1. Chunin (3,47 stars, 93 notes)
2. Genin (1,64 stars, 77 notes)
3. Jonin (4,66 stars, 156 notes)
4. Kage (5 stars, 230 notes)

VinylDash14 wrote:

Hey Hey~

[Genin]

00:12:518 (1) - Start spinner at 00:12:089 -
01:06:946 (4) - NC
01:20:660 (5) - NC

all fixed in easy

[Chunin]

00:03:303 (1) - Touching the HP Bar. ( talked to vinyl on irc, its because of his skin, so its not touching at all )
00:25:589 (1,2) - Annoying to hit 2. Maybe the slider can end at 00:26:232 - and delete 2 ( i'll think about it )
00:30:732 (1) - Touching the HP Bar ( talked to vinyl on irc, its because of his skin, so its not touching at all )
00:48:518 (1) - I'd prefer it not under 00:46:803 (1) - ( i'll think about it )

[Jonin]

00:47:446 (2,3,4) - Move all of them to the left two time (Tiny) ( i think i know what you mean, i will work it my own way )

[Kage]

00:14:231 (9) - NC? ( maybe )
00:33:732 (4) - I'd like it if this was blanketed by 00:34:160 (5) - (no because 00:33:732 (4) is blanketed my the next slider already)
00:52:803 (9) - NC? ( if more people complain i'll use it )


Cool mapset. Nice skin. More mods on this and it'll be bubble worthy~

CDFA wrote:

RAM WIRE ?

Overall:
01:23:232 (1) - End this on the previous red tick to fit the words (It's all like "KUU-LA, KUU-LA" and the last one of those ends on the red tick) ( nice catch, fixed )

Skin:
The green sliderball clashes a lot with some of the colors ( i hope its ok, btw my 1st map is using the same color/skin )

Insane:
AR -1 (Possibly even -2) ( -1 )
00:10:803 (4) - Extend this to just be a regular 1/1 slider and remove a repeat? ( i like how it plays )
00:25:589 (2,3,4,5) - Make these jumps smaller, especially since this is a softer part of the song and nothing in the music calls for them ( if more people complain, maybe )
00:26:660 (1,1,1) - Remove NCs ( fixed )

Hard:
01:12:518 (4) - I'd prefer it if this was removed and (5) was moved to where this is, so it fits the connection of the words ( i will pass because it's symmetry based but i may consider if more people complain )
01:19:375 (4,5,6,7,8) - This might play better if it was made into a star jump instead of a star road ( i think 01:18:732 (1,2,3,4) - was suposed to be the jump part and 5 6 7 8 the normal part, follows the pacing better imo, but i may consider if more people complain )

Normal:
01:12:303 (3) - This is awkward. Add a note where this starts, move this to start on the large white tick, and remove a repeat ( disagree )

Easy:
00:00:946 (1) - Extend this to the white tick? (no, because its too long)
00:07:803 (2) - ^ (no, because its too long)
01:06:518 (3) - Please make this a star omg ( fixed )

I like it :3. Sorry it took so long for so little. Star star star go go go. (don't worry about it, and thank you a lot for mod and star )

azu-nyan14 wrote:

Depois de semanas preparando o mod, é eu finalmente terminei. ( finalmente um mod :') )

[General]

Não achei nada, mas eu acho que todas as diffs deveriam começar no mesmo ponto (Genin e Chunin começam em 00:00:946 enquanto Jonin e Kage começam em 00:00:518), mas isso fica ao seu critério. ( eu acho q começar a normal / easy no mesmo lugar q a hard seria confuso pra iniciantes, ja que nao tem nada antes disso pra eles entenderem o ritmo )

[Genin]

AR+1? ( beleza )

00:41:660 (1,2,3,4,5): Amei o flow daquí , mas eu acho que a posição do 5 quebra um pouco o flow. Então eu sugiro que você dê ctrl+g no (5) e depois mover o (5) ele para x:440 y:252. ( eu acho q parece meio random colocar esse slider assim, eu meio q to seguindo forma de curva nesse e em varios outros combos, talvez eu mude se mais gente sugerir )

SPOILER

[Jonin]

01:05:018 (1,2,3,4): Eu acho que stackear o (3) com o (4) deixaria a pattern mais interessante imo. ( parece funcionar tambem depois eu testo, mas por emquanto vou manter o original )

SPOILER

01:12:732 (5,6): Imo o flow poderia ser melhor se você stackeasse o (5) com o 01:11:875 (1) (A outra razão seria é porque eu amo esse tipo de flow rsrsrs então pode ignorar essa sugestão) ( eu queria jumps pra essas partes ^^ . se mais gente mensionar eu mudo isso )

As outras diffs parece boas pra mim, desculpa pelo mod ruim a map ta realmente muito boa

Amei o flow das diffs

Boa sorte no ranking ( brigadao pelo mod, se precisar de ajuda em algo só me chamar )

Loneight wrote:

Hi~
M4M (sorry I am late...). ( it's fine )

• 
  "re" is means "remove"
  Black is just suggestion, if you don't like , you can skip it
  Blue is recommended to fix
  red is unrankable issue

[general]

