sphere - HIGH POWERED (TV Size) [Taiko|Osu] · forum

Cloudchaser

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Cloudchaser 2013-02-17T21:09:08+00:00

This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on jueves, 14 de noviembre de 2013 at 17:42:20

Artist: sphere
Title: HIGH POWERED (TV Size)
Source: 侵略!イカ娘
Tags: opening squid girl Shinryaku! Ika Musume Diomedea Masahiro Anbe anime dolphin Roxas 0gre astom
BPM: 187
Filesize: 17039kb
Play Time: 01:27
Difficulties Available:

0gre's Taiko Muzukashii (4,72 stars, 450 notes)
Astom's Insane!? (4,9 stars, 339 notes)
Dolphin's Taiko Oni (4,89 stars, 556 notes)
Easy!? (2,62 stars, 10 notes)
Normal!? (4,12 stars, 126 notes)
Roxas' Hard!? (4,93 stars, 186 notes)

Download: sphere - HIGH POWERED (TV Size)
Download: sphere - HIGH POWERED (TV Size) (no video)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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Shinryaku!? Ika Musume ヽ(*・ω・)ﾉI mapping this because this song is very moe and caguaii like Gato my brother, my loli, he is my best friend~
(*･∀･)／＼(･∀･*)

My #3rd Beatmap
Fully remapping Easy and Normal.
Redownload -> added video and new backgrounds. I changed my nick also.
Video from this beatmap -> https://osu.ppy.sh/s/37202

Last edited by Cloudchaser 2013-11-14T20:43:34+00:00, edited 72 times in total.

Loooctav

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Joined January 2012

Loooctav 2013-02-18T03:10:44+00:00

Ok, Te are Un Mod.. pero ams ratito :3

Loooctav

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Joined January 2012

Loooctav 2013-02-20T02:16:07+00:00

Hoolaa!!
Shinryaku!!

!faq color
Negro: Cambio, pero quiza no necesario como lo digo yo.
Rojo: Unrankeable.
Azul: Idea.
Verde: Debe ser como digo.
[General]

Recomiendo que la imagen no contenga texto alguno, para no hacer enredos con el SB que as agregado.

[Easy!]

Circle Size 2? Es demasiado grande incluso para el Easy, Recomiendo usar 3, Trabajaras el Mapa mucho mejor en 3

00:01:893 (2) Bueno, si notas bien, esto es un easy, y no se si conoces el concepto "Flow" Que consiste en que todas las notas o jugadas salgan de forma natural en la partida, a que me refiero a que si haces un slider a la derecha, la nota siguiente sera en la derecha y un slider te ayude a cambiar la direccion, en este caso te serviria poner la nota en x:400 y:52
00:02:535 (3,4) Elimina El Slider Y La nota siguiente, y aqui 00:02:535 Agrega una nota aqui x:464 y:200
00:03:176 Aqui agrega un slider como este --> http://puu.sh/25nO3
00:04:460 (5) Dejalo de forma que calce con el espacio del (6) y el (4)
00:05:101 (6,1) Aqui las notas chocan, y no es bueno que las notas choquen en un nivel facil, Seria bueno que hicieras lo mismo que en (6) Pero Al revés para seguir la corriente (Flow) Y Así llegar a la nota jugando para que no sea un movimiento forzoso, que el juego salga de forma natural.
00:06:064 (7) Esta la podrias dejar así ? --> http://puu.sh/25o00 x:36 y:36
00:07:668 (8) NC, Muevelo al x:336 y:100
00:08:310 (2) <-(sera (2) Solo si agrega el NC de ^) x:204 y:192
00:08:952 (3) x:336 y:280
00:09:593 (4) CTRL + G + CTRL + H Luego lo mueve asta x476 y:356 (Flow)
00:13:765 (1) Aquí cambia el ritmo así que agregue un Finish en la cabeza del slider
00:16:973 (5) No Subreponga notas, no lo deja ver, es un Easy, aquí no tengo una idea clara de como arreglar, así que busque como dejarlo para no taparlo, pero es bueno que en los Easy's No se Choque ninguna nota, o por lo menos que no se note

