captin1 wrote:
Yeah the volume in the chorus is fine, so the decrease until then would work well
Reduced to 50%. thanks!
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Okura Asuka - Prime Number Kimi to Deaeru Hi (TV Size)
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Reduced to 50%. thanks!
From my queue.
Let's see what I can help you.
Hmm..seems that it is your first map. The guest diff is good, and I give a normal mod for it. The diffs made by your self need some more works, a mod can help little in improving it so I will give you general suggestions.
Look at the composition, ctrl+a and you will see this:
That means, your pattern are cruising around the screen center and no notes are put on the side. This causes some problem. First, you have no enough space to arrange your notes and sliders, thus they need to overlap on each other, and the composition looks not neat and clear; Second, when others play your map, they will have a terrible feeling that the moving is bound up. So the suggestion is, to re-arrange the patterns to make a better composition. The guest diff has done a good job on this, so you can learn from it.
Same suggestion applied to all your own diffs.
And this is mod for guest diff.
[Tari's Kichigai]
00:20:902 (3,6) - make blanket between them? like:
00:46:989 (5) - I know you want to follow the piano at 00:47:206 (6), but, the vocal is not ended here. I think you can add a reverse to this slider, so both the piano and vocal are considered.
00:46:989 (5,1) - make the two sliders parallel? Now from what I see, they are dragged randomly and looks not neat.
01:03:945 (1,2,3) - spacing issue
01:04:380 (3,4,5) - maybe a pattern like this can be better? Look:
The diff is good.
Let's see what I can help you.
Hmm..seems that it is your first map. The guest diff is good, and I give a normal mod for it. The diffs made by your self need some more works, a mod can help little in improving it so I will give you general suggestions.
Look at the composition, ctrl+a and you will see this:
That means, your pattern are cruising around the screen center and no notes are put on the side. This causes some problem. First, you have no enough space to arrange your notes and sliders, thus they need to overlap on each other, and the composition looks not neat and clear; Second, when others play your map, they will have a terrible feeling that the moving is bound up. So the suggestion is, to re-arrange the patterns to make a better composition. The guest diff has done a good job on this, so you can learn from it.
Same suggestion applied to all your own diffs.
And this is mod for guest diff.
[Tari's Kichigai]
00:20:902 (3,6) - make blanket between them? like:
00:46:989 (5) - I know you want to follow the piano at 00:47:206 (6), but, the vocal is not ended here. I think you can add a reverse to this slider, so both the piano and vocal are considered.
00:46:989 (5,1) - make the two sliders parallel? Now from what I see, they are dragged randomly and looks not neat.
01:03:945 (1,2,3) - spacing issue
01:04:380 (3,4,5) - maybe a pattern like this can be better? Look:
The diff is good.
Double post, edited.
Topic Starter
Fixed.popner wrote:
From my queue.
Let's see what I can help you.
Hmm..seems that it is your first map. The guest diff is good, and I give a normal mod for it. The diffs made by your self need some more works, a mod can help little in improving it so I will give you general suggestions.
Look at the composition, ctrl+a and you will see this:
That means, your pattern are cruising around the screen center and no notes are put on the side. This causes some problem. First, you have no enough space to arrange your notes and sliders, thus they need to overlap on each other, and the composition looks not neat and clear; Second, when others play your map, they will have a terrible feeling that the moving is bound up. So the suggestion is, to re-arrange the patterns to make a better composition. The guest diff has done a good job on this, so you can learn from it.
Same suggestion applied to all your own diffs.
And this is mod for guest diff. Fixed the Ctrl+A thingy you suggested, but i probably need mods again haha...
[Tari's Kichigai]
00:20:902 (3,6) - make blanket between them? like:
00:46:989 (5) - I know you want to follow the piano at 00:47:206 (6), but, the vocal is not ended here. I think you can add a reverse to this slider, so both the piano and vocal are considered.
00:46:989 (5,1) - make the two sliders parallel? Now from what I see, they are dragged randomly and looks not neat.
01:03:945 (1,2,3) - spacing issue
01:04:380 (3,4,5) - maybe a pattern like this can be better? Look:
The diff is good.
hi~ from popner's special rules queue
sorry for being nazi modder ;; cause your rhythm is almost perfect, just try to do more nicer pattern.
nice map, here stars for yaa owo/
[General]
- (AIBat Check) Inconsistency in LetterboxInBreaks:
- [Easy] : 0
- [Hard] : 1
- [Normal] : 1
- [Sakurasou] : 1
- [Tari's Kichigai] : 1
[Easy]
- 00:33:728 - a bit nazi, isn't symmetrical. turn like this? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/656022
45,186,33728,6,0,P|-15:295|48:331,1,225,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
100,259,35249,2,0,L|324:259,1,225,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
400,209,36772,5,2,0:0:0:0: - 00:14:163 - a bit nazi, maybe like this more beautiful https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/656033
207,285,14163,2,0,P|151:221|207:157,1,180
219,69,15468,1,8,0:0:0:0: - 01:13:728 - i think it's more better to add soft-whistle on head and tail
[Normal]
- (AIBat Check) Unsnapped inherited (green) sections at:
00:04:273 - snap to 00:04:271
00:07:751 - snap to 00:07:749
00:20:795 - snap to 00:20:793 - 00:26:336 - i seem not agree with this kind reverse in normal diff. change like this maybe? and add circle here 00:27:641 - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/656047
- 00:40:249 (1,2,3) - imo, this a bit overlap
re-arrange to beutiful pattern please. or try like this: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/656054216,72,40249,6,0,P|256:88|280:144,1,90,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
332,136,40902,2,0,P|400:156|372:208,1,135,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0: - 00:45:032 (2) - move this note to x:283 y:134, look better anyway
- 00:47:206 - i think this way is more playable https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/656061
121,252,47207,1,0,0:0:0:0:
200,325,47641,2,0,P|280:341|352:261,1,180,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0: - 01:07:423 - this kind reverse on normal ;; imo a bit difficult. why not try to change that like this? http://puu.sh/2ivtD
- 01:13:293 (2,3,4) - add soft-whistle, seems fit with bg music. and for 4 just put it on head.
