cFiszpan wrote:

You asked for Guest diffs, thence I'll make the Easy and Normal ones ^.^

EDIT: [Just if u want', ] You could put a spinner at the end ^^ (: or even a long-and-slower slider ^^

Pereira006 wrote:

cFiszpan wrote:

You asked for Guest diffs, thence I'll make the Easy and Normal ones ^.^

make one diff only easy or normal if you wich, but i wanna good diff lol

cFiszpan wrote:

After all corrections and [a lot of] work... that's it ---> http://www.mediafire.com/?zc59il0bzj4t4wz

Warning: it can be annoying [for some ppl], but at least follows osu!rules... at least 98% of time ^^

1. remove short ver in title due to https://osu.ppy.sh/forum/t/89198 you can add PV Ver or TV Size since it's the opening
2. right artist is ichigo (http://vgmdb.net/artist/2416)
3. Tags: (add if after the tags u have right now) Kinema Kan opening th04 Lotus Land Story Kishida Kyoudan & The Akeboshi Rockets because:
   
   1. It's the opening of Touhou Kinema Kan
   2. Original theme (Inanimate Dream) comes from TH04 Lotus Land Story
   3. Kishida Kyoudan & The Akeboshi Rockets is the arrange group where ichigo is a singer (proof)
4. OMG U'RE THE FIRST WHO TYPED ORIGINAL TRACK /me gives some love

1. HP+1 for consistency with other diffs (2-4-6-7 is better than 1-4-6-7, and jump between Easy and Normal is too high)
2. 00:09:609 (3) - NC for combopattern (or remove it in 00:15:609 (1) - if u think there's no need for 1 combo)
3. 00:32:109 (1) - improve this blanket maybe?
4. 00:34:734 (3) - finish instead of clap (BGM has two finishes here)
5. 00:39:984 (3) - also NC here for ur combopattern (fits and looks nice imo)
6. 00:40:734 (2) - finish instead of clap, same reason
7. 00:41:109 (1) - second point at x:116 y:64 or something like that http://puu.sh/21o7m
8. 00:44:109 (1) - if u do ^ copy that slider and put it here
9. 00:45:984 (2) - finish instead of a clap (end), same reason as in 00:34:734 (3) -
10. 00:50:859 (2) - ^
11. 00:51:609 (3) - NC + finish for ur pattern
12. 00:51:984 (4) - finish (there are 3 finishes) or clap for ur pattern orz
13. 00:52:734 - add a note here (x:304 y:96) with drum clap (<= suggestion) pls, this place have strong beat
14. 00:54:609 (3) - add finish at the end (as in BGM)
15. 00:58:359 (5) - ^ (beginning)
16. 01:01:359 (5) - ^
17. 01:03:234 (2,3) - ^ (for (3)'s begin too)
18. 01:15:609 (1) - ^ (end; use soft sampleset)
19. 01:34:392 (2,3) - drum whistle at (2) and normal clap at (3) will be awesum

1. 00:18:609 (2) - isn't the finish at begin intentional? u didn't do it in next (the same) places so remove pls
2. 00:34:734 (2) - finish instead of a clap (BGM give us the finishes o3o)
3. 00:39:609 (3) - ^ (end and 1st repeat - use the soft sampleset for repeat)
4. 00:46:359 (3) - ^ (end)
5. 00:51:609 (3) - ^ (begin - missed as of ur finish pattern 1 big white tick; 1st repeat - use the soft sampleset for repeat) also drum clap at the end will be nice
6. 00:55:359 (5) - finish as of BGM
7. 00:58:359 (5) - ^ (begin)
8. 01:01:359 (5) - ^
9. 01:03:234 (3,5) - ^ (at (5)'s begin too)
10. 01:15:796 (3) - delete this note, this should be snapped in 1/4 (1/2 hears off) but your Normal is already a bit hard, so it's better choose to delete
11. 01:34:392 (2,3) - drum whistle at (2) and normal clap at (3) will be awesum

