DEAncientNaga wrote:

DEAncientNaga's Mod Queue

[General]
Ok, follows rhythm
Try to make more bend slider instead of straight ones I didn't feel like working much on my map this week so I'll try to improve my sliders in the next few days. orz
Make delicious sliders, might help you in ranking ^
Can try to make the music to fade off, the sound behind is awful :3 Hmm, yeah maybe ... hum.

Offset: 2016 (nearest I found, try it)
Please find a correct offset, might affect a little >w< Well, I think it's already pretty accurate ...? idk, or should I ask someone else. v-v

Music is way louder than the hitsound for some parts I don't think this is necessarily a bad thing? I'll see what I can do about that lul.

[Easy]
Squared
>.o)b

[Normal]
Squared
>.o)b

[Hard]
People might feel your map is boring cuz of too many straight sliders, try to make the sliders in different angle even it's straight Made some changes.
You can make little jumps, don't have to follow the DS ^
Refer some hard diff maps ^
You may speed up Slider vel by a little at KIAI time for smoother gameplay Hmm, maybe I'll change it ... u-u
You can try to use more blue ticks, like a note at blue tick connecting between 2 sliders
00:14:957 (2,3) - Hitsound is strange, try with default normal hitsound ✔
00:14:841 - Add circle I think this would be too cramped?
00:15:303 - Add circle ^
02:33:649 (3) - Remove circle and move (4) by a tick to the front, extend (4) slider by a tick ✔
02:35:957 - Add circle Added a short slider.

[GLIDE]
00:31:110 (3,4,5,6) - Make here volume raise slowly, or make the hits louder ✔
01:02:726 (7,1,2) - Distance cuz your notes doesn't seem like want to slow down I put the (7) somewhere else.
01:16:803 (3,4,5,6,7) - Can't hear what I hit ✔
02:37:110 (1) - Make spinner with 5% volume at the end ✔

Deni wrote:

Mapper Help Team

unrankable: You must fix this for the rankability of your map
bolded: strong suggestion
normal: suggestion
italic: comment

General

Settings & Folder seem to be fine.

Easy

Imo Grid Level 4 is the best for mapping. Consider using it while mapping.

There's an unsnapped green inherited point at 02:36:995 - snap to 02:36:977 - . ✔

1. 00:10:785 (1,2,3) - These three sliders play a bit linear because they are on the same x coordinate. What about flipping (2) STRG+G like this? : (Example and Coordinates in Box) ✔
   
   Pattern Example

   
   (2) is at x:166 y:248 with Grid Level 4
   
   
2. 00:21:862 (2,3,4,5) - Again, this is very linear and boring to play. Try to be more creative and make a better pattern here. ✔
   
3. 00:43:554 (2) - You could move this slider a bit up for a better spacing. Don't forget to move the following hitobjects with distance snap too! (Example and Coordinates in Box) ✔
   
   Pattern Example 2

   
   (2) is at x:216 y:100
   
   
4. 02:16:323 (2,3,4,5) - This is again very linear, maybe try something more creative like this: (Example in Box) ✔
   
   Pattern Example 3

   
   
   
   I didn't move the last blue slider and it fits with the distance snap.

Normal

Overall you could use more creative sliders than just straight lines.

There's an unsnapped green inherited point at 02:36:957 - snap to 02:36:977 - .

1. 00:18:631 (4) - What about using a curved slider? Would look and play a lot better. For example like this: ✔
   
   Slider Example

   
2. 00:37:785 (4) - You could move this circle to 00:38:016 - . This plays better imo. (Don't forget to move the spacing of the circle too) ✔
   
3. 00:38:477 (1,2,3) - Only a straight line again. Try making it more exciting like this: (Example and Coordinates in Box) ✔
   
   Spacing Example

   
   (1) is at x:232 y:216 ; (2) at x:288 y:192 ; (3) at x:348 y:180
   
   
4. 01:25:092 (5) - Move this slider to x:64 y:136 for a better spacing / flow. ✔
   
5. 01:31:092 (2) - Adding a curve to that slider will improve this part. Like this for example: ✔
   
   Slider Example 2

   
6. 02:04:554 (3) - Such a long slider without a curve doesn't look that nice & is boring. Consider adding a curve. Changed it. ~
   
7. 02:12:169 (2,3,4,5) - This might be too confusing for a normal, if someone else mentions this you should change it. Put a NC at this part.
   
8. . . .

Since you said to me you want to change something in Hard & Insane I will come back modding them after you did that!

