lkx_Shore wrote:

[General]
hi

[Star's insane]
不mod神图

[Insane]
感觉ar能+1 ---changed
00:05:919 (1,2) - 间距和前面的一致了，可能会导致读图失误
00:17:037 (4,5) - ^
00:48:801 (3,1) - ^
01:03:625 (6) - ^ ---all fixed
01:22:684 (6) - Newcombo ---added
01:26:566 (1) - 音量减少处理 ---added

如果现在rank了的话，可能会因为图不美观而成为你自己的黑历史。
梗少了点，基本就是绕圈圈，但绕圈圈的花样要多，不然图会很单调


----明白
------稍微改了几处的排列，基本换成了规则的跳..


[Hardy]
不mod神图

[Normal]
HP-1
00:52:154 (7) - 头尾加whistle
00:54:978 (1) - 滑条尾巴的finish移动到00:55:507 (2) -
01:14:742 (5) - 头尾加whistle
01:26:390 (1) - 音量减少处理

音效方面有点空缺.试试2/4whistle和大起伏歌词处+finish
---all fixed

[Easy]
HP-1
ar-2
od-1

音效太乱了..finish一般用了以后要隔着一个大白线用，或者跟着音乐起伏连续用。
试试remove所有的whistle,然后变成1/3whistle?
---all fixed

Banana wrote:

From forum PM

General

[General]
Artist
佐藤利奈, 井上麻里奈 & 茅原実里 （似乎是只要写cv名就可以 这点不是很确定）
Romanised Artist
Satou Rina,_Inoue Marina_&_Chihara Minori 标点什么的 下划线改空格
Title
シアワセ☆ハイテンション↑↑_(TV Size) 喵，罗马字的标题也少空格
Source
Minamike Tadaima
Tags
去掉minamike tadaima，Source里面的不用填了
minami什么的名字感觉不是很必要..
↑↑all fixed

EZ

[Easy]
00:10:331 - 转盘这里开始？ ---changed
00:25:860 (3) - 间距 ---fixed
00:27:978 (2) - 关gs修间距 别的没啥 ---fixed

normal

[Normal]
00:05:037 (2) - 这个节奏建议滑条同向 不过排列目测得修一会...
00:09:272 (2) - 尾巴右边平衡整体排列
00:24:448 (1) - 弯的对应后面？ ↑↑↑---fixed
00:29:566 (1) - 排列还有提升空间 建议自行check (00:31:331 (1,2) - 这两个放到左边可能会容易摆一点 ---changed a lot
00:33:801 (6) - vocal跟漏一个建议改两个圈 原滑条尾巴对应节奏stack下一个滑条
00:42:625 - 大部分都是跟vocal这里为什么空着
00:51:096 - ^（也许并不是跟vocal？
00:52:154 (7) - 滑条头去whistle？01:03:448 (4) 就没加
01:01:154 (1) - 向左弯？
01:06:272 - （也许并不是跟vocal
01:19:154 (1) - 懒
01:25:331 (4) - 往返一次就够
↑↑↑---all fixed

insane

[Insane]
00:10:507 (2) - 前一个跳是重音跳着挺合适 于是这边就显得有点奇怪
00:15:978 (1) - 前面转换的时候是跳出去的这边不跳了也有点奇怪
00:24:096 - 转盘考虑这里结束？
00:27:096 - 后面一串都没空拍建议这边也加个note
00:51:096 (6,7) - 滑条？
01:05:213 (1,2) - ^
01:16:507 - 这边重音放在了红线上 滑条重拍结尾个人感觉这边不太合适
01:22:860 (7) - 这边的跳姑且不说合不合适 后面的1/1被弄得不好读 后面间距大点
stack太多有点影响移动的感觉

↑↑↑---spacing prob and hitsound porb fixed;Changed some part of the stack.

gl

多谢一直帮我的忙;w;

Melt wrote:

;w; 纯支持

• [General]

  1. Please remove "N E K O" from tags, it's not needed because you are already the mapper.
  2. Please add "opening" and "op" to the tags.
  3. Please fix "straberry to "strawberry" in the tags.
  4. Offset is kinda off, so here's a Timing Check: BPM: 170 (no change), Offset: 441 (-8) (Worked well to me http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/647518)
  5. Please don't forget to adjust/snap your timing points with the latest offset.
  6. Inconsistency in Preview Time. SRY's Hard has 49095, while others have 49066. Please make them all the same.
  7. Use 45% as the maximum volume for your hitsounds, things higher than that sound bad, it covers the song and that's not nice.
  
