Verlaren wrote:

Hi~ from Aincrad's modding queue~

General:
Use grid level 3 YUS
You haven't a storyboard. Deselect letterbox during breaks in song setup menu (Song setup --> Storyboarding --> Misc. Toggles)
Oh what the heck! I didn't notice, fix.

Easy:
AR +1 Ok
00:08:510(5) - move to x:184 y:328 Ok
00:11:989(5) - move to x:272 y:88 Nah, it looks strange to me, also due to distance snapping.
00:33:293(4) - move to x:88 y:88 Ok
01:01:119(1) - remove one reverse arrow No need, I'm keeping in flow of the vocals.
01:02:532(1) - unsnapped spinner. Move to 01:02:432 and extend him to 01:03:728 Really? It's unsnapped? Alright, i fixed it.


Normal:
DR +2 These 3 fixed.
AR +1
OD +1
00:03:728(1) - remove new combo I think i'm going to keep this since it introduces a new instrument thing.
00:08:292(5) - unsnapped slider(end). Extend him to 00:08:728 Hmm i believe its fixed, but i once extended it to that, but it just sounds to weird.
00:59:380(1) - remove new combo Ok
01:18:510(1) - All your diffs should end in 01:21:989. So delete pattern in 01:18:510(1) and place there spinner with duration of up to 01:21:989 I kind of wanted it to end when it finishes.
01:18:510(1) - add inherit pint(green line): Sampleset - soft: costum 1, volume: 5% ^


Hard:
00:19:163(5) - place on x:176 y:128 Ok.
00:19:380(6) - place on x:232 y:120 ^
00:33:293(6) - remove this pattern ?
00:43:076(1) - remove new combo Ok
00:48:836(1) - move spinner to one tick forward and reduce to one tick Ok
01:02:206(1) - remove new combo Ok
01:02:749(1) - move spinner to one tick forward and reduce to one tick ^
01:15:032(6) - remove this pattern and place a at this place next pattern; and extend this spinner to one tick Um, I'm going to leave this for the finish.
01:18:510(1) - All your diffs should end in 01:21:989. So delete pattern in 01:18:510(1) and place there spinner with duration of up to 01:21:989
01:18:510(1) - add inherit pint(green line): Sampleset - soft: costum 1, volume: 5% Already stated this in normal.


Sakurasou:
00:22:423(10) - new combo K.
00:33:510(1) - maybe delete this new combo? Removed.
00:33:728(1) - ^ No.
01:10:902(6,7) - place on x:256 y:192 Moved it to y:184.
01:18:510(1) - All your diffs should end in 01:21:989. So delete pattern in 01:18:510(1) and place there spinner with duration of up to 01:21:989
01:18:510(1) - add inherit pint(green line): Sampleset - soft: costum 1, volume: 5% Already Stated.


Tari's Kichigai:
DR +1 Fixed except CS.
CS -1
AR +1

Council to make changes to all of the above. So your map will be easier to read and will take another step on the way to the rank. Thanks very much for the mod.

moonlightleaf wrote:

My friend ~ this is just my opinion , hope can help you~

Look the General first

General

adjusting the note's distance according to "distance-snap" [/color]

keep all the kika the same (length) I might ask you in-game about this since i don't know what kika is...

Easy

00:19:380(1) maybe not new note This is the beginning for the piano thing

00:44:163(1) move to 00:43:728 Ok

00:45:032(2)(3)(4)(5) do this http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/650640 I think i did that

00:55:032(3) end at 00:56:554 I don't think i'm following the vocals with this part

00:57:206(4) delete ^

00:58:076(1)(2)(3)(4) http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/650652 I think ima keep this

Normal

00:47:641(5) move to 00:47:858 end at Not following vocals

00:51:119(1) move to 00:51:336 ^

00:52:437(2) move to 00:52:641 end at 00:53:076 ^

00:53:510 add note Ok

Hard

00:06:119(2) move to 00:06:336 and reduce a return Fixed

00:09:597(6) move to 00:09:815 and reduce a return ^

00:15:899(1) and 00:16:554(2)(3)(4)(5) exchange Fixed, not sure if it looks good tho