Fycho wrote:

hii~

Black: suggetions
Blue: might consider
Red: Must fixed

[General]
All diffs’ KIAI time MUST be the same omg, fixed! ~

[GLIDE]

• 
  00:05:708 (1) –spinner end at00:09:169 ,and add a finish to follow the music?.I think 5% volume is too small Good idea. o,o
  00:11:939 –add a note to follow the drum ✔
  00:13:554 (5) –remove finish It’s too noisy Changed it into a finish normal. ~
  00:13:439 –add note to follow the drum ✔
  00:13:785 -^ ✔
  00:13:900 -^ ✔
  00:16:323 (8) – extend by one reserve.and be close to 00:16:785 (1) ✔
  00:44:477 –add note to follow drum I like the pause here.
  00:48:862 (9) –don’t use reserve slider ✔
  01:03:862 (3) –I thin if there is a jump it will be much better ✔
  01:22:323 (13) –end at red tick 01:22:554 – ✔
  01:25:554 (9) –be close to 01:25:092 (8) – Oops and (8) was unsnapped. Fixed!
  02:11:246 (1) –Ctrl+G uhmm, nah.

[hard]

• 
  00:15:862 (8) –this shape? ✔
  
  SPOILER

  
  00:18:631 (6) –this shape? ✔
  
  SPOILER

  
  00:22:323 (2) –this shape? ✔
  
  SPOILER

  
  00:27:400 (2,3) –make a better blanket ✔
  00:40:785 –add note I like the pause here. ´-`
  00:53:708 (1,2,1) –this? I kinda like it like that, but I'll change the positions like you suggested if someone else mentions it.
  
  SPOILER

  
  00:56:246 –this rhythm ✔
  
  02:08:246 (2,3) –Don’t overlap ✔

[normal]

• 
  00:28:785 (1) –end at00:29:246 ✔
  00:41:477 –add note Made a slider at this part. ~
  00:43:554 (2) –end at the former white tick Hmm, I want t to leave it like that.
  01:26:939 (1,2) –make a better blanket ✔
  02:08:016 (2,3,4) –I think it’s too hard for normal player to play I will change it if someone else mentions it.

[easy]

• 
  00:43:092 (1,2) –make a better blanket like this? ✔
  
  SPOILER

  
  00:44:939 –add note ✔
  00:50:016 (1,2,3,4,1) –too hard for newbie player,please use sliders instead of circles I didn't change every two notes into a slider, but almost. ~
  00:57:400 (1,2,3,4) -^ ^
  02:01:092 (2,3,4,5,6) -^^
  02:04:785 (2) –use a long slider instead of the reserve slider ✔
  02:19:554 (2,3,4,5,6) –too hard Changed it a bit.

Good luck Thank you! :3

1. none

1. 00:05:592 (1) - spinner start at 00:05:708 -
2. 00:22:323 (3,4) - surround better
3. 00:25:092 (2,3) - ^ use ctrl+shift+R -12 and adjust its distance (00:26:939 (5,1) - same
   
   SPOILER

   
4. 00:43:554 (2) - end at 00:44:246 -
5. 01:19:554 (3,4) - surround better
6. 01:30:631 (1,2) - sounds bad, do like this？
   
   SPOILER

   
7. 01:38:016 (1,2) - 2 surround 1's end better
8. 01:57:862 (4,5) - surround better
9. 02:20:016 (3,4) - ^

1. 00:10:785 (2,4) - these two are not the same shape use ctrl+HJ
   
   SPOILER

   
2. 02:15:631 (3,4) - distance between these two should be fixed
3. 02:19:092 (2) - do not make the slider return 3 times in normal diff

1. hit sounds volume a little small....
2. 00:25:785 (3,4) - surround more better
3. 00:41:477 (3,4) - ^
4. 01:05:477 (3) - here try this?
   
   SPOILER

   
5. 01:11:016 (4) - end at 01:11:131 -
6. 02:22:323 (2,3) - surround better
7. 02:30:862 (4) - remove this circle then 02:31:092 (4) - move to 02:30:977 - then 02:31:323 (5) - delete its return and move to 02:31:208 - then add a circle at 02:31:554 -

1. 00:13:439 - add a circle
2. 01:16:785 (3,4,5,6,7) - why use 5circle here?
3. 01:22:092 (12) - move to X152 Y200
4. 02:32:477 (10) - just need one return times

ampzz wrote:

General

1. Offset I found to be early by 5ms; would recommend adjusting your timing to 2021 instead. ✔
   
2. Any particular reason why the background is so small? 800 x 600 upscales poorly to other resolutions and looks horrendous on widescreen layouts like my own. Well ... to be honest, it's hard for me to find a really fitting picture for this song.=v= There aren't that many drawings of the singer and idk, the lyrics aren't that helpful either. x'D But I'll try to find something with a bigger resolution. ~~

Note: All of these mods are after the offset correction has been implemented.

EasyOver all I would like for all of the distance snaps to be relatively uniform snapped to 1.2x with only -.1 - +.1 differences. Is the DS somewhere different ?_? Well, I moved a lot of notes and I guess it should be fine now eveywhere. ~

1. 00:10:790 (1,2) - These I didn't like the fact that the main downbeat (a unique tones) were covered up by a slider repeat. Would highly suggest to change them to be a circle on the smaller white tick and 1/1 slider on the (stanza) big whites; like this - I totally see your point here ... changed it! ~
   
   SPOILER

   00:10:790 (1) - Circle here.
   00:11:251 (2) - 1/1 slider by itself or paired up with a repeat end.
   00:12:636 (3) - Circle here.
   00:13:097 (1) - 1/1 slider here.
2. 00:20:482 (1) - This slider could do with some adjusting to better blanket the following circle. I'm not really an expert on these but try using these points: Didn't use the code, but changed it.
   
