I recommend change slider shape. because, I don't hear about sound variation.
00:45:238 (5) - You make more better place. like here. http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/668117
00:55:120 (1) - How about start 00:54:944 here? looks better to me. I heard sound roughly this time. end is same.

[Another]
00:23:742 (1,2,1) - more fill up rhythm. I mapped roughly like this. http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/668181
This is code.

SPOILER

128,120,23389,5,0,0:0:0:0:
257,192,23742,1,2,0:0:0:0:
384,264,24094,1,0,0:0:0:0:
257,192,24447,1,4,0:0:0:0:

00:36:679 (3) - Move 1 grid right. distance error
00:55:120 (1) - How about start at 00:54:944 I think, more better in this time.
01:45:413 (2) - Ctrl + G

Good song & nice map ! GL on rank

Strawberry

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Topic Starter

Strawberry 2013-03-24T08:14:28+00:00

Curisu wrote:
Amamiya Yuko wrote:
\>A</
~~柚子酱moe~~

刘某个人认为最神作求full ver.(

[General]
Source: beatmania IIDX 10th Style i want to keep them like this http://osu.ppy.sh/s/66968 and http://osu.ppy.sh/s/53438

[Timing]
00:41:709 - 重音错这里没变拍子微调offset也应该在前面调
-- 00:59:708 - 相当于这里也是没必要 fixed.

[Another]
00:06:110 - vol-10 这段finish同大声了点
00:15:455 (10) - remove ; 00:15:631 - vol+10
00:21:273 (8) - vol-5 ; 00:21:449 - remove ; 00:21:626 - +fin vol+5~8 i'm not following the volume, but making ornaments.. keep for now..
00:22:243 (1) - unnecessary um i want a link here.. for a transition
00:52:297 (1) - ...1/12够用 ; 01:20:531 (1) - < 后同 the present one is fine so i'd prefer to keep it.. ;w;

scanter wrote:
[General]
Letterbox during breaks should off. because, you're not used SB it makes bad effort on break imo..
BG size is 1365x768. you should find new one at 4:3 or 16:9 size. (like 800x600, 1024x768) nowadays, permissed 1280x720. k changed to 1280x720.

[Another]
00:23:742 (1,2,1) - more fill up rhythm. I mapped roughly like this. http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/668181 i want a breath here.. so.. ><
This is code.
SPOILER
128,120,23389,5,0,0:0:0:0:
257,192,23742,1,2,0:0:0:0:
384,264,24094,1,0,0:0:0:0:
257,192,24447,1,4,0:0:0:0:
00:36:679 (3) - Move 1 grid right. distance error fixed.~
00:55:120 (1) - How about start at 00:54:944 I think, more better in this time. indeed.
01:45:413 (2) - Ctrl + G nice idea~ changed!

Good song & nice map ! GL on rank

thank you guys ><

happy30

Featured Artist

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Joined August 2008

happy30 2013-03-25T16:18:28+00:00

Testplay ~ no kudosu please

Hyper
Replay

Nice map, the beginning played like a hard but the difficulty slowly progresses, the end was more like an insane.
I didn't like the overlaps in the beginning, also I think you could get rid of some beats there since the pacing feels a bit too fast for the slow section there.
I hoped to see more sexy sliders like in grim

Another
Replay

I had a little trouble with the 1/4 sliders here. I don't think they fit
I thought they were slowed down 1/2 sliders at first ._.
Good map, but those sliders are confusing x_x

Konei

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Joined March 2012

Konei 2013-03-26T12:04:31+00:00

Lol, there you go, no kudosu please XD

GugUCorn

936 posts

Joined October 2011

GugUCorn 2013-03-26T12:26:51+00:00

from my queue~

[Begginner]

00:24:447 ~ 00:26:563 - need to volume down. In summary, add inherited point 00:24:447(20% volume) and 00:26:563(10% volume)
00:25:857 (2) - or replace this slider to Circle note
00:54:944 (1) - finish is good but S:C2 whistle is better...
01:11:002 (2,3) - hmm?? delete 3 and expend 2 to 01:12:061
01:43:473 (1,2) - (1) : remove NC and (2) : NC
01:51:943 (2) - end 01:51:943 (2)..it's awkward..

