Modding via PM request from AlpacaCokelat
General
1. You should change your background into 1024x768
2. Your easy diff has breaks time, while others don't. Since the song is TV size, i suggest you not to use any break time in easy diff and map those break times
3. I know nothing about skinning, but your comboburst seems a bit bigger than the template version. You should ask a BAT about your skin's rankability
[Easy]
Short multiple reverse slider like these shouldn't be used in easiest diff, since it can confuse beginners 00:00:458 (1,1) - 00:22:368 (1) - 00:25:064 (4) - 00:27:424 (1) - 00:35:177 (3) - 00:54:390 (1) - 01:05:177 (7) - 01:14:615 (4) -
And i suggest not to stack in easiest diff 00:02:480 (2,3,1) - 00:24:727 (3,4) - 00:21:019 (3,4) -
In easiest diff, you should use constant distance snap in every pattern
kiai starts here 01:13:266 - seems better than 01:13:604 -
00:19:334 (4,1,2,3) - distance snap error. Should be 1.0x like the previous pattern
00:23:716 (2) - a bit nazi, lower it a little bit
00:24:727 (3) - 00:30:120 (4) - nc (big white tick)
00:57:761 (6) - distance snap error. should be 1.0x, not 0.6x
01:05:177 (7) - nc (big white tick)
01:09:222 (5) - ^
01:11:581 (1) - suggestion : spinner starts 01:11:918 - end 01:13:266 - and then add a circle here 01:11:581 - , it fits more
01:13:604 (1) - this starts too suddenly after a spinner, since this is the easiest diff, you should make it friendly for beginners. delete this circle
Normal
AR-1 , HP/OD +1
SV is too fast, lower it a bit, 1,10
00:08:547 (6) - nc
00:09:896 (8,9,10,11) - kinda dislike this pattern, this should be applied to insane diff, not normal
00:13:941 (6) - nc
00:11:918 (2) - flow isn't really good, my suggestion http://puu.sh/39oXO.jpg
if you follow above, adjust 00:12:592 (3) - with distance snap then you can make 00:12:592 (3,4) - blanket http://puu.sh/39oZv.jpg
00:15:458 (9,10,11) - same as the above, this pattern is more suitable in insane diff, i think
00:15:458 (9) - distance snap error, should be 0.7x
00:32:480 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - not really intuitive, because it breaks distance snap. i suggest you to place 00:33:828 (1,2,3) - somewhere else
00:39:222 (2,3,4) - distance snap should be 0.7x
00:41:076 (6) - nc
00:42:929 (1) - remove nc
00:43:604 (3) - nc
00:47:649 (6,7,8,9,10) - too difficult for normal, i think
00:50:345 (6) - nc
01:01:806 (8) - rhythm isn't suitable with the song, i think
01:08:210 (5) - nc
01:14:615 (5) - ^
AlpHard
well,i'm in a good mood
00:07:199 (3) - you can make it more beautiful
00:35:514 (1) - add whistle
00:36:862 (1) - whistle at slider's beginning
00:36:525 (4) - x:396|y:148
01:05:851 (3) - lower it down a bit for symmetry
Insane
circle too small -.-
00:10:991 - 00:11:075 - 00:11:160 - add circle for better rhythm flow
00:11:918 (3) - slider's tail should stack properly with 00:11:581 (2) - slider's tail
00:16:637 (11) - nc
00:17:143 (1) - remove nc
00:19:334 (7) - nc (big white tick)
00:19:671 (1) - remove nc
00:36:862 (6) - nc because sudden slower slider velocity
00:57:592 - add circle for better rhythm flow
01:07:199 (7) - nc because sudden slower slider velocity
01:08:210 (1) - remove nc
01:10:570 (4) - nc
01:22:283 (4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13) - i suggest to continue this streams until 01:23:295 -
ask more mods
good luck~
General
1. You should change your background into 1024x768
Ranking Criteria
Background images must be at a maximum of 1024x768 pixels for 4:3, 1366x768 pixels for 16:9. Although 1366x768 (16:9) is recommended, most background ratios that are 4:3 or 16:9 should also work reasonably well
