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Graphite Edge
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on jueves, 14 de abril de 2016 at 2:23:45 a. m.

Artist: u's
Title: START:DASH!!
Source: Love Live!
Tags: love live sunrise insert song
BPM: 150
Filesize: 6035kb
Play Time: 02:44
Difficulties Available:
  1. Muse (4,89 stars, 523 notes)
  2. Normal (2,15 stars, 278 notes)
  3. Pog's Hard (3,5 stars, 299 notes)
  4. Talli's Insane (4,71 stars, 470 notes)
Download: u's - START:DASH!!
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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Mapset

Normal: (Done ready for mod)
Pog's Hard: (Hard Diff By Pog)
Talli's Insane: (Insane Diff By Talli)
Muse: (Insane Diff)
nizidafabie
Please say you didnt quit making this beatmap!
I MAY be able to help ya out for the easy diff. but i say MAYBE because i have lots of other work to do.
Please continue! Since i only play on Hard and Rather easy insane maps, i wasnt able to play your maps since they go way too fast.

Ganbatte! :D
Topic Starter
Graphite Edge

nizidafabie wrote:

Please say you didnt quit making this beatmap!
I MAY be able to help ya out for the easy diff. but i say MAYBE because i have lots of other work to do.
Please continue! Since i only play on Hard and Rather easy insane maps, i wasnt able to play your maps since they go way too fast.

Ganbatte! :D

Will continue, that's my first map, i'm still learning, myabe i need to rework insane diff.
Jikson[m9]
Still in progress? May I do a guest taiko diff?It is ready now
YunoFanatic
Mod m4m my map https://osu.ppy.sh/s/102307

only muse as requested

[Muse]
00:12:036 move to x:272 y:72 then snap the other notes
00:22:035 i dont see the point why distance snap is in ''red'' but its ok though move this to x:384 y:232 to look like 00:21:235 is blanketing 00:22:035
00:20:435 nc here why is there no nc? the combo is too log D:
00:23:635 ^
00:26:235 ^
00:28:835 ^
00:30:435 ^
00:32:836 ^
00:34:236 move to x:192 y:280 and nc here
00:36:435 nc
00:38:835 ^
00:40:835 ^
00:42:835 ^
00:43:835 move to 00:43:835 to blanket it
00:45:535 nc
00:46:835 since this is meant for jump stack this with 00:46:235 (in the repeatancy)
00:48:835 nc
00:52:035 (end) stack slider's end to 00:51:435 slider's end
00:52:035 nc
00:55:635 im not sure with this nc what do you think
00:57:435 nc
00:58:235 nc again
01:04:835 ^
01:07:035 ^
01:07:636 i think you missing a note here
01:09:635 nc

that's all :P i made the nc's for you not to cost any confusion anymore
Topic Starter
Graphite Edge

YunoFanatic wrote:

Mod m4m my map https://osu.ppy.sh/s/102307

only muse as requested

[Muse]
00:12:036 move to x:272 y:72 then snap the other notes
00:22:035 i dont see the point why distance snap is in ''red'' but its ok though move this to x:384 y:232 to look like 00:21:235 is blanketing 00:22:035
00:20:435 nc here why is there no nc? the combo is too log D:
00:23:635 ^
00:26:235 ^
00:28:835 ^
00:30:435 ^
00:32:836 ^
00:34:236 move to x:192 y:280 and nc here
00:36:435 nc
00:38:835 ^
00:40:835 ^
00:42:835 ^
00:43:835 move to 00:43:835 to blanket it
00:45:535 nc
00:46:835 since this is meant for jump stack this with 00:46:235 (in the repeatancy)
00:48:835 nc
00:52:035 (end) stack slider's end to 00:51:435 slider's end
00:52:035 nc
00:55:635 im not sure with this nc what do you think
00:57:435 nc
00:58:235 nc again
01:04:835 ^
01:07:035 ^
01:07:636 i think you missing a note here
01:09:635 nc

that's all :P i made the nc's for you not to cost any confusion anymore
Ty done :3
h-728
Hi
Requested to see "Muse".