   SPOILER

   44,160,20482,6,0,B|70:208|70:208|34:257|52:306,1,160,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:

3. 00:23:713 (5) - This I don't like since its end covers up a completely new, audible downbeat; for the correction to it I would recommend making the previous 00:22:790 (4) - into a repeat slider and having a circle (with NC) placed on 00:24:174 - to help emphasise it a bit more. Yep, you're right. Changed it! ~
4. 00:31:097 (3,1) - Better blanketing on this please. ✔
   
   SPOILER

   204,184,31559,6,0,P|316:182|352:75,1,240,4|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:

5. 00:33:405 (2) - After you apply the above you'll need to reposition this slider. Personally I would fit wrapping this one around your previous (1) would look and play much nicer. Like this - ✔
   
   SPOILER

   
   
   

   443,45,33405,2,0,P|451:124|430:201,1,160,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:

6. 00:34:790 - Any reason this beat isn't mapped? If you do decide to map it and after applying the above mods place it at x:356 y:263 ✔
7. 00:37:097 (3,1) - This I didn't like due to that obviously undermapped section on such a nice drum roll. Remove the repeat on (3) and create another 1/1 slider starting on 00:38:021 -. Kay, but made a 1/2 slider with repeat here.
8. 00:41:251 (4) - Instead of this what about using a 1/2 slider from 00:41:021 - to help ease up the offbeat to downbeat change? Sure, sounds good!
9. 00:41:713 (5) - Same thing as other repeat ends falling on stanza points, they don't feel nice at all. Okay, changed this as well. ~
10. 00:43:559 (2,3,4,5,1) - Such an awkward flow into an abrupt angle to play, rework this area so that you come naturally off (2) and eventually go into (1). Tried my best to make the flow better here. s;
11. 00:48:867 (2) - Feels awkward, why not just start a 1/2 repeat slider on 00:48:636 - instead. ✔
12. 00:49:559 (3) - This doesn't exist; why did you map it? tbh ... I have no idea. x'D
13. 00:52:328 (2) - No need for the additional slider points in this as they basically do nothing in an angled slider. ✔
14. 00:54:174 (2,3) - That slider is hideous; use it to blanket (2) and to actually flow nicely into your next combo. Well, I don't think it's that bad x'D, but I tried to improve it.
    
    SPOILER

    439,87,54636,2,0,P|425:124|400:155,1,80

15. 00:58:328 (3,4) - Same as above, fix them up so they blanket better and look less angled. ✔
16. 01:00:636 (5,2) - Overlap issue on these will cause beginners to mess up; rearrange them so that the circles never once touch. Is this overlap really that bad? I mean it's not like you can see (5) when (2) appears. ?-?
17. 01:02:944 (3,1) - Same as above. ^
18. 01:08:482 (1) - To correct the blanketing here use this - ✔
    
    SPOILER

    360,16,63405,2,0,L|440:56,2,80,12|4|12,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:

19. 01:10:790 (4) - Blanket correction.
    
    SPOILER

    332,368,70790,2,0,P|344:324|332:280,1,80,0|6,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:

    With saying this though I would honestly prefer it if this slider was angled so it points into the direction you need to go like this. Kay, I let it point to the next note. ~
20. 01:12:636 (2,3,4) - Didn't like how steep the angle changes were here, reckon you could tidy them up? ✔
21. 01:15:867 (1,2) - This is a rather abrupt change in direction without any lead into it, change this around to flow better. ✔
22. 01:18:636 (1) - Remove NC. ✔
23. 01:19:559 - NC here instead to emphasise that 'finish' in the music. ✔
24. 01:26:021 (5) - Change this for a 1/1 slider to have more focus on the vocal hold. ✔
25. 01:27:867 (2,3) - Same biff with others, blanket the circle better with the slider and actually use the end to form a triangle pattern with 01:27:867 (2,3,4) - ? Uhm, I moved all the notes a bit so I can't really make the same blankets anymore (should be better now anyway).
26. 01:30:636 (1,2,3) - Blanket these better. ^
27. 01:34:328 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - This just looks random without any form to a certain flow or pattern formation; tidy it up. Hope it's better now. ~
28. 01:56:482 (1,2,3,4) - Feels really lacking, you could easily form a pattern out of these five beats. ✔
29. 01:57:867 (4,5) - More blanketing which doesn't look correct; tweak it around a bit until you get the required layout. Made the blanket with another note so uhm yeah.
30. 01:59:251 (5) - Speaking of this, I do not agree with it being a 1/2 kick slider as that doesn't fit the vocals at all; swap it out for a 1/1 slider or two circles instead. Made two circles. ~
31. 02:00:174 (1,2) - This is awkward to play, as you go from a left > right movement then up and then the same movement again but you have to go in reverse afterwards. It'll throw a lot of beginners off. uhhmm, moved already some notes sooo ... idk, I think it should be fine now. xD'
32. 02:02:482 (4,2) - Minor overlap issue. idk, moved things and there's no overlap now. :'D
33. 02:02:944 (5,1,2) - Would prefer for this to be less snap focused with more emphasis on a pure flow section. ^
34. 02:05:713 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4) - This section I would much prefer to run like this - ✔
    
