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Satou Rina, Inoue Marina & Chihara Minori - Shiawase High Te

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N E K O
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This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2013年5月9日 at 14:57:12

Artist: Satou Rina, Inoue Marina & Chihara Minori
Title: Shiawase High Tension (TV Size)
Source: Minami-ke Tadaima
Tags: opening haruka kana chiaki Strawberry Amamiya Yuko skystar
BPM: 170
Filesize: 9728kb
Play Time: 01:26
Difficulties Available:
  1. Easy (2.34 stars, 85 notes)
  2. Insane (4.87 stars, 334 notes)
  3. Normal (4.18 stars, 134 notes)
  4. Skystar's Insane (5 stars, 301 notes)
  5. SRY's Hard (4.83 stars, 227 notes)
Download: Satou Rina, Inoue Marina & Chihara Minori - Shiawase High Tension (TV Size)
Download: Satou Rina, Inoue Marina & Chihara Minori - Shiawase High Tension (TV Size) (no video)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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みなみけ　ただいま！
> </~~
Redownload if you download before Thur May 9, 2013.
SRY's Hard by Strawberry
Skystar's Insane by Amamiya Yuko
others by me.
Insane Hitsound by Amamiya Yuko
SPOILER
Thanks for all your help
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Last edited by N E K O , edited 92 times in total.
Strawberry
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Joined October 2010
Strawberry
;)
edit:
~Timing~
BPM: 170.00 Offset: 1204

call me recheck if you changed mp3 file.

fine
Last edited by Strawberry , edited 1 time in total.
N E K O
159 posts
Joined September 2010
Topic Starter
N E K O

Strawberry wrote:

;)

edit:
~Timing~
BPM: 170.00 Offset: 1204

call me recheck if you changed mp3 file.
MP3 file changed to TV Size
litoluna
1,073 posts
Joined April 2011
litoluna
hello~
I play because it was a favorite song　:)

[General]
  1. BGのサイズは4:3が好ましいです。こちらで用意してみましたので良ければお使いください。http://puu.sh/26T75
  2. Audio lead-inを1500に統一しましょう。(all diff) You change all of the diff of AudioLeadIn is 1500
  3. 無音のsoft-sliderslideを追加することをおすすめします。ほとんどの譜面にはこれがはいっており、
    　スライダーのときの”ｼｭｰ”という音が聞こえなくなります。http://puu.sh/1Q39g
  4. EasyのEnable countdownのチェックを外しましょう
idea:
[Easy]
  1. 00:09:978 (1) - spinerの入りが早い気がします。00:09:978からでどうでしょうか
  2. 00:42:801 (1) - remove NC In Easy,Normal 1combo finish so not good.
    EasyやNormalでは1comboで終わるのはあまり良くないとおもいます。
  3. 00:42:801 (1) - ^
  4. 01:00:448 (1) - ^
  5. 01:02:566 (1) - ^

    全体的にDSを統一したほうが良いと思いました。
[Normal]
  1. 00:05:566 (3) - 00:05:919 (4) - 少し離れ過ぎだと思います。DSを気にして配置すると良いかもしれません。
    全体的にDSを統一したほうが良いと思いました。
[Hardry]
  • I think fine.
[Insane]
  1. 00:12:096 (2) - 00:11:566 (1)のSliderの終端にしっかりStackさせましょう
  2. 00:25:331 (2) - ^
  3. 00:26:566 (3,4) - ^
  4. 00:32:125 (2,3) - ^
    緑線をしっかりSnapしましょう
[Skystar's Insane]
  • I think fine.
Nice song!
gl :)
You can kudosu this post if you wish.
Last edited by litoluna , edited 1 time in total.
N E K O
159 posts
Joined September 2010
Topic Starter
N E K O

litoluna wrote:

hello~
I play because it was a favorite song　:)

----I like all the opening of Minamike :3,especially this one :D. Anyway, thanks a lot

[General]
  1. BGのサイズは4:3が好ましいです。こちらで用意してみましたので良ければお使いください。http://puu.sh/26T75
    ----Thanks, it feels better now.
  2. Audio lead-inを1500に統一しましょう。(all diff) You change all of the diff of AudioLeadIn is 1500
    ---fixed
  3. 無音のsoft-sliderslideを追加することをおすすめします。ほとんどの譜面にはこれがはいっており、
    　スライダーのときの”ｼｭｰ”という音が聞こえなくなります。http://puu.sh/1Q39g
    ---added normal-sliderslide.wav
  4. EasyのEnable countdownのチェックを外しましょう
---外しましだ ~

idea:
[Easy]
  1. 00:09:978 (1) - spinerの入りが早い気がします。00:09:978からでどうでしょうか ---i moved it to 00:10:331 (1) -
  2. 00:42:801 (1) - remove NC In Easy,Normal 1combo finish so not good. ---fixed
    EasyやNormalでは1comboで終わるのはあまり良くないとおもいます。 ---I got it.
  3. 00:42:801 (1) - ^ ---fixed
  4. 01:00:448 (1) - ^ ---fixed
  5. 01:02:566 (1) - ^ ---fixed

    全体的にDSを統一したほうが良いと思いました。
I rechecked and fixed them already;
[Normal]
  1. 00:05:566 (3) - 00:05:919 (4) - 少し離れ過ぎだと思います。DSを気にして配置すると良いかもしれません。 I rechecked and fixed them already;
    全体的にDSを統一したほうが良いと思いました。
I rechecked and fixed them already;
[Hardry]
  • I think fine.
[Insane]
  1. 00:12:096 (2) - 00:11:566 (1)のSliderの終端にしっかりStackさせましょう ---fixed
  2. 00:25:331 (2) - ^ ---fixed;
  3. 00:26:566 (3,4) - ^ ---fixed;
  4. 00:32:125 (2,3) - ^ ---fixed;
    緑線をしっかりSnapしましょう

    ---fixed;

[Skystar's Insane]
  • I think fine.
Nice song!
gl :)
Thanks a looooooooooot for your mod help :)
[CSGA]Ar3sgice
4,298 posts
Joined July 2011
[CSGA]Ar3sgice
星神好wwwwww


General

  1. source... rank的图好像都填的romaji 以后应该会出sourceunicode吧 233
Hardy

  1. 00:13:507 (2) - 这个往上一点 http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/627431
  2. 00:21:625 (1) - 中间的空间太小了, 建议是这样包住 http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/627432
  3. 00:50:566 (3) - 这地方打到kiai的时候刚好喷进去, 建议是把这里两个滑条转一下
  4. 01:04:331 (3,4) - 其实有点不好打, 不是很特别的地方所以还是原来的间距吧
  5. 01:13:154 (3) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/627436
Skystar's Insane

  1. new combo可以不放那么多..
  2. 00:10:860 (1) - 这个ctrl+G反过来比较好
  3. 00:18:448 (7) - 往外拉点看不清
  4. 00:27:625 - 这里可以多加几个note, 有点空...
  5. 01:03:978 (1) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/627442
  6. 01:11:831 (5) - 5往外两格
Insane

  1. 00:02:213 (1) - 去new combo
  2. 00:05:566 (1,2,1,2) - 两边一个是1/2一个是1/1, 间距一样大, 容易读错断掉, 把后面的间距拉大点, 或者1/1的滑条
  3. 00:18:978 (2) - 去掉吧
  4. 00:41:037 (1) - 去掉new combo加到2
  5. 01:21:978 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - 这里不错233
  6. 01:08:566 (5,6) - 摆整齐点, 放成菱形吧0.0
  7. 不是变速的话最好不要一个note一组combo 0.0 滑条很多都有点太弯, 拉直一点比较好
  8. 还有就是1/2的那些地方可以多加些串ww
Normal

