This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Δευτέρα, 24 Αυγούστου 2015 at 7:04:31 μμ

Artist: 16th Labo
Title: Nobodyknows (TV Size)
Source: Holy Knight
Tags: Kelvinli
BPM: 160
Filesize: 3503kb
Play Time: 01:15
Difficulties Available:

1. Easy (1,45 stars, 87 notes)
2. Hard (3,02 stars, 183 notes)
3. Insane (3,7 stars, 212 notes)
4. Normal (2,05 stars, 123 notes)

Download: 16th Labo - Nobodyknows (TV Size)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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Let's give it another try >.<;

Easy - 100% (Special thanks to the awesome Kelvinli!!)
Normal - 100%
Hard - 100%
Insane - 100%
Story Board - 100% By Me
Special thanks to ojisannyu for the Lyrics
(ノಠ益ಠ)ノ彡┻━┻

Hi ! thank m4m here my mod

imo -> my opinion
Also when you read " ? " that mean just suggestion you can ignore if you not like but if without " ? " that really high suggestion pleasse use you mind is important fix or not but is for you decission

[General]



[Easy]

Song Setup:


Gameplay:


Hold ALT in keyboard would you see the Beat snap divisor change Distance spacing the 1.0x move to 0.8 and fix everthing everthing notes and sliders because this look very hard for this diff easy pls fix everthing spacings
and NC I would like you see improve

[Normal]

Song Setup:


http://puu.sh/22zt9

This just normal and not hard

Gameplay:


i would like see improve NC and add more hitsound

[Hard]

Song setup:


Gameplay


that simple ok! but i would like see NC improve some lot don't sense

[Insane]

Gameplay:


[]
The NC for all diff really need Improve i can see lot don't sense try NC with you feel you can and no put NC random
the easy and Insane need more work
i can't mod hitsound as this is lack, try you can add more hitsound
also the break really need mapping this song is short and still mappeable, I konw you are new mapper but need more work and more learn
Any question ? ask me in-game and i can explain better
Good luck ! and bye bye !

Hi, M4M

-General-
BPM should just be 160, .013 is not needed
It it said that in the wiki that you should not have a pure white combo color. I think the combo colors should be changed anyway (more colorful)

-Easy-
Too many sliders in a row at some parts, try switching it up
00:05:609 (3,4) - bad spacing here, they shouldn't be this close
00:50:606 (3,4) - same here
01:06:354 (7) - new combo here maybe

-Normal-
this diff is pretty good

-Hard-
need some new combos in here
00:03:360 (7) - here
00:06:359 (7) - here
00:10:671 (4,6) - try making these more symmetrical to eachother
00:15:546 (7) - new combo
00:22:108 (1) - BIG spacing fail

-Insane-
dont think i can mod this diff, too insane for me , but i like it, the sliders look cool.

Maybe this mod helps, good luck with your map

M4M here c:

[General]
-I would edit the MP3 and add some seconds (2 or 3) without sound, because I feel the music starts all of a sudden.
-Make sure to check spacing constantly!
-There are two combo colours that look almost the same, consider changing one.
-Not sure if I like the white and gray Kiai, but that's only my opinion. Maybe you should wait for more opinions on this one. However, instead of grey use black, grey and white look almost like the same, and its obligatory to be able to read new combos by their colour.

[Easy]
I feel this diff a little bit repetitive...
AR is way too high. I would suggest -3
HP Drain is a bit high, I would say... -2
00:07:109 (1,2) I strongly recommend you not to have any beats on 1/2 on a Easy diff. Everything should be kept 1/1.
00:10:109 NC.
00:13:109 NC.
00:37:857 (2,3) Same thing I said earlier, this would confuse newbie players.
01:06:354 NC.

[Normal]
I liked this diff, but it feels too hard for a normal.
-I would use less notes on 1/2 to make it more easy, its a bit too hard for a normal diff.
00:19:858 This one is slightly out of the grid.
00:21:921 (5,1,2,3) This part is too hard for a Normal diff, consider making it easier.
00:36:919 I would remove this, its kinda out of place in the Kiai since everything is white and gray.

[Hard]
Good diff! I liked this hard, looks solid.
I would reduce AR and HP Drain by 1.
00:14:796 NC.
00:23:608 NC.
00:36:919 Same as normal.

[Insane]
GOTTA GO FAST
-Whoa! 3,20 slider velocity! That's too much!
I just can't pass this diff, I am really sorry but I won't be able to mod it properly. However if you change the slider velocity you will have to remap it almost enterily.

That's all, good luck in your map!

Hey, m4m for your queue.

Red is to be fixed
Blue to be fixed in my opinion
Black is just suggestion

[General]

1. Are you sure you want to add a 10seconds break in a song that lasts only a minut? I think that considering the length it would be better with no break
2. Consider adding some tags
3. Combo colours 1 and 2 are too much alike so it's hard to see NC, Same for colours 3 and 4. I believe it's unrankable issue

[Easy]

1. Approach Rate -1 or -2
2. 00:04:859 (2,3,4) - spacing should be consistent in easy diff. You can't go from 1.0 to 0.5 like this. Stick to something
3. 00:04:859 (2,3,4) - ^
4. 00:50:606 (3,4) - ^
5. 00:07:109 (1,2) - stacking notes is not recommended in easy difficulty, it will confuse new players
6. 00:12:359 (4,5) - ^
7. 00:07:109 (1,2) - ^
8. 00:12:359 (4,5) - ^
9. 00:16:108 (1,2,3,4) - these sliders could be prettier.
10. 00:40:107 (4) - wrong spacing
11. 00:42:356 (1,2,3) - ^

[Normal]

1. Approach Rate -1
2. Circle Size -1
3. 00:12:921 (3,1,2,3,4,5) - Maybe a bit too hard for a normal
4. 00:21:921 (5,1,2,3) - ^
5. Overall I think this map is too hard to be labelled normal as it is, considering the bpm, you should probably remove some notes to make it easier
6. 01:01:105 (1,2,3) - rework the shape of this combo, 01:02:042 (2) looks really odd

[Hard]

1. Your combos or either too long or too short (a one-circle combo between two 11 or 12 circles combo? don't do that). I suggest a few changes here, but feel free to try other patterns, whatever feels right to you, but your combos are overall too long. And avoid one-note combo except for very specific reasons.
2. 00:03:360 (7) - NC
3. 00:04:297 (1) - remove NC
4. 00:05:422 (5) - NC
5. 00:14:796 (3) - NC
6. 00:37:107 (1) - remove NC
7. 00:39:169 (4,1) - homogenize the shape of this pattern
8. 01:15:166 (1) - ^

[Insane]