    SPOILER

    Part 1:
    
    
    Part 2:
    
    The way that you'll achieve this is by using -
    
    SPOILER

    288,164,125713,5,8,0:0:0:0:
    373,121,126174,1,0,0:0:0:0:
    461,161,126636,2,0,P|470:200|458:238,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
    379,292,127559,6,0,L|302:319,1,80,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
    208,319,128482,2,0,L|133:292,1,80,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
    53,238,129405,2,0,P|41:200|50:161,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
    139,121,130328,1,0,0:0:0:0:

    After you apply this you will of course have to reshape your next combo to cater to the change.
35. 02:18:636 (1,2,3) - The flow on this is really awkward, try to tidy it up so it feels natural. ✔
36. 02:20:944 (4) - 1/2 kick slider does not work here; same as the one I pointed out before, swap it out for either 1/1 slider or one circle and then your 1/2 kick slider. Changed it into one circle + 1/2 slider. ~
37. 02:22:328 (1,2,3) - This is sort of unnatural as you would expect to continue playing (1)'s slope for the next slider and the one following. Changed it.
38. 02:25:097 (4) - Don't just end this on a circle, either make it into a 1/1 slider or 1/2 kick slider for consistency due to you previously mapping the same section like it. Kay, made a 1/2 slider here again.
39. 02:26:021 (1,2,3,4) - This is plain nasty for overlaps and will slip a lot of beginners up; you'll need to rearrange (if not rework) this entire area so that it has better readability. k, changed as well.
40. 02:30:174 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - To me this section just feels like mapping for the sake of finishing the difficulty off without any thought put into forming nice combos out of it. I would really love for it if you could change this area to be more vivid. idk, it's kinda hard to make something nice without making it too hard in the Easy Diff (for me anyway xD'). Well, I tried to improve the end. (*´・ｖ・)
41. 02:32:021 (3) - Since you did it before, NC this otherwise it'll ruin the combo consistency. ✔
42. 02:35:713 (4) - Same here. ✔

Hit me up in-game on in a forum pm after you've done all of mods and I'll edit this post to continue on with the other difficulties. This is like ... longer than some mods I received combined and it covers ONLY the Easy Diff. \(*0*)/ I-Is this how it feels to win the lottery?! ... lmao, but really, thanks for the super detailed mod! Please let me throw confetti at you! (ﾉ´ヮ´)ﾉ*:･ﾟ✧

• 00:24:174 (1,4) - blanket ?
  00:26:944 (6,1) - ^
  00:28:790 (3) - reduce slightly the slope
  01:03:405 (4) - a little bent
  01:19:559 (1,3) - try avoid overlap
  01:32:482 (3) - Ctrl + G. i think it is better
  
  [Normal]
  
  • 1. oh, normal diff like hard diff ;w; but, not bad
       00:28:790 (1) - reduce some curve
       02:23:713 (3,4,1) - overlap
    
    [Hard]
    
    • 00:21:405 (1) - a little bored
      00:24:174 (7) - remove whistle on body
      00:40:328 (4,1) - avoid overlap. i think many players will click earlier than necessary.
      01:15:174 (5,1) - blanket
      
      [GLIDE]
      
      • 01:22:328 (5) - end on 01:22:790 -
        02:10:097 (10) - NC
        02:14:482 (10) - opposite slider. i think it is look like better
        
        ohhhh, nice song and nice hit sound ! i like this >w<
        Good luck ~

-Srui- wrote:

Hi ~ M4M :3 Hey! ^q^

[Easy]

• 00:24:174 (1,4) - blanket ? ✔
  00:26:944 (6,1) - ^ ✔
  00:28:790 (3) - reduce slightly the slope ✔
  01:03:405 (4) - a little bent ?-?
  01:19:559 (1,3) - try avoid overlap But they're not touching ... ?-?
  01:32:482 (3) - Ctrl + G. i think it is better ✔
  
  
  [Normal]
  

  • oh, normal diff like hard diff ;w; but, not bad (●´∀｀●)
    00:28:790 (1) - reduce some curve ✔
    02:23:713 (3,4,1) - overlap yep, maybe I should unstack this too. ~
  
  
  [Hard]
  

  • 00:21:405 (1) - a little bored ok, let's change that. >:3
    00:24:174 (7) - remove whistle on body oops, removed. ~
    00:40:328 (4,1) - avoid overlap. i think many players will click earlier than necessary. b-but I like it ... ;_;
    01:15:174 (5,1) - blanket sure, why not. owo
  
  
  [GLIDE]
  

  • 01:22:328 (5) - end on 01:22:790 - ah, the slider had actually this length in the beginning ... hm, but I kinda like it like this more too, so I'll change it again. x'D
    02:10:097 (10) - NC ✔
    02:14:482 (10) - opposite slider. i think it is look like better I don't really get what you mean ...? orz
  
  ohhhh, nice song and nice hit sound ! i like this >w< Wow, thank you for the star and your mod! ＼(*T▽T*)／
  Good luck ~ Thanks again! (｀・ω・´)

yachiru4 wrote:

Hi from my queue!


