Ok GO!
hi![Easy]
00:54:222 (1,2) - Maybe align these 2 notes?
// its intentional being put like that ww01:02:388 (1,2) - The second note seems to be cutting into note 1 too much. Try angling note 1 in a different way
// ok01:07:713 (3) - You can shift this higher, above the previous note instead
// i prefer mine w[Normal]
00:14:459 (1) - You can shift this note lower
// ok00:14:459 (2,3,4,5) - You can make this part somewhat like this
// no, coz i wanna keep a consistent DS for this diff00:17:299 (1) - You can make this note straight, then make the next note blanket around it, leading onto the next note
// keep mine coz I do it for the next stanza too00:20:139 (1,2) - These two notes (are presumably) the same as the two previous ones, so I suggest making them the same, whilst rotated at ~30deg for the second note
// ^00:31:500 (1) - Make this note blanket sliiightly better
// ok01:09:666 (3) - You can make this blanket note 1
// hmm.. no coz i wanna have a parallel pair of (3) & (4)[Hard]
00:00:968 (3,4,5) - I suggest just making these notes curve into the next note
// hmm.. but is it really difficult to read now?00:03:808 (3,4,5) - This too
// ^ 00:05:938 (1) - You can curve this note
// ok00:12:329 (3) - You can shift this note slightly out
;w;..? i dont understand lol00:15:170 (3) - Same^
^00:22:269 (3) - Make this concave towards the right instead
// ok00:58:305 (1) - You can Ctrl+G this
// ok! u are the second one to point this out!This is sooooooooooo goood~ The only problem here is that sometimes your notes don't have to stick next to each other, like:
http://puu.sh/9I3xK/48fbe98a1a.jpg. It feels fine having them slightly further apart. Other than that, great work!
// I feel like they are suitable to stack perfectly because its 3/4 sliders instead of 1/2 ;w;..[Insane]
00:19:074 (2,3) - You can make these 2 notes curved
// no ;w;00:19:429 (3) - Flip this note
// ok!00:20:494 (2) - Curl this note like the note before
// prefer mine tho00:21:559 (1) - This jump seems a bit too big, Ctrl+G this
// did some adjustment!00:31:500 (1,2,3) - Flow here seems kinda weird
// ;w;..00:33:808 (6,7,8) - This can be in a triangle formation
// haha, its triangle, but not regular ww01:19:429 (5) - Maybe curve this note like the note before?
// ok!01:19:784 (1,2,3,4) - Flow here is also kinda weird
// /.\ any suggestions?01:26:530 (1,2) - You can make this appear on the x-axis
// i prefer vertical!This Insane is generally good, although with weird flows at some places. The patterns you make are really good though~ Not bad!
haha, thanks wA orgasmic mapset, I'd say.
lol, this adjective..WHY ISN'T THIS RANKED YET Thank you www
難度太高,轉盤之後馬上有note你不覺得對於一個easy來說太困難了嗎?