1. please try to get lead-in to 1.5 seconds, because 00:00:518 (1) - is too suddenly with the AR... in Jonin, Kage diff ,I know you want to let people play again but ... it is also a angry thing that miss note when start ( changed to 1.5... but i did not planned to make people play again, i just thought 1 sec was good enough 0.0 )

[Genin]

1. AR isn't suitable for this diff, it feels faster a bit. Try to -1, would be much better for the diff ( i'll think about it )
2. 01:18:946 (1,2) - I hear there vocal is same as 01:05:232 (3,1) - , so swap NC to make there like 01:05:232 (3,1) - 's NC setting ( nice catch, but i'll swap NC at 01:05:232 (3,1 - instead. )

nice diff, I like symmetry of this diff ( thanks )

[Chunin]

1. 00:06:732 (7) - I think this NC is unnecessary, re NC will reduce quandary when play ( disagree, but i'll consider if more people complain )
2. 00:26:232 (2) - please space it in 1.0x distance like front note, this might be confused for newbie ( disagree, but i'll consider if more people complain )
3. 00:30:732 (1) - well .. because the sliderfollowcircle is very like combo 1's color, it is hard to read for there and 00:32:875 (4,5) - for newbie(picture), try to change NC's color ( i gess you are right, i'll probably change the color order in the .osu file later )
4. 00:44:232 (1,2) - swap NC, I hear 00:45:089 (2) - have a stress instead 00:44:232 (1) - ( fixed )
5. 01:08:446 (2) - try to repeat a time to get much easier to read for newbie (picture) ( disagree )
6. 01:12:303 (3) - don't use slider which repeat many times, I think don't have to follow the vocal, you can make other way, because this is very suddenly and can't previse for newbie ( i'm mostly following vocal in this diff, and i think vocal should be followed specially in this part )
7. 01:18:732 (1,2) - I feel strange for there, because 01:19:375 - give me a feeling which there should have a note to hit ,but actually there no have note, try to get there like this (hm i think i know what you mean, but i think the vocal in this part sounds like should be mapped in "two parts" not three)

you should care the combo's color (run, but anyway, good diff :3 ( lol thanks ^^ )

[Jonin]

1. 00:06:518 (1) - this is a little hard to read the time point, because the combo color is a little dark for there and the sliderfollowcircle, try to get 00:06:303 (5,1) - swap NC ( i dont think its that bad, i may consider changing if more people point this out )
2. 00:12:946 (5,1) - swap NC, I hear there like 00:06:518 (1,2) - piano sound ( okay )
3. 00:32:018 (2) - there is uncomfortable with present distance when play, try to use 1.3x distance will much better ( i will change if more people complain )
4. 00:34:589 (2) - there flow isn't smooth or comfortable, how about get it on x:256 y:236? I think flow will better than present ( works too but i dont think its needed )
5. 01:12:732 (5) - this distance is a bit hard to read with the video, try to reduce distance or NC it will easier to read ( NC )
6. 01:16:375 (1,2,3) - spacing dosen't consistent, i think would fail to read for someone, try to get (2) on x:348 y:200, (3) on x:164 y:200 ( i will change if more people complain )

I have nothing to say, good :3 ( )

[Insane]

1. 00:10:803 (4) - I think this slider might be very confused for people when play, there shouldn't use this slider to set because isn't suitable, try to this ( i like this slider )
2. 00:26:446 (1,2,3,4) - this is hard to read, because jump is followed by anti-jump and the video, how about this, or 00:26:232 (5,1) - swap NC ( swaping NC )
3. 01:05:660 (4,5,6) - try to reduce a repeat, I think there is a little overmap for music, reduce a repeat would be suitable for music, comfortable for playing( if i remove the repeats it will feel boring, i think it fits the vocal btw )

nothing to say ~ ( )

good luck for rank~ pimpG :3 ( thanks, lets mod4mod again later )

ThoomyyxD wrote:

Need Mod? :3

kajiyatta wrote:

from this queue
General
00:14:232~ I suppose this blank seems weird, you can put some notes better. (i dont like this part of the music, sounds so different from all the rest, i mean... if i mapped this part would need a different mapping style and it would look a different map.... its difficult to explain )
Genin
Placement
00:07:375(1) wrong spacing, set × 0.8 better. ( intentional, its fine since they are 2 beats away )
00:48:946(1,2,3,4,) to be symmetrical on the center, move like this? (not suposed to be simetrical, its fine too but i'll keep mines)

SPOILER

01:01:803(5) not curved nice imo (if more people complain maybe i change)

SPOILER

Chunin
Placement
00:26:232(2) this not isn't clear, move a bit away? (changed)
Rhythm
01:08:446(2) add reverse same as (1)? it's more nice flow/ (okay)
01:12:303(3) too many reverses make confused for newbie even if Normal. e.g) (i will try to find a good shape for this pattern, or i'll keep the current)

SPOILER

Jonin
Placement
00:47:446(2) 2 grid up to avoid touching (1) (intentional)
00:56:660(4) stack (3) not (5) better since the vocal has emphasized at (5) (disagree,but i'll consider if more people point this out)
Hit Sonud
01:07:803(1) add wwistle at head and reverse. (nice catch, fixed)