00:21:465 (2) No es un gran salto? no va a corde el Distance Snap, Que es lo mas recomendado.
00:27:883 (5) CTRL + J Y Muévalo para que quede aquí
00:29:167 (6) x:340 y:8
00:31:092 (2) Poner Una Nota Bajo un Slider Es UNRANKEABLE Se supone que es bajo el camino de el slider, pero no esta en la punta esta un poco en el camino y eso debe ser aclarado --> http://puu.sh/25oF1
00:31:733 (3) x:344 y:56
00:38:791 (5) Finish en la cabeza del Slider, Por el cambio de ritmo
00:38:791 (5,6,1) Las Notas se tocan, Es mejor que no se toquen para no confundir

00:46:171 (5) Mueva el slider ya que toca a la nota (2)
01:07:347 (3,4,5) Que las notas no se sobrepongan!!
01:24:032 (4) ^
01:27:561 Agregue Una GreenLine Con Volumen 5%

Cloudchaser

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Topic Starter

Cloudchaser 2013-02-20T04:58:19+00:00

ThoomyyxD wrote:
Hoolaa!!
Shinryaku!!

!faq color
Negro: Cambio, pero quiza no necesario como lo digo yo.
Rojo: Unrankeable.
Azul: Idea.
Verde: Debe ser como digo.
[General]
Recomiendo que la imagen no contenga texto alguno, para no hacer enredos con el SB que as agregado. El fondo se queda a menos que otro moddeer me diga lo mismo
[Easy!]
Circle Size 2? Es demasiado grande incluso para el Easy, Recomiendo usar 3, Trabajaras el Mapa mucho mejor en 3
bueno
00:01:893 (2) Bueno, si notas bien, esto es un easy, y no se si conoces el concepto "Flow" Que consiste en que todas las notas o jugadas salgan de forma natural en la partida, a que me refiero a que si haces un slider a la derecha, la nota siguiente sera en la derecha y un slider te ayude a cambiar la direccion, en este caso te serviria poner la nota en x:400 y:52 ya
00:02:535 (3,4) Elimina El Slider Y La nota siguiente, y aqui 00:02:535 Agrega una nota aqui x:464 y:200 key
00:03:176 Aqui agrega un slider como este --> http://puu.sh/25nO3 No, ese slider no me gusta porque quebraría el 'flow' de la siguiente nota así que lo moví hacía la izquierda
00:04:460 (5) Dejalo de forma que calce con el espacio del (6) y el (4) ^, gracias a eso las (5) calza con (6) y (4)
00:05:101 (6,1) Aqui las notas chocan, y no es bueno que las notas choquen en un nivel facil, Seria bueno que hicieras lo mismo que en (6) Pero Al revés para seguir la corriente (Flow) Y Así llegar a la nota jugando para que no sea un movimiento forzoso, que el juego salga de forma natural. cambié el diseño de unos sliders y listo
00:06:064 (7) Esta la podrias dejar así ? --> http://puu.sh/25o00 x:36 y:36 No, rompe la distancia entre las otras notas (estoy usando distance snap 1,0x) y en una dificultad easy tiene que ser constante la distancia usada.
00:07:668 (8) NC, Muevelo al x:336 y:100 No.
00:08:310 (2) <-(sera (2) Solo si agrega el NC de ^) x:204 y:192 No.
00:08:952 (3) x:336 y:280 no
00:09:593 (4) CTRL + G + CTRL + H Luego lo mueve asta x476 y:356 (Flow) lo modifiqué mientras hacía lo de arriba.
00:13:765 (1) Aquí cambia el ritmo así que agregue un Finish en la cabeza del slider Ya tenía uno ~
00:16:973 (5) No Subreponga notas, no lo deja ver, es un Easy, aquí no tengo una idea clara de como arreglar, así que busque como dejarlo para no taparlo, pero es bueno que en los Easy's No se Choque ninguna nota, o por lo menos que no se note Eh? no hay ninguna nota sobrepuesta ahí, fíjate mejor.
00:21:465 (2) No es un gran salto? no va a corde el Distance Snap, Que es lo mas recomendado. de echo está bien porque uso distance snap de 1,0x, si no me crees compruébalo tú mismo.
00:27:883 (5) CTRL + J Y Muévalo para que quede aquí Ya
00:29:167 (6) x:340 y:8 ne
00:31:092 (2) Poner Una Nota Bajo un Slider Es UNRANKEABLE Se supone que es bajo el camino de el slider, pero no esta en la punta esta un poco en el camino y eso debe ser aclarado --> http://puu.sh/25oF1 Está bien la regla, pero está bien las notas que puse ya, 00:31:092 (2) - está en un lugar donde estuvo un slider, pero ya desapareció hace bastantes segundos pasando por 00:29:167 (6,1) - para recién aparecer en 00:31:091 - , así que dejaré eso como está.
00:31:733 (3) x:344 y:56 no, ¿para qué?
00:38:791 (5) Finish en la cabeza del Slider, Por el cambio de ritmo Bueno
00:38:791 (5,6,1) Las Notas se tocan, Es mejor que no se toquen para no confundir Lo dejaré así, me gusta y es fácil.
00:46:171 (5) Mueva el slider ya que toca a la nota (2) arreglé varias cosas.
01:07:347 (3,4,5) Que las notas no se sobrepongan!! bueno =.=
01:24:032 (4) ^ ^
01:27:561 Agregue Una GreenLine Con Volumen 5% No

