Be prepared to mod today C:
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Let's go~
Mostly suggestions (as usual from me). Hitsounds based on my feelings.
[General]
BG looks narrowed. Why don't You crop "original" image?
[Easy]
00:21:213 (1) - Try something like
this.
00:34:070 (1) - Move 32px down? Or copy 00:32:356 (3) and flip/rotate/move. Remember to spacing.
00:38:356 (2) - Why don't You move it to x=256? You can make something like
this (equilateral triangle with 2,3,4).
00:40:928 (1) - Finish
00:41:356 (2) - Make it vertical
00:44:356 (2) -
Rotate it 180deg and reverse?
00:46:499 - Clap?
00:46:928 - Finish fits good imo.
00:53:356 - Clap and 00:53:785 - Finish sounds better
01:01:928 (2) - move slidertail to x=184 or x=180
01:02:785 (3) - Finish
01:03:213 (4) - Try to add blanket with 01:04:928 (3)
01:19:928 (3) - Finish
01:21:213 (2) - This slider may be too hard for beginners, try
this?
01:23:356 (3) - Make it symmetrical to 01:22:070 (1)
01:52:070 (2) - Finish
02:10:499 - Clap
[Normal]
Try to change CS to 3?
00:20:785 - Maybe add circle? But it's possible that it should be too hard
00:40:070 (4) - Finish
00:46:499 (4) - see Easy diff
00:46:928 (5) - ^
00:47:785 (1,2,3) - You can try make better symmetry? (
for example)
00:53:785 (4) - Finish
01:12:213 - Clap
01:14:785 (5) - Finish and remove it from 01:15:213 ?
01:17:356 - Clap
01:18:213 - ^
01:22:499 - ^
01:22:070 (1,2,3) -
This (symmetry)? Remember to spacing.
01:24:213 - Clap
01:25:070 (2) - Finish
01:27:213 - Remove finish
01:31:070 - Clap
01:31:928 - ^
01:32:356 (3) - Remove white point or make something else, it doesn't look good
01:46:928 - Remove clap
01:48:642 (3) - Finish
01:49:070 (4) - Clap or use soft hitsound
01:58:928 (5) - Finish
02:10:070 (1) - Why don't You use 1/3 slider?
[Hard]
Set HP&OD 6?
Hitsounds suggestions same as in Normal/Easy.
00:16:928 (1) - Try louder hit and clap
00:37:070 (6) - Symmetrical to 00:36:642 (5) (Probably You should move left (5) to make better spacing)
00:52:070 (2) - Blanket with 00:51:642 (1) ?
00:52:928 (1,2,3,4) - Make it in one straight line or other figure?
01:08:356 (1) - Make it perfectly symmetrical? (move bottom red point to y=236 and white points to x=212 and x=300)
01:18:642 (1) - For better shape, try to move white point to x=192
01:21:213 (3) - Slowdown feel is too large, you should make simplier shape (of course it extends slider body). Try
this01:22:499 (2) - Blanket with 01:22:070 (1) ?
01:24:642 (5) - Blanket with 01:23:785 (1) ?
01:34:070 (3) - Make curve like 01:34:499 (4) ?
01:49:499 (1,2) - This stacking is really confusing.
01:50:356 (4,5) - ^
01:54:213 (6) - Make it parallel with 01:53:570 (4,5)
01:58:285 - Add circle?
01:59:785 (1,2,3) - I had problems with reading when I play first time: It's 1/4 or 1/3 triplet (and 3 patterns more)? It's not big issue, it's rather opinion.
[Insane]
Set HP&OD 7? (Hm, I don't like high values D: )
00:16:928 (1) - Same as in Hard.
00:41:356 (2,3,4) - I don't understand this triplet.
00:43:713 (3) - Move to y=192.
00:44:356 (5) - Make symmetry to the x-axis and better blanket with (4).
01:00:749 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - Why stream? It doesn't fit good.
01:21:213 (4) - Same as in Hard.
01:23:356 (4) - move to x=256?
01:41:785 (1,2,3,4,5) - Use soft hitsounds.
01:59:785 (1,2,3) - In this place You should use slider or 1/2 circles.
Yeah. Probably You don't agree to anything, I'll understand, I'm
godnoob-like mapper ;_;_;_;_;
BTW Good luck ^^