Kage
Placement
00:43:589(4) to make a tiny jump, Ctrl+G? (if more people point this, maybe)
Hit Sonud
00:27:732(1) add clap? same with Easy & Normal. (there is no clap here in the other diffs, clap would be too loud unless i decrease volume to something like 15%)
00:29:218(6) delete whistle at slider tick? not added in other diffs yet. (following piano, and yes its unique to Kage)
00:35:875(5)^ (^)
01:07:803(9) add whistle at head? (works for now, but i was thinking about remove this whistles in ticks that has claps already)

nice map. good luck & star~ ( thank you a lot for mod and star, i'll take a look at your map as soon as possible )

yurunneram wrote:

Genin
01:04:803 (2,1,2,3,4) - Did u form a proper pentagon with this? I'm sure the gap between 01:04:803 (2) and 01:06:518 (4) should be smaller ( my 1st idea for this part was not a pentagon, i just make it look a bit more like one, i think its fine as it is )

Chunin
00:26:232 (2) - a little hard to hit for normal... (changed a bit)
00:32:875 (4) - Distance problem. Sorry that you wanted it to be symmetrical but in normal diffs distancing is very important. Change ( distance is not bad here, it fits the small vocal pause, its fine to break ds a bit for symmetry, its even easier than the general ds)

Jonin
00:06:303 (5,1,2,3,4,5) - Uh... Arrangement a bit weird... ( why? )
00:32:018 (2) - Closer to the previous note? (i'll decide asap)
00:50:553 (5,6) - Spread a bit? (if more people complain, maybe)

Kage
Nothin wrong. Nice streams (thank you )

Good luck for mod!

You have been modded out by Yurun Ceroia Neram~ ( thank you a lot for mod ... it was normal mod request from your queue, right? anyways you can pm me to mod something for you in return)

1. 00:06:089 (4,5) - swap these two ?
2. 01:01:803 (5) - curved this one ?
   
   or just straight along y-axis
3. 01:27:946 - end spinner here instead. vocal ends here

1. 00:32:875 (4) - this confuse me a lot. DS look same to the previous one but time position isn't. move it further please.
2. 01:08:446 (2) - reverse this too
3. 01:20:660 (3,4,5,6) - unstack these ?
4. 01:27:946 - end spinner here

1. 00:34:375 (1,2,3,4) - why 1.5x spacing ? i don't feel any changed to the music yet.
2. 00:45:732 (2) - how about this
   
3. 01:12:089 (2,4) - swap this two ?
4. 01:27:946 - end spinner here

(i can't properly mod insane so.. )

will check later, i'll be ways for about 7 hours
thank you

Froztic wrote:

hi, from popner's queue

all are suggestions unless underline.

[General]
i recommend you to ask mod/BAT to move this text to start at 00:15:946 instead. (yes!!, i never heard that i could change it, i thought it was just in cases that its blending with video or something, i will probably move it a bit earlier than 00:15:946)

you can ask them for coloring too! but i don't know which color fits this.
more info here t/14513

[Genin]

1. 00:06:089 (4,5) - swap these two ? ( looks/plays the same since they are simetrical, why swap? )
2. 01:01:803 (5) - curved this one ? ( i prefer the current )
   
   or just straight along y-axis ( maybe )
3. 01:27:946 - end spinner here instead. vocal ends here ( vocal is still fading after this point, check with headphones )

[Chunin]

1. 00:32:875 (4) - this confuse me a lot. DS look same to the previous one but time position isn't. move it further please. (i think its fine)
2. 01:08:446 (2) - reverse this too (fixed)
3. 01:20:660 (3,4,5,6) - unstack these ? (i like them, they are part of my symmetry for this part of the music)
4. 01:27:946 - end spinner here ( vocal is still fading after this point, check with headphones )

[Jonin]

1. 00:34:375 (1,2,3,4) - why 1.5x spacing ? i don't feel any changed to the music yet. ( vocal sounds a lot stronger than before imo )
2. 00:45:732 (2) - how about this ( i like this idea, but does not works with the current shape, i will try to think in something that works, no change for now )
   
3. 01:12:089 (2,4) - swap this two ? ( it would ruin the jump at 01:12:518 (4,1) - )
4. 01:27:946 - end spinner here ( vocal is still fading after this point, check with headphones )

[Kage]
(i can't properly mod insane so.. ) (its fine )

nice hitsound sequence here Good luck on this map ! ( thank you a lot for mod )

Rainmon wrote:

I will continue this mod in a few hours, sorry I'm a bit busy q.q

1. I absolutely agree with the mod post below me that there should be no break on 00:14:232 since vocal is still there. It's a TV size so using a break - and esspecially using it on such an unfitting place - looks lazy.
   
   
2. I'm really not an expert in such things, but isn't there a japanese unicode for the song title?
   
   
3. The preview time is a bit strange since you get a really short cut into the KIAI which doesnt fit. I suggest to move it to 00:55:696
   
   
4. For the claps which are for example on 00:08:232 it should be possible to find a good costum since the default sounds meeh here.

