yachiru4 wrote:

Hi from my queue!


Looks pretty good in general


Err sorry I'll admit I didn't really give it my all on it- heck I didn't even do a retry Sorry, school's really bugging me right now,so my osu! skills pretty much went out for vacation.

Insane, don't get me started....I don't wanna kill my fingers (which I did for a previous request lol). lul, no problem!

Overall, nice map still needs some polishing maybe?

Cheers~!

1. some nherited points aren't on the white lines!
2. add "かんせる" in tags
3. add another kiai time there all diffs

1. 00:13:097 (1) - somewhere likes this can be more beatiful,blanket it better
2. 00:33:405 (2) - add a point and blanket it better
3. 00:59:251 (4) - 01:25:097 (3) - 01:28:790 (3) - 01:32:482 (3) - 01:32:482 (3) - 02:02:021 (3) - 02:09:405 (3) - 02:16:790 (3) - 02:20:021 (3) - 02:24:174 (3) - NC because the first part there have NC
4. 01:33:867 - 02:10:790 - add note,the first kiai time there has a note
5. 01:38:021 (1) - move to 295,272 so that it can be a regular triangle

1. some combo are too long as normal
2. 00:57:867 (2) - blanket it better
3. 01:04:790 (1,2,3) - a little strange continuation suddenly
4. 01:15:867 (1) - blanket it
5. 01:39:405 (3) - change to a note?
6. 02:23:713 (3) - move last NC there will be more beatiful

1. 00:13:444 - can add note to match the drum
2. 00:37:905 (4) - 01:27:867 (4) - a little ugly,try to make it have a lager angle
3. 02:12:405 (4,6) - remove
4. 02:36:867 (8) - make it stack with 02:35:482 (1) - ?
5. some combo are too long too

• Can't mod it because I can't make insaneQAQ

-WhiteNEKO- wrote:

From Moe Team Queue ～❤～

So coooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooool Yeah, I love the song and Kanseru's voice is so ikemen! (●´∀｀●)

[General]

1. some nherited points aren't on the white lines! Yeah, I changed the offset and now they aren't exactly at the ticks, but I don't think this actually matters?
2. add "かんせる" in tags ✔
3. add another kiai time there all diffs ... h-huh?! The kiai time starts at the chorus and there are only three parts with the chorus so I don't think I would need another kiai section ... ?-? idk, maybe I just got it wrong or something lul.

[Easy]

1. 00:13:097 (1) - somewhere likes this can be more beatiful,blanket it better ✔
2. 00:33:405 (2) - add a point and blanket it better Well, I would have to move a lot of notes just to blanket this and I think it looks and flows right now quite well too.
3. 00:59:251 (4) - 01:25:097 (3) - 01:28:790 (3) - 01:32:482 (3) - 01:32:482 (3) - 02:02:021 (3) - 02:09:405 (3) - 02:16:790 (3) - 02:20:021 (3) - 02:24:174 (3) - NC because the first part there have NC NC'ed everything except 01:32:482 (3), because just one slider as a combo looks a bit silly.
4. 01:33:867 - 02:10:790 - add note,the first kiai time there has a note hm yes, there's a note, but I don't think it's really "needed" for the other two kiai times. ~ (and keeping it more simple)
5. 01:38:021 (1) - move to 295,272 so that it can be a regular triangle ✔

[Normal]

1. some combo are too long as normal Made some of them a bit shorter. ~
2. 00:57:867 (2) - blanket it better ✔
3. 01:04:790 (1,2,3) - a little strange continuation suddenly idk, I like it. Might change it if someone else mentions it. ~
4. 01:15:867 (1) - blanket it ✔
5. 01:39:405 (3) - change to a note? ✔
6. 02:23:713 (3) - move last NC there will be more beatiful ✔

[Hard]

1. 00:13:444 - can add note to match the drum ✔
2. 00:37:905 (4) - 01:27:867 (4) - a little ugly,try to make it have a lager angle ✔
3. 02:12:405 (4,6) - remove I know that it's probably a bit overmapping, but I like these slow notes -> then fast notes before the last kiai time ... so I'll keep them for now. s;
4. 02:36:867 (8) - make it stack with 02:35:482 (1) - ? sure, why not owo
5. some combo are too long too Shortened some of them again. :3

[GLIDE]

• Can't mod it because I can't make insaneQAQ No problem!