[Normal]

00:36:414 (2) - be bent up
00:52:650 (5) - remove NC
00:53:003 (1) - NC
01:19:472 (1,1) - how about remove 01:20:884 (1) and expend spinner to 01:21:944 ?
01:50:531 (1) - (108,175) for perfectly overlap!
01:53:355 (1) - expend to 01:58:297, same Insane Diff

[Hyper]

00:17:394 (1) - perfectly overlap on 00:16:689 (2)
00:26:034 (1) - end 00:28:943, like Insane Diff
00:49:297 - add inherited point(S:default)
00:49:650 - add inherited point (S:3) i think its feel is good~
01:20:179 (3) - it's hard to see...

[Another]

00:37:650 (3) - don't need to 2nd point...remove 2nd point
00:54:944 (1) - S:C2 whistle is better than s whistle
01:54:150 (1) - end 01:58:297

Nice Map!! Good Luck for Rank!!

wonders

610 posts

Joined December 2011

wonders 2013-03-27T05:54:13+00:00

hi大草莓
进来巨忙，拖了好几天orz

~~额，感觉大草莓你如果要再进一步的话可以研究一下slider，确定一种只属于自己的图风了~~

[Another]
just tips
00:08:931 和前面的4不弄个blanket？
00:10:871 x:304 y:280 和00:06:815呼应一下？如果改的话加个NC
00:15:631 http://puu.sh/2oLif这个感觉更好看一点
01:35:532 NC
01:41:709 (3,4) finish
其实我比较好奇你是不是关了DS凭手感做的图。

[Hyper]
00:24:094 放近点比较好
00:30:089 - 00:53:033 音效美www
01:20:279 hard的话太遮了

[Normal]
00:08:931 歪了一点

[Beginer]
00:24:976 blanket做做好
01:11:022 多拉了1/4拍

Lan wings

790 posts

Joined August 2010

Lan wings 2013-03-27T05:57:42+00:00

angelfix wrote:
hi大草莓
进来巨忙，拖了好几天orz

~~额，感觉大草莓你如果要再进一步的话可以研究一下slider，确定一种只属于自己的图风了~~

[Hyper]
00:24:094 放近点比较好
00:30:089 - 00:53:033 音效美www
01:20:279 hard的话太遮了~~我只想吐槽这个..我也知道这里遮啊但是不给个梗我咋改~~

@大草莓
00:54:944 你这里延长了spinner忘了补绿线

wonders

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wonders 2013-03-27T06:12:05+00:00

Lan wings wrote:
~~我只想吐槽这个..我也知道这里遮啊但是不给个梗我咋改~~

233,神梗没法改那就不改了

Lan wings

790 posts

Joined August 2010

Lan wings 2013-03-27T06:13:18+00:00

angelfix wrote:
Lan wings wrote:
~~我只想吐槽这个..我也知道这里遮啊但是不给个梗我咋改~~
233,神梗没法改那就不改了

这是蠢梗``我也想改但是没梗改.

Lan wings

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Lan wings 2013-03-27T06:14:29+00:00

@大草莓
http://1000eb.com/h8l8
QQ离线不用接了

Strawberry

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Topic Starter

Strawberry 2013-03-27T10:28:37+00:00

Thank you guys for suggestions and I will fixed them later since my computer is broken for now.. QAQ

@angelfix: 的确没有开ds不过有的地方还是注意了一下~（个人感觉有必要对齐的地方之类lol
~~QAQ风格神马的~~

@Lan wings:感谢提醒:3

Gloria Guard

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Joined May 2011

Gloria Guard 2013-03-27T18:42:26+00:00

scanter

[Beginner]
AR +1 , OD +1. fit this bpm well. fix
00:52:650 (4) - Change finish at slider's first? fix
01:18:058 (1) - Change finish. I heard soft default finish sound. No
01:19:470 (1,2) - Change finish all about slider's part. like this. 00:51:238 (2,3) fix
01:20:882 (1) - Add finish on slider's first. No
01:51:941 (2,1) - this slider and spinner's distance is too far. how about reduce it? fix
01:56:176 - Add sound 5% this line? I think, song's finish is too cozy. so I recommend this. fix

angelfix

[Beginer]
00:24:976 blanket做做好 fix
01:11:022 多拉了1/4拍 No

Pisces

[Begginner]

