1. Easy (0,91 stars, 36 notes)
2. Hard (4,67 stars, 90 notes)
3. Normal (2,9 stars, 58 notes)

1. Clear!

1. 00:01:631 (3) - you should be this slider's 2nd line on the center line. move to x:328 y:156
   　
2. 00:34:193 (3) - like this? the width of a slider and the slider be standardized.
   
   　
3. 00:42:842 (3,4,1) - make triangle
   
   
   　
4. 00:46:912 - the volume falls greatly suddenly. it is strange. this green line is volume:40% better.
   　
5. 00:49:965 - you should many green line. you do it lower volume to fade-out little by little.
   　　　00:49:965 - volume 30%
   　　　00:51:491 - volume 20%
   　　　00:52:509 - volume 10%
   　　　00:53:526 - volume 5%
   try it.
   　
   [Normal]
   
   • 
     
     　
   1. 00:02:394 (2,3) - not parfect stack.
      　
   2. 00:12:315 (5) - add whistle of slider start.
      　
   3. 00:21:473 (1) - add whistle of slider end.
      　
   4. 00:26:561 (3) - add whistle of slider start.
      　
   5. 00:28:596 (5) - ^
      　
   6. 00:34:193 (3) - add whistle of slider end.
      　
   7. 00:36:736 (8) - add whistle of slider start.
      　
   8. 00:46:912 - same comment in insane diff
      　
   9. 00:49:965 - ^
   [Easy]
   
   • 
     
     　
   1. 00:46:912 - same comment in insane diff.
      　
   2. 00:49:965 - ^

Guy wrote:

hi~ request from via in-game

[General]

• 
  
  　

1. Clear!

[Hard]

• 
  
  　

1. 00:01:631 (3) - you should be this slider's 2nd line on the center line. move to x:328 y:156
   　
2. 00:34:193 (3) - like this? the width of a slider and the slider be standardized.
   
   　
3. 00:42:842 (3,4,1) - make triangle
   
   
   　
4. 00:46:912 - the volume falls greatly suddenly. it is strange. this green line is volume:40% better.
   　
5. 00:49:965 - you should many green line. you do it lower volume to fade-out little by little.
   　　　00:49:965 - volume 30%
   　　　00:51:491 - volume 20%
   　　　00:52:509 - volume 10%
   　　　00:53:526 - volume 5%
   try it.
   　
   [Normal]
   
   • 
     
     　
   1. 00:02:394 (2,3) - not parfect stack.
      　
   2. 00:12:315 (5) - add whistle of slider start.
      　
   3. 00:21:473 (1) - add whistle of slider end.
      　
   4. 00:26:561 (3) - add whistle of slider start.
      　
   5. 00:28:596 (5) - ^
      　
   6. 00:34:193 (3) - add whistle of slider end.
      　
   7. 00:36:736 (8) - add whistle of slider start.
      　
   8. 00:46:912 - same comment in insane diff
      　
   9. 00:49:965 - ^
   [Easy]
   
   • 
     
     　
   1. 00:46:912 - same comment in insane diff.
      　
   2. 00:49:965 - ^

That's all~
good luck!

1. 00:00:614 (1) - whistle at slider start
2. 00:02:649 (2) - whistle at slider start
3. 00:16:894 (1) - whistle at slider start
4. 00:25:035 (1) - whistle at slider start
5. 00:41:315 (1) - whistle at slider start
6. 00:48:438 (6) - whistle at slider end for constency with hard

1. 00:00:614 (1) - whistle at slider start
2. 00:02:394 (2,3) - i think this patern will be better to read if they were placed like:
   
   SPOILER

   
3. 00:18:675 (2,3) - and same thing for this 2 circles
4. 00:34:956 (4,5) - same here
5. 00:48:438 (6) - whistle at slider end for constency with hard

1. 00:00:614 (1) - whistle at slider beginning
2. 00:06:464 (6) - try to place it like this: for a better flow
   
   SPOILER

   
3. 00:16:894 (1,2) - personally i don't like this 2 sliders stacked why don't you try to unstack they?

