This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Monday, June 17, 2013 at 10:57:49 PM

Artist: Chris Wallace
Title: Remember When (Push Rewind)
Tags: Kari-anh CDFA
BPM: 127
Filesize: 4677kb
Play Time: 03:05
Difficulties Available:

1. CDFA's Present (2.77 stars, 177 notes)
2. Forever (4.83 stars, 377 notes)
3. Kari's Past (1.29 stars, 152 notes)

Download: Chris Wallace - Remember When (Push Rewind)
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my heart was beating out of my chest~
happy valentine's day, kari-anh! ♥

thanks to you both, kari and CDFA!

I'd love to see a 1.25 slider velocity on the kai parts

0.75 slowest, 1.0 normal, 1.25 kai


it would be even more fun if you mapped a lot more on the red ticks
at around 01:46:476 for example
like the rest of the map

theowest wrote:

I'd love to see a 1.25 slider velocity on the kai parts

0.75 slowest, 1.0 normal, 1.25 kai


it would be even more fun if you mapped a lot more on the red ticks

SPOILER

at around 01:46:476 for example
like the rest of the map

1.0n and 1.25k! couldn't find a place for 0.75 on the map. or much rather, I felt like it was a bit too slow for my mapping taste. remapped a few sections! thanks~

Hi, from #modreqs. My first mod ever, i hope i can help in spite of my lack of experience.

If any of my suggestions contradict your design idea feel free to let me know.

Black: Suggestion
Red: Error/unrankable
Green: Comment, no need to take these seriously or respond to them at all.
Pink: Cosmetic, what i think would look good, ignore if you disagree.

[General]

Maybe extend the bg image to 1366x768 it is one of the reccomended widescreen formats, it should be simple to accomplish with any editor.
Another player suggested -10 offset, i couldnt really tell the diffrence myself, perhaps future modding will.
Maybe add another combo color for varietys sake, i suggest this (greenish cyan) or similar if it blends too much with the bg, just an idea.
Alternatively you might consider adding the music video for this song, it shouldnt be too hard, but yeah we both know everybody will just dim it anyway. Or maybe that defeats the purpose of this set?

[Kari's Past]

I honestly believe you should reduce the number of kiai toggles , a number of them felt unneccesary and distracting, most likely because theres a note on top of where the fountain comes up in certain places. If this is the effect you intended to create please reconsider. If you do decide to keep the kiai i highly reccomend remapping the parts around the toggles to make it less disruptive.

00:07:854 (1,2,3,4) - Maybe move this up to align with 00:07:382 (4) - it flows and looks a bit better imo. I really like this combo btw gj.
00:13:523 (3) - Align with 00:13:051 (2) - maybe. 02:29:586 (1,2) - These could line up nicer too.
00:19:193 (1,2,3,4) - You could turn these into nice blankets, and add a bit of symmetry like this:01:03:130 (1) - You should probably redo this or remove it completely, the note appearing in this location after the spinner creates an unintended jump which is probably too harsh for an easy. This could be an ideal location for another break. Or remove the spinner and map something else in its place.
02:05:492 (1) - Same here.
02:22:027 (1) - Definitely here.
02:35:728 (1) - Yeah :/
01:13:996 (1) - This is another potential blanket, easy to accomodate just by moving 01:15:886 (3) - up a bit, and not require major map reshuffling.01:34:783 (4,5) - These too, just adjust the slider a bit.
01:49:429 (4,5) - Same here.
01:56:043 (2,3) - And here.
01:33:838 (3) - I'm not sure if this slider length is neccesary, this is the only place in the map it happens and it seems out of place. I dont think it's too hard or anything, it just seems weird with the overlap.
01:48:012 (1,2,3,4) - This could line up a bit better.
01:51:791 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - I like this part, please dont ever change it.
01:53:681 (4) - Except for maybe new combo here
02:39:035 (3) - And here.
02:48:484 (4) - Here too.
02:56:043 (4) - And maybe here.
01:59:350 (3,4,5,6) - This could also create a nice blanket effect very easily, maybe even with 02:00:767 (4) - between the sliders.03:05:964 (1) - This part bugs me but i cant figure out why, the ending feels somehow abrupt and not final i think, i really can't put my finger on it, maybe it just needs some loud finish sounds? Extend the last slider? idk maybe more experienced modders can say.
00:15:413 (1) - I dont see a reason to stop adding whistles here? In fact you might consider starting to add some finish sounds from 00:11:634 (1) - to accentuate the new instrument joining the song. You already started but i think you should continue to emphasize the downbeat all the way, this is what happens in the song with few exceptions afaict. I'm sorry if this suggestion seems vague i'm really an amateur with hitsounds myself.
02:22:027 (1) - From here i think you should use the same sounding scheme as you use in the start of the song and continue till the spinner.
00:38:563 (2) - Finish fits on this sliderend imo.
00:56:988 (1) - Finish fits here too.
01:04:547 (4) - And here if you decide to keep this note.
01:06:437 (1) - Here too.
01:36:673 (1) - Finish
01:41:397 (3) - Finish
01:44:232 (3) - Finish
01:51:791 (1) - Finish
01:59:350 (3) - Finish
02:06:909 (4) - Finish
02:39:035 (3) - Finish
02:41:870 (2) - Finish
02:44:704 (1) - Finish
02:52:263 (2) - Finish
02:59:823 (1) - Finish Well you get the point, i dont really have an opinion on claps and whistles. At least i can say that the few you already placed didnt sound weird to me, although you should probably have more.