◾00:24:447 ~ 00:26:563 - need to volume down. In summary, add inherited point 00:24:447(20% volume) and 00:26:563(10% volume) fix
But 30% down
◾00:25:857 (2) - or replace this slider to Circle note No
◾00:54:944 (1) - finish is good but S:C2 whistle is better... fix but remove finish
◾01:11:002 (2,3) - hmm?? delete 3 and expend 2 to 01:12:061 No
◾01:43:473 (1,2) - (1) : remove NC and (2) : NC fix
◾01:51:943 (2) - end 01:51:943 (2)..it's awkward.. fix

Thanks for modding ~

sorry i'm late orz

Update

osu file format v12

[General]
AudioFilename: Narcissus At Oasis.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 81852
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 1

[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 1
BeatDivisor: 2
GridSize: 4

[Metadata]
Title:Narcissus At Oasis
TitleUnicode:Narcissus At Oasis
Artist:Ryu*
ArtistUnicode:Ryu*
Creator:Strawberry
Version:Gloria's Beginner
Source:
Tags:
BeatmapID:229351
BeatmapSetID:79544

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:2
CircleSize:3
OverallDifficulty:2
ApproachRate:3
SliderMultiplier:0.799999999999999
SliderTickRate:1

[Events]
//Background and Video events
0,0,"bg.jpg",0,0
//Break Periods
2,59908,69208
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples
//Background Colour Transformations
3,100,163,162,255

[TimingPoints]
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4700,-133.333333333333,4,2,1,30,0,0
5757,-133.333333333333,4,2,1,20,0,0
6110,-133.333333333333,4,2,1,30,0,0
7168,-133.333333333333,4,2,1,20,0,0
7521,-133.333333333333,4,2,1,30,0,0
8226,-133.333333333333,4,2,1,20,0,0
8931,-133.333333333333,4,2,1,30,0,0
9636,-133.333333333333,4,2,1,20,0,0
10342,-133.333333333333,4,2,1,30,0,0
11399,-133.333333333333,4,2,1,20,0,0
11752,-133.333333333333,4,2,1,30,0,0
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[Colours]
Combo1 : 0,162,40
Combo2 : 9,132,255
Combo3 : 58,248,153
Combo4 : 95,83,240

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Rotte

582 posts

Joined October 2011

Rotte 2013-03-28T03:01:13+00:00

From my queue.

[Easy]

Fine.

[Normal]

Fine.

[Hard]

Useless Green line

00:35:709 -
00:37:650 -

Rhythm
01:15:414 (1) - 用两个note在这儿会比slider效果好.
01:19:120 (6) - 和前面一样,用两个note来强调.

Sound Effect
00:39:944 - 此处应该增加音量.

[Another]

Useless Green line
00:16:160 -
00:20:744 -
00:21:097 -

Rhythm
01:15:150 (10,1) - 个人感觉这个跳的太过突然，而且节奏有点过于轻，以至于和音乐本身有点不符。
01:23:620 (8) - 这个也是，超出了音乐本身，而且slider本身声音过轻，导致不和谐w。
01:25:032 (7) - ^
01:34:826 (1,2) - 非常不合适的梗,根据音乐一起听打的话,明显有时间的延迟,建议要是用这种梗你就要加强slider和note本身的声音来与音乐进行配合,这样会好很多.
01:40:650 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,1) - 这一段咱喜欢ww。

Sound Effect
Fine.

好图给kd.

a32

630 posts

Joined February 2010

a32 2013-03-28T12:48:40+00:00

Here :3

[General]
Fine ww

[Beginner]

01:11:002 (2,3) - I don't think this should be in a beginner orz you may reduce the spacing or sth similar...
01:53:355 (1) - whsitle this?It could be better :3

[Normal]

00:30:767 (2,3,4,5,6) - 这几个可以排的更好些...做成圆弧应该会不错~
00:54:414 (3) - 加个whsitle?
01:15:237 (4) - 这个可以右移,让上个slider的blanket完美包围这个slider的头部~
01:22:296 (2) - NC
01:33:590 (1) - 开头用个default的finish可能会好些?ww

[Hyper]

这种难度还AR7简直作死 AR+1

00:18:628 (2) - finish?
00:36:414 (1) - NC有点莫名
01:12:414 (1,2,3) - spacing调好...
01:32:885 (1,2) - 加finish?
kiai部分有的跳有些过了...(说好的hyper呢

[Another]

