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Sakakibara Yui - Yagate kieru Maboroshi demo (Short Ver.)

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Reisyth
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2013年10月19日 at 1:21:50

Artist: Sakakibara Yui
Title: Yagate kieru Maboroshi demo (Short Ver.)
Source: Reminiscence
Tags: tigre MiLu Takos
BPM: 145
Filesize: 16849kb
Play Time: 02:15
Difficulties Available:
  1. Easy (2.48 stars, 129 notes)
  2. Insane (5 stars, 504 notes)
  3. MiLu's Normal (4.03 stars, 162 notes)
  4. Takos's Hard (4.87 stars, 424 notes)
Download: Sakakibara Yui - Yagate kieru Maboroshi demo (Short Ver.)
Download: Sakakibara Yui - Yagate kieru Maboroshi demo (Short Ver.) (no video)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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レミニセンス発売延期記念
MiLu's Normal (MiLu)
Takos's Hard (Takos)
Easy & Insane (me)
Taiko diff
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MiLu
完成しました http://puu.sh/25w2m
Star Rating高めになっちゃったので、Easyは難しめに作って...ね.....

あと01:37:377 ここの緑線は01:37:791 に移したほうが良いと思う
Normalのは修正済みよ( ⁰⊖⁰)v
Takos
Topic Starter
Reisyth
みる、たこすさんありがとう!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
0JOKER0_old
リクエストで太鼓のMODにきました


[0gre's Taiko Oni]

まずオフセットが少し速いような気がするからちょっとやりにくい

. 00:31:609 - d
. 00:31:195 - k
. 00:42:264 - ここ中心に3連
. 00:45:471 - k
. 01:09:161 - kd
. 01:11:954 - k
. 01:18:781 - サビにあるこのdkdは全部kkdの方がいい


MUZUKASHIIは?
0gre_old

0JOKER0 wrote:

リクエストで太鼓のMODにきました


[0gre's Taiko Oni]

まずオフセットが少し速いような気がするからちょっとやりにくい

. 00:31:609 - d
. 00:31:195 - k
. 00:42:264 - ここ中心に3連
. 00:45:471 - k
. 01:09:161 - kd ✖他の形で検討してみます
. 01:11:954 - k
. 01:18:781 - サビにあるこのdkdは全部kkdの方がいい ✔ 確かに良さそうです


MUZUKASHIIは?
編集完了です!MOD ありがとうございます!
あと Muzukashii も追加したので、更新してくれると幸いです :)