1. Same comment about the combos
2. This map looks better than the rest of the set imo, no comment! gj ^^

Hi~ m4m from your mod queue


General

1. You should put the name of the anime in the source
2. imo, don't use too many combo colours. for this song, 4 is enough. and i don't think brown blend with the bg

Easy

HP Drain Rate -1
Approach Rate -1

00:01:110 (1) - lower this slider a little bit
00:06:359 (4) - x:408 y:344 (because of distance snap) use 1,0x
00:07:109 (1) - remove nc
00:07:484 (2) - add nc
00:13:109 (5) - ^
00:16:108 (1) - remove nc

You put a break in this diff. Assuming this is a tv size map, it's a waste to add a break time in a mappable section

00:40:107 (4) - add nc
00:42:356 (1) - remove nc
00:45:356 (3) - x:56 y:320
00:50:606 (3,4) - not intuitive spacing
01:04:105 (4) - add nc
01:08:604 (5) - x:240 y:32
01:10:854 (6) - add nc
01:13:104 (2) - x:240 y:40


Normal

HP Drain Rate -1
Approach Rate -2

00:13:859 (3,4,5,6) - i think this is a little bit hard for normal diff
01:10:479 (7) - ctrl+j (so it will be easier to move to slider 01:11:417 (1) - )


Hard

Approach Rate -1
Overall Difficulty -1

00:09:921 (1) - remove nc
00:10:109 (9) - add nc
00:14:796 (1) - ^
00:52:481 (7) - remove nc


Insane

01:02:605 (5) - add nc
00:40:482 (2) - spacing error

i'm still not good with insane & hard diff, i'm sorry >.<


Anyway, here's my map for m4m https://osu.ppy.sh/s/77115 i hope you don't dislike the song

Hey there!

Thanks for your mods, I will check them within the day and also Mod your maps I'm at school currently so Kudos will be given when I use your mods!!

As for the mods above, some stuff I did them on purpose cause of the spacing ruining everything u.u; I'll see if it's a big trouble within next mods and if so, I will remap some parts if needed.

Thanks again

Hi.
M4M via.your queue
[General]
Insane has countdown, while others don't
Normal's first combo colour is different from others.
Add sources:Holy Knight
You could map something in the breaktime as well.The song is only 1 minute and the draining time is like, only 40 secs.
Try to add a clap on every upbeat.You can take reference to this
You could add more curve sliders instead of straights.It looks and plays better.Recently ranked maps are good samples.
[Insane]
Please be reminded the player needs a very high standard to have done this diff. well.Since the large spacing, the player has to make major movement.This causes the player to feel uncomfortable when playing, especially when this is a calm song with 160BPM.
It is not just about to change some nazis in this diff, but to make it more playable.Although it might be too striking, I suggest reselect a slider velocity to map again.The patterns can be kept,but please re-space and re-snap them after the SV change.~2.5 is the limit(not rules, but it goes well with 160BPM).~2 is good.
The another problem is overmapping.The mod below are mostly about improvements after remapping.

• HP-1 and OD-1 feels better
  Insane has less stars than Hard.This is possibly caused by too strict about the spacing in Insane, since everything is a jump.
  a bit too bland.Try to add a clap on every upbeat.
  00:03:734 (6,7,8) - could be stacked
  00:10:109 (3,4) - could be a better blanket
  00:11:422 (6,7) - ^
  00:12:827 (9,10,11,1) - uneven spacing
  00:25:108 (9) - finish
  00:38:419 (4,6) - a bit ugly overlapping
  00:43:856 (1,2) - ^
  00:46:481 (5,6,7) - could be stacked
  00:59:418 (5) - This curve could be more natural.You can utilize the approach circle of (4) to make a nice slider
  01:00:542 (6,7,8) - this jump is pretty large....
  01:05:979 (5,6) - could be parallel
  01:09:167 (8,9,1) - a bit ugly overlapping

[Hard]
Add some hitsounds~~
00:01:110 (1,2,3) - could be placed like the following so the player has a nice jump and flow.
00:21:171 (6,7,8,9) - could be a symmetrical pattern.Just a thought
00:24:827 (1) - add a finish in the end.
00:39:169 (4,1) - could be a better blanket.Recommend using Grid level 4 or simply disable grid snapping.
00:43:856 (2,3) - ^
00:56:230 (2,1) - confusing spacing.In before its a jump and after it its a jump.
01:09:167 (6,1) - could be a better blanket.You can ignore the spacing by a bit since it is a Hard
[Normal]
00:01:110 (1,2,3) - a little bit overriding.That is not so beautiful
00:15:359 (6,1) - This two sliders are not that pretty
00:51:356 (6,7,8) - extremely confusing.
00:58:105 (1,1) - This jump from the spinner centre to the bottom left corner is too hard for Normal.
01:01:105 (1,2) - a little bit overriding.That is not so beautiful
01:04:480 (1,2,3,4) - Why not make them symmetrical?
01:09:167 (6,7) - repeating arrow is hidden by (6).That's unrankable
01:14:229 (1) - finish?
[Easy]
I notice a lot of spacing error.Most easy players relys on spacing to play the map.An unevenly spaced easy could kill the player mentally.Check this by youself.You can notice that when you selected a note and look at the top right corner.
Grid level 4 is good for distance snapping.
00:01:110 (1,2) - uneven spacing
00:04:859 (2,3,4,5) - could be symmetrical
00:13:109 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1) - uneven spacing
00:16:108 (3) - why not try to make it symmetrical to (1)?
00:38:607 (3) - This slider sin't symmetrical to itself.Just look at the y-axis and the anchor point and the slider tick and you can easily notice that
00:40:107 (1) - ^+Jumping in Easy to soooooooooooo hard
Almost uneven spacing until the end.Please use distance snap.
00:56:605 (2) - This slider sin't symmetrical to itself.Just look at the y-axis and the anchor point and the slider tick and you can easily notice that
00:58:480 (1,1) - awful jump from spinner
01:06:354 (1,2) - could be parallel
01:10:854 (3,4) - ^

..I know it might be too harsh for you.But, however, beatmaps are made for playing.If the patterns are too unintuitive or unplayable, then the player couldn't enjoy it at all.Put more effort on it.I will check for improvements.

Good Luck!!

M4M...

[General]

1. What is the meaning of the SB? imo it's useless, delete it.

[Easy]

1. 00:16:108 (3) - fix spacing.. snap it.
2. 00:13:109 (1) - finish at the start of this slider..
3. 00:20:608 (5,6) - arrgh the claps arrgh, delete it change it to whistle if you want to..
4. 00:20:608 (5) - finish at the end of this slider
5. 00:22:858 (6) - finish at the repeater of this slider (the one with the arrow thingy..)
6. 00:37:107 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6) - those claps are wrong, the claps should be put on the 3rd beat... around here...
   