Star for luck~ Wow, thanks for the star! ヽ(*⌒∇⌒*)ﾉ And your mod, of course!

10crystalmask01 wrote:

Ello! ^^ random mod! omg, a random mod ... t-that's rare ... I feel lucky. *q*

[Easy]
00:13:097 (1) - Hmm try changing the whistle on the head to a drum-finish instead good idea, sounds nice!
AFter adding the finish, adjsut the settings on the left to this:

Sounds better imo.
00:14:944 (3) - ^ I think the drum is too quiet for this part.
00:54:636 (3) - Add clap on the tail. ✔
00:56:482 (2) - Only remove the clap from the head, don't overuse this hitsound. ✔
00:58:328 (3) - Add clap on the tail. ✔
01:29:713 (3) - Add clap on the tail. ✔
01:30:636 (1) - Clap should've been on the reverse instead of the tail. ✔
From 01:31:097 - 01:38:021 the hitsound pattern has been destroyed Oh yeah, fixed the placement. ~
Based on how the clap sound goes for your objects, try to use your clap hitsounds in this pattern:
Try to keep ti consistent! I changed so many patterns and completely forgot to changethe hitsounds in the same way again and ugh. xD Thanks for reminding me!
02:01:097 (2) - Add clap on the tail. ✔
02:01:559 - 02:03:405 Clap hitsound pattern's changed again. Whether this was intentional or not, I still believe you should try to keep your claps consistent Please fix. yep, fixed! ~
02:05:713 - 02:07:097 ^ ✔
02:11:251 - 02:14:482 ^ ✔
02:17:713 (3) - Add clap on the tail. ✔
02:21:405 (2) - ^ ✔
02:25:097 (2) - ^ ✔
02:26:021 - 02:29:251 Clap pattern's broken again. Fixed! ~

Little problem with the clap pattern, but apart from that it looks perfecto! ^^ Thanks! (●´∀｀●)

[Normal]
00:42:636 (1) - Change finish to a whistle. dunno, I think it fits, but I made it a bit quieter.
00:54:174 (2) - Add clap ✔
00:54:405 (3) - ^ On the tail. ✔
00:55:559 (1) - Remove clap. ✔
00:56:021 (2) - Add clap ✔
00:56:482 (1) - remove clap on the head. ✔
01:23:713 (3) - Add clap. ✔
01:23:944 (4) - ^ On the tail. ✔
01:26:021 (6) - Change clap to the tail. ✔
01:27:405 (2) - Add clap no the tail. ✔
01:29:713 (4) - Remove clap on the head. ✔
01:31:097 (2) - clap on the head. ✔
01:32:021 (3) - ^ ✔
02:00:636 (2) - Add clap ✔
02:01:559 - 02:06:636 Fix clap pattern. Fixed! ~
02:08:021 (2) - Needs a clap on the head. ✔
02:08:021 - 02:11:251 fix clap pattern. Fixed! ~
02:16:790 (4) - Clap should be on the reverse. ✔
02:19:097 (2) - clap on the head. ✔
02:21:405 (3) - Remove clap on the head. ✔
02:22:790 (2) - clap on the head. ✔
02:23:944 - 02:29:251 Fix clap pattern. Fixed! ~

[Hard]
00:50:021 - 00:52:328 Don't hear any of the claps? oops, fixed! ~
00:52:559 (2) - Remove clap on the tail. ✔