http://puu.sh/2ehkb
Topic Starter
Reisyth
kds間違えちゃった thx
cRyo[iceeicee]
Hi hi ^^
Easy
  1. 00:06:160 (2,3) - dont like this placement, http://puu.sh/2IC5P.jpg
  2. 00:08:850 (2) - i think this note could be deleted ^^
  3. 00:12:574 (3) - this note sounds better at 00:12:367, since white/red tick notes confusing you can change 00:11:747 (2,3) - to slider and add whistle head/arrow/tail http://puu.sh/2IBXp.jpg
  4. 00:16:712 (2) - grid up for perfect blanket
  5. 00:18:367 (1,2) - emm i prefer to follow previous rhytm which involve beat on the red tick http://puu.sh/2IC29.jpg
  6. 00:41:540 (1) - i think clap on arrow sounds good
  7. 00:44:023 (3) - finish tail according to music
  8. 00:46:505 (4,5) - a bit complicated rhytm for easy, i think it would be better if you remove #5 and add repeat at #4
  9. 00:51:471 (1) - finish according to music
  10. 00:56:436 (1) - i prefer to add repeat here, or change to 1/1 slider
  11. 00:58:092 (1) - finish according to music
  12. 00:59:747 (3,4) - change this to 1 long slider, feels better for easy diff
  13. 01:01:402 (1,2) - remove #2 and extend #1 till red tick, i dont think that current pattern is acceptable for easy diff
  14. 01:04:712 (1) - finish according to music
  15. 01:05:540 (2) - change this to 1/1 slider
  16. 01:08:023 (1) - finish instead clap, fits much better
  17. 01:10:505 (3) - add clap aswell
  18. 01:11:333 (1) - finish instead clap, fits much better
  19. 01:13:816 (3) - finish tail according to music
  20. 01:24:367 (1) - i prefer 1/1 slider on white tick instead http://puu.sh/2ICvs.jpg
  21. 01:24:367 (1,2,3) - actually whole part little bit strange, i think something like this is better http://puu.sh/2ICxI.jpg
  22. 01:31:195 (1) - finish instead clap
  23. 01:31:195 (1,2,3,4) - maybe use only whistle on #2,4 like you did 01:17:954 (2,3,1,2) -
  24. 01:37:816 (1,2,3) - i think this would be better for easy http://puu.sh/2ICAA.jpg
  25. 01:39:471 (3) - i think finish match better
  26. 01:40:919 (2,3) - remove #3 and extend #2 till next tick
  27. 01:41:954 (1,2,3) - umm, how about to remove all this and add spinner 01:41:747 - 01:43:609
  28. 02:05:333 (2,3) - since it copypasted, same suggestion as before
  29. 02:00:988 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - this whole part absolutely same as intro part, but you used different hitsounds placement, maybe make them same o.o?
MiLu's Normal
  1. 00:08:229 (1) - finish tail aswell
  2. 00:09:471 (2) - finish tail aswell
  3. 00:10:919 (1) - finish tail aswell
  4. 00:12:988 (4) - finish tail aswell
  5. 00:21:678 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - use finish instead whistles, match better with bgm
  6. 00:35:333 (7) - NC
  7. 00:35:747 (8) - arrow clap
  8. 00:44:850 (1) - finish according to music
  9. 00:48:161 (1,2,3) - using finish instead clap on sliders head sounds better for me
  10. 00:50:643 (4) - clap fits with bgm drum( but i prefer different pattern, follow guitar http://puu.sh/2ICNw.jpg and use finish instead clap
  11. 00:58:092 (1) - finish according to music
  12. 01:00:574 (3) - clap tail
  13. 01:01:402 (1) - finish instead clap
  14. 01:02:023 (2) - add clap here aswell
  15. 01:04:712 (1) - finish according to music
  16. 01:08:023 (1) - finish according to music
  17. 01:17:333 (1) - add whistles both tail/head
  18. 01:23:954 (5,1) - a bit complicated, maybe remove #5 slider and add note at 01:24:161
  19. 01:24:574 (1) - finish instead whistle
  20. 01:26:850 (5,6) - also feels like rhytm is more complicated as it should be, remove #5 and add 1/1 slider at 01:27:057
  21. 01:27:885 (1) - finish instead clap
  22. 01:37:816 (1) - finish instead whistle
  23. 01:39:471 (4) - finish instead whistle
  24. 01:47:747 (6) - i think N finish is too heavy, soft sounds better for me
  25. 02:01:609 (2,3) - i think you can add head whistles, match with instrument
  26. 02:03:264 (5,6) - same