Looks pretty good in general


Err sorry I'll admit I didn't really give it my all on it- heck I didn't even do a retry Sorry, school's really bugging me right now,so my osu! skills pretty much went out for vacation.

Insane, don't get me started....I don't wanna kill my fingers (which I did for a previous request lol). lul, no problem!

Overall, nice map still needs some polishing maybe?

Cheers~!

1. some nherited points aren't on the white lines!
2. add "かんせる" in tags
3. add another kiai time there all diffs

1. 00:13:097 (1) - somewhere likes this can be more beatiful,blanket it better
2. 00:33:405 (2) - add a point and blanket it better
3. 00:59:251 (4) - 01:25:097 (3) - 01:28:790 (3) - 01:32:482 (3) - 01:32:482 (3) - 02:02:021 (3) - 02:09:405 (3) - 02:16:790 (3) - 02:20:021 (3) - 02:24:174 (3) - NC because the first part there have NC
4. 01:33:867 - 02:10:790 - add note,the first kiai time there has a note
5. 01:38:021 (1) - move to 295,272 so that it can be a regular triangle

1. some combo are too long as normal
2. 00:57:867 (2) - blanket it better
3. 01:04:790 (1,2,3) - a little strange continuation suddenly
4. 01:15:867 (1) - blanket it
5. 01:39:405 (3) - change to a note?
6. 02:23:713 (3) - move last NC there will be more beatiful

1. 00:13:444 - can add note to match the drum
2. 00:37:905 (4) - 01:27:867 (4) - a little ugly,try to make it have a lager angle
3. 02:12:405 (4,6) - remove
4. 02:36:867 (8) - make it stack with 02:35:482 (1) - ?
5. some combo are too long too

• Can't mod it because I can't make insaneQAQ

-WhiteNEKO- wrote:

From Moe Team Queue ～❤～

So coooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooool Yeah, I love the song and Kanseru's voice is so ikemen! (●´∀｀●)

[General]

1. some nherited points aren't on the white lines! Yeah, I changed the offset and now they aren't exactly at the ticks, but I don't think this actually matters?
2. add "かんせる" in tags ✔
3. add another kiai time there all diffs ... h-huh?! The kiai time starts at the chorus and there are only three parts with the chorus so I don't think I would need another kiai section ... ?-? idk, maybe I just got it wrong or something lul.

[Easy]

1. 00:13:097 (1) - somewhere likes this can be more beatiful,blanket it better ✔
2. 00:33:405 (2) - add a point and blanket it better Well, I would have to move a lot of notes just to blanket this and I think it looks and flows right now quite well too.
3. 00:59:251 (4) - 01:25:097 (3) - 01:28:790 (3) - 01:32:482 (3) - 01:32:482 (3) - 02:02:021 (3) - 02:09:405 (3) - 02:16:790 (3) - 02:20:021 (3) - 02:24:174 (3) - NC because the first part there have NC NC'ed everything except 01:32:482 (3), because just one slider as a combo looks a bit silly.
4. 01:33:867 - 02:10:790 - add note,the first kiai time there has a note hm yes, there's a note, but I don't think it's really "needed" for the other two kiai times. ~ (and keeping it more simple)
5. 01:38:021 (1) - move to 295,272 so that it can be a regular triangle ✔

[Normal]

1. some combo are too long as normal Made some of them a bit shorter. ~
2. 00:57:867 (2) - blanket it better ✔
3. 01:04:790 (1,2,3) - a little strange continuation suddenly idk, I like it. Might change it if someone else mentions it. ~
4. 01:15:867 (1) - blanket it ✔
5. 01:39:405 (3) - change to a note? ✔
6. 02:23:713 (3) - move last NC there will be more beatiful ✔

[Hard]

1. 00:13:444 - can add note to match the drum ✔
2. 00:37:905 (4) - 01:27:867 (4) - a little ugly,try to make it have a lager angle ✔
3. 02:12:405 (4,6) - remove I know that it's probably a bit overmapping, but I like these slow notes -> then fast notes before the last kiai time ... so I'll keep them for now. s;
4. 02:36:867 (8) - make it stack with 02:35:482 (1) - ? sure, why not owo
5. some combo are too long too Shortened some of them again. :3

[GLIDE]

• Can't mod it because I can't make insaneQAQ No problem!

Star for luck~ Wow, thanks for the star! ヽ(*⌒∇⌒*)ﾉ And your mod, of course!