1. your diff hasn't video :U fix it pls
2. 00:34:546 (4) - finish instead of a clap (end)
3. 00:40:734 (6) - ^
4. 00:42:609 (1) - last point 1 grid left?
5. 00:46:733 (4) - finish instead of a clap
6. 00:52:734 (6) - ^ (soft sampleset)
7. 00:55:359 (8) - ^ (beginning)
8. 00:55:921 (9) - clap here?
9. 00:58:359 (7) - finish
10. 01:01:170 (7) - ^ (repeat)
11. 01:03:234 (6) - ^ (begin) (remove clap ofc)
12. 01:03:609 (7) - NC + finish due to combo- and finishpattern
13. 01:12:234 (5) - add note with clap? or explain why u don't add a note here
14. 01:15:234 (6) - improve the slider pls (+ add missed finish to the end - missed due to ur finishpattern after 1 big white tick)
15. 01:23:671 (2) - totally don't fit with the song, do it like http://puu.sh/21oMA
16. 01:34:392 (2,3) - whistle at (2) and clap at (3) pls

1. sorry i'm a bit tired now .__. so if you agree with my hitsounds suggest in Easy check the Lunatic and add it there too
2. 00:48:609 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - i find this pattern so confusing, how about add some NCs? do it like (1,2,1,2,1,2,3) so players can see this is a jump
3. 01:23:859 (5) - do it prettier pls ;ww;
4. 01:26:859 (4,5) - how about doing like http://puu.sh/21oU1
5. 01:30:429 - y u don't add a note here? next (the same) parts have atleast sliderend here
6. 01:40:738 (1) - NC?

BCI wrote:

uguu M4M

I leave hitsounds and combos to pereira
[HD]

1. your diff hasn't video :U fix it pls
2. 00:34:546 (4) - finish instead of a clap (end)
3. 00:40:734 (6) - ^
4. 00:42:609 (1) - last point 1 grid left? yes
5. 00:46:733 (4) - finish instead of a clap
6. 00:52:734 (6) - ^ (soft sampleset)
7. 00:55:359 (8) - ^ (beginning)
8. 00:55:921 (9) - clap here?
9. 00:58:359 (7) - finish
10. 01:01:170 (7) - ^ (repeat)
11. 01:03:234 (6) - ^ (begin) (remove clap ofc)
12. 01:03:609 (7) - NC + finish due to combo- and finishpattern
13. 01:12:234 (5) - add note with clap? or explain why u don't add a note here yes fix
14. 01:15:234 (6) - improve the slider pls (+ add missed finish to the end - missed due to ur finishpattern after 1 big white tick) fix
15. 01:23:671 (2) - totally don't fit with the song, do it like http://puu.sh/21oMA i keep it
16. 01:34:392 (2,3) - whistle at (2) and clap at (3) pls

my favorite song, good luck <3

BCI wrote:

uguu M4M

00:48:609 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - i find this pattern so confusing, how about add some NCs? do it like (1,2,1,2,1,2,3) so players can see this is a jump No, keep it, I ask many player they this part don't confuse to player because the skin "Followpoint" will be read easy, also that nc don't sense because i do NC when the lyrics+drums+guitar strong (example White tick long 1/1) and NC by jump that i not like, sorry keep it
01:40:738 (1) - NC?No, keep it sorry

my favorite song, good luck <3

256,44,64171,1,0,0:0:0
360,68,64359,1,0,0:0:0
484,124,64546,1,0,0:0:0
484,260,64734,1,0,0:0:0
360,316,64921,1,0,0:0:0

LunarSakuya wrote:

hi =v=

General
Adding a spinner at the end of every diff would sound nice with the extended guitar imo i would like see more opinion because the guitar is soo lonnnnnnggg

Easy
00:15:609 (1) - end should also have SC:2 clap is don't sense for me, sorry keep it
00:39:984 (1) - Finish, hear bg music fix
01:12:609 (1,2) - Combine these to make a slider similar to 01:11:109 (1) - maybe http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/609843, I think rhythm is more consistent and easier for beginners to catch on fix, u right
01:39:620 (1) - Finish fix

DevilishTime's Normal

00:17:109 (1,2) - Kinda strange this is the only pair of double reverse sliders in a part like this. Maybe delete one reverse from each and add a single note after them? She would see this
00:39:609 (1) - I feel there should a hitsound on the first reverse, most likely a finish like 00:51:609 (1) - fix
00:43:734 (4) - NC, delete NC on 00:44:671 (1) -no, is don't sense because the lyrics look like is continue
00:54:609 (4) - Curve the other direction for some contrast in pattern http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/609849 She would see this
01:27:609 (1) - Delete NC, like 01:16:171 (3) - fix
01:39:620 (1) - Finish fix