00:06:815 (8) - 头加个whistle?
00:08:578 (5) - grid4下尾部的点向左一格?
00:37:297 (2) - 突然冒出一个红点slider有点违和 orz
01:37:826 (1,2) - blanket可以做的更好些:3
01:38:532 (3,4) - ^
01:41:356 (1,2,3,4) - 安排成一左一右会很好玩?233
01:42:414 (5) - 这串就这里一个finish不幸福啊
感觉kiai部分finish用的有点少很多能用的地方没用用上效果应该不错吧ww

Nice map and song ww Take my star~

Melt

353 posts

Joined May 2011

Melt 2013-03-29T14:25:55+00:00

scanter

Stack Leniency -1 good idea
00:34:650 (4) - Add S finish here. you can hear about finish sound. fixed
00:38:532 (1) - Add S finish on 00:38:885 same fixed
00:39:944 (3,4,1,1) - Add S finish. fixed
00:41:356 (1) - Add S finish fixed
00:44:532 (2) - Change soft default finish.
00:45:591 (3,4) - How about this? looks good to me about more rhythmical. http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/668097
This is code.
SPOILER
```
36,28,45591,2,0,L|20:84,1,50
4,176,46120,2,0,P|32:232|63:246,1,100
64,247,46650,1,0,0:0:0:0:
```
00:55:826 (1) - Start at 00:55:473 much better. I recommend this time. end is same.
01:16:649 (1,1,1) - Just, strange. should change notes. i think its fine to me
01:10:649 (1) - Add finish on slider's first and end.
01:20:884 (1) - Add finish on slider's first.
01:33:590 (1) - Add finish on slider's first.
01:42:060 (1) - Change finish sound at slider's first.
01:44:531 (1) - Add finish.
01:44:884 (2) - Add finish on slider's first. whistle is enough

Pisces

00:36:414 (2) - be bent up Bend down is better to me
00:52:650 (5) - remove NC fixed
00:53:003 (1) - NC fixed
01:19:472 (1,1) - how about remove 01:20:884 (1) and expend spinner to 01:21:944 ? i think a slider here is ok
01:50:531 (1) - (108,175) for perfectly overlap! fixed :3
01:53:355 (1) - expend to 01:58:297, same Insane Diff

angelfix

00:08:931 歪了一点 fixed

a3272509123

00:30:767 (2,3,4,5,6) - 这几个可以排的更好些...做成圆弧应该会不错~ 我尽量吧3,4,5,6弄成弧线了
00:54:414 (3) - 加个whsitle? 好
01:15:237 (4) - 这个可以右移,让上个slider的blanket完美包围这个slider的头部~ fixed
01:22:296 (2) - NC fixed
01:33:590 (1) - 开头用个default的finish可能会好些?ww 觉得现在还可以,先留着吧

thanks for modding :3

http://puu.sh/2q7ma

wantuole

528 posts

Joined December 2010

wantuole 2013-03-29T14:34:08+00:00

from pm

[General]
bg size
皮肤单个star2删了吧
[easy]
01:11:002 (2) - 红线结束
01:53:355 (1) - 收尾spinner最后音降点大概30~40%
[Normal]
00:24:447 (6) - 音量10%太小了
fine
good job

[Hyper]
00:12:457 (3) - 换成note吧 00:12:634这个音不太需要
01:19:473 (1,2,3,4) - 太乱还不如直接copy一个摆一列4个
01:22:120 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - 突然加速slider已经很突兀了再加大跳就很难了善良点的排列 (5) x:165 y:57
~~我也想要善良的翅膀~~
[Another]
00:14:749 (7,8,9,10) - 跳的不舒服 (10) 出现在右上角会舒服很多一个上下上下跳
00:15:631 (1) - 末尾叠在00:14:221 (6) - 头上
00:40:297 (1,2,3) - 感觉要调整下这遮盖和NC梗并不善良也没任何玩点 (题外话:用了NC梗按理说00:40:826 (4) - 也需要NC才保持一致)
01:31:297 (5,6) - 这个位子不用这个梗三连的音在01:31:297~01:31:473 所以打起来很别扭试试三连入slider
01:46:826 (6) - +1 note? 会带感很多
01:48:767和01:48:944 ^

Strawberry

osu! Alumni

1,536 posts

Joined October 2010

Topic Starter

Strawberry 2013-03-30T15:45:48+00:00

~~will check later~ thank you ><~~

sorry for have not enough time to reply each suggestion. fixed mostly. >< all updated.