7. 00:37:107 - finish hitsound
8. 00:43:106 - ^
9. 00:49:106 - ^
10. 00:52:106 - ^
11. 00:53:605 (1,2) - spacing error... again.

You might want to silence that spinner or delete it..

[Normal]
In this diff, you don't put the hitsounds right, it feels weird imo.. try to put some claps in notes, remember to make sure it followed the music.

1. 00:43:294 (2) - delete
2. 00:50:981 (5,6,7) - don't stack these. it's confusing

That spinner, do it the same as the spinner in [Easy]

I consider [Hard] and [Insane] as an overmapped map, remap it, and don't put too much notes, especially if those not followed the music. Just because you want it to be difficult doesn't mean it have to be unplayable (that SV)


goodluck.

Easy

00:22:858 (6) Delete Clap and a clap here 00:23:608 and delete this clap 00:24:358
01:16:854 Add a Timing Point with the Volume on 5

Normal

00:02:235 add a clap
00:03:734 Add a clap
00:05:234 Add a clap
00:07:109 (1) Add a Finish and add here a clap 00:08:234
00:10:109 (1) Add Finish and here a clap 00:11:234
00:12:734 Add a clap
00:13:484 Add a clap
00:14:234 Add a clap
00:14:984 ^
00:17:983 ^
00:18:546 ^
00:19:108 Add Finish
00:20:233 (3) Add a clap here and a finisher here 00:20:421

Well, i hope you know where you need to put the Hitsounds \(>_^)/

Hard

Nice :3

Insane
Ok well, AR -1

00:13:671 (2) Bad overlap with 00:13:015 (11)
00:11:234 (5) Bad overlap with 00:10:015 (2)

Well Good luck^^

Updated!!
- Remapped Insane

1. Reduced Slider Velocity from 3.20 -> 2.20.
2. 98% of the notes are distance snapped(did cheat them a bit for some stacks).

- Put more hit sounds to all difficulties.
- Mapped the break.

Easy is made from Kelvinli now,a Guest Difficulty.

Thank you everyone for your Mods and Kelvinli for the GD !

Just a small thing, if your diff's are ready, move your mapset to pending so you can get more mods there :3

No kudosu!

Zexion_Vi wrote:

Just a small thing, if your diff's are ready, move your mapset to pending so you can get more mods there :3

No kudosu!

Okay, thank you! Will do

Hi! from your m4m queue.

Red : You must be fix.
Blue : You should be fix.
Black : Just suggestion.


[General]

1. BG size is little large. please use this .jpg file.
   
   SPOILER

   
2. Combo color (1) and (2) is similar. please change diffrent color.
3. Add Lead-In 1500 in all diff.
4. Please exclude a check of the countdown in all diff.

[Insane]

1. AR-1 BPM160 and AR9 is not match.
2. 00:19:671 (5) - remove clap of slider end.
3. 00:30:732 - volume is very low. Please 15%~20% up.

[Hard]

1. HP-1
2. 00:30:732 - same reason above in insane diff.

[Normal]

1. 00:06:734 (7) - add clap
2. 00:09:734 (5) - ^
3. 00:15:734 (7) - ^
4. 00:30:732 - same reason above in insane diff.

[Easy]

1. HP-1
   This diff is well done in comparison with other diff.

I did an error check mainly.
good luck~

Guy wrote:

Hi! from your m4m queue.

[Easy]

1. HP-1 fixed
   This diff is well done in comparison with other diff.

Thanks~:3

good luck~

thanks for mod~
http://puu.sh/24vqB

Thanks for the mods!

Updated!

Hi, m4m from your queue
[General]
Effect copy.png has 1024*768 resolution, but osu!wiki says:

Storyboard images must be at a reasonable size for their usage. For most uses (e.g. full-screen images), the maximum is 800x600 pixels, although 640x480 is highly preferred. The editor is 640x480 at default, so there's really no need to use anything larger for full-screen purposes.

00:37:107 - Effect copy.png placed higher on playfield than BG.png. Is it purposely?
[Easy]
00:19:108 (1,2) - they are too gripped. Spread the ends of sliders:
00:37:107 (1) - rotate by 3 degrees and move to 196;140?
01:01:105 (1,2,1) - they overlap a bir ugly, especially 01:02:605 (2,1) - how about like this:
[Normal]
00:17:608 (2,3,4) - spread them
00:20:796 (4,1) - fix spacing
00:22:858 (3,1) - ^
00:24:733 (1) - this is unexpected for Normal, more appropriate for Hard. Replace with slider without reverse
00:30:732 (1) - ^
00:42:919 (1) - delete and put circle here 00:43:110 - 1/4 slider, starts on red tick really breaks the rhythm
00:54:918 (3) - again
01:02:605 (3) - this slider confuses me.
01:05:979 (5,6) - too many reverses and again this 1/4 slider. Try this:
01:10:479 (7,1) - spacing
[Hard]
00:54:355 (3,4,5) - oh that overlap...
[Insane]
So fast!
00:37:110 - 1.3 Slider Velocity Multiplier - this is too much. I recommend reduce Slider Velocity to 2 at least
00:43:106 (1,1,2) - I think smooth sliders will be better follow the vocal
00:50:418 (5,7) - less copy-paste, please
00:53:418 (2,7) - ^
01:13:110 - since this moment you may use Soft hitsounds.

Good luck.

upd: I see, you changed timing. Resnap all notes.

Thanks for your mod, I did fixed some stuff.

The insane speed will stay as it is, it's not very fast to be unplayable and I didn't do any copy paste I skipped some of your suggestions since they are limited to Distance snap and they will stay there.

Resnapped all notes. Waiting for Kelvinli's Easy and I'll update.

Edit;
I don't see your map in my Queue .-.

TrigonometrY wrote:

Hi, m4m from your queue
[Easy]
00:19:108 (1,2) - they are too gripped. Spread the ends of sliders: fixed

SPOILER

00:37:107 (1) - rotate by 3 degrees and move to 196;140? fixed
01:01:105 (1,2,1) - they overlap a bir ugly, especially 01:02:605 (2,1) - how about like this: fixed

SPOILER

Good luck.

upd: I see, you changed timing. Resnap all notes.

changed as well

thanks

http://puu.sh/250B8

Edit:Kiyoshi please add "Holy Knight" to the source, or the game won't recognize my diffs(for some reason)

Updated!