[Hard]
- this diff is more nice :3
- 01:12:858 (1,2) - add soft-whistle on the tail
[Tari's Kichigai]
- 00:33:945 - imo, this one should be symmetric like this: http://puu.sh/2ivUx
- 00:45:467- a bit nazi here, imo this one look better: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/656083
336,228,45467,6,0,L|335:121,1,90
420,80,45902,2,0,L|520:80,2,90
336,40,46554,1,0,0:0:0:0:
252,84,46771,1,8,0:0:0:0: - 01:05:032 (4) - it's more better to move this one to x:508 y:208
- 01:10:249 (9) - move to x:136 y:144
- 01:13:728 (1,2) - adding soft-whistle?
- 01:14:163 (3,4) - ^ but only on the head
[Sakurasou]
- 00:16:771 - this slider imo look a bit strange. why not use this one? http://puu.sh/2iwkH
40,328,16771,2,0,B|0:268|40:156|40:156|16:116|40:56,1,270
- i think in this diff is much triplet eue
sorry for being nazi modder ;; cause your rhythm is almost perfect, just try to do more nicer pattern.
nice map, here stars for yaa owo/
Topic Starter
Thanks for moddingblackabyss wrote:
hi~ from popner's special rules queue[General]
- (AIBat Check) Inconsistency in LetterboxInBreaks:
- [Easy] : 0 Fixed as well as below!
- [Hard] : 1
- [Normal] : 1
- [Sakurasou] : 1
- [Tari's Kichigai] : 1[Easy]
- 00:33:728 - a bit nazi, isn't symmetrical. turn like this? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/656022 K
45,186,33728,6,0,P|-15:295|48:331,1,225,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
100,259,35249,2,0,L|324:259,1,225,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
400,209,36772,5,2,0:0:0:0:- 00:14:163 - a bit nazi, maybe like this more beautiful https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/656033 I'll leave it
207,285,14163,2,0,P|151:221|207:157,1,180
219,69,15468,1,8,0:0:0:0:- 01:13:728 - i think it's more better to add soft-whistle on head and tail K
[Normal]
- (AIBat Check) Unsnapped inherited (green) sections at: The heck?! They are snapped.
00:04:273 - snap to 00:04:271
00:07:751 - snap to 00:07:749
00:20:795 - snap to 00:20:793- 00:26:336 - i seem not agree with this kind reverse in normal diff. change like this maybe? and add circle here 00:27:641 - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/656047 I'll try it, though your I'll alter a little bit since your way overlaps the previous note thingy
- 00:40:249 (1,2,3) - imo, this a bit overlap
Meh, i'll change it to be at least non overlapping.216,72,40249,6,0,P|256:88|280:144,1,90,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
332,136,40902,2,0,P|400:156|372:208,1,135,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:- 00:45:032 (2) - move this note to x:283 y:134, look better anyway Moved a little bit
- 00:47:206 - i think this way is more playable https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/656061 Ok
121,252,47207,1,0,0:0:0:0:
200,325,47641,2,0,P|280:341|352:261,1,180,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:- 01:07:423 - this kind reverse on normal ;; imo a bit difficult. why not try to change that like this? http://puu.sh/2ivtD Meh, I'll leave it.
- 01:13:293 (2,3,4) - add soft-whistle, seems fit with bg music. and for 4 just put it on head. Ok
[Hard]
- this diff is more nice :3
Thanks, and okay.
- 01:12:858 (1,2) - add soft-whistle on the tail
[Tari's Kichigai]
- 00:33:945 - imo, this one should be symmetric like this: http://puu.sh/2ivUx
- 00:45:467- a bit nazi here, imo this one look better: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/656083
336,228,45467,6,0,L|335:121,1,90
420,80,45902,2,0,L|520:80,2,90
336,40,46554,1,0,0:0:0:0:
252,84,46771,1,8,0:0:0:0:- 01:05:032 (4) - it's more better to move this one to x:508 y:208
- 01:10:249 (9) - move to x:136 y:144
- 01:13:728 (1,2) - adding soft-whistle?
- 01:14:163 (3,4) - ^ but only on the head
[Sakurasou]Daww i love triplet notes though!
- 00:16:771 - this slider imo look a bit strange. why not use this one? http://puu.sh/2iwkH So i fiddled around with it but i'm not sure if its good looking...
40,328,16771,2,0,B|0:268|40:156|40:156|16:116|40:56,1,270- i think in this diff is much triplet eue
sorry for being nazi modder ;; cause your rhythm is almost perfect, just try to do more nicer pattern.
nice map, here stars for yaa owo/
Hi M4M from my queue!
EASY
00:33:728 (1) - this slider is a bit out of the screen when playing just move it a bit on the right
NORMAL
00:21:989 (4,5,6) - why don't make a perfect tryangle? just a suggestion u.u
00:31:120 (3) - one grid up, if you want to allign whit the previous slider
HARD
00:25:902 (2) - I know sometimes in hard you could change spacing, but maybe in this point it's better to give the right spacing to this note, just move it a bit upper, it would be more readable in my opinion
00:36:554 (5) - maybe it's better to fix spacing here... (I fail it everytime D:)
00:43:076 (4) - also here spacing
00:54:815 (1) - maybe four reverse are a bit confusing (maybe)
01:08:728 (4,5,1) - you made a triplet only in this part of the song, maybe it's better delete it. and also start the NC here 01:08:728 (4) -
maybe check in all the diff the points where spacing is a bit confusing. in some parts is ok because there is a symmetry and a good reason to change it but sometimes maybe it's a bit confusing for me... anyway it's your decision if change it or not u.u
nothing in Tari's Kichigai diff (this is really good) and I really suck at insane so it's better to leave it to someone else for it's mod u.u
anyway really good map and song! good luck for ranking!