Bueno, mod mucho mejor que el último que me has hecho, lel.
justifique un poco más, sería mejor.
gracias ~:3

CruzadoqL

CruzadoqL 2013-02-20T15:18:02+00:00

Ando con toda la paja de escribir, le eché una mirada al easy y al normal, y la verdad hay MUCHAS cosas que cambiar y/o arreglar.
Cuando se me pase te hago las sugerencias de mi mod ultrapahhbre

+star
sochao :3

Cloudchaser

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Cloudchaser 2013-02-20T17:17:08+00:00

Crxz4do wrote:
Ando con toda la paja de escribir, le eché una mirada al easy y al normal, y la verdad hay MUCHAS cosas que cambiar y/o arreglar.
Cuando se me pase te hago las sugerencias de mi mod ultrapahhbre

+star
sochao :3

Lo sé, lo hice muy improvisado cuando estuve de vacaciones xD es un "sketch" para así decirlo, vengan mods hacía mi.

The hunterx

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Joined April 2011

The hunterx 2013-02-20T17:51:10+00:00

aqui te deje una estrellita ,en 2 o 3 dias mas hago un modd para tu mapa

Cloudchaser

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Cloudchaser 2013-02-20T20:26:37+00:00

ok!

estaré esperando tu mod ansiosa ~

Esperando los mapas de Taiko :3 ~

Dolphin

1,167 posts

Joined January 2012

Dolphin 2013-02-20T20:51:56+00:00

Mod because can. o3o

[Overview]
You might want to increase the hitsound volume, I can barely hear them!

[Easy!?]
This map is good. Can't really any issues. The Song Setup settings are good.

[Normal!?]
You might want to make the combo colour change frequently, some parts are hard to read due to it.
00:04:460 (5) - Please change combo colour here. This part is tedious to read.
00:28:444 (1) - This is a it awkward to play with. Make the slider snapped to 1/2 BSD.
00:45:850 (9) - New combo colour please!

[Hard!?]
This map is very fast paced, but it's still fun to play!
The HP Drain is very high for this map, set it to 6 or 7.
00:04:700 (7) - Remove this note please, it's awkward to play, because most streams end on either Red or White ticks.
01:19:380 (5) - New Combo please, this is awkward to read.