Lally wrote:

ohai o3o/
[General]
in all diff 00:53:526 - here set a 5% volume
[Easy]

1. 00:00:614 (1) - whistle at slider start
2. 00:02:649 (2) - whistle at slider start
3. 00:16:894 (1) - whistle at slider start
4. 00:25:035 (1) - whistle at slider start
5. 00:41:315 (1) - whistle at slider start
6. 00:48:438 (6) - whistle at slider end for constency with hard

[Normal]

1. 00:00:614 (1) - whistle at slider start
2. 00:02:394 (2,3) - i think this patern will be better to read if they were placed like:
   
   SPOILER

   
3. 00:18:675 (2,3) - and same thing for this 2 circles
4. 00:34:956 (4,5) - same here
5. 00:48:438 (6) - whistle at slider end for constency with hard

[Hard]

1. 00:00:614 (1) - whistle at slider beginning
2. 00:06:464 (6) - try to place it like this: for a better flow
   
   SPOILER

   
3. 00:16:894 (1,2) - personally i don't like this 2 sliders stacked why don't you try to unstack they?

waah really nice mapset :3 good luck o3o/ star for you <3

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1. Disable countdown perhaps? It doesn't works in my computer lol. And it doesn't fit with songs too.
2. Remove letter-box during breaks? Come on, there's no break! >:
3. "ps2" "ost" to tags :3
4. Use 下村陽子 to artist unicode? You know, Yoko Shimomura is the translation from 下村陽子 :3
5. Actually audio lead-in 2 is too high to me, You can see the space before the first note appears has 614ms, 2000+614 is too high I think. Consider use 1750? owo

1. AR+1 perhaps? Just take a balance from OD/HP.
2. 00:00:613 (1) - Well, I'll recommend you to add whistle at the begin, and remove the whistle from the end. Sounds horrible when I didn't hear anything from the begin of this slider, and sounds horrible again when I hear whistle from the end.
   (If you agree with this, do same thing for 00:02:648 (2) -'s begin/reserve please.)
3. 00:07:225 - Well I prefer remove whistle from here, add it at 00:07:734 - ((5)'s begin). Sounds fitter than current.
4. 00:09:768 (1) - Now you forget a whistle. Please add it to keep consistent with 00:17:905 - / 00:26:043 - / 00:34:180 -.
5. 00:20:448 (3,1) - Blanket perhaps? Potential part for making blanket you know.
6. 00:28:586 - I prefer a note here. Seems it break the beat-rhythm without it, and I don't see any reason for that.

1. Come on, HP/OD 5 for Normal diff in a calm song? No please do not do that. Consider all settings -1~-2 except CS.
2. 00:00:613 (1,2,3) - Stack better you know, seems horrible when testing.
3. 00:26:043 (2,3,4) - Equilateral triangle perhaps? And I prefer to rotate some °s for (3).
   
   
4. 00:39:266 (4) - NC here perhaps? Three notes by placing with 1/2 rhythm, seems inconsistent with other pattern. Make an attention to players may works.

1. HP/OD 7 for that calm song? You mad. both -1~-2 may works.
2. 00:07:734 - I prefer a whistle here, sounds really weird without... you know that, empty.
3. 00:14:854 (1,2,3) - I've seen you make a jump between 00:06:716 (1,2) - before, where the music is individual, and it really fits. Perhaps a jump here too? It would be more challenge while playing this diff called "Hard". Here's an example.
   