Lunatic
00:18:234 (3) - Curve the other way? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/609862 better cursor flow imo and some contrast with 00:17:109 (1) - yeah, better flow, fix
00:25:265 (7) - hitsound maybe, theres a small drum in the bg if you hear closely i hear song with 100% volume i don't feel this drums, sorry keep it
00:36:046 (5) - Bring this out a little more to be more consistent with 00:37:546 (5) - ups, i didn't notice that, fix
00:47:671 (4,6) - why not use same rhythm as before http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/609868 but is sense too, this make fun to play i just change style this part
01:04:171 (2,3,4,5,6) - try to make this more circular/neater http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/609873 Code if you want: I like more mine, sorry

256,44,64171,1,0,0:0:0
360,68,64359,1,0,0:0:0
484,124,64546,1,0,0:0:0
484,260,64734,1,0,0:0:0
360,316,64921,1,0,0:0:0

also add more hitsound finish to consistency others diff's

Lovely touhou song! Good luck!

LunarSakuya wrote:

hi =v=

DevilishTime's Normal
00:17:109 (1,2) - Kinda strange this is the only pair of double reverse sliders in a part like this. Maybe delete one reverse from each and add a single note after them? fixed
00:39:609 (1) - I feel there should a hitsound on the first reverse, most likely a finish like 00:51:609 (1) -
00:43:734 (4) - NC, delete NC on 00:44:671 (1) -
00:54:609 (4) - Curve the other direction for some contrast in pattern http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/609849 fixed
01:27:609 (1) - Delete NC, like 01:16:171 (3) -
01:39:620 (1) - Finish


Lovely touhou song! Good luck!

LunarSakuya wrote:

hi =v=


R e d's Hard
00:33:796 (2) - If you're following the vocals, this should be on the next blue tick looks hard for hard lol, i will see what next modders say
01:27:609 (4,5) - i suggest switch the rhythms of these http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/609857 (u can ignore note placement), fits vocals better imo yes
01:39:806 (2) - needs some hitsound at the end to emphasize the drum y


Lovely touhou song! Good luck!

dalex20 wrote:

Did my best to mod o3o I did a package and bookmarked whatever I can mod >3< Devilishtime needs some words to explain so I placed it below. The other difficulties (red and perei) has some spacing adjustments and I didn't add any note whatsoever >~> The problem with perei's and red's is stacking much. If you still want me to say my comments in words, you can say. Easy diff is good and no need to correct.

i saw, you remove lot stack, i don't agree, the stack is pretty fun than unstack in my opinion, and you remove lot jumps if you see that spacing is inconsistency that mean is jump, the jump stay because is complety fit and make good flow when the lyrics+drums start so high, remove lot shape slider example the 00:42:234 (6) - is different shape with 00:43:171 (2) so i don't agree that, if shape slider will be nice to gameplay.
Also the bookmarked is nothing, i like test play full.
Also the hard red don't have jump. but still nice play and easy get SS
Nothing fix to Lunatic and hard sorry. I gonna irc with devil.

That is all. c:

1. 00:05:859 I would prefer doing something like this: http://puu.sh/21XW0 maybe you want to use it, so here is the code (need to fix spacing):
   

   44,136,5109,6,0,P|40:180|48:228,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
   268,224,5484,2,0,P|272:180|264:132,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
   96,280,5859,2,0,P|47:299|11:289,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
   216,80,6234,2,0,P|265:61|301:71,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0

2. 00:27:796 Doesn't fit to the music imo... maybe map to the drums instead? (isn't so imporant)
3. 00:52:640 maybe add note
4. 01:17:109 (1) prolong this to 01:17:765 ?
5. 01:23:765 add note
6. 01:25:171 maybe put the slider (5) to this point and add a circle at 01:25:546

1. maybe it's a bug, but osu doesn't show the video in your Diff :/
2. 00:18:796 maybe put (9) to this point and add a circle at 00:19:171 ?
3. 00:21:421 same?
4. 00:39:234 (3) put this to x:263 y:163
5. 01:14:484 put the slider (4) to this point and add a circle at 01:14:859 , so the slider fits to the snare