This is my first ever Standard mod :s I can tell it was very bad! But I hoped I helped!
~~(I will be coming with my Taiko Oni soon!)~~

Last edited by Dolphin 2013-02-22T01:23:28+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

Cloudchaser

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Cloudchaser 2013-02-20T21:18:36+00:00

Dolphin wrote:
Mod because can. o3o

[Overview]
You might want to increase the hitsound volume, I can barely hear them! Nah ~ its okay the hitsound volume o3o

[Easy!?]
This map is good. Can't really any issues. The Song Setup settings are good. Thankies ~ :3

[Normal!?]
You might want to make the combo colour change frequently, some parts are hard to read due to it.
00:04:460 (5) - Please change combo colour here. This part is tedious to read.Okay
00:28:444 (1) - This is a it awkward to play with. Make the slider snapped to 1/2 BSD.Fixed
00:45:850 (9) - New combo colour please! ~~Nah~~, okay
thankie ~
[Hard!?]
This map is very fast paced, but it's still fun to play!
The HP Drain is very high for this map, set it to 6 or 7. fixed, 6 now
00:04:700 (7) - Remove this note please, it's awkward to play, because most streams end on either Red or White ticks. Yeah, i forget it.
01:19:380 (5) - New Combo please, this is awkward to read. okay, you are right ~

This is my first ever Standard mod :s I can tell it was very bad! But I hoped I helped!
(I will be coming with my Taiko Oni soon!)

Thanks! was useful~ I hate my stupid mistakes ;w; thankies again

UPDATED ~!

XinCrin

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Joined January 2012

XinCrin 2013-02-21T19:07:13+00:00

Oh Cloud regresò a los mapas !!

I'm so happy

Suerte!

Cloudchaser

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Cloudchaser 2013-02-21T21:31:41+00:00

XinCrin wrote:
Oh Cloud regresò a los mapas !!

I'm so happy

Suerte!

Me quedaré solo para eso <3

Cloud is back

BeatofIke

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BeatofIke 2013-02-23T02:32:01+00:00

Hello Cloudchaser! Mod request via forum PM!
Since you are a new mapper, I will go Easy on you! Here's a quick mod!

[General]

You have some unsnapped notes!
Your map has a bug! I can't see some of your notes!
Your combos are very inconsistent!

[Easy]

AIBat wrote this:
SPOILER
00:00:610 (1) - Unsnapped slider (end).
00:03:176 (4) - Unsnapped slider (end).
00:05:101 (6) - Unsnapped slider (end).
00:06:385 (1) - Unsnapped slider (end).
00:09:593 (5) - Unsnapped slider (end).
00:13:765 (1) - Unsnapped slider (end).
00:16:973 (5) - Unsnapped slider (end).
00:19:540 (1) - Unsnapped slider (end).
00:20:503 (2) - Unsnapped slider (repeat).
00:20:503 (2) - Unsnapped slider (end).
00:24:675 (1) - Unsnapped slider (end).
00:27:882 (5) - Unsnapped slider (end).
00:29:167 (6) - Unsnapped slider (end).
00:32:375 (4) - Unsnapped slider (end).
00:33:658 (5) - Unsnapped slider (repeat).
00:33:658 (5) - Unsnapped slider (end).
00:35:583 (1) - Unsnapped slider (end).
00:38:791 (5) - Unsnapped slider (repeat).
00:38:791 (5) - Unsnapped slider (end).
00:57:722 (5) - Unsnapped slider (repeat).
00:57:722 (5) - Unsnapped slider (end).
00:59:647 (6) - Unsnapped slider (repeat).
00:59:647 (6) - Unsnapped slider (end).
01:01:572 (1) - Unsnapped slider (end).
01:02:855 (2) - Unsnapped slider (end).
01:09:914 (7) - Unsnapped slider (repeat).
01:09:914 (7) - Unsnapped slider (end).
01:15:690 (7) - Unsnapped slider (repeat).
01:15:690 (7) - Unsnapped slider (end).
01:20:182 (5) - Unsnapped slider (repeat).
01:20:182 (5) - Unsnapped slider (end).

[Normal]

Inconsistent combos. Add new combo for every 1 or 2 measures.

[Hard]

AIBat wrote:
SPOILER
00:02:679 (1) - Unsnapped circle.

That's pretty much it! Good luck!

Cloudchaser

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Cloudchaser 2013-02-23T02:51:52+00:00

BeatofIke wrote:
Hello Cloudchaser! Mod request via forum PM!
Since you are a new mapper, I will go Easy on you! Here's a quick mod!