   
4. 00:17:397 - I saw you did add some whistle from the first/third short white tick, so add it here too? Sounds really empty again.
5. 00:30:620 - I prefer a whistle here actually, well it sounds better, and you've added it at 00:22:483 -, they should be same. owo
6. 00:32:654 - omg please add whistle here, you can hear a strong sound at the music!
7. 00:35:197 - Why here's no whistle? It seems you forget to add it, since it is horrible to be inconsistent with previous same part you know.
8. 00:36:214 - ^
9. 00:37:231 - ^
10. 00:38:249 - ^
11. 00:36:214 (3) - A bit nazi you know, but move to x:320, y:120 instead? The placement seems more beautiful imo, if you want some symmetrical between (1,3).
12. 00:46:386 (3,4) - I dislike the way that flow works, (4) has been under (3), seems really boring you know... try something in the example. Just move (4) some girds up/left. (You can select 00:46:894 (4,1,2,3,4) - all and then move (4) to the place it should be. :3)
    
    
13. 00:47:403 (1,2,3) - Equilateral triangle you know, it's nicer if you do like that. :c

• Something first: Maybe add a green line with 35% volume on 00:45:369? The current fade out is too sudden.

1. 00:07:734 (5,1) - In my opinion, it sounds better as whistle on the end of (5) then no sound on (1), since the pitch is higher at (5)'s end.
2. 00:37:231 (1) - Put this in x:349 y:269 for alignment and symmetry?
3. 00:46:386 (2) - Maybe make this a copy of (1)? would look a bit better.

1. 00:06:971 (3) - I'd really tell you to remove this note. It plays a bit weird for normal and helps on the relaxing flow. Besides, there isn't much in the music here, at least it doesn't fit in the start...
2. 00:36:723 (8) - New combo fits better here instead of at 00:37:740 (1).

1. 00:03:919 (2,3) - For making the flow better, reversing this would make the pattern better. (example: http://puu.sh/26bEK )
2. 00:09:768 (2,3) - Maybe make these stacked on 00:07:734 (3)'s start/end points? Looks much better. Shouldn't be a big problem to fix the pattern after it.
3. 00:40:537 (4) - This isn't exactly in the middle >:
   
   Overall, there's not much to be modded in this map. Seeing as it is a short and simple-to-map song, it shouldn't take you too much to get it ranked. Good luck!

1. As I told you before, I think the volume decrease is too sudden/strong at the end, makes it feel like you missed the note when you play.
   I suggest you put 28 instead of 20 on the timing section at 00:46:894 and you add another section at 00:48:420 with 25.

1. 00:20:448 (3,1) - might look better if 00:20:957 (1) made kind of a blanket around 00:20:448 (3)
2. 00:40:792 (5) - remove circle? not really a strong beat in the music, so for an easy diff I think this part would be more natural without this circle
3. 00:28:077 (4) - move it to x:224; y:320 to place in the curve of 00:27:060 (3) ?

1. 00:28:586 (5,6,7) - a slider with repeat would play nicer her imo
2. 00:31:128 (3) - hmm there is not a lot in the music at 00:31:256 if you ask me, so a 1-beat long slider instead would fit better.
3. 00:47:403 (3) - ^
4. 00:14:854 (3) - ^
5. 00:22:991 (2) - ^
6. 00:39:520 (5) - same, I think there's nothing worth mapping in normal diff there, remove circle, and go for a 1-beat long slider instead of 00:39:266 (4,6) with whistle on start of slider
7. 00:40:283 (7) - blanket around 00:39:266 (4,5,6) would look nice
8. see my comment in hard diff for hitsounds

1. Overall I think this is a bit too easy. You should add more things like 00:09:768 (2,3) or 00:16:888 (1,2). These jumps make the difficulty more fun to play! Since the BPM is low, right now I think this is too easy to be the hardest diff of the mapset, needs more jumps!
2. 00:02:648 (1) - blanket around 00:02:394 (4) ?
3. 00:04:174 (3) - curve it a bit? (puush isnt working for me now oO)
4. 00:10:785 (1) - make a better blanket around the end of 00:10:277 (3) ?
5. 00:32:146 (3,4) - blanket?
6. 00:09:259 (1,2,3) - I'm not a fan of changing your hitsound placement like this. I think whistle should be on 00:09:259 (1) and start of 00:10:277 (3) etc They sound much better on 2 and 4 than on 1 and 3 imo so you should mostly stick to whistles on 2/4 for the whole map. Actually this is an advice that is also for normal diff

CDFA wrote:

I decided to mod your map first, because of time constraint, and my desire to finish the queue as fast as possible. I know you're a mapper that I won't have to spend too much time on, so I'll get this done first :3.