  1. 00:12:096 (2) - 间距呢
  2. 00:31:860 (1) - remove new combo
  3. 00:32:919 (4) - normal最好别这么放, 因为看不出是往哪边
  4. 00:44:743 (3) - 间距1.2
  5. 00:54:978 - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/627477
  6. 01:13:684 (3) - 1.2
  7. 01:25:331 (4) - 到 01:25:860 停下
Easy

  1. 0,0 easy没啥能mod的
  2. 01:01:154 (1,2,3) -
  3. 01:12:448 (1,2,3) -
  4. 01:19:507 (3,1) - 这种两个slider的可以的话就做对称
  5. 有点太乱, combo别单放0,0
然后是别人mod之后点下左边绿色的的give kudosu

一般是改了东西的mod就给下, 嗯
N E K O
159 posts
Joined September 2010
Topic Starter
N E K O

[CSGA]Ar3sgice wrote:

星神好wwwwww


General

  1. source... rank的图好像都填的romaji 以后应该会出sourceunicode吧 233
    ---改成罗马音了;w;

Insane

  1. 00:02:213 (1) - 去new combo ---fixed
  2. 00:05:566 (1,2,1,2) - 两边一个是1/2一个是1/1, 间距一样大, 容易读错断掉, 把后面的间距拉大点, 或者1/1的滑条 ---好的
  3. 00:18:978 (2) - 去掉吧 ---好
  4. 00:41:037 (1) - 去掉new combo加到2 ---fixed
  5. 01:21:978 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - 这里不错233 :3
  6. 01:08:566 (5,6) - 摆整齐点, 放成菱形吧0.0 ---fixed
  7. 不是变速的话最好不要一个note一组combo 0.0 滑条很多都有点太弯, 拉直一点比较好 ---暂时先保持这样看看.
  8. 还有就是1/2的那些地方可以多加些串ww
    00:29:390 (1) -
    00:57:625 (3) -
    尝试着加了两处.


Normal

  1. 00:12:096 (2) - 间距呢 ---fixed
  2. 00:31:860 (1) - remove new combo ---fixed
  3. 00:32:919 (4) - normal最好别这么放, 因为看不出是往哪边 ---fixed
  4. 00:44:743 (3) - 间距1.2 ---fixed
  5. 00:54:978 - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/627477 ---added
  6. 01:13:684 (3) - 1.2 ---fixed
  7. 01:25:331 (4) - 到 01:25:860 停下 ---fixed


Easy

  1. 0,0 easy没啥能mod的
  2. 01:01:154 (1,2,3) -
  3. 01:12:448 (1,2,3) -
  4. 01:19:507 (3,1) - 这种两个slider的可以的话就做对称 ---嗯
  5. 有点太乱, combo别单放0,0 ---好的


然后是别人mod之后点下左边绿色的的give kudosu

一般是改了东西的mod就给下, 嗯
---ok
多谢啦0w0
Strawberry
osu! Alumni
1,536 posts
Joined October 2010
Strawberry
all fixed

SPOILER
osu file format v12

[General]
AudioFilename: Shiawase Hightension (TV Size).mp3
AudioLeadIn: 1500
PreviewTime: 49095
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Normal
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 1

[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 1.3
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 8

[Metadata]
Title:Shiawase Hai Tenshon(TV Size)
TitleUnicode:シアワセ☆ハイテンション↑↑(TV Size)
Artist:Satou Rina,Inoue Marina,Chihara Minori
ArtistUnicode:南春香(佐藤利奈),南夏奈(井上麻里奈),南千秋(茅原実里)
Creator:N E K O
Version:Hardy
Source:Minamike tadaima
Tags:minamike tadaima minami haruka minami kana minami chiaki Strawberry
BeatmapID:220514
BeatmapSetID:78822

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:5
CircleSize:4
OverallDifficulty:5
ApproachRate:7
SliderMultiplier:1.4
SliderTickRate:1