Thanks for the note, Kelvinli

hi, come for mod
I think the original mp3 is a bit whispered, here is the mp3 which is more louder
http://www.sendspace.com/file/inf69f
just replace it

Easy
I think this diff is a bit hard, just like normal
00:01:110 (1,2,3) - here is my opinion that the rhythm of it is a bit fast, here is the suggestion to fix it
00:02:047 (2) - delete this slider, 00:01:110 (1) - change to reverse slider and press ctrl+g to this slider, 00:02:797 (3) - put it on 00:02:610 - and pull this slider to 00:03:735 - like this 00:13:672 (2) - delete this slider, 00:13:110 (1) - pull this slider to 00:13:672 - and you may add a note on 00:14:235 - like this 00:19:110 (1,2) - ^

Normal
AR+1 please
00:02:610 (2) - too far away, put it on x:128 y:192
00:05:610 (4,5,6,7) - oAo, suggest use two slider to replace this circle oAo(so jump in normal
00:13:110 (3) - NC
00:13:860 (4) - ctrl + g
00:53:047 (8) - like this?
Hard
CS+1 please
00:04:110 (1) - delete NC
seems nice

really nice map that i cant find so many problems
sorry for the poor mod and English
keep going for rank
Star;)

hsjkadgfk Thanks!!

Waiting for Kelvinli's Easy and I'll update!

Foreverends wrote:

hi, come for mod

Easy
I think this diff is a bit hard, just like normal
00:01:110 (1,2,3) - here is my opinion that the rhythm of it is a bit fast, here is the suggestion to fix it
00:02:047 (2) - delete this slider, 00:01:110 (1) - change to reverse slider and press ctrl+g to this slider, 00:02:797 (3) - put it on 00:02:610 - and pull this slider to 00:03:735 - like this

SPOILER

00:13:672 (2) - delete this slider, 00:13:110 (1) - pull this slider to 00:13:672 - and you may add a note on 00:14:235 - like this

SPOILER

00:19:110 (1,2) - ^

ok to all

thanks
http://puu.sh/25x90

Also delete all tags, they are already in the source as well as the metadatas

M4m. Sorry for my shitty english~

[Easy]
00:13:110 (1,2) - 1/2 is too hard for an easy. http://puu.sh/25xhm
00:19:110 (1,2) - ^
00:50:610 (3) - Ugly slider btw, delete the red point.
00:55:110 (1) - 2 reverse are confusing. http://puu.sh/25xj4
01:01:110 (1) - ^
01:04:110 (1) - ^
01:02:610 (2) - Make it symmetrical.

[Normal]
You've used too much spacing for a [Normal] diff. Use 0,80x and not 1,00x.
00:04:110 (3) - Stacked with 00:01:110 (1)
00:33:922 (1) - The spinner should starts on the big white tick
01:02:610 (3) - DAFUQ IS DAT SHIT. You should use just 3 points D:

[Hard]
Circle size+1
01:15:172 (1) - Delete new combo

[Insane]
Wat. Drain-1 Od-1 Cs+1 Ar+1.
There are too much shitty-nonsense sliders. Like 00:44:422 (2) . Fix them.
00:36:922 (1) - Delete new combo
00:39:172 (6) - Delete the first red point

Kiyro wrote:

[Easy]
00:13:110 (1,2) - 1/2 is too hard for an easy. http://puu.sh/25xhm
00:19:110 (1,2) - ^
00:50:610 (3) - Ugly slider btw, delete the red point.
00:55:110 (1) - 2 reverse are confusing. http://puu.sh/25xj4
01:01:110 (1) - ^
01:04:110 (1) - ^
01:02:610 (2) - Make it symmetrical.

ok to all

thanks

http://puu.sh/25xBQ
Also delete all tags, they are already in the source as well as the metadatas

Updated!

Hello

General

1. The title should be Nobodyknows, fix it, please
2. Your combo colours are... not suitable. Especially in Kiai part. It should be epic and bright, but your colours are gray D: Maybe change them? Or use same colours within whole map
3. Audio lead-in - 1 in all diffs
4. PreviewTime: 37110 in Easy as it is inconsistent with other diffs
5. Disable countdown in Insane
6. You have inconsistent combo colour code in all diffs, fix it

Easy

1. 00:01:110 (1) - finish due to it's beginning and sounds good
2. 00:01:110 (1,2) - this slider looks not nice with the second one D: Try this:
   
   SPOILER

   
3. 00:04:110 (1) - maybe finish too? In music there is one
4. 00:07:110 (1) - same here (and so on)
5. 00:25:110 (1) - would be better if you put finish here
6. 00:28:110 (3) - maybe new combo?
7. 00:59:235 - add a note here as it has the strong vocal
8. 01:05:610 (3) - fix this slider, osu update broke it D:
9. 00:37:110 - snap kiai to timing. It must be snapped
10. 01:01:108 - snap the kiai's ending

Normal

1. 00:04:110 (3,4,5,6,7,1) - Distance between them is wider than between 00:01:110 (1,2), though it have 1/1 between them. Fix it and make consistent
2. 00:05:610 (4) - put new combo here
3. 00:13:110 (1,2,3) - again, distance is low, you can fix it this way for example:
   
   SPOILER

   
4. 00:25:110 - add a note here
5. 00:25:110 - volume up please, I can't hear a note
6. 00:26:797 (1) - 4 reverses are too much. They are unexpected and read badly. Players may fail here, so split this reverse slider, please. For example:
   
   SPOILER

   
7. 00:30:735 (1,2,3,4,5) - too fast gradation in volume. In the end it's too loud
8. 00:37:110 (1) - remove nc, it's unecessary
9. 00:38:797 (6,7) - don't stack it, please. Before there are 1/2 notes that are stacked (00:38:235 (4,5) - ), so players may think that this is 1/2 too
10. 00:37:110 (1) - change clap to finish
11. 00:40:110 (1) - same here
12. 00:48:922 (1) - finish to the reverse
13. 00:50:610 (4) - move to 00:50:422? To make rhythm as you used before
14. 00:50:797 and 00:51:172 - add notes too?
15. 00:55:860 (5) - again, 4 reverses. Split it
16. 00:57:360 (7) - remove finish, sounds bad
17. 01:05:985 (5) - too many reverses!
18. 01:09:172 (6,7) - maybe arrange them this way (and also how to fix reverses on (7))
    
    SPOILER

    

Hard

1. Fix your comboes
2. 00:01:485 (2) - move clap here
3. 00:01:672 (3) - remove clap
4. 00:04:110 (5,1) - move them so that they won't touch each other?
5. 00:22:110 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - maybe use this rhythm:
   
   SPOILER

   
6. 00:24:828 (3) - finish in the end
7. 00:25:297 (4) - new combo here, due to new part
8. 00:25:110 ~ also, add some soft whistles to this part
9. 00:29:047 (5) - finish don't suit this note
10. 00:42:547 - add note here, please. it's better to play and sounds better too
11. 00:48:547 (7,8,9,1) - may seem as 1/1 because of sudden jump. maybe fix like here:
    
    SPOILER

    
12. 00:54:360 (3,4,5) - they look bad for me D: Try to arrange it better way or change slider stream to circle stream?
13. 00:55:860 (1,2,1,2) - they have same spacing, but between 00:56:235 (2,1) - 1/1. May seem that they are all 1/2, so I advise you to change spacing:
    
    SPOILER

    
14. 01:01:110 ~ this part has strange claps D: Maybe put it on every second beat?
15. 01:11:047 (5,6,7,8) - distance between them must be equal
16. 01:14:797 (4) - remove clap, sounds awful
17. 01:06:917 (18) - unsnapped
18. 01:07:011 (19) - ^

Insane

1. AR -1, as 9 is too high and doesn't fit this song D:
2. Also, your sliders are broken, so Timing -> Recalculate slider length
3. Resnap all notes
4. 00:01:110 (1) - remove clap
5. Why you have claps on every first beat? D:
6. 00:25:110 (1) - finish and add some whistles to this part
7. 00:46:110 (4) - maybe ctrl+g for better flow?
8. 01:00:547 (1,2,3) - ctrl+g in this way:
   
   SPOILER

   

Good map!