Overall:
Add "Gummi Ship" to the tags? (If people are looking for "The Gummi Ship Song" or something)
00:41:291 - End the map here? I'm never really a fan of mapping fadeouts, and this is the end of the musical phrase.

Hard:
00:15:868 (3) - Is there a chance that you could get (2) to be fully inside of (3)? Right now, it's almost fully inside, and it looks a bit odd.

Normal:
00:02:393 (2,3) - This is marginally off from (1). It's not major, but its enough to nazi
00:07:224 (3) - Add whistle?
00:19:936 (6) - Make this a better triangle shape? (Move this downward to make an equal triangle)

Easy:
Gud Jub.

Yay :3. I usually like to mod the shortest maps last, but time constraints make that really hard to do ;A;. This map is good :3.

1. Both BPM and Offset are incorrect. Here's what I got.
   
   Timing

   
   

1. I've noticed that your combos are really long (refering to length). It's highly suggested to keep combos of 1 or 2 stanzas for Easy due to the HP bonus. I strongly suggest to add a couple more NCs, I'll point out some specific places but you should be able to fix this without problems.
2. 00:06:207 (3) -
3. 00:14:342 (4) -
4. 00:37:224 (3) -

1. I'd suggest to avoid stacking notes under slider-ends, there are a few parts where you used this. I believe it'd be better if you manually stacked them like this.
2. 00:00:614 (1,2,3) - ^
3. 00:09:258 (1,2,3) - ^
4. 00:17:902 (2,3,4) - ^
5. 00:34:173 (3,4,5) - ^
6. 00:41:800 (1,2,3) - ^

Gonzvlo wrote:

|Timing|

1. Both BPM and Offset are incorrect. Here's what I got.
   
   Timing

   
   

|Easy|

1. I've noticed that your combos are really long (refering to length). It's highly suggested to keep combos of 1 or 2 stanzas for Easy due to the HP bonus. I strongly suggest to add a couple more NCs, I'll point out some specific places but you should be able to fix this without problems.
2. 00:06:207 (3) -
3. 00:14:342 (4) -
4. 00:37:224 (3) -

|Normal|

1. I'd suggest to avoid stacking notes under slider-ends, there are a few parts where you used this. I believe it'd be better if you manually stacked them like this.
2. 00:00:614 (1,2,3) - ^
3. 00:09:258 (1,2,3) - ^
4. 00:17:902 (2,3,4) - ^
5. 00:34:173 (3,4,5) - ^
6. 00:41:800 (1,2,3) - ^

That should be all, I was checking the other version of this song and noticed that this one had the wrong timing too.

Good luck, Moody!

mancusojuanmattos wrote:

Hi! Random mod is the best way imo! xD..

[Easy:]

• 00:06:704 (2) - Actually, this part sounds a bit empty. If I were you, I'd add a Whistle at the Slider Start.
• 00:16:357 (3,1,2) - Let me re-arrange a bit this pattern for a better flow, actually it doesn't flow that good. Try doing something like this:

Screenshoot + Code

221,40,16357,1,2,0:0:0:0:
179,108,16865,6,0,P|105:143|28:129,2,160,0|2|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
222,175,19405,2,0,P|258:200|300:207,1,80,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:

• 00:24:994 (1) - This Combo pattern can flow better, try doing a Flip Vertically (Ctrl+V) in this Slider and the move it to x:276 y:124
• 00:32:106 (2,3) - Following all of your hitsounds patterns, you often add Whistle in the 3rd tick, so to be consistent with that add the Whistle in (2) and remove it in (3)
• 00:45:315 (1,2) - Hmm.. You break your hitsound consistency here, Remove the Whistle on the Slider ends (in both Sliders), and then add a Whistle at the beginning of (2).