  27. 02:04:919 (2,3) - same (since this part absolutely same as intro part you can add whistles there aswell, whislte on every red tick)
  28. 02:07:609 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - use finish instead whistle
  29. 02:10:298 (6) - N finish sounds heavy >_<
Takos's Hard
  1. 00:00:161 - 00:13:195 I think tonn of whistles can be added in first part sinse they match with instrument pretty good, i just give you example http://puu.sh/2IEpz.osu (also this note 00:13:195 (4) - must be audible, because 20% soft just dont make any sense
  2. 00:15:057 (1) - incorrect snap
  3. 00:21:678 (1) - finish according to music
  4. 00:22:298 (3) - finish according to music
  5. 00:23:333 (1) - finish according to music
  6. 00:23:954 (3) - finish according to music
  7. 00:24:988 (3) - i think this Nfinish a bit loud
  8. 00:26:643 (1) - missed clap (actually there are a lot of missed claps, since all claps must be placed on white ticks i think you can recheck everything byyourself
  9. 00:29:954 (1) - stack it properly, looks ugly right now >_<
  10. 00:35:954 (7,8,9) - they should have N sample set, because bgm drum sound
  11. 00:36:988 (2,3,4) - try to add claps on head&tail on each slider
  12. 00:38:229 (1) - prefer lower volume for this finish
  13. 00:51:471 (1) - incorrect snap (if it supposed to end on blue tick, then you got spacing error between this slider and next note, anyway you should change this slider, and maybe use different shape
  14. 00:52:919 (5) - clap tail match with drum (and remove clap from 00:53:540 (6) -
  15. 00:53:954 (1) - clap match with drum
  16. 00:56:436 (1) - clap tail match with drum
  17. 00:58:092 (1) - finish according to music
  18. 01:00:574 (2) - clap tail match with drum
  19. 01:03:885 (4,5,6) - try to add clap on #4,6
  20. 01:04:712 (1) - finish according to music
  21. 01:08:023 (1) - finish according to music
  22. 01:11:333 (1) - incorrect snap
  23. 01:14:643 (5) - finish according to music +NC
  24. 01:17:333 (1) - whistle + increase volume
  25. 01:24:574 (3) - i thinl N finish os heavy, try soft instead
  26. 01:28:919 (4,5,1) - i prefer larger spacing here since vocal became louder
  27. 01:31:195 (1) - i thinl N finish os heavy, try soft instead
  28. 01:37:816 (1) - finish according to music
  29. 01:39:471 (7) - finish according to music
  30. 01:47:747 (1) - i thinl N finish os heavy, try soft instead
  31. 01:54:367 (3) - finish according to music
  32. 01:58:298 (5) - finish ?
  33. 02:00:988 (1) - i thinl N finish os heavy, try soft instead
  34. 02:07:609 (1) - finish according to music
  35. 02:09:264 (1,3) - finish according to music
  36. 02:10:919 (1) - prefer soft finish on soft note
    This diff has too many triplets >_<
Insane
  1. 00:09:471 (4,5,6) - umm i think unstack them will be better http://puu.sh/2IF28.jpg
  2. 00:17:643 (4,6) - how about avoid this overlap ? http://puu.sh/2IF3X.jpg
  3. 00:22:298 (5) - finish according to music
  4. 00:23:954 (3) - finish according to music
  5. 00:24:988 (8,9) - a bit confusing, i prefer to use 1/2 slider instead this notes
  6. 00:35:747 (3) - finish according to music
  7. 00:36:367 (1) - finish according to music
  8. 00:36:885 (2) - clap
  9. 00:38:229 (1) - finish according to music
  10. 00:44:850 (10) - finish instead clap
  11. 00:48:161 (1) - remove clap
  12. 00:50:436 (9) - clap aswell ?
  13. 00:50:850 (11) - clap aswell ?
  14. 00:51:471 (2) - finish instead clap
  15. 00:58:092 (1) - finish instead clap
  16. 01:04:712 (1) - finish according to music
  17. 01:08:850 (5,6,7) - looks strange o.o
  18. 01:17:954 (1) - finish according to music
  19. 01:24:574 (3) - finish according to music
  20. 01:51:885 (6) - dont like this clap
  21. 01:54:367 (6) - finish according to music
  22. 02:08:229 (3) - finish according to music
  23. 02:09:885 (4) - finish according to music
  24. 02:10:919 (11) - soft finish instead ? + NC
Good luck (`・ω・´)”
MiLu