10crystalmask01 wrote:

Ello! ^^ random mod! omg, a random mod ... t-that's rare ... I feel lucky. *q*

[Easy]
00:13:097 (1) - Hmm try changing the whistle on the head to a drum-finish instead good idea, sounds nice!
AFter adding the finish, adjsut the settings on the left to this:

Sounds better imo.
00:14:944 (3) - ^ I think the drum is too quiet for this part.
00:54:636 (3) - Add clap on the tail. ✔
00:56:482 (2) - Only remove the clap from the head, don't overuse this hitsound. ✔
00:58:328 (3) - Add clap on the tail. ✔
01:29:713 (3) - Add clap on the tail. ✔
01:30:636 (1) - Clap should've been on the reverse instead of the tail. ✔
From 01:31:097 - 01:38:021 the hitsound pattern has been destroyed Oh yeah, fixed the placement. ~
Based on how the clap sound goes for your objects, try to use your clap hitsounds in this pattern:
Try to keep ti consistent! I changed so many patterns and completely forgot to changethe hitsounds in the same way again and ugh. xD Thanks for reminding me!
02:01:097 (2) - Add clap on the tail. ✔
02:01:559 - 02:03:405 Clap hitsound pattern's changed again. Whether this was intentional or not, I still believe you should try to keep your claps consistent Please fix. yep, fixed! ~
02:05:713 - 02:07:097 ^ ✔
02:11:251 - 02:14:482 ^ ✔
02:17:713 (3) - Add clap on the tail. ✔
02:21:405 (2) - ^ ✔
02:25:097 (2) - ^ ✔
02:26:021 - 02:29:251 Clap pattern's broken again. Fixed! ~

Little problem with the clap pattern, but apart from that it looks perfecto! ^^ Thanks! (●´∀｀●)

[Normal]
00:42:636 (1) - Change finish to a whistle. dunno, I think it fits, but I made it a bit quieter.
00:54:174 (2) - Add clap ✔
00:54:405 (3) - ^ On the tail. ✔
00:55:559 (1) - Remove clap. ✔
00:56:021 (2) - Add clap ✔
00:56:482 (1) - remove clap on the head. ✔
01:23:713 (3) - Add clap. ✔
01:23:944 (4) - ^ On the tail. ✔
01:26:021 (6) - Change clap to the tail. ✔
01:27:405 (2) - Add clap no the tail. ✔
01:29:713 (4) - Remove clap on the head. ✔
01:31:097 (2) - clap on the head. ✔
01:32:021 (3) - ^ ✔
02:00:636 (2) - Add clap ✔
02:01:559 - 02:06:636 Fix clap pattern. Fixed! ~
02:08:021 (2) - Needs a clap on the head. ✔
02:08:021 - 02:11:251 fix clap pattern. Fixed! ~
02:16:790 (4) - Clap should be on the reverse. ✔
02:19:097 (2) - clap on the head. ✔
02:21:405 (3) - Remove clap on the head. ✔
02:22:790 (2) - clap on the head. ✔
02:23:944 - 02:29:251 Fix clap pattern. Fixed! ~

[Hard]
00:50:021 - 00:52:328 Don't hear any of the claps? oops, fixed! ~
00:52:559 (2) - Remove clap on the tail. ✔

...Okay no more listing clap crap, I'm guessing you know how to fixthem by now. Time to check out the rhythm and flow! >.< alright!
01:23:944 (2,3) - Switch timing spots, it makes a better rhythm (similar to 00:50:021 (2,3,4) - ) I dislike how the 1/1 slider skips 01:24:405, where the vocals says the 'ma' in mahou. ah yes, way better! owo
01:25:097 (1) - Extend its tail to 01:25:559, I dislike the empty space here. Made it longer & added a cirlce.
01:27:636 (3,4) - Switch timing spots. ✔
01:36:174 (7) - NC ✔
02:09:405 (6) - ^ ✔
02:13:097 (7) - ^ ✔
02:13:444 - Turn off Kai! >.< but it's the same part like at the ends of all the other kiai times.
02:20:482 (5) - NC ✔
02:24:174 (6) - ^ ✔
02:32:021 (7) - ^ ✔

[GLIDE]
00:26:021 (8) - NC ✔
00:59:251 (7) - ^ ✔
01:06:174 (6) - ^ made a NC at (8) instead.
01:14:251 (7) - ^ ✔
01:19:559 (5) - ^ ✔
01:25:097 (8) - ^ ✔
01:32:482 (6) - ^ ✔
01:35:713 (8) - ^ made a NC at (10) instead.
02:02:021 (7) - ^ ✔
02:09:405 (9) - Should be NC instead of 02:10:097 (1) - ✔
02:13:097 (7) - NC ✔
02:21:174 (6) - ^ made a NC at (5) instead.
02:24:636 (6) - ^ ✔

....Sorry I'm noob at modding Insane diffs ;_; no problem, the right combos are important too, so it was already helpful enough!

Hope this helps~! ^^Thank you, this was a really helpful hitsound mod! It sounds WAY better now! ≧(´▽｀)≦ (also thanks to your rhythm suggestions!)