1. 00:02:018 (3) - This rhythm is just odd, the Slider starts on red which makes it also strange to play. I suggest to extend 3 to the position 4 starts and to delete 4, after this add a repeat to 3. I'd like to change rhythm here since it sounds really strange.
2. 00:03:946 (4) - An NC would help to seperate anti jumps and this and also signal the same musical part as before.
3. 00:04:803 (4) - Missing a clap on the start according to the music.
4. 00:05:446 (7) - Similar issue, since you may hear that there is almost no sound on 7's end. How about removing 7 and move 8 to it's place, after that add a repeat to 8/7.
5. 00:06:518 (1,2,3,4,5) - Hm, hitsound pattern can be improved on this. Try a whistle on 2 and 4, remove the one on 3 and keep the finish on 5.
6. 00:10:803 (4) - NC for the same reason as the last one.
7. 00:10:803 (4) - This Slider's rhythm doesn't follow anything in the music nor emphasizes anything. In other words: it's pointless to use this ryhthm. Extending it to the white tick would be so much better.
8. 00:23:446 (3,4,5) - Looks odd like it is now, would be better to space them out, and also increase flow and tidy the pattern up.
9. 00:27:303 - Here should also be a note considering that the guitar hasn't stop playing.
10. 00:27:732 (1) - Add a clap according to the sound in the music.
11. 00:30:732 (5) - To follow the high tone in the melody, how about adding a whistle to the end?
12. 00:36:839 (5) - Stacking this feels uneasy to play and is actually weird. I'd like it to be spaced out.
13. 00:39:089 (3,4) - High tones are prominent here, so I'd like to add a whistle on 4 and on the end of 3.
14. 00:51:946 (1) - Changing to Normal sampleset for this stream sounds too cool in my opinion, try it :>
15. 00:56:875 (5,6,7) - Spacing them out seems a lot tidier and cooler imo.
16. 01:02:446 (1,3) - Hmm, start NC on 3 and remove it on 1? Emphasizes musical change better in my opinion.
17. 01:05:660 (4,5,6) - This is frustrating to play and doesn't follow anything good audible in the music. Hm, you may want just to change to a steady normal rhyhtm to keep things consistent.
18. 01:09:946 (2) - Slider's start feels empty u.u, so how about a whistle?
19. 01:11:018 (4) - CTRL + G flows kinda awesome here, you may wanna give it a try.
20. 01:16:803 (4) - Same about the Slider's start as 01:09:946 (2) -
21. 01:21:946 (1) - You may also want to try to add a Normal sampleset section for this stream.

1. 00:00:946 (2) - Repeat should have clap, I guess you can hear it in the BGM?
2. 00:06:518 (1,2,3,4,5) - Same hitsound pattern suggestion as in Kage.
3. 00:07:803 (1) - Same about this repeat.
4. 00:13:160 (2) - Add a whistle for the high tone to Sliderstart? Would fit nice.
5. 00:34:375 (1,2,3) - That jumps are just jumps to be jumps, am I right? I'd remove them since they dont fit into anything in the music.
6. 00:38:232 (1) - Add a whistle to the Spinner, that end sounds much better like this.
7. 00:46:375 (3) - Please, don't change spacing just because you feel like lol. Please correct spacing here, it looks like 1/2 currently, which is confusing.
8. 00:50:553 (5) - No, please remove this note. I strongly recommend not to use triples in a Hard diff! Esspecially if they don't follow the song in a very direct way.
9. 01:18:732 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Really hard to read. Esspecially for a Hard diff. Adding a NC to 6 would make it much easier to distungish.