[General]
  1. The bitrate of a mp3 must be between 128~192 kbps, but yours is 118 kbps.
    You have to improve the quality of your audio file.
  2. The title should be "START:DASH!!", which now you're using is wrong.
  3. The artist should be "μ's", not "u's".
  4. The tags seems strange. You don't have to add "Love Live!" or something like that, because it's included in the source and artist.
    You can see what you have to write there to check the ranked maps.
  5. Offset seems wrong. Please try +11 ms.
[Muse]
  1. First I don't understand how difficult this diff is.
    If you don't want to use default difficulty(Insane or Hard etc), but you can make it more kind for us to explain which difficulty does "Muse" correspond to.
  2. The countdown doesn't match with this music at all. You should remove it.
  3. AR 9 is too fast when I considered your rhythm. I think 8 is better.
  4. I don't think it's a good way to put a preview point at 5335 ms. Try 63035 ms when the song starts to get up.
  5. 01:43:435 - Should a Kiai Time start from here? I don't see something special in the song.
Please fix these at once, that the general things I highly recommend to change.
Topic Starter
Graphite Edge

h-728 wrote:

Hi
Requested to see "Muse".

[General]
  1. The bitrate of a mp3 must be between 128~192 kbps, but yours is 118 kbps. Done
    You have to improve the quality of your audio file. Done new mp3 added (original 320 bitrate edited to constant 192 birtrate.
  2. The title should be "START:DASH!!", which now you're using is wrong. Done
  3. The artist should be "μ's", not "u's". I can't change that cuz the romanized name don't support that symbol.
  4. The tags seems strange. You don't have to add "Love Live!" or something like that, because it's included in the source and artist.
    You can see what you have to write there to check the ranked maps. Done
  5. Offset seems wrong. Please try +11 ms. Done but i changed it to 6001 due to the new mp3 with good quality.


[Muse]
  1. First I don't understand how difficult this diff is. Insane
    If you don't want to use default difficulty(Insane or Hard etc), but you can make it more kind for us to explain which difficulty does "Muse" correspond to. I will keep that diff name till others mods recommend to change it D:
  2. The countdown doesn't match with this music at all. You should remove it. Done
  3. AR 9 is too fast when I considered your rhythm. I think 8 is better. I will keep it AR9 to keep the reading of the patterns till others mods recommend to change it D:
  4. I don't think it's a good way to put a preview point at 5335 ms. Try 63035 ms when the song starts to get up. Done
  5. 01:43:435 - Should a Kiai Time start from here? I don't see something special in the song.Done
Please fix these at once, that the general things I highly recommend to change.
Thanks.
h-728

Graph1te Edge wrote:

[Muse]I will keep that diff name till others mods recommend to change it D:
Oops it's my miswrite, correctly I wanted to mean how about writing something like "Muse(Insane)" in your creator's word.
Topic Starter
Graphite Edge

h-728 wrote:

Graph1te Edge wrote:

[Muse]I will keep that diff name till others mods recommend to change it D:
Oops it's my mistake, correctly I wanted to mean how about writing something like "Muse(Insane)" in your creator's word.
Oh you mean creator's word, i will edit it then, thanks xD
[ Zzz ]
Hi~ Graph1te Edge

[Muse]

Ai Mod Check

01:00:001 (1) - The end of the spinner 01:01:401 (1) - Here

01:07:001 (1) - No NC

01:35:401 (1) - delete

( 01:35:601 (4) - Add slider

01:36:001 (5) - The end of the slider here )

01:35:601 (4) - NC

02:14:401 (1) - No NC
Topic Starter
Graphite Edge

[ Zzz ] wrote:

Hi~ Graph1te Edge

[Muse]

Ai Mod Check

01:00:001 (1) - The end of the spinner 01:01:401 (1) - Here

01:07:001 (1) - No NC

01:35:401 (1) - delete

( 01:35:601 (4) - Add slider

01:36:001 (5) - The end of the slider here )

01:35:601 (4) - NC

02:14:401 (1) - No NC
All done and updated thanks :3
Evolanrete
Hi~ Only suggestions

[Muse]