Last edited by Strawberry 2013-03-31T13:33:06+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

Gloria Guard

2,273 posts

Joined May 2011

Gloria Guard 2013-03-30T16:11:38+00:00

Sorry guy no fix orz..

Teara

osu! Alumni

814 posts

Joined June 2009

Teara 2013-04-01T19:23:14+00:00

No kd

Taiko diffs look fine, but can you please get a few mods for them? Once its been modded a bit, call me back for a bubble.

I'm quite unsure about hitsounds, while it fits. At places it sounds really soft, I'd suggest increasing it about 5% to 10% for each timing section.

[Gloria's Beginner]
Lots of unsnapped objects.

Lan wings

790 posts

Joined August 2010

Lan wings 2013-04-01T19:31:30+00:00

http://1000eb.com/hfxq
好像還沒給你來著..

jomnhnk

276 posts

Joined March 2010

jomnhnk 2013-04-02T06:06:18+00:00

Teara wrote:
No kd

Taiko diffs look fine, but can you please get a few mods for them? Once its been modded a bit, call me back for a bubble.

I'm quite unsure about hitsounds, while it fits. At places it sounds really soft, I'd suggest increasing it about 5% to 10% for each timing section.

[Gloria's Beginner]
Lots of unsnapped objects.

I am looking for taiko modder~!

toara_fict

1,319 posts

Joined July 2012

toara_fict 2013-04-02T14:00:53+00:00

hi~
Taiko map mod~ o3o

参考までにお願いします・ω・！

[jom's Muzukashii]

00:38:356 (34) - d
00:48:767 (68) - k
01:15:590 (43,44,45) - d k k ?
01:28:296 (32,33,34) - d d k
01:40:473 (87) - ここの前に削るかしてここにノーツ入れたいですね！

[jom's Oni]

00:48:767 (113,114) - k k
00:51:591 (139,140) - kk (難易度上がってしまうかも）
01:16:120 (51) - k
01:32:179 (170,171,172,173,174,175,176,177,178) - ここすごくいいと思いました！good
01:37:826 (215) - k
01:38:003 (216,217,218) - dkk
01:40:473 (233,234,235) - kkd
01:49:650 (292) - k

以上です！・ω・
頑張ってください>w<

jomnhnk

276 posts

Joined March 2010

jomnhnk 2013-04-02T14:33:57+00:00

toara_fict wrote:
hi~
Taiko map mod~ o3o

参考までにお願いします・ω・！

[jom's Muzukashii]

00:38:356 (34) - d Sorry~ no・・・
00:48:767 (68) - k　　^
01:15:590 (43,44,45) - d k k ? Fixed
01:28:296 (32,33,34) - d d k Fixed~
01:40:473 (87) - ここの前に削るかしてここにノーツ入れたいですね！少しいじってみました

[jom's Oni]

00:48:767 (113,114) - k k　　　ｋの要素がなかったかな。。。
00:51:591 (139,140) - kk (難易度上がってしまうかも）　　　^
01:16:120 (51) - k 　　　　うーん。どっちでもいいかもしれないけどNoで・・・
01:32:179 (170,171,172,173,174,175,176,177,178) - ここすごくいいと思いました！good　　Thank you><
01:37:826 (215) - k　Soooo good!!　Fixed~
01:38:003 (216,217,218) - dkk　　
01:40:473 (233,234,235) - kkd
01:49:650 (292) - k

以上です！・ω・
頑張ってください>w<

Oniで１つとてもいい所がありました！ありがとうございましたー！Muzuのほうは結構意見取り入れてみましたー！

Leorda

4,416 posts

Joined June 2009

Leorda 2013-04-02T15:17:41+00:00

What's up

[General]
* Some Kiai time isn't snapped. Please snapped, and apply this to all diff

[Beginner]
* 20 slider have an unsnapped end slider, check AIMod to fix this

00:44:532 (1) - This sliderpath will be overlapped by hitbursts, so beginners can't read while gameplay
00:48:767 (3) - ^
01:11:002 (2) - Tail slider isn't snapped at red tick
01:23:708 (3) - Same issue 00:44:532 (1)