1. 00:06:984 (1) maybe try to create a blanket with (3) ?
2. 00:13:359 (2,3,1,2,3) create a pentagon? like this: http://puu.sh/21YEK you can use this:
   

   376,156,13359,1,0,0:0:0
   376,68,13734,1,8,0:0:0
   292,40,14109,5,0,0:0:0
   240,111,14484,1,8,0:0:0
   291,183,14859,1,0,0:0:0

3. 00:15:609 (1) try to create a blanket with (4)

1. i relly tried to find something, but this Diff is perfect!

GamerX4life wrote:

[R e d's Hard]

1. maybe it's a bug, but osu doesn't show the video in your Diff :/

first is hard second is lunatic, see the difference by seeing below the BG thing

GamerX4life wrote:

M4M:
[Lunatic]

1. 00:05:859 I would prefer doing something like this: http://puu.sh/21XW0 maybe you want to use it, so here is the code (need to fix spacing):
   i prefer mine, sorry
   

   44,136,5109,6,0,P|40:180|48:228,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
   268,224,5484,2,0,P|272:180|264:132,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
   96,280,5859,2,0,P|47:299|11:289,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
   216,80,6234,2,0,P|265:61|301:71,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0

2. 00:27:796 Doesn't fit to the music imo... maybe map to the drums instead? (isn't so imporant) [b]you can listen the melody are stream not drums
3. 00:52:640 maybe add noteu right is fit with lyrics
4. 01:17:109 (1) prolong this to 01:17:765 ? is don't sense for me, sorry keep it
5. 01:23:765 add note fix
6. 01:25:171 maybe put the slider (5) to this point and add a circle at 01:25:546 don't fit with lyrics, keep it

Hope it helps and Good Luck!

Raging Bull wrote:

Just curious why tv size?

uscobra wrote:

hi, m4m
this is a good map so if my mod isnt helpful, im sorry just suggestions

-easy-
lots of new combos here lol, i suggest you remove some no, don't matter how number are combo color, I do NC when the lyrics+drums+guitar strong (example white tick long 1/1) also to consistency other diff's this complety fit for me
01:39:992 - maybe have a spinner here instead of a slider at the end. (i think this is all diffs. did someone already mention this?)
in general feels like im just going in a constant circle, try switching up the direction with reverse sliders, gaps, etc you might righ this long, so i add slider reverse because i listen guitar here part so is fit better

-lunatic-
nice diff but one thing:
01:04:171 (2,3,4,5,6) these notes have really weird spacing. if you want to keep it that way its okay sorry keep it, you can listen the rhythm look like is increassing that fit lot here jump so stay

good map, im not good at modding good maps, sorry...

Raging Bull wrote:

Well now I could be wrong, but TV size seems wrong since it wasn't really used in some anime opening (Hence TV I think?). I'm not sure about PV. Maybe short ver?

http://osu.ppy.sh/forum/t/87323

uscobra wrote:

hi, m4m
this is a good map so if my mod isnt helpful, im sorry just suggestions


-hard-
00:11:765 (3) - how about double notes instead of these tiny sliders? tiny slider is fun and also much easy than 2 circles.

For pereira check:
00:18:609 (7) - new combo here maybe
00:21:234 (5) - same as above

good map, im not good at modding good maps, sorry...

Entreal wrote:

Hello :3!

Overall
Maybe just me, but i think the sound is too low around the middle parts.
Besides that, I don't see much problems with this!