Hi, from the Queue!

General

You shouldnt use almost the same combo colour. Use a different one. General you could use more different colours

The SB BG is too big should be 640x480 and the codes are also wrong, use this to fix that:

Sprite,Background,Centre,"SB\Effect copy.png",320,240
 S,0,36732,,1
 F,0,36732,37107,0,1
 F,0,37107,61105,1
 F,0,61105,61855,1,0

Easy

00:28:110 (3) - NC
00:31:110 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - Pattern is too hard for Easy, you shouldnt place so many circles after each other. Make 1-2 sliders

Normal

00:13:110 (1,2,3) - Spacing should be normal
00:17:610 (2,3,4) - ^

Hard

00:57:172 (2,1) - First you had jumps and then this broken spacing, fix this

Insane

This diff is too overmapped, i would say reduce the Insane difficultie but you pretty much wont anyway

00:42:641 (4) - From now on, make the spacing so the streams are actually playable
00:52:860 (1) - Remove NC

GL

Updated!

Not changing the SB cause I like the way it is.
Changed the Combo 2 to Yellow to make the difference between the two combos, the Grey colors will stay only in the Kiai time. If there are suggestions for more color combos to the rest besides the Kiai, please feel free!

Kelvinli look the other diff combo and color changes and apply them to easy as well

When I get the Easy as well I'll change the title name as it should be - Nobodyknows

Thank you for your mods! <3

updated, all mods considered
http://puu.sh/26wkX
But the combo colours didn't change, so I guess I don't have to?I think I'd need some guidelines

kelvinli wrote:

updated, all mods considered
http://puu.sh/26wkX
But the combo colours didn't change, so I guess I don't have to?I think I'd need some guidelines

I will change the details as name, combo colors etc


Edit;
Updated!

Hi there! Here's the mod that I promised from my queue. Thanks for the M4M btw. ^^

[Storyboard]

1. 00:36:735 ~ 00:37:110 - The turning of the Background into black white looks cool but one thing I noticed is that the background kind of moved a few grids to the left on [Easy]. I don't if it's just me but I tried redownloading and the problem is still there. You might want to fix that because it'll be a total mess if people play this map.

[Easy]

1. 00:07:110 (1) - You better find a way to turn this slider into a beat blanket. It'll improve your map structures as well as it's flow. If you're not so sure about what a beat blanket looks like, try checking the image together with the description below:
   
   SPOILER

   
   As you can see, the curve slider (1) is trying to surround the previous slider which is (2) perfectly.. Right now, your current beat blanket surrounds the previous slider but it is not well placed. If you will check the distance around (2), you will notice that they are not all the same compared to the image that i showed above, the spacing remains consistent throughout the slider head.
2. 00:11:610 (2) - It would be better if this slider makes a mini blanket too with the slider on 00:13:485 (2), same thing that you did with 00:13:485 (2,1). Try following the map structure I did below:
   SPOILER

   
   Meanwhile, it's your choice whether you wanna change the slider on 00:10:110 (1) since I believe you made them identical to form a symmetry. But I already tried doing that and it doesn't look good. One thing I can suggest you for this one is to avoid having two identical sliders for this part. Try to look for a way to avoid this problem, but it's fine if you keep it that way, I'm pretty sure it's not that obvious to some players.
3. 00:15:360 (2) - This slider also has blanket issues with 00:13:485 (2). Can you at least try fixing them to improve the gameplay for this difficulty? I know I'm trying to act so picky about this one, but every suggestion is worth a fix so I hope you'll fix them. ^^
4. 00:21:360 (2,1,3,4,1) - I really don't like how this flow. Just like the rest of my suggestions, you should fix these sliders and circles. I'm not sure if you're trying to make blankets out of this objects but you should turn this one into perfect blanket, you not only improve the visuals of this difficulty, but also the flow of gameplay so it's best that you fix this objects.
5. 00:38:610 (3,4) - Another one of these blankets. Please fix them to improve your difficulty's flow in gameplay and visuals. ^^
6. 00:40:110 (1,2) - These sliders I believe doesn't make any sense at the music at all. It feels like you're just trying to fill up the rhythm with some random long sliders just for the sake of having a 'flow' of objects. What I can suggest here is you to not use [1 1/2] sliders and use [1/1] sliders instead, maybe add a note perhaps if you find it more fitting (which I do) XD
7. 00:50:610 (3) - I know I don't have the right to judge maps badly, but using a simple curve sliders with 3 anchors could've been better. These sliders don't make a great flow since it's not a perfectly curve slider. Feels like this slider came from the old school. lol. But I don't hate this one, you can keep it this way if you think it's not wrong. But I would really suggest you change it to a simple curve slider instead.
8. 00:59:610 (3) - Another one of your beat blanket problems. Can you try to find a way to fix them please?
9. 01:05:610 (3) - Almost perfect blanket. Try to fix this one a little bit more.

[Normal]

1. Bump your Overall Difficulty and HP Drain +1 to maintain a good diff spread with this difficulty.
2. 00:01:110 (1,2,3) - Why is the spacing used for these three sliders .8 (0.77 to be specific) when all of the other hit objects you used have x1.0 spacing? Fix this up please. Also, you might want to make some cute blankets too if you want ^^ But don't mind me, it feels like I've been modding blankets all this time. lol
3. 00:05:610 (1,2,3,4) - I feel like these circles were just placed randomly just for the sake of filling up empty timelines. D: Can you just make a square pattern with these circles? They don't look good, especially since two circles (00:05:985 (2,4)) are overlapping with each other. Please find a way to fix this one.
4. 00:11:610 (2) - This slider is totally off and is not making any sense with the music. I say you replace this one with [1/1] sliders instead. They will make much more sense if you'll try doing my suggestion.
5. 00:22:860 (3,1) - Please fix the spacing. Circle (1) is too near from the previous circle. This will make quite a confusion for Normal players because you remained consistent with the spacing and all throughout suddenly, you have this sudden change in spacing. D:
6. 00:26:610 (5) - I believe the new combo should be marked here instead of the circle in 00:26:797. Meanwhile, this part feels so hard for Normal players. I would suggest you to unstack this circle instead to make it a bit more readable for players. OR. Reduce a few circles in this part.
7. 00:30:735 (1) - Okay, you're overmapping. >.> This is a normal diff, don't put any gimmicks around here. Please change this one into a hit circle instead or a [1/1] slider.
8. 00:50:610 (4,5,6) - It would make much more sense if you'll move [1/2] beat backwards since there is a loud beat that occurred on this part and it's bad to just ignore it. I hope you'll follow this one so you could emphasize the big beat a lot more. By the way, you should add a finish on (4) if you followed my suggestion.
9. 00:52:110 - If you happen to follow my suggestion above, add a note here.