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//Storyboard Sound Samples
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385,211,35390,2,0,L|471:184,1,70,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
452,105,35743,6,0,P|476:71|506:54,2,70,0|2|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
451,190,36272,1,0,0:0:0:0:
289,237,36625,2,0,P|219:238|142:200,1,140,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
84,165,37154,2,0,P|39:160|1:178,3,70,0|2|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
0,354,38037,2,0,P|62:310|92:244,1,140,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
173,246,38566,6,0,P|244:254|309:295,1,140,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
358,351,39096,1,0,0:0:0:0:
486,243,39448,1,0,0:0:0:0:
465,161,39625,1,8,0:0:0:0:
422,88,39801,2,0,P|349:58|288:22,1,140,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
279,110,40331,2,0,P|315:133|361:151,1,70,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
285,208,40684,1,2,0:0:0:0:
231,272,40860,1,0,0:0:0:0:
313,286,41037,1,8,0:0:0:0:
260,351,41213,1,0,0:0:0:0:
231,272,41390,6,0,P|195:204|151:153,1,140,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
74,183,41919,2,0,P|124:239|161:301,1,140
81,329,42448,1,8,0:0:0:0:
244,288,42801,1,2,0:0:0:0:
324,313,42978,1,0,0:0:0:0:
394,358,43154,1,8,0:0:0:0:
455,300,43331,2,0,P|478:233|479:158,1,140,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
450,85,43860,2,0,P|405:107|368:113,1,70,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
302,121,44213,6,0,P|233:90|154:88,1,140,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
204,163,44743,2,0,P|128:171|58:208,1,140
81,281,45272,1,8,0:0:0:0:
160,254,45448,2,0,P|233:239|310:248,1,140,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
377,273,45978,1,8,0:0:0:0:
447,318,46154,1,0,0:0:0:0:
485,243,46331,2,0,P|500:212|508:170,2,70,0|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
422,186,46860,2,0,P|443:118|446:45,1,140,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
366,78,47390,6,0,P|331:81|299:108,1,70,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
291,184,47743,2,0,P|313:208|351:221,1,70,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
423,186,48096,2,0,P|440:152|432:112,1,70,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
366,78,48448,5,4,0:0:0:0:
291,184,48625,1,4,0:0:0:0:
423,186,48801,1,4,0:0:0:0:
291,184,49154,5,2,0:0:0:0:
217,224,49331,1,0,0:0:0:0:
133,230,49507,1,2,0:0:0:0:
55,197,49684,1,0,0:0:0:0:
18,121,49860,6,0,P|12:85|-14:40,2,70,4|0|8,1:2|2:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
55,197,50390,1,0,0:0:0:0:
68,280,50566,2,0,P|69:317|92:353,2,70,0|0|8,0:0|2:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
55,197,51096,2,0,P|129:167|212:150,2,140,0|2|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
68,280,51978,2,0,P|142:291|212:315,1,140,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
362,255,52684,6,0,P|392:232|410:203,1,70,0|0,0:0|2:0,0:0:0:0:
328,179,53037,2,0,P|346:144|347:102,1,70,8|0,0:0|2:0,0:0:0:0:
264,119,53390,2,0,P|268:83|258:45,2,70,0|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
243,200,53919,2,0,P|234:275|251:341,2,140,0|2|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
288,129,54801,1,0,0:0:0:0:
171,164,54978,1,2,2:0:0:0:
201,53,55154,1,10,0:0:0:0:
288,129,55331,1,2,2:0:0:0:
365,159,55507,6,0,P|403:153|430:138,1,70,0|0,0:0|2:0,0:0:0:0:
358,15,55860,2,0,P|356:51|369:85,1,70,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
498,26,56213,2,0,P|460:32|433:47,1,70,4|0,0:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
373,107,56566,1,8,0:0:0:0:
288,129,56743,1,0,0:0:0:0:
210,98,56919,2,0,P|170:81|149:57,2,70,0|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
288,129,57448,1,0,0:0:0:0:
364,163,57625,2,0,P|404:180|425:204,2,70,2|0|8,2:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
199,201,58331,6,0,P|147:252|113:320,1,140,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
199,323,58860,1,0,0:0:0:0:
99,187,59213,1,0,0:0:0:0:
217,67,59566,2,0,P|287:53|366:61,1,140,4|0,2:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
431,94,60096,1,2,0:0:0:0:
361,140,60272,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,213,60448,2,0,P|303:247|290:299,1,70,4|2,0:2|2:0,0:0:0:0:
377,282,60801,2,0,P|379:326|385:358,1,70,8|2,0:0|2:0,0:0:0:0:
455,306,61154,5,4,2:0:0:0:
311,353,61507,2,0,P|234:337|175:280,1,140,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
162,217,62037,2,0,L|90:234,1,70,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
12,253,62390,1,4,2:0:0:0:
137,141,62743,1,2,0:0:0:0:
298,185,63096,1,0,0:0:0:0:
376,215,63272,2,0,P|417:227|468:223,1,70,0|2,0:0|2:0,0:0:0:0:
425,145,63625,2,0,P|463:125|482:101,1,70,8|2,0:0|2:0,0:0:0:0:
354,109,63978,5,0,0:0:0:0:
354,109,64154,1,0,0:0:0:0:
267,137,64331,1,8,0:0:0:0:
186,94,64507,1,0,0:0:0:0:
101,129,64684,2,0,L|24:104,2,70,0|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
168,179,65213,2,0,P|193:218|194:322,2,140,0|2|0,0:0|2:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
102,129,66096,1,0,0:0:0:0:
162,70,66272,2,0,L|194:43,2,35,0|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
102,129,66625,1,0,0:0:0:0:
42,188,66801,6,0,P|19:261|61:333,1,140,4|8,0:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
117,276,67331,1,0,0:0:0:0:
187,230,67507,2,0,P|247:195|306:126,1,140,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
335,69,68037,1,0,0:0:0:0:
238,87,68213,2,0,P|200:94|152:93,1,70,4|2,0:2|2:0,0:0:0:0:
111,174,68566,2,0,P|67:173|25:157,1,70,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
23,69,68919,1,2,2:0:0:0:
111,174,69096,1,0,0:0:0:0:
246,175,69272,2,0,P|326:173|407:158,1,140,8|4,0:0|0:2,0:0:0:0:
316,317,69978,5,0,0:0:0:0:
232,314,70154,2,0,P|161:319|83:288,1,140,4|0,0:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
85,128,70860,2,0,P|142:175|173:245,1,140,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
232,314,71390,2,0,P|261:288|276:261,1,70,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
290,178,71743,1,0,0:0:0:0:
366,144,71919,2,0,L|432:119,1,70,0|2,0:0|2:0,0:0:0:0:
229,121,72448,6,0,P|194:125|161:142,1,70,4|0,0:2|2:0,0:0:0:0:
93,92,72801,2,0,P|74:138|79:172,1,70,8|0,0:0|2:0,0:0:0:0:
132,221,73154,2,0,P|162:290|140:359,1,140,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
83,291,73684,2,0,L|231:277,2,140,0|2|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
0,302,74566,1,0,0:0:0:0:
158,358,74919,6,0,L|232:351,1,70,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
311,343,75272,2,0,P|359:284|376:202,1,140,4|8,0:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
448,266,75801,2,0,P|463:190|453:114,1,140
433,46,76331,1,8,0:0:0:0:
359,86,76507,2,0,P|297:123|221:136,2,140,4|2|0,0:2|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
194,47,77566,2,0,L|119:32,2,70,0|8|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
274,73,78096,5,0,0:0:0:0:
272,156,78272,1,2,0:0:0:0:
189,171,78448,1,8,0:0:0:0:
135,106,78625,1,2,0:0:0:0:
194,46,78801,1,0,0:0:0:0:
189,171,79154,6,0,L|187:258,1,70,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
185,325,79507,1,0,0:0:0:0:
266,305,79684,1,2,0:0:0:0:
349,314,79860,1,8,0:0:0:0:
426,346,80037,1,2,0:0:0:0:
440,263,80213,2,0,B|452:204|452:204|421:122,1,140,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
336,121,80743,2,0,L|363:195,1,70,0|4,0:0|0:2,0:0:0:0:
234,298,81272,6,0,L|210:232,1,70,8|4,0:0|0:2,0:0:0:0:
160,71,81801,1,0,0:0:0:0:
21,165,82154,2,0,P|66:217|136:239,1,140,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
199,187,82684,2,0,P|227:161|261:152,1,70,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
287,230,83037,2,0,P|325:228|370:248,1,70
326,317,83390,2,0,P|365:337|392:365,1,70,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
244,351,83743,5,0,0:0:0:0:
116,241,84096,2,0,P|90:168|105:103,1,140,4|0,0:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,44,84801,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,128,84978,2,0,L|256:276|256:276,1,140
256,352,85507,1,8,0:0:0:0:
328,312,85684,1,0,0:0:0:0:
408,292,85860,6,0,P|448:288|492:272,1,70
340,168,86213,2,0,P|352:204|352:240,1,70,2|6,0:0|2:0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,86566,12,0,88684,0:0:0:0:

notice the spacing of some places in Easy diff: (必要的时候可以关掉grid snap.
  • 00:36:801 (2) -
    00:47:390 (2) -
    00:48:448 (4) -
    00:50:919 (2) -
    01:00:448 (5) -
    01:03:978 (2,3) -
    01:07:507 (3) -
    01:11:037 (3) -
N E K O
159 posts
Joined September 2010
Topic Starter
N E K O

Strawberry wrote:

notice the spacing of some places in Easy diff: (必要的时候可以关掉grid snap.
  • 00:36:801 (2) -
    00:47:390 (2) -
    00:48:448 (4) -
    00:50:919 (2) -
    01:00:448 (5) -
    01:03:978 (2,3) -
    01:07:507 (3) -
    01:11:037 (3) -

---fixed
lkx_Shore
1,453 posts
Joined January 2010
lkx_Shore
[General]
hi

[Star's insane]
不mod神图

[Insane]
感觉ar能+1
00:05:919 (1,2) - 间距和前面的一致了，可能会导致读图失误
00:17:037 (4,5) - ^
00:48:801 (3,1) - ^
01:03:625 (6) - ^
01:22:684 (6) - Newcombo
01:26:566 (1) - 音量减少处理

如果现在rank了的话，可能会因为图不美观而成为你自己的黑历史。
梗少了点，基本就是绕圈圈，但绕圈圈的花样要多，不然图会很单调

[Hardy]
不mod神图

[Normal]
HP-1
00:52:154 (7) - 头尾加whistle
00:54:978 (1) - 滑条尾巴的finish移动到00:55:507 (2) -
01:14:742 (5) - 头尾加whistle
01:26:390 (1) - 音量减少处理

音效方面有点空缺.试试2/4whistle和大起伏歌词处+finish

[Easy]
HP-1
ar-2
od-1

音效太乱了..finish一般用了以后要隔着一个大白线用，或者跟着音乐起伏连续用。
试试remove所有的whistle,然后变成1/3whistle?
Banana
794 posts
Joined October 2010
Banana
From forum PM

[General]
Artist
佐藤利奈, 井上麻里奈 & 茅原実里 （似乎是只要写cv名就可以 这点不是很确定）
Romanised Artist
Satou Rina,_Inoue Marina_&_Chihara Minori 标点什么的 下划线改空格
Title
シアワセ☆ハイテンション↑↑_(TV Size) 喵，罗马字的标题也少空格
Source
Minamike Tadaima
Tags
去掉minamike tadaima，Source里面的不用填了
minami什么的名字感觉不是很必要..