  
  [Easy]
• 00:04:684 (3) - Fix Spacing (Distance Snap). Please avoid having spacing infringements in an Easy and Normal diff. You can't have two notes neither too near nor too far from each other. They'll make your unrankable.
• 00:08:919 (3) - ^
• 00:25:860 (3) - ^
• 00:25:860 (3,4,1,2,3,4) - ^
• 00:32:919 (1) - ^
• 00:32:919 (1,2,3,4) - ^
• 00:38:566 (4) - ^
• 00:48:448 (4,1) - ^
• 00:51:272 (1) - Remove NC.
• 00:54:096 (1) - ^
• 00:55:507 (2) - Fix Spacing & Add NC.
• 00:56:919 (1) - Fix Spacing & Remove NC.
• 00:58:331 (2) - Add NC.
• 00:59:743 (3) - Fix Spacing.
• 01:02:566 (1) - Remove NC.
• 01:03:978 (2) - Add NC.
• 01:05:037 (3) - Move this one grid to the right. That would be better imo.
• 01:06:096 (1) - Remove NC.
• 01:06:801 (2) - Add NC.
• 01:13:860 (1) - Fix Spacing & Remove NC.
• 01:15:272 (2) - Add NC.
• 01:21:978 (1) - This spinner is hard to play for beginners, especially there's 01:23:743 (1) after it. Please change it into something else.
• 01:26:566 - Start a spinner here to be consistent with the other diffs.
  

[SRY's Hard]00:13:507 (2) - Remove finish on start. Put a clap instead.00:17:037 (1) - Remove NC.00:18:801 (1,2) - Find a way to bring these notes lower, (1) is touching the HP bar and that's annoying 01:26:566 (1) - Let it end on 01:29:390.

That's all~
Maybe for now. lol

Zaio wrote:

加油! 感覺完成度很高

Kirino Kousaka wrote:

btw kindly fix this lol.

Strawberry wrote:

@Kirino Kousaka: i think it should be disposed by dev! staff rather than the mappers~ and it's need not to be fixed for now~ like this.

:3

• [Easy]

  1. 00:04:676 (3) - This note is too near from the HP Bar, do something to bring it lower/away from it.
  2. 00:38:558 (4) - Add NC.
  3. 00:44:205 (3) - ^
  4. 01:06:088 (1) - Unnecessary NC. Remove it.
  5. 01:26:558 (1) - Why did you not let this end on 01:29:382? But you did on Normal and Insane? Please be consistent.

• [Easy]

  1. 00:04:676 (3) - This note is too near from the HP Bar, do something to bring it lower/away from it.
  2. 00:38:558 (4) - Add NC.
  3. 00:44:205 (3) - ^
  4. 01:06:088 (1) - Unnecessary NC. Remove it.
  5. 01:26:558 (1) - Why did you not let this end on 01:29:382? But you did on Normal and Insane? Please be consistent.

1. 00:04:684 (3) - New combo due to the new stanza change.
2. 00:08:919 (3) - I'd try to avoid this overlap here, place it like this instead.
   SPOILER

   
3. 00:10:331 (1) - Add a finish at the end of the spinner to emphazise with the music BG.
4. 00:24:448 (1) - Remove the whistle and add a finish on this circle, so you will emphasize the music change.
5. 00:30:096 (1) - Add a finish as well for the same reason, you're missing many of them as I can see.
6. 00:34:331 (3) - Remove the whistle and add a finish on this circle, so you will emphasize the music change.
7. 00:35:037 (4) - Same for this slider end, add a finish instead.
8. 00:49:860 - Kiai should start here like you did in the other difficulties of yours.
9. 01:23:743 - Kiai should end here like you did in the other difficulties of yours.

