This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on den 5 september 2010 at 21:03:10

Artist: kors k
Title: smooooch
Source: Beatmania IIDX 16 EMPRESS
Tags: Youngdow
BPM: 177
Filesize: 22135kb
Play Time: 01:05
Difficulties Available:

1. Hugs (2,15 stars, 42 notes)
2. Kisses (3,93 stars, 147 notes)
3. Smooooches (4,9 stars, 243 notes)
4. youngdow's Taiko Oni (5 stars, 782 notes)

Download: kors k - smooooch
Download: kors k - smooooch (no video)
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LET'S MAKE A RESTARTS.
Alright folks, I 've worked on this map for god knows how long. I would really want it ranked soon. SO BE SURE TO POINT OUT ANY ERRORS YOU MIGHT FIND!

A takio difficulty has been added!
Thank you Youngdow~

16/07 - Making an easier difficulty. Not done with it so don't mind it.
3/08 - Worked a bit more on the easy difficulty. Renamed the others too.
7/08 - New video in better quality~ Thanks arien666~!
5/09 - I need to work a little bit more on it. <:

Hi.

Offset: 12838
BPM Seems fine at 177.000 If you ask me. (I could be wrong, but my offset feels better for sure.)
Don't forget to resnap notes according to the new offset via the timing menu.

There are quite a few symmetry fixes to be done here, but I don't like being nazi, so someone else should have a look at that.

Map has potential. Have a Star.

Thank you~ <3
The map sounds much more better now~
Sankies for the star too~ <3

h^^
click on View--->Grid Level------> 3
EasyNormal:
23:68 (1)= 2 squares down
24:024 (2)= 1 squares right
27:075 (4)= 1 squares up
27:583 (5)= 1 squares left
35:210 (3)= 4 squares right
35:719 (4)= 1 squares down
40:634 (3,4)= 2 squares up
49:109 (4) = 1 squares down
1:04:702 (2)= 1 squares up
1:49:797 (3)= 1 squares up
1.50:126 (4) = 1 squares up

The distance is wrong. Anyway nice song

Thank you~ <3
Hopefully it's all better now~

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Hm~ My bad, I didn't see that~ </3
Fixed now though~

Some thing I see while going through it fast:
(Level 3 grid, symmetrical fixes, since nobody else is looking. Also note, these are suggestions, you don't have to accept it.)
[Hugs & Kisses]
00:24:363 (3) - 1 Level 3 grid down looks better
00:29:787 (3) - 1 level 3 grid to right
00:30:804 (2) - 1 Level 3 grid to the right
00:31:143 (3) - 1 Level 3 grid to the right, and 1 Level 3 grid down. IF you changed the above.
00:31:821 (All three sliders) - If you changed the above, mark all three and move 1 level 3 grid right and two level 3 grids down.
00:46:736 (5) - Looks better as a straight slider, IMO.
00:47:753 (6) - 1 Level 3 grid to the right looks better
00:49:109 (4) - Wrong spacing. Move it closer to (3). While you're at it, line it up straight with (3) Respace the few coming notes accordingly.
00:56:566 (2) - 1 Level 3 grid to the right)
00:59:278 (2) - 1 Level 3 grid down
01:04:024 (5) - 2 Level 3 grids up
01:30:295 (2) - 1 Level 3 grid down
01:30:295 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - This whole combo is a little messy... Maybe clean it up and make the spacing more even?
01:36:227 (3) - 2 level 3 grids down.
01:45:380 (2) - 1 Level 3 grid to the right
01:50:126 (4) - 3 level 3 grids up, 1 level 3 grid left

Thank you~ <3

The map looks better now~
I also made some of the sliders more stright.
Thank you~

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It's kinda annoying when maps don't get enough attention, one of my maps that I had wroked hard on went to the graveyard just recently because no one took a look at it even if I bumped it. @_@
GRR, I guess I'm gonna do a shout out about this map when I can play again.
Thank you for the support~ <3

*Likes this song and all the parodies*
I'm gonna star this map.

First thing's first.
BPM: 177.02
Offset: 1,981
Everything was late. Plus, the offset was set on the wrong stanza and beat. So there you go. Make sure you resnap all notes.

Video offset: -150 (you'll have to change it in notepad)

smooooch:
00:39:603 (9) - Swap finish hitsounds from the end to the beginning of this slider.
00:39:942 (1) - Turn it into a slider that goes half a beat.
00:40:281 (2) - ^
00:40:620 (3,4,6,8-10 + 1) Turn into whistle
00:45:365 (1) - Apply Finish hitsound.
00:46:721 (1) - Make it a slider and make it go to the 2.
00:47:060 (3) - Bump it back a quarter beat.
00:48:077 (7) - Wouldn't stack it.
00:49:348 - Add a note or do something here.
00:50:280 (6) - You missed. This is supposed to be a regular note and the slider is half a beat ahead.
00:56:212 (1) - Wouldn't a spinner make sense?
00:58:923 (1) - ^
01:00:618 (5,6) Stacking
01:01:465 (1) - ^ + bump it back half a beat.
That's a long break there. If you think so, then put some stuff in there.
01:36:885 (1) - Get rid of a slider reverse (so that there's four hits in the slider) and bump back the next one. After that one, put a note under where the slider finishes.
The rest of the song looks pretty good (surprisingly)

Well... I don't wanna seem harsh, but it's kinda just that little particular section and the sliders that were weird. The main thing is the timing and I hope you change it.

Thank you so much~ TwT
I really want to finish this map.