[Easy]
00:10:331 - 转盘这里开始？
00:25:860 (3) - 间距
00:27:978 (2) - 关gs修间距 别的没啥
[Normal]
00:05:037 (2) - 这个节奏建议滑条同向 不过排列目测得修一会...
00:09:272 (2) - 尾巴右边平衡整体排列
00:24:448 (1) - 弯的对应后面？
00:29:566 (1) - 排列还有提升空间 建议自行check (00:31:331 (1,2) - 这两个放到左边可能会容易摆一点
00:33:801 (6) - vocal跟漏一个建议改两个圈 原滑条尾巴对应节奏stack下一个滑条
00:42:625 - 大部分都是跟vocal这里为什么空着
00:51:096 - ^（也许并不是跟vocal？
00:52:154 (7) - 滑条头去whistle？01:03:448 (4) 就没加
01:01:154 (1) - 向左弯？
01:06:272 - （也许并不是跟vocal
01:19:154 (1) - 懒
01:25:331 (4) - 往返一次就够

[Hardy]
00:34:684 (7) - 考虑向上弯
00:38:037 (5) - whistle改开头？
00:42:978 (5) - (nazi) 往上一点x325 y310
01:18:448 (3,4,1,2) - 整体向下到x188 y186再微调别的（(4)和后面一串

[Insane]
00:10:507 (2) - 前一个跳是重音跳着挺合适 于是这边就显得有点奇怪
00:15:978 (1) - 前面转换的时候是跳出去的这边不跳了也有点奇怪
00:24:096 - 转盘考虑这里结束？
00:27:096 - 后面一串都没空拍建议这边也加个note
00:51:096 (6,7) - 滑条？
01:05:213 (1,2) - ^
01:16:507 - 这边重音放在了红线上 滑条重拍结尾个人感觉这边不太合适
01:22:860 (7) - 这边的跳姑且不说合不合适 后面的1/1被弄得不好读 后面间距大点
stack太多有点影响移动的感觉

[Skystar's Insane]
00:02:919 - 特意这么放了估计不太想动，姑且建议一下吧 考虑用大概1.5的ds放右边和后面00:05:743 (2)对应
00:15:978 (1) - 尾巴和前面的滑条overlap了 建议弧度放小点 顺便和00:13:154 (1) 对应
00:33:625 (2) - overlap没问题 我只是觉得右下角太空了不好看建议换个位置
01:21:801 (4) - 前面一个还好 这个有点奇怪，建议滑条 这边是个拖出去的音
01:26:566 (1) - 前一个红线已经停了，和insane一样这边开始转盘？另转盘考虑消音


gl
N E K O
159 posts
Joined September 2010
Topic Starter
N E K O

lkx_Shore wrote:

[General]
hi

[Star's insane]
不mod神图

[Insane]
感觉ar能+1 ---changed
00:05:919 (1,2) - 间距和前面的一致了，可能会导致读图失误
00:17:037 (4,5) - ^
00:48:801 (3,1) - ^
01:03:625 (6) - ^ ---all fixed
01:22:684 (6) - Newcombo ---added
01:26:566 (1) - 音量减少处理 ---added

如果现在rank了的话，可能会因为图不美观而成为你自己的黑历史。
梗少了点，基本就是绕圈圈，但绕圈圈的花样要多，不然图会很单调


----明白
------稍微改了几处的排列，基本换成了规则的跳..

[Hardy]
不mod神图

[Normal]
HP-1
00:52:154 (7) - 头尾加whistle
00:54:978 (1) - 滑条尾巴的finish移动到00:55:507 (2) -
01:14:742 (5) - 头尾加whistle
01:26:390 (1) - 音量减少处理

音效方面有点空缺.试试2/4whistle和大起伏歌词处+finish
---all fixed

[Easy]
HP-1
ar-2
od-1

音效太乱了..finish一般用了以后要隔着一个大白线用，或者跟着音乐起伏连续用。
试试remove所有的whistle,然后变成1/3whistle?
---all fixed
多谢一直帮我的忙;w;
N E K O
159 posts
Joined September 2010
Topic Starter
N E K O

Banana wrote:

From forum PM
General
[General]
Artist
佐藤利奈, 井上麻里奈 & 茅原実里 （似乎是只要写cv名就可以 这点不是很确定）
Romanised Artist
Satou Rina,_Inoue Marina_&_Chihara Minori 标点什么的 下划线改空格
Title
シアワセ☆ハイテンション↑↑_(TV Size) 喵，罗马字的标题也少空格
Source
Minamike Tadaima
Tags
去掉minamike tadaima，Source里面的不用填了
minami什么的名字感觉不是很必要..
↑↑all fixed

EZ
[Easy]
00:10:331 - 转盘这里开始？ ---changed
00:25:860 (3) - 间距 ---fixed
00:27:978 (2) - 关gs修间距 别的没啥 ---fixed

normal
[Normal]
00:05:037 (2) - 这个节奏建议滑条同向 不过排列目测得修一会...
00:09:272 (2) - 尾巴右边平衡整体排列
00:24:448 (1) - 弯的对应后面？ ↑↑↑---fixed
00:29:566 (1) - 排列还有提升空间 建议自行check (00:31:331 (1,2) - 这两个放到左边可能会容易摆一点 ---changed a lot
00:33:801 (6) - vocal跟漏一个建议改两个圈 原滑条尾巴对应节奏stack下一个滑条
00:42:625 - 大部分都是跟vocal这里为什么空着
00:51:096 - ^（也许并不是跟vocal？
00:52:154 (7) - 滑条头去whistle？01:03:448 (4) 就没加
01:01:154 (1) - 向左弯？
01:06:272 - （也许并不是跟vocal
01:19:154 (1) - 懒
01:25:331 (4) - 往返一次就够
↑↑↑---all fixed

insane
[Insane]
00:10:507 (2) - 前一个跳是重音跳着挺合适 于是这边就显得有点奇怪
00:15:978 (1) - 前面转换的时候是跳出去的这边不跳了也有点奇怪
00:24:096 - 转盘考虑这里结束？
00:27:096 - 后面一串都没空拍建议这边也加个note
00:51:096 (6,7) - 滑条？
01:05:213 (1,2) - ^
01:16:507 - 这边重音放在了红线上 滑条重拍结尾个人感觉这边不太合适
01:22:860 (7) - 这边的跳姑且不说合不合适 后面的1/1被弄得不好读 后面间距大点
stack太多有点影响移动的感觉

↑↑↑---spacing prob and hitsound porb fixed;Changed some part of the stack.
gl
It's of great help,thx .
Skystar
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Joined May 2011
Skystar
http://puu.sh/2a9Wc

Source:Minamike Tadaima (T要大寫)
tags裏N E K O跟creator重複了可以刪掉,還有草莓的ID打錯了.
lkx_Shore
1,453 posts
Joined January 2010
lkx_Shore
多谢一直帮我的忙;w;
随叫随到.-.
Melt
353 posts
Joined May 2011
Melt
;w; 纯支持
N E K O
159 posts
Joined September 2010
Topic Starter
N E K O

Melt wrote:

;w; 纯支持
:) 谢谢啦
Kirino Kousaka
655 posts
Joined November 2010
Kirino Kousaka
Hello~ Modding from forum PM request. Sorry for being kinda late. :(
Things in Red must be fixed.
Things in Purple are highly suggested for a nice improvement.
Others are normal suggestions.