1. Looks perfect, nothing else to say here

1. Again, very clean!

1. Very clean and well done!

Trust wrote:

Hi lupcha, from my queue! Hey! ( ´ ▽ ` )ﾉ

These are all suggestions, feel free to use any~

[Easy]

01:04:790 (1,2,3) - Consider making this pattern perfectly symmetrical sure, why not owo

1. Looks perfect, nothing else to say here (●´∀｀●)

[Normal]

02:23:482 - Really feels like you should add a circle here, it would play well to the vocal. Perhaps repeating the same rhythm as 02:19:097 (2,3,4) by shifting 02:23:713 (1,2) a half beat earlier hmm, changed it a bit differently.

1. Again, very clean! (*´∀`*)

[Hard]

00:18:174 (4,5) - Perhaps using this rhythm? Adding a circle between these two fits nicely with the music imo sounds good!


00:21:405 (1) - The reverse on this slider isn't really emphasizing an easily identifiable sound in the music. I would make this a normal 1/2 slider and essentially repeat what you did at 00:17:713 (3,4,5) ✔
00:21:867 (2,3) - If you followed the previous rhythm suggestion, add a note between for consistency ✔
00:47:251 (3,4,5) - Replace with a 1/1 slider as you can hear a sustained sound in the vocals, also might flow more nicely ✔
01:08:482 (1,2,3,4,5) - I play-tested this several times and each time this combo felt kind of strange. Maybe repeat a similar rhythm as 01:04:790 (1,2,3,4) or shorten (1) to a 1/2 slider and add a note on 01:08:944 you're right owo I changed it, but a bit differently.

02:02:482 - Add a circle here? It feels kinda empty ✔

[GLIDE]

02:36:867 (3) - Stack on the location of 02:36:174 (6) and readjust the combo to make a clean triangle shape ✔

1. Very clean and well done! (ﾉ)´∀｀(ヾ)

Sorry it's not very much as what you've got is already pretty amazing! W-What, you're suggestions were really helpful! ;w; And thank you! ヽ(；▽；)ノ
Hope it was helpful, best of luck~ Thanks again! (*^▽^*)

1. Well, this is just me but you could make up some real cool diff names for the lower diffs too? I'd like to keep the names consistent

1. 00:18:174 (2,3,4) - I was thinking something about this, I think this would be kinda nice curve, it would flow kinda nice instead of a straight line? (I'm sorry, my puush isn't working so I can't show you any lines that I drew, so sorry =()
   
   Example

   
2. 00:22:328 (3,4) - Same as above^ Move the (3) to x:232 y:252 and distance snap (4)?
3. 01:10:328 (3) - ^ x:208 y:344 (move (4) a bit if you're applying this)
4. 01:12:636 (2) - This slider should be symmetrical, do it like this to make it symmetrical!
   
   Example

   
5. 01:14:482 (3,4) - Wooow, what's this? Probably a mistake here because this is a heck confusing and it looks really bad! I suggest you fix this.
6. 01:14:482 (3,1) - Unnecessary overlap here, probably because of ^
7. 01:57:405 (3,4) - I'm not 100% about this blanket, IMO you could improve it but I might be seeing things again ;_;
8. 02:37:097 (1) - I think here you could end up doing is that silencing the spinner each white tick, you understand ? I think it would be cool, since I can hear music fading off at 02:38:944 -

1. 02:37:097 (1) - Spinner suggestion same as easy ^

1. +1 HP, I think HP5 is far too easy for an actual Hard-diff =P It would also match to your HP like all in your lower diffs too~
2. 01:11:713 (6,2) - Moving these two a little up would create a nice curve to 01:11:482 (5,6,1,2) -
3. 02:37:097 (1) - Spinner suggestion ^

1. 00:33:405 (5) - CTRL + G? I think it would add a quite fun jump to 00:33:867 (6) - and flow better?
2. 02:37:097 (1) - Spinner suggestion ^

Asphyxia wrote:

Hey o/ I fell inlove with this song so here's my mod from my queue <3 yay! (●´∀｀●)

I hope I will be able to help you, we'll see.

General thoughts:

1. Well, this is just me but you could make up some real cool diff names for the lower diffs too? I'd like to keep the names consistent well, i thought the insane is always a more "special" diff so another name would be okay ... as for the other diffs, i have no idea how i could name them lul. too many different names could be also confusing. owo

Easy>

1. 00:18:174 (2,3,4) - I was thinking something about this, I think this would be kinda nice curve, it would flow kinda nice instead of a straight line? (I'm sorry, my puush isn't working so I can't show you any lines that I drew, so sorry =() sounds like a good idea to me! owo
   
   Example

   
2. 00:22:328 (3,4) - Same as above^ Move the (3) to x:232 y:252 and distance snap (4)? moved it, but not exactly at this position.
3. 01:10:328 (3) - ^ x:208 y:344 (move (4) a bit if you're applying this) moved them a tiiiny bit (because i'd have to move all the other notes and i'm lazy like that orz).
4. 01:12:636 (2) - This slider should be symmetrical, do it like this to make it symmetrical! ✔
   