00:22:423(5) delete all return No need, it keeps the beat i believe

00:23:076(1)(2)(3)(4)(5)(6) http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/650673 No need

00:24:163 add note ^ following

00:24:815(2) add a return , 00:25:249(3)delete ,00:25:684(1)(2)(3) move to
front white line I like the idea, but i have no way in adjusting it, besides i think mines fine too

00:27:641(4) delete,00:28:076(1) add a return and move to 00:27:858 ^

00:36:554(1)(2)(3)(4)(5)(6)(7)(8)http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/650684 This is to keep the difficulty, i think its too easy if i do repeats

00:40:032(1)(2)(3)(4) http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/650686 ^

00:45:032(5) delete Leaving this to keep the beat

00:45:467(1)(2)(3)(4)(5)(6) all move to front red line ^

00:48:523(4) delete Following the drums in this part

00:54:163(3)(4)(5) change to slider(3) http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/650695 ^

00:56:554(6) delete , move 00:56:771(7) to here and add a return Ok

01:00:032(3) add a return , delete 01:00:467(4) Keeping the flow

01:08:076(3)(4)(5) do this http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/650704 Ok

BrujoAzul wrote:

From my queue o3o

General

Remove 1/2 sec for music track No idea how to do that but I'll see what i can do

Easy

00:04:597 - I don't like how that slider overlaps another D: Fixed.
00:19:815 - Make that Symetric No need
00:33:728 - Same ^ ^
00:35:249 (2) - Move the start in the same gride where the previous slider ends ^
00:42:423 - Add note? ^
00:51:771 (3,4) - Those sliders aren't the same that 00:50:033 (1,2) Really? It does to me, i even copied it from the same thing
00:56:771 - Add slider? Ok
00:57:641 - Add note? No need
01:11:554 - Simetric It's symmetric in a twisted like kind of look.
Why sometimes you have 5 notes combo and sometimes only 2? Make the combos of 4~5 notes each oneFixed some

Normal

00:03:729 (1) - Make that slider end in 00:04:163 - And add two notes between it and the next slider I believe i'm following that funky sound thing
00:08:293 (5) - Make that slider Straigth Due to overlapping, can't
00:11:772 (5) - Same here Same reason ^
00:34:597 (2) - That slider isn't following the distance snap I'm kind of cheating the distance snap to make a blanket, leaving it.
00:43:510 - Add note? No need.
01:06:337 (4) - Make that slider end in 01:06:771 - I did this to follow vocals, leaving it
01:17:642 (2,3,1) - Don't put that notes under the slider Fixed.
01:18:510 - Transform that note in a slider Leaving it

Sakurasou

00:36:120 (2,3) - Put those notes further for the 1st note This is to be consistent with the other 3 notes.
00:43:076 (7) - Same here Ok
01:18:510 - Spinner?No need.

Uh... I don't find anything else, good luck getting this ranked! o3o

Moway wrote:

Hello, M4M from my queue.