  • [General]
    1. Please remove "N E K O" from tags, it's not needed because you are already the mapper.
    2. Please add "opening" and "op" to the tags.
    3. Please fix "straberry to "strawberry" in the tags.
    4. Offset is kinda off, so here's a Timing Check: BPM: 170 (no change), Offset: 441 (-8) (Worked well to me http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/647518)
    5. Please don't forget to adjust/snap your timing points with the latest offset.
    6. Inconsistency in Preview Time. SRY's Hard has 49095, while others have 49066. Please make them all the same.
    7. Use 45% as the maximum volume for your hitsounds, things higher than that sound bad, it covers the song and that's not nice.

    [Easy]
  • 00:04:684 (3) - Fix Spacing (Distance Snap). Please avoid having spacing infringements in an Easy and Normal diff. You can't have two notes neither too near nor too far from each other. They'll make your unrankable.
  • 00:08:919 (3) - ^
  • 00:25:860 (3) - ^
  • 00:25:860 (3,4,1,2,3,4) - ^
  • 00:32:919 (1) - ^
  • 00:32:919 (1,2,3,4) - ^
  • 00:38:566 (4) - ^
  • 00:48:448 (4,1) - ^
  • 00:51:272 (1) - Remove NC.
  • 00:54:096 (1) - ^
  • 00:55:507 (2) - Fix Spacing & Add NC.
  • 00:56:919 (1) - Fix Spacing & Remove NC.
  • 00:58:331 (2) - Add NC.
  • 00:59:743 (3) - Fix Spacing.
  • 01:02:566 (1) - Remove NC.
  • 01:03:978 (2) - Add NC.
  • 01:05:037 (3) - Move this one grid to the right. That would be better imo.
  • 01:06:096 (1) - Remove NC.
  • 01:06:801 (2) - Add NC.
  • 01:13:860 (1) - Fix Spacing & Remove NC.
  • 01:15:272 (2) - Add NC.
  • 01:21:978 (1) - This spinner is hard to play for beginners, especially there's 01:23:743 (1) after it. Please change it into something else.
  • 01:26:566 - Start a spinner here to be consistent with the other diffs.
[Normal]00:08:566 (1) - 00:24:978 (1) - Remove NC.00:29:566 (1) - Remove NC.00:30:096 (2) - Add NC.00:27:801 (2) - Fix Spacing.00:32:919 (4) - Add NC.00:34:507 (1) - Remove NC.00:36:272 (2) - Fix Spacing.00:36:978 (1) - Remove NC.00:37:507 (4,5,6) - Fix Spacing.00:38:037 (1) - Remove NC.00:38:566 (3) - Add NC.00:44:213 (6) - ^00:47:743 (4,5) - Fix Spacing.00:49:860 (4) - Add NC.00:52:684 (1) - Fix Spacing.00:55:860 (1) - Remove NC.00:56:566 (2) - Fix Spacing.00:57:272 (1) - Remove NC.00:57:978 (1) - ^00:58:331 (2) - Add NC.00:58:860 (3) - Fix Spacing.01:00:096 (5) - ^01:00:801 (7) - ^01:01:860 (1) - Remove NC.01:02:390 (2) - Fix Spacing.01:03:978 (1) - Please avoid having sliders such as this in an Easy or Normal diff because beginners will find it hard to read. Reduce 1 reversal. Then fix the spacing of the following note.01:06:272 (1) - Fix Spacing & Remove NC.01:06:448 (2) - Add NC.01:07:154 (1) - Remove NC.01:08:390 (1) - Why not break this into two sliders?01:09:625 (2,3) - Fix Spacing.01:17:566 (1) - Remove NC.01:17:743 (2) - Add NC.01:18:448 (1) - Remove NC.01:22:684 (2) - Same as 01:08:390 (1).01:23:743 (1,3) - Fix Spacing.01:26:213 (1) - Make it start on 01:26:566 and let it end on 01:29:390.

[SRY's Hard]00:13:507 (2) - Remove finish on start. Put a clap instead.00:17:037 (1) - Remove NC.00:18:801 (1,2) - Find a way to bring these notes lower, (1) is touching the HP bar and that's annoying :(01:26:566 (1) - Let it end on 01:29:390.

[Insane]00:27:272 (1) - I don't like this slider's appearance. Remake and don't put that sharp end lol.00:52:684 (6) - Add NC.00:58:331 (9) - ^01:05:213 (1) - Remove NC.01:05:566 (1) - ^01:11:390 (1) - ^01:14:743 (1) - ^01:15:625 (1) - ^01:21:449 (1) - ^01:26:566 (1) - Let it end on 01:29:390.

[Skystar's Insane]00:05:037 (1,1) - These NC's are pointless imo. Please remove them.01:06:625 (11) - Break this into two circles.01:26:566 (1) - Delete this note.01:26:654 (1) - Make it start on 01:26:566 and let it end on 01:29:390.
That's all~ :)
Maybe for now. lol
Zaio_old
1 post
Joined June 2011
Zaio_old
加油! 感覺完成度很高
N E K O
159 posts
Joined September 2010
Topic Starter
N E K O

Zaio wrote:

加油! 感覺完成度很高
我会努力的0w0
N E K O
159 posts
Joined September 2010
Topic Starter
N E K O
Reply for kirino's mod

General
SPOILER
[list]
[General]
[*]Please remove "N E K O" from tags, it's not needed because you are already the mapper. ---erased[*]Please add "opening" and "op" to the tags. ---added
[*]Please fix "straberry to "strawberry" in the tags. ---fixed
[*]Offset is kinda off, so here's a Timing Check: BPM: 170 (no change), Offset: 441 (-8) (Worked well to me http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/647518) I didn't find it obvious.Anyway ---changed I kept them for now ,and wait for other mod to see if it's nessesary
[*]Please don't forget to adjust/snap your timing points with the latest offset.
[*]Inconsistency in Preview Time. SRY's Hard has 49095, while others have 49066. Please make them all the same. ---fixed
[*]Use 45% as the maximum volume for your hitsounds, things higher than that sound bad, it covers the song and that's not nice. ---Yes you're right,fixed.