Many of my cosmetic suggestions involve blanketing i guess, maybe you just dont like those? If thats the case then im sorry if i didnt really understand what you were trying to do.

[CDFA's Present]

Generally speaking i think this could use a small difficulty increase to bridge the gap between Past and Forever better, as it is it feels a bit too similar to the easy. I have the same concern with the kiai toggles here, although it's not that noticeable in this difficulty because there isnt any notes on the edges.
Before you read the rest of this i feel you should know that i am litteraly OCD, i will point out as many minor aesthetic flaws as i possibly can. I spent a lot of time doing this and i honestly hope it's not wasted. I know some people take offense to so called nazi-modding, consider this a disclaimer that my intent is purely to help improving maps. As i already know a few things about you i don't believe youre one of those people, nevertheless i feel i have to make this clear since this is a public forum and anyone can see these messages.

00:04:074 (1,2) - This could blanket better.
00:04:547 (2,3) - This too.
00:07:854 (2,3) - This too.
01:01:240 (2,3) - And this.
01:09:744 (1,2) - And this.
01:25:334 (1,2) - And this.
00:13:523 (3,4) - Possible to blanket sliderstart 3 with 4.
00:15:413 (5,6) - Maybe blanket.
00:15:886 (6,7) - Overlap could be better.
00:17:303 (7,8) - Blanket is slightly off here.
00:17:303 (7,1) - Aswell as this overlap.
00:20:374 (2,3) - Maybe blanket.
01:19:429 (3,1) - Same here.
00:21:082 (3,4) - Obviously adjust this one if you do.
00:23:445 (2,1) - This could potentially blanket, minor suggestion.
02:11:161 (1,2) - This too.
02:53:917 (4,5,6,7,8,1,1) - And all of these.
02:34:311 (2,3) - And this. Or possibly improve flow or both.
00:24:862 (1) - And this could blanket this sliderend 00:26:752 (1) - again minor.
00:28:641 (1,2) - Could align better.
00:29:114 (2,1) - Potential blanket.
00:30:531 (1,3) - Align please for the love of god.
00:34:311 (1,3) - Potential blankets.
00:38:090 (1) - Possibly curve this like this 00:39:035 (2) - It would flow a bit better imo.
00:39:744 (3,1,2) - This could be a nice symmetrical pattern aswell as blankets.
00:45:649 (1,3) - Is a bit misaligned.
00:50:374 (3) - Could blanket the preceeding sliderend.
00:54:153 (2) - This too.
00:52:263 (5) - Is a wee bit off.
01:27:933 (4,1) - This needs a small adjustment aswell.
01:05:964 (1,2) - This seems randomly placed, maybe make it similar to 01:09:744 (1,2) - as a sort of parallel. Or align a bit better with 01:07:382 (3) -
01:11:161 (3,4) - This could either flow better or align better, whatever you preffer.
01:19:429 (3) - Please i beg you.
01:21:555 (2) - Crooked I wasnt joking about ocd, this is literally painful for me.
01:36:200 - From here i see similar patterns to what i already commented on, same suggestions for them.
02:32:421 (4,1) - You could make this look a bit nicer by properly blanketing 4s sliderend.
02:41:870 (4,5) - These are not aligned.
02:42:578 (5,2) - And these could align aswell.
For hitsounds my suggestion is the same as with easy. Theres a few places where i think a finish sound would fit. Besides that i really can't say. Obviously you dont have notes in the same places but i think youre smart enough to figure this out.