1. 00:12:272 (3) - This slider repeat might be too confusing for beginners, try to do it like this instead.
   SPOILER

   
2. 00:13:154 (1) - I suggest you to end this spinner here, follows the lyrics and music much more.
   SPOILER

   
3. 00:34:154 (4,5) - I'd try to avoid this kind of stacks on Normal difficulty, try to make it this way.
   SPOILER

   
4. 00:59:566 (4,5,6) - The overlap on this pattern it's pretty ugly and bad to see, try something like this.
   SPOILER

   
5. 01:20:919 (1,2) - I'd try to avoid this kind of stacks on Normal difficulty, try to make it this way.
   SPOILER

   
6. 01:23:743 (1) - This slider is almost touching the HP Bar, move it down a bit.
7. 01:26:037 (5) - You're missing a main beat here, here's what I suggest you to do to fix it.
   SPOILER

   

1. 00:08:919 (6) - New combo should go there due to the music change.
2. 00:10:331 (1,2,3) - This spacing change is really hard to read, here's what I suggest you to do to fix it.
   SPOILER

   
3. 00:20:566 (1) - Remove this new combo, it's not necessary to have it there.
4. 00:21:272 (1) - ^ Same for this one.
5. 00:27:272 (6) - New combo should go there due to the music change.
6. 00:46:684 (7) - A new combo should go there due to the slider velocity change, this have to be fixed.
7. 00:49:860 (1,2,3,4) - Inconsistent spacing, here's what I got to make it perfect.
   SPOILER

   
8. 00:52:154 (4,5,6) - Inconsistent spacing, again, do it this way.
   SPOILER

   
9. 00:56:919 (1) - Remove this new combo, it's not needed there actually.
10. 00:58:331 (8) - A new combo is needed there instead, since the music actually changes here.
11. 00:59:390 (10) - A new combo should go there due to the slider velocity change, this have to be fixed.
12. 01:06:625 (3,4,5) - This sudden spacing change might confuse many players, do it this way so it's easier to read.
    SPOILER

    
13. 01:24:978 (6) - New combo due to the spacing and music change.
14. 01:26:213 (1) - Remove this new combo then since it's not needed at all.

Andrea wrote:

Okay, modding only your own difficulties as requested.

~Easy~

1. 00:04:684 (3) - New combo due to the new stanza change.
2. 00:08:919 (3) - I'd try to avoid this overlap here, place it like this instead.
   SPOILER

   
3. 00:10:331 (1) - Add a finish at the end of the spinner to emphazise with the music BG.
4. 00:24:448 (1) - Remove the whistle and add a finish on this circle, so you will emphasize the music change.
5. 00:30:096 (1) - Add a finish as well for the same reason, you're missing many of them as I can see.
6. 00:34:331 (3) - Remove the whistle and add a finish on this circle, so you will emphasize the music change.
7. 00:35:037 (4) - Same for this slider end, add a finish instead.
8. 00:49:860 - Kiai should start here like you did in the other difficulties of yours.
9. 01:23:743 - Kiai should end here like you did in the other difficulties of yours.

-----New combo all fixed and hitsound too.But the kiai do start at 49:860 and end at 1:23:743 in this diff,so i'm a little comfused.

~Normal~
Reduce the AR by 1 tick at least, it's too high for this kind of difficulty right now.
----fixed

1. 00:12:272 (3) - This slider repeat might be too confusing for beginners, try to do it like this instead.
   SPOILER

   
2. 00:13:154 (1) - I suggest you to end this spinner here, follows the lyrics and music much more.
   SPOILER

   
3. 00:34:154 (4,5) - I'd try to avoid this kind of stacks on Normal difficulty, try to make it this way.
   SPOILER

   
4. 00:59:566 (4,5,6) - The overlap on this pattern it's pretty ugly and bad to see, try something like this.
   SPOILER

   
5. 01:20:919 (1,2) - I'd try to avoid this kind of stacks on Normal difficulty, try to make it this way.
   SPOILER

   
6. 01:23:743 (1) - This slider is almost touching the HP Bar, move it down a bit.
7. 01:26:037 (5) - You're missing a main beat here, here's what I suggest you to do to fix it.
   SPOILER

   
   ----changed the slider at 00:12:272 , fixed the spacing problem and add the beat at 1:26:037 , spinner end changed to 00:13:154 .