Easy
SPOILER
[Easy]
[*]00:04:684 (3) - Fix Spacing (Distance Snap). Please avoid having spacing infringements in an Easy and Normal diff. You can't have two notes neither too near nor too far from each other. They'll make your unrankable.
[*]00:08:919 (3) - ^
[*]00:25:860 (3) - ^
[*]00:25:860 (3,4,1,2,3,4) - ^
[*]00:32:919 (1) - ^
[*]00:32:919 (1,2,3,4) - ^
[*]00:38:566 (4) - ^
[*]00:48:448 (4,1) - ^
[*]00:51:272 (1) - Remove NC.
[*]00:54:096 (1) - ^
[*]00:55:507 (2) - Fix Spacing & Add NC.
[*]00:56:919 (1) - Fix Spacing & Remove NC.
[*]00:58:331 (2) - Add NC.
[*]00:59:743 (3) - Fix Spacing.
[*]01:02:566 (1) - Remove NC.
[*]01:03:978 (2) - Add NC.
[*]01:05:037 (3) - Move this one grid to the right. That would be better imo.
[*]01:06:096 (1) - Remove NC.
[*]01:06:801 (2) - Add NC.
[*]01:13:860 (1) - Fix Spacing & Remove NC.
[*]01:15:272 (2) - Add NC.
[*]01:21:978 (1) - This spinner is hard to play for beginners, especially there's 01:23:743 (1) after it. Please change it into something else.
[*]01:26:566 - Start a spinner here to be consistent with the other diffs.
I rechecked them all ,and fixed
Normal
SPOILER
[Normal]
[*]00:08:566 (1) - Fix Spacing.
[*]00:24:978 (1) - Remove NC.
[*]00:29:566 (1) - Remove NC.
[*]00:30:096 (2) - Add NC.
[*]00:27:801 (2) - Fix Spacing.
[*]00:32:919 (4) - Add NC.
[*]00:34:507 (1) - Remove NC.
[*]00:36:272 (2) - Fix Spacing.
[*]00:36:978 (1) - Remove NC.
[*]00:37:507 (4,5,6) - Fix Spacing.
[*]00:38:037 (1) - Remove NC.
[*]00:38:566 (3) - Add NC.
[*]00:44:213 (6) - ^
[*]00:47:743 (4,5) - Fix Spacing.
[*]00:49:860 (4) - Add NC.
[*]00:52:684 (1) - Fix Spacing.
[*]00:55:860 (1) - Remove NC.
[*]00:56:566 (2) - Fix Spacing.
[*]00:57:272 (1) - Remove NC.
[*]00:57:978 (1) - ^
[*]00:58:331 (2) - Add NC.
[*]00:58:860 (3) - Fix Spacing.
[*]01:00:096 (5) - ^
[*]01:00:801 (7) - ^
[*]01:01:860 (1) - Remove NC.
[*]01:02:390 (2) - Fix Spacing.
[*]01:03:978 (1) - Please avoid having sliders such as this in an Easy or Normal diff because beginners will find it hard to read. Reduce 1 reversal. Then fix the spacing of the following note.
[*]01:06:272 (1) - Fix Spacing & Remove NC.
[*]01:06:448 (2) - Add NC.
[*]01:07:154 (1) - Remove NC.
[*]01:08:390 (1) - Why not break this into two sliders?
[*]01:09:625 (2,3) - Fix Spacing.
[*]01:17:566 (1) - Remove NC.
[*]01:17:743 (2) - Add NC.
[*]01:18:448 (1) - Remove NC.
[*]01:22:684 (2) - Same as 01:08:390 (1).
[*]01:23:743 (1,3) - Fix Spacing.
[*]01:26:213 (1) - Make it start on 01:26:566 and let it end on 01:29:390.
umm, i changed all the NCs to fit the Vocal , that may be good? And spacing all fixed
Insane
SPOILER
[Insane]
[*]00:27:272 (1) - I don't like this slider's appearance. Remake and don't put that sharp end lol. --- shape changed
[*]00:52:684 (6) - Add NC.
[*]00:58:331 (9) - ^
[*]01:05:213 (1) - Remove NC.
[*]01:05:566 (1) - ^
[*]01:11:390 (1) - ^
[*]01:14:743 (1) - ^
[*]01:15:625 (1) - ^
[*]01:21:449 (1) - ^
[*]01:26:566 (1) - Let it end on 01:29:390. --- fixed
NCs all changed as i did in normal.


Thanks a lot for your mod :)
Last edited by N E K O , edited 1 time in total.
Kirino Kousaka
655 posts
Joined November 2010
Kirino Kousaka
btw kindly fix this lol.
N E K O
159 posts
Joined September 2010
Topic Starter
N E K O

Kirino Kousaka wrote:

btw kindly fix this lol.
umm it's the max length of the topic name = =
I've no idea how to fix it ....
Strawberry
osu! Alumni
1,536 posts
Joined October 2010
Strawberry
@Kirino Kousaka: i think it should be disposed by dev! staff rather than the mappers~ and it's need not to be fixed for now~ like this.

:3
Kirino Kousaka
655 posts
Joined November 2010
Kirino Kousaka

Strawberry wrote:

@Kirino Kousaka: i think it should be disposed by dev! staff rather than the mappers~ and it's need not to be fixed for now~ like this.

:3
oh lol sorry about that XD

btw, I like SRY's Hard better than Hardy :<
Also fix all the offsets, you only adjusted on Easy.

forgot to point these out/additional mod:

  • [Easy]
    1. 00:04:676 (3) - This note is too near from the HP Bar, do something to bring it lower/away from it.
    2. 00:38:558 (4) - Add NC.
    3. 00:44:205 (3) - ^
    4. 01:06:088 (1) - Unnecessary NC. Remove it.
    5. 01:26:558 (1) - Why did you not let this end on 01:29:382? But you did on Normal and Insane? Please be consistent.
No KD for this post.
N E K O
159 posts
Joined September 2010
Topic Starter
N E K O
Also fix all the offsets, you only adjusted on Easy.

forgot to point these out/additional mod:

  • [Easy]
    1. 00:04:676 (3) - This note is too near from the HP Bar, do something to bring it lower/away from it.
    2. 00:38:558 (4) - Add NC.
    3. 00:44:205 (3) - ^
    4. 01:06:088 (1) - Unnecessary NC. Remove it.
    5. 01:26:558 (1) - Why did you not let this end on 01:29:382? But you did on Normal and Insane? Please be consistent.
---fixed
I was in a hurry in the afternoon , forgot to do it ,sry about that.
N E K O
159 posts
Joined September 2010
Topic Starter
N E K O
i made several changes on it .maybe make it better maybe not
Andrea
Beatmap Nominator
16,650 posts
Joined August 2008
Andrea
Okay, modding only your own difficulties as requested.