...Okay no more listing clap crap, I'm guessing you know how to fixthem by now. Time to check out the rhythm and flow! >.< alright!
01:23:944 (2,3) - Switch timing spots, it makes a better rhythm (similar to 00:50:021 (2,3,4) - ) I dislike how the 1/1 slider skips 01:24:405, where the vocals says the 'ma' in mahou. ah yes, way better! owo
01:25:097 (1) - Extend its tail to 01:25:559, I dislike the empty space here. Made it longer & added a cirlce.
01:27:636 (3,4) - Switch timing spots. ✔
01:36:174 (7) - NC ✔
02:09:405 (6) - ^ ✔
02:13:097 (7) - ^ ✔
02:13:444 - Turn off Kai! >.< but it's the same part like at the ends of all the other kiai times.
02:20:482 (5) - NC ✔
02:24:174 (6) - ^ ✔
02:32:021 (7) - ^ ✔

[GLIDE]
00:26:021 (8) - NC ✔
00:59:251 (7) - ^ ✔
01:06:174 (6) - ^ made a NC at (8) instead.
01:14:251 (7) - ^ ✔
01:19:559 (5) - ^ ✔
01:25:097 (8) - ^ ✔
01:32:482 (6) - ^ ✔
01:35:713 (8) - ^ made a NC at (10) instead.
02:02:021 (7) - ^ ✔
02:09:405 (9) - Should be NC instead of 02:10:097 (1) - ✔
02:13:097 (7) - NC ✔
02:21:174 (6) - ^ made a NC at (5) instead.
02:24:636 (6) - ^ ✔

....Sorry I'm noob at modding Insane diffs ;_; no problem, the right combos are important too, so it was already helpful enough!

Hope this helps~! ^^Thank you, this was a really helpful hitsound mod! It sounds WAY better now! ≧(´▽｀)≦ (also thanks to your rhythm suggestions!)

1. Looks perfect, nothing else to say here

1. Again, very clean!

1. Very clean and well done!

Trust wrote:

Hi lupcha, from my queue! Hey! ( ´ ▽ ` )ﾉ

These are all suggestions, feel free to use any~

[Easy]

01:04:790 (1,2,3) - Consider making this pattern perfectly symmetrical sure, why not owo

1. Looks perfect, nothing else to say here (●´∀｀●)

[Normal]

02:23:482 - Really feels like you should add a circle here, it would play well to the vocal. Perhaps repeating the same rhythm as 02:19:097 (2,3,4) by shifting 02:23:713 (1,2) a half beat earlier hmm, changed it a bit differently.

1. Again, very clean! (*´∀`*)

[Hard]

00:18:174 (4,5) - Perhaps using this rhythm? Adding a circle between these two fits nicely with the music imo sounds good!


00:21:405 (1) - The reverse on this slider isn't really emphasizing an easily identifiable sound in the music. I would make this a normal 1/2 slider and essentially repeat what you did at 00:17:713 (3,4,5) ✔
00:21:867 (2,3) - If you followed the previous rhythm suggestion, add a note between for consistency ✔
00:47:251 (3,4,5) - Replace with a 1/1 slider as you can hear a sustained sound in the vocals, also might flow more nicely ✔
01:08:482 (1,2,3,4,5) - I play-tested this several times and each time this combo felt kind of strange. Maybe repeat a similar rhythm as 01:04:790 (1,2,3,4) or shorten (1) to a 1/2 slider and add a note on 01:08:944 you're right owo I changed it, but a bit differently.

02:02:482 - Add a circle here? It feels kinda empty ✔

[GLIDE]

02:36:867 (3) - Stack on the location of 02:36:174 (6) and readjust the combo to make a clean triangle shape ✔

1. Very clean and well done! (ﾉ)´∀｀(ヾ)

Sorry it's not very much as what you've got is already pretty amazing! W-What, you're suggestions were really helpful! ;w; And thank you! ヽ(；▽；)ノ
Hope it was helpful, best of luck~ Thanks again! (*^▽^*)

1. Well, this is just me but you could make up some real cool diff names for the lower diffs too? I'd like to keep the names consistent

1. 00:18:174 (2,3,4) - I was thinking something about this, I think this would be kinda nice curve, it would flow kinda nice instead of a straight line? (I'm sorry, my puush isn't working so I can't show you any lines that I drew, so sorry =()
   
   Example

   
2. 00:22:328 (3,4) - Same as above^ Move the (3) to x:232 y:252 and distance snap (4)?
3. 01:10:328 (3) - ^ x:208 y:344 (move (4) a bit if you're applying this)
4. 01:12:636 (2) - This slider should be symmetrical, do it like this to make it symmetrical!
   