~Insane~
Use soft hitsounds like you did on the other difficulties, they fit much more with this kind of song.
Yeah, i found it a good suggestion , it's a bit loud and bother the origin beat.

1. 00:08:919 (6) - New combo should go there due to the music change.
2. 00:10:331 (1,2,3) - This spacing change is really hard to read, here's what I suggest you to do to fix it.
   SPOILER

   
3. 00:20:566 (1) - Remove this new combo, it's not necessary to have it there.
4. 00:21:272 (1) - ^ Same for this one.
5. 00:27:272 (6) - New combo should go there due to the music change.
6. 00:46:684 (7) - A new combo should go there due to the slider velocity change, this have to be fixed.
7. 00:49:860 (1,2,3,4) - Inconsistent spacing, here's what I got to make it perfect.
   SPOILER

   
8. 00:52:154 (4,5,6) - Inconsistent spacing, again, do it this way.
   SPOILER

   
9. 00:56:919 (1) - Remove this new combo, it's not needed there actually.
10. 00:58:331 (8) - A new combo is needed there instead, since the music actually changes here.
11. 00:59:390 (10) - A new combo should go there due to the slider velocity change, this have to be fixed.
12. 01:06:625 (3,4,5) - This sudden spacing change might confuse many players, do it this way so it's easier to read.
    SPOILER

    
13. 01:24:978 (6) - New combo due to the spacing and music change.
14. 01:26:213 (1) - Remove this new combo then since it's not needed at all.

----New combo fixed , spacing fixed, and 1:06:625 , i changed it in this way.

Hope this can help you ^^

Entreal wrote:

Random mod from Popner, Hello there from the Velvet Room. The place I am from exists between dream and reality, mind and matter.

Mods coming soon... I just felt like modding yours but its late here, so tomorrow.

smallboat wrote:

嗨 您好~來幫你MOD:D
我從我們的Queue接你的case：）

以下是mod:

整體
無錯誤之處

Easy
00:25:860 (3) - NC
但你的kiai timing 前後端的線有點偏移 跟其他難度對照一下修正吧
---fixed

Normal
沒什麼問題



Insane
00:06:625 (3) - 末端+whistle?
00:07:066 (4) - +whistle?
00:07:154 (5) - 前端+whistle?
00:50:919 (5) - +finish? ---嗯这个有些不明，暂时没加
01:14:743 (6) - 末端+whistle?
01:20:743 (8) - +whistle?

---added

ok 先mod這些 斟酌使用 如有問題可PM給我 謝謝:)

General
Please toggle off Letterbox during breaks, no SB here!
Being a nitpicker here, but delete that other red color. No need for two reds...
umm,toggled off . I didn't change the note color before, it's default..ok maybe i misclicked,i' ll reupdate it.

Easy

00:01:860 - Here has a finish but rest of the diffs don't, maybe remove this or add it to the rest? emm,since i think this may emphasis the beginning of the song.
00:08:213 (2,3) - I think you should add finishes here, the music is surely asking for this in my opinion ---added
00:29:390 - This should be symmetrical to slider (3) makes it look better ---fixed
00:41:390 - Finish ---fixed
00:42:801 - ^ ---^
00:47:037 (1) - For this part I'm assuming you're following the "Hi!" Part, if you are you need to move this to 00:46:860, more accurate.
00:48:096 - Add a circle here, assuming you're following the "Hi!" part. ----these two fixed together
00:48:801 - Finish? emphasis on the music. ----I added in the head and the end of slider...
00:55:507 - Finish, since you put a finish at 01:18:096 They sound similar so why not be similar? ---added
00:56:919 - Replace finish with whistle.---fixed

Normal

00:10:331 - NC, vocals
00:24:448 - Finish
00:27:272 (1,2) - Should fix this, overlapping is baaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaad.
00:35:743 - ^
00:37:507 - Maybe change this direction of the slider somewhere else, i find it that it breaks the flow of the notes. Be careful of DS.
00:58:331 - Overlap.
01:09:625 - ^
01:26:037 - Move this down, Note (3) is blocking it.