~Easy~
  1. 00:04:684 (3) - New combo due to the new stanza change.
  2. 00:08:919 (3) - I'd try to avoid this overlap here, place it like this instead.
    SPOILER
  3. 00:10:331 (1) - Add a finish at the end of the spinner to emphazise with the music BG.
  4. 00:24:448 (1) - Remove the whistle and add a finish on this circle, so you will emphasize the music change.
  5. 00:30:096 (1) - Add a finish as well for the same reason, you're missing many of them as I can see.
  6. 00:34:331 (3) - Remove the whistle and add a finish on this circle, so you will emphasize the music change.
  7. 00:35:037 (4) - Same for this slider end, add a finish instead.
  8. 00:49:860 - Kiai should start here like you did in the other difficulties of yours.
  9. 01:23:743 - Kiai should end here like you did in the other difficulties of yours.
~Normal~
Reduce the AR by 1 tick at least, it's too high for this kind of difficulty right now.
  1. 00:12:272 (3) - This slider repeat might be too confusing for beginners, try to do it like this instead.
    SPOILER
  2. 00:13:154 (1) - I suggest you to end this spinner here, follows the lyrics and music much more.
    SPOILER
  3. 00:34:154 (4,5) - I'd try to avoid this kind of stacks on Normal difficulty, try to make it this way.
    SPOILER
  4. 00:59:566 (4,5,6) - The overlap on this pattern it's pretty ugly and bad to see, try something like this.
    SPOILER
  5. 01:20:919 (1,2) - I'd try to avoid this kind of stacks on Normal difficulty, try to make it this way.
    SPOILER
  6. 01:23:743 (1) - This slider is almost touching the HP Bar, move it down a bit.
  7. 01:26:037 (5) - You're missing a main beat here, here's what I suggest you to do to fix it.
    SPOILER
~Insane~
Use soft hitsounds like you did on the other difficulties, they fit much more with this kind of song.
  1. 00:08:919 (6) - New combo should go there due to the music change.
  2. 00:10:331 (1,2,3) - This spacing change is really hard to read, here's what I suggest you to do to fix it.
    SPOILER
  3. 00:20:566 (1) - Remove this new combo, it's not necessary to have it there.
  4. 00:21:272 (1) - ^ Same for this one.
  5. 00:27:272 (6) - New combo should go there due to the music change.
  6. 00:46:684 (7) - A new combo should go there due to the slider velocity change, this have to be fixed.
  7. 00:49:860 (1,2,3,4) - Inconsistent spacing, here's what I got to make it perfect.
    SPOILER
  8. 00:52:154 (4,5,6) - Inconsistent spacing, again, do it this way.
    SPOILER
  9. 00:56:919 (1) - Remove this new combo, it's not needed there actually.
  10. 00:58:331 (8) - A new combo is needed there instead, since the music actually changes here.
  11. 00:59:390 (10) - A new combo should go there due to the slider velocity change, this have to be fixed.
  12. 01:06:625 (3,4,5) - This sudden spacing change might confuse many players, do it this way so it's easier to read.
    SPOILER
  13. 01:24:978 (6) - New combo due to the spacing and music change.
  14. 01:26:213 (1) - Remove this new combo then since it's not needed at all.
Hope this can help you ^^
Last edited by Andrea , edited 1 time in total.
N E K O
159 posts
Joined September 2010
Topic Starter
N E K O

Andrea wrote:

Okay, modding only your own difficulties as requested.

~Easy~
  1. 00:04:684 (3) - New combo due to the new stanza change.
  2. 00:08:919 (3) - I'd try to avoid this overlap here, place it like this instead.
    SPOILER
  3. 00:10:331 (1) - Add a finish at the end of the spinner to emphazise with the music BG.
  4. 00:24:448 (1) - Remove the whistle and add a finish on this circle, so you will emphasize the music change.
  5. 00:30:096 (1) - Add a finish as well for the same reason, you're missing many of them as I can see.
  6. 00:34:331 (3) - Remove the whistle and add a finish on this circle, so you will emphasize the music change.
  7. 00:35:037 (4) - Same for this slider end, add a finish instead.
  8. 00:49:860 - Kiai should start here like you did in the other difficulties of yours.
  9. 01:23:743 - Kiai should end here like you did in the other difficulties of yours.
-----New combo all fixed and hitsound too.But the kiai do start at 49:860 and end at 1:23:743 in this diff,so i'm a little comfused.

~Normal~
Reduce the AR by 1 tick at least, it's too high for this kind of difficulty right now.
----fixed
  1. 00:12:272 (3) - This slider repeat might be too confusing for beginners, try to do it like this instead.
    SPOILER
  2. 00:13:154 (1) - I suggest you to end this spinner here, follows the lyrics and music much more.
    SPOILER
  3. 00:34:154 (4,5) - I'd try to avoid this kind of stacks on Normal difficulty, try to make it this way.
    SPOILER
  4. 00:59:566 (4,5,6) - The overlap on this pattern it's pretty ugly and bad to see, try something like this.
    SPOILER
  5. 01:20:919 (1,2) - I'd try to avoid this kind of stacks on Normal difficulty, try to make it this way.
    SPOILER
  6. 01:23:743 (1) - This slider is almost touching the HP Bar, move it down a bit.
  7. 01:26:037 (5) - You're missing a main beat here, here's what I suggest you to do to fix it.
    SPOILER
    ----changed the slider at 00:12:272 , fixed the spacing problem and add the beat at 1:26:037 , spinner end changed to 00:13:154 .
~Insane~
Use soft hitsounds like you did on the other difficulties, they fit much more with this kind of song.
Yeah, i found it a good suggestion , it's a bit loud and bother the origin beat.
  1. 00:08:919 (6) - New combo should go there due to the music change.
  2. 00:10:331 (1,2,3) - This spacing change is really hard to read, here's what I suggest you to do to fix it.
    SPOILER
  3. 00:20:566 (1) - Remove this new combo, it's not necessary to have it there.
  4. 00:21:272 (1) - ^ Same for this one.
  5. 00:27:272 (6) - New combo should go there due to the music change.
  6. 00:46:684 (7) - A new combo should go there due to the slider velocity change, this have to be fixed.
  7. 00:49:860 (1,2,3,4) - Inconsistent spacing, here's what I got to make it perfect.
    SPOILER
  8. 00:52:154 (4,5,6) - Inconsistent spacing, again, do it this way.
    SPOILER
  9. 00:56:919 (1) - Remove this new combo, it's not needed there actually.
  10. 00:58:331 (8) - A new combo is needed there instead, since the music actually changes here.
  11. 00:59:390 (10) - A new combo should go there due to the slider velocity change, this have to be fixed.
  12. 01:06:625 (3,4,5) - This sudden spacing change might confuse many players, do it this way so it's easier to read.
    SPOILER
  13. 01:24:978 (6) - New combo due to the spacing and music change.
  14. 01:26:213 (1) - Remove this new combo then since it's not needed at all.
----New combo fixed , spacing fixed, and 1:06:625 , i changed it in this way.

Hope this can help you ^^

It's very kind of you to give a mod to my first map and give such suggestions.It helps a lot. :)
Entreal
136 posts
Joined July 2011
Entreal
Random mod from Popner, Hello there from the Velvet Room. The place I am from exists between dream and reality, mind and matter.

Mods coming soon... I just felt like modding yours but its late here, so tomorrow. :)

Edit: Lets do this! Hope this helps! >.<

General
Please toggle off Letterbox during breaks, no SB here!
Being a nitpicker here, but delete that other red color. No need for two reds...

Easy
00:01:860 - Here has a finish but rest of the diffs don't, maybe remove this or add it to the rest?
00:08:213 (2,3) - I think you should add finishes here, the music is surely asking for this in my opinion
00:29:390 - This should be symmetrical to slider (3) makes it look better
00:41:390 - Finish
00:42:801 - ^
00:47:037 (1) - For this part I'm assuming you're following the "Hi!" Part, if you are you need to move this to 00:46:860, more accurate.
00:48:096 - Add a circle here, assuming you're following the "Hi!" part.
00:48:801 - Finish? emphasis on the music.
00:55:507 - Finish, since you put a finish at 01:18:096 They sound similar so why not be similar?
00:56:919 - Replace finish with whistle.

Normal
00:10:331 - NC, vocals
00:24:448 - Finish
00:27:272 (1,2) - Should fix this, overlapping is baaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaad.
00:35:743 - ^
00:37:507 - Maybe change this direction of the slider somewhere else, i find it that it breaks the flow of the notes. Be careful of DS.
00:58:331 - Overlap.
01:09:625 - ^
01:26:037 - Move this down, Note (3) is blocking it.