[Easy]
00:04:598 (4,2) - Get rid of this overlap, makes the second slider quite hard to read. Fixed already.
00:08:076 (4,5) - Unstack these, try to avoid stacking on your easiest difficulty as this can be confusing for new players. ^
00:35:249 (2) - add a clap on the end of this slider No need, i only use clap when the music has a beat (ex: 00:32:858)
00:36:772 (1) - add a finish or a whistle, I think i like the finish better, but this needs some type of beatsound I think. Oh what the heck, why isn't this a whistle?! Fixed.
00:40:250 (1) - I like this slider with a finish on the head No need for a finish.
00:41:989 (2,3) - This rhythm can be a bit too hard for new players. I think a rhythm like this could work well and also keep your polarity nice.
Ok.
00:43:728 - Add a circle here, there is a quite strong beat here so it would fit nicely. Already fixed.
00:47:858 (1) - This spinner both begins too early and also ends too closely to the next circles. Consider replacing this with a long slider that starts at 00:48:076 and ends at 00:49:380. I'm going to leave this
00:50:033 (1,2,3,4) - Not sure how i feel about all of these 1/2 sliders in your easy diff. Maybe replace with 1/1 sliders or something, but consider remapping this part in some way. ^
00:53:511 (1) - If you choose to keep the previous sliders the same, then this part needs to be changed. Having the one repeat 1/2 sliders then suddenly a two repeat one will be something that new players won't be ready for. Fixed.
00:56:771 - Add a circle Already fixed.
00:57:641 - ^, especially for this one since the beat is strong. Fixed.
01:02:532 (1) - I don't like this spinner because it begins on a blue line and is too short and too close to other objects. Delete this and map the section to follow the drum beat. Remember that drum rhythm is usually more simple than the vocal rhythm, so for your easier difficulties it is better to stick with the drum beats. I feel as if this part fits with a spinner, I'll leave it.
01:07:206 - add a circle here, delete 01:07:423 (3) and instead replace with a 1/1 slider at 01:07:641. This will make the rhythm follow the drum beat better, remove that two repeat slider and also fix your polarity. Ok.
01:08:945 - add a circle here. Ok
01:11:554 (1) - I think it would be nice to make this slider symmetrical across the y-axis. Also all of this overlapping is a bit ugly. Here is the solution I came up with, so maybe try something like this. I'll try that


[Normal]
00:03:294 (3,1) - Form a blanket with these Fixed
00:03:729 (1) - remove NC to be consistent with the rest Ok
00:11:772 (5) - This needs to be adjusted, as the repeat is obscured quite greatly. As of now, I'll leave it since i can't think of anything nice to replace it.
00:21:989 (4,5,6) - maybe just replace this with a repeating 1/2 slider instead, that arrangement of circles is kind of odd. These circles are for the beat, if i put a slider i won't be able to create it.
00:29:816 (5) - NC Ok as well as v
00:30:250 (1) - remove NC
00:43:729 (1) - not a fan of this repeating slider, Maybe replace with two 1/2 sliders, one of them repeating once. Ok
00:53:510 (3,2) - very nazi, but maybe dont' have these overlap Can't think of anything here, due to distance snapping on lower diffs.
01:04:381 (1) - make this symmetrical across the y axis Strange, i believe i did.

01:08:511 (6) - NC Okay as well as v
01:08:946 (1) - remove NC

[Hard]
00:06:336 (2) - why's this one a repeating 1/2 :3. Either make it a 1/1 like the others

OR

00:02:859 (2) - replace this with a repeating 1/2 K

00:13:511 (4) - just make this a straight line, looks weird being this little curved nublet Lol, nublet... Fixed
00:25:685 (1,2,3) - stack these on 00:24:163 (6), the spacing here is really large so this will help K
00:27:642 (4,1) - fix this overlap I find this deliberate.
00:34:816 (6) - make this slider symmetrical across the y axis so that this whole pattern will look nice. K.
00:36:337 (4,1) - random jump, fix this I'd say it isn't but, tiny fix.
00:38:294 (5) - NC K
00:40:903 (3) - ctrl +g this I'd go for a ->, <-, <-, -> pattern, same with v
00:41:337 (4) - and this, makes for much better mouse flow, but you'll have to adjust the following pattern
00:41:772 (1) - split this into two 1/2 sliders. plays better, feels better. I agree.
00:43:294 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2) - decrease the slope of all of these so they can form proper blankets with each other. Fixed?
00:48:510 (4) - maybe NC here Nah
00:48:945 (1) - end spinner 00:50:249 Leaving it.
00:50:467 - add circle here. I think it is much better to have a hit here than just ending a spinner. It is fine on your easier diffs because the quick note after spinner doesn't work for those, but here it fits much better. Ok
00:53:729 (1,2,3,4,5) - arrange the previous objects so that these can be centered on the y axis I'll just leave em alone.
00:56:554 (6) - argh bleh!
00:57:424 (1,2,3,4) - center these on the yaxis, I don't know why you ahve that big jump between 00:56:554 (6,1) - anyway K
01:06:989 (8,3) - fix this overlap When you play it, it doesn't really show the overlap so I'm leaving it.