00:45 Konei: Hey pimpG
00:45 pimpG: yo o/
00:45 *Konei is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/219454 RAM WIRE - Daijoubu Bokura (TV Size) [Chunin]]
00:45 pimpG: oh wait ><
00:45 Konei: Modded Kage and Jonin diff per Forum?
00:45 Konei: *-?
00:45 pimpG: i'm replying to a previous mod
00:45 pimpG: someone modded before you
00:46 Konei: I saw
00:46 pimpG: ill update soon
00:46 Konei: anyways, could we mod chunin and Genin per irc?
00:46 pimpG:  yes ^^
00:46 pimpG: but dont spect me to make huge changes OwO
00:47 Konei: lol
00:47 Konei: ok
00:47 Konei: its a nice map though
00:47 Konei: dont worry
00:47 pimpG: thanks ^^
00:47 pimpG: and i'm worried
00:47 Konei: for?
00:48 pimpG: some mat will mod it soon i gess
00:48 pimpG: if a mat think its not good, i will lose motivation
00:48 pimpG: i hate remaps
00:49 Konei: it wont come to a remap lol
00:49 Konei: trust me
00:49 pimpG:  i hope so
00:50 Konei: 00:03:303 (1) - Whistle to the end?
00:50 Konei: btw, Chunin
00:50 pimpG: i'm appying the final sugestions from sonnyc
00:50 pimpG: i'll finish in 2 minutes
00:50 Konei: sure sure
00:51 Konei: let me just post my suggestions here lol
00:52 pimpG: done
00:53 Konei: cool
00:53 pimpG: i just need to submit
00:54 Konei: you're a good Aesthetics mapper
00:54 pimpG: what is aesthetics?
00:54 Konei: neat pattern etc
00:55 pimpG: shapes? or notes in the timeline?
00:55 Konei: shapes 
00:55 pimpG: i gess i am ^^
00:55 pimpG: thanks for notice that
00:56 Konei: 00:13:160 (1) - This Spinner is a bit too short for a Normal imo
00:56 Konei: how about replacing it with a Slider?
00:56 pimpG: i dont think its that short
00:56 pimpG: spinner makes more sense imo
00:56 Konei: 00:32:875 (4) - Spacing here is wrong
00:57 pimpG: intentional
00:57 Konei: why?
00:57 pimpG: for the symmetry
00:57 Konei: but it is a Normal difficulty
00:57 Konei: spacing should be consistent
00:57 pimpG: do you think its totally unreadable?
00:58 Konei: you shouldn't give more worth on symmetry than on readabilty
00:58 pimpG: spacing is easier than the general ds
00:58 Konei: Yeah, but that would be an antijump
00:58 Konei: anyways
00:59 pimpG: i used some in my 1st map too
00:59 pimpG: for shape
00:59 Konei: you could just add a note on 00:32:660 - () and stack it with 5 to fix it
00:59 pimpG: but i think its too complex for normal
00:59 pimpG: its harder than having this spacing issue
00:59 pimpG: imo
01:00 Konei: 00:30:732 (1,2) - are also stacked
01:00 pimpG: stacking is fine
01:00 Konei: yeah
01:00 pimpG: but too many stack that close
01:00 pimpG: i tried that, i swear
01:01 Konei: Well ok
01:01 Konei: I wont force my opinion lol
01:01 pimpG: im' really stubborn anyways ^^
01:02 Konei: 01:07:803 (1) - Add a whistle to the repeat?
01:02 Konei: Sounds nice
01:02 pimpG: yeah ><
01:02 pimpG: fixed
01:03 Konei: 01:12:303 (3) - Ehh, dont you think that many repeats might be confusing?
01:03 pimpG: i will fix it asap
01:03 pimpG: since too many people complained
01:03 Konei: cool
01:03 pimpG: but i dont think so
01:04 Konei: That's all about Chunin lol
01:04 Konei: nice diff
01:04 pimpG: thanks ^^
01:04 pimpG: good sugestions too
01:05 Konei: 00:38:232 (1) - Whistle to this Spinner?
01:05 Konei: Sounds a bit empty at the moment
01:05 pimpG: yeah
01:05 pimpG: face palm*
01:05 pimpG: fixed
01:06 Konei: 01:01:803 (4) - Angle looks a bit weird, how about just making it straight?
01:07 pimpG: i'll change since you are the 3rd or 4th to complain
01:07 pimpG: but i dont think its weird 
01:07 pimpG: ~: D
01:07 pimpG: : D
01:07 Konei: lol
01:07 Konei: 01:21:946 (2) - This could be worked out a bit better if you stack the end with one of the circles
01:08 Konei: Like this http://puu.sh/2sM91
01:08 pimpG: its probably not noticeable ingame
01:09 Konei: let me check
01:09 Konei: you're right
01:09 pimpG: i'll keep the current ^^
01:09 pimpG: i moved up a bit to fix blanket anyways
01:10 Konei: 00:00:946 (1) - Could it be that you missed the tick sound on 00:02:660 ?
01:10 pimpG: no
01:11 pimpG: i'm keeping it simple intentionally
01:11 Konei: ok, then it is intentionally
01:11 Konei: kay kay
01:11 Konei: that's all
01:11 Konei: Really neat mapset

Sonnyc wrote:

General:

-- To be honest, I can't understand why you haven't mapped the break. I usually don't like to suggest parts to map, but I don't know why there is a break. The lyrics are keep singing.. :~ ( i don't like the vocal in that part, if i map it it would look totally different than the map in general )
-- You should Increase the volume at the kiai. 50% is too small, consider pulling it up to like 70. ( i'll get more opinion about it )
-- For the last spinner, end it at 01:28:160. The song ends here. ( vocal ends at 01:28:589 - check with headphones )

Genin:

00:58:375 (1,2) - Start NC at (2). That will look better with your pattern.
01:05:232 (1,2) - ^
01:12:089 (1,2) - ^
01:18:946 (1,2) - ^
01:21:946 (2) - Placing at (252,184) will make a better blanket.
( fixed all in Genin )

Chunin:

00:32:875 (4) - This was a symmetry pattern, but well since the rhythm wasn't symmetric, the distance in 00:32:232 (3) wasn't the same. So I suggest to NC (4) to make players less confused with distance. This also fits the song~ (fixed)
01:12:303 (3) - Well, 4 repeats isn't quite expected in this kind of slider.. Replace with 3 1/2 sliders please. ( i will fix it as soon as possible since more modders complained, but i really like this slider )
01:17:446 (2) - 1 Grid down. (it would break the distance snap here and does not look so different)

Jonin:

00:24:732 (5) - Delete Whistle at the end. This sounded quite noisy for me, ( its following vocal, i will consider if more people complain )
00:31:375 (1,2) - I can't say this is a nice jump. I hope this was a mistake ._. ( it wasn't. i wanted to play a bit with distance snap in this part, but i saved the biggest jumps to kiai, i will not make them harder, but i can consider making them easier if more people complain )
00:32:875 (4,5) - ^ ( ^ )
00:59:018 (3,4) - Give a curve at (3) heading (4) to make a better flow. ( changed )
01:13:803 (3) - NC this. Current distance is kinda confusing because of the jump at 01:12:732 (1,2). ( fixed )