2. Your easy diff has breaks time, while others don't. Since the song is TV size, i suggest you not to use any break time in easy diff and map those break times
3. I know nothing about skinning, but your comboburst seems a bit bigger than the template version. You should ask a BAT about your skin's rankability
Ranking Criteria
Do not make any essential gameplay elements larger than template skin dimensions (especially for combobursts). Larger elements may effect gameplay performance, and thus should be avoided
[Easy]
Short multiple reverse slider like these shouldn't be used in easiest diff, since it can confuse beginners 00:00:458 (1,1) - 00:22:368 (1) - 00:25:064 (4) - 00:27:424 (1) - 00:35:177 (3) - 00:54:390 (1) - 01:05:177 (7) - 01:14:615 (4) -
And i suggest not to stack in easiest diff 00:02:480 (2,3,1) - 00:24:727 (3,4) - 00:21:019 (3,4) -
In easiest diff, you should use constant distance snap in every pattern
kiai starts here 01:13:266 - seems better than 01:13:604 -
00:19:334 (4,1,2,3) - distance snap error. Should be 1.0x like the previous pattern
00:23:716 (2) - a bit nazi, lower it a little bit
00:24:727 (3) - 00:30:120 (4) - nc (big white tick)
00:57:761 (6) - distance snap error. should be 1.0x, not 0.6x
01:05:177 (7) - nc (big white tick)
01:09:222 (5) - ^
01:11:581 (1) - suggestion : spinner starts 01:11:918 - end 01:13:266 - and then add a circle here 01:11:581 - , it fits more
01:13:604 (1) - this starts too suddenly after a spinner, since this is the easiest diff, you should make it friendly for beginners. delete this circle
Normal
AR-1 , HP/OD +1
SV is too fast, lower it a bit, 1,10
00:08:547 (6) - nc
00:09:896 (8,9,10,11) - kinda dislike this pattern, this should be applied to insane diff, not normal
00:13:941 (6) - nc
00:11:918 (2) - flow isn't really good, my suggestion http://puu.sh/39oXO.jpg
if you follow above, adjust 00:12:592 (3) - with distance snap then you can make 00:12:592 (3,4) - blanket http://puu.sh/39oZv.jpg
00:15:458 (9,10,11) - same as the above, this pattern is more suitable in insane diff, i think
00:15:458 (9) - distance snap error, should be 0.7x
00:32:480 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - not really intuitive, because it breaks distance snap. i suggest you to place 00:33:828 (1,2,3) - somewhere else
00:39:222 (2,3,4) - distance snap should be 0.7x
00:41:076 (6) - nc
00:42:929 (1) - remove nc
00:43:604 (3) - nc
00:47:649 (6,7,8,9,10) - too difficult for normal, i think
00:50:345 (6) - nc
01:01:806 (8) - rhythm isn't suitable with the song, i think
01:08:210 (5) - nc
01:14:615 (5) - ^
AlpHard
well,i'm in a good mood
00:07:199 (3) - you can make it more beautiful
00:35:514 (1) - add whistle
00:36:862 (1) - whistle at slider's beginning
00:36:525 (4) - x:396|y:148
01:05:851 (3) - lower it down a bit for symmetry
Insane
circle too small -.-
00:10:991 - 00:11:075 - 00:11:160 - add circle for better rhythm flow
00:11:918 (3) - slider's tail should stack properly with 00:11:581 (2) - slider's tail
00:16:637 (11) - nc
00:17:143 (1) - remove nc
00:19:334 (7) - nc (big white tick)
00:19:671 (1) - remove nc
00:36:862 (6) - nc because sudden slower slider velocity
00:57:592 - add circle for better rhythm flow
01:07:199 (7) - nc because sudden slower slider velocity
01:08:210 (1) - remove nc
01:10:570 (4) - nc
01:22:283 (4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13) - i suggest to continue this streams until 01:23:295 -
ask more mods
good luck~