Lack of clap... Try to place the claps on the snare drum, for example:
00:05:635 (1) - clap at end
00:06:035 (2,3,4,5) - clap
00:06:835 (6) - clap at start and at end
00:08:835 (8) - clap at start, finish at end (according to your pattern)
00:10:035 (6) - clap
00:10:435 (8) - clap
00:10:635 (1) - whistle at start (according to your pattern). Don't place whistle on the whole slider. Click the head of the slider until red colour is shown. Like this: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/937818

Here are suggestions only :) :
00:13:435 (8) - stack with 00:12:035 (4)
00:31:435 (3) - change to two circles maybe
01:09:235 (6) - try to complete overlap with 01:08:235 (2)
02:19:635 (6) - ^ with 02:18:635 (2)
02:28:635 (1) - ^ with 02:27:635 (5)
02:38:635 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - rotate by 7 degree clockwise such that 02:39:235 (6) stack with 02:37:835 (2)
Ayesha Altugle
offset:7209
Topic Starter
Graphite Edge

ignobeatmapskin wrote:

Hi~ Only suggestions

[Muse]

Lack of clap... Try to place the claps on the snare drum, for example:
00:05:635 (1) - clap at end
00:06:035 (2,3,4,5) - clap
00:06:835 (6) - clap at start and at end
00:08:835 (8) - clap at start, finish at end (according to your pattern)
00:10:035 (6) - clap
00:10:435 (8) - clap
00:10:635 (1) - whistle at start (according to your pattern). Don't place whistle on the whole slider. Click the head of the slider until red colour is shown. Like this: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/937818

Here are suggestions only :) :
00:13:435 (8) - stack with 00:12:035 (4)
00:31:435 (3) - change to two circles maybe
01:09:235 (6) - try to complete overlap with 01:08:235 (2)
02:19:635 (6) - ^ with 02:18:635 (2)
02:28:635 (1) - ^ with 02:27:635 (5)
02:38:635 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - rotate by 7 degree clockwise such that 02:39:235 (6) stack with 02:37:835 (2)
Done, all fixed, thanks.

vahn10 wrote:

offset:7209
Done thanks :3
Ayesha Altugle
Do not Kudos this post

-2 from the original offset
Topic Starter
Graphite Edge

vahn10 wrote:

Do not Kudos this post

-2 from the original offset
The offset should be 7207 then or you mean the prior offset? thanks
Melt
Hi
M4M

[General]
  1. whats wrong with the hard diff?
  2. theres no kiaitime in your map
  3. your combo colour are too similar
[Normal]
  1. there are somethings you can find in AImod
  2. its seems there are no hitsound in this diff,try to add some.
  3. the easiest diff in your mapset must under 3.24 star.
  4. its highly suggest to use "distance snap" when you map a easy or normal diff,the change of the distance may hard for beginner.
  5. 00:13:407(3)avoid use quickly repeat slider like this in a normal diff.
  6. 00:23:607(4)nc here and remove the nc at 00:24:407
  7. 00:27:807(4)try this rhythm
  8. 00:47:007(5)slider end in 00:47:607
  9. 00:57:007(2,3)fix the distance
  10. 00:59:807(2,3,4)^
  11. 01:19:207(3,4)^
  12. 01:56:807(5,1)^
  13. 02:03:207(1)end in white line
  14. 02:41:007(1)end in 02:44:007
[Muse]
  1. this diff is too crowd at the center of the playfield
  2. 00:36:807(2,5)not perfect stack
  3. 01:00:007(1)end in 01:01:607
  4. 02:22:807(5,6,7,1)try this rhythm
That'all i can find
GL~
Sorarei
[General]
every combo color must be very different to easily read

[Normal]
1. This reverse not compatible for normal diff 00:13:407 (5) - 00:19:807 (10) - 01:28:207 (1) - 01:38:207 (5) - 02:38:207 (5) -
2. I see this not straight down or you just want make that 00:22:007 (4,5) -
3. use distance snap to balance this stream 00:26:807 (1,2,3,4) -
4. same as before 00:42:407 (4,5,6) -
5. 00:47:007 (5) - make this slider little long to this 00:47:607 -
6. woah this stream have jump which can't be say its normal diff 01:18:407 (1,2,3,4) - 02:28:407 (2,3,4,5) -
7. it would be nice if you just make it 3x reverse 01:40:807 (4) -
8. Jump again ? 01:56:807 (5,1) -
9. fix this 02:03:207 (1) -