[General]
You have some unsnapped notes!
Your map has a bug! I can't see some of your notes!
Your combos are very inconsistent!
[Easy]
AIBat wrote this:
SPOILER
00:00:610 (1) - Unsnapped slider (end).
00:03:176 (4) - Unsnapped slider (end).
00:05:101 (6) - Unsnapped slider (end).
00:06:385 (1) - Unsnapped slider (end).
00:09:593 (5) - Unsnapped slider (end).
00:13:765 (1) - Unsnapped slider (end).
00:16:973 (5) - Unsnapped slider (end).
00:19:540 (1) - Unsnapped slider (end).
00:20:503 (2) - Unsnapped slider (repeat).
00:20:503 (2) - Unsnapped slider (end).
00:24:675 (1) - Unsnapped slider (end).
00:27:882 (5) - Unsnapped slider (end).
00:29:167 (6) - Unsnapped slider (end).
00:32:375 (4) - Unsnapped slider (end).
00:33:658 (5) - Unsnapped slider (repeat).
00:33:658 (5) - Unsnapped slider (end).
00:35:583 (1) - Unsnapped slider (end).
00:38:791 (5) - Unsnapped slider (repeat).
00:38:791 (5) - Unsnapped slider (end).
00:57:722 (5) - Unsnapped slider (repeat).
00:57:722 (5) - Unsnapped slider (end).
00:59:647 (6) - Unsnapped slider (repeat).
00:59:647 (6) - Unsnapped slider (end).
01:01:572 (1) - Unsnapped slider (end).
01:02:855 (2) - Unsnapped slider (end).
01:09:914 (7) - Unsnapped slider (repeat).
01:09:914 (7) - Unsnapped slider (end).
01:15:690 (7) - Unsnapped slider (repeat).
01:15:690 (7) - Unsnapped slider (end).
01:20:182 (5) - Unsnapped slider (repeat).
01:20:182 (5) - Unsnapped slider (end).
[Normal]
Inconsistent combos. Add new combo for every 1 or 2 measures.
[Hard]
AIBat wrote:
SPOILER
00:02:679 (1) - Unsnapped circle.
That's pretty much it! Good luck!

Thanks! ~ sorry for the issue ):

Flask

Beatmap Nominator

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Flask 2013-02-23T14:24:12+00:00

omg ikamusume <3

HellDawn

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HellDawn 2013-02-23T17:19:54+00:00

General

Everywhere re blue colours O_o At least you can change combo colours.

Easy

I dont why this diff doesnt fit with combos I think you should remap for it

00:54:513- no clap or whistle. put finish
00:59:647- ^
01:04:781 (4) - ^
01:09:914- ^
01:15:048 (6) - ^
01:27:561- ^

Please check your hitsounds

Normal

00:08:310- new combo should be here so please remove new combo last one this> 00:10:235
00:13:444- hard to catch because of the spinner
00:48:417 (7) - new combo
01:27:561- finish

Hard

00:54:593- finish
01:04:781 (1) - ^
01:15:048 (1) - one grid down
last spinner need finish

Sorry I cant full mod.

Cloudchaser

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Topic Starter

Cloudchaser 2013-02-25T17:35:06+00:00

Updated!

Moved to pendings!!

HabiHolic

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Joined October 2012

HabiHolic 2013-02-28T13:45:07+00:00

Hello~ From My Queues~

[Easy!?]

HP Drain -1
OD -1

00:29:167 (6) - Distance check
00:28:845 - add Circle
00:49:380 (1) - Remove NC?
00:47:454 (6) - NC?
00:57:080 (4) - Remove 00:57:722 (5) - This slider 00:57:080 - Go here and
01:06:064 (1) - Remove NC
01:04:781 (4) - NC
01:09:914 (7) - ^
01:22:107 (1) - Remove NC
01:22:749 (2) - NC