   Example

   
5. 01:14:482 (3,4) - Wooow, what's this? Probably a mistake here because this is a heck confusing and it looks really bad! I suggest you fix this.
6. 01:14:482 (3,1) - Unnecessary overlap here, probably because of ^
7. 01:57:405 (3,4) - I'm not 100% about this blanket, IMO you could improve it but I might be seeing things again ;_;
8. 02:37:097 (1) - I think here you could end up doing is that silencing the spinner each white tick, you understand ? I think it would be cool, since I can hear music fading off at 02:38:944 -

1. 02:37:097 (1) - Spinner suggestion same as easy ^

1. +1 HP, I think HP5 is far too easy for an actual Hard-diff =P It would also match to your HP like all in your lower diffs too~
2. 01:11:713 (6,2) - Moving these two a little up would create a nice curve to 01:11:482 (5,6,1,2) -
3. 02:37:097 (1) - Spinner suggestion ^

1. 00:33:405 (5) - CTRL + G? I think it would add a quite fun jump to 00:33:867 (6) - and flow better?
2. 02:37:097 (1) - Spinner suggestion ^

Asphyxia wrote:

Hey o/ I fell inlove with this song so here's my mod from my queue <3 yay! (●´∀｀●)

I hope I will be able to help you, we'll see.

General thoughts:

1. Well, this is just me but you could make up some real cool diff names for the lower diffs too? I'd like to keep the names consistent well, i thought the insane is always a more "special" diff so another name would be okay ... as for the other diffs, i have no idea how i could name them lul. too many different names could be also confusing. owo

Easy>

1. 00:18:174 (2,3,4) - I was thinking something about this, I think this would be kinda nice curve, it would flow kinda nice instead of a straight line? (I'm sorry, my puush isn't working so I can't show you any lines that I drew, so sorry =() sounds like a good idea to me! owo
   
   Example

   
2. 00:22:328 (3,4) - Same as above^ Move the (3) to x:232 y:252 and distance snap (4)? moved it, but not exactly at this position.
3. 01:10:328 (3) - ^ x:208 y:344 (move (4) a bit if you're applying this) moved them a tiiiny bit (because i'd have to move all the other notes and i'm lazy like that orz).
4. 01:12:636 (2) - This slider should be symmetrical, do it like this to make it symmetrical! ✔
   
   Example

   
5. 01:14:482 (3,4) - Wooow, what's this? Probably a mistake here because this is a heck confusing and it looks really bad! I suggest you fix this. wtf happened here （・□・；） ... yes, it's a mistake. omg, fixed! ~
6. 01:14:482 (3,1) - Unnecessary overlap here, probably because of ^ lul, yeah fixed.
7. 01:57:405 (3,4) - I'm not 100% about this blanket, IMO you could improve it but I might be seeing things again ;_; i improved it ... i t-think.
8. 02:37:097 (1) - I think here you could end up doing is that silencing the spinner each white tick, you understand ? I think it would be cool, since I can hear music fading off at 02:38:944 - great idea! (´∇ﾉ｀*)ノ

Normal>

1. 02:37:097 (1) - Spinner suggestion same as easy ^ ✔

Hard>

1. +1 HP, I think HP5 is far too easy for an actual Hard-diff =P It would also match to your HP like all in your lower diffs too~ you're right, changed! ~
2. 01:11:713 (6,2) - Moving these two a little up would create a nice curve to 01:11:482 (5,6,1,2) - ✔
3. 02:37:097 (1) - Spinner suggestion ^ ✔