[Normal]
00:24:447 (6) - Why whistle+finish? It doesn't fit to the song
00:36:414 (2,3,4) - This pattern having a bad flow during gameplay. Use this pattern http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/686233
01:16:650 (1,1,1) - 3 spinners in normal diff is doesn't make sense. If you do this, beginners/average players will be hard and tiring to complete this 3 short spinner. Consider to replace them into one spinner
01:30:061 (6) - Flip horizontally for better good flow
01:44:531 (1,2,3,4) - Use this pattern for better good flow for previous slider http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/686248

[Hyper]
00:40:297 (2) - Move to X:296 and Y:84 for better good flow
01:20:179 (3) - Head slider is overlapped by hitbursts for something.....
01:29:179 - Add note here? The stops makes break the combos, so add it?
01:37:120 - ^

[Another]
00:11:399 (4) - Flip horizontally for better good flow
00:22:243 (1) - This short spinner are tiring for expert player and having a bad gameplay. Consider to extend it or replace it with a sldier
01:23:620 (8) - Replace this slider into a circle. Having a short slider like this can looks uncomfortable while listening to the rhythm and music
01:25:032 (7) - ^
01:34:826 (1,2) - If your pattern like this and then suddenly jump pattern, it could be surprising for expert player while gameplay. Consider to change them?

Good luck~

Gloria Guard

2,273 posts

Joined May 2011

Gloria Guard 2013-04-02T15:19:31+00:00

Fixed thanks modding

Update

osu file format v12

[General]
AudioFilename: Narcissus At Oasis.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 81852
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 1

[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 1.2
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4

[Metadata]
Title:Narcissus At Oasis
TitleUnicode:Narcissus At Oasis
Artist:Ryu*
ArtistUnicode:Ryu*
Creator:Strawberry
Version:Gloria's Beginner
Source:beatmania IIDX 10 Style
Tags:instrumental ring Gloria Guard Melt Lan wings jomnhnk
BeatmapID:229351
BeatmapSetID:79544

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:2
CircleSize:3
OverallDifficulty:2
ApproachRate:3
SliderMultiplier:0.799999999999999
SliderTickRate:1

[Events]
//Background and Video events
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//Break Periods
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//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
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//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples
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Melt

353 posts

Joined May 2011

Melt 2013-04-04T07:05:14+00:00

wantuole

00:24:447 (6) - 音量10%太小了 fixed

Leorda

00:24:447 (6) - Why whistle+finish? It doesn't fit to the song delete finish
00:36:414 (2,3,4) - This pattern having a bad flow during gameplay. Use this pattern http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/686233 fixed
01:16:650 (1,1,1) - 3 spinners in normal diff is doesn't make sense. If you do this, beginners/average players will be hard and tiring to complete this 3 short spinner. Consider to replace them into one spinner changed the first two spin into sliders
01:30:061 (6) - Flip horizontally for better good flow i think its fine to me ;w;
01:44:531 (1,2,3,4) - Use this pattern for better good flow for previous slider http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/686248 fixed

thanks for modding :3

http://puu.sh/2tAOo

Lan wings

790 posts

Joined August 2010

Lan wings 2013-04-04T09:06:15+00:00

Leorda wrote:
What's up

[General]
* Some Kiai time isn't snapped. Please snapped, and apply this to all diff

[Hyper]
00:40:297 (2) - Move to X:296 and Y:84 for better good flowFxed
01:20:179 (3) - Head slider is overlapped by hitbursts for something.....Fixed
01:29:179 - Add note here? The stops makes break the combos, so add it?01:29:356 (1) - here have NC
01:37:120 - ^^

Good luck~

Purple:Fixed
Pink:Ignore

HelloSCV

3,490 posts

Joined April 2011

HelloSCV 2013-04-04T11:27:27+00:00

From my queue

Beginner
00:26:915 (1) - 스피너 길이 00:29:031 - 여기까지 줄이시는거 추천드려요
01:11:003 (2) - 슬라이더 오류 확인좀
01:45:590 (2) - NC
- Normal
  http://puu.sh/2tERH check this
  how about re-name to "Standard" ?
  