[Normal!?]
00:01:572 (3,4,5) - Interval narrowed your
00:03:176 (7,1,2) - ^
00:04:460 (4,1,2,3,4,5) - ^
00:06:706 (3) - Distance check
00:08:310 (1,2,3) - Interval narrowed your
00:15:369 (5,6,7) - ^
00:20:503 (1) - Remove NC
00:21:786 (2,3,4) - Date to sort
00:23:872 (2,3,4,5) - Normal difficulty too difficult considering different change pattern like this?
00:25:797 (1) - Remove NC
00:26:278 (3) - NC
00:40:396 (1) - Spinner is a little bit much, went awkward.
00:49:380 (4) - Remove
00:49:700 (1) - Spinner 00:49:380 - Finish Here
01:00:289 (1,2,3,4) - Opps .. I'd like to change this pattern is too difficult
01:02:214 (6) - Distance check
01:04:139 (3) - ^
01:09:914 (8) - NC?
01:25:396 (1) - Spinner Strat 01:25:315 - Here..

[Hard!?]

AR +1
00:04:299 (2,3,4,5,6) - Rearrange
00:37:347 (7) - Beat awkward
00:42:962 (7,8) - ^
00:44:085 (2,3) - ^
00:48:577 (3) - ^
00:55:315 (5) - ^
00:56:599 (3) - ^

[Astom's Insane!?]
00:02:214 (2) - Ctrl + G
00:10:235 (4,5,6,7) - Distance check
00:12:801 (2) - Ctrl + G
00:46:652 (1) - Slider look sloppy differently to change the look
00:50:663 (4) - ^
01:02:695 (3,4) - Distance check (ex - 01:09:593 (4,5))

Good Luck~~

Cloudchaser

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Cloudchaser 2013-02-28T18:38:29+00:00

HabiHolic wrote:
Hello~ From My Queues~

[Easy!?]

HP Drain -1
OD -1

00:29:167 (6) - Distance check
00:28:845 - add Circle
00:49:380 (1) - Remove NC?
00:47:454 (6) - NC?
00:57:080 (4) - Remove 00:57:722 (5) - This slider 00:57:080 - Go here and
01:06:064 (1) - Remove NC
01:04:781 (4) - NC
01:09:914 (7) - ^
01:22:107 (1) - Remove NC
01:22:749 (2) - NC

[Normal!?]
00:01:572 (3,4,5) - Interval narrowed your
00:03:176 (7,1,2) - ^
00:04:460 (4,1,2,3,4,5) - ^
00:06:706 (3) - Distance check
00:08:310 (1,2,3) - Interval narrowed your
00:15:369 (5,6,7) - ^
00:20:503 (1) - Remove NC
00:21:786 (2,3,4) - Date to sort
00:23:872 (2,3,4,5) - Normal difficulty too difficult considering different change pattern like this?
00:25:797 (1) - Remove NC
00:26:278 (3) - NC
00:40:396 (1) - Spinner is a little bit much, went awkward.
00:49:380 (4) - Remove
00:49:700 (1) - Spinner 00:49:380 - Finish Here
01:00:289 (1,2,3,4) - Opps .. I'd like to change this pattern is too difficult
01:02:214 (6) - Distance check
01:04:139 (3) - ^
01:09:914 (8) - NC?
01:25:396 (1) - Spinner Strat 01:25:315 - Here..

[Hard!?]

AR +1
00:04:299 (2,3,4,5,6) - Rearrange
00:37:347 (7) - Beat awkward
00:42:962 (7,8) - ^
00:44:085 (2,3) - ^
00:48:577 (3) - ^
00:55:315 (5) - ^
00:56:599 (3) - ^

[Astom's Insane!?]
00:02:214 (2) - Ctrl + G
00:10:235 (4,5,6,7) - Distance check
00:12:801 (2) - Ctrl + G
00:46:652 (1) - Slider look sloppy differently to change the look
00:50:663 (4) - ^
01:02:695 (3,4) - Distance check (ex - 01:09:593 (4,5))

Good Luck~~

Thanks!!