Normal all fixed.
Insane
00:05:037 (3,1) - Should have note 3 be similar to the first note to have a beautiful square thing. Along with the first note of the new combo
00:33:625 (9) - Maybe me, but this note looks so weird looking... Maybe because that slider was in the way or something. ---umm,i made this intentionally
00:49:860 - Finish, new lyric thingy
01:07:507 - Finish on end.
01:08:919 - ^ (due to how the music steadily becomes higher, same thing with 1:07:507).
01:09:184 - I'd say add a note here.
01:18:096 - Finish
01:18:801 - ^
01:20:213 - ^ (From the start of 01:18:096 i noticed that the music steadily goes higher and thats why i recommend having these three finishes, i hope you can here this too).
---All fixed.

Makyu wrote:

[Insane]
AR+1 i'd prefer to keep this
00:17:037 (4,5) - stack (4) in (5) maybe? --okay
00:24:978 (1) - Why is this NC?
00:25:684 (4) - NC here and delete 00:26:037 (1) - that NC ----fixed and above
00:56:919 (3,4) - maybe like this? http://puu.sh/2hWuS ---changed shape,similar to this


[Normal]
00:12:096 - delete that note and finish the previous slider there. okay


[Easy]
Unsnaped green point, all of them ohhhhh, i forgot to fix it the last day...thx

sorry this usless, I'm bad at modding D:

Colin Hou wrote:

Minami-ke Tadaima
Unicode Artist一栏用全角符号，多余空格删去
no kd

Xagrok wrote:

Hi. Mod from popner's queue.
Feel free to ignore my suggestions... And sorry If I repeat rejected ones.

[General]
I'd be happy about some custom combo colours.
I don't quite understand the use of the timing sections from 01:26:743 an on which lower the volume; at least I don't understand them in Normal and ongoing. If you want a consistency in TS, I don't understand it either because they mostly aren't the same; f. ex. Easy has way less TS than the others do. If the consistency wasn't wished, I still don't understand these, sorry ._.

Wow, and that's all I found, nothing wrong with the diffs imo. Good job and good luck with the rank.

blackabyss wrote:

SPOILER

[General]
(AIBat check) Inconsistency in Kiai Times:
- [Easy] : Kiai #1: Starts on 00:49:860, ends on 01:23:743
- [Insane] : Kiai #1: Starts on 00:49:860, ends on 01:23:743
- [Normal] : Kiai #1: Starts on 00:49:860, ends on 01:23:743
- [Skystar's Insane] : Kiai #1: Starts on 00:49:860, ends on 01:12:360 Kiai #2: Starts on 01:12:448, ends on 01:23:743
- [SRY's Hard] : Kiai #1: Starts on 00:49:860, ends on 01:23:743

---I'll try to contect him to talk about it.

SPOILER

[Easy]

1. just curious, why you use x1.2 distance snap on easy? normally ppl use =< x1.00 -----I didn't think about what distance shall i use when i begin to map this,and 1.2 feels better so i selected it.
2. 00:03:801 - a bit messed up with the next slider place, why not use this one? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/657618
   but, it'll change the first one. you can arrange it by your self again if you didn't like
   

   252,164,1860,2,0,P|324:164|388:204,1,140,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
   268,252,3096,2,0,P|196:252|132:212,1,140,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
   252,40,4684,6,0,P|212:96|228:168,1,140,4|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
   336,224,5919,2,0,P|376:168|360:96,1,140

3. 00:04:684 (1) - finish on head
4. 00:10:331 - this spinner shoul start here 00:11:743 ----keep mine.
5. 00:37:154 (3) - your slider pattern imo too plain, why not try to make like this one? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/657626
   