EASY
00:33:728 (1) - this slider is a bit out of the screen when playing just move it a bit on the right
NORMAL
00:21:989 (4,5,6) - why don't make a perfect tryangle? just a suggestion u.u
00:31:120 (3) - one grid up, if you want to allign whit the previous slider
HARD
00:25:902 (2) - I know sometimes in hard you could change spacing, but maybe in this point it's better to give the right spacing to this note, just move it a bit upper, it would be more readable in my opinion
00:36:554 (5) - maybe it's better to fix spacing here... (I fail it everytime D:)
00:43:076 (4) - also here spacing
00:54:815 (1) - maybe four reverse are a bit confusing (maybe)
01:08:728 (4,5,1) - you made a triplet only in this part of the song, maybe it's better delete it. and also start the NC here 01:08:728 (4) -
maybe check in all the diff the points where spacing is a bit confusing. in some parts is ok because there is a symmetry and a good reason to change it but sometimes maybe it's a bit confusing for me... anyway it's your decision if change it or not u.u
nothing in Tari's Kichigai diff (this is really good) and I really suck at insane so it's better to leave it to someone else for it's mod u.u
anyway really good map and song! good luck for ranking!
Topic Starter
luxoDeh wrote:
Hi M4M from my queue!
EASY
00:33:728 (1) - this slider is a bit out of the screen when playing just move it a bit on the right Fixed.
NORMAL
00:21:989 (4,5,6) - why don't make a perfect tryangle? just a suggestion u.u Tried it, but i hope its what you're saying.
00:31:120 (3) - one grid up, if you want to allign whit the previous slider Ok
HARD
00:25:902 (2) - I know sometimes in hard you could change spacing, but maybe in this point it's better to give the right spacing to this note, just move it a bit upper, it would be more readable in my opinion K, moved it a bit up
00:36:554 (5) - maybe it's better to fix spacing here... (I fail it everytime D:) Fixed.
00:43:076 (4) - also here spacing K.
00:54:815 (1) - maybe four reverse are a bit confusing (maybe) No need.
01:08:728 (4,5,1) - you made a triplet only in this part of the song, maybe it's better delete it. and also start the NC here 01:08:728 (4) -
maybe check in all the diff the points where spacing is a bit confusing. in some parts is ok because there is a symmetry and a good reason to change it but sometimes maybe it's a bit confusing for me... anyway it's your decision if change it or not u.u I'd best leave it, since its following the vocals but a did a NC.
nothing in Tari's Kichigai diff (this is really good) and I really suck at insane so it's better to leave it to someone else for it's mod u.u
anyway really good map and song! good luck for ranking!
Konichiwa! I'm here for your modding as promised!
Sorry for my lateness, I'm quite lazy :<
Something in this map doesn't seem quite right to me. Maybe I'll share with you some along with my suggestions.
General
Easy
Normal
Hard
Tari's Kichigai
Sakurasou
There ya go. Don't give up and keep learning for better mapping!
Sorry for my lateness, I'm quite lazy :<
Something in this map doesn't seem quite right to me. Maybe I'll share with you some along with my suggestions.
General
All good here!
00:01:989 - 00:11:554 Do you really need those timing points? 10% volume doesn't affect much and the other diffs don't have it.
01:01:119 (1) - Add a finish on slider start!
01:13:729 (2) - Add a finish on slider end!
Not much to see here. The rest is good enough to me.
01:01:119 (1) - Add a finish on slider start!
01:13:729 (2) - Add a finish on slider end!
Not much to see here. The rest is good enough to me.
00:21:989 (4) - Remove clap
00:40:249 (1,2,3) - I suggest this way of mapping the part.
01:13:294 (2) - Finish here!
01:14:163 (4) - On slider start, change whistle to finish.
00:40:249 (1,2,3) - I suggest this way of mapping the part.
01:13:294 (2) - Finish here!
01:14:163 (4) - On slider start, change whistle to finish.
Some beats are a bit too hard / awkward to my taste here. I'll try fixing it up for you. :3
00:11:989 (4) - Usually people would miss here. Change into one repeat slider and move to the white line.
00:21:772 (4) - Uh no, bad way of anti-jumping to me. Move that slider down to y=276.
00:22:423 - 00:26:119 I find problems playing this one. But this should do better
And by this style:
00:35:685 - Finish here!
00:47:858 (1,2,3,4,5) - Not double flower pattern lol. Use 2 sliders and a circle, just to make it a little easier!
01:12:424 (3) - Finish here!
01:12:859 (1) - I bet you got the wrong hitsound on the slider end. Finish!
01:13:728 (2) - Finish here too :3
Not bad! I admit I went into freestyling too much once. Try to keep it playable to most people :3
00:11:989 (4) - Usually people would miss here. Change into one repeat slider and move to the white line.
00:21:772 (4) - Uh no, bad way of anti-jumping to me. Move that slider down to y=276.
00:22:423 - 00:26:119 I find problems playing this one. But this should do better
And by this style:
Suggested way of mapping the part
00:35:032 (4) - I suggest you map it this way, it's more true to the rhythm of the song to me.I hope you know the drill 
00:35:685 - Finish here!
00:47:858 (1,2,3,4,5) - Not double flower pattern lol. Use 2 sliders and a circle, just to make it a little easier!
01:12:424 (3) - Finish here!
01:12:859 (1) - I bet you got the wrong hitsound on the slider end. Finish!