Glade>

1. 00:33:405 (5) - CTRL + G? I think it would add a quite fun jump to 00:33:867 (6) - and flow better? kay, reversed the selection and moved some of the notes. owo
2. 02:37:097 (1) - Spinner suggestion ^ ✔

I think this mapset is really nice and the song *_* So you can have my star here, sorry for poor modding ;_; like i already said, it was helpful so thanks again for the mod and star! (☆^O^☆)

nattap wrote:

Hi from Q

[Easy]
Good yeay! <':

[Normal]
00:14:021 (1,2) - 2 is close to 1 because dis snap and 2 is look like it shifted from the center If It's impossible to be symmetry then 1 shouldn't be at the center or 2 may be other shape there shouldn't be a ds problem ?-? and i don't really get what you mean with symmetry here ...?
02:02:021 (4,5) - Look awry 5 may be at 192,276 or around that moved it a bit.

[Hard]
01:29:482 (3,4,1) - I think the 3 path isn't go well with 1 I think 3 should be at 348,220 and 4 at 440,28 but i like that (3) and (4) are in a line. s; moved (1) a bit tho.

[GLIDE]
Sorry, This diff exceed my skill TwT no problem!

Oh gosh Your map is very good thanks for the mod and star! ^w^

10crystalmask01 wrote:

Ello o3o here for a recheck! yeay! *o*

[Easy]
00:14:944 (3) - Drum finish on the head sounds better then normal finish imo Try it! idk, i like the normal hitsound here. ;w;
01:21:405 (3) - Remove finish on the tail, only the whistle sounds effective there. ✔

[Normal]
00:14:944 (2) - Drum finish on the head instead. ^ nah
01:04:790 (1,2) - Sounds really off. Try this rhythm instead? okay, someone else already pointed this out so I changed it. ~ made it a bit different tho.

01:59:251 (5) - Sounds a bit too much, a 1/1 slider here would be better imo. ✔

[Hard]
00:15:405 (2) -Change default hitsound on the head to Auto instead of normal, the normal hitsound imo is a little too much at this part :S hmmm ... nah, i'll leave it for now.
00:31:328 (8) - Remove finish, it should be on the head of 00:31:559 (1) - ✔
00:41:251 (2,1) - Sorry for being Nazi, but can you please stack them properly? sure!
01:28:097 (4) - Extend 01:27:636 (3) - 's tail to this point instead, for consistency (since you didn't do this at 01:24:405 with 01:23:944 (2) - nor at 01:26:251 either) ✔
01:39:867 (1) - Try adding normal-finish on this spinner o3o ✔
02:00:174 (1) - Add finish on the head. ✔
02:04:559 (2,3) - Replace this with these objects instead:
So the slider at 02:04:559 will match the long hold on the 'ta' in 'yogoreta' yes, you're right! owo
02:08:251 (2,3) - Same rhythm suggestion as above ^ the 3/4 slider at 02:08:251 will match the long hold on the 'nam' in 'nami' ✔

[GLIDE]
00:13:559 (3) - Change normal to drum-finish. ^
00:13:790 (4,5) - And the head and tail of 00:14:021 (6) - try changing the default hitsound to Normal :3 Also,don't forgot to remove the whistle on 00:14:021 (6) -! sounds nice x'3 ~ changed it!
00:24:174 (1) - Normal-finish on the head. ✔
00:47:944 (6) – NC ✔
00:52:213 (7) - ^ made the nc at (6) tho.
01:26:944 (1) - Normal-finish on the head. ✔
01:30:636 (1) - ^ ✔
01:58:328 (8) – NC ✔
02:03:405 (1) - Remove NC, it should be on 02:03:867 (5) - ✔
02:07:328 (1) - Remove NC, should be on 02:07:559 (3) - ✔
02:32:021 (9) – NC ✔

Hope this helps~! ^^ yes, it was very helpful! and sorry for the late reply. ;w;