[Muse]
AR must be -1
i ithink this diff nice enough
misk703
Hi~
m4m

[Normal]
00:27:407 (2,3,4) - distance spacing 0.8x
00:42:407 (4,5,6) - unification the distance spacing.
00:39:007 (2,3) - ^
00:47:007 (5) - slider end at 00:47:607 ?
00:59:807 (2) - Distance is far in normal IMO.
01:19:407 (4) - ^
02:29:407 (5) - ^
01:33:207 (1) - Slider is difficult after Spinner.
01:43:607 (3,4,5) - unification the distance spacing.
02:03:207 (1) - slider end at 02:03:607 ?
02:31:807 (1,2,3,4,5) - move try.
02:41:007 (1) - spin start 02:40:807 end 02:43:807 try.
[Muse]
00:47:607 (7) - move x:4 y:84.
00:51:407 (6) - move x:268 y:140.
01:00:007 (1) - end at 01:01:407

GL~
Hiseii
Hi thar~

M4M

RED - Must Fix
BLUE - Suggestion

General
  1. There's still something wrong with the Hard diff. (Maybe uploading problems?)
  2. I don't know if this is important, but the MP3 ends very abruptly. It sounded like it was cut off.
    - New MP3 w/ Fade in the end
  3. Disable countdown in all diffs.
  4. Since there are no breaks in every diff, disable "Letterbox in breaks"


Normal
  1. 00:13:207 (2,3) - too far from each other. try bringing them closer.
  2. 00:15:607 (2,3) - same ^
  3. 00:17:207 (4,5) - same ^
  4. 00:20:407 - New Combo
  5. 00:47:007 - slider ends with a blue tick. extend this slider by 1 tick
  6. 00:57:007 (2,3) - too far from each other. try bringing them closer.
  7. 00:59:807 (2,3,4) - same ^
  8. 01:01:807 (1,2,3,4,5) - same ^
  9. 01:03:207 - New Combo
  10. 01:08:007 (3,1) - too far from each other. try bringing them closer.
  11. 01:19:407 (4) - move 2 ticks forward
  12. 01:20:807 (1,2) - too far from each other. try bringing them closer.
  13. 01:20:807 (1,2,3,4,5) - same ^
  14. 01:29:207 (3,4,5) - same ^
  15. 01:31:007 (1,1) - same ^
  16. 01:37:607 (4,5) - same ^
  17. 01:56:807 (5,1) - same ^
  18. 02:03:207 (1) - extend this slider by 1 tick
  19. 02:11:807 (1,2,3,4,5) - too far from each other. try bringing them closer.
  20. 02:18:007 (3,4) - same ^
  21. 02:29:607 (5) - move 2 tick forward and New Combo
  22. 02:32:207 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4) - move these objects 4 ticks forward.
    an error happened while doing coffepasta i guess. ^^"
  23. 02:31:807 - if you did this^... add a circle here
  24. 02:41:207 - if you did that^ as well... move this spinner to 02:41:607


Muse
  1. 00:35:207 (3) - New Combo
  2. 01:21:607 (7,1) - the distance in between these object are too much. bring them closer
  3. 01:51:607 (1) - Remove NC
  4. 01:53:207 (2) - New Combo

Overall, things that needed fixing was the distances between objects. Most of the problems where on the Normal diff.
  1. 00:58:807 (1,2,3,4)
  2. 01:01:807 (1,2,3,4,5)
  3. 01:26:607 (3,4,5)
  4. 02:11:807 (1,2,3,4,5)
These patterns would have been good on the Hard or Muse diff. Try inserting these on the harder diffs.
What I'm trying to say is that just refrain from using large distances on fairly easy diffs. It'll be hard for beginners to do those.

anyways, i love the song and good luck with this one~ ^w^
it's weird that all of the times have the number 7 on their ends. (._. )
Boncho
NORMAL