   228,64,36801,1,0,0:0:0:0:
   269,137,37154,2,0,P|242:198|173:241,1,140,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
   321,333,38566,6,0,L|384:302,1,70,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:

6. 00:42:448 - like other pattern, add circle maybe nice here
7. 00:46:860 (1,2) - spacing error
8. 00:50:919 (2) - why not try to make blanket like this? it's more enjoyable http://puu.sh/2j46v
   

   97,250,50919,1,2,0:0:0:0:
   76,168,51272,2,0,P|92:104|156:80,1,140,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:

9. 00:53:743 (2) - i suggest you to do blanket on this note too http://puu.sh/2j4fX
   

   298,95,53743,1,2,0:0:0:0:
   306,11,54096,2,0,P|237:16|218:85,1,140,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:

10. need more work on the pattern. you'll find it out yourself if there's pattern should use blanket like this one 01:12:448
11. 01:09:625 (1) - change this slider t repeat slider like this, it's more fit with the vocal http://puu.sh/2j4qf
12. 01:20:919 (1) - ^
13. 01:22:684 - a bit overlap here, wanna try like this? https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/657653
    

    316,196,84096,2,0,P|260:244|196:244,1,140,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
    124,200,85154,2,0,P|76:144|76:80,1,140,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:

umm,i fixed all the patterns like that,and that kind of blanket is better than mine in some part.Hitsounds added.

SPOILER

[Normal]

1. 00:01:860 (3) - why you no use finish on the head?
2. 00:04:684 (1) - it'll be crunchy if you add finish here too
3. 00:05:037 (2) - larger the length of the slider to fit the music like this http://puu.sh/2j4TW ----keep mine.
4. 00:10:331 (1) - add finish on the head
5. 00:10:860 (2,3) - add finish, imo it's catchy
6. 00:27:272 (1,2) - a bit strange, felt better to change it like this http://puu.sh/2j5c7 ---changed
   or try this one if you like:
   

   109,151,27272,6,0,P|62:166|38:221,1,100
   45,269,27801,1,0,0:0:0:0:
   160,235,28154,2,0,P|202:223|233:162,1,100
   331,110,28860,1,0,0:0:0:0:

7. 00:35:743 - try to do same rhythm pattern like above ^
8. 00:38:566 - ^
9. 01:10:154 - ^ ---changed
10. 00:55:154 (1,2) - better flow like this http://puu.sh/2j5jY
11. 00:58:860 (2) - remove this slider and place note here 00:58:860 - and 00:59:213
12. 01:03:978 (1) - move the slider point to x:312 y:88 for better flow
13. 01:15:801 (2) - make rhythm like this, is more better and it won't make overlap http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/657679 --fixed

----Hitsound fixed.

SPOILER

[Insane]

1. (AIBat check) Unsnapped inherited (green) sections at: 00:59:666 - snap to 00:59:654 ---fixed
2. 00:04:684 (1,2,3) - make better flow like this? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/657714 umm,changed,but another style
   

   68,160,4684,5,4,0:0:0:0:
   172,160,4860,1,0,0:0:0:0:
   172,264,5037,1,2,0:0:0:0:
   280,160,5213,2,0,L|328:160,2,47.5
   68,160,5566,1,0,0:0:0:0:
   172,160,5743,1,2,0:0:0:0:
   172,264,5919,5,0,0:0:0:0:

3. 00:05:566 (1) - remove NC
4. 00:15:625 (8) - this tail of slider not stack properly with the head of this sliders 00:14:390 (5)
5. 00:15:978 (1) - not stack properly with the slider before ---I don't really intend to hide them.
6. 00:19:507 - remove NC here to fit ha ha vocal and don't spent too much combo in short time
7. 00:20:213 - remove this NC and put NC here 00:20:390 - cause it match with ha ha vocal imo
8. 00:35:390 - ugly slider detect, change to normal slider like this 00:35:919 --fixed
9. 00:47:743 - remove NC, the reason was same as above
10. 00:48:096 - ^
11. 01:00:448 - ^
12. 01:00:801 - ^
13. 01:05:566 - remove one with slider point, so the slider doesn't have strange look --fixed
14. 01:24:801 (5) - NC and remove NC here 01:24:978
15. this diff more nice then easiest level of yours.