01:13:728 (2) - Finish here too :3
Not bad! I admit I went into freestyling too much once. Try to keep it playable to most people :3
00:35:684 (1) - Add a finish here. You can turn down the volume with inherited points.
00:43:728 (2) - ^
01:09:815 (7) - ^
01:12:423 (3) - ^
01:12:858 (4) - ^ on slider end
01:14:163 (3) - ^ on slider end
I swear the flow in this guest diff feels much better than yours. Learn a thing or two from this guy / girl. :3
00:43:728 (2) - ^
01:09:815 (7) - ^
01:12:423 (3) - ^
01:12:858 (4) - ^ on slider end
01:14:163 (3) - ^ on slider end
I swear the flow in this guest diff feels much better than yours. Learn a thing or two from this guy / girl. :3
00:15:685 (14) - Too much clap. Remove the clap on this one.
00:26:120 (9) - ^
00:43:729 (2) - Finish here!
01:03:294 (3,4,5) - Nothing, Clap, Clap fits better here.
01:12:206 (3) - Finish on slider end
01:13:076 (5) - ^
01:14:163 (3) - Finish here!
I can't mess with this one. But it's good to me :3
00:26:120 (9) - ^
00:43:729 (2) - Finish here!
01:03:294 (3,4,5) - Nothing, Clap, Clap fits better here.
01:12:206 (3) - Finish on slider end
01:13:076 (5) - ^
01:14:163 (3) - Finish here!
I can't mess with this one. But it's good to me :3
There ya go. Don't give up and keep learning for better mapping!
Hey. From my modding queue.
[Sakurasou]
00:04:815 (2) - i'd say stacking red 2 with purple 9, yellow 2,4 is more equidistant (circling around with the same radius) and neater.
00:05:250 (4,5,6) - you might wanna consider just stacking them, with greed slider 1 blanketing them few grids away. If you want to keep those, make a perfect blanket with red 6 and greed slider 1.
00:07:206 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - why not use the same distance snap that was used between green 7 and 8? Sudden distance decrease might make players feel closed. Especially in insane diff
00:08:510 (7,8,9) - Same as above (stacking)
00:24:381 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - consider this ↓ Right now, 1,2,3 feels too closed in. I highly recommend making a triplet(not as in musical terms). In the picture, there are 3 circles stacked (1,2,3) and the flow goes around to form a triangle and then comes back to the stacked place (6) and then a jump to the slider(blanketing 5)
00:25:903 (8,9,10) - same as above (stacking). Or if you want to spread them out, you need to use less distance snap.
00:29:381 (4,5,6) - Very confusing, since you used almost the same pattern before as triplets(quarter beats apart from each other), but this time it is just a single tapping with half beats apart from each other. Spread them out (you can make a triangle leading to the next yellow slider 1)
00:31:336 (4,5,6) - good. These kind of triplets are nice when appropriately used like in this case.
00:36:120 (2,3) - put these more apart from 1 since they are musically far apart (consider around y:224)
00:42:641 (6) - move up a little, cuz it should be more far away from 7. (consider around y:180)
00:48:729 (1) - This lead-in part to kiai time is pretty confusing right now. consider shortening this slider to end here: 00:48:729 (1), and add a circle at here: 00:50:032, and here: 00:50:249. consider changing 3 into a slider to fit in to the sustaining vocal. These changes should fix the problem imo. (or you can even come up with even better idea based on my opinion)
00:56:771 (5,6,1) - spread these out to keep the same distance as before. I get your point to complete the pentagon pattern, but if the distance balance gets crashed, a pentagon is not gonna help ;-; I'd move 6 to x:300 y:256, and purple 1 to x: 420 y:204 ish.
01:04:163 - add a circle to fit the lyrics. If not, place 1 more away from the next slider.
[Tari's Kichigai]
00:31:989 (5) - (nazi) move one grid left to make a perfect blanket with 4?
01:10:249 (9) - (nazi) place it few grids down to make the distance equal with that between 7 and 8? or you can even consider making a diamond.
Very nice. Couldn't find much.
[Hard]
00:25:684 (1,2,3) - same as in Sakurasou diff. I highly recommend just stacking them.
00:31:336 (1,2,3) - 1 and 2 are a half beat apart, and 2 and 3 are one beat apart, yet the distance between them are the same. This can cause confusion.
00:46:771 (4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5) - nice.
01:05:033 (3,4) - (nazi) make a perfect blanket?
[Normal]
00:21:989 (4,5,6) - I guess this is fine, but place them more neatly (equilaterally)
00:34:597 (2) - consider changing 2 to a circle, and start slider 3 on 00:34:815 (3) and end on 00:34:815 (3), to fit the vocal (lyrics) Make sure you place them like here: 00:53:510 (3).
00:57:206 (4,1) - (nazi) make a perfect blanket?
[Easy]
00:17:207 (2) - (nazi) move to left 1~2 grids to place it at the center of the previous slider.
00:33:728 (1) - The body of the slider goes out of the playfield too much. I think this may be unrankable, but not sure.
Alright. That's about it
Nice song. Hope this helps!
Good luck
p.s.) Quick question. Did you post this map on popner's special rules queue by any chance?
[Sakurasou]
00:04:815 (2) - i'd say stacking red 2 with purple 9, yellow 2,4 is more equidistant (circling around with the same radius) and neater.
00:05:250 (4,5,6) - you might wanna consider just stacking them, with greed slider 1 blanketing them few grids away. If you want to keep those, make a perfect blanket with red 6 and greed slider 1.