cRyo[iceeicee] wrote:

MiLu's Normal
  1. 00:08:229 (1) - finish tail aswell i think finish is a bit noisy for this introduction
  2. 00:09:471 (2) - finish tail aswell ^
  3. 00:10:919 (1) - finish tail aswell ^
  4. 00:12:988 (4) - finish tail aswell ^
  5. 00:21:678 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - use finish instead whistles, match better with bgm
  6. 00:35:333 (7) - NC
  7. 00:35:747 (8) - arrow clap
  8. 00:44:850 (1) - finish according to music
  9. 00:48:161 (1,2,3) - using finish instead clap on sliders head sounds better for me
  10. 00:50:643 (4) - clap fits with bgm drum( but i prefer different pattern, follow guitar http://puu.sh/2ICNw.jpg and use finish instead clap
  11. 00:58:092 (1) - finish according to music
  12. 01:00:574 (3) - clap tail
  13. 01:01:402 (1) - finish instead clap
  14. 01:02:023 (2) - add clap here aswell
  15. 01:04:712 (1) - finish according to music
  16. 01:08:023 (1) - finish according to music
  17. 01:17:333 (1) - add whistles both tail/head
  18. 01:23:954 (5,1) - a bit complicated, maybe remove #5 slider and add note at 01:24:161
  19. 01:24:574 (1) - finish instead whistle
  20. 01:26:850 (5,6) - also feels like rhytm is more complicated as it should be, remove #5 and add 1/1 slider at 01:27:057
  21. 01:27:885 (1) - finish instead clap
  22. 01:37:816 (1) - finish instead whistle
  23. 01:39:471 (4) - finish instead whistle
  24. 01:47:747 (6) - i think N finish is too heavy, soft sounds better for me
  25. 02:01:609 (2,3) - i think you can add head whistles, match with instrument
  26. 02:03:264 (5,6) - same
  27. 02:04:919 (2,3) - same (since this part absolutely same as intro part you can add whistles there aswell, whislte on every red tick)
  28. 02:07:609 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - use finish instead whistle
  29. 02:10:298 (6) - N finish sounds heavy >_< mmm....you may be right...but i dont think so ;^;
fixed others :oops:
thank you cRyo <3

http://puu.sh/2IHzw.osu
Takos

cRyo[iceeicee] wrote:

Takos's Hard
  1. 00:00:161 - 00:13:195 I think tonn of whistles can be added in first part sinse they match with instrument pretty good, i just give you example http://puu.sh/2IEpz.osu (also this note 00:13:195 (4) - must be audible, because 20% soft just dont make any sense
  2. 00:15:057 (1) - incorrect snap
  3. 00:21:678 (1) - finish according to music
  4. 00:22:298 (3) - finish according to music
  5. 00:23:333 (1) - finish according to music
  6. 00:23:954 (3) - finish according to music
  7. 00:24:988 (3) - i think this Nfinish a bit loud
  8. 00:26:643 (1) - missed clap (actually there are a lot of missed claps, since all claps must be placed on white ticks i think you can recheck everything byyourself
  9. 00:29:954 (1) - stack it properly, looks ugly right now >_<
  10. 00:35:954 (7,8,9) - they should have N sample set, because bgm drum sound
  11. 00:36:988 (2,3,4) - try to add claps on head&tail on each slider
  12. 00:38:229 (1) - prefer lower volume for this finish
  13. 00:51:471 (1) - incorrect snap (if it supposed to end on blue tick, then you got spacing error between this slider and next note, anyway you should change this slider, and maybe use different shape
  14. 00:52:919 (5) - clap tail match with drum (and remove clap from 00:53:540 (6) -
  15. 00:53:954 (1) - clap match with drum
  16. 00:56:436 (1) - clap tail match with drum
  17. 00:58:092 (1) - finish according to music
  18. 01:00:574 (2) - clap tail match with drum
  19. 01:03:885 (4,5,6) - try to add clap on #4,6
  20. 01:04:712 (1) - finish according to music
  21. 01:08:023 (1) - finish according to music
  22. 01:11:333 (1) - incorrect snap
  23. 01:14:643 (5) - finish according to music +NC
  24. 01:17:333 (1) - whistle + increase volume
  25. 01:24:574 (3) - i thinl N finish os heavy, try soft instead
  26. 01:28:919 (4,5,1) - i prefer larger spacing here since vocal became louder
  27. 01:31:195 (1) - i thinl N finish os heavy, try soft instead
  28. 01:37:816 (1) - finish according to music
  29. 01:39:471 (7) - finish according to music
  30. 01:47:747 (1) - i thinl N finish os heavy, try soft instead
  31. 01:54:367 (3) - finish according to music
  32. 01:58:298 (5) - finish ?
  33. 02:00:988 (1) - i thinl N finish os heavy, try soft instead
  34. 02:07:609 (1) - finish according to music
  35. 02:09:264 (1,3) - finish according to music
  36. 02:10:919 (1) - prefer soft finish on soft note
    This diff has too many triplets >_<
All fixed, thank you very much for a quality mod
http://puu.sh/35aTF.osu
Topic Starter
Reisyth
fix fix
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