---NC all fixed.

maybe i just suggest to put more work on Easy, Normal and Skystar's Insane
but overall this was very good. GL~

GGBY wrote:

差点儿忘了这茬儿

insane
00:35:390 (9,1) - 9结尾到1之间的间隔容易读成整拍，可以试试把9变成一个单note --稍微把1贴近了一些...9因为压在鼓点上所以保留

高端的不懂

就是感觉刚作图的人都容易有一个倾向就是排列的时候把所有梗的重心都围绕到屏幕中心，下不去往边角延伸的狠手，我也有这毛病并且不知道怎么改

blackabyss wrote:

[Skystar's Insane]

1. 00:01:154 (1,2) - make these slider point straight
2. 00:10:860 (1,1,1) - this overlap and spent too much NC
3. 00:26:743 (7) - move to x:364 y:168, for more better flow
4. 00:28:507 (4) - not stacked properly
5. 00:33:625 (2) - stack this under first slider and rotate clock wise
6. 00:34:154 (3) - move to x:248 y:164, followed above
7. 00:34:948 (5) - stack this under slider 4 head
8. 00:38:037 (7) - stack this upper the next slider, rotate anti-clockwise
9. 00:44:213 (1) - make this slider wavy like this lol http://puu.sh/2j7e9
10. 00:47:743 (1) , 00:48:096 (1) - remove NC because you spent too much
11. 00:55:154 (10) - NC because follow the vocal instead
12. 00:55:507 (1) - remove NC
13. 00:56:566 - NC and remove the next NC
14. 01:06:448 - NC here, follow the vocal
15. 01:06:625 (11) - make like this? http://puu.sh/2j7tT
16. 01:06:801 - remove NC
17. 01:07:860 (7) - stack this head of slider with 01:06:272 (9)
18. 01:10:154 - overlap and spent too much NC

GGBY wrote:

差点儿忘了这茬儿

insane
00:35:390 (9,1) - 9结尾到1之间的间隔容易读成整拍，可以试试把9变成一个单note

高端的不懂

就是感觉刚作图的人都容易有一个倾向就是排列的时候把所有梗的重心都围绕到屏幕中心，下不去往边角延伸的狠手，我也有这毛病并且不知道怎么改

1. 感觉还是换一下combo colour会让图增色不少（黄绿组合真心给我感觉是很早的老图

1. 00:08:919(3)一张图看下来这是唯一一个带红点的slider,虽然也没错但是还是感觉改圆滑好点，也比较符合这段音乐
2. 00:28:331(3,4,1)试试4复制3放成这个样子
   SPOILER

   
3. 01:05:037(3,4)试试这个节奏
   SPOILER

   
4. 01:11:743(7)因为这是一个衔接,所以我感觉换成一个结束于01:12:096的滑条比较好

1. 00:13:154(1)感觉这个spin最后可以降低点音量,或者直接消音
2. 00:30:448(2)感觉可以和00:31:331(1,2)放平行
3. 00:33:801(3)改成这样试试？
   SPOILER

   
4. 00:39:625(3)加一个note？
5. 00:56:919(4)感觉这里没必要finish
6. 01:07:154(1)缺了俩whistle？

1. 00:02:919(x)总感觉少了点什么,不加个note么
2. 00:07:860(3)感觉这个normal音效还是出来的太突然了,删掉或者减点音量？
3. 01:13:684(4,5,1)只是个建议
   SPOILER

   

1. 00:09:184(2,3)把2上的whistle换到3上去
2. 00:24:978(3,4,5)唔 没叠好(逃
3. 00:37:066(1,2)把1上的nc换到2上去
4. 01:01:154(1,2,3,4,5)摆成正5边形好看点
5. 另外就是感觉你3个难度都是图上4个角利用的很少,或者说基本上没放什么东西,可以ctrl+a看一看