  00:40:297 (4,1) - this stack seems confusing for beginners
  i think some parts on kiai time is overmapped considered this is normal diff ( you don't need something like 01:26:355 (4,6) - these things )
  01:39:900 - not used green line
  - Hyper
    00:31:297 (1) - change to 1/2 slider is better imo, sice you made fit rhythms on drum
    00:35:356 (5,1) - looks ugly? try this http://puu.sh/2tEGl
    00:38:709 (7) - ^
    01:19:473 (1,2,3,4) - well.. i think this pattern plays little bit messy orz.. try other pattern?
    - Another
      00:15:455 (10) - i think delete this finish and adding it on 00:15:102 (9) - this end much better ( you may hear if you delete notes on there )
      00:20:744 (7) - add finish on head same reason with above
      01:20:885 (2) - finish on repeat?
      01:32:532 (2) - this distance is puposed? if it is, how about chaing to 01:31:120 (4) - like here? ( music hears similar and plays not bad )
      01:42:062 (1) - how about finish instead whistle?
      
      Good luck

Strawberry

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Strawberry 2013-04-04T13:40:01+00:00

Leorda wrote:
[Another]
00:11:399 (4) - Flip horizontally for better good flow nah the present looks more slinky imo~
00:22:243 (1) - This short spinner are tiring for expert player and having a bad gameplay. Consider to extend it or replace it with a sldier indeed. re-arranged this part~!
01:23:620 (8) - Replace this slider into a circle. Having a short slider like this can looks uncomfortable while listening to the rhythm and music i just wanna keep my thought for these patterns.. they are fineand not even a bit weird for me.. ;w;
01:25:032 (7) - ^
01:34:826 (1,2) - If your pattern like this and then suddenly jump pattern, it could be surprising for expert player while gameplay. Consider to change them? would be much better on playability for now~

the unsnapped kiai times are just bugged on aimod. themselves are snapped constitutionally.

HelloSCV wrote:
Another
00:15:455 (10) - i think delete this finish and adding it on 00:15:102 (9) - this end much better ( you may hear if you delete notes on there ) nice catch.
00:20:744 (7) - add finish on head same reason with above yep.
01:20:885 (2) - finish on repeat? good.~
01:32:532 (2) - this distance is puposed? if it is, how about chaing to 01:31:120 (4) - like here? ( music hears similar and plays not bad ) agree~
01:42:062 (1) - how about finish instead whistle? k changed.

@Teara: i tried the increased volume of hitsounds but sound worse.. however the current volume is really fine to me and could be heard clearly also.

thank you all guys ><

qkenan

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qkenan 2013-04-05T06:09:13+00:00

Red = Unrankable
Blue = It should be modified
Black = My suggestion

M4M here _(:з」∠)_ (Sorry for delay and poor mod

[General]

star2.png?

[Beginner&Normal]

Fine~

[Hyper]

00:08:931 (4,5) - not parallel
00:35:356 (5) - not so good flow. try do Ctrl+G ? (If you did, for consistency maybe ④ also need Ctrl+G
This way make me feel better
SPOILER
00:37:120 (1,2) - under ar7 I read the pattern as triplet for the first time...
01:17:709 (1,2) - a little too big spacing here, how about moving them to x108y316
From preview point, the period we usually regard as kiai time is not very suitable for ar7 because you used much bigger spacing and SV. So I suggest ar8

[Another]

00:36:679 (3,4) - I prefer this shape
SPOILER
01:31:297 (5) - why not use normal curved slider ? Maybe a little hard for player to read the following 1/4 slider

Nice map
~~原来刘星也能作这么好的曲子~~

Lan wings

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Lan wings 2013-04-05T07:02:27+00:00

qkenan wrote:
Red = Unrankable
Blue = It should be modified
Black = My suggestion

[Hyper]
00:08:931 (4,5) - not parallel
00:35:356 (5) - not so good flow. try do Ctrl+G ? (If you did, for consistency maybe ④ also need Ctrl+G
This way make me feel better
SPOILER
00:37:120 (1,2) - under ar7 I read the pattern as triplet for the first time...
01:17:709 (1,2) - a little too big spacing here, how about moving them to x108y316
From preview point, the period we usually regard as kiai time is not very suitable for ar7 because you used much bigger spacing and SV. So I suggest ar8
Nice map
~~原来刘星也能作这么好的曲子~~

no change

[Beginner]
00:54:767 volume 16% soft default
00:54:944 volume 18% soft default
[Normal]
00:55:650 volume 26% soft default
[Another]
00:53:179 volume 18% soft default

no kd

Strawberry

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Strawberry 2013-04-05T13:47:16+00:00

star2.png for kiai burst.. other things no change sorry.. ;w;

updated missed inherited points~

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