00:07:206 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - why not use the same distance snap that was used between green 7 and 8? Sudden distance decrease might make players feel closed. Especially in insane diff
00:08:510 (7,8,9) - Same as above (stacking)
00:24:381 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - consider this ↓ Right now, 1,2,3 feels too closed in. I highly recommend making a triplet(not as in musical terms). In the picture, there are 3 circles stacked (1,2,3) and the flow goes around to form a triangle and then comes back to the stacked place (6) and then a jump to the slider(blanketing 5)
00:25:903 (8,9,10) - same as above (stacking). Or if you want to spread them out, you need to use less distance snap.
00:29:381 (4,5,6) - Very confusing, since you used almost the same pattern before as triplets(quarter beats apart from each other), but this time it is just a single tapping with half beats apart from each other. Spread them out (you can make a triangle leading to the next yellow slider 1)
00:31:336 (4,5,6) - good. These kind of triplets are nice when appropriately used like in this case.
00:36:120 (2,3) - put these more apart from 1 since they are musically far apart (consider around y:224)
00:42:641 (6) - move up a little, cuz it should be more far away from 7. (consider around y:180)
00:48:729 (1) - This lead-in part to kiai time is pretty confusing right now. consider shortening this slider to end here: 00:48:729 (1), and add a circle at here: 00:50:032, and here: 00:50:249. consider changing 3 into a slider to fit in to the sustaining vocal. These changes should fix the problem imo. (or you can even come up with even better idea based on my opinion)
00:56:771 (5,6,1) - spread these out to keep the same distance as before. I get your point to complete the pentagon pattern, but if the distance balance gets crashed, a pentagon is not gonna help ;-; I'd move 6 to x:300 y:256, and purple 1 to x: 420 y:204 ish.
01:04:163 - add a circle to fit the lyrics. If not, place 1 more away from the next slider.
[Tari's Kichigai]
00:31:989 (5) - (nazi) move one grid left to make a perfect blanket with 4?
01:10:249 (9) - (nazi) place it few grids down to make the distance equal with that between 7 and 8? or you can even consider making a diamond.
Very nice. Couldn't find much.
[Hard]
00:25:684 (1,2,3) - same as in Sakurasou diff. I highly recommend just stacking them.
00:31:336 (1,2,3) - 1 and 2 are a half beat apart, and 2 and 3 are one beat apart, yet the distance between them are the same. This can cause confusion.
00:46:771 (4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5) - nice.
01:05:033 (3,4) - (nazi) make a perfect blanket?
[Normal]
00:21:989 (4,5,6) - I guess this is fine, but place them more neatly (equilaterally)
00:34:597 (2) - consider changing 2 to a circle, and start slider 3 on 00:34:815 (3) and end on 00:34:815 (3), to fit the vocal (lyrics) Make sure you place them like here: 00:53:510 (3).
00:57:206 (4,1) - (nazi) make a perfect blanket?
[Easy]
00:17:207 (2) - (nazi) move to left 1~2 grids to place it at the center of the previous slider.
00:33:728 (1) - The body of the slider goes out of the playfield too much. I think this may be unrankable, but not sure.
Alright. That's about it
Nice song. Hope this helps!
Good luck
p.s.) Quick question. Did you post this map on popner's special rules queue by any chance?
Modding queue~
GL
Easy
HP Drain - 1..?
00:19:816 (2) - change by 00:22:859 (1)
00:33:728 (1) - Move inside plz
01:07:206 (3) - add NC
01:07:641 (1) - remove NC
00:19:816 (2) - change by 00:22:859 (1)
00:33:728 (1) - Move inside plz
01:07:206 (3) - add NC
01:07:641 (1) - remove NC
Normal
00:40:902 (2) - make more pretty..
01:11:554 (1) - ^
01:11:554 (1) - ^
Hard
00:08:946 (5) - add NC and 00:10:685 (1) - remove NC
00:21:772 (4,5) - ctrl + j (and move 00:23:076 (1,2,3,4) )
00:46:771 (4,5,6,7,8) - make more pretty... (http://puu.sh/2kN7X <- use polygon circles plz)
00:47:858 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^
01:00:903 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^
00:21:772 (4,5) - ctrl + j (and move 00:23:076 (1,2,3,4)
)00:46:771 (4,5,6,7,8) - make more pretty... (http://puu.sh/2kN7X <- use polygon circles plz)
00:47:858 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^
01:00:903 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^
Sakurasou
00:02:641 (3,4,5,6,7) - 
<- Distance check..
00:10:032 (6) - move x:36 y:316 plz
00:25:903 (7,8,9) - look so bad..
00:10:032 (6) - move x:36 y:316 plz
00:25:903 (7,8,9) - look so bad..
GL
Hi~
[General]
Change the Stack Leniency to 5 instead. Mainly because of 01:00:903 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) -
00:01:119 (3) - clap on start
00:01:445 (4,6) - clap on these as well
00:22:423 (1,2,3,4) - no need for a stream here, but it's up to you
00:29:381 (4,5,6) - I almost thought this was a 1/4 triplet
00:35:467 (7) - clap here
00:43:729 (2) - add a finish here
00:45:468 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - to make this perfectly symmetrical, each part should be rotated 120°. This might make it more difficult to play though. Change it only if you find it more fitting. I also think you sould make a more clearer spacing between the triples and the center
00:48:729 (1) - end this at 00:50:032 -
00:57:858 (3) - the whistle on the end sounds very unfitting
01:00:032 (8) - I wouldn't recommend using 2 repeats
01:04:163 - I really do recommend that you add something here
01:06:989 (1) - avoid using 2 repeats? It's like it's messing with the flow at this speed
01:12:206 (3,5) - finish on the end. Also make sure to lower the volume on those, just like on 01:11:554 -
01:14:163 (3) - ^ same thing here
[Tari's Kichigai]
00:08:945 (3,4,5) - minor spacing issue. Try to equalize it more
00:10:684 (9) - ^kinda the same here, move the note 1 grid right
00:17:423 (4) - 1 grid down and 2 grids left
00:21:554 (5) - 1 grid down
00:27:858 (4) - 1 grid left
00:35:684 (1) - add a finish here
00:37:641 (3,4,1) - equalize the spacing here?