Kage:

-- Stack Leniency 5 because 00:58:160 (1,3). ( interesting sugestion... i'll get more opinion about it )

00:02:446 (4) - ctrl+G? A perfect symmetry pattern would rather be nice. (i want to keep it because of the small jump)
00:07:375 (5) - (390,281) to make this stack. (note : this is because it's getting affected by stack leniency 5~) ( i'll get more opinion about it )
00:13:482 (2) - Delete this? I can't here a stream at this part of the song. ( my stream will be ruined if i delete this note )
00:24:946 (7) - Delete Whistle? As "Jonin".. ( its following vocal, i will consider if more people complain )
00:38:875 (2) - Make the distance around 1.50x. A long note didn't felt nice. ( i'll get more opinion about it )
01:09:946 (2) - I think making the end Whistle than a Clap will sound better. ( i'm keeping clap and adding whistle )
01:16:803 (4) - ^ ( ^ )

thank you so much for your really helpful mod

Konei wrote:

Mod for your timing help!


[General]

1. I absolutely agree with the mod post below me that there should be no break on 00:14:232 since vocal is still there. It's a TV size so using a break - and esspecially using it on such an unfitting place - looks lazy. ( don't say lazy . anyways i explained already. my decision stands )
   
   
2. I'm really not an expert in such things, but isn't there a japanese unicode for the song title? ( it's included already )
   
   
3. The preview time is a bit strange since you get a really short cut into the KIAI which doesnt fit. I suggest to move it to 00:55:696 ( maybe )
   
   
4. For the claps which are for example on 00:08:232 it should be possible to find a good costum since the default sounds meeh here. ( it happened because you was one of the 1st persons that saw that map since i sent it to you before submitting it to osu!. so probably i was not using this custom when i sent it to you )

[Kage]

1. 00:02:018 (3) - This rhythm is just odd, the Slider starts on red which makes it also strange to play. I suggest to extend 3 to the position 4 starts and to delete 4, after this add a repeat to 3. I'd like to change rhythm here since it sounds really strange. ( lol looks to be preference since nobody else complained about it. it follows vocal perfectly, and if i follow your sugestion it will be easier than hard )
2. 00:03:946 (4) - An NC would help to seperate anti jumps and this and also signal the same musical part as before. ( i'll get more opinion about it )
3. 00:04:803 (4) - Missing a clap on the start according to the music. ( i'm only following vocal and piano at the start, clap is too noisy )
4. 00:05:446 (7) - Similar issue, since you may hear that there is almost no sound on 7's end. How about removing 7 and move 8 to it's place, after that add a repeat to 8/7. ( same as i said before, and this part will not "feel" like an insane if i follow this sugestion )
5. 00:06:518 (1,2,3,4,5) - Hm, hitsound pattern can be improved on this. Try a whistle on 2 and 4, remove the one on 3 and keep the finish on 5. ( the louder piano sound is at 3, thats why i'm only using whistle there , i'll consider if more people sugest )
6. 00:10:803 (4) - NC for the same reason as the last one. ( i'll get more opinion about it )
7. 00:10:803 (4) - This Slider's rhythm doesn't follow anything in the music nor emphasizes anything. In other words: it's pointless to use this ryhthm. Extending it to the white tick would be so much better. ( thats not true, i'm using slider tick 2 and i added a custom whistle to follow vocal at the 2nd tick, it ends on a red tick and its not like its impossible to read/hit. flows nice and its well made. yes, its mapped in an unusual way, but thats what i call improve and thinking big )
8. 00:23:446 (3,4,5) - Looks odd like it is now, would be better to space them out, and also increase flow and tidy the pattern up. ( i'll get more opinion about it )
9. 00:27:303 - Here should also be a note considering that the guitar hasn't stop playing. ( i'm considering having a decent brak before the vocal starts again. also 00:25:589 (2,3,4,1) - is just 4 louder guitar sounds so i wanted to follow only 4 lower guitar sounds at 00:26:446 (2,3,4,5) - )
10. 00:27:732 (1) - Add a clap according to the sound in the music. (fixed, also helped me to find a whistle inconsistency between the diffs)
11. 00:30:732 (5) - To follow the high tone in the melody, how about adding a whistle to the end? ( would not sound good since there is a whistle following piano in the previous white tick : ( )
12. 00:36:839 (5) - Stacking this feels uneasy to play and is actually weird. I'd like it to be spaced out. ( i tried to space them before, but dont like how it looked )
13. 00:39:089 (3,4) - High tones are prominent here, so I'd like to add a whistle on 4 and on the end of 3. ( facepalm* how could i miss this whistle at 4, nice catch, fixed, but not adding at 3's slider end since there is one at start, i only use whistle in the stronger vocals and pianos )
14. 00:51:946 (1) - Changing to Normal sampleset for this stream sounds too cool in my opinion, try it :> ( changed to normal with 30% volume )
15. 00:56:875 (5,6,7) - Spacing them out seems a lot tidier and cooler imo. ( my distance snap logic is based on vocal, its not calling for a harder jump imo )
16. 01:02:446 (1,3) - Hmm, start NC on 3 and remove it on 1? Emphasizes musical change better in my opinion. ( i dont disagree to that, but the previous combo is the slow down part following piano, i cant consider this two notes as part of them )
17. 01:05:660 (4,5,6) - This is frustrating to play and doesn't follow anything good audible in the music. Hm, you may want just to change to a steady normal rhyhtm to keep things consistent. ( i like this sliders )
18. 01:09:946 (2) - Slider's start feels empty u.u, so how about a whistle? ( maybe )
19. 01:11:018 (4) - CTRL + G flows kinda awesome here, you may wanna give it a try. ( yes!!! )
20. 01:16:803 (4) - Same about the Slider's start as 01:09:946 (2) - ( maybe )
21. 01:21:946 (1) - You may also want to try to add a Normal sampleset section for this stream. ( i think soft works better here )