   Example

   
5. 01:14:482 (3,4) - Wooow, what's this? Probably a mistake here because this is a heck confusing and it looks really bad! I suggest you fix this. wtf happened here （・□・；） ... yes, it's a mistake. omg, fixed! ~
6. 01:14:482 (3,1) - Unnecessary overlap here, probably because of ^ lul, yeah fixed.
7. 01:57:405 (3,4) - I'm not 100% about this blanket, IMO you could improve it but I might be seeing things again ;_; i improved it ... i t-think.
8. 02:37:097 (1) - I think here you could end up doing is that silencing the spinner each white tick, you understand ? I think it would be cool, since I can hear music fading off at 02:38:944 - great idea! (´∇ﾉ｀*)ノ

Normal>

1. 02:37:097 (1) - Spinner suggestion same as easy ^ ✔

Hard>

1. +1 HP, I think HP5 is far too easy for an actual Hard-diff =P It would also match to your HP like all in your lower diffs too~ you're right, changed! ~
2. 01:11:713 (6,2) - Moving these two a little up would create a nice curve to 01:11:482 (5,6,1,2) - ✔
3. 02:37:097 (1) - Spinner suggestion ^ ✔

Glade>

1. 00:33:405 (5) - CTRL + G? I think it would add a quite fun jump to 00:33:867 (6) - and flow better? kay, reversed the selection and moved some of the notes. owo
2. 02:37:097 (1) - Spinner suggestion ^ ✔

I think this mapset is really nice and the song *_* So you can have my star here, sorry for poor modding ;_; like i already said, it was helpful so thanks again for the mod and star! (☆^O^☆)

nattap wrote:

Hi from Q

[Easy]
Good yeay! <':

[Normal]
00:14:021 (1,2) - 2 is close to 1 because dis snap and 2 is look like it shifted from the center If It's impossible to be symmetry then 1 shouldn't be at the center or 2 may be other shape there shouldn't be a ds problem ?-? and i don't really get what you mean with symmetry here ...?
02:02:021 (4,5) - Look awry 5 may be at 192,276 or around that moved it a bit.

[Hard]
01:29:482 (3,4,1) - I think the 3 path isn't go well with 1 I think 3 should be at 348,220 and 4 at 440,28 but i like that (3) and (4) are in a line. s; moved (1) a bit tho.

[GLIDE]
Sorry, This diff exceed my skill TwT no problem!

Oh gosh Your map is very good thanks for the mod and star! ^w^

10crystalmask01 wrote:

Ello o3o here for a recheck! yeay! *o*

[Easy]
00:14:944 (3) - Drum finish on the head sounds better then normal finish imo Try it! idk, i like the normal hitsound here. ;w;
01:21:405 (3) - Remove finish on the tail, only the whistle sounds effective there. ✔

[Normal]
00:14:944 (2) - Drum finish on the head instead. ^ nah
01:04:790 (1,2) - Sounds really off. Try this rhythm instead? okay, someone else already pointed this out so I changed it. ~ made it a bit different tho.

01:59:251 (5) - Sounds a bit too much, a 1/1 slider here would be better imo. ✔

[Hard]
00:15:405 (2) -Change default hitsound on the head to Auto instead of normal, the normal hitsound imo is a little too much at this part :S hmmm ... nah, i'll leave it for now.
00:31:328 (8) - Remove finish, it should be on the head of 00:31:559 (1) - ✔
00:41:251 (2,1) - Sorry for being Nazi, but can you please stack them properly? sure!
01:28:097 (4) - Extend 01:27:636 (3) - 's tail to this point instead, for consistency (since you didn't do this at 01:24:405 with 01:23:944 (2) - nor at 01:26:251 either) ✔
01:39:867 (1) - Try adding normal-finish on this spinner o3o ✔
02:00:174 (1) - Add finish on the head. ✔
02:04:559 (2,3) - Replace this with these objects instead:
So the slider at 02:04:559 will match the long hold on the 'ta' in 'yogoreta' yes, you're right! owo
02:08:251 (2,3) - Same rhythm suggestion as above ^ the 3/4 slider at 02:08:251 will match the long hold on the 'nam' in 'nami' ✔

[GLIDE]
00:13:559 (3) - Change normal to drum-finish. ^
00:13:790 (4,5) - And the head and tail of 00:14:021 (6) - try changing the default hitsound to Normal :3 Also,don't forgot to remove the whistle on 00:14:021 (6) -! sounds nice x'3 ~ changed it!
00:24:174 (1) - Normal-finish on the head. ✔
00:47:944 (6) – NC ✔
00:52:213 (7) - ^ made the nc at (6) tho.
01:26:944 (1) - Normal-finish on the head. ✔
01:30:636 (1) - ^ ✔
01:58:328 (8) – NC ✔
02:03:405 (1) - Remove NC, it should be on 02:03:867 (5) - ✔
02:07:328 (1) - Remove NC, should be on 02:07:559 (3) - ✔
02:32:021 (9) – NC ✔

Hope this helps~! ^^ yes, it was very helpful! and sorry for the late reply. ;w;