R e d's Hard
00:31:546 - Circle no because im follow voice there
00:33:984 - ^ hum added a slider
00:34:359 - ^ no because im follow voice there


This is good, good luck

GamerX4life wrote:

M4M:


[DevilishTime's Normal]
00:06:984 (1) maybe try to create a blanket with (3) ? I don't think I got the idea
00:13:359 (2,3,1,2,3) create a pentagon? like this: http://puu.sh/21YEK nice idea, done
you can use this:

376,156,13359,1,0,0:0:0
376,68,13734,1,8,0:0:0
292,40,14109,5,0,0:0:0
240,111,14484,1,8,0:0:0
291,183,14859,1,0,0:0:0

00:15:609 (1) try to create a blanket with (4) I think I put it a bit better

Hope it helps and Good Luck!

uscobra wrote:

hi, m4m
this is a good map so if my mod isnt helpful, im sorry just suggestions


-normal-
00:09:609 (1) - needs a change of shape i think, how about an arc like this http://puu.sh/22bIX hum, I think I understand your idea, I changed a bit to improve flow but I kept the shape
01:37:384 (2,3,1,2,3,4,1) - i highly suggest you change this pattern I don't understand why, anyway I changed the square so that it isn't perfect with the grid


good map, im not good at modding good maps, sorry...

Entreal wrote:

Hello :3!

Normal
00:56:296 - Bring the circle to 00:56:109 (Follows beat, but don't if you're following vocals) the way it was follows the vocals, that was my idea
01:34:769 - Replace with finish? for Pereira to check


This is good, good luck

KiyoshiX101 wrote:

Hello Pereira!

It's been a while long time no see

Keep in mind that my Mods are not meant to modify your mapping style but just suggestions to improve it which is your choice to use them or not. If something is urgent to be changed it will be marked Red with a legal explanation.

[Easy]
00:05:484 (2) - Clap at start of the Slider.
00:06:984 (2) - Clap at start of the Slider.
00:08:484 (2) - Clap at start of the Slider.

The whistle is make me sense more sorry keep it

[Lunatic]
00:22:734 (8) - I think the Stream should be here instead of 00:22:359 u right is sense lot thank

I didn't find anything else to mod, it's good made. Good luck!

KiyoshiX101 wrote:

Hello Pereira!

It's been a while

Keep in mind that my Mods are not meant to modify your mapping style but just suggestions to improve it which is your choice to use them or not. If something is urgent to be changed it will be marked Red with a legal explanation.


[Hard]
00:46:171 (2) - Make this a Slider? circle its ok
01:06:609 (1) - Move this one quare up(x:208 y:336) why? :\ for that i have to turn off the distance snap and stop symetric


I didn't find anything else to mod, it's good made. Good luck!

luxoDeh wrote:

Hi! M4M well, this map is very good, so I didn't found lots of things... I'm not very practice at modding so... tell me if my mod is usless and ignore it ... anyway... i skipped insane diff because i'm not very good at it XD

HARD

00:56:296 (2) - I feel strange here while playing... maybe it's only me, but i wanted to say hum i dont feel strage, but you right that vocal dont start in 00:57:046 (4) - , but start in blue tick. but i dont want it in blue tick. well..i will keep this and see what next modders says
01:18:609 (5) - remove NC to pereira check
01:39:806 (2) - maybe a clap on the ending? to pereira check

so... that's all, thanks! and good luck!

KiyoshiX101 wrote:

Hello Pereira!

It's been a while

Keep in mind that my Mods are not meant to modify your mapping style but just suggestions to improve it which is your choice to use them or not. If something is urgent to be changed it will be marked Red with a legal explanation.


[Normal]
00:05:109 (1) - Clap at the end of the Slider. For Pereira to check
00:06:984 (1) - Clap at start of the Slider. For Pereira to check
00:08:109 (1) - Clap at the end of the Slider. For Pereira to check
00:09:609 (1) - Clap at the end of the Slider. For Pereira to check
00:20:109 (1) - Make it long to red line, sounds better in my opinion Too hard for normal
01:18:984 (2) - Fix a bit the slider shape like this: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/612586 Done

I didn't find anything else to mod, it's good made. Good luck!

luxoDeh wrote:

Hi! M4M well, this map is very good, so I didn't found lots of things... I'm not very practice at modding so... tell me if my mod is usless and ignore it ... anyway... i skipped insane diff because i'm not very good at it XD


NORMAL

00:17:109 (1) - add clap on the ending of the slider For Pereira to check
00:18:609 (3) - ^ For Pereira to check
00:18:234 (2) - add clap For Pereira to check
00:19:734 (4) - ^ For Pereira to check
01:02:109 - maybe here it's better a half beat slider, and of caurse removing this note 01:02:296 (1) - I prefer it the way it is

so... that's all, thanks! and good luck!