I'm a bit wary about commenting on the mapping itself, for what its worth i was able to SS this without issues, and nothing seemed weird to me.

[Forever]

Overall this map already feels well polished and pretty much complete, so my suggestions for this can be completely disregarded if you feel like it. Maybe i can give you some ideas at least.

00:04:547 (2) - I like these, very nice antijumps.
00:18:956 (3) - This doesnt fit imo, i think it would be better to remove and maybe extend the preceeding slider to here.
00:28:405 (6) - Same here, maybe turn 5 to a slider?
00:30:295 (4) - Same.
01:47:303 (2) - I would remove this one too.
02:14:232 (7) - And this.
02:31:240 (6) - And this.
02:33:130 (4) - Yeah dont like this one either.
02:47:776 (2) - Not a fan of this note. All these dont feel disruptive for playing or anything, i just feel it would be more accurate without them.
00:34:311 - A jump would fit here imo
00:41:870 - Possibly here too.
00:49:429 - Maybe here too.
00:56:988 - Here too
00:58:641 - And here
And in similar places for the rest of the song. More or less this is just my gut feeling. If you consider these suggestions do it with caution.
01:21:082 (2) - I'm not sure about this jump.
01:21:555 (4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5) - I dont agree with these spacing changes tbh, particularly with notes on blue ticks. Maybe im just being nitpicky, dont change this unless someone else agrees with me.
01:56:279 (2,3,4,5,1) - This could maybe flow better? Not really sure.
01:40:925 (3,4,5) - This could flow better too.
02:16:594 (3) - This doesnt really match the song, it seems more correct back 1/4 beat, i'm not sure what i would do with this myself, maybe just remove?
02:18:956 - Maybe try some jumps here? Just an idea as you could possibly create a nice effect with jumps and then gradually reduce spacing from 02:19:901 (4) - Or it could be the worst idea ever!
02:21:082 - Imo you should reduce this spinner back 1/2 beat and add a note here instead. It feels more accurate and auto does get 2000 bonus, i myself however barely manage 300.
02:51:792 (7) - I would turn this into a stream or a 1/4 beat repeat slider.
03:05:256 (2) - Disagree with this note. Imo would be better to put something here 03:04:311 - and here 03:04:783 - instead.
00:15:413 (3,4) - This could blanket.
00:28:641 (1,3) - This too.
00:55:807 (10,11) - And this.
01:14:941 (3,4) - And this.
01:53:445 (1,2,3,4) - Maybe this too.
02:10:689 (4,1,2) - These too, wouldnt require much adjustment i think.
02:18:248 (1,2) - Well i think it would look nicer as a blanket.
02:39:035 - Same suggestions for the rest.
03:05:728 (1) - Imo reduce this spinner 1/2 beat.
00:51:319 (1) - Start this combo 2 notes sooner maybe.
00:52:972 (4) - Then maybe nc here.
00:55:807 (10) - NC here and remove here 00:56:988 (1) - add here 00:58:641 (4) - instead.
01:10:216 (1) - Start this 1 note sooner?
01:12:815 (6) - Maybe nc here and remove here 01:13:996 (1) -
01:15:649 (4) - And then add here instead.
01:17:775 (1) - Start this 2 notes sooner?
03:01:712 (7) - And maybe nc.
The hitsounds here feel pretty much done, but i noticed you could add more finish sounds in the same places i already pointed out, here it is again:

If there is anything you dont understand or want to discuss, feel free to contact me any way you wish.
I realise theres a high probability of my suggestions being completely ridiculous. Well theres only one way to find out!

Please reply with changes made. Also i would really apprechiate feedback that will help my future modding, prefferably pm. Good luck!

dkun omg

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