[Hard]

1. 00:04:110 (5,1) - Can you somehow try to look for a way to avoid this kind of overlap? I'm sorry if my strictness came over again XD But fixing this won't be a bad you know XD
2. 00:17:610 (1,2,3,4) - I hope you could notice what's wrong here. There's a spacing error here so better fix it for better flow of gameplay.
3. 00:22:110 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - Weird overlaps. They don't look good for my taste. Can you somehow try to avoid them? Try doing the thing that you did on 01:04:485 (1,2). If you'll look carefully, they don't overlap and thus, they look a lot more better XD
4. 00:25:672 (3,4,5) - These circles are better if they're unstacked. Why not follow the image instead? I know there's a lot more ideas other than that but they play good to me XD:
   
   SPOILER

   
5. 00:30:735 (1) - I'm not sure If still have to point this out, but you're overmapping. Yes, I stated that this one in Normal, but really, there's no need for a 1/4 reverse slider on this part. Why not just add a simple circle? It'll emphasize the map a bit more/
6. 00:44:422 (3) - This wave slider is poorly done in my honest opinion. Can you try to make a perfect curve? I'm not really good at making one too since I'm not a fan of wave sliders. But you could try visiting this page to learn more about making sliders: Making Delicious Sliders: A Guide.

[Insane]

1. You're HP Drain is so painful. Please change it to 6 instead. x.x
2. Can you do AR8? The circles appear fast in a wrong way. I believe using AR 8 would solve this problem.
3. 00:06:547 (3) - Please stop this overmapping. D: Replace this slider with a circle instead. This thing is not necessary.
4. 00:42:547 (4,5,6,7,8,1) - Please.. Just no. This is too much. You are demanding too much in terms of difficulty and challenge when in fact, the song doesn't calls for one. Please try to reduce the spacing for this one. This is too insane for this song.
5. 00:43:860 (1) - The little turns near the slider's head doesn't look good. Why not try doing the image I provided below?:
   
   SPOILER

   
6. 00:46:485 (5,6,7) - Too much x.x What about stacking these circles instead?
7. 00:59:422 (5) - This is the most not-so-creative sliders i've seen throughout the whole difficulty. Can you try replacing this with a more unique and creative slider? Please? XD
8. 01:09:922 (4) - I think you should replace this with a hit circle instead. Since I believe you need to emphasize the change in rhythm on 01:10:110. And by this, I am suggesting you to add a [1/2] slider on 01:10:110 to emphasize the change in rhythm.
9. 01:11:047 (1) - This slider feels random. Making a straight or a curve slider would best do this one in my opinion.

Philippines wrote:

Hi there! Here's the mod that I promised from my queue. Thanks for the M4M btw. ^^

[Storyboard]

1. 00:36:735 ~ 00:37:110 - The turning of the Background into black white looks cool but one thing I noticed is that the background kind of moved a few grids to the left on [Easy]. I don't if it's just me but I tried redownloading and the problem is still there. You might want to fix that because it'll be a total mess if people play this map.

I'll leave Kiyoshi to fix this.Although it seems that it is easy as fuck, I suck at storyboarding.

[Easy]

1. 00:07:110 (1) - You better find a way to turn this slider into a beat blanket. It'll improve your map structures as well as it's flow. If you're not so sure about what a beat blanket looks like, try checking the image together with the description below:
   
   SPOILER

   
   As you can see, the curve slider (1) is trying to surround the previous slider which is (2) perfectly.. Right now, your current beat blanket surrounds the previous slider but it is not well placed. If you will check the distance around (2), you will notice that they are not all the same compared to the image that i showed above, the spacing remains consistent throughout the slider head.
2. 00:11:610 (2) - It would be better if this slider makes a mini blanket too with the slider on 00:13:485 (2), same thing that you did with 00:13:485 (2,1). Try following the map structure I did below:
   SPOILER

   
   Meanwhile, it's your choice whether you wanna change the slider on 00:10:110 (1) since I believe you made them identical to form a symmetry. But I already tried doing that and it doesn't look good. One thing I can suggest you for this one is to avoid having two identical sliders for this part. Try to look for a way to avoid this problem, but it's fine if you keep it that way, I'm pretty sure it's not that obvious to some players.
3. 00:15:360 (2) - This slider also has blanket issues with 00:13:485 (2). Can you at least try fixing them to improve the gameplay for this difficulty? I know I'm trying to act so picky about this one, but every suggestion is worth a fix so I hope you'll fix them. ^^
4. 00:21:360 (2,1,3,4,1) - I really don't like how this flow. Just like the rest of my suggestions, you should fix these sliders and circles. I'm not sure if you're trying to make blankets out of this objects but you should turn this one into perfect blanket, you not only improve the visuals of this difficulty, but also the flow of gameplay so it's best that you fix this objects.
5. 00:38:610 (3,4) - Another one of these blankets. Please fix them to improve your difficulty's flow in gameplay and visuals. ^^
6. 00:40:110 (1,2) - These sliders I believe doesn't make any sense at the music at all. It feels like you're just trying to fill up the rhythm with some random long sliders just for the sake of having a 'flow' of objects. What I can suggest here is you to not use [1 1/2] sliders and use [1/1] sliders instead, maybe add a note perhaps if you find it more fitting (which I do) XD
7. 00:50:610 (3) - I know I don't have the right to judge maps badly, but using a simple curve sliders with 3 anchors could've been better. These sliders don't make a great flow since it's not a perfectly curve slider. Feels like this slider came from the old school. lol. But I don't hate this one, you can keep it this way if you think it's not wrong. But I would really suggest you change it to a simple curve slider instead.
8. 00:59:610 (3) - Another one of your beat blanket problems. Can you try to find a way to fix them please?
9. 01:05:610 (3) - Almost perfect blanket. Try to fix this one a little bit more.