So I was modding this diff and I was like

"Hmm, something is weird."

And something is weird! Why is the section beginning at 00:36:554 - 1.5x slider velocity while the rest is 1.0x? 1.5x slider velocity makes the overall slider speed 1.50, which is good for a hard diff. That leads me to question why the rest is mapped with 1.00 slider velocity. That feels way too slow for your hard difficulty. I realize I'm basically asking for you to do a remap/readjustment of most of this difficulty, so if you don't want to then you can just look at my modding and take what you will from that. However, I think this difficulty would be much better if the slider velocity was 1.5 for the whole thing.
You know, after like a few days after getting mods from people I kind of realized to myself and said, "hey, why the heck is Hard and Sakurasou so slow if they're in difficult difficulties, it doesn't make sense. Sadly it was too late for me too fix these changes knowing that these mods have been put into place and i was like CRAP. I then thought to myself an excuse and simply said fun, not frustration. I agree with you fully, but me realizing this so late in the ball game makes me cringed to think i might have to remap everything, and I simply die inside. If i only realized it sooner though, I would've remapped it. All i can say is fun, not difficulty. If they want difficulty, they can do Doubletime Hard or something like that haha. Though I'm making a different map as we speak, so maybe I'll make the sv faster in that one, should tell me so i can remember xD


[Sakurasou]

Not going to do a full mod of this difficulty, I just have to say that is really weird that the non kiai parts are mapped with tiny babby sliders. This is supposed to be the hardest difficulty of the mapset, which makes it weird that a large part of the song is mapped with 1.20 sliders. The kiai is mapped at 1.80, which is far more reasonable. Should read the last page of hard, I make a speech there


That's all for me here. Good luck!

Quiz-chan wrote:

Hi~ from my queue

[General]
Seems fine.

[Easy]
00:28:076 (3,1) - Please adjust both sliders' shape so they are better blankets. Fixed.

SPOILER

That's it! Nice!

[Normal]
00:08:293 (5) - This slider is a flow breaker. It would have a better flow if... I wish i could change to that, but then i'll probably have to move everything since i tested it.

SPOILER

BUT... that would ruin spacing so if you change that, be sure to fix spacing too.
00:21:989 (4,5,6) - This looks messy: the notes just look like being stuck together., like thrown one onto another. I agree, but i have no idea how to fix this due to distance.
00:45:468 (3,4,5) - This would also flow better when... Fixed.

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[Hard]
00:36:337 (4,1) - Spacing issue, doesn't look appealing. Fixed.

This is it?

[Sakurasou]
Just some little things, but still pretty solid!

[Tari's Kichigai]
Perfect!

Good luck!!

Thanks for teh modz!

Tari wrote:

Remove your name "Entreal" and TV Size from tags please....

Tari wrote:

Reminder : Don't add tags that are already in either the artist, source or , song name

selova wrote:

hi, from lova que~ mod~~ WAI HELLOW THARE. Haha.
follow what you want...

easy
well spinner at 01:02 a little bit short but still catchable for newbie.. I don't like having sliders right near sliders in easy by the tick marks, leaving it.
already nice...

normal
did you really do random DS here... better to have a consistent DS in normal

00:03:293 (3) - make this 1.20 DS and also move (4) Ahh little mistake i made there, thanks.
00:08:293 (5) - better to follow Quiz-chan Same reply.
00:09:597 (2) - your DS too high I believe fixed.
00:10:684 (4,5) - meybe this could help Nice idea, using it.

SPOILER

hard

01:03:945 - end spinner at red tick, like you do from previous spinner No need.

sakurasou

00:28:510 (2) - move higher to have a good flow you can move to y:36 on grid Sure.

tari's

00:22:423 (2) - move 2 grid up Ok.

well, hard diff kinda weird with the jumps and DS n SV... be sure to adjust some spacing...
good luck... I tend to ignore distance spacing when it comes to Hard and Insane if thats what your implying.

captin1 wrote:

heey, from queue WAI HELLO THAR.

mostly nazi suggestions

General

00:12:423 (1) - from this point on I would decrease hitsound volume just a touch, the snare hits stick out a bit much and the music is much softer Hmm i would like to, but where do i end that? During the chorus? I'll fix once you respond to this.

Easy
00:18:510 (4,1) - x:252 y:156, slightly better blanket imo then adjust (1) for spacing Oh, thanks! I thought i fixed this.
00:26:010 (2,3,1) - spacing Fixed as well as below.
01:08:945 (2,1,2) - spacing
01:13:728 (1,2) - spacing

Normal

Can't think of anything, nice diff! Thank yah. Haha

Hard

01:10:684 (7,1) - I would increase the space between these, so it reflects the pause a bit better Moved a bit.

Sakurasou

00:01:119 (3) - curve this slider to the right so it leads into the stream a bit better K.
01:04:163 (2) - remove this note for effect Okie.

Tari's Kichigai

00:01:989 (1) - any reason this isn't in the same line as the notes before it? I think moving it over a bit would work Okay.
00:42:858 (7) - remove this note for effect Ok.

very solid maps! good luck!

Thanks guys! Note: Tari allowed me to mod her stooof.

captin1 wrote:

Yeah the volume in the chorus is fine, so the decrease until then would work well

popner wrote:

From my queue.

Let's see what I can help you.

Hmm..seems that it is your first map. The guest diff is good, and I give a normal mod for it. The diffs made by your self need some more works, a mod can help little in improving it so I will give you general suggestions.

Look at the composition, ctrl+a and you will see this:

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That means, your pattern are cruising around the screen center and no notes are put on the side. This causes some problem. First, you have no enough space to arrange your notes and sliders, thus they need to overlap on each other, and the composition looks not neat and clear; Second, when others play your map, they will have a terrible feeling that the moving is bound up. So the suggestion is, to re-arrange the patterns to make a better composition. The guest diff has done a good job on this, so you can learn from it.

Same suggestion applied to all your own diffs.






And this is mod for guest diff. Fixed the Ctrl+A thingy you suggested, but i probably need mods again haha...

[Tari's Kichigai]
00:20:902 (3,6) - make blanket between them? like:

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00:46:989 (5) - I know you want to follow the piano at 00:47:206 (6), but, the vocal is not ended here. I think you can add a reverse to this slider, so both the piano and vocal are considered.
00:46:989 (5,1) - make the two sliders parallel? Now from what I see, they are dragged randomly and looks not neat.
01:03:945 (1,2,3) - spacing issue
01:04:380 (3,4,5) - maybe a pattern like this can be better? Look:

SPOILER

The diff is good.

blackabyss wrote:

hi~ from popner's special rules queue

[General]

1. (AIBat Check) Inconsistency in LetterboxInBreaks:
   - [Easy] : 0 Fixed as well as below!
   - [Hard] : 1
   - [Normal] : 1
   - [Sakurasou] : 1
   - [Tari's Kichigai] : 1

[Easy]

1. 00:33:728 - a bit nazi, isn't symmetrical. turn like this? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/656022 K
   

   45,186,33728,6,0,P|-15:295|48:331,1,225,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
   100,259,35249,2,0,L|324:259,1,225,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
   400,209,36772,5,2,0:0:0:0:

2. 00:14:163 - a bit nazi, maybe like this more beautiful https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/656033 I'll leave it
   

   207,285,14163,2,0,P|151:221|207:157,1,180
   219,69,15468,1,8,0:0:0:0:

3. 01:13:728 - i think it's more better to add soft-whistle on head and tail K

[Normal]

1. (AIBat Check) Unsnapped inherited (green) sections at: The heck?! They are snapped.
   00:04:273 - snap to 00:04:271
   00:07:751 - snap to 00:07:749
   00:20:795 - snap to 00:20:793
2. 00:26:336 - i seem not agree with this kind reverse in normal diff. change like this maybe? and add circle here 00:27:641 - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/656047 I'll try it, though your I'll alter a little bit since your way overlaps the previous note thingy
3. 00:40:249 (1,2,3) - imo, this a bit overlap re-arrange to beutiful pattern please. or try like this: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/656054
   Meh, i'll change it to be at least non overlapping.

   216,72,40249,6,0,P|256:88|280:144,1,90,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
   332,136,40902,2,0,P|400:156|372:208,1,135,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:

4. 00:45:032 (2) - move this note to x:283 y:134, look better anyway Moved a little bit
5. 00:47:206 - i think this way is more playable https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/656061 Ok
   

   121,252,47207,1,0,0:0:0:0:
   200,325,47641,2,0,P|280:341|352:261,1,180,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:

6. 01:07:423 - this kind reverse on normal ;; imo a bit difficult. why not try to change that like this? http://puu.sh/2ivtD Meh, I'll leave it.
7. 01:13:293 (2,3,4) - add soft-whistle, seems fit with bg music. and for 4 just put it on head. Ok

[Hard]

• this diff is more nice :3

1. 01:12:858 (1,2) - add soft-whistle on the tail

Thanks, and okay.

[Tari's Kichigai]

1. 00:33:945 - imo, this one should be symmetric like this: http://puu.sh/2ivUx
2. 00:45:467- a bit nazi here, imo this one look better: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/656083
   

   336,228,45467,6,0,L|335:121,1,90
   420,80,45902,2,0,L|520:80,2,90
   336,40,46554,1,0,0:0:0:0:
   252,84,46771,1,8,0:0:0:0:

3. 01:05:032 (4) - it's more better to move this one to x:508 y:208
4. 01:10:249 (9) - move to x:136 y:144
5. 01:13:728 (1,2) - adding soft-whistle?
6. 01:14:163 (3,4) - ^ but only on the head

[Sakurasou]

1. 00:16:771 - this slider imo look a bit strange. why not use this one? http://puu.sh/2iwkH So i fiddled around with it but i'm not sure if its good looking...
   

   40,328,16771,2,0,B|0:268|40:156|40:156|16:116|40:56,1,270

2. i think in this diff is much triplet eue

Daww i love triplet notes though!

sorry for being nazi modder ;; cause your rhythm is almost perfect, just try to do more nicer pattern.
nice map, here stars for yaa owo/

Thanks for modding

luxoDeh wrote:

Hi M4M from my queue!

EASY

00:33:728 (1) - this slider is a bit out of the screen when playing just move it a bit on the right Fixed.

NORMAL

00:21:989 (4,5,6) - why don't make a perfect tryangle? just a suggestion u.u Tried it, but i hope its what you're saying.
00:31:120 (3) - one grid up, if you want to allign whit the previous slider Ok

HARD
00:25:902 (2) - I know sometimes in hard you could change spacing, but maybe in this point it's better to give the right spacing to this note, just move it a bit upper, it would be more readable in my opinion K, moved it a bit up
00:36:554 (5) - maybe it's better to fix spacing here... (I fail it everytime D:) Fixed.
00:43:076 (4) - also here spacing K.
00:54:815 (1) - maybe four reverse are a bit confusing (maybe) No need.
01:08:728 (4,5,1) - you made a triplet only in this part of the song, maybe it's better delete it. and also start the NC here 01:08:728 (4) -
maybe check in all the diff the points where spacing is a bit confusing. in some parts is ok because there is a symmetry and a good reason to change it but sometimes maybe it's a bit confusing for me... anyway it's your decision if change it or not u.u I'd best leave it, since its following the vocals but a did a NC.

nothing in Tari's Kichigai diff (this is really good) and I really suck at insane so it's better to leave it to someone else for it's mod u.u
anyway really good map and song! good luck for ranking! Thanks for the mod!

1. Most of the finish suggestions I gave most likely fit with lower volume as you've been using on most of them
2. Here's a video without audio to save some space http://puu.sh/2lg5s
3. The unicode title on Tari's Kichigai is a bit different from the other difficulties. Looks like you're not using the same type of ~ in it (~ & 〜 )

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Remove a repeat from 01:01:119 (1) - then move the spinner so it starts 1/2 after the slider, but it should still end where I suggested before (01:03:510 - )

popcap990 wrote:

T_T i can't open this beatmap with my mac osu pls repair it.