[Jonin]

1. 00:00:946 (2) - Repeat should have clap, I guess you can hear it in the BGM? ( i'm only following vocal and piano at the start, and i'm already using a custom whistle in the repeat )
2. 00:06:518 (1,2,3,4,5) - Same hitsound pattern suggestion as in Kage. ( the louder piano sound is at 3, thats why i'm only using whistle there , i'll consider if more people sugest )
3. 00:07:803 (1) - Same about this repeat. ( same as i said )
4. 00:13:160 (2) - Add a whistle for the high tone to Sliderstart? Would fit nice. ( the previous tick is the louder, i will keep it as it is )
5. 00:34:375 (1,2,3) - That jumps are just jumps to be jumps, am I right? I'd remove them since they dont fit into anything in the music. ( my distance snap logic is based on vocal, this parts calls for higher ds but i'm saving the hardest jumps to kiai )
6. 00:38:232 (1) - Add a whistle to the Spinner, that end sounds much better like this. ( no because the next note is using whistle too, sounds strange having whistle in both )
7. 00:46:375 (3) - Please, don't change spacing just because you feel like lol. Please correct spacing here, it looks like 1/2 currently, which is confusing. ( lol, that's not a problem since its a hard, also this part follows the same rhythm as the previous 3 combos, all of them uses this 1/1 between the next/previous, so its easy to figure it out )
8. 00:50:553 (5) - No, please remove this note. I strongly recommend not to use triples in a Hard diff! Esspecially if they don't follow the song in a very direct way. ( pace changed since 00:48:518 - so it was suposed to be harder )
9. 01:18:732 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Really hard to read. Esspecially for a Hard diff. Adding a NC to 6 would make it much easier to distungish. ( fixed )

