Flower wrote:

Hi~

[General]
IN your three diffs, it's a good idea if you use claps as a pattern, between 01:14:773 - and 02:26:773 - , like in Redzero.
combo 2,4,6,8 are too similar to 1,3,5,7. try some more distinct colours. {I have ensured that 2 is never used right after 1, and etc, except the start where the colour theme is very obvious. The colour choices fit the Red, White, Black, Yellow (RWBY) theme.}
I think the first red section should be 70 instead of 140. please consider. {There's a light "boom" sound on downbeat with 140, so I'm keeping it}
01:41:773 - you need to recheck timing around here. in Redzero the downbeat notes are put on blue ticks.{Maybe, but it's a relatively small part affected.
02:26:773 (1) - start at 02:26:810 -

[Redzero]
before 01:08:642 - there is heavy overmap. I don't get the point that you add so many notes that there is no beat in the music. it's necessary to remap this part.
01:23:473 (2,3) - ctrl+G for better flow. distance to the next 1 is not a problem.
01:41:473 (5,6) - try ctrl+G?
01:42:598 (3,4) - move down a bit, so that it's not overlapped with 01:41:623 (6) -
01:57:073 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13) - make better shape. use "convert slider into stream" as a help
Good diff.

[Crescent Rose]
if you want to keep the distance spacing, please turn grid snap off and re-arrange the notes, because there is noticeable spacing inconsistency between notes while the grid snap is not always accurate. {They're accurate enough for me, the ones I'm more concerned about are spacing that breaks patterns, which grid snap helps.} {Did a spacing recheck for over-the-top grid snaps, anyway.}
before 01:08:642 - there is heavy overmap. same as Redzero, you should remap this part {It is mapped to the soft beat at the back.}
02:07:273 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - I don't really get the sudden jump. reducing distance is not a bad idea. {Accelerates to the main jump at (6 to 11), instead of an even more sudden jump. There was also a jump used at the same tune at 02:00:673 (3,4,5,6,7,8).}

[Crimson Rose]
same as previous diff, please turn grid snap off and re-arrange the notes {same as above.}
01:20:923 - add a note

[Red Rose]
after 02:45:890 - strongly recommended that you keep distance spacing on kiai time, the same as previous parts. Sudden speed up confused the player. {Distance multiplier is unchanged; spacing change is due to BPM change and thus I feel it's fitting.}

Good luck~

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Charles445 wrote:

feat. goes in artist, not title.