00:16:207 (3) - this note is to far away, remember: its a normal diff
00:17:207 (4) - New Combo
00:35:607 (1) - remove New Combo
00:36:007 (2) - New Combo
stretch 00:47:007 (5) until 00:47:607
00:50:807 (2) - Remove New Combo
00:53:207 (1) - new Combo
00:54:807 (3) - new Combo
00:59:807 (2) - is too far away
01:19:407 (4) - place it on 01:19:607
01:26:607 (3,4,5) - are too far away
01:30:207 (4,5) - are too far away
01:31:007 (1) - spinner beginns 01:30:807 and ends 01:32:407
01:35:207 (4) - New Combo
01:36:007 (1) - Remove new Combo
01:38:207 (5) - is to far away
02:02:407 (7) - New Combo
02:03:207 (2) - Remove New Combo
02:05:207 (5) - New Combo
02:06:007 (3) - Remove New Combo
02:08:407 (1) - New Combo
02:20:007 (1) - New Combo
02:21:607 (1) - Remove New Combo
02:23:207 (1) - New Combo
02:24:407 (2) - remove it
02:24:007 (1) - make it longer (until 02:24:407)
02:24:807 - add a note
02:26:407 - new combo
02:29:407 (5) - place it on 02:29:607 -
02:29:607 (5) - New Combo
02:36:607 (2,3,4) - are too far away from each other

MUSE

00:13:407 (1) - New Combo
00:19:807 (1) - New Combo
make a longer distance between 00:20:407 (1) and 00:21:207 (2)
00:43:807 (1) - Remove New Combo
01:12:407 (5) - New Combo
01:14:007 (7) - add a reverse arrow
01:14:807 (1) - remove this note
01:38:807 (1) - New Combo
01:39:207 (2) - Remove New Combo

good luck~ :D
luxoDeh
Hi! M4M from my queue.

GENERAL

what do you think of adding a kiai time from 01:03:207 - to 01:30:407 - for example...
then the background should be 800X600
then one last thing are the New comboes. you placed them quite casually... you can think of a pattern to place them too. for example you can place them at each big white line, or at each 2 big white line, it's your choice, but avoid to place them casually.

NORMAL

00:13:407 (3) - I think you should keep the spacing, it's a normal diff, and the easyest diff of the whole map, so I think you should respect the spacing always
00:16:207 (3) - ^
00:19:807 (3) - ^
00:23:607 (4) - ^
00:27:807 (4,1) - what do you think of this rhytm here? (remember to keep the spacing consistent!) 00:40:807 (1) - keep the spacing consistent
00:44:007 (2,3) - what do you think of this simple rythm? 00:47:007 (5) - you should make this end at 00:47:607 -
00:48:007 (1,2) - I think this is a good point to make a reverse slider from 00:48:007 - to 00:48:407 -
00:52:407 (3,4) - stack them with 00:50:407 (1) -
from 00:55:607 - to 01:03:107 - you should absolutely fix the spacing!! this is really too hard for a normal diff!
01:19:407 (4) - also here, if you don't keep the spacing and don't place this note near to 01:19:007 (2,3) - it will be hard to read! you can test yourself playing this: I really think it is not so easy to center this circle.
01:19:607 - also I think you should add a note here

well... what I can suggest is that you should really review all the spacing in this map. one thing you can do is remap it. maybe try to change the distance spacing (You'll see it on the top right of the screen when you press "Alt" on the keyboard): instead of 12 put it on 10, it would be better maybe. then what you should try while mapping, over keeping always the spacing consistent!, is creating patterns, for example blanckets or stacking notes. just try it, sometimes remapping is more usefull then reciving lots of mods!

HARD

00:06:401 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,1,2) - maybe the rythm here should be like this: 00:11:401 (3) - maybe it's better if you stack this with 00:11:201 (2) - instead of 00:11:601 (4) -
well the diff is wip, so there is not much to say XD

MUSE

00:14:507 (5) - delete this note, if you really want to add it you can do it at 00:14:907 -
00:36:807 (2,4) - stack them perfectly
00:51:407 (6,1) - ^
well this diff is not so bad... it is an insane so there are not so many problem of spacing... what you can do is be more carefull about the note placement, especially in the first part of the song!

that's all! GL with this map! ;)
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