Just a side note, if you can't seem to find a way to fix the blankets/spacing in your map, you could try turning off the grid snap. This way, you would be able to have a freedom to place the anchor points wherever you want. Good luck fixing all the errors. I'll be looking forward to getting this difficulty fixed XD

ok to all

Wow, a high-quality mod,I really appreciate it

http://puu.sh/289aL

by the way, the folder contains 2 osb. file.I believe one of them goes with my easy since its SB is different.Could you please seek a method to solve this?I am so sorry for this as I really, really suck at these thingy

Hey Philippines!

Thanks for this useful mod, really appreciated! However I do not wish to decrease the insane difficulty but to improve my personal mapping way
Even though I follow all your mods above! Thank you very much again!

@Kelvinli, I don't know what kind of magic is this but well, I found the error with the BG and I'll fix it. Once I update the map(in few minutes) just delete the old and redownload

Inb4 my Edit here~

Edit;
Updated, fixed the BG error.
@Kelvinli, Your Easy is now 3.05 Stars :/ It should be less than 3 stars to be a Rankable as far as I know :c

Edited something so it is 2.91 now.
http://puu.sh/28Ej0
thanks for the note!

Edit:change "Edit" to "Edited"

Remapped insane... Again D:<

I hope it's better now~

No kudos
[Insane]
00:12:360 (2) - move this to the y-axis
00:17:610 (1,2,3,4,1) - good work on flow
00:46:485 (3) - how about using a curved here?Since It does not look good with (4) on current
00:49:485 (2,3) - could be a beat blanket
01:04:485 (1,2,3,4,5) - nice flow
01:06:547 (1,1) - a beat blanket problem.

You made this more awesome than before!A really good one
Good Luck on the way~

Since I'm stalking you and I've seen you remap Insane, here's a recheck..

[Insane]

1. 00:06:828 (2,3) - lol this circles should start on 00:06:735 not on 00:06:828 XD.
2. 00:45:735 (1,2) - Can you avoid these sliders from overlapping? They don't look good. Meanwhile, the new combo should be on 00:46:110 (2) not on 00:45:73 (1) since the downbeat is on 00:46:110 and that's the part where the rhythm changes.
3. 00:58:110 (1,3) - Avoid the overlaps of these two sliders too. :3
4. 01:09:172 (4,5) - Can you make a beat blanket out of these sliders? It'll improve the flow of your gameplay if you'll do.

/me runs

Thanks for the remod both of you :**

Kevlinli doesn't want Kudo, not sure about Philippines though, if you want just send me a PM >.<;

[Updated]
Did my best with the beat blankets, the slider length didn't let me do much more :<

I'm drunk

Insane

00:04:297 (2,3) - These 2 look bad together. Either move 3 more to the left or adjust the curves.
00:06:828 (2,3) - These play REALLY awkward, especially because it just feels like you've been mapping on the vocals, but here you're mapping on the back.
00:08:235 (2,3,4) - Looks badly, especially 00:08:235 (2,3)
00:09:922 (1,2) - Looks badly
00:10:672 (4) - Approach circle should be perfectly lined up with (3)'s border
00:17:047 (5) - Not symmetrical with (1), atleast 1 grid up.
00:21:172 (2) - 1 grid up.
00:22:672 (2,2) - Not fitting the (1)'s, adjust curves.
00:29:047 (4) - 1 grid down
00:29:422 (1,2,3,4) - Should put a note on the white ticks.
00:40:110 (1,3) - Not symmetrical.

bla bla rest speaks for itself

Hard

00:01:485 (2,3) - Spacing
00:10:672 (2,3,4) - bad overlap
00:26:985 (1,2,3) - bad overlaps
00:29:610 (7,8) - bad overlaps
00:34:672 (4) - ugly slider
00:56:797 (1) - spacing
01:01:110 (1) - ugly slider
01:11:047 (5) - ugly slider

sorry I'm bored

Hello~

Thanks for your Mod

[Updated]
Fixed some. Not all of your mods satisfied me for lots of reasons

Hi!


Good Luck :3

Thank you very much !!

Hello! M4M...

Insane

Hard

Normal

Easy

I really hope this can be of use to you. Good Luck

ThoomyyxD wrote:

Hi!

[notice]I teach something called "Flow", The Flow is a concept that is added to the maps, which is to make every jump paresca normal movement of the Mouse ...
[Easy]
00:08:610 (2,3) Do not think it could be better with one single slider? I say not to rush ..
Upbeat sliders plays very awkard IMO
00:20:610 (1,2) ^
There is lyrics in that verse
Good Luck :3

Entreal wrote:

01:10:110 - I don't think you actually need this, since the other diff doesn't have that.
I think you mean the green line.I use them to emphasize the dimming part of the song.And I can use that since it is a guest diff.

thanks both of your mods

http://puu.sh/2crtb

Thanks for the Mod Much appreciated.

Updated.

hi
from Queue
m4m~

[General]

1. had two osb files. you must remove one.
2. lead-in should be set to 2000ms in all diffs imo.
3. Preview Time is not same as between diffs. you must adjust Easy

[Easy]

1. 00:07:110 (1) - what is this note follow? the slider is not follow instrument/vocal imo.
   00:07:110 (1,2) - should exchange these.
   
   00:07:110 (1) - circle
   00:07:485 (2) - 2/1 slider
   ^like this.
3. 01:10:860 (3,4) - these hitsound is hard to hear. this volume may confuse to the beginner.
   01:10:110 - 30%
   01:10:485 - 28%
   01:10:860 - 26%
   01:11:235 - 24%
   01:11:610 - 22%
   01:12:735 - 20%
   try this.
4. 01:14:985 - why did you put green line here? I think should place in 01:15:172 -

[Normal]

1. sorry, I could not mod this diff. I was not able to suggest those because could not understand many pattern.

[Hard]

1. AR+1
   this map had many continuous circles. so AR7 is low imo.
2. 00:04:672 (2,3) - exchange these notes. these did not follow vocal and instrument, so that would be better.
3. 00:05:422 (4,5,6) - remove (5,6) and add reverce (4). or remove only (5).
   vocal did not have large volume in 00:05:985, so not fit that.
4. 00:16:672 (2,3) - same as 00:04:672 (2,3)
5. 00:21:735 (5,1) - this jump is not follow song. instrument and vocal does not have large volume and not needs uplift here imo.
   
   
   ^ my suggestion
6. 00:22:860 (3,1) - same as above.
   
   
7. 00:30:735 (1) - this rhythm / volume setting is too bad.... not follow song. in addition not fit kick slider here.
   you should remove green lines and change 1/1 slider.
8. 00:56:235 (2,1) - this placement would confuse players. I suggest to add circle in 00:56:610 - .
   sorry, I could not find to other suggestions.

