Frostmourne wrote:

hi

General
fine

Easy
00:56:533 (1) - whistle head may fit this song well as I see in Normal , Hard and Insane diff

Normal
01:01:461 (1) - remove NC and add at 01:02:533 (4) - instead, it looks better imo if you compare with your rhythm, placement and sound

Hard
00:16:196 (3,4) - this spacing is weird , why don't keep like the others (mostly around 1.1x)

Insane
fine

let me know after whether choose to use or not

Andrea wrote:

Do you mind if I mod this as well before it gets bubbled?

Andrea wrote:

~Easy~

Reduce HP Drain, OD and AR by 1 tick at least, they're way too high for an Easy difficulty.

00:15:307 (1) - This circle is almost off-screen, move it up a bit.
00:31:461 (3) - This slider is almost off-screen, move it up a bit.
01:01:247 (3,4) - Do not use stacks on the easiest difficulty, they might confuse beginners.

~Normal~

00:13:307 (3) - Again, another slider almost off-screen, please move it up a bit.
00:52:247 (4) - ^ This one is off-screen, though.

~Hard~

HP Drain +1 would fit more this difficulty. I dont like high HP Drain , cuz I feel its severe.While I dont make a mistake, its not restored very much and it decrease immediately...so no change

00:15:307 (1) - Add a whistle at the begin to follow the music.
00:29:104 (5) - New combo due to the new stanza.
00:44:318 (7) - ^ Same with this one.
00:56:533 (3) - Add a finish on slider begin to emphasize the strong part of the song. no change , cuz to emphasize 00:56:104 (9)
01:22:247 (1) - I don't really like this slider, try to make a better shape perhaps?
01:28:033 (6) - New combo due to the jumpy pattern.

~Insane~

HP Drain +1 would fit more this difficulty. same as hard

00:04:196 (10) - Only this circle doesn't follow the spacing of the whole pattern, why would you do that? Please make it consistent. same as 00:08:196 (1) - , I think jump is more interesting here.
00:52:461 (7) - Really ugly slider, the end of it it's really bad shaped imo. hm...a little bit changed
00:54:390 (4) - ^ This one though at the begin and at the end.
01:03:390 (1) - This slider is almost off-screen, move it up a bit.
01:06:604 (8) - New combo due to the new stanza.
01:25:676 (1) - Remove the whistle and add a finish instead, it fits much more.
01:28:033 (3) - ^ Same for this one.

Pretty nice mapset, good job.

Frostmourne wrote:

Good luck~