00:43:728 (2) - finish on start
00:44:380 (3,4,5) - I think the way 00:44:380 (3,4) - are placed could be better arranged imo. Here's a little suggestion 00:48:728 (4) - a finish fits better than a clap here imo
01:01:119 (2) - finish on start
01:09:815 (7) - finish here
01:12:423 (3) - ^
01:12:858 (4) - finish on end
01:14:163 (3) - finish on start
[Hard]
00:11:554 (3,4) - can't you try to find a bit more simple pattern here? the repeat-slider on the blue tick can be confusing.
00:20:250 (2,3) - space them up so that the tails doesn't touch each-other 00:22:423 (5,1,2,3,4,5,6) - This part was really unexpected. The slider with 3 repeats and the double-stack jumps makes it really difficult to play this part on sight-read.
00:31:336 (1,2,3) - Reading this can be a pain. At least make a New Combo on (3)
00:35:467 (5) - clap
00:35:685 (1) - finish
00:46:771 (4,6) - Move these 1 grid closer each-other
00:47:858 (1,2,3,4,5) - make a copy of the previous pattern to stay more consistent
00:48:945 (1,1) - I think you're being evil here. End the spinner 1/2 earlier
00:57:424 (1) - not sure here, but it looks like you missed adding a finish here
01:00:903 (1,3) - like before. Move these 1 grid closer each-other
01:02:858 (1,1) - End this 1/2 latter and remove the hitcircle. The rhythm looks a bit messed up here
01:10:250 (7,8,9) - intended spacing? looks a bit odd
01:12:424 (3) - finish
01:12:858 (1) - add the custom finish on the end. I think it fits better than a regular whistle
01:13:728 (2) - finish on end
[Normal]
I strongly recommend that you increase the AR by 1. Becomes so much easier to read imo, considering the spacing and so.
00:12:206 (6) - no need for a clap here imo. sound good without it here
00:20:902 (3,4,5,6) - do not put them so close in a chain, it becomes really hard to read
00:21:989 (4) - remove the clap here
00:57:642 (1,2,3) - would you like to try this pattern instead? looks a bit more tidy imo 01:02:641 (1,1) - this is really too close imo. would be somewhat better to end it at 01:03:510 - instead to give the player more time to recover from the spinner.
01:09:816 (4) - add a finish
01:11:554 (1,2,4) - you can follow the example that I mention on the other difficulties if you want here (regarding the finish hitsounds)
01:18:511 (1) - 1 grid up perhaps? so it lands on the center line
[Easy]
00:36:772 (1) - add a finish
00:47:858 (1,1) - for an easy difficulty, this is a pretty short time between the objects. I suggest you start the spinner on 00:47:641 - and end it on 00:48:728 -
01:01:119 (1) - add finish on start
01:02:641 (1,1) - for an easy difficult I wouldn't recommend this. At least end it 1/2 earlier (01:03:510 - ). You can also try this pattern
That's all I from me
Tari's Kichigai was the most solid one imo, so I only had some nitpicking suggestions. The other diffs were also good. Just had a few things I wanted to point out.
Anyway, good luck with this~
[General]
- Most of the finish suggestions I gave most likely fit with lower volume as you've been using on most of them
- Here's a video without audio to save some space http://puu.sh/2lg5s
- The unicode title on Tari's Kichigai is a bit different from the other difficulties. Looks like you're not using the same type of ~ in it (~ & 〜 )
Change the Stack Leniency to 5 instead. Mainly because of 01:00:903 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) -
00:01:119 (3) - clap on start
00:01:445 (4,6) - clap on these as well
00:22:423 (1,2,3,4) - no need for a stream here, but it's up to you
00:29:381 (4,5,6) - I almost thought this was a 1/4 triplet
00:35:467 (7) - clap here
00:43:729 (2) - add a finish here
00:45:468 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - to make this perfectly symmetrical, each part should be rotated 120°. This might make it more difficult to play though. Change it only if you find it more fitting. I also think you sould make a more clearer spacing between the triples and the center
00:48:729 (1) - end this at 00:50:032 -
00:57:858 (3) - the whistle on the end sounds very unfitting
01:00:032 (8) - I wouldn't recommend using 2 repeats
01:04:163 - I really do recommend that you add something here
01:06:989 (1) - avoid using 2 repeats? It's like it's messing with the flow at this speed
01:12:206 (3,5) - finish on the end. Also make sure to lower the volume on those, just like on 01:11:554 -
01:14:163 (3) - ^ same thing here
[Tari's Kichigai]
00:08:945 (3,4,5) - minor spacing issue. Try to equalize it more
00:10:684 (9) - ^kinda the same here, move the note 1 grid right
00:17:423 (4) - 1 grid down and 2 grids left
00:21:554 (5) - 1 grid down
00:27:858 (4) - 1 grid left
00:35:684 (1) - add a finish here
00:37:641 (3,4,1) - equalize the spacing here?
00:43:728 (2) - finish on start
00:44:380 (3,4,5) - I think the way 00:44:380 (3,4) - are placed could be better arranged imo. Here's a little suggestion 00:48:728 (4) - a finish fits better than a clap here imo
01:01:119 (2) - finish on start
01:09:815 (7) - finish here
01:12:423 (3) - ^
01:12:858 (4) - finish on end
01:14:163 (3) - finish on start
[Hard]
00:11:554 (3,4) - can't you try to find a bit more simple pattern here? the repeat-slider on the blue tick can be confusing.