kajiyatta

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Joined April 2011

kajiyatta 2013-03-01T04:36:47+00:00

M4M request from your queue
General
maybe you can add a Video from other Pending maps.
this BG seems a bit large, try to use this. it's a small size version. http://puu.sh/2a6sQ
uncheck Letterbox bacause there is no break time in this map.
put hitsounds consistence at backbeat. some hear too weird.
no SB in Astom's Insane.
Easy
Placement
00:29:166(6) wrong spacing. you should use same spacing in Easy diff.
00:32:374(4)^
00:47:454(6)^... and more
01:04:781(4) put NC here is better.
01:13:123(4) a bit down better to avoid on HP bar
Rhythm
00:13:765~ 00:41:358 I don't follow this rhythm, you can put notes at downbeat not backbeat bacause it's a bit difficult for newbie.
Hit Sonud
00:01:893(2) delete clap.
00:59:647(6) add finish at head

Normal
AR4 or 5 better current seems so slow
Placement
00:08:952(4,5) make blanket ?

SPOILER

00:16:011(8,1) swap NC
00:31:732(1) wrong spacing. same as Easy.
00:36:545(1)^ and more
Rhythm
00:49:700(1) too long, you should put slider & note better.
Hit Sonud
00:08:310(1) add finish
00:21:144(1)^
00:45:850(1,2,3) ^
00:49:380(4)^
00:47:454(6) add finish at head
01:10:235(9) add finish at end

Hard
Placement
00:28:524(1) wrong spacing.
00:49:700(6,7,1) make beautiful like this

SPOILER

01:04:299(9) stack at (7)'e end seems better

SPOILER

Hit Sonud
00:04:941(7) add finish at end
00:31:251(5) add finish at head
00:36:224(1)^
00:45:850(8,1,2)^
00:40:235(5) add finish
and you missed defaulet finishes. please listen to music.

Astom's Insane
Placement
00:06:706(1,2,3) make a little jump like this?

SPOILER

01:01:412(3) a bit down?
Hit Sonud
00:21:144(1) add finish at head

need more work I suppose, good luck.

Cloudchaser

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Topic Starter

Cloudchaser 2013-03-01T05:07:58+00:00

kajiyatta wrote:
M4M request from your queue
General
maybe you can add a Video from other Pending maps.
this BG seems a bit large, try to use this. it's a small size version. http://puu.sh/2a6sQ
uncheck Letterbox bacause there is no break time in this map.
put hitsounds consistence at backbeat. some hear too weird.
no SB in Astom's Insane.
Easy
Placement
00:29:166(6) wrong spacing. you should use same spacing in Easy diff.
00:32:374(4)^
00:47:454(6)^... and more
01:04:781(4) put NC here is better.
01:13:123(4) a bit down better to avoid on HP bar
Rhythm
00:13:765~ 00:41:358 I don't follow this rhythm, you can put notes at downbeat not backbeat bacause it's a bit difficult for newbie.
Hit Sonud
00:01:893(2) delete clap.
00:59:647(6) add finish at head

Normal
AR4 or 5 better current seems so slow
Placement
00:08:952(4,5) make blanket ?
SPOILER
00:16:011(8,1) swap NC
00:31:732(1) wrong spacing. same as Easy.
00:36:545(1)^ and more
Rhythm
00:49:700(1) too long, you should put slider & note better.
Hit Sonud
00:08:310(1) add finish
00:21:144(1)^
00:45:850(1,2,3) ^
00:49:380(4)^
00:47:454(6) add finish at head
01:10:235(9) add finish at end

Hard
Placement
00:28:524(1) wrong spacing.
00:49:700(6,7,1) make beautiful like this
SPOILER
01:04:299(9) stack at (7)'e end seems better
SPOILER
Hit Sonud
00:04:941(7) add finish at end
00:31:251(5) add finish at head
00:36:224(1)^
00:45:850(8,1,2)^
00:40:235(5) add finish
and you missed defaulet finishes. please listen to music.

Astom's Insane
Placement
00:06:706(1,2,3) make a little jump like this?
SPOILER
01:01:412(3) a bit down?
Hit Sonud
00:21:144(1) add finish at head

need more work I suppose, good luck.

Thanks owo ~ I'll try mod your map when I can. C: