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DJ YOSHITAKA feat. DWP - HIGH SCHOOL LOVE

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fanzhen0019
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fanzhen0019
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2013年10月13日 at 13:44:02

Artist: DJ YOSHITAKA feat. DWP
Title: HIGH SCHOOL LOVE
Source: pop'n music 14 FEVER!
Tags: bemani iidx14 ERi wac beatmania IIDX 14 GOLD
BPM: 180
Filesize: 3304kb
Play Time: 01:52
Difficulties Available:
  1. Another (4.9 stars, 507 notes)
  2. Beginner (1.43 stars, 84 notes)
  3. Hyper (5 stars, 339 notes)
  4. Standard (4.14 stars, 142 notes)
Download: DJ YOSHITAKA feat. DWP - HIGH SCHOOL LOVE
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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An important person in my life GF went to German today.(10/12/2013)
So I rescruct this map. To be the title of this song.


Lyric
　すれ違うたびに　ドキドキと　恋の予感
　今すぐ　飛び出して　君のところまで　行くから
　あの日から　恋に落ちた僕はいつの間にか
　あなたとの距離感を意識し始める
　誰よりも　強い思いいつか届くように
　願い続けるよ　今僕が　見つけた小さな恋は
　人知れず大きくなる
　（鮭の産卵をイメージしたであろうwacのピアノソロ）
　あの日から　恋に落ちた僕はいつの間にか
　あなたとの距離感を意識し始める
　誰よりも　強い思いいつか届くように
　願い続けるよ　今僕が　見つけた小さな恋は
　人知れず大きくなる
Last edited by fanzhen0019 , edited 22 times in total.
Selisi
721 posts
Joined October 2012
Selisi
占沙发~ :)
RandF
1,245 posts
Joined March 2013
RandF
Hello~

[General]
  1. According to AI-Mod, Source isn't uniformed. please check
  2. A preview point is not set
  3. According to AI-Mod, several notes are not snapped. recheck it
  4. How about adding "HIGH SPEED LOVE SONG" for tags?
[Beginner]
  1. 00:06:377 (1,2) - avoid overlap
  2. 00:46:044 (1) - end at 00:47:211
  3. 00:56:711 (1) - end at 00:57:877
  4. 01:35:711 (4) - end at 01:36:044
  5. 01:36:711 (1) - end at 01:37:877
[Standard]
  1. it is better to increase DS
  2. 00:23:711 (4) - end at 00:24:044
  3. 00:34:377 (1) - move to x:56 y:152
[Hyper]
  1. 00:18:711 (2) - it is better to exchange start for end
  2. 01:09:794 (1,1) - it's so difficult because of too shot time from spinner-end to next note's rush
[Another]
  1. 00:05:544 (9,1) - avoid overlap
  2. 00:22:377 (3,6) - stack correctly
  3. 01:07:711- add a note
  4. 01:12:711 (5) - NC
  5. 01:18:960 (5) - delete
  6. 01:19:043 (6) - NC
High speed map for me~ :o
but so exhilarating!
~Good Luck~
fanzhen0019
Elite Mapper: Aspirant
1,723 posts
Joined July 2010
Topic Starter
fanzhen0019

RandomEffect wrote:

Hello~

[General]
  1. According to AI-Mod, Source isn't uniformed. please check k
  2. A preview point is not set k
  3. According to AI-Mod, several notes are not snapped. recheck it k
  4. How about adding "HIGH SPEED LOVE SONG" for tags? high and love is in title so i think it's unecessary to add speed and song.
[Beginner]
  1. 00:06:377 (1,2) - avoid overlap It doesnt matter imo
  2. 00:46:044 (1) - end at 00:47:211 k
  3. 00:56:711 (1) - end at 00:57:877 k
  4. 01:35:711 (4) - end at 01:36:044 k
  5. 01:36:711 (1) - end at 01:37:877 k
[Standard]
  1. it is better to increase DS
  2. 00:23:711 (4) - end at 00:24:044 k
  3. 00:34:377 (1) - move to x:56 y:152I moved 3
[Hyper]
  1. 00:18:711 (2) - it is better to exchange start for end uh.. i think no.
  2. 01:09:794 (1,1) - it's so difficult because of too shot time from spinner-end to next note's rushkeep this for a while. at least when i played this i didnt miss combo here.
[Another]
  1. 00:05:544 (9,1) - avoid overlap it doesnt matter
  2. 00:22:377 (3,6) - stack correctly I do this on purpose >.>
  3. 01:07:711- add a note nope
  4. 01:12:711 (5) - NC nice
  5. 01:18:960 (5) - delete Added 2 nc
  6. 01:19:043 (6) - NC ^
High speed map for me~ :o
but so exhilarating!
~Good Luck~
Thanks!
Skystar
1,628 posts
Joined May 2011
Skystar
wocao
Fycho
Global Moderator
2,479 posts
Joined August 2012
Fycho
hi ~我的2kd神mapper神图全是nazi随意忽略
Black: suggestions
Blue: might consider
Red: You Must Fix

[general]
把倒数和letterbox所有难度都去掉啊
Leadin=2000
Source里Gold还是GOLD所有diff不统一

[another]

  • OD+2 强烈要求爆星
    00:37:211 (2) –finish
    01:15:627 (3,4,1) –反flow
    01:24:377 (1) -首finish
    01:31:044 (1,1,2,3,4,1,1,2,3,4,1,1,2,1,1,2,1,1,1,1) –这里加了NC反而眼花缭乱难读啊，少加点NC
    nazi都找不出其他问题nice
[hyper]

  • 00:06:044 (1) –和00:05:377 (2) –叠好
    00:08:044 (1) –delete NC
    00:29:711 (1,2) –叠到2中线位置
    00:46:877 (4,5) -略微的不平行
    00:57:544 (4,5) -^
    00:54:211 (2,3) –blanket
    01:51:711 (1) –太短了啊auto就2000其他diff都是之前的蓝线结束的
    音效有点单调，很多copy paste柑橘
[standard]

  • OD太低
    00:52:211 (3) –首finish
    00:53:711 (1) -^其他的类似
    00:52:711 (4,1) –别overlap
    01:09:377 (5) –delete finish
    01:09:711 –add note with finish 然后转盘后移1/2

[beginner]

  • 00:00:378 (1,1) – beginner不会玩stack
star给你凑数
lkx_Shore
1,453 posts
Joined January 2010
lkx_Shore
[First]
  1. 嘿是你的可乐
  2. 好多Finish
[Normal]
  1. 00:55:711 (3) - 哇prev 1.64x
[Hyper]
  1. 01:51:711 (1) - 为啥转圈这么紧
[Another]
  1. 00:03:544 (2,3) - 这么放有点怪
  2. 00:09:544 (4) - 改成这个如何 http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/930537
  3. 01:51:961 (4,5,6,7,8) - 后面这些连打是不是勉强了点
    少了2/4感觉好怪
[Other]
  1. 挑不出啥,Star,Goodluck
koreapenguin
1,747 posts
Joined March 2012
koreapenguin
M4M

[General]

- different source :
Beginner, Standard > source : beatmania IIDX 14 Gold
Hyper, Another > source : beatmania IIDX 14 GOLD

-uncheck 'countdown'

[Beginner]

- AR -2
-Fine nice diff

[Standard]

-(suggestion) AR 4 ,OD 4
00:35:210 (2) - this note nusnap (AI mod check)

[Hyper]

01:04:543 (2) - this note nusnap (AI mod check)
01:46:043 (4) - ^
01:51:377 (2) - (suggestion) Ctrl + G

[Another]

-HP -1

00:02:377 (7,8,1) - (suggestion) how about this pattern?
PIC
- If you accept my suggestion use this code
22,61,2377,2,0,P|19:114|40:160,1,104
240,120,2711,2,0,P|242:67|222:21,1,104

little mod XD

~Good Luck~
fanzhen0019
Elite Mapper: Aspirant
1,723 posts
Joined July 2010
Topic Starter
fanzhen0019
Fycho

Fycho wrote:

hi ~我的2kd神mapper神图全是nazi随意忽略
Black: suggestions
Blue: might consider
Red: You Must Fix

[general]
把倒数和letterbox所有难度都去掉啊 k
Leadin=2000k
Source里Gold还是GOLD所有diff不统一k

[another]

  • OD+2 强烈要求爆星 ...鬼畜
    00:37:211 (2) –finish 感觉不用
    01:15:627 (3,4,1) –反flow 我觉得大丈夫
    01:24:377 (1) -首finish 好
    01:31:044 (1,1,2,3,4,1,1,2,3,4,1,1,2,1,1,2,1,1,1,1) –这里加了NC反而眼花缭乱难读啊，少加点NC 我觉得这里的梗还算好读
    nazi都找不出其他问题nice
[hyper]

  • 00:06:044 (1) –和00:05:377 (2) –叠好 好
    00:08:044 (1) –delete NC 删了不好看
    00:29:711 (1,2) –叠到2中线位置 大概没关系
    00:46:877 (4,5) -略微的不平行 弄的更斜了 对准2
    00:57:544 (4,5) -^ ^
    00:54:211 (2,3) –blanket k
    01:51:711 (1) –太短了啊auto就2000其他diff都是之前的蓝线结束的 hao
    音效有点单调，很多copy paste柑橘
[standard]

  • OD太低 原来准备做Beginner 结果发现作难了
    00:52:211 (3) –首finish 候
    00:53:711 (1) -^其他的类似 k
    00:52:711 (4,1) –别overlap 懒得管了
    01:09:377 (5) –delete finish ↓
    01:09:711 –add note with finish 然后转盘后移1/2 好

[beginner]

  • 00:00:378 (1,1) – beginner不会玩stack行
star给你凑数

lkx

lkx_Shore wrote:

[First]
  1. 嘿是你的可乐
  2. 好多Finish
[Normal]
  1. 00:55:711 (3) - 哇prev 1.64x我菊的两个sliderbody挨得很近 玩家也会意识到节奏的相似
[Hyper]
  1. 01:51:711 (1) - 为啥转圈这么紧干掉了
[Another]
  1. 00:03:544 (2,3) - 这么放有点怪 改
  2. 00:09:544 (4) - 改成这个如何 http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/930537 Ctrl+R 因为整个图我没放这种slider 会显得有点突兀
  3. 01:51:961 (4,5,6,7,8) - 后面这些连打是不是勉强了点 还好
    少了2/4感觉好怪
[Other]
  1. 挑不出啥,Star,Goodluck

koreapenguin

koreapenguin wrote:

M4M

[General]

- different source :
Beginner, Standard > source : beatmania IIDX 14 Gold
Hyper, Another > source : beatmania IIDX 14 GOLD

-uncheck 'countdown'

All done.
[Beginner]

- AR -2 k
-Fine nice diff

[Standard]

-(suggestion) AR 4 ,OD 4 yes
00:35:210 (2) - this note nusnap (AI mod check) done

[Hyper]

01:04:543 (2) - this note nusnap (AI mod check) done
01:46:043 (4) - ^ done
01:51:377 (2) - (suggestion) Ctrl + G I did some other changes.

[Another]

-HP -1

00:02:377 (7,8,1) - (suggestion) how about this pattern? uh nop..

- If you accept my suggestion use this code
22,61,2377,2,0,P|19:114|40:160,1,104
240,120,2711,2,0,P|242:67|222:21,1,104

little mod XD

~Good Luck~

Thanks!
[Hijiri Byakuren]
169 posts
Joined April 2010
[Hijiri Byakuren]
[Beginner]

00:28:337 (2) 滑条觉得可以上移到X160Y144
00:31:044 (2) 滑条觉得可以下移到X408Y208
00:31:711 (3) 如果上面这个改了 这个建议到X512Y192
好吧我承认我有强迫症。。
[Standard]

00:36:544 (3) 总觉得应该要和后面的(4)平行。。
[Another]

HP-1或2 总之一定要减
OD+1或2 总之一定要加
00:50:877 (3,4) 建议与之前的(1,2)平行
01:40:544 (1) 建议删
01:43:544 (3) 建议放到01:43:711

嘛，总之音效真赞！
Jycool
397 posts
Joined April 2012
Jycool
High school love shuang
DexFrild
304 posts
Joined December 2010
DexFrild
Hi ^__^


[General]
Change BG size to 1024x768 (your: 1023x767)

Inconsistency in Kiai Times:

- [Another] :
Kiai #1: Starts on 00:46:044, ends on 00:55:711
Kiai #2: Starts on 00:56:711, ends on 01:09:711
Kiai #3: Starts on 01:36:711, ends on 01:52:294

- [Beginner] :
Kiai #1: Starts on 00:46:044, ends on 00:56:211
Kiai #2: Starts on 00:56:711, ends on 01:09:711
Kiai #3: Starts on 01:36:711, ends on 01:52:294

- [Hyper] :
Kiai #1: Starts on 00:46:044, ends on 00:55:711
Kiai #2: Starts on 00:56:711, ends on 01:09:711
Kiai #3: Starts on 01:36:711, ends on 01:52:377

- [Standard] :
Kiai #1: Starts on 00:46:044, ends on 00:56:211
Kiai #2: Starts on 00:56:711, ends on 01:09:711
Kiai #3: Starts on 01:36:711, ends on 01:52:294