00:20:250 (2,3) - space them up so that the tails doesn't touch each-other 00:22:423 (5,1,2,3,4,5,6) - This part was really unexpected. The slider with 3 repeats and the double-stack jumps makes it really difficult to play this part on sight-read.
00:31:336 (1,2,3) - Reading this can be a pain. At least make a New Combo on (3)
00:35:467 (5) - clap
00:35:685 (1) - finish
00:46:771 (4,6) - Move these 1 grid closer each-other
00:47:858 (1,2,3,4,5) - make a copy of the previous pattern to stay more consistent
00:48:945 (1,1) - I think you're being evil here. End the spinner 1/2 earlier
00:57:424 (1) - not sure here, but it looks like you missed adding a finish here
01:00:903 (1,3) - like before. Move these 1 grid closer each-other
01:02:858 (1,1) - End this 1/2 latter and remove the hitcircle. The rhythm looks a bit messed up here
01:10:250 (7,8,9) - intended spacing? looks a bit odd
01:12:424 (3) - finish
01:12:858 (1) - add the custom finish on the end. I think it fits better than a regular whistle
01:13:728 (2) - finish on end
[Normal]
I strongly recommend that you increase the AR by 1. Becomes so much easier to read imo, considering the spacing and so.
00:12:206 (6) - no need for a clap here imo. sound good without it here
00:20:902 (3,4,5,6) - do not put them so close in a chain, it becomes really hard to read
00:21:989 (4) - remove the clap here
00:57:642 (1,2,3) - would you like to try this pattern instead? looks a bit more tidy imo 01:02:641 (1,1) - this is really too close imo. would be somewhat better to end it at 01:03:510 - instead to give the player more time to recover from the spinner.
01:09:816 (4) - add a finish
01:11:554 (1,2,4) - you can follow the example that I mention on the other difficulties if you want here (regarding the finish hitsounds)
01:18:511 (1) - 1 grid up perhaps? so it lands on the center line
[Easy]
00:36:772 (1) - add a finish
00:47:858 (1,1) - for an easy difficulty, this is a pretty short time between the objects. I suggest you start the spinner on 00:47:641 - and end it on 00:48:728 -
01:01:119 (1) - add finish on start
01:02:641 (1,1) - for an easy difficult I wouldn't recommend this. At least end it 1/2 earlier (01:03:510 - ). You can also try this pattern
SPOILER
Remove a repeat from 01:01:119 (1) - then move the spinner so it starts 1/2 after the slider, but it should still end where I suggested before (01:03:510 - )
Remove a repeat from 01:01:119 (1) - then move the spinner so it starts 1/2 after the slider, but it should still end where I suggested before (01:03:510 - )
That's all I from me
Tari's Kichigai was the most solid one imo, so I only had some nitpicking suggestions. The other diffs were also good. Just had a few things I wanted to point out.
Anyway, good luck with this~
T_T i can't open this beatmap with my mac osu pls repair it.
Topic Starter
welp, I'm kind of in a pickle since i've been grounded haha... (sneaking here is a dangerous thing). I hope that i can get to these asap
and for popcap... I have no idea what to dooo Sorry.
and for popcap... I have no idea what to dooo Sorry.
Shohei Ohtani
Why did I laughpopcap990 wrote:
T_T i can't open this beatmap with my mac osu pls repair it.
Sakura:
00:13:946 (6) - NC
00:17:642 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - It's a sweet pattern but I'd like (5,6) to be less intense. Full-screen jumps in a verse usually isn't good.
00:35:467 (7) - Add clap
00:55:685 (7,1) - The law of everything good and right in this world wants me to switch these two but I know that it wouldn't work but oh my god (7) just feels so unnatural. If you can fix it it'll be kawaii.
01:04:380 (2) - This anti-jump is incredibly awkward.
Weird ass japanese name:
Nice
Hard:
00:11:880 (4) - Starting a slider like this on this blue tick is not good.
00:31:336 (1) - Remove NC
00:32:642 (3) - Add NC
00:36:554 (5) - NC
00:50:467 (1) - Just delete this note and extend the slider to here
Normal:
00:08:293 (5) - This may be weird for normal players
01:11:554 (1) - Weird, as a lot of sliders are curved so this just seems out of place.
01:15:033 (1) - ^ And also nothing in the vocals symbolizes a need for this.
Easy:
Good enough
Whee.
Hi, Entreal
Mod request from my modding queue
Red = You must fix
Blue = You should consider
Black = My suggestion
Blue = You should consider
Black = My suggestion
General
- Remove "Okura Asuka Sakurasou no Pet na Kanojo Prime Number Kimi to Deaeru Hi" in tags. Because Okura Asuka is artist name, Sakurasou no Pet na Kanojo is source name, and Prime Number Kimi to Deaeru Hi is title name. However, you can add "ending" in tags, since this song is ending song of this anime.
- Change title name is "Prime Number ~Kimi to Deaeru Hi~ (TV Size)" to follow this song name in the video.
Easy
- 00:26:336 (1,2,3) - If you want make slider begin of (1,2) and circle (2) is equilateral triangle, move (1) to left 2 grids, and if you want to be more smoothly, move 2nd point of (1) to x:332 y:224 imo.
- 00:41:989 (2,3) - Use Ctrl+G. Then remap these again. After that, don't forget switch finish hitsound between slider end of (2) and circle (3).
- 01:02:641 (1) - This spinner is too short for Easy diff. I suggest that remove slider (1). Then end the spinner at 01:04:380, and if you don't add any note, please add NC on 01:05:903 (1), too.
- 01:18:510 (1) - Finish sound is too loud. Please reduce volume about 70~80%
Normal
- 00:01:990 (1,2,3) - It's too hard to play (2,3), since these aren't natural flow. So please make by this picture to can play more smoothly.