1. 把tag里的op去掉 2个字母是搜不出来的

1. 00:47:390 (2,3,4) - 稍微有点难啊 能不能试着把34合成一个slider
2. 01:15:978 (2) - 在x:216 y:144加一个tick？看起来好一点吧:3

1. 00:05:037 (2) - 不加个折返么orz
2. 00:10:860 (2) - 柑橘这里不用特意加一个finish啊 whistle就够了而且finish略吵orz
3. 00:33:801 (3,4,5) - 感觉这里会被误读 但是也不知道怎么样好╮(╯_╰)╭

1. 00:31:331 (5) - 这个方向会舒服点吧ww
   
2. 00:44:566 (2,3) - 突然减小间距好怪啊 还是用1.5左右的距离放吧:/
3. 00:57:625 (5,6,7,8,9) - 这种地方DS要一样的吧喂！有的0.76有的0.88 稍微调一下

Melt wrote:

:3

[General]

1. 感觉还是换一下combo colour会让图增色不少（黄绿组合真心给我感觉是很早的老图

[Easy]

1. 00:08:919(3)一张图看下来这是唯一一个带红点的slider,虽然也没错但是还是感觉改圆滑好点，也比较符合这段音乐
2. 00:28:331(3,4,1)试试4复制3放成这个样子
   SPOILER

   
3. 01:05:037(3,4)试试这个节奏
   SPOILER

   
4. 01:11:743(7)因为这是一个衔接,所以我感觉换成一个结束于01:12:096的滑条比较好

[Normal]

1. 00:13:154(1)感觉这个spin最后可以降低点音量,或者直接消音
2. 00:30:448(2)感觉可以和00:31:331(1,2)放平行
3. 00:33:801(3)改成这样试试？
   SPOILER

   
4. 00:39:625(3)加一个note？
5. 00:56:919(4)感觉这里没必要finish
6. 01:07:154(1)缺了俩whistle？

[SRY's Hard]

1. 00:02:919(x)总感觉少了点什么,不加个note么
2. 00:07:860(3)感觉这个normal音效还是出来的太突然了,删掉或者减点音量？
3. 01:13:684(4,5,1)只是个建议
   SPOILER

   

[Insane]

1. 00:09:184(2,3)把2上的whistle换到3上去
2. 00:24:978(3,4,5)唔 没叠好(逃
3. 00:37:066(1,2)把1上的nc换到2上去
4. 01:01:154(1,2,3,4,5)摆成正5边形好看点
5. 另外就是感觉你3个难度都是图上4个角利用的很少,或者说基本上没放什么东西,可以ctrl+a看一看

大概就这么多 加油:3

raririn wrote:

渣渣mod 而且晚了 不好意思/.\

---------能来就很感动了;w;

Red = unrankable stuff D:
Blue = strongly suggest you to do this :3
Normal = just suggestions for reference w

[General]

1. 把tag里的op去掉 2个字母是搜不出来的 ----fixed

[Easy]

1. 00:47:390 (2,3,4) - 稍微有点难啊 能不能试着把34合成一个slider ---好的.不过easy的难度还真是不好掌握...
2. 01:15:978 (2) - 在x:216 y:144加一个tick？看起来好一点吧:3 -----呃tick是什么...

[Normal]

1. 00:05:037 (2) - 不加个折返么orz ----可以有w
2. 00:10:860 (2) - 柑橘这里不用特意加一个finish啊 whistle就够了而且finish略吵orz ----fixed
3. 00:33:801 (3,4,5) - 感觉这里会被误读 但是也不知道怎么样好╮(╯_╰)╭ ----改回了之前的slider+note..

[Insane]

1. 00:31:331 (5) - 这个方向会舒服点吧ww ---恩
   
2. 00:44:566 (2,3) - 突然减小间距好怪啊 还是用1.5左右的距离放吧:/ ----fixed
3. 00:57:625 (5,6,7,8,9) - 这种地方DS要一样的吧喂！有的0.76有的0.88 稍微调一下

----fixed

加油咯~不错的图 祝早日rank :3

谢谢拉链(.....