[Beginer]
•00:00:378 (1,1) - Remove NC here. Any beginner will be confused and will not know where to start.
SPOILER
•00:52:544 - Make slider 1/1 and start on 00:52:711
•00:50:377 - NC
•00:51:711 - Remove NC
•01:01:044 - NC
•01:02:211 - Remove NC
•01:04:377 - NC
•01:04:877 - Remove NC
•01:41:044 - NC
•01:42:211 - Remove NC
•01:44:377 - NC
•01:44:877 - Remove NC

[Standard]
•01:41:044 - NC

[Hyper]
Very nice diff :3

[Another]
•00:18:377 - Will be better if you put circle here.

Cool map!!
Good luck with rank ^_^
FoolB
53 posts
Joined June 2011
FoolB
[Another]
00:01:211 (3) - 这个滑条改成note？00:06:544 (3) - 这个可以保留
00:32:711 (3,4) - 这里我有个想法，同样是把3改成note，然后是4前移到红线，再改成折返滑条 00:35:378 (2,3) - 这俩同样先保留好了
00:49:627 - 这里可以加一个note，叠在1上
01:09:377 (5,2) - 这俩没重叠好，把前面那个滑条改一下吧
01:38:711 (6) - 稍稍往右移一点？总看着有点不舒服
01:42:877 (3,1) - 这里做个blanket？前面的滑条1顺便也改一下
01:45:544 (3,1) - ^
01:43:544 (3) - 这个为啥不移到后面的长白线位置？然后叠在2上好了
Princess God
135 posts
Joined June 2010
Princess God
说好的mod……最近实在是太忙了，sorry啦
我认为最好要改改的会用*标注

Beginner
这个难度感觉有些太空旷啦，作为NM有些太简单
00:04:711 加个note 同时00:05:044 (6) - 改成一个滑条和一个note，感觉这里需要突出一下最后那个音
00:10:044 还是加个note
00:41:044 继续加note
00:53:711 (1) - 取消nc 同时00:55:711 (2) - nc
01:43:377 和 01:44:044 都加个note 当然01:46:044 和 01:46:711也是一个意见
01:49:044 (3) - 前移到01:48:711 并改成单折返的二分拍滑条，然后在01:49:377 加个note

Standard
00:21:211 加个note
*00:29:044 (4) - nc，同时00:29:711 (1) - 取消nc
00:55:711 (5,6) - 合并到一起，并加soft-finish音效，这里适合突出
00:55:044 (2) - 其实这里可以考虑换成三个原地单点的
01:09:044 (4,5,6) - 排列试着更加对称些？4右，5中，6左这样
总的来说，我的确是挑不出什么毛病了

Hyper
00:16:044 (5,6) - 合并成一个滑条
00:51:044 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - 整体上移五个单位
01:37:211 (2,4) - 逆时针转十五度
01:52:044 (2) - 减少一个折返
节奏方面感觉有够精炼的，nice

Another
*HP Drain Rate-1
00:10:711 (5) - nc
00:28:711 (1) - 取消nc
00:29:044 (2) - nc
00:43:877 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - 要不要试试换换位置？
01:06:710 (4) - 移动到尾部与01:05:210 (5) - 头重合的位置
01:36:294 (8) - 多余了感觉……

就到这里吧……我个人能力实在有限啊OTL
fanzhen0019
Elite Mapper: Aspirant
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Joined July 2010
Topic Starter
fanzhen0019
well done
Axey
1,216 posts
Joined October 2009
Axey
头像要不要这么晒
fanzhen0019
Elite Mapper: Aspirant
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Joined July 2010
Topic Starter
fanzhen0019

BakaHuang wrote:

头像要不要这么晒
1000post 面子大
Frostmourne
osu! Alumni
3,733 posts
Joined November 2009
Frostmourne
Standard
00:58:377 (4) - make it less intense could be better for this one
SPOILER
01:38:377 (4) - same as above ^

Hyper
OD6 fits better for this diff and spread of this mapset.

will continue in IRC ;D

Edit:I have never had GF so I don't know what it feels. :|
fanzhen0019
Elite Mapper: Aspirant
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Topic Starter
fanzhen0019
Thank you1 Frost chan :)
Kurai
osu! Alumni
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Joined March 2009
Kurai
Pretty nice ~
Regou
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Joined July 2010
Regou

BakaHuang wrote:

头像要不要这么晒
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