IRC log Chunin and Genin

00:45 Konei: Hey pimpG
00:45 pimpG: yo o/
00:45 *Konei is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/219454 RAM WIRE - Daijoubu Bokura (TV Size) [Chunin]]
00:45 pimpG: oh wait ><
00:45 Konei: Modded Kage and Jonin diff per Forum?
00:45 Konei: *-?
00:45 pimpG: i'm replying to a previous mod
00:45 pimpG: someone modded before you
00:46 Konei: I saw
00:46 pimpG: ill update soon
00:46 Konei: anyways, could we mod chunin and Genin per irc?
00:46 pimpG:  yes ^^
00:46 pimpG: but dont spect me to make huge changes OwO
00:47 Konei: lol
00:47 Konei: ok
00:47 Konei: its a nice map though
00:47 Konei: dont worry
00:47 pimpG: thanks ^^
00:47 pimpG: and i'm worried
00:47 Konei: for?
00:48 pimpG: some mat will mod it soon i gess
00:48 pimpG: if a mat think its not good, i will lose motivation
00:48 pimpG: i hate remaps
00:49 Konei: it wont come to a remap lol
00:49 Konei: trust me
00:49 pimpG:  i hope so
00:50 Konei: 00:03:303 (1) - Whistle to the end?
00:50 Konei: btw, Chunin
00:50 pimpG: i'm appying the final sugestions from sonnyc
00:50 pimpG: i'll finish in 2 minutes
00:50 Konei: sure sure
00:51 Konei: let me just post my suggestions here lol
00:52 pimpG: done
00:53 Konei: cool
00:53 pimpG: i just need to submit
00:54 Konei: you're a good Aesthetics mapper
00:54 pimpG: what is aesthetics?
00:54 Konei: neat pattern etc
00:55 pimpG: shapes? or notes in the timeline?
00:55 Konei: shapes 
00:55 pimpG: i gess i am ^^
00:55 pimpG: thanks for notice that
00:56 Konei: 00:13:160 (1) - This Spinner is a bit too short for a Normal imo
00:56 Konei: how about replacing it with a Slider?
00:56 pimpG: i dont think its that short
00:56 pimpG: spinner makes more sense imo
00:56 Konei: 00:32:875 (4) - Spacing here is wrong
00:57 pimpG: intentional
00:57 Konei: why?
00:57 pimpG: for the symmetry
00:57 Konei: but it is a Normal difficulty
00:57 Konei: spacing should be consistent
00:57 pimpG: do you think its totally unreadable?
00:58 Konei: you shouldn't give more worth on symmetry than on readabilty
00:58 pimpG: spacing is easier than the general ds
00:58 Konei: Yeah, but that would be an antijump
00:58 Konei: anyways
00:59 pimpG: i used some in my 1st map too
00:59 pimpG: for shape
00:59 Konei: you could just add a note on 00:32:660 - () and stack it with 5 to fix it
00:59 pimpG: but i think its too complex for normal
00:59 pimpG: its harder than having this spacing issue
00:59 pimpG: imo
01:00 Konei: 00:30:732 (1,2) - are also stacked
01:00 pimpG: stacking is fine
01:00 Konei: yeah
01:00 pimpG: but too many stack that close
01:00 pimpG: i tried that, i swear
01:01 Konei: Well ok
01:01 Konei: I wont force my opinion lol
01:01 pimpG: im' really stubborn anyways ^^
01:02 Konei: 01:07:803 (1) - Add a whistle to the repeat?
01:02 Konei: Sounds nice
01:02 pimpG: yeah ><
01:02 pimpG: fixed
01:03 Konei: 01:12:303 (3) - Ehh, dont you think that many repeats might be confusing?
01:03 pimpG: i will fix it asap
01:03 pimpG: since too many people complained
01:03 Konei: cool
01:03 pimpG: but i dont think so
01:04 Konei: That's all about Chunin lol
01:04 Konei: nice diff
01:04 pimpG: thanks ^^
01:04 pimpG: good sugestions too
01:05 Konei: 00:38:232 (1) - Whistle to this Spinner?
01:05 Konei: Sounds a bit empty at the moment
01:05 pimpG: yeah
01:05 pimpG: face palm*
01:05 pimpG: fixed
01:06 Konei: 01:01:803 (4) - Angle looks a bit weird, how about just making it straight?
01:07 pimpG: i'll change since you are the 3rd or 4th to complain
01:07 pimpG: but i dont think its weird 
01:07 pimpG: ~: D
01:07 pimpG: : D
01:07 Konei: lol
01:07 Konei: 01:21:946 (2) - This could be worked out a bit better if you stack the end with one of the circles
01:08 Konei: Like this http://puu.sh/2sM91
01:08 pimpG: its probably not noticeable ingame
01:09 Konei: let me check
01:09 Konei: you're right
01:09 pimpG: i'll keep the current ^^
01:09 pimpG: i moved up a bit to fix blanket anyways
01:10 Konei: 00:00:946 (1) - Could it be that you missed the tick sound on 00:02:660 ?
01:10 pimpG: no
01:11 pimpG: i'm keeping it simple intentionally
01:11 Konei: ok, then it is intentionally
01:11 Konei: kay kay
01:11 Konei: that's all
01:11 Konei: Really neat mapset

popner wrote:

From my special rules queue.

[Kage]
00:09:303 (4,1) - try to avoid the overlap here? ( it was somehow intentinal, but fixed )
01:05:660 (4,5,6,7) - listen carefully, you will find the rhythm here should be: ( do i really neeed to change this? i'm mostly following vocal in kiai and i still hear vocal in those blue ticks, i see some ranked maps with slider ends on 1/8 tick before a note when there is nothing in the 1/8, if possible i want to keep the current )

SPOILER

01:19:803 (4,5) - rotate the symmetric sliders a little to make various pattern? ( changed )

SPOILER

[Jonin]
00:32:875 (4,5) - nazi - move (5) upside s little to keep the spacing between the sliders? Like:

SPOILER

00:41:660 (2,3) - the blanket can be improved like this:

SPOILER

00:58:160 (1,2,3,4) - the pattern looks weird here because the distance between slider heads is inconsistent. Please try to fix it by move 00:59:018 (3):

SPOILER

( all fixed in jonin )

[Chunin]
01:18:732 (1,2) - the rhythm here is difficult since both sliders start on red tick, and 01:18:732 (1) ends on big white tick where there new vocal starts. You may try this: ( i think my two sliders fits the vocal better, i know this part is harder than the other red tick patterns but i gess its fine since its the end of the song )

SPOILER

[Genin]
00:40:375 (1,2) - maybe the after spinner notes are too difficult in this lowest diff(close to previous spinner). ( maybe.. but changed, now its 2 beats instead of 1,5 beats between them )
01:04:803 (2,3,1,2,3) - make the polygon better? ( i know what you mean but i would need to change the next notes position a bit, and if i make it a real polygon it will not make smooth movement to next combo, i didnt wanted this to be a polygon )

Call me back after you update it.( okay )

pimpG wrote:

popner wrote:

From my special rules queue.

[Kage]
00:09:303 (4,1) - try to avoid the overlap here? ( it was somehow intentinal, but fixed )
01:05:660 (4,5,6,7) - listen carefully, you will find the rhythm here should be: ( do i really neeed to change this? i'm mostly following vocal in kiai and i still hear vocal in those blue ticks, i see some ranked maps with slider ends on 1/8 tick before a note when there is nothing in the 1/8, if possible i want to keep the current )

SPOILER

Philippines wrote: