KiyoshiX101 wrote:
Hello from my Queue!
[Easy]
00:19:381 (1) - NC doesn't fit there. It should be here: 00:19:816 (2) - in my opinion. Mmm. It kind of does, I'm just following the piano in the backround, it introduces a new thing.
00:22:859 (1) - Work out this slider a bit more. It could be a more beautiful beatblanket. Fixed... I guess? I just moved it a little closer to the slider.
00:53:511 (1) - You should place this in a different way, it doesn't look beautiful and it somehow overlapped from the previous slider. Fixed.
01:11:555 (1) - This could be a more beautiful beat blanket. Fixed
01:13:729 (2,3,1) - No offense but this is ugly. Change their placing a bit and avoid overlap :/ Yeah I agree, I'm just troubled on what to do for this haha.
[Normal]
00:09:598 (2,4,5,1) - Why you overlap :c Hmm... I might need some suggestions here. Noobie Mapper statement incoming: What do you mean by overlapping?
00:28:946 (3,4,5,1) - They look better this way: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/641393 Fixed.
00:38:511 (3) - Get the middle square one grid to left and curve is fixed Fixed.
[Hard]
Lots of senseless spacing errors. Yeah... I'm going to have to fix them, but it'll take a while.
00:14:598 (2,3,4,5,6) - Why such random spacing? They are 1/2 beats even though they look like they start 1/1 and change to 1/2. Fix them please. Hmm. I hope i fixed this correctly.
00:16:555 (2,3,4,5) - Fix the distance between those and make up a nice curve. Fixed.
00:26:772 (1,1,1) - Remove NC from those. Hmm, I had a similar suggestion from this, but I'm going to stick with this since its to make the sliders look beautiful.
00:28:511 (1,1,1) - Remove NC from those. ^
00:46:337 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - You can make something better out of this :/ I believe so as well, I'm just not sure what. Maybe I'll just make it into sliders or something.
00:48:946 (1) - End this at 00:50:032 - It is not recommended to put a circle right after the spinner end so fast according to the Ranking criteria writted in the osu! wiki. Ah Okay! Gotcha. Nice save.
00:52:207 (5) - That curve needs some work. Okie
[Sakurasou]
-1 HP Drain. That HP Drain is deadly for that song :< Alright.
00:31:337 (4,5,6) - Fix spacing.
00:33:729 (1,2,3) - Fix spacing. Not symmetrical with 00:33:076 (2,3,4) Fiiiiiiiiiiixed.
[Tari's Kichigai]
This is nice o3o I bet Tari would be happy haha.
Thanks so much! Really helped me out.