- 00:08:293 (5) - This slider end on the blue tick, which this diff is unrankable. So you must change note, which I suggest that change into note on 00:08:510. It will be follow drum sound in the song.
- 00:20:902 (3,4,5,6) - The rhythm of these notes are weird for me, and I think (4,5,6) is too hard to play imo. So I will suggest that make by this picture will be easier and suitable more to play, and if you fixed, add clap on slider end of (3) and slider only repeat and end of (4).
- 00:22:859 (1) - Why do you repeat the slider 2 times, which I think it will be better if you remove repeating 1 time. Then add a circle on that (00:24:163) instead.
- 00:40:249 (1) - Remove clap on slider end.
- 00:40:902 (2,3) - I think that make by this picture will be suitable more for the rhythm of song.
- 00:47:207 (4) - Move to down 2 grids and left 1 grid. It will be more beautiful imo.
- 00:57:642 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - I want make these notes are more beautiful by these pictures, and if you want fix, copy by code
12,320,57642,6,0,P|56:320|96:300,1,90,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
124,196,58511,1,0,0:0:0:0:
224,240,58946,1,8,0:0:0:0:
212,132,59381,2,0,P|228:84|260:56,1,90,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
360,24,60250,1,0,0:0:0:0:
452,80,60685,1,8,0:0:0:0: - 01:02:641 (1,1) - I think this spinner is too short for Normal diff. Please end spinner at 01:04:380. Then change slider (1) into circle on 01:05:032 instead.
- 01:16:989 - Add 2 circles or a slider on here and 01:17:206 because I hear drum sound on the song.
Hard
- 00:11:880 (4) - The rhythm of slider begin is weird for me, since here isn't suitable for the rhythm of song. So you should start this slider at 00:11:989
- 00:29:816 (5) - It isn't necessary to add NC. Please remove it.
- 00:30:249 (1,2,1,2) - Spacing between these can't play smoothly. So I think you move 00:31:120 (2) to stack with slider end of 00:30:249 (1), and move 00:32:207 (2) to stack with 00:31:336 (1). It will be able to play more smoothly.
- 00:31:336 (1) - Same with 00:29:816 (5).
- 00:35:467 (5) - Add clap here to follow the rhythm.
- 01:01:989 (5,6,7) - I see these are anti-jump, which it isn't natural flow. So you should increase spacing between these about 1.8x to can play smoothly.
- 01:16:989 - I hear somethings of song on here, which I think you can add notes by this picture to minimize the empty space.
Tari's Kichigai
- 00:10:554 (1,2,3,4,1) - I guess this diff is Hard, because it isn't hard for me but this stream should make to easier than this by reduce spacing these about 0.5x, or use slider by repeat it to follow these rhythm.
- 00:19:163 (8) - Move to right 1 grid and down 6 grids will be look better.
- 00:31:989 (5) - Move to down 1 grid.
- 00:48:293 (2,3) - It will be look better if you move (2) to right and down 1 grid, and move (3) to right 1 grid.
- 00:49:380 (6) - Add clap here will be better?
- 01:10:249 (9) - Move to x:128 y:144 will be more beautiful.
Sakurasou
- 00:00:250 (1) - This note is almost at the edge of this game windows, although it does not leave the tables. But you should move it.
- 00:02:641 (3,4,5,6,7) - This stream should use equal spacing, which I suggest that use spacing about 0.7x
- 00:04:815 (2) - Try to aviod stacking with 00:04:381 will be better.
- 00:05:033 (3,4,5,6) - I think that make by this picture will be better imo.
- 00:08:510 (7,8,9) - These aren't natural flow. So I think it will be more smoothly if you make to similar with stream on picture above.
- 00:10:032 (6) - Move to down and right 1 grid.
- 00:13:946 (6) - Add NC to follow the vocal.
- 00:15:576 (13,14) - These aren't necessary to add clap. Please remove it.
- 00:24:381 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - I feel weird when I play it on here. I think that make by this picture, which (1,4) is stack. If you make by this, it will be more smoothly.
- 00:25:903 (7,8,9) - I want make these can be more smoothly than this by this picture.
- 00:30:032 (1) - Use Ctrl+G will be able to play more smoothly.
- 00:39:271 (6) - Move to left and down 1 grid to adjust spacing of this stream.
- 00:44:163 (4) - This rhythm should add clap on this note.
- 00:44:597 (6,8) - Remove clap on (6), but add it on slider begin of (8) instead to follow the rhythm.
- 01:04:163 - Add a circle here to follow the vocal.
Comment: Easy and Tari's Kichigai diffs are good for me, but you should improve some diffs; especially, in Hard diff because I feel I can't play smoothly
Hope my mod will be useful for you.
Good luck~
Hello,for you mod,from my queue ^^ (poor english,sorry ~!)
Easy
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OK
Normal
00:00:250 (1) - try to add note?
00:00:684 (2) - ^
00:01:119 (3) - add slider at 00:01:554 to end
It feel good.
00:08:293 (5) - end is white line, no blue line?
Hard
00:00:250 (1) - add slider at 00:00:684 to end
00:01:119 (2) - add slider reverse 1 times at 00:01:554 to end
00:01:663 (3) - add note
00:01:771 (4) - ^
01:16:771 (1,2,3) - add note?
Sakurasou
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OK
Easy
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OK
Normal
00:00:250 (1) - try to add note?
00:00:684 (2) - ^
00:01:119 (3) - add slider at 00:01:554 to end
It feel good.
00:08:293 (5) - end is white line, no blue line?
Hard
00:00:250 (1) - add slider at 00:00:684 to end
00:01:119 (2) - add slider reverse 1 times at 00:01:554 to end
00:01:663 (3) - add note
00:01:771 (4) - ^
01:16:771 (1,2,3) - add note?
Sakurasou
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OK
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