[Insane]

1. you forgot to uncheck countdown.
2. 00:02:797 (1,2,3) - suggest to add symmetry.
   
   
   like this.

that's all

gl

Updated.

Found some tragic errors and fixed them.
Kelvinli, don't forget to update to latest version before apply the latest Mod. I fixed some minor issues.

Updated and Remapped Normal!

Hello!
From popner's queue :3

[Easy]

1. 00:09:360 (4) Clap on sllider's end (if I follow your rythm)
2. 00:21:360 (2) You can fit this slider with (1) like this :
   Screen and code

   
   

   420,152,20610,38,0,P|400:184|344:208,1,100,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
   270,177,21360,2,0,P|264:224|292:272,1,100,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
   368,288,22110,6,0,P|304:348|212:296,1,200,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:

3. 00:26:610 (2) I think you can do this slider with only 3 points (looks like the previous algorithm). Remake it imo.
4. 00:37:860 (2) You can fit this slider with (1) if you move (2) one grid right (x: 144; y:204). Move (3) if you fix this point ^^
5. 00:43:110 (1,2,3) Yeah, I don't really like that because I have the feeling this is too repetitive. (4* the same pattern) I think you can try this instead of what you're doing : http://puu.sh/2fSSm. The singer is holding the note so you can do a slider instead of 2 circles and if you want to do a symetry, you can do exactly what I have done on the screenshot.
6. 00:54:735 (6,1) I think you can do a better curve than this. Try to put (6) => x:276 ; y:260 and (1) => x:292 ; y:180
   
   Screenshot

   

Everything else is good for me

[Normal]

1. 00:09:735 (4) Move to x:408 ; y:72
2. 00:22:110 (1) I think you can move the red point in this slider 1 grid right to be on the middle of the grid.
3. 00:23:610 (3) CTRL + J (1) for the general symetry.
4. 00:45:360 (5,1) I think this is better to replace these two circles by one slider. If you don't want to do this, please, do this : 00:45:735 (1,2) rever
5. 00:51:360 (4) clap on slider's end?
6. 00:55:860 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) There is too much clap here : for me, remove clap on (2) (3) and (7)'s start
7. 01:04:110 (5) CTRL + J (3) and reverse selection for the symetry.
8. 01:05:985 (1,2) Reverse clap (following your previous rythm)
9. 01:06:735 (3) clap here (^)
10. 01:07:485 (6) ^
11. 01:07:860 (7) remove clap at the beginning and put it at the end of this slider
12. 01:08:985 (1) clap (slider's end)
13. 01:09:360 (2) remove clap
14. 01:09:735 (3) clap

[Hard]

1. 00:18:360 (4) Move to x:216; y:24 (you can move (5) a little bit to the right)
2. 00:34:672 (4) I think you can rework a little this slider to fit more with (2,3)
3. 00:36:922 (3,1) reverse NC
4. 01:14:797 (4) Reverse is not needed for me on this slider. Remove the reverse but finish the slider at 01:14:985 -

Really enjoyable diff ^^ Well done

[Insane]

1. 00:10:016 (2) Move to x:224 ; y:252 => do a better curve here.
2. 01:00:547 (1,2,3) You don't put a lot of jump in this diff so this jump is wayyy to big here. Please reduce distance spacing between these circles. It could be unreadable if this the distance spacing is too big.
3. 01:14:891 (2,3,4) You can do a better curve (follow (1)'s direction)

I think you can put more jumps in this diff but not too big like 01:00:547 (1,2,3) -. You can still do some improvements in this diff imo

That's all for me!
Good luck for the next and if you have a question about my mod, PM me, I'll answer for sure

Thank you~!!

Updated

Waiting for Kelvinli to finish the Mod in Easy.

-sits-

Updated, ok to all
http://puu.sh/2gqnh

Updated~
Not updated. Issues with Submission system. >.<

i have to delay my mod one day, please do not be angry

Hi ,

Mod for popner's queue
Here is some suggestions:

[Easy]

1. 00:17:610 (3,4,1,2) - 4 and 2 are at the same heigh but not the end of 3 and 1. Moreover the blanket of 1 isn't really good but if you move 4,1 and 2 a little higher you'll fix both issues.
2. 01:02:610 (3) - It's nearly aligned with the previous and the following note. Maybe move it up a little (or if you don't want the alignement because i think it doesn't look good like this)
3. Very good diff. I hardly find anything.

[Normal]

1. 00:04:860 (2) - I think it suits fits better the music if you remove it.
2. 00:05:047 (3) - Move it one grid right in order to be aligned with 4 and 5 (and match with 6) or move it one grid left in order to smooth the shape of your 3 notes.
3. 00:05:422 (5) - It's a long combo for a normal. Maybe NC?
4. 00:23:610 (3) - Not really symmetrical. Fix this.
5. 00:29:985 (6) - I'm not sure the clap is really useful here. (And again it's a long combo. Maybe NC?)
6. 00:38:422 (3) - Again, it's not perfectly symmetrical (The end point should be a little lower and the red point on the axis)
7. 00:45:735 (1) - Move it one grid up in order to be at the same high than the previous note (and the slider).
8. 00:46:482 (3) - Move it one grid down in order to be at the same high than the previous note.
9. 00:46:860 (4) - Move it to x=128 and y=220 (because of 1 and 5)
10. 00:52:110 (1,2) - I know i repeat myself but they aren't at the same high. I know it's not a big deal but when it's just a difference of one grid it's.... I don't know how to describe it but it's bothering.

[Hard]
Overall Difficulty of 5? For a Hard? It's generous. Maybe +1?

1. 00:20:235 (3,4) - Move them one grid right in order to be aligned with the slider.
2. 00:30:735 (1) - Why this slider? It doesn't match with the song and bring no hotsound?
3. 00:44:422 (3) - The blanket isn't very good. Move it a little higher.
4. Correct diff. A little straight to my taste. I think it would work better with more curve but it's just my opinion.

[Insane]

1. 00:04:110 (1,2) - I find this jump a little too hard. Moreover the placement of the note 1 seems random.
2. 00:10:016 (2) - Move it to x=228 y=248.
3. 00:10:672 (4) - Move it to x=356 y=212. In this place it's tails is on the same place than 00:09:922 (1).
4. 00:23:235 (3,1) - Nearly at the same high (i think i might start upsetting you with that).
5. 00:32:235 (4,5) - Ctrl+g is maybe more pleasant to play than the square.
6. 00:46:860 (3) - The blanket is bad and the slider isn't symmetrical. Try this:
   
   
7. 01:04:485 (1,3,6) - I'll let you guess this one.

Well i really like the Easy and Insane Diff. Good luck getting it ranked .

angelfix wrote:

:( i have to delay my mod one day, please do not be angry

It's fine, don't hurry

I'll check the mod up there later on~ I'm not home atm~

Thank you!