Loooots to do, I'll do it tomorrow. (It's late here~)

Okey, I decided to fix most of the stuff now, I haven't done the last one though.

May I ask you, How do I change the offset in notepad?
I can open it up in notepad and such, but I can't find the text I'm looking for. >_>''

Oh btw, before I forget, I'm gonna keep that gaint pause.

Otium wrote:

May I ask you, How do I change the offset in notepad?
I can open it up in notepad and such, but I can't find the text I'm looking for. >_>''

Umm... Lets see...

[Events]
//Background and Video events
1,[b]-150[/b],"93068dc572d33151537969f95cdb0fe0.avi"
0,0,"smoooosh2.jpg"
//Break Periods
2,13047,14020
2,15759,16731
2,18470,19782
2,66935,86210
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Failing)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Passing)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples
//Background Colour Transformations
3,100,255,0,185

I'm sure you can find background and video events yes? So I just boldened the offset right there which should be 150.

EDIT: Well, it didn't work. But you can see the [b][/b] that I put there that has failed to bolden, and that it's 150 over there right? So then it's there.

Ah~ Thank you~ :3
All fixed now~

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Hugs and Kisses:
00:28:07 (6) - align with 5
00:36:38 (5) - don't cross sliders..
00:38:07 (3) - align with 2
00:48:07 (1) - align with 6
00:49:43 (5) - 1 level 3 grid down
00:54:17 (2) - wouldn't have slider under slider
01:07:05 - long break :/
01:32:14 (7) - make straight

smooooooooooooch:
00:43:50 (1) -move 1 level 3 grid left
00:47:39 (5) - I wouldn't have slider under notes
00:57:56 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - I would space these out its kinda confusing in a stack
01:02:99 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - ^
01:07:05 -I don't think there needs to be such a long break :/

have a star

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#mod is hit and miss. It really depends on who is there and when you come

Hugs & kisses

smooooooooooooch:

Only minor errors. Fun song. Star.

Thank you. ;w;
It's really hard to get your map modded and begging for it in PMs and such feels kinda desperate. ._.''
I've fixed everything. Thank you~

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Otium wrote:

Yay, Thank you~ :3

np.

Might as well Star this. Do you play IIDX or did you jsut find this song another way?

Thank you~

No, I accidently found this song somewhere. Can't remember how though. ô_õ
I'd probably suck at playing IIDX. xD

/me is tempted to give a kudosu star.

I really like this map, so I might advertise for you in #mod? I know people there so it might help.

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smooch
01:01:46 - add a note here and start the slider at 01:01:63 instead

hugs
01:45:35 (2) - align with (1)
01:49:42 (2) - ^

that's all, haha. really awesome beatmap C:

I've always thought that part have sounded a bit weird.
Thank you~ <3

my difficultyyy (: feel free to change anything!

Download: kors k - smooooch (Otium) [Yes's xoxo].osu

There~ It's added. ;D

I'm baaaaaack

Hugs and Kisses:
00:20:96 (1) - Maybe add an extra slider reverse? Also, get rid of half of the finishes.
00:30:45 (1,2,3) - Feels really awkward. I suggest making a slider at 00:30:11 that goes until the red tick. Then, (1) will be bumped forwards to the next red tick, and (2) will be converted to another slider that lasts a half beat.
00:31:80 (1,1) - Remove the finishes on the ends of these sliders.
00:34:51 (1,2,3,4,5) - weird. Put a circle at 00:35:53. Also, make those sliders half beats too. Then you can put them at 00:35:87, and 00:36:38.
00:39:94 (1,2,3,4) - You cannot switch from the beat to the vocals in one combo.
00:43:67 (3) - Remove half of the finishes.
00:45:36 (1) - Spacing.
00:56:55 (2,3) - Remove finish.
00:57:56 (4) - Remove finish except for the head of the slider.
00:59:26 (2,3,4) - Do the above.
01:02:31 (2,3,4) - ^
01:04:68 (2,4) - Remove finish.
01:05:70 (5) - Remove half of the finishes.
01:23:32 (1) - Add finish to end of the slider.
01:25:36 (3) - Add finish. Also, stack under the previous note?
01:42:98 (3,4,5,6) - urg pattern isn't consistent.
01:46:88 (3) - Spacing and straightness.
01:47:73 (1) - Straightness. Also, alternate between finish and clap between each slider reverse.
01:47:73 (x) - Or you could make a spinner here.
I know I may have sounded confusing for those 'remap' sections, but if you pay attention to every step properly, it results in a good effect.

Hopefully, this has helped your map towards ranking? Be sure to make star/mod requests as much as possible (as in every time you log in, not spam it every minute) so that you can accumulate the necessary amount of priority stars, as well as improve your map. You're the only one with a valid smooooch map so get it ranked!

I don't think you uploaded my difficulty correctly since the song still only has 2 difficulties!

@ Harris, HOLY SHIZZEL.
I'll start up with it now. when I'm done with something first. <_>

@ Yes, Hmm... I'll try to upload the map again, okey?

There, everything SHOULD be edited now. Probably made a couple of errors... Buuuut, I think it looks kinda nice~
Anyway, Yes, Your map SHOULD be uploaded now. If it isn't there, press F5 or something or re-download the map. @.@

ooh okie it works. bumping thread for youuuu

I'm glad it works now~ ;D

Bumps are awesome. <3

I give you a star

Thank you~ It really helps~ <3

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I'm hunting bats now and then, but they are kinda hard to reach.
And I think it feels just silly asking for a mod request and such through PM. Eeep. >w<