- Constant rhythm and Short song, so not much to say here. Anyways the diff becomes boring, because the lack of Whistles, really, I think that you can add more whistles, not just that in the '3rd Tick', try adding some Whistles on the downbeats they sound pretty good in this song. Give it a try please, if you do that, the diff is ready to me

[Normal:]

Settings:
--> I'd reduce the Overall Difficulty by 1 Tick, actually it is a bit high for this difficulty (OD-1)

• 00:31:090 (3) - Add a Whistle in this Note please
• 00:32:106 (5) - To keep consistency in your hitsounding swap the Whistle placement. I mean add a Whistle at the beginning and Remove it from the end of this Slider

- Oh.. this looks almost flawless, the hitsounding is better than Easy, it sound properly. Anyways, if you want to add some Whistle on Downbeats, that would be great.

[Hard:]

• 00:09:752 (2,3) - The jump betweenthese objects is exaggerated and non-fluent, and it is here just to keep the symetry (that it is not a good reason). Just keep the spacing as before between these Sliders.
• 00:11:784 (3,4) - This pattern flows a bit weird actually, I think that if you do something like the screenshoot, the pattern will flow much better:

Screenshoot + Code

388,44,11784,2,0,P|354:23|307:23,1,80,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
268,84,12293,2,0,P|252:120|262:157,1,80,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:

• 00:15:849 (3) - The Whistle sounds much better if you add it at the Slider start and remove it at the Slider end.
• 00:26:010 (2) - Hmm.. Sounds fitting a Whistle at the start of this Slider
• 00:30:074 (3) - *Whoops, Nazi xD*- For a symetric Slider move the Slider end to x:256 y:96
• 00:40:489 (4) - Move this Note down of the Slider (3,5), I mean move (4) to x:256 y:128 for a better flow.

- Good Job in general, some little flow problems but other than that, the difficulty is well constructed.

Well, Well constructed map in general .
Poke me afterwards for a recheck

EDIT (Avoiding Double post xD): Added some Whistles in Easy and fixed a Pattern over IRC (The only thing denied in my mod was the Whistle in Normal in 00:32:106 (5)).
Good Job as Always Moody. Burbuja!!

1. bpm:180 offset:598
2. artist: 下村 陽子
3. romanized: Shimomura Youko

1. 00:44:581 (4) - let this tail down a bit for a better blanket with 00:45:343 (1)?
2. 00:48:394 (3,4) - better blanket?

1. source: KINGDOM HEARTS II (you can find this from the official site and wiki.jp)
2. title: A Twinkle in The Sky (track list in amazon.jp and in wiki.jp)

Colin Hou wrote:

[General]

1. bpm:180 offset:598
2. artist: 下村 陽子
3. romanized: Shimomura Youko

[Hard]

1. 00:44:581 (4) - let this tail down a bit for a better blanket with 00:45:343 (1)?
2. 00:48:394 (3,4) - better blanket?

other things seem fine.

Gonzvlo wrote:

I meant to show the SS with 108.01 not 108.1 as BPM D:

Anyhow, that BPM is not right. After consultation with Charles, BPM should be 117.988 and 608ms as Offset.

Andrea wrote:

~Normal~

00:06:710 (2,3,4) - I'd prefer if you actually add a slider with a repeat instead of these circles, it may be better imo.
00:17:389 (1) - Don't stack that circle, it might confuse beginners, place it somewhere else instead.
00:28:576 (5,6,7) - Same as I said above about 00:06:710.
00:31:119 (3,4) - Again, try to avoid stacks if not necessary.
00:39:255 (1,2,3) - Same as I said above about 00:06:710.

~Hard~

00:14:846 (1,2,3) - I don't like how you've placed this pattern, try to make it nicer?

Good job :3

Frostmourne wrote:

hi

seems you got a bubble already so here is a few suggestions

Hard
00:19:423 (4) - too long NC compare to the rest, I suggest new combo here
00:48:409 (3) - I try moving the 2nd point of this slider to x:280 y:124 and it curves with the 00:49:172 (4) - better like this

SPOILER

sorry for late

no kd , good luck !