SRY's Hard
00:18:801 (1,2) - Played it, suggest moving it down due to the die meter blocking some of it. My screen res. is 1024x768.
00:32:037 (6,7) - Should have this slider blanket the next one. Like:

Can probably make it better.
00:35:743 - Intro to a new tune? Finish?
00:38:037 - Not sure what you're following here, the woohoo or the music. Woohoo should have slider end in 00:38:213
00:41:213 - NC, since new lyric thingy.
00:41:390 - Remove NC if ^
00:42:625 - Note here, if vocals.
00:57:625 - Why a soft hit here when the previous slider has a normal hitsound?
01:01:331 - Should add note here if following vocals.
01:07:331 - Move this note to have the previous slider blanket it, makes it look nicer
01:26:213 - Can ignore this due to the diff being hard, but i feel as if the second slider should be Ctrl + G and having the first slider blanket it.

Insane
00:05:037 (3,1) - Should have note 3 be similar to the first note to have a beautiful square thing. Along with the first note of the new combo
00:33:625 (9) - Maybe me, but this note looks so weird looking... Maybe because that slider was in the way or something.
00:49:860 - Finish, new lyric thingy
01:07:507 - Finish on end.
01:08:919 - ^ (due to how the music steadily becomes higher, same thing with 1:07:507).
01:09:184 - I'd say add a note here.
01:18:096 - Finish
01:18:801 - ^
01:20:213 - ^ (From the start of 01:18:096 i noticed that the music steadily goes higher and thats why i recommend having these three finishes, i hope you can here this too).

Skystar's Insane
00:02:919 - Vocals, note.
00:53:919 - Played it, suggest moving it down due to the die meter blocking some of it. My screen res. is 1024x768.
01:06:448 - NC. New lyric thingy
01:06:801 - Soft finish (also for those three down, from to the others below this don't you hear the music slowly raising up? Perfect chance for a finish!)
01:07:507 - ^
01:08:213 - ^
01:08:919 - ^

01:18:096 - Same as 01:06:801
01:18:801 - ^
01:19:507 - ^
01:20:213 - ^

01:17:743 - NC.
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N E K O
159 posts
Joined September 2010
Topic Starter
N E K O

Entreal wrote:

Random mod from Popner, Hello there from the Velvet Room. The place I am from exists between dream and reality, mind and matter.

Mods coming soon... I just felt like modding yours but its late here, so tomorrow. :)
okay, have a nice dream :)
smallboat
1,687 posts
Joined January 2010
smallboat
嗨 您好~來幫你MOD:D
我從我們的Queue接你的case：）

以下是mod:

整體
無錯誤之處

Easy
00:25:860 (3) - NC
但你的kiai timing 前後端的線有點偏移 跟其他難度對照一下修正吧

Normal
沒什麼問題


SRY
00:10:331 timing線音量調50%比較適中

Insane
00:06:625 (3) - 末端+whistle?
00:07:066 (4) - +whistle?
00:07:154 (5) - 前端+whistle?
00:50:919 (5) - +finish?
01:14:743 (6) - 末端+whistle?
01:20:743 (8) - +whistle?

Skystar
00:46:154 (2,1,2,1) - 感覺音效不太搭..?
01:06:184 (9,11) - 要不要藍線各加個note?
01:14:919 (10) - +finish
01:26:566 (1) - 感覺很突出 而且spinner你都放在大白線 要不要改一下?


ok 先mod這些 斟酌使用 如有問題可PM給我 謝謝:)
N E K O
159 posts
Joined September 2010
Topic Starter
N E K O

smallboat wrote:

嗨 您好~來幫你MOD:D
我從我們的Queue接你的case：）

以下是mod:

整體
無錯誤之處

Easy
00:25:860 (3) - NC
但你的kiai timing 前後端的線有點偏移 跟其他難度對照一下修正吧
---fixed

Normal
沒什麼問題
:)


Insane
00:06:625 (3) - 末端+whistle?
00:07:066 (4) - +whistle?
00:07:154 (5) - 前端+whistle?
00:50:919 (5) - +finish? ---嗯这个有些不明，暂时没加
01:14:743 (6) - 末端+whistle?
01:20:743 (8) - +whistle?

---added

ok 先mod這些 斟酌使用 如有問題可PM給我 謝謝:)

谢谢:)
Makyu
424 posts
Joined April 2012
Makyu
[Insane 2]
00:02:919 - Why do you cut the flow here? add a note please
00:15:625 (7,8) - please follow correctly the distance
00:35:478 (9,10,11) - the begin of the streamer was good, but, maube delethe this notes

[Insane]
AR+1
00:17:037 (4,5) - stack (4) in (5) maybe?
00:24:978 (1) - Why is this NC?
00:25:684 (4) - NC here and delete 00:26:037 (1) - that NC
00:56:919 (3,4) - maybe like this? http://puu.sh/2hWuS

[Hard]
00:02:919 - note here, maybe
00:06:801 (1) - this slider, is better a single circle here. because 00:06:978 - a note here makes no sense

[Normal]
00:12:096 - delete that note and finish the previous slider there.


[Easy]
Unsnaped green point, all of them




sorry this usless, I'm bad at modding D:
N E K O
159 posts
Joined September 2010
Topic Starter
N E K O
General
Please toggle off Letterbox during breaks, no SB here!
Being a nitpicker here, but delete that other red color. No need for two reds...
umm,toggled off . I didn't change the note color before, it's default..ok maybe i misclicked,i' ll reupdate it.

Easy
00:01:860 - Here has a finish but rest of the diffs don't, maybe remove this or add it to the rest? emm,since i think this may emphasis the beginning of the song.
00:08:213 (2,3) - I think you should add finishes here, the music is surely asking for this in my opinion ---added
00:29:390 - This should be symmetrical to slider (3) makes it look better ---fixed
00:41:390 - Finish ---fixed
00:42:801 - ^ ---^
00:47:037 (1) - For this part I'm assuming you're following the "Hi!" Part, if you are you need to move this to 00:46:860, more accurate.
00:48:096 - Add a circle here, assuming you're following the "Hi!" part. ----these two fixed together
00:48:801 - Finish? emphasis on the music. ----I added in the head and the end of slider...
00:55:507 - Finish, since you put a finish at 01:18:096 They sound similar so why not be similar? ---added
00:56:919 - Replace finish with whistle.---fixed


Normal
00:10:331 - NC, vocals
00:24:448 - Finish
00:27:272 (1,2) - Should fix this, overlapping is baaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaad.
00:35:743 - ^
00:37:507 - Maybe change this direction of the slider somewhere else, i find it that it breaks the flow of the notes. Be careful of DS.
00:58:331 - Overlap.
01:09:625 - ^
01:26:037 - Move this down, Note (3) is blocking it.

Normal all fixed.
Insane
00:05:037 (3,1) - Should have note 3 be similar to the first note to have a beautiful square thing. Along with the first note of the new combo
00:33:625 (9) - Maybe me, but this note looks so weird looking... Maybe because that slider was in the way or something. ---umm,i made this intentionally
00:49:860 - Finish, new lyric thingy
01:07:507 - Finish on end.
01:08:919 - ^ (due to how the music steadily becomes higher, same thing with 1:07:507).
01:09:184 - I'd say add a note here.
01:18:096 - Finish
01:18:801 - ^
01:20:213 - ^ (From the start of 01:18:096 i noticed that the music steadily goes higher and thats why i recommend having these three finishes, i hope you can here this too).